Part 11: Kaash Mere Hotey

Recap:ri(smilngly):lo ab di bhi kehdiya aur di keh samne roh rahi hooo dnt wry armaan is one of the best surgeon he wil srely sfe hr aur ab mujhe apni choti behen khi ankhon mein anssoon nahi jahiye (wipin hr tears awy)
She closed her eyes painfully watching her life going in that operation theater when she felt a hand on her shoulder looking behind she found atul looking deeply in her eyes as if asking her not to be weak now

At(trying hard to smile): “I bought all shona’s chocolate dare u have one of them moti shilpa……. as my shona will be awake she is going to fight for them”
Watching what atul been trying to do…….
 an: “atul shut up okay meri best friend aur moti…… hugging shilpa areh mein toh yeh soch rahi thi ki isse ghar par hi rakh dun kitni weak hogayi hain meri saheli”
at: “areh anjali as soon as shona wake up you ask her she is going to tell you yeh shilpa haina uski sari chocos steal karke kahti hain”
watching atul & anjali lame attempts to make her smile…….. she hug anjali tighter and cry her eyes out making both cry ……….atul not being able to handle himself followed the suit hugging both girls ………
The three cried hugging each other without seeing two pairs of eyes watching them…..
arm (mentally):they are soo ….I was so wrong they needed me …….I came here to handle shilpa……… but it seem my lil brother was quicker than me forming a fist and watching the three hug
ri:armaan operation kah waqt hogaya shona has been taken to O.T & anaesthetize shall we be quick
Watching armaan entering the O.T
at:armaan bhai
Turning behind he saw he saw atul he never seemed helpless like this…………
He went forward to talk to him when fell him hugging him
at:bhai please save shona I never asked you anything……..
he did nt knw wat to do ………continue his hatred toward his brother or hug him back
arm: atul I will try my best to save your daughter rest is in god hand……. he will help her breaking the hug he entered the O.T not before turning back & watching shilpa looking at hm with eyes full of confidence…………….
entering the O.T he caressed shona’s hairs he could nt believe god’s play …….he met this girl in basketball ground……. he felt an strange affection on her & she turned out to be shilpa daughter & now if someone can save her its him with god grace ……..but how he hands was shivering looking at her soo miserably attached among wire a little life……… he wanted to sit and cry loud closing his eyes he remembered shilpa’s eyes which was full of confidence, atul hug and word ……..no way he could not let them down
Controlling his emotions he proceed on the surgery leaving all in god’s hands .he kissed shona on her forhead “I will not let anything happen to you shona”
Shilpa  was crying infront ganapti idol &atul became numb only tears were coming out……. he remember how shona used to run after him ,calling champ ,her lil words ,her pranks ………
After hours of surgery ………armaan came out with heavy steps …..atul and shilpa were desperately waiting for armaan to say shona is out of danger now but he was not saying anything which was freaking out shilpa …….
Sh:armaan how is our shona? He did not gave any answer tried to walk away could not see in her eyes which have full faith and confidencs on him . shilpa became nervous with his silence “ armaan what happened? How is our daughter ?why are yu not saying anything? One after other she was aksing questions with teary cracking voice so much scared “armaan please say something”
Arm:sorry
Sh : wat
Arm : I am sorry shilpa I have tried my best ……..
 Sh:wat do you mean?
Ar: as you this case is very complicated chances were very less
Shilpa eyes was heavy now nt able to see anything … loosing her blance but soon got grip and  held armaan collar………
Ar :trying to console her) calm down shilpa………. listen carefully and try to understand this case iss hopeless…………. still all our team tried to do our best in this case……….
Sh: shut up armaan
Arm :shilpa ye case
Sh : I said shut up she is your blood armaan……… not bloody case
Arm :shocked) wattttttttttt have u gone mad or wat
At :steeped forward ) yes she is mad dr.armaan malik ………now come straight to the point about your so called case………….
Arm : listen atul….. I can understand your wife’s state of mind …….might be under shock for shona
