Part 3 - 4: Love Story

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Part 3

The song ended and the four friends shared a group hug.

Then Dr. Keerti their anatomy teacher (and a senior doctor in sanjeevani) walked in with an angry look on her face.

DR(doctor Keerti): students what’s going on here.
Ar: sorry doctor keerti but we were just having some fun.
DK: (keerti looked at him with an angry glare) well then i guess u would have time to do an extra assignment because i now see that u have a lot of free time.
Ar: but doctor keerti
DK: (cutting in between) no buts an since this was the work of ll four of u i want u all to do a group assignment on the anatomy of the human body (sorry guys couldn’t think of anything) and that to by tomorrow morning.
Ar: yes DK(and keerti walks away)

Ar: shit yaar now we r stuck doing this stupid assignment and that to because of this basket.
Ri: oh hello u were the one who gave me this dare i just made it a little more interesting.
Ar: oh shut up basket
Ri: why should I (and with that they start their bickering)
Adi: oh will both of u just be quiet.......now we have to think of what to do next. i mean we have to finish this assignment by tomorrow.
Ar: no worries we will just go to my house and finish it there and then u guys can just stay over. (guys i just want to clear some things out okay so sanjana adi and ridzi live together because they r childhood friends and sanjana’s parents live in America and for Adi and Ridzi’s parents their parents died a year ago but they left them a huge inheritance as they were had one of the biggest business empires in india) (and for armaan his mom died when he was only 5 but his dad lives in Delhi) (sorry if i bored u i just needed to clear this up)

Adi: yeah that wont be a problem at all.
Sanj: okay armaan so we will be at ur house by 7 okay
Ar: no problem but for now lets go to class or else that Hitler will come again.

they all laugh and leave.

7 o’clock at Armaan’s House

Adi, Sanj and Ridz reach armaan’s house.

Armaan: hi guys
All: hi
Sanj: okay so lets get started

The four start working on the assignment but in the middle armaan gets bored so he pulls aditya out.

Adi: armaan what r u doing
Arm: yaar adi don’t be so boring yaar tell me aren’t u getting bored
Adi: actually i am
Arm: so how about we have some fun
Adi: Armaan what do u have in mind

Armaan whispers something in Adi’s ear and then they hi five each other.

Precap: What does Armaan have in mind and what r they going to do next.


Part 4

Ridzi and Sanjana r half way done with the project but suddenly the lights go out and they hear a loud crashing sound. Both the girls scream and run to the hall. There they see two strange figures coming towards them and the girls start to run but the guys catch them and they start screaming even louder. Finally Sanjana and Riddhima calm down and release themselves and start beating the people that were holding them. Then they hear a voice.

Ar: guys it’s us.....leave us.........ouch
Adi: guys it’s me, adi and armaan

Ridzi and Sanjana r surprised at first but then they become even angrier and start beating the boys agin.

Ar: guys what r u doing
Adi: y r u hitting us
Rid: r u guys crazy how could u scare us like that
Arm: well it wasn’t that hard too
Adi and Armaan laugh and hi five each other
Rid: Adi i can expect this from this armaan but not u
Adi: i am sorry princess but it was just to good of a prank.
Sanj: oh really now u have to pay the price
Ridz: oh i agree well now we r not gonna talk to u and by the way we did our part of the project now u guys have to do ur part and till then we r going to make food and eat.
Adi: can’t we have any food
Sanj: of course u will get some to and trust me this is going to be an unforgettable meal.

Adi and Armaan r confused but they just turn towards armaan’s room and start working on the project.

Riddhima and Sanjana:

Rid: well Sanj now we really do have to give them an unforgettable meal.
they both laugh and walk towards the kitchen.

They are in the kitchen and our making dinner but there are also planning their revenge.

The both call the boys down for dinner.

(the girls made aloo ke paratha (with extra chillies), Dhai (with extra sugar), Kheer (with extra salt))

The boys were so hungry that they just started grabbing all the food and stuffing their plates while the girls were waiting for their reaction. the boys were took a bite of the paratha and realized that it was too spicy so they ate some dhai but the dhai was to sweet and finally they tried the kheer but it was to salty. The girls just cracked up after seeing the boys changing expressions. The boys looked at them with devil like expressions and the girls just ran from there with the boys after them.

Ridz and Sanj: hahahaha losers and with that they run out of the house.

Adi and Armaan run outside too but they first turn in the sprinklers. and the girls are so confused and r screaming after feeling the cold water soak their clothes and out of no where they r caught by armaan and aditya.

Ridz an Sanj: leave me
Adi: no way u got ur fun now it’s our turn.

And with that aditya and armaan pick them up and twirl them around in the sprinklers while they are screaming. And after 10 minutes they finally let them go and they all laugh like their is no tomorrow. They all change as they were dripping wet and sit down and chat as their project and dinner were done.


