DISCLAIMER: Dis ff is NOT WRITTEN by me... just read it on sum other site..luvd it n thought 2 share it wit u all... m a silent reader... d author has written some 74 epis n left it in 2009... so i wld continue after dat..till den njoy d writer's wrk...
EPISODE 15
Armaan and riddhima are luking at each other…in da hard rain….da ball placed on da ground in between da two of them….as they r about to strt….as to who da first wud b to take away da ball….armaan luks at riddhima…gives a sweet smile…and then winks at her…which distracts riddhima…and in dat tym armaan flees away wid da ball….wid riddhima keepin her mouth wide-opened and then tlking to herself..”achcha..toh armaan ko football aisey khelni hai..toh phir theek hai…mein bhi aisey hi khelungi…” and she runs behind armaan…..
As riddhima is runnig behind…she jst shouts which makes armaan stop..
Riddhima: ouchhhh…aaaahhh….oh bhagwaan…aaahhhh and she holds her feet….and hops like a rabbit…
Armaan luks at riddhima crying in pain…trns bac..and runs towrds her…
Armaan: hey riddhima..kya hua??? Tum theek toh ho??? And he bends dwn..
Ridhdima: nahi..theek nahi hu..isliye toh chilla rahi hu….lagta hai pair mein sprain ho gaya….bahut dard ho raha hai…
Armaan: oh..god…isliye kaha tha meiney..ki ladkiyon sey yeh football nahi hoga…chup-chaap sun leti toh abhi aisa nahi hota….and he bends on his knees to luk at her feet…and then…riddhima simply keeps her leg dwn..bends towrds him…holds his chin and says..
Riddhima: kya nahi hota armaan???and laughs…. And flees frm there..towrds da balll…leaving armaan in a shock again…dis tym he ws jaw-drop..she had tricked him…” yeh ladki kaisi hai..oh god..” he thinks dis in mind.
He gets up…puts his hands on his hips..watching ridhdima runnnig away..kicking da ball towrds da goal….and says to himself “ jo bhi hai..kamaaal ki hai…par goal toh mein hi karunga..SENORITA…” and he runs behind ridhdima…
Riddhima is very close to da goal..almost she had reached there…and armaan…also quite close to riddhima behind….they both r running in da opposite direction to da rain..and so its hitting hard on both their faces..but still they both njoi it…now ridhdima reaches da goal…n gives her final kick…when she is shuddered ….by a pull….it ws armaan….he wanted to stop her frm kicking it to da goal….so he wanted to pull her bac…but he cud not do it physically..as it wud b foul..so he pulls her scarf which she ties her hair tight wid….ultimately…due to his pull…da scarf cums in armaan’s hand…leaving riddhima’s hair open…and both of them lose balance….but evn in dat riddhima manages to kick hard…which makes da goal….but in losing their both balance….they both fall….
Riddhima falls on armaan…and they both roll on da green moist grass….da scarf still in armaan’s right hand….with his both da hands strtched on da either ends…and riddhima on top of him…with her beautiful hair open..and few wet strands falling on her face….they both luk at each other…and remain still for few seconds…dunno wat happens to both…its like a shcok..or something unexpected dat happened…and in fractions of second both fall to ground….so it takes tym for both of them to understand da complete situation….till then…armaan luks deep into ridhdima’s eyes….still….full of innocence…quite…beautiful…and riddhima jst stares…as if not knowing till now..wat had happened and wat made her fall….armaan brings his hand forward which ws stretched to one far end…and slowly removes da strands from riddhima’s face…as they wre sticking on her face cuz they wre wet and irritating her eyes…which ws breaking his concentration into her eyes….
Suddenly it thunders loud…a big roar..which jerks riddhima..and she then realises tht she ws on top of armaan….she feels embarrassed…lowers her gaze….tightens her pink lip inside and bites it…in complete embarassment….she slowly gets up from armaan…
Ridhdima: oh…oh..sorry armaan…(she tells dis completely embarassed…and lowering her gaze..she cud not keep an eye contact wid him)
Armaan: eh…its ok…he figures ito ut dat riddhima is uncomfortable so jst to make her comfortable he tries to divert da conversation..
Armaan: hmm…ho jaata hai yaar…its ok…grass par paani ki wajah sey phisal gaye..its ok…(armaan knew y they fell…it ws not cuz of slippery grass…but…lol..y wud he say tht…badmaash armaan…lol..)
Riddhima: ehh…im sorry…tumhe lagi toh nahi…
Armaan: hmm…haan…lagi hai….kitni bhaari ho senorita tum….
Now dis embarasses ridhdima more…
Riddhima luking here n there..: ehhh…im sorry….
