Saturday, July 24

Part 9: Kabhi Pyaar Toh Kabhi Takrar

HEYYA GUYS
SO I AM FINALLY BACK WITH MY FF.
HOPE U ALL MISSED ME AND MY FF BECOZ I DID MISS YOU ALL AND UR COMMENTS.
BAHUT SAARE MESSAGES HAIN MERE FRNDS AND NEW BLOGGERS KE LIYE BHI
BUT PEHLE HI BORE NAHI KARUNGI AFTER THE PART HOGI GUP-SHUP.

RECAP:-

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Part 18 (A): Jab Dil Milley

part 18 A

An: ridzi aab dekh aaj to tu armaan k ghar jaygi nahi!
Ar: kyun??
An: wo isiley k kal accha mhurat nikalva kar uski bidai aur raj priya ki sagai karvaye…
Ok???
All: ok…

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Part 15: Life out of control - AR fanfiction

Heyy guys...heres part 15 for u..hope u enjoy..!!

Recap - Armaan and Riddhima text each other..and he compliments her. He then gives her a whole bundle of chocolates. They dont want to share their date with anyone.

Part 15

Riddhima and Armaan became great friends as time progressed. Whenever one would see the other at the canteen, they would not fail to go there. And very rarely, one was seen without the other. Anjali didn’t mind the relationship they shared either after a lot of convincing from Armaan and Riddhima that he had changed. Armaan’s friendly nature had won her over. Unknowingly, Riddhima felt more attachment to Armaan as the days passed, and her love grew for him. Armaan could not see anyone else, or any girl besides Riddhima. His love for her became stronger, and he adored her little antics, and pranks.

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Episode 4: Meant for Each Other

Riddhima had a very fine and hectic “birthday”. All the patients including nana, Minnie , gappu etc welcomed her and wished her with tons of gifts, flowers and showered love upon her. They had really made her day, after her huge let down (by armaan) in the morning. But riddhima’s face had lost its glow. She didn’t seem eternally happy anymore.

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Friday, July 23

Dill Mill Gayye July 23 Episode

Serial: Dil Mil Gaye (Dill Mill Gayye)
Channel : Star One

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Segment 16: A Duke and Duchess' Story

(INTJAAR KAB TAK KARENGE BHALA)


Arman ko aaj morning mein hi dr.aditi ko 2 cases mein assist karne they....feer wah canteen chala gaya.......wahan se wapus aaya to dr.aditi ne oose medical college bhaj diya....wahan oose 1 class lena tha...dr. sindhe nahi aaye they.....anatomy ka hi class tha....arman thora tired tha.....but oose laga ki shayad riddhima wahan ho!.........

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Part 2: A Walk On The Beach...

I was hardly aware of where I was going…All I knew I had to get out of here…*CRASH!*....I looked up to see a tall, good-looking person…He looked behind me at those 2 men…He seemed to understand why I was running for my life…My instincts told me I could trust him…His ocean blue eyes led me to trust him instantly…He lent out his hand and I gave in…

Sighing in relief he led me to his car…

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Thursday, July 22

Dill Mill Gayye July 22 Episode

Serial: Dil Mil Gaye (Dill Mill Gayye)
Channel : Star One

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Episode 3: Meant for Each Other

The very same day,
Riddhima walked into the locker room..
Muskaan and Atul were already there doing their classic “sword fight”

As riddhima enters..
“Happy birthday ridzi!” Atul goes and hugs riddhima..riddhima smiles at the affection.
“Thank you..!!”
“Happy birthday ridzi” muskaan follows..
“Thank you guys!” she is extreamely happy today.

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Part 7: Love not at First Sight

Part 7

"waiting for riddhima?…" he heard someone on the other side…

Armaan drove as fast as he can to rahul's house. Getting out of the car without even locking it he ran towards his apartment. Without waiting for the lift he took the stairs and stood in front of his apartment which was on the 12th floor and pressed the door bell waiting for him to open the door. Rahul opened the door after a good 10 minutes looking at him angrily.

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Part 17 B: Jab Dil Miley

Part 17 B

Ri: armaan??
Ar: hum???
Ri: armaan mein phir se sanjivani kyun join nahi kar sakti??

Ar: riddhima tum pehle araam karogi..
Ri: par armaan mein to bilkul thik hu…
Ar: nahi basket tum araam karogi matalb aarma hi karogi!
Aur yeh mera order hain.

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Part 14: Life out of control - AR fanfiction

Part 14

Recap: Armaan and Riddhima went on a date. Armaan told her he’s sorry for what he did 5 years ago. They have a lot of fun and of course, some closeness.

Riddhima was in her room that night wondering what was happening between her and Armaan. He had just left, and something inside her told her she didn’t want him to leave. She walked across, and opened the doors of the balcony. Stepping out, she took a good look at the stars and the sky. The breeze blew in her hair, and she closed her eyes remembering their time at the beach. A smile crept up on her face.

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Part 7 - 8: Love Story

hey all guys a big thanks for ur comments. I am glad to hear that u guys like the story. U guys have given me a big boost of confidence.

Part 7

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Part 8: Love Birds

Thank u kshiti,punam,sanaa,sweety,pooja,vaishali(hey darling call me anything you like),aditi and all the silent readers for your encouraging cmnts and the one who has pressed dislike option plz tell me my mistakes so that I can improve in next parts.

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A Walk On The Beach...

Hey guys....This is one more FF I'm writing....Wanted to share it with you all...Let me know if you all want me to continue...And since I'm writing Dill Jahaan Dost Wahaan also I'll select timings to update both the FFs to avoid confusion....:)

Let me know if you all want me to continue...Here's Part 1 for you guys!

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Wednesday, July 21

Part 8: Phir Dill Milne Lage

PART 8


HEY SORRY FOR THE LATE UPDATE…..
BUT FIRSTLY A BIG THANKYOU TO ALL THOSE WHO HAVE LIKED MY FF
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WITH THIS RAHUL JUST SMILES AND SAYS : WO bechare soch rahe hai ki hum dr. kirti se bache kaise??
With this they hi 5 each other and sits

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Episode 2: Meant for each other

Riddhima stood there dumbstruck. Armaan hid his secret grin and looked down, folding is hand right behind his back like a school going good kid.

“riddhima beta?” an old female voice neared her..
“Armaan armaan!! Marwa diya na mujhe..ab main kya karu? Hey raam, mujhe bachale..” riddhima whispered to armaan in the darkness.

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Dill Mill Gayye July 21 Episode

Serial: Dil Mil Gaye (Dill Mill Gayye)
Channel : Star One

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Segment 15: A Duke and Duchess' Story

arman hospital mein aaj doosri baar aaya tha....….first day’s ke experience kooch achche nahi they…..but aaj wo khoosh tha...….morning mein riddhima ki smiling face oose abhi tak feel ho raha tha...….aur oose baar-baar dekhne ki ichcha hi rahi thi....….but pata nahi riddhima kahan hai!!................

dr.aditi : "dr.arman...….aaj aapko jyada heavy duty nahi....….bus aap lab.mein rahenge aur kuch students ko aapko sambhalna parega………..
arman : "mai samjha nahi dr.aditi….
aditi : "ok,mai samjhati hoon....aaj aap 1st and 2nd year ke students ko blood-pressure,hemoglobin...something like that check karna sikhayenge....….and afternoon ko mere saath ek surgery mein mujhe assist karenge…….

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Tuesday, July 20

Part 44: The Story of a Prince and a Princess

DR.SASHANK’S HOUSE


Anjali and riddhzi …dono bahne ek doosre ko hug kar rahi thi...….dono bahoot khoosh deekh rahi thi…..arman aur atul apni –apni princess ko dekh rahe they and oonki baton ka maza le rahe they……………..

Anji: "hei riddhzi....…tu to aur bhi beautiful ho gayi hai...….kya kiya tha arman ne jo meri bahan itni khoobsoorat deekh rahi hai………..

riddhima sharmaker kuch nahi bolti...........

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Meant for each other

Meant for each other.

Hey guys, I have come up with a new FF focusing on AR..
This is the continuation of DMG when AR was still together and the entire gang INCLUDING SAPNA AND AMIT was there.
all the characters are the same as dmg..
hope you all enjoy it..!!

please feel free to comment. (-:

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Dill Mill Gayye July 20 Episode

Serial: Dil Mil Gaye (Dill Mill Gayye)
Channel : Star One

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Part 16: Torn Between Two

Heyy guys..thanks looadzzz for the comments..!! :D:D...Part 16 up for you..hope u enjoy it..!!