At :to the hell with your understanding come to the point …….no just leave my way I will take shona to other doctor
Arm :atul its of no use now …….shona is couting her minutes she will come to the consciousness soon but how long she will be I can not say ……..trust me I have tried my best to save shona after all  she is my brother’s daughter…….. not a case damn it..
At :shut up armaan and shilpa shattered on hearing it
Sh : wat do mean armaan humari shona
Arm :with teary voice) sorry shilpa apni beti sey akhari bar jitni baat karni hai karlo
Shilpa lost her temper slapped him hard “shut up armaan nothing will happen to my shona she is still so small wat she has seen in her life no no no no shouting loudly …… u are lying I knw u wanna take revenge ………….
Arm :holding her shoulders) shilpa control yourself n live her last moments later you will regret for it …….before armman could complete his sentence shilpa fainted in his hands.atul took shilpa in his hands
At : thanks bhai thank u sooo much ………
Arm :atul please…… I think shilpa
At : aap shilpa ki chinta nah karey toh acha hai and armaan stepped back ….
In room
Atul was staring shilpa lost in his thoughts whom he should handle now shona who is gonna die ,shilpa who is shattered for her daughter or himself who has to see both  suffering……….what about his promise to his mom ……. He would take care of both angels ……. But its all scattered did not know how to save shona ……..armaan bring him back to world kept his hand on atul’s shoulder “ control yourself atul….. shilpa will be fine and s” he cut his sentence did not found words how to soothe his pain of loosing his daughter ………atul pushed his hand “bhai I dnt need your sympathy”……… mai aap ka kam aaj tak karta raha………… agey bhi karlunga apki jarurat nahi mujhey
Arm : wat the hell wrong atul ? kyun bar bar ek hi baat bol raho ho tum dono ……….I can undertstand u both are in shock lost ur sense of thinking………… it does not mean tumh apni beti ko meri kaho ……… why are u still  hiding atul I know shilpa tumhari biwi hai n shona tumhari beti
Atul was pissed off wiz it he bear a lot until now cant take more and shouted loudly on armaan “enough is enough bhai mai chup hoon iska mathlab ye nahi aap jo soch rahey ho vo sahi hai ………how could u even think bhai I will marry ur wife ………shilpa is my bhabi maa saman hai vo meray liye. jis tarha papa apko lekar chalegaye……….  usi tarha aap bhabi ko chodkar cahley gaye…….. jis tarha maine mom ko sambhala tha…….. usi tarha bhabi ko bhi sambhala aur aap humraey risthey pey itnah ghatiya ilzam laga rahey ho……. how could u bhai I m ashame bhai to say u r my elder brother……..  shona is ur bloody blood bhai who was just a case for you …….
Armaan felt ground leaving his feet “wat do u mean? But maine sunah ki
Atul : wowwwwwwww bhai apney sunah and u take a quick jump to a conclusion …….did u ever cared to know wat happened zat day ………why shilpa slapped u ? what happened wiz her after you had left her to die in darkness ……….she died every second for you …..waited for u….. have gone mad …….. kisis sey baat nahi karti thi chup hogayi … jab pata chala she was pregnant …….we tried a lot to convince u but wat u did bhai had not even attend my calls ……...u know wat bhai shilpa still luvs u only after all u did wiz her …….how could u punish her for the mistake which she had never did…….. how could u say no hopes for ur daughter ….armaan was speechless did not know wat to say whom to trust his frnds ,his eyes or his brother…….. whole world is spinning around him only one word came out “shona my daughter”
Atul : yes ur daughter dying”armaan could not bear dying word punched atul “shut up atul she is my daughter I won’t let anything happen to my daughter till my last breath”
At :wow bhai sayad aap bhul rahey ho iss case mey hopes nahi hai ……..
Arm : shut up atul n  he was going out of room his steps became heavy could not able to to go out and he was about to fall ……..atul gave him support “ bhai sambhalo khodko”
Armaan : leave me atul I wannna see my daughter and he ran to i. c. u.
Riddhima was shocked to see armaan so miserable ,helpless “kya hua armaan I think u need rest …….. I m here wiz shona don’t worry”
Armaan :get out of the door
Riddhima : what ?
Armaan :sternly)get outtttt now … riddhima left the room quietly ……….