Armaan: waisey goal ahchca kiya tumney…
Ridhdima..due to her embarassment had forgotten abt da goal she made….and she luks at da tree where she made da goal….
Riddhima: eh..thanx…waisey..armaan…
Armana: haan..
Riddhima: I think..muhjey abhi jaana chahiye…bahut der ho gayi hai….
Armaan: oh..yea..sure…and he luks at riddhima yearningly….he did not want to take his eyes off her…she ws still embarassed…n remained quiet…
Riddhima: ok..then…c u later…bye…and she waves him…
Armaan…waves her bac…and keeps luking her and waving till she goes off sight….and evn aftr shez gone…he keeps luking at da place she had gone off….tohught she ws gone….but then it thundered loud..and armaan came bac to his senses….then he hits his head saying “ kya ho gaya hai mujhey…” and he smiles….picks up da ball and goes….
Scene shifts…
Armaan: achchoooo…..aaaahhh…..chhhoooo
Atul: hey armaan.kuch lete kyun nahi..kya ho gaya??? Lagta hai kal baarish mein bahut bheegey ho..
Armaan then recollects wat happened last nyt….recollects riddhima’s beautiful eyes…her hair on her face….the way she got embarassed….and then cums bac to normal…
Rahul: gaya hoga kisi reena meena teenaa….ke saath…baarish mein…
Armaan: achchhcoooo….teri girlfrend ko toh nahi le gaya naa..toh tu chupkar…oh..sorry mien toh bhool hi gaya..teri toh koi girlfrend hi nahi…and he laughs…evn atul laughs..and they both give a hi-five…
Rahul luks at armaan sternly..
Rahul: tujhey kya lagta hai??? Ki mein koi girlfrend nahi rakh sakta???
Armaan: lagta nahi mere bhai…mujhey puraa yakeen hai….ahchcchooo….and he laughs again…
Rahul: ok..chal phir..tu kisi bhi ladki ka naam le…aurm ien usey apni girlfrend banaakar hi rahunga…
Armana: achchaaa!!!! Sochley..
Rahul: soch liya…chal ab bol toh…
Soon then armaan gets a mesg from muskaan reminding him of da details for her cousin…and luking at her name on his mobile…his mind clicks..
Armana: ahccha..ek ladki hai..parm ujhey nahi lagta tu usey pataaa sakega…
Rahul: shard lagaaley…
Armaan: hmm…tuff man huh…yo..i like it…oooohhhh….
Rahul: ab chal naam bolega…kaun hai???
Armaan: ok..chal phir…yaad rakh ek baar ur done..then peechey nahi hatna..
Rahul: tu bolega???
Armana: ok…waisey toh patne nahi wali…par…woh iss college ki nahi…st peters ki hai..
Atul: arey..st peter’s..waha ke toh..ladkiya patnaa naa-mumkin hai…
Armaan smiles at rahul…
Rahul: naam kya hai???
Armaan: MUSKAAN….and he smiles agains…dis tym a wicked one..cuz armaan knew…dat rahul n muskaan had a fight earlier in their college….and rahul’s face is shown in a shock….
Armana: kyun..betaa…haar maan gaya??
Rahul cud not let his dignity go by losing…or quitting..he had to go fr it….atleast to provei n front of armaan…
Rahul: done….
Armana: kool…done..chal..tujhey ek mahiney ka tym diya…exact one month baad…she shud admit herself..ki woh teri girlfrend hai…ok???
Rahul: ok…he givesh im a dead luk dis tym…and wlaks away…
Scene shifts….
Riddhima: achchcooooo…..aaahh…aaahhhcchhhooo…
Anjali: hey ridhdima are u fine…I mean..luk at u…subah sey bas sneeze karti hi jaa rahi ho..tabiyat toh theek hai naa..
Ridhdima: haan yaar…woh bas….kal baarish mein tohdi der bheeg gayi thi….
Anjali: oh..ok…hey riddhima..mujhey tumsey kuch baat karni thi..
Ridhdima: haan bolo..
Anjali: woh..actually…mein…woh..eh….mein..
Muskana: hey riddhiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii………..yaar chal….canteen chal..mujhey tujhsey kuch important baat bhi karni hai…chal abb…
Riddhima: par muski..ek minute..mein woh…anjali sey..
Muskaan: baad mien baat kar lena…waisey bhi woh kahaa bhaagi jaa rahi hai..
Anjali: ok ridhdima..mein tumsey baad mien baat kar lungi..its ok..no problem…and anjali leaves…
Ridhdima luks at anjali…then gets bac to muskaan….
In da canteen….