“aaj se…tum dono ke saath…mera aashirwaad hamesha hai.” He smiled. He had finally realised no one could love his daughter more than Armaan could. Everyone in the room was stunned to hear that. Padma started crying out of happiness, and Riddhima finally hugged her father when she managed to co-ordinate again. Anjali hugged Atul, and Dadi smiled, proud of her son. Armaan then hugged Shashank as well, who was now hugging both Armaan and Riddhima. Their hands met behind Shashank’s back, proving their bond to be stronger, now that it was supported by her father.

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Part 17: Socha na tha

PRECAP****
Arm - (he puts Riddhima down onto the bed lightly. He sets the cushion and pulls up a blanket. He steps back down off the bed to get off of it)
Rid - ARMAAAAAN!!! Crocodiles tumhe khaleingey! They're gonna eat you! Vapes aaaao!
She says pulling him by his hand to sit him back on her bed. He loses his balance and falls on the bed on his elbow with his face right on top of hers and his body parallel to hers...
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Part 7: Love Birds

FIRST OF ALL THANKS MANDIRA,VAISHALI,ADITI,SAIRA,POOJA,PUNAM(plz sry mat kaho I understand) and all the silent readers for your comments.
Secondly,very sry for late and short update plz I am very busy these days so hardly I take time to read these ffs.So guys plz bear me for this short update I promise will update a long part very soon ,maybe tommorow if I get time.
PART-7

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Monday, July 19

Dill Mill Gayye July 19 Episode

Serial: Dil Mil Gaye (Dill Mill Gayye)
Channel : Star One

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Part 13 - The date!: Life out of control - AR fanfiction

Thanks loadz for the comments guys!! Part 13 up for u!!

Recap: Basket ball match...some Ar moments..Anjali kind of protective..RIddhima has to go on a date with Armaan.

Part 13

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Part 5 - 6: Love Story

Hey guys i really appreciate all the comments i got and i really hope u like this part as well. Sorry i am a little late in updating. These parts r a little boring but i will make the next ones much better.

Part 5

It is near the time when there college is about to end.

Sanjana and Riddhima enter the college but dont see Armaan and Aditya.

Sanj: where r they
Rid: i dont know.
Sanj: maybe they r late
Ri: no cause adi left b4 i woke up.
Sanj: hmmmm lets check their lockers.

they open armaan and aditya’s locker to see a race of death flyer fall on the floor.
they both r shocked and run to their car. they rush to the track to see armaan and aditya chatting. they walk up to them and the boys r shocked seeing them there.

Ri: so u guys didn’t even bother to tell us about this.
Ad: princess it’s not like that.
San: save it Adi we didn’t expect this from you guys.
Ar: relax guys its just a race.
Ri: oh really its just a race.
Sanj: fine then we will also race.
Ad: no u guys wont.
Rid: no adi sanj is right if u guys can play with ur lives than so can we.

and the girls walk away to sign in for the race.

Ad: oh god i hope they will be alright
Ar: lets just hope for the best.

they all go to the starting line and start the race.

Armaan is leading follow by ridz and adi. but the girls increase the speed to 180 and pass armaan. they cross the finish line but they can’t stop. there breaks have failed. Ridz doesn’t know what to do so she pushes sanjana out of the car and then the car itself slides to the side and crashes into the tree. Riddhima falls out unconscious.

All (yell): RIDDHIMA

they rush her to the hospital and she is taken to the O.T.

Adi: this is all my fault. If i hadn’t gone to that race then she wouldn’t have come either.
Ar: no this is both our faults.

After 3 hours the O.T light goes off and Dr. Nikkita walks out.

Adi: doctor how is my sister
Ni: we almost lost her but she is a fighter.
Sanj: can we meet her.
Ni: yes y not

the 3 walk in and see riddhima lying on the bed with a bandage around her head.

Adi: ridz r u okay
Ri: (no response)
Ar: basket r u ok
Ri: (again no response)
San: Riddhima how r u feeling??
Ri: i am feeling fine just perfect
Adi: princess we r sorry
Rid: y r u sorry......its not like u did this to me i mean who was i to come between ur fun
Ar: basket plz
Ri: what plz armaan........u guys dont even bother to tell me about ur race.....that just shows how much u guys care about me. (having tears in her eyes)
Sanj: riddhima i know what they did was wrong and i bet they r really sorry to
Adi: plz forgive us princess (he to on the verge of tears)
Ar: plz basket
Rid: will u ever do this again
Adi: no i wont cause u r more important to me than a stupid race
Ar: yeah adi is right will u forgive us
Rid: when was i even mad at u
and with out they all start laughing.

IT IS NOW THERE VACATION TIME (they get a month off)

Ar: guys this is really boring we should go somewhere
Adi: i agree but where
Rid: y dont we go to Goa
Sanj: thats an awesome idea
Adi: yeah
Ar: ok so now its final....so i will book tickets
and with that armaan leaves

Rid: i can’t wait
Sanj: me neither

Armaan comes back: well our flight is in 2 days so lets start packing

They all finish their packing and are waiting for the flight.

Part 6

They reach Goa and go to their resort.

(Here is the link to their resort pictures)

http://www.gogoa.com/Hotel-leela-gallery.html#Leela-Goa-Image-Gallery

Ri: wow armaan i am impressed
Ar: well u know whatever i do is always good
R,S,Ad: YEAH RIGHT
San:well lets go in to our rooms i am too tired
Adi: yeah so am i

they go to their rooms to rest. At around 6 in the evening they decide to go in the swimming pool to relax. Adi and Sanjana leave and armaan is waiting for riddhima (for almost 15 minutes now).

Ar: (yelling) basket hurry up!!!!!
Ri: i am coming relax yaar
Ar: (imitating her) relax yaar.....now riddhima if u dont open the door i will break it down and i mean it. I m counting till 3. 1....2.........and 3.

He runs towards the door but at that moment riddhima opens it and armaan falls on her. they have an eye-lock for what seems like forever. both not wanting to look away. Armaan came closer to her and pushed a strand of hair behind her ear. But at that moment he realized what he was doing. He mischievously bent down and she closed her eyes. he whispered in her ear

Ar: madam do u want to go now or do u wan to stay like this forever.
She blushed and got up but armaan became mesmerized by looking at her and that too blushing. She waved her hand in front of his eyes.

Ri: lets go
Ar: (comes back to reality) ok

Ridz walks out.

Ar: what is happening to me???
He smiles and follows her.

They reach the pool to see aditya and sanjana having an eye-lock.

A, R: ahem ahem
but aditya and sanjana don’t break their eye-lock
Ar: (hits adi on the arm) oye hoye
Adi and sanjana break their eye-lock and start blushing. Armaan and Riddhima start laughing.

Adi: guys stop laughing already and lets go and sit down.

they all sit down and start chatting

Arm:yaar this is boring lets go swimming
All: ok

after their swimming was over they decided to leave as it was getting late and they were hungry. they were walking back when riddhima stopped as she felt dizzy.

Adi: ridz r u ok
Ri: yeah yeah am fine

they start walking but then ridhima feels dizzy again and this time she looses balance causing her to fall in the water. she starts drowning. Armaan turns around and sees riddhima. he jumps in the water and catches hold oh her and brings her to the edge. Aditya helps her sit up.

Adi: ridz what happened
R: nothing i just got a little dizzy.
Ar: well have u eaten anything today
R: (looks down and doesn’t give a response)
Adi: ridz how could u be so careless. u need to take care of urself.
R: no i dont because i no that u will never let anything happen to me.
Adi: smiles and says dont try to change the topic.
Sanj: yeah u r going to eat food right now.

They go to the restaurant near the beach and eat (they were really just stuffing riddhima’s mouth with food).

Rid: guys stop it i am full and i feel like an balloon right now because u guys made me eat so much.
Adi: well this is the price u pay for being careless.
R: armaan
A: yeah
R: thanks
Ar: for what
R: for saving me while i was drowning
Ar: riddhima dosti main no sorry and no thank u
Riddhima smiled
A: but riddhima because of u my arms still hurt
R: why
A: madam lifting such a heavy person out of the water is not easy.....my poor arms.....
R: armaan what did u say u think i’m heavy.
A: yeah of course
R: armaan am not gonna leave u
Ar: u have to catch me first

(adi and sanjana left knowing that their bickering will never end)

Riddhima is running after armaan but she trips on a rock and is about to fall when she feels a pair of strong arms encircling her waist. She opens her eyes to find armaan looking at her. She gets lost in his blue eyes and he gets lost in her jet black eyes. The have another eye-lock. Suddenly it starts raining. they were so lost in each other. there was a huge lightning sound and riddhima grabbed armaan’s shirt and pulled him closer. They were only a few inches apart. they were coming closer but armaan came out of the mesmerization and kissed her forehead. they both looked at each other and smiled and ridz started blushing knowing that this was the start of a whole new relationship.

