Friday, January 7

Segment 41: A Duke and Duchess' Story

A Duke And A Duchess' Story

****Aur feer aur ek raat aayi , jishne feer se ushki jindagi badal di*****




Ush deen subah se hi barsaat ho rahi thi….dr.mallik and riddhima ke friends kai baar ushe phone kar chuke they…ushne sabse kaha tha wo thik hai…..wo bash akeli rahna chahti hai……so kisi ne ushe disturb karna thik nahi samjha……..wo apni kismat se bahut dookhi thi…..kya bhagwaanji kismat ke lekh lihktey waaqt ek baar bhi nahi sochtey?....kya bhagwaanji ko ushper kabhi tarash nahi aati?....ushke saath hi ye sab keun?...ushke papa ne janm se pahle hi ushe nakaar diya….apna naam dene se….toh kya ushe ish duniya mein khushi se jeene ka haq bhi nahi hai?....wo ish duniya mein aayi,ishmein ushka kya kasoor?....kaise apni kismat badley?...ushke saath ek achche aadmi ki kismat bhi kharab ho jati hai….ushne dr.sashank ka hunsta –khelta ghar ujara….aur feer unki jaan bhi le li….wo ab kya karey?....kahan jaye?....

Riddhima tired ho chuki thi…..apni jindagi se fight karte karte!…..wo ab sona(sleep) chahti thi….she was crying bitterly ,”ma..mujhe apne paas bula lo….mai aapke bahon mein sona chahti hun….mujhse ab ish jindagi se lara nahi jata………..”….

Bahut raat ho chuki thi……..Shayad ushe need lag gayi thi……………………

Someone was knocking at the door………

Riddhym tha……
Riddhym :" andar aane ko nahi kahogi…….
Riddhima :" ghar mein koi nahi hai……
Riddhym:" pata hai…kya tumhe mujhse dar lagta hai?....

Riddhima didn’t answered……riddhym came in………

Riddhym :" hmmm…kya karna chahti ho?...ish tarah sabko apne se dur keun bhaga rahi ho?....
Riddhima:" mai nahi chahti,mere saath dusron ki life barbaad ho…..mai bahut unlucky hun riddhym…..
Riddhym:" kisne kaha? Kisne kaha ki tum unlucky ho?...mujhe sab pata hai angel…dr.mallick ke saath unke ghar jane se mana kiya…atul ke mom ko mana kiya…..dadi ji ne bulaya to mana kiya…kya tum akeli yahan safe ho?....kya tumhe pata nahi duniya kitni kharab hai?......tum whole district mein 1st aayi ho…tumhe best college mein admission lena hai…apna future banana hai……aise banegi future?....

Riddhima (laughing with a pain):"kishka future?....mera ab koi future nahi…..mai jab dharti per aayi…ma ki life barbaad ki…papa ke paas aayi to,unka family barbad ki aur ab unki jaan hi le li….mai manhoos hun…chale jao riddhym…mujhe koi nahi chahiye….plz.jao…mai jina nahi chahti…mujhe akela chor doh…

Riddhym(hold her shoulders):" angel…pagal mat bano…mai tumhare saath hun…mai saari jindagi tumhare saath rahunga…..mai tumhare saare sapne pure karunga….

Riddhima(trying to push him): "choro..mujhe koi nahi chahiye…jao…mai manhoos hun…choro... mujhe nahi jeena kisi ke saath….(crying bitterly)..ma …o’ ma..tum kahan ho?...mujhe apne paas bula lo…mujhe aapke paas jana"…..


Riddhym se ushki haalat dekhi nahi ja rahi thi…..aisa dard!! ..itne pain!!!..aur bhi ish shy ,weak larki ko!!...pata nahi kya kar baithey!!...aur aaj ushe akela chora toh aaj hi wo kuch kar baithegi…nahi!!..riddhym ko kuch karna hoga….ushki aankhen bhar aayi!!..pyar karta hai ish larki se!!..pagalon ki tarah chahta hai!!...shayad apni ma ke death per bhi ushe itni takleef nahi hui thi,jo aaj riddhima ko dekh kar ho rahi thi!!...ji chata tha ushe baahon mein lekar ushke saare aansoo pee jaye!!...ushke saare gum,saare pain khud mein samet ley!!.......kya karey!!..kuch karna hoga……kisi bhi tarah angel ko ish shock se bahar nikalna hoga……


Suddenly riddhym pulled her close to him and slightly touched her lips!!!………!!!.and.it made .riddhima completely speechless!!! …..riddhym sucked her tears with his lips!!.....riddhima kapni awaz….sochne ki sakti…sabkuch kho chooki thi!!!!....what’s happened!!...riddhym ne ye kya kiya!!!.....riddhym whispered in her ears…....”mai hoon na….i will be always with u my angel!”……and in a minute….she hugged riddhym tightly!!!……mano ushe sabse bara sahara mill gaya ho!!!!……..