Muskaan: muhjey kuch nahi sunnna…hum aaj raat….fire n ice disc jaa rahe hai…n dats final..
Ridhdima: parm uskaan..meri baat toh sun..
Muskaan: no…noo…
Riddhima: par itna toh bol..hum jaa kyun rahey hai???
Muskaan: hmm….bas…aiwaiii….mera mann kar raha hai…aur mein jaanti hu tujhey waisi jagah pasand nahi…par believe mein…waha jaaney ke baad..tu bilkul bore nahi hogi…I promise…
Ridhdima: hmm..pakkaa..
Muskaan: haan pakka..meri jaan….
And they both hug each other….
Scene shifts….
Raj: hey armaan…aaj shaam..fire n ice…wat say??
Armaan: nahi yaar…
Raj in a shock…: kya armaan..tera mann nahi kar raha…armaan-da dude….ka mann nahi kar raha..kya boss??? Theek toh hai tu???
Armaan: haan yaar…bas..aisey hi mann nahi kar raha…
Raj: chal yaar…sab jaa rahey hai….aur tu toh jaan hai humaarey group ka..tuhjey toh hona hi hoga…I dunno..bas 7pm..u gotto b there…
Rahul interrupts…: kya baat hai..armaan…party nahi karna chahta….ladkiya nahi pat rahi hai kya??? And he laughs….
Armaan luks at him..: tujh sey toh behter hi hu….
Rahul: oh really….
Armaan: hey raj…aaj 7pm…fire n ice…and he shows rahul his thumb up..and then slowly rotating it to thumb down….
And da camera goes still…showing armaan and rahul luking at each other….
EPISODE 16
Riddhima: hey muski…dekh ab mein chal toh rahi hu…par mujhey jo pehenkar chalna hai..mein waisi hi chalungi…ok???
Muskaan: haaan…babaaa..waisey hi chal…jaisi hai..waisi hi toh dikhna chahiye naa??? and she smiles..
Ridhdima: huh??? Kya??
Muskaan: nahi..kuch nahi…bas jaldi tayyar hoja…humey waha 7 tak rehna hai…
Ridhdima: hey muski…tu waha kisi ko tym dekar aayi hai kya???
Muskaan: nahi toh….kyun?? tu aisey kyun puch rahi hai??
Riddhima: nahi ..mera matlab…kuch nahi….
Scene shifts….
Its fire n ice disc….riddhima and muskaan reach there….in da disc….its pretty crowded…music being played...most of them dancing….when muskaan meets up face to face wid rahul…
Muskaan: tu??? Yaha par…oye tujhey yaha andar guards ney aaney kaisey diya??
Rahul: shut up…jab tujhey andar aaney de sakte hai…toh mein toh easily aa sakta hu..samjhi….
Muskana: oye chupkar….riddhima..isey boldey ki yeh chup ho jaaye..warna…iski toh maut hai aaj….and she moves forward as if to press his neck..
Ridhdima: hey hey hey…..bas kar yaar….ohh…im sorry…ehh…im riddhima…muskaan ki dost…
Muskana: oye tu kyun sorry bol rahi hai isey….
And then armaan..cums in between..
Armana: hey guys….and he shows his hand…in a waving manner…and then directly luks at riddhima…smiling…
Riddhima: hi….and she luks dwn…as if she remembered da football played by them both last nyt…
Armaan: waisey rahul…yeh MUSKAAN hai…rmeember….and then he whispers in his ears…BET TOH YAAD HAI NAA….poser!!!!
Rahul luks at armaan….and recollects dat he had said he wud take da challenege…and then in no tym…he strts behaving soo gud wid muskaan…
Rahul: ehh…im…im sorry muskaan…woh..pata nahi ..mujhey kya ho gaya tha…ehh…im sorry..
Muskaan…did not expect dis frm him…cuz it ws all of a sudden..
Muskaan: ab isey kya hua…abhi toh junglee banaa tha…aur ek pal mein hi…
Riddhima: muski..koi ahchca behave karey tujhey usmein bhi koi problem hai kya…bechaara sorry toh keh raha hai…
Rahul: ehh..yea…im sorry muskaan…uss din kel iye bhi..college mein…
Muskaan: haan theek hai theek hai…its ok…
And rahul brings his hand forward saying..
Rahul: so frends???
Muskana: hmm..ok..par yaad rakh aagli baar aisey ladega naa..toh phir mera haath aur tera sar hoga..samjha???
Rahul: waisa chance hi nahi dunga mein…
Armaan: waisey tum log yaha kya kar rahey ho??/
Riddhima: woh actually…muskaan le aayi mujhey..uska bas aisey hi mann kiya…
Armaan: uska mann kiya aur tum chali aayi??