Precap: more moments in Goa along with some AR moments and some confessions.

hey guys i am sorry i no these parts were very boring but i am going to write even better ones next time. so plz bare with me on these ones.

Replies:

crazy4hillary: thanks for ur comment and i agree.......i too liked it when the girls started hitting the boys.

Sanaa: thank u sooooo much for ur comment. I found it kind of funny when u told me about what u did with ur friends. nice prank!!1 and don’t worry AR will fall in love. Anyway plz keep commenting.

kshiti: thanks for commenting and i am glad u liked the part. I hope u will like this one too. btw how did ur exam go......i hope u did well.

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Loads of Love
Saira

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Part 12: Dostana

Dostana
by keddie

PART:12
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@@Sanjeevani-basketball court@@
Karan and Shweta are the 1st ones to get there and they wait for the others.

Shw:Kab ayenge sab?
Ka:Main to pehle hi keh raha tha mujhe thodi der aur sone do par nai!
Shw:Kya karan!..dekho hum poore time par aye hain.
Ka:lekin baaki sab to late haina!wese Shweta aj tum kuch zada hi jaldi men lag rahi thi...kisi bhi party ya picnic ki isse pehle to tumhe kabhi itni jaldi nai thi?evrythng okay?
Shw:(hesitant)hhan han..sab..sab theek hai..wo bas aise hi..wo actually Amit...i i mean sanjeevani ke friends ke sath humari pehli picnic haina..isiliye thoda excited thi.
Ka:(catching her mistake)Amit han?
Shw:Huh kya?
Ka:Gotcha!..to batao..tumhari usse koi aur baat hui?..tum uski taraf kafi attracted lag rahi thi..wht hapend?
Shw:Nai to..pagal hogaye ho kya?
Ka:Nops..main nai..tum!..u knw wht...tumhare acanak behaviour changes se i can tell 1 thng...u hav a crush on AMIT!(very confidently)
Shw:Crush?..no ways..i love...(mistakingly)
KA:(catching her again)ahan!...to ye baat hai...!u love Amit!er..let me guess..just like u loved...Rohan...sanjay....sid...sunil..Akash..and who was tht tall one?...ahan...Rohit!
Shw:Stop it karan!wo sab to...aise hi...u knw...''teenage attraction is never love''!
Ka:Oho ho..to u relle think this time it IS actually love?
Shw:Yes!
Ka:Gud gud!to phir?
Shw:Phir?
Ka:Wo tumse pyar karta hai?
Shw:(blushing)Karan..actually wo..
Ka:Kya hua?(worried)
Shw:Usne..kal mujhe propose kia.
Ka:WHT?propose?...as in..marriage?
Shw:Nai nai..not marriage...love proposal.
Ka:Oh..ok...(sudenly feeling happy.gives his friend a side-hug)Im very happy 4 u baby!
Shw:Karan..sorry yar..main tumhe batane hi waali thi...
Ka:Its ok yar..tum khush ho?
Shw:buht!
Ka:Bas thts whts important!(thotfuly and emotionaly)chalo..atleast ab tumhe meri zaroorat nai padegi..ab tum bhi apni dunya men khush rahogi...apne Amit ke sath..Aur phir kuch time baad shaadi karke chali jaogi..mujhe chod kar..but tum meri fikar mat karna ok..i wont mind..aur wese bhi mere sath to ye pehle bhi ho chuka hai..so i'l be f9!
Shw:Shut up Karan!tum kuch zada hi soch rahe ho..1stly ke main 'kuch time' main shaadi nai kar rahi hoon..abhi buht time hai...2ndly ke jo pehle hua wo dobara kabhi nai hoga..!
Ka:Pakka?
Shw:Pakka!..mene to pehle hi Amit se kehdia..ke meri life men mere bestfriend karan se zada koi bhi important nai to khabardar jo tumne kabhi bhi uske khilaaf ek lafz bhi kaha to!
Ka:Sach?
Shw:Much!and yhea..3rdly!..(affectionately smiling)3rdly mujhe tumhari zaroorat hamesha rahegi karan.
Ka:ohohoho...matlab marte dum tak mere gale se nai niklogi?
Shw:(naughtily)Kabhi nai(jumps on his back and hugs him)

''Ahem ahem...guys!''

Both Karan and Shweta now notice tht evryone else was alredy here and were seeing all this 4 quite sumtym now.

Ka:Hey!tum log kab aye?
Suk:Bas kuch tym pehle...jab tum dono kafi interesting baaten kar rahe the.
Shw:(gasps)Iiinteresting?
Pan:Hey Shweta..ye mene kya suna?...tum aur Amit?
Amit:Han to?
Pan:Han to kya?achi baat hai..iss baat ki to treat chahiye!
Sun:Han ofcourse!
Ka:Chalo guys ab nikalte hain..ok?
Jen:han han chalo...
Ka:(cumin to jenifer)After u ma lady!

@@Picnic spot@@
Pan:Hey..swimming pool...
Sun:Wana hav a swim guys?
Ka:Hey wht abt a race?
Suk:Race?
Ka:Yups..1st one to reach the other end wins.
Sh:Boooorriiiinnngggg!!loser...tumhe itna simple challenge hi mila tha...bachon wala!
Ka:yar kya karoon ye challenge specially tumhare liye tha..tumhare level ke hisaab se tha..
Sh:Karan dekho main yahan par fight karne nai ai hoon ok?
May:Wese yar this pool is pretty long..a race will do gud!
Sh:Well thn u babies go ahead..i'l check out sumthng else.

Only jenifer,among the gals agree to the race all the other gals dont show interest and get to other stuff.Sunaina just lays down warming up in the sun,Drushti starts munching sum chips and having a cold drink,Sukriti listening to her MP 4 rocking on her swing tht she hung over a tree And shilpa just sits near sunaina watching their race.

Jen:Er..guys can u wait..i'l change and be back in a moment!
Guys:Sure!

She changes into her swimming costume and returns in sumtym.As soon as she gets back all the boys completely 4get the race,staring at her like idiots.completely lost!

Jen:Im ready guys!
Boys:..............
Jen:Helloo...guys?
Boys:.............
Jen:Helo-o..(waving her hand in the air)(finally geting angry)GUYS!!
Boys:Huh?..han..?
Jen:Race?
Ka:Oh..er..yhea sure...hehe...race!

They start up and Jenifer swims gracefully and reaches the end point in sumtym.As soon as she reaches there she shouts in excitement..

Jen:I WON!!!!!

She turns around to see tht no one among the boys had evn moved an inch frm the starting point,and were staring at her just like before.She gets irritated and splashes the water hard enuf tht it can reach upto them and hit their faces.

Jen:(frustrated)Ah!u guys are soooo disgusting!!(angrily gets outa the water)
Sun:Huh..isiliye to we gals dint go wid thm!
Jen:They'r just...just...so irritating..really!
Dru:Oye chod na..tu unki waja se kyun mood off kar rahi hai...ye le cold drink pee.(handing a can of pepsi to her)
Jen:Yhea..true!(sighs)
Sh:Guys sab log yahan par kyun baith gaye ho..get up yar...lets check out this place..
Amit:Relax babes chalte haina thodi der main..
Dru:Han yar afterall abhi to aye hain..aj to yahan humen pura din bitana hai..
Ka:Tum ek kaam karo..tum na nursery rhymes pardho..just to check bachpan ki poems tumhe abhi yaad hain ya nai...ok?baby baby..yes mama..(gigles)
Sh:Humph!Hey suks!
Suk:Hmm?
Sh:Lets play..Amina super sina!
Suk:Wht?abhi?(feeling shy)
Sh:Du-uh..abhi!
Suk:Lekin yar..ye college ke starting year ki game tumhe abhi kahan se yaad ayi?
Sh:Woh tumhe abhi pata chal jayega..

They start up..claping hands and singing the song of the game..(u see little gals playing it in skul mostly)

Sh/Suks:Amina super sina...lazy boys...

Suks sudenly stops singing coz now she understands why shilpa had asked 4 it..while shilpa keeps looking at karan while singing..

Sh:Lazy boys...active gals...girls go to college to get sum knowledge..boys go to skool to be a fool...
Ka:(Interrupting)Coz gals are a herd of nerds and boys are cool!
Sun:Oh shut up karan.
Pan:Yar plz han..hum picnic manane aye hain so lets just not fight ok?
Sh/Ka/Sun:Hmph!