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Part 11: Kaash Mere Hotey

Recap:ri(smilngly):lo ab di bhi kehdiya aur di keh samne roh rahi hooo dnt wry armaan is one of the best surgeon he wil srely sfe hr aur ab mujhe apni choti behen khi ankhon mein anssoon nahi jahiye (wipin hr tears awy)
She closed her eyes painfully watching her life going in that operation theater when she felt a hand on her shoulder looking behind she found atul looking deeply in her eyes as if asking her not to be weak now

At(trying hard to smile): “I bought all shona’s chocolate dare u have one of them moti shilpa……. as my shona will be awake she is going to fight for them”
Watching what atul been trying to do…….
 an: “atul shut up okay meri best friend aur moti…… hugging shilpa areh mein toh yeh soch rahi thi ki isse ghar par hi rakh dun kitni weak hogayi hain meri saheli”
at: “areh anjali as soon as shona wake up you ask her she is going to tell you yeh shilpa haina uski sari chocos steal karke kahti hain”
watching atul & anjali lame attempts to make her smile…….. she hug anjali tighter and cry her eyes out making both cry ……….atul not being able to handle himself followed the suit hugging both girls ………
The three cried hugging each other without seeing two pairs of eyes watching them…..
arm (mentally):they are soo ….I was so wrong they needed me …….I came here to handle shilpa……… but it seem my lil brother was quicker than me forming a fist and watching the three hug
ri:armaan operation kah waqt hogaya shona has been taken to O.T & anaesthetize shall we be quick
Watching armaan entering the O.T
at:armaan bhai
Turning behind he saw he saw atul he never seemed helpless like this…………
He went forward to talk to him when fell him hugging him
at:bhai please save shona I never asked you anything……..
he did nt knw wat to do ………continue his hatred toward his brother or hug him back
arm: atul I will try my best to save your daughter rest is in god hand……. he will help her breaking the hug he entered the O.T not before turning back & watching shilpa looking at hm with eyes full of confidence…………….
entering the O.T he caressed shona’s hairs he could nt believe god’s play …….he met this girl in basketball ground……. he felt an strange affection on her & she turned out to be shilpa daughter & now if someone can save her its him with god grace ……..but how he hands was shivering looking at her soo miserably attached among wire a little life……… he wanted to sit and cry loud closing his eyes he remembered shilpa’s eyes which was full of confidence, atul hug and word ……..no way he could not let them down
Controlling his emotions he proceed on the surgery leaving all in god’s hands .he kissed shona on her forhead “I will not let anything happen to you shona”
Shilpa  was crying infront ganapti idol &atul became numb only tears were coming out……. he remember how shona used to run after him ,calling champ ,her lil words ,her pranks ………
After hours of surgery ………armaan came out with heavy steps …..atul and shilpa were desperately waiting for armaan to say shona is out of danger now but he was not saying anything which was freaking out shilpa …….
Sh:armaan how is our shona? He did not gave any answer tried to walk away could not see in her eyes which have full faith and confidencs on him . shilpa became nervous with his silence “ armaan what happened? How is our daughter ?why are yu not saying anything? One after other she was aksing questions with teary cracking voice so much scared “armaan please say something”
Arm:sorry
Sh : wat
Arm : I am sorry shilpa I have tried my best ……..
 Sh:wat do you mean?
Ar: as you this case is very complicated chances were very less
Shilpa eyes was heavy now nt able to see anything … loosing her blance but soon got grip and  held armaan collar………
Ar :trying to console her) calm down shilpa………. listen carefully and try to understand this case iss hopeless…………. still all our team tried to do our best in this case……….
Sh: shut up armaan
Arm :shilpa ye case
Sh : I said shut up she is your blood armaan……… not bloody case
Arm :shocked) wattttttttttt have u gone mad or wat
At :steeped forward ) yes she is mad dr.armaan malik ………now come straight to the point about your so called case………….
Arm : listen atul….. I can understand your wife’s state of mind …….might be under shock for shona
At :to the hell with your understanding come to the point …….no just leave my way I will take shona to other doctor