Riddhima: woh…muski…akele thi…and aisey akele bhi toh nahi jaa sakti thi naa..toh..bas usey company dene aa gayi..
Armaan: ohh…matlab tum yaha njoi karne nahi aayi..
Riddhima: ehh..waisa nahi hai…par..
Muskaan: oye armaan…kyun uska dimaag kha raha hai…chodh naa usey…chal hum dance karte hai…
Armaan: oh..yea sure…
Armaan andm uskaan…go dancing…riddhima..watching them both dance…and rahul standing beside riddhima…
Rahul: so…riddhima ryt??? Aap dancek yun nahi karti…college fest mein toh sanke hosh hi udhaa diye the..
Riddhima: thanx….par itni bheedh mein pata nahi kaisey dance kar lete hai..i mean…khadey hone ko hi jagah nahi hai….dance…kaisey karte hai…and she smiles..
Rahul: hmm…kar sakte hai…itsn ot tuff…aur waisey bhi hum..yaha khadey khadey bhi dance kar sakte hai…
Riddhima: seriously??? Yaha???
Rahul: haan..yaha…so dance??
Riddhima: nooo….par kuch ajeeb nahi dikhega..
Rahul: naa..not atol…if u dun mind…its ok if u not comfrtable..
Riddhima: hmm…thanx rahul…and she smiles….
Music is off now….fr few seconds….armaan and muskaan cum twrds rahul n riddhima…
Rahul taking his chance…asking to muskaan..
Rahul: dance??
Muskaan: tere saath??? Phitte muh..
Rahul:hmmm…ab itna bhi bura nahi hu..aur dance toh achcha hi kar leta hu…
Muskaan: hmm..ok…
Music trns on again..and rahul-muskaan glee away….riddhima and armaan watching them dis tym….
Armaan: muskaan..bahut jaldi dost banaa leti hai naa???
Riddhima: hmm….haan…bahut pyaari hai..sabsey…jaldi mil jaati hai…
Armaan: aur tum???
Riddhima: mein…?? Pata nahi…shaayad mere bahut hi kam frends hai…par jitne muski ke hai….bataa bhi nahi sakti…and she laughs…
Armana: hmm..tum bahut kum dost banaati ho..aur jitno ko bhi banaati ho..bahut soch samajhkar banaati ho naa…
Ridhdima luks at armaan…as if he kinda read her and spoke something abt her character….so she just luks at him…with her beautiful green eyes...
Armana: aur tumhaare liye..bharosa..bahut important hai…hai naa??? I mean…bharosey par hi tum aagey rishte ko badaati ho…ryt??
Riddhima again shocked….
Riddhima: tumney psychology mein PHD ki hai kya??
And they both of them laugh…luking at riddhima laugh….direct frm heart…made armaan happy…he felt complete..as if achieved something….he luked at her…regularly dat too widout her knowledge..cuz he knew she wud get uncomfrtable…they both stood there n spoke…laughed…armaan…luved riddhima’s company..never did he like any gal’s companay as much he luved being wid her…it ws like..he cud b himself…when he ws wid her….he did not have to fake in front of her…or pose…or do something to impress…he ws himself…dats it…and dats y he luved being wid her….
In between da dance..music….da DJ…just stopped his music…and annouced something..
DJ: hey guys….heres somebody for some1 special here…who really wants to dedicate a song..and may b wanna express his feeling too….so heres…hmmm…da handsome…
Guy: hey guys..n gals…sorry for da interruption..wont takem uch tym of urs…par mein sirf 2 minute hi lunga…well…mein apna naam toh nahi bataaunga abhi kyunki mein chahta hu…ki jiske liye mein ahbi benaam banaa hu..wohi mujhey pehchaaney….aur jiske liye mien benaam banaa hu..woh hai….RIDDHIMA…!!!!
Riddhima hears in shick…she wants to c da person whos speaking..cuz to a certain extent she gets an idea about da person…but wanted to confirm…she highers herself on her heels…trying to luk here n there….she becums resltess…
Riddhima: hey muski…mera naam bulaaya naa abhi??? Kaun hai??
Muskaan: pata nahi….