Dru:Oye buht hogya chalo ab..shilpa theek kehrahi hai..lets go check out this place..
Sh:Shilpa hamesha theek hi khti hai..
Ka:Oh yhea?
Sh:Yo!
Ka:Im gona show u today..u just wait and watch.
Sh:We shall see!
Ka:Yes we shall!

They rome around and check out the place here and their suddenly getting into a very friendly environment.while they walk.punching and pushing each other.Jumping and dancing.Shweta gives her hand to Amit,he twirls her around she giggles.Karan takes out a basket ball outa his shoulder bag and starts bouncing it thn sudenly he starts throwing it to others who catch it and throw back.

Ka:Hey shilpa catch!(he throws it whn she's nt evn redy to catch)
She moves away and the ball passes her and karan runs to get it back saying ''wht a spoil-sport'' on getting it back he throws it frm the back and hits Shilpa's head.she gets angry and punches him and they start fighting actually hitting each other.No one stops them as they seem to be enjoying it and soon they start gigling along wid it and hit each other hi-5s the others look at them wid smiling faces.Thy keep on walking.

Na… nan nan na na na
Nan nan na na na
Nan nan na naaaa…
Naa… nan nan na na na
Nan nan na na na
Nan nan na naaaa…
Yaaro jee bhar ke jee le pal
Lagta hai aaj kal
Daur apna aayega
Yaaro jo khud pe ho yakeen
Toh zindagi haseen
Tujhe kal bulayega
Yaaro jee bhar ke jee le pal
Lagta hai aaj kal
Daur apna aayega
Yaaro jo khud pe ho yakeen
Toh zindagi haseen
Tujhe kal bulayega
(Hai junoon oooooonnnnn
Hai junoon sa jeene mein
(Hai junoon sa jeene mein)
Hai junoon oooooonnnnn
Hai junoon sa seene mein ) – 2
Na… nan nan na na na
Nan nan na na na
Nan nan na naaaa…
Kahin jaise koi dhun baje
Raahon mein dekho hai manzil saje saare
Hum hi hum jahan mein har jagah
Sapne Sajane ki humko mili vajeh
Kahin (kahin) jaise koi (koi) dhun baje (hoo..)
Raahon mein dekho hai manzil saje saare
Hum hi (hum hi) hum jahan mein (harrr) jagah
Sapne Sajane ki humko mili vajeh
Yeh agar jo sach nahi
To sach bhala hai kya
Yaaron !!!!
Apne hisab se
Dil ki kitab pe
Kuch to naya likho
Yaaron !
Anjano ki fikar
Na karti yeh umar
Phir kyun bhala daroo
Hai junoon oooooonnnnn
Hai junoon sa jeene mein
(Hai junoon sa jeene mein)
Hai junoon oooooonnnnn
Hai junoon sa seene mein
Hai junoon oooooonnnnn
Hai junoon oooooonnnnn
Kabhi jo milenge raaste
Pal mein hi chamkegi hasi purani toh
Kaho kya kahoge phir hamey
Kaise chupaoge nami yeh palko ki
Kabhi (kabhi) jo milenge (milenge) raaste
Pal mein hi chamkegi hasi purani toh
Kaho (kaho) kya kahoge (phirrr) hamey
Kaise chupaoge nami yeh palko ki
Yeh bata hai kya hua
Hua hai kyon bataaa….
Yaroon !!
Jee bhar ke jee le pal
Lagta hai aaj kal
Daur apna aayega
Yaaro jo khud pe ho yakeen
Toh zindagi haseen
Tujhe kal bulayega
Yaaro Jo khud pe ho yakeen
Toh zindagi haseen
Tujhe kal bulayega
(Hai junoon oooooonnnnn
Hai junoon sa jeene mein
(Hai junoon sa jeene mein)
Hai junoon oooooonnnnn
Hai junoon sa seene mein ) – 2
Hai junoonn….


They see an ice cream parlor.

Dru:Hey guys icecream?
Jen:Sure!
Pan:Strawberry!
Sh:chocolate!
Suk:Butterscotch!

Soon all of them have their ice cream cones in their hands.They find sumthing else tht attracts them.

Sun:Gals look...merry-go-round!
Amit:Hey boys...motorbikes!
Actually the gals see the ferris wheel and the Guys see a race track just next to it.
May:Race?
Ka:U said it man!

So the guys go 4 the race and the gals to the ferris wheel.

Ferris wheel:
Dru:Thts the best part...we can see the whole city frm up here!
Jen:Exactly..its soo cool!
Sun:Well i feel like conquering it one day!
Suk:Hey gals...photographs?
Jen:Cool!

Sukriti takes out her camera and they snap sum cool pix wid gorgeous and hotty posses.Shilpa keeps looking down towards the guys and eating banana at the same time.She naughtily throws the banana peel at karan who is too engrossed in his race.

Race track:
Karan is ahead of evry1.He suddenly gets surprised seeing the banana peel tht came frm sumwhr in the sky to his lap.He takes it and throws it away.Then he notices tht Amit overtook him and went ahead.He tries harder to overtake him.Just thn sum orange peels fall on him.Confused,he looks up giving a chance 2 Mayank who overtakes him and goes ahead.He tries to concentrate more on the race whn another banana peel lands on his head.He looks up again in frustration and notices tht these peels whr cumin frm the ferris wheel.Sum dry-fruit peels raining on him make him notice this.

Ka:Kaun hai bay?(shouts)
Pan:Main hoon bay...hehe tata!(overtakes him and gets away)
Ka:Shit!!

Drives faster.

Ferris wheel:
Sh:hahaha....hahaha...
Sun:Shilpa u ok?
Suk:Shilpa kya hua tum kabse itna huns kyun rahi ho?
Sh:Hey..aur koi kuch fruits khayega kua?
Jen:No thanks we'r done here..!
Dru:Hey main loongi na...
Sh:Here!(handing her a banana)Gimme the peel..
Dru:Oye tu peels kyun ikhta kar rahi hai?
Sh:hehehe..baad men batati hoon..jaldi do..(takes it..aims...and throws it...direct hit!!)hahahaha!aur do aur do...

Race track:
Karan is behind evry1 and is HELL confused.Who the hell is doing this..peel raining?
A few more dryfruits,full fruits nt the peels this tym hit him.and he loses the race.he hits his hand hard on his bike!
Amit:Hey champion...look who's the winner now!
Ka:Yhea rite!congo..gud 4 u!
Amit grins!
May:Now lets go guys..dekhte hain ladkiyan kahan hain..

The gals join them as soon as they go outa the track.All the gals keep looking in amazement at Shilpa who keeps laughing uncontrollably.

May:Isey kya hua?
Suk:Pata nai kabse hunsi jarahi hai.

Shilpa tries a bit to control her laughter but thn..she looks at Karan...

Ka:Pagal ho gai hai..

Seeing his disgusted face she starts up,all over again!

Sh:(pointing at Karan)Hahahaaahaha.....
Sun:Here we go again!
Ka:(Too frustrated to bear her laughter)can u shut up...
Sh:HAhahaha...tum race haar gaye na?hehehe
Ka:?Tumhe kaise pata...?
Sh:hehehehaha...kyunki tum ho hi loser...(now stops laughing)
Ka:Acha?
Sh:Han!
Ka:4get it..mujhe to tumhare mu hi nai lagna!
Sh:(chuckles)sudenly her eyes fall on sumthng...(gasps)haww...!!(wide eyes)
Ka:Kya hua?
Suk:Kya hua Shilpa?
Sh:hey guys...look!..ROLLER COASTER!
Ka:HAH!bol to aise rahi ho as if thts ur favrite rite!
Sh:It is!!suks...this one's 1 of the biggest i'v seen...chalogi mere saath..?
Ka:Oley ley baby akele nai jasakti na...
Sh:Shut up karan...this is sooo cool...suks chalo na..
Suk:Er..shilpa...this one;s too big..er..i think i'l stay!
Sh:Cumon yar plz..chal na!
Suk:No shilpa plz..im sorry!
Sh:hmph..
Ka:Kyun uske bina nai jasakti kya?coward!
Sh:Main jasakti hoon..i just wanted sum1 to hav fun wid sum1.
Ka:Nice excuse..i bet u cant evn set a foot in tht!
Sh:PLz!!
Ka:Well thn Dare to?
Sh:Done!
Suk:Guys no..this seems dangerous..i dun knw..i hav a bad feeling abt this...
Sh:Shut up suks...i'v been to roller coasters b4..and this 1 seems just tooo exciting..!
Ka:(Equally excited)Well thn wht r v waiting 4?...lets go!!
He takes Shilpa's hand and makes a run 4 it..
Shw:(shouts to him) Karan b careful ok?
Ka:(Shouts back)ok!
Sun:Guys lets go to the other side of the place..we'l tell thm whr v r whn they return..ok?
Dru:Yhea lets go..