Precap: Bike Race.........someone ends up in the hospital........who will it be????


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Part 15: Torn Between Two

Heyy guys..thanks for the wodnerful comments!! :) Part 15 for u!!


The doorbell rung, and after a few seconds, the great doors were opened, leaving Armaan and Riddhima in a huge shock.


Part 15

There was silence for a while, until two people simultaneously said,
“ RIDDHIMA!!!”
“DI!!!”
And both the sisters hugged each other as though there was no tomorrow. Fresh tears made their way out from both pairs of eyes, and this time no one tried to stop them. Riddhima knew she needed only Armaan to live and survive with, however she couldn’t stop loving those who once loved her! Armaan on the other hand looked around as soon as he heard someone say,
“mere bhai!” He knew it was Atul’s voice, and he looked behind Anjali. Taking Atul in, he hugged him tight, saying “Champ” over and over again. Atul couldn’t believe his Armaan was here.
“Mere bhai, tum bilkul theek ho?”
“Haan champ! Abh main bilkul theek hoon! Yahin tumhaare saamne! Aur meri sab yadaasht wapas aagayi. Voh do saal jo maine khoye the. Sab kuch.”
“Ek phone bhi nahin karsakta tha? Sirf ek phone aur main sab kuch chod kar mere bhai ke paas chalajaata!”
“Isilye nahin bataya tha! Jaanta tha. Aur khudki zindagi mere liye kyun rokoge?”

Both pairs were still hugging each other as though to never let go. Atul continued,
“Sab kuch akela sehta raha! Ek baar humaari yaad nahin aayi?”
“Bohot yaad aayi champ. Bohot zyaada. Lekin main jaanta tha. Aap sab bohot khush hain. Toh aapki khushyan ko main kyun todta?”
“Tumhaare beghar koi khush rehsakta hai kya?” this time Anjali spoke when she came out of her hug with Riddhima.
“Yehin toh isko samajh nahin aata!” said Riddhima, still teary.
Anjali went to Armaan and hugged him.
“Armaan, tum kyun nahin samajhte? Tum hi ho joh sab ke liye khushyaan late ho. Toh jab tum nahin hote toh koi khush nahin hota! Meri pyaari si behen kitni tadpi tumhare liye! Maine usse dekha toote huwe jab voh Sid se shaadi kar rahi thi!”
“Anjali…”
“Abh kya faida?”
“Di,” said Riddhima. “Hume aapse kuch kehna hai.”
“Kya Ridzi? Mujhe laga sirf tum hogi. Lekin Armaan? Kya huwa? Jab main Ridzi ki shaadi ke baad, Atul ke saath America gayyi, toh kya huwa? Tumhe hume sab kuch batana hai!”
“Hum aapko sab kuch batayenge. Pehle mumma papa aur dadi kahaan hai?”
“Andar hain. Chal”

Riddhima was sitting in her old room. It was around 4:15 and the engagement was at 8. She knew she had to leave to go to Armaan’s house in a bit to get ready for it. But she was taking in the essence of her room that she had forgotten in the past few months. Armaan was in the kitchen helping Padma and Dadi. He had as usual won over them in an instant. But her Dad had been a slight problem. She remembered how everything went.

Flashback

Dadi’s room
Anjali knocked, and entered. Dadi was praying and had her back to the door, while Riddhima silently creeped in and put her hands on her eyes. Shocked, Dadi slowly said,
“Riddhima beti?”
Riddhima removed her hands and came in front of her grandmother, hugging her tight. She had missed her so much!
“Bachchi, kahaan thi tum? Harroz tumhaari fikr kar ke meri jaan nikal gayyi thi!”
“Lekin main toh hamesha phone karti thi”
“Haan lekin phir bhi. Tumhe dekhe huwe kitne mahine hogaye! Aur mujhe laga patli hoke aaogi!”
“Dadi, jab mera khayal rakhne ke liye Armaan hai toh mujhe kuch nahin hoga.”