Arm :atul its of no use now …….shona is couting her minutes she will come to the consciousness soon but how long she will be I can not say ……..trust me I have tried my best to save shona after all  she is my brother’s daughter…….. not a case damn it..
At :shut up armaan and shilpa shattered on hearing it
Sh : wat do mean armaan humari shona
Arm :with teary voice) sorry shilpa apni beti sey akhari bar jitni baat karni hai karlo
Shilpa lost her temper slapped him hard “shut up armaan nothing will happen to my shona she is still so small wat she has seen in her life no no no no shouting loudly …… u are lying I knw u wanna take revenge ………….
Arm :holding her shoulders) shilpa control yourself n live her last moments later you will regret for it …….before armman could complete his sentence shilpa fainted in his hands.atul took shilpa in his hands
At : thanks bhai thank u sooo much ………
Arm :atul please…… I think shilpa
At : aap shilpa ki chinta nah karey toh acha hai and armaan stepped back ….
In room
Atul was staring shilpa lost in his thoughts whom he should handle now shona who is gonna die ,shilpa who is shattered for her daughter or himself who has to see both  suffering……….what about his promise to his mom ……. He would take care of both angels ……. But its all scattered did not know how to save shona ……..armaan bring him back to world kept his hand on atul’s shoulder “ control yourself atul….. shilpa will be fine and s” he cut his sentence did not found words how to soothe his pain of loosing his daughter ………atul pushed his hand “bhai I dnt need your sympathy”……… mai aap ka kam aaj tak karta raha………… agey bhi karlunga apki jarurat nahi mujhey
Arm : wat the hell wrong atul ? kyun bar bar ek hi baat bol raho ho tum dono ……….I can undertstand u both are in shock lost ur sense of thinking………… it does not mean tumh apni beti ko meri kaho ……… why are u still  hiding atul I know shilpa tumhari biwi hai n shona tumhari beti
Atul was pissed off wiz it he bear a lot until now cant take more and shouted loudly on armaan “enough is enough bhai mai chup hoon iska mathlab ye nahi aap jo soch rahey ho vo sahi hai ………how could u even think bhai I will marry ur wife ………shilpa is my bhabi maa saman hai vo meray liye. jis tarha papa apko lekar chalegaye……….  usi tarha aap bhabi ko chodkar cahley gaye…….. jis tarha maine mom ko sambhala tha…….. usi tarha bhabi ko bhi sambhala aur aap humraey risthey pey itnah ghatiya ilzam laga rahey ho……. how could u bhai I m ashame bhai to say u r my elder brother……..  shona is ur bloody blood bhai who was just a case for you …….
Armaan felt ground leaving his feet “wat do u mean? But maine sunah ki
Atul : wowwwwwwww bhai apney sunah and u take a quick jump to a conclusion …….did u ever cared to know wat happened zat day ………why shilpa slapped u ? what happened wiz her after you had left her to die in darkness ……….she died every second for you …..waited for u….. have gone mad …….. kisis sey baat nahi karti thi chup hogayi … jab pata chala she was pregnant …….we tried a lot to convince u but wat u did bhai had not even attend my calls ……...u know wat bhai shilpa still luvs u only after all u did wiz her …….how could u punish her for the mistake which she had never did…….. how could u say no hopes for ur daughter ….armaan was speechless did not know wat to say whom to trust his frnds ,his eyes or his brother…….. whole world is spinning around him only one word came out “shona my daughter”
Atul : yes ur daughter dying”armaan could not bear dying word punched atul “shut up atul she is my daughter I won’t let anything happen to my daughter till my last breath”
At :wow bhai sayad aap bhul rahey ho iss case mey hopes nahi hai ……..
Arm : shut up atul n  he was going out of room his steps became heavy could not able to to go out and he was about to fall ……..atul gave him support “ bhai sambhalo khodko”
Armaan : leave me atul I wannna see my daughter and he ran to i. c. u.
Riddhima was shocked to see armaan so miserable ,helpless “kya hua armaan I think u need rest …….. I m here wiz shona don’t worry”
Armaan :get out of the door
Riddhima : what ?
Armaan :sternly)get outtttt now … riddhima left the room quietly ……….


frm nw sarey ff mai akeli likhungi anjali (my partner my mamaaaaaaaa) busy hai so bachi sari kam akeli karegi par mai maam key nam key saat hi post karungi .. sorry mama apney no kaha bt mai sunti kaha hun chollyyyyyyyyyyy... do tell me hws it n press likes

wiz luv
anjali n anamika

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