Sukriti moves along wid thm,still having a wierd feeling within her.The roller coaster ride begins.Shilpa and Karan are sitting 2gether in the most middle compartment of the huge coaster train.All the riders start screaming in excitement as the ride starts.
Sh:THIS IS SOOO COOOOOOOOOOLLLLL!!!!
Her hair flying to Karan's face.He suddenly closes his eyes 4 a moment and smells her hair whn she looks at him..
Sh:Kya hua? darr gaye?
Ka:Ofcourse nt!

Some where else....

Manager:Arey shamu..tumne ye roller coaster repair kab karwaya?
Shamu:Sarkar chamatkar hogaya...repair karawane ki zaroorat hi nai padi..paise bhi bach gaye..
Manager:ye tum kya keh rahe ho?
Shamu:han sarkar...apko maalum hai jab maine abhi chalakar dekha to chal raha tha...bachche bechare ride ke liye itne utawle horahe the to maine bhi chala dia..kamaal hogya nai?
Manager:(panicked)Arey bewakoof...iske kuch nuts buht loose the..aur track bhi kaccha hogya hai..change karna tha...tujhse mene kaha tha na ke ye out of order hai mat chalana isey..ab jaldi jake unlogon ko nikal wahan se...band kar ye ride..jaldi bhaag..(he runs off)hey bhagwaan!!

Aftr a moment the fuse box starts burning and sets out a fire..

Shamu:(runing towards the manager)sarkaar gazab hogya..
manager:(panicked)kya hua?
shamu:Sarkar main roller coaster band karne hi wala tha lekin fuse box ko aag lag gai..
Manager(confused) lekin ye kaise hua?
Shamu:wo sarkar..nai sarkar bataonga to aap daantoge..
Manager:Abey gadhe nai batayega to aur daantoonga...jaldi bata!!
Shamu:Sarkar wo ek bacche ne mere hath men cold drink thama di..main fuse box ki taraf gaya aur jaise hi handle ghumaya to sari cold drink galati se gir gai aur sparks hue aur phir aag lag gai...main to bhaag aya!
Manager:(starts crying)Hey bhagwaan..najane kis manhoos ghadi men tujhse paala pada mera!!jaake fire brigade bula..roller coaster rok...aag bujha kuch kar...ja jaldi ja!!
Shamu:jee sarkaar!

The riders happen to see the fire a little late whn it started spreading..
Karan and shilpa were far and too high above the ground
Sh:Hey karan..look..wahan par aag lagi hai...
Ka:(shocked)Shilpa...ek baat kahoon?
Sh:Kaho.
Ka:Kahoonga to darogi to nai?
Sh:hah!plz...bolo!
Ka:Wo aag isi track ki end point par lagi hai.
Sh:KYA??!!!(She looks more carefully and sure enuf!)Karan...ab?
Ka:(uncertainly)Relax...
Sh:Wht relax...ye coaster wahin jaraha hai and its WAY TOO FAST!!

And Suddenly the coaster runs off track..The huge coaster train,wid the loudest of noises,Dashes to the ground a few metres from its total area.Destroying evry obstacle in its way.Luckily,it doesn't fall on the whole but just the first 2-3 compartments hit the ground the rest 8-9 stay on the track but sum inclined sum straight,still on the height on the highest track.Karan and shilpa were on the inclined part.The loudness of the shouts and fear of the ppl knew no bounds.

Sh:Karan...u ok?
Ka:Yhea yhea m f9..wht abt u?
Sh:(in a teary voice)yhea im gud!...wht nw?
Ka:Lets wait and see..just do one thng..dont leave the coaster..hang on to it.ok?
Sh:Yhea..alrite!

Both Karan and Shilpa were much braver as compared to the others around.A lot of destruction took place.property plus lives.Many died,many injured and most got scared the hell outa thm.The fire kept spreading and soon many ambulances,police cars and the fire-brigade vans could be seen.Karan and Shilpa and other ppl being on the inclined part had to hold on tight to the coaster in order to prevent frm falling as it was stil on a gr8 height.Sum held to the seats and sum to the Steel side-bars or handles.A few of thm sliped their hands bcoz of nt being able to hold on any longer and fell down straight to the ground wid high intensity shouts and THUD!breaking their legs,arms,head...the whole ground covered wid blood.Shilpa kept looking at those who kept falling frm time to time before they cud be rescued sumhow.She was brave but stil had a heavy heart at the moment.As one of the above seaters fell and landed straight on the head and died on the spot.Shilpa let out a cry and covered her eyes resting her head on Karan's shoulder and only one hand holding onto the steel side-bar.Karan opened his mouth to say sumthng in consolation but nothing came out.Suddenly,Shilpa's hand slipped and she fell.

Sh:KARAAAAAANNNN.......!!!!!

Precap:
Suk:(Crying badly)maine mana kia tha tum logon jaane ke liye...i had tht damn feeling...par tum logon ne nai suna..
Sun:Sukriti...relax yar..ro mat...its no one's fault..ye to kismat men likha tha na.

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loads of love,
keddie :)

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Sunday, July 18

Part 43: The Story of a Prince and a Princess

(MOZAMBIQUE ISLAND----AR'S HONEY MOON)

The Story of a Prince and a Princess


arman –riddhima ko aaj honeymoon per aaye 10 days beet chooke they...… Raat beet rahi thi….deen dhal rahe they…..but oon dono lovers ko ishki khabar tak nahi thi…..pata nahi wey kis dooniya mein khoye they!!….ek dooje ke pyar ki dooniya mein...….ek doosre ke aankho mein...….ek doosre ke bahon mein.....……

Na jaane kitni baaten thi jo khatm hi nahi ho rahi thi....…..kabhi arman kahta aur riddhima soonti to kabhi riddhima kahti aur arman soonta...…..ek doosre ke childhood ki baaten....….jawani ki baaten....….college ki baaten....….baaten karte hi karte dono ko need aa jati....….ek doosre se lipatkar so jaate....…..feer thori der baad need khoolti to khood ko apne pyar ki bahon mein paker mooskoorate....…mano need lagte hi khone ka der sama jata...….ki kahin aankh lag gayi aur koi ooske love koi cheen na le jaye!!!………..

Arman tired ho jata to riddhima ke soft lap mein hi so jata....…..riddhima pyar se ooske black ghane hairs ko sahlati aur sochti...…….kitna khoobsoorat hai ooska arman!.....kya oosne sapne mein bhi aisi khoobsoorati ko pane ko socha tha!...aur ooska dill aur bhi soonder hai…..loving...…caring…...…
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Aur jab riddhima tired ho jati to arman ke chest per apna sir rakhker aankhe band kar leti.... ….aur arman ooske reshmi joolfon ko sambhalte hue sochta...…..oosne kya sapne mein bhi socha tha...….aisi apsara oose milegi!....

Riddhima jab bhi apne bachpan ki baaten karti....…apne papa ke baaren mein jaroor kahti....kish tarah papa oose anji di se bhi jyada pyar karte....kish tarah kahin bhi jate to riddhima ko roj phone karte....ooske bd per gift laate....ye sab soonker arman khoosh hota tha...per bachchon ki tarah ye jaroor kahta....."dekhna mai toomhe itna pyar karoonga ki toom sabka pyar bhool jaogi.....mano arman se jyada riddhima ko pyar karne ka kisi ko haq hi nahi hai.................

Aur arman jab apne bachpan ki baaten kahta...…..kish tarah wah bachpan se hi hostel mein papa-mom ke pyar ke liye tarashta raha....….to riddhima sochti...….dekhna arman mai toomhare saare pyar ki kami poori karoongi..…..itna pyar karoongi ki toom apne bachpan ki karwi yaaden bhool jaoge....….per sharam se kah nahi paati……feer arman kahta….."basket mai apne bachchon ko kabhi bhi hostel mein nahi rakhoonga..…sada apne paas rakhoonga...…to riddhima aur bhi sharma jati…………….