That was the cue for Armaan to walk in. He bent down and took blessings from Dadi, who was overjoyed to see her ‘son’ back in perfect condition.
“Armaan beta. Kahaan gaya tha tu?”
“Bus dadi, beeti huwi baat par nahin rote.” He said wiping her tears. “Abh main aap sab ko kabhi chod ke nahin jaunga.”
“Dadi…” started Riddhima wondering how to put it. Armaan held her hand tight and squeezed it. She looked at him, smiled, and drew closer to him.
“Dadi…maine aur…” but before she could continue, Padma’s voice was heard.
“Ridhimma!” Riddhima went to her and hugged her with all her might. Behind Padma, Shashank was standing, and Riddhima was slightly hesitant to hug him.
“Papa ko bhool gayyi kya?” And she hugged him even tighter, repeating the word “Papa” over and over again. As much as she loved being with Armaan, there was no way she could forget her family. Her family meant everything to her. And so did Armaan. And she wanted both of them with her. Padma looked at Armaan slightly hesitantly. He took her blessings, and she asked him,
“beta, kahan chalagaya tha tu?”
At that point Shashank intervened.
“Apni Riddhima ko kabhi khush dekh sakta hai yeh?”
This statement was a blow on Armaan. He had done everything for her. Everything for him revolved around her. His smallest decisions were made considering her. Then how could someone say he didn’t want to see her happy? He closed his eyes. He should have anticipated that. Riddhima, shocked was not able to speak. Didn’t her father KNOW that she loved Armaan? Shashank asked Riddhima,
“Tumhe Armaan kahan mila tha? Mujhe lagaa voh hospital aur tumhe chod ke chalagaya?” Armaan once again felt a sword pierce his heart. When Riddhima didn’t answer, Shashank left the room and went away.
“Dadi, Padma mom, main aap dono se vaada karta hoon. Main hamesha Riddhima ko khush rakhunga. Har musibat main, main iske aage khara rahoonga, aur har khushiyaan main iske peeche. Pichle che mahinein se hum dono saath hai.”
Dadi and Padma looked at each other shocked to the core.
“Kya? Tum dono? Riddhima, main jaanti hoon tumhaari shaadi toot chuki thi, lekin aise, kisi gair mard ke saath…” said Padma, but before she could finish,
“abhi abhi ‘beta’ kaha, aur itni jaldi paraya kardiya?” said Armaan, hurt etched on his face. “aapko hum dono par bharosa nahin hai kya? Riddhima kabhi kuch galat nahin karsakti.”
Riddhima hugged Armaan as silent tears wet his shirt.
“Tum bhi kabhi kuch galat nahin karsakte.”

Padma and Dadi looked at each other smiling.
“Pyaar ho toh aisa.” Said Dadi. “Itna masoom aur pavitra. Abh yahaan aao tum dono. Aapki nazar utaarni hai. Aaj se aap dono ko koi juda nahin karsakta.”
Riddhima then took her mangalsutra out of her purse.
“Dadi…humne shaadi karli.”
“Kab?” asked Padma astonished.
“pichle hafte.” Riddhima held her ears. “Aap sab ko batane ki himmat nahin huwi humari.”
“Riddhima? Itna darti hai humse?”
Armaan also joined in,
“Haan. khoob daanto isse. Maine tumse kaha tha ghar pe sab ko batao, lekin nahin. Dadi mujhe lagta hai yeh apne baap pe gayyi hai. Bilkul ziddi hai!”
“Mere pati parmeshwar ko kya bulaya tune?” asked Padma raising her eyebrows.
Armaan also held his ears, and said
“Please maaf kardo hume.” He looked at Riddhima, and both knelt down, and went towards Padma. Simultaneously, they said,
“Pleaaasseee??” and Padma looked down at them and started laughing. They both smiled as well, and Padma blessed them saying,
“Bhagwaan aap dono ko khush rakhe.” They got up and went to take Dadi’s arshiwaad together as well.
“jeetay raho. Aur abh..” she said taking the mangalsutra from Riddhima’s hand and giving it to Armaan, “Humaare saamne yeh shaadi ki rasam nibhalo. Humaare ashirwaad hamesha aapke saath hai.” She also took the sindoor from the temple, and put it in fornt of Armaan. He first took the mangalsutra, and looking at Riddhima in her eyes, he smiled, and put it round her neck. He then took the sindoor, and filled he forehead with it. He was adoring her, and she blushed, looking down. Anjali and Atul both were at the door, smiling at the event. Anjali wiped a tear that was about to drop out, and felt Atul’s arm around her. Grateful for the support, she put her head on his shoulder, watching the duo intently.


Flashback ends

She had to talk to her father. He must be in his study. Going there, she knocked, remembering how Armaan wanted to leave the house, and come and pick her up later because as he said, “Agar papa ko main pasand nahin, toh main unhe aur dookh nahin dena chahta.” He stayed on Dadi’s insistence. She had to make her father understand. If he wanted to blame anyone, it should be her. Not Armaan.
“Papa…”
“Aao Riddhima. Tumhe kabh knock karne ki zaroorat padi?” His eyes fell on the mangalsutra and sindoor. “Yeh sindoor aur…”
“Papa…” she interrupted. “Jab main yahaan se gayyi thi…” and she told him the story of how she went to look for Armaan, and how he took care of her when she was extremely weak. She also told him about what how Armaan never wanted to break their marriage. Hence it wasn’t his fault.”
“Toh tum pichle 6 mahinein iske saath rehti thi Lonavla main?”
“Haan…lekin papa…”
“Aur ek baar bataya bhi nahin? Zaroor usne tumhe kuch kaha hoga!”
“Har baar usse dosh matt deejiye! Usse mujhe phir se yahaan bhejna tha. Maine manaa kardiya.