Guy: riddhima….shaayad…tum mujhey…kuch hi der mein pehchaan lo…par mein bas yehi kahunga….i missed u…missedu meri doll…missedu guys…so here… dis song’s for u riddhima.... riddhima is surprised……standing still…soon da rowd in front of her clears as per da dj’s instructions and on top…on a dias riddhima cn see a guy trned ..showing his bac and holding a guitar….and he strts to sing…frst da music played behind and then ” tu hi meri shabb hai..subah hai…tu hi din hai mera….tu hi mera rabb hai..jahaaan hai..tu hi meri duniyaaaa….tu waqt mere liyeee..mein hu tera lamhaaa…kaisey rahega bhalaaa…hokar yeh tujhsey judaaa...” and when da chorus goes “ oh ohoho ho ho ohh…ohh…” da guy trns wid his guitar….his face shown clearly…
Ridhdima…luking at him shocked…just surprised…and still…
Riddhima: KARAN!!!!!
Muskana: yea meri jaan..karan..aur isliye tujhey mien yaha le aayi…surprise..!!!!
Armaan luks at karan..and then ridhdima’s reaction…he does not like it…does not like da whole atmosphere….
Karan: aankhen teri shabnami..chehra tera aainaa…tu hai udaasi bhari…koi haseen daastaaaan…dil mein hai kyaa…kuch toh bataaa…kyun hai bhalaaa..mujhsey judaaaa…..and da chorus goes again..”ohh ho ho ho..ohhh ho ho…ohh…”
He stops singing…and stands on da dias..wid his hands stretched as if giving an invitation for a hug…and da very next thing seen is..riddhima..is standing…with tears building in her eyes….her face like a small kid who is about to cry…but showing a happy..smiling expression….she just runs…fast to karan….stands in front of him..face to face…
Riddhima: idiot…bataaya kyun nahi…ki utm aa rahey ho..
Karan: agar bataata..toh yeh expression miss kar deta…jo abhi tumhaarey chehre par hai…kyu…hai naa…DUMBO???
Riddhima just hugs him…crying…and smiling at da same tym….and da background music wid da chorus “ oh ho ho ho oh..ho….” muskaan..to cums running..and hugs them both…joining…
Karan: well guys..sorry sorry fr da inconvenience…plzzz continue…carry on guys…
Muskaan..riddhima and karan…cum wlaking towrds armaan..rahul..and raj…
Riddhima: tum kab aaye…kaha ho??? Kal kya plans hai..??? kitne din ke liye ho???
Karna: ruko ruko..dumbo…itne saarey sawaal….waisey yeh bolo…tere aur muski ke saath yeh kaun..intro nahi karaaogey yaar..
Muskana: arey haan…hey karana..yeh hai armaan…yeh rahul..n raj…st xaviers college ke..
Karan: u mean st xaviers medical colege??
Ridhdima: haan…
Karna: kool…st peters ki aur st xaviwers ki kab sey banney lag gayi….well kool…
Muskaan: aur yeh hai…karan..humaare jasia hi hai..final year student..par U.S sey….yeh ..hai…riddhima ki aadhi jaan….
Ridhdima: chup kar muski..kuch bhi bolti hai…
Karan: jaan??? Meri jaan khaa jaati hai yeh…and muskaan and karan laugh….they tease ridhdima….
Karan: dumbo kahin ki…
Armaan…does not like him….he himself ws confused y he doesn’t..jab ki..he did not cause any harm to him…par..luking at riddhima and karan standing side by side…he feels awkward….
Karan: well guys….mujhey jaana hai…
Riddhima: kahan jaana hai?? Mein bhi chalungi..
Karan: nahi dumbo..tu ruk...and mujhey waha jana hai...u know it...nahi gaya..toh maaara jaunga..pata hai naa tujhey…n tumhaare saarey frends hai..mein tujhey..kal subah milta hu…ok…and he cups her face….and kisses hero n her forehead…
Riddhima: hmm..janit hu...waha nahi gaye..toh pakka hi maarey jaaogey...better jao...n pakka kal milogey naa???
Karan: haan dumbo…chal…njoi kar..il c u tom…ok..chal bye muski….bye guys…
Evry1: bye….
Riddhima ki chehre par jo khushi thi..karan ko dekhkar…dat armaan noticed…and he cud make out..dat he ws very close to riddhima….” Close??? Yeh log ek dusrey ko kabsey jaantey hogey….muskaan ney kaha woh jaan hai….yeh…uska boyfrend toh nahi..” dis goes in armaan’s head….and they show armaan luking at riddhima…happy..laughing…and full of mirth….da camera goes still on both their faces…
EPISODE ENDS….
PRECAP-
Karan and armaan in da park….
Karan: hey armaan ryt???
Armana: hmm…yea…
Karna: toh..phir ho jaaye…
Armaan luks at him with one eyebrow raised..: hmm..ho jaaye…
Riddhima shouting: come on karan….come on….tum kar saktey ho…
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hi dear
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who's karan... ksg or anyone else...