Feer saari raat riddhym ushke paas hi tha….ushe barey pyar se khana khilaya….wo bahut tired thi…….…pata nahi kab riddhym ki baten sunte sunte ushe need lag gayi but riddhym ushke paas hi baitha raha….subah jab need khuli toh riddhym ja chukka tha….ek massage chorkar ushke naam…”ab tumhara naam mere saath jur gaya hai…tum ab akeli nahi ho,mai her pal tumhare saath hun……apne papa ka sapna pura karo riddhima…..”I will be always with u”……….



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Riddhima ne mallick medical college mein admission le li thi….riddhym ushi college mein 4th year mein tha…but kabhi bhi wo milne ki koshish nahi karta….but riddhima janti thi ki wo riddhima ki saari news muskaan se leta rahta……

Feer riddhym ka INTERNSHIP complete ho gaya aur wo PG ke liye papa ke paas ja raha tha……..jaane se pahle wo riddhima se ushke ghar per milne aaya tha…..
Riddhym :"angel,mai 3 years ke liye ja raha hun….papa ki tabiyat thik nahi rahti…mai jaunga to study ke saath saath unhe business mein kuch help bhi kar sakunga……aur feer soch raha hun papa ko bhi lekar chala aaoonga…….

Riddhima(gazing at the ground) :" hmmm……..

Riddhym: "aaj bhi kuch nahi kahogi?....mujhe rokogi nahi……

Riddhima : "nahi…tumhe apne papa ke paas jana chahiye………
Riddhym :" saari life dusron ke bare mein hi sochogi….ok…but aaoonga toh sanjiwani mein join karoonga….as a senior doctor……
Riddhima;" hmmm……
Riddhym :" aur mai jahan bhi rahun,tumhare saath hun…chahe kitni bhi bari mushibat aaye…darna mat….
Riddhima :" hmmm……
Riddhym (smiling): ja raha hun…ek baar galey nahi milogi…..

**Riddhima ne bush ek baar apni sharmai aankhen uthakar dekha aur feer jhuka li**…….

Riddhym(smiled) :" bush tumhari ishi sharmane ki ada per mai mar mita hun angel……ok..but meri ek request rakhogi..plz…..
Riddhima :" kya?....
Riddhym ;" mai ek kangan laya tha ..tumhare liye…meri ma ka kangan hain ye….bush ek baar tumhare hathon mein dekhna chata hun….plz……

Riddhima apni ankhen band kar hath badha deti hai……..riddhym ushe kangan pahnata hai…..and touched it softly with his lips!………

Riddhima shievers!!!.......
Riddhym :" bash!ab mai chain se ja paunga…..chahe mere jaane ke baad ishe utar dena angel…but jish din mai wapus aaunga…ishe pahankar mujhse milna….jish tarah apne pyar ko chorker ja raha hun…ushi tarah wo mujhe wapus miley!............


A Duke And A Duchess' Story



Riddhima opened her wet eyes!!....kya riddhym ushe jish tarah chorkar gaya tha…wo waisi hi hai?...nahi..wo toh puri tarah badal chuki hai!!….ab toh wo arman ke rang mein rang chuki hai…..


Massage for friends
hey@nikitasingla....thanks dear for comments….arey kahani ko wahan nahi chorti toh next part padhti kya?...sorry..joking...ac.mai hi kabhi kabhi meri pyari sis ka ff padh nahi pati….sorry dear…u know how I manage all things….hope enjoyed duke…….luv…

hey@anamika...thanx darling…..aur plz.thora patience rakho…duke aa jayega….luv….

hey@masterjiya....thanx for ur comments…actually I always try to ud soon….but my problems!!!...but I will try dear….luv….

hey@nikitashah....sorry dear….tum ff likhti ho,mujhe pata hi nahi tha….sure mai tumhara ff padhungi….and mai jaldi ud ki koshish karti hun dear….but koi na koi problem aa jata hai…mere blog friends mujhse gmail or fb or if mein contact karte hain…plz.tum bhi karo na….

hey@sadaf janu…..duke jald wapus aa jayega dear…bush next part mein….plz.thora patience rakho…luv u…..

hey@jyotika mallick…kitni baar socha tumhe puchungi….tum actually mallick ho or dhiman….ab pata chala u are jyotika arman mallick….wow!!....liked it….luv u and arman…..

hey@ridhibansal …thanx a lot for ur comment dear….luv…..
hey@avika....new friends?....luv u dear……..
hey@ darshika sis….thanks a ton dear….ya..u call me di….love it….
Hey @rihoo dear….thanks a lot for ur comments….luv u….
hey@sweet sweety….thanks a lot,thanks a ton for ur lovely comment…..luv u sweety….
hey@supriya...tui neeje atodin gayeb theke didi ke kasto diyechis…tar belai kichu nai?...ektu tumio duke ke miss korey kasto pao babu…..luv u….duke taratari feerbey and hope next partgulo aro interesting habe…so don’t miss………..
hey@nandini....thanks dear….actually riddhym is a good person…..hope u will like his character….luv…
hey @anshu dadima….arman jaldi hi wapus aayega….don’t worry….luv u sis…tumhara naam hi mere liye bahut hai….long comments na dey pao toh koi baat nahi….