The Story of a Prince and a Princess


Abhi bhi arman riddhima ke lap mein apna sir rakhker apne bachchon ki hi baaten kah raha tha...……aur riddhima barey pyar se ooske baalon ko sahlate hue soon rahi thi…..
Arman : "riddhima..mai bachchon ke saamne kabhi bhi toomse jhagra nahi karoonga……….
Riddhima : "to kya toom saadi ke baad bhi mujhse laroge?
Arman : "haan..kabhi-kabhi…feer mai toomhe manane ke bahane dher saara pyar karoonga…..
Riddhima : "aur agar mai na mani to?
Arman(naughtily) : "to feer mai apni bibi ko tabtak kiss karta rahooga...jab tak wo maan nahi jaye.................
Riddhima : "to feer mujhse jhagra keun karoge?
Arman : "pata hai basket....toom jab naraj hoti ho...to bahoot khoobsoorat lagti ho.....ish liye wo pyara face mai kabhi-kabhi dekhna chahoonga....yaad hai mai kish tarah toomhe tang karta tha?

Riddhima :" hmmm....feer kab hum itne najdik aa gaye..........
Arman : "aur ab kabhi bhi mujhse door mat jana.........to toomhara arman jee nahi payega.........

Riddhima arman ke lips per hath rakhte hue....."ab kabhi aisi baat kahi to mai naraj ho jaoongi..........

Tabhi mobile bajta hai...........
Anjali(mobile per) :" hello riddhzi...kaisi hai?....bari muskil se call laga hai..........
Riddhima : "achchi hoon di….toom aur atul kaise ho?
Anji : "hum bahoot achche hain...….bol kaisi kat rahi hai?kahan-kahan ghoomne gayi?
Riddhima :" di…wo….
Anji :" kya ?? mujhe pata tha....ye arman tujhe kahin nahi le jayega....
Riddhima : "nahi di..aisi baat nahi.....
Arman : "arey anji.. hum honey moon per aaye hain...pahle ek doosre ko to achchi tarah jaan lein……….dooniya ko baad mein janenge……..

Riddhima (arman ke lips per hath rakhte hue): "choop raho na….

Arman (riddhima ke hathon ko choomte hue)…: "ek kaam karo anji…basket ki bhi shopping toom ker lena....….beechara atul!!….
Anji : "ok,rakhti hoon...….mumbai wapus aao feer arman ki khabar loongi ……


‘’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’’

The Story of a Prince and a Princess


Aisa bhi nahi tha ki ye do diwane bahar nahi nikalte they…………..riddhima ko evening scenery bahoot pasand thi……….so dono ooshi time bahar aate…..riddhima beautiful najare dekhker bachchon si khoosh hoti…..aur arman basket ko dekhker…..ooski khooshi se chamakte eyes ko!…….cute hansi ko!…..aur pyar ke rang mein aur bhi doob jata…..oose lagta wo aisi khooshi life ke each and every moments mein apni basket ko de aur basket ko khoosh hota dekh wo nihal hota rahe…..………….

Aaj bhi dono wahin they…………riddhima ki fav.place per....
Riddhima :" kitna khoobsoorat hai……
Arman :" haan……………….
Riddhima : "maine aisa beautiful place apni life mein nahi dekha………….
Arman : "maine bhi………..
Riddhima : "ye sun set moments………amazing!!!
Arman (khoya khoya sa): "ya amazing!…..ye lahrate aanchal! Ye resham si joolfen!ye mooskan!amazing!!!!
Riddhima :" hoon…to ye baat hai…….mai kya kah rahi hoon aur toom bhi na arman……
Arman : "mai bhi to yahi kah raha hoon…………….kya toom kuch aur kah rahi thi?
Riddhima : "jao mai baat nahi karti…………
Arman :" hoon to begum sahiba naaraj hain...........
Riddhima : "mujhse baat mat karo………..
Arman : "kya karoon basket.....toomko paane ke baad mai to khood kho gaya hoon......mujhe ab toomhare siwai kuch dikhta hi nahi............

Song-----

Tumko paya hai to jaise khoya hoon
Kehna chahoon bhi to tumse kya kahon

Tumko paya hai to jaise khoya hoon
Kehna chahoon bhi to tumse kya kahon

Kisi zabaon mein bhi woh lafz hi nahi
Ki jeene mein tum ho kya tumhein mein bata sakun

Main aagar kahoon tumsa haseen
kaynaat mein Nai hai kahin
Tareef yeh bhi to sach hai kuch bhi nahi
Tumko paya hai to jaise khoya hoon......

Shokhiyon mein dooobi yeh aadayein
Chehre se jhalki hui hain
Zulf ki ghani ghani ghatayein
Shaan se dhalki hui hain
Lehrata aachal hai jaise badal
Bhaahon mein bhari hai jaise chandani
Roop ki chandani......

Main agar kahoon yeh dilkashi
Hai nahi kahin na hogi kabhi
Tareef yeh bhi to sach hai kuch bhi nahi
Tumko paya hai to jaise khoya ho..........



The Story of a Prince and a Princess


RIDDHIMA----

Tum hue meherbaan
To hai yeh dastan
hoo Tum hue meherbaan
To hai yeh dastan
Abb tumhara mera ek hai karwaan
tum jahan mein wahan

ARMAN----

Main agar kahoon
Humsafar meri
Apsara ho tum ya koi pari

Tareef yeh bhi to sach hai kuch bhi nahi
Tumko paya hai to jaise khoya hoon..
Kehna chahoon bhi to tumse kya kahon

Kisi zabaon mein bhi woh labaz hi nahi
Ki jeene mein tum ho kya tumhein mein bata sakun

Main aagar kahoon tumsa haseen
kaynaat mein Nai hai kahin
Tareef yeh bhi to sach hai kuch bhi nahi
Tumko paya hai to jaise khoya hoon.....




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The Story of a Prince and a Princess


Riddhima : "arman,kal hume wapus loutna hai...........
Arman : "kahan?..........
Riddhima : "Mumbai……….
Arman : "kya??? Abhi to aaye!!!……….
Riddhima : "janab….aaj poore 20 days ho gaye hume aaye hue…………..

Arman :" choro na basket……..mujhe Mumbai nahi jana……..mai yahin apni basket ke saath life bitana chahta hoon…………
Riddhima : "yahan!!
Arman : "haan………bush apna ek chota sa ghar hoga………2-4 bachche………promise, mai toomhe kuch bhi kaam nahi karne doonga…..mai khana bhi bana sakta hoon ,ghar ke saare kaam mujhe aate hain..aur bachchon ko bhi dekhbhal kar sakta hoon………
Riddhima : "hmmmm….aur mai kya karoongi?
Arman (riddhima ko apni bahon mein lete hue): "toom sirf mujhe pyar karna.........
Riddhima(sadly) : "arman hum feer yahan aayenge?......
Arman:" toomhe yah place pasand aaya……..
Riddhima : "bahoot…………
Arman (riddhima ko kiss karte hue): "jarror aayenge...….aur promise mai apni basket ko her saal aise khoobsoorat place per le jaoonga.....…apni marriage anniversary celebrate karne……….
Riddhima : "I love you arman... …..
Arman : I love you jaanemam ...my jaan…….my life….my shonu…… I love you till the end………..





MASSAGE FOR FRNDS…
HEI FRNDS DEAR KSHITI,POOJA,DEE DEE,ADI SIS,ADITI(MY SHILPA),SWEETY,RELLA ,MY CUTE SIS VAISU ,SAIRA AND AAHANA…AND ALSO SILENT READERS…THANX FOR YOUR WONDERFUL COMMENTS………

AND SOOOOOOOORRY TO AAHANA…YAAR LAST 3 MONTHS MAI ITNA BUSY THI KI POOCHO MAT…BARI MOOSKIL SE APNE FF UD KAR PATI THI….AB TOOMHARA NAAM MAINE APNE DILL MEIN LIKH LIYA HAI…AB KABHI NAHI BHOOLOONGI…PLZ.MAAN JAO AUR MUJHE MAAF KAR DO….LOVE YOU DEAR….

AND SAIRA …EK BAAT BATAO…BACHPAN SE KYA TOOM LOG ONLY SAKKAR(SUGAR) KHAI HO….ITNE MEETHE WORDS KAISE BOLTI HO?...MAI TO TOOMLOGON KI BATON PER HI APNA DILL HAAR BAITHI HOON….LOVE DEAR…..


LOVE YOU ALL
LOVE YOU ALWAYS
PUNAM

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Tanhai

PYAR M DHoKa KHaNE WAAlO K LiYE

Kehti thi wo mujhe ki tere bin jee na paugi yeh saansein tere bin chal na payegi,
m pucchta hun fir kyu aaj zinda hai woh ,
nhi nhi mujhe dukh iss baat ka nhi ki wo zinda hai m khush hun ki woh khush hai,
pr dukh iss baat ka hai ki ussney mujhse woh waadein kyu kiye jinhe woh pura na kr payi,
aur jaati jaati mujhi se keh gyi ki maine uss pyar nhi kiya,
kya pyar ko dikhana zaruri hota hai agr m pyar wo waadein pure na kr pata to kya muh dikhata apne khuda ko,
haan ishq hi mera KHUDA hai aur iski m ibadatt krta hun tu aaj bhi aa k dekh m tujhi se pyar krta hun,
pr tum nhi samjhogi kyuki tumhne mere saath jiye har pal ko ek sapne ki trah nhi jiya aur na kbhi mujhse bewajh pyar kiya,
dukh to hoga tum yeh samjhogi khoya tumne hai maine nhi,
maine to woh khoya jo mera tha hi nhi aur tumhne woh khoya jo tumhara tha kisi aur ka nhi,
aaj fir ek aashiq ki aankho se pani beh gya aur ek pyar adhure ka reh gya,
iss adhure pyar ko m zindgi ki justju manta hun aur iss saath age bdhne ki ksam khata hun,
fir kyu meri aankhe hi mera saath chod jaati hai khud to namm hoti hai aur dil ko bhi rulla jaati hai,
iss rote dil ko kaise samjhau jis k woh sapne dekhti hai wo aab kisi aur ki aankho m basti hai,
aur SAHIL ki zindgi ussi par hsti hai kehti hai tu logo ko pyar sikhata tu to khud pyar m haar gya,
pr usse kon samjhaye wo haara nhi jeeta hai pyar m to hr koi jee leta hai pr yaado m koi koi jeeta hai,
suna hai woh aaj pyar p likhta hai aur bhut sacch likhta hai,
haan zindgi jo usse sikhti hai woh panno pr likh deta hai aur doo pyar krne walo ko mila dene ki iccha rkhta hai,
ussney sabit kr diya ki jo apne sapne pure nhi kr patte wo dusro k sapne pure krte hai aur aise pyar krne wale bhut kamm milte hai

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Part 12: Life out of control - AR fanfiction

Heyy guyss...Part 12 up for you!!!

Recap - AR dance together on Dil kyun yeh mera...Armaan finally realizes he's in love and Riddhima is still left confused!!!

Part 12

Riddhima was in the path lab the next morning, conducting some experiments, while Armaan was sent by Dr Keerti to get some tests done for her patients. Just as Riddhima was about to walk out, he walked in, bumping into her. Feeling herself fall, she closed her eyes and grabbed onto the nearest thing, Armaan’s shirt. Armaan at the same time grabbed her waist quickly before she fell, and pulled her closer to himself. Last night’s memories were still vivid and now he was sure this was love. He observed her face, which even though full of fear, was still beautiful. Finally, he came out of his trance, and smiled mischievously, telling her,
“Basket, aise pakarti rahogi toh phir kaam kaise karenge?”
Her eyes snapped open, and she blushed. Why did she feel so safe in his arms? Why didn’t she ever want to let go? Or not want HIM let go? Why was this happening to her NOW? She opened her mouth to speak but the words were getting stuck at her throat. She straightened her white, fitting kurti over her jeans, made sense of the situation and managed to mumble out,
“sorry, zara dar gayi thi.” To which he replied,
“Kaise dar gayi thi? Aaj se kabhi mat darne. Mere hote huwe tum kabhi zameen par nahin girogi.”
His answer left her shocked. He winked at her and walked forwards sliding his fingers through her long hair in the process. She was astonished at his answer, but more than that, his behaviour! Why was he being so nice all of a sudden? Not that she didn’t like it, but the Armaan she knew would have let her fall, and laughed at her in the process. She walked back to him,
“aaj koi special din hai kya?”
“Nahin toh. Hona chahiye?” he asked her simply.
“Pichle hafte itna irritate kiya. Phir kal bilkul ignore kiya, aur abh achche banne ka natak kar rahe ho? Kuch chahiye kya?”
“Tum” he looked at her passionately. Her head shot up, shock evident on her face. He smiled inwardly, and reformed himself.
“Tum…tumhe kya lagta hai? Kyunki tum itni nikhchidi, nosy aur kharus ho iska matlab sab aise nahin hain. Main hamesha se achcha tha.”
“Haan voh toh dikh raha hai,” she replied her voice heavy with sarcasm.
He stepped closer to her, removing his gloves and dumping them on the table. She started getting nervous at the intimacy, and stepped back slowly. Somehow, the green could not remove themselves from the blue until she bumped against a wall. He could see her breathing get uneven, and smiled at the effect he had on her. She started getting nervous, but could still not pull her eyes away from his. There was something about him that drew her closer to him. He was sure she felt the same way about him, as he did about her. Slowly, he brought his hand up, and removed some of her fringes that came on her face. At his touch, she closed her eyes. He leaned in, and she felt her breath stop. But she wanted him to come closer. Feeling his hot breath on her face, her eyes shut tighter. Then he suddenly leaned past her face and whispered in her ear,
“Kal 8 baje basket ball court. Humari challenge bhoolna mat, aur der mat karna!” and out of instinct, he kissed her forehead, and backed off. As soon as he left, she felt a part of her missing. Blushing, she bit her bottom lip, and looked down. Remembering his closeness to her, she smiled, hit and shook her head lightly. Armaan was watching intently behind the door. Upon seeing her smile, he whispered to himself,
“Hassi toh phassi!” Then he looked up, “I love her!!” and straightened the collar of his blue shirt. “Focus Doctor Armaan. Abhi ke liye kaam pe dhyaan rakh. Phir time for plan number two!”

Next Morning – Basketball court
Riddhima arrived at the basket ball court wearing black tracks and a tight red sleevless t-shirt. Her hair was left open and blowing in the wind. She was late, as usual. Everyone was already here! Wait. What? Everyone was here? She looked in shock.
Armaan spotted her and went to her, not being able to take his eyes off her.
“Itna ghoor kyun rahi ho basket?”
“Sab…yahaan…”
“Kyun sab ke saamne haarne ke liye dar rahi ho?” he taunted her, and bingo, her eyes narrowed.
“Main darti nahin! Aur main haarungi bhi nahin!”
“Toh khelkar dikhao!”

They both went to the middle of the basket ball court still bickering until Abhi, who was the referee got tired of their argument and blew the whistle to make them stop. Armaan then said,
“before we continue, what’s a match without a bet? Kyun Muskaan?”
“Haan,” Muskaan replied. “Waise main jaanti hoon Riddzi hi jeetegi. Kyunki girls can beat boys any time.”
“Aur aap sab Ridzi ko nahin jaante. Voh bohot achcha basket ball khelti thi college main.” Said Sapna.
Rahul sniggered.
“Riddzi khelti THI, lekin Armaan abhi bhi khelta hai.”
“Rahul tumhe meri side leni chahiye! Mujhe laga tum mere dost ho!” Riddhima said, outraged.
“Sorry Ridzi, Main haarne wale ka side nahin leta.” He looked directly at Muskaan, as RIddhima's mouth shot open in horror.
“Chod na Ridzi, aise dost ki tab zaroorat hoti hai jab gadhe ko chalana ho na. Aur ek Bandar ka opinion kya maine rakhta hai?” replied Muskaan her eyes fixed on Rahul, who in turn glared at her.
“Wasie, I agree with Rahul. I’m with Armaan,” piped in Nikki, looking at Armaan. However Armaan was busy staring and observing Riddhima. Upon hearing Nikki’s comments, she rolled her eyes upwards and wondered what’s new. After all, Nikki would do anything to be ‘with’, as she put it, Armaan.
“So bet?” asked Armaan rolling his tongue in mouth as he recognized Riddhima’s reactions and amused himself.
“Fine.” She replied. “Agar main jeetun, toh meri night duties agle hafte tum karoge!” Muskaan and Sapna cheered while Rahul whispered,
“Agar tu haar gaya toh teri neend ko alvida kehdo! Good luck buddy!”
Armaan shushed them then said,
“Aur agar main jeetoon, toh…” and he waited. Everyone looked at him expectantly as he was walking around Riddhima bouncing the ball. He looked at Nikki and winked at her, which did not miss Anjali’s sharp eyes.
“Toh…” he continued. “Riddhima, mere saath…” he paused to increase the suspense. “aaj raat…” and he looked at everyone, who were anticipating for the worst. Riddhima had a disgusted look on her face, and Sapna had her mouth open. “Kya yaar sirf date pe hi bula raha hoon.”

Everyone, except Riddhima, breathed out and chuckled slightly, and Anjali gave a sigh of relief. Only a date, but she remembered the wink and at once became cautious again.
“Main tumhaare saath date pe nahin jaane waali!” Riddhima said slowly, her voice filled with fury.
“Haarne se darti ho toh saaf saaf kehdo!”
“Tumhe kya ek hi line aati hai? ‘Darti ho?’ ‘Dargayi?’,” she imitated him.
“agar tumhe ek hi emotion aata hai toh mujhe tumhe describe karne main ek hi line aayegi na?”
“Tum apne aap ko bohot smart samajte ho?” She pulled herself closer to him, looking daggers into his eyes. Armaan also narrowed his eyes, and smiled while putting himself closer to her.
“Uh uh, correction. Samajta nahin, hoon!” He then pulled away saying, “Aur agar tum dar gayi, toh saaf saaf kehdo kyunki mere paas time nahin hai! I'm a busy man!”
“Main dar nahin rahi! Aur FINE! Shart Manzoor. Lekin mujhe meri shart change karni hai!” he nodded his head, “Agar main jeeti, tum…aaj raat…date pe” she paused as his confused face sunk in, “Lovely JI ko leke jaoge!”

The whole gang burst out laughing, as Armaan’s face turned to shock! Lovely, the plump nurse that fell for everything with 2 legs and masculine features? She had already tracked down and haunted Atul, until Anjali had to finally step in and warn her to stay away from her man! Right now, Rahul, Armaan and Abhi were at her mercy! While Rahul and Abhi were laughing, having the time of their lives imagining Armaan with Lovely, Armaan was clearly horror-struck. But,
“Ridzi, tum yeh bet nahin maan rahi ho,” said Anjali as she thought through everything. “I don’t like the idea of Armaan taking you out. Pata nahin kab ghar pohnchogi, aur…” she looked at Armaan. “Mujhe ispe bharosa nahin hai.”

Armaan closed his eyes. Saaliji! Kissi ne naam theek rakha hai in sab ka. Here he was trying to get the love of his life, and here she was, being an unnecessary hurdle. Aadhi ghar waali aur voh bhi ulta samaj rahi hai. Kisi ko kyun mujhpe bharosa nahin hai? Champ kahan ho tum? He kicked himself mentally as he remembered Atul telling him about an operation he had to conduct. Armaan, kuch kar varna poora plan chopat hojaayega!
“Anjali, main usse baara baje tak ghar pohchaunga.” Said Armaan. Riddhima narrowed her eyes. He was talking as though he had won the match already.
“AGAR tum match jeeto toh!” she said.

Anjali thought back. When Atul kept talking about Armaan, he sounded like a guy with no bad intentions. But what did that wink with Nikki mean? Maybe it didn’t mean anything.
“Dekhte hain kaun haarta hai!” she said, and sat down to watch the match.

The match started. Abhi threw the ball in the air and both jumped. Armaan caught the ball, and held it.
“Kya basket? Purposley haarne ka iraada hai kya?”
“Tumhe joh sochna hai voh sochlo!” she relpied, snatching the ball from him, dribbling towards the hoop and scoring.
“Kya kehrahe the?” she asked, smiling and showing him a thumbs down.
After a while, both were playing hard and score was even, 10 – 10.

Humse hassi humse khushi,
Hai humise zindagi,
Taare hum zameen par le aaye,
Hum laaye hain roshni.

Dill jahaan, dost wahaan,
Aisa manzar aur kahaan?
(Hum toh chaley they dost banke,
Jaane kahan Dill Mill Gayye) x2

Riddhima was bouncing the ball and blocking Armaan. She flicked her hair to the other side, to get a better view of the goal, and in the process, Armaan was left mesmerised as her hair brushed over his face. He stopped marking her, which left a clear space for her to score.

Riddhima dribbling, was looking down when she suddenly bumped into Armaan. His broad chest and shoulders nearly knocked her down however, just in time he stopped her from falling. She felt someone’s strong arms encircle her waist, and immediately felt safer. In the process, he suddenly took the ball and steered away, leaving her dumbfounded, as he shot without a defender.

Armaan saw that he had 2 minutes left, and the score was even, 14 all. He had to win the match at any cost, else one, his plan would fail, and two, he would have to take Lovely ji out for dinner and the thought itself was far from entertaining! Riddhima, who had the ball was looking at him, taunting him. He smiled and winked at her. She lost focus, which was enough for Armaan to snatch the ball from her. Smiling, he headed for the hoop, shot, and Abhi blew the whistle announcing time was up and that Armaan won. Riddhima was shocked. She could not even say he cheated, because technically, he didn’t! Now she would have to go on a date with him! She closed her eyes in horror. What did he have planned for her?

Anjali dragged Armaan to the side and asked him
“Yeh sab kya hai?”
“Kya?” Asked Armaan innocently.
“Yeh date!” she said, narrowing her eyes. Wow, thought Armaan. Kitne alag hai. Par dono ke naak pe gussa hamesha rehta hai! Ouf, ek ko patana hoga, toh doosri ka bhi dil jeetna hoga!
“Voh, sirf…” and he whispered in her ear.
She finally smiled at him, and said,
“Atul theek keh raha hai! Tum bure insaan nahin ho. Lekin baara baje tak voh ghar pe hona chahiye. Aur aaj raat voh humaare ghar hai. Toh baara baje main ghar pe phone karungi, aur agar usne phone nahin uthaya, toh kal tumhaari kher nahin! Aaj raat meri night duty hai.” At that point her pager beeped, and she had to go for an emergency.

Armaan walked over to Riddhima. Leaning forwards, he whispered in her ear, aaj raat ke liye tayaar ho jao. And brushing his lips against her cheek, he left her alone in the middle of the court with her thoughts. She couldn’t help but feel nervous around him. What attracted her to him? Her heart was still beating slightly fast after the small peck on her cheek. Somehow, she wanted to hold him, and never let go. She wanted to be in his arms, and feel safe there. And right now, why didn’t she mind that she had just lost a game against someone? But more than that, why didn’t it bother her that she had to go on date with him tonight? What if he did something? But she trusted him that much atleast. What if he had more pranks up his sleeve? Whatever the case, she would get back in time. For now, unknowingly, she enjoyed the essence he left her with, as she felt her cheeks turn red.

Pre-cap: The date!!!

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Part 2: Jab Koi Mile

Sorry gyuss for late post,but its not my fault.My google is late.So i'am starting once again this.

Bil - anaya jaldi karo ladke wale aate hi hoge.(actually ye log abhi aur niki ki shaddi ki bat kar rahe hai.niki delhi se hai iss lyiee.)
ana - aa rahi ho.mai der nahi kar rahi ho samjhe.
Bil - to kay mai der kar raha ho.aur waise bhi aaj dhulha aur dhulhan nahi aa rahe,srif unke brother&sister,aur kuch dost aa rahe hai.
Ana - lagta hai wo log aa gaye.
Sid - ji mai dr.siddhant modi ho aur ye meri bhaen hai dr.suvarna modi dr.abhimanyu mere bhai hai,ye mere dost hai dr.yuvraj, dr.naina,dr.jetendra,dr.raj,dr.tamana,jigi(anaya un sabki aarti utar ti hai,tabhi peeche se riddima aati hai,anaya uski aarti utar ti hai........)
rid - namast uncle aunty,kasie hai app log.(aur unke pair chuuti hai aur phir wo jake dadi,chacha,chachi,bua,phua ke pair chutti hai).
rid - ji mai dr.riddhima ho,mai dhulha aur dhulhan mera matlab hai mai abhi aur niki ki dost ho wo log kuch din ke baad aaenge.
ana - ham thik hai beta.
Bil - beta,aaj tumhe yaha dekh ke bhoot aacha lag raha hai.jo kuch bhi hwa hai.....hame too laga ki......
Rid - uncle plz...mujhe iss bare mai kuch nahi kehna.plz........uncle.
Bil - i understand beta,ok.
Rid - uncle wo yaha hai kay................
Bil - koun beta yaha to ham hi sab hai tum kiski baat kar rahi ho.
Rid - uncle...mai armaan ki baat kar rahi ho.wo yaha hai kay.
Ana - riddhima beta arman yaha kasie aa sakta hai wo too..........
Rid - nahi uncle,aunty wo yahi hai mai usse mahshos kar sakti ho.asie lag raha ki aagar mai haath badhao too mai usse chu sakti ho.

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