And now my loving friends,my silent readers…..Thanks a ton for ur like tab……luv u all dear………
Luv u all
Luv u always
punam

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17 Comments:

ashu said...

ahh armaan please come back csoon! and ridzy needs to tell riddhym she's happily married!

Singlanikita6 said...

hey punam di
luv the part
kyonki awsme jo tha as usual
di choti si req hai armaan ko vaapis le aaao
missing him so mch
aur i hope ki riddhym samjhe ki riddhima sirf armaan ki hai'
aur happy hai
anyways do continue sooon
with luv
nikita

kshiti said...

hiiiiii
nice part
cont soon
and sorry for not commenting in previous part... :(
byyyyeee
tc
love
kshiti

Ashima(aashi) said...

di sorry comment nai kar payi
lekin ye kya di?????
mera dule kaha hai
aab uske bina bilkul nai maan lag raha hai
plz di mere armaan ko jaldi se wapus le aao.......
luv u di
kash ki diwani
aashi

RiHoo HaWs said...

hey punam dear...
part was good...
im waiting for armaan to come back...
is armaan going to leave riddhima...??? or will riddhim leave riddhima for armaan...
please dont seperate armaan and riddhima.. :)
waiting for the next part... :)
till than takecare and keep smiling...
keeep posting...
have a nice day... love u...

Armaan-ko-bulao said...

main toh bus wait kar rahi hoon ki kab riddhima rani jaldi riddym ko bata de that she loves armaan and wer the hell is armaan.......
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz armaan ko jaldi wapus le aau.BUT OBVIOUSLY MAIN JAANTI HOON THAT IT WILL BE AR ANYWAY SO zyada tension nahi le rahi!
kyunki main jaanti hoon ki aapke liye ar zindagi ka ek hissa hai so woh dono toh mill ke rahenge.
cont soon
anshu

anamika said...

hey punam di
awesome part superbbbbbbb di
mujha laga ki riddhym bad guy hai per wo bhi riddhima se pyar karta hai
jo bi ho hume toh sirf duke aur duck hi cahiya
contsoon takecare
bye


anamika

NIKITA SHAH said...

Hey sorry for late comment Di..,
how are you..??
Happy New Year...
part was really good..
I loved it..
I ll try to contact you..
Armaan ko jald vapas lekar aana...

tk-care..
with love..,
NIKITA SHAH

sadaf said...

hey jaan
as usual mind blowing part.....
loved it.......
hope riddhym samjhe ki riddhima ab married hai aur khush bhi!!!
waiting for my duke to return............
continue soon.

Lakshmi 07rajan said...

hi di
CONGOS 4 all d awards u really deserved it truly
riddym riddhima ki happily married life mein ko barbad kar dega
riddhima needs 2 tell him ki she married 2 armaan
armaan se yaad aya di kab wapas la rahe ho use??????????( a verrrrrrrrrrry humble request)
well it very emotinal too
cont soon plzzzzzzzz
bye
tc
keep smiling:)

sweety said...

hey
yaar
it was nice part waise
rhythm ne uska sahara bana but she is truely happy with armaan yaar ab kyun yeh twist but
abhi bahut kuch saayad baki hai
hmmmmmmm so
keep on going

love u all
sweety

Palak_aug30 said...

HI DI awsome part but plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz arman ko jaldi vapas le ao . nd for ther marrige i know it will be awsome.

bye love u
tc
dershika

MKRM_luver said...

Punam...........
U dint reply 2 my question at da awards thread................
Aapne kis k comments ko rubbish kaha tha in ur poem "Shona Kisne Tumhe Banaya Hai"......????
Plzzz reply.............

reet said...

wow kya suspence tha di
i loved it looking forward to read d next part plz cont soon
and sorry tabiat thik na hone ki wajah se pichle kuch parts pe comment nahi kar payi ...... soory hope maaf kardogi
and di parts are samshing rocking amzzing awsome loved them all
beautiful ................ chalo abhi jaldi se next part likho k
love ya
reet

punam2010 said...

hey luver....jab samajhti ho toh puchti keun ho?....jo bhi wo comments padhega...samajh jayega...bakwas issue laya gaya hai...mai larai nahi chahti... i luv mkrm princess and her ff......she is a nice girl,awesome writer.....maine ushe ff ke praise mein na jane kitne mail kiye....(if u don't believe,plz ask her)...i overwhelmed with her english literature....but mai janti hun meri hindi kitni achchi hai...aur wo bhi jisne kabhi kuch likha hi na ho(maine toh koi writings nahi dekhi uski)...wo aise comments karey!!...anyways...mai wo baat bhul chuki hun....aur mai jhagra nahi chahti(keddie and other friends request me)...sorry...aapko buri lagi toh....

luv shilpa shona

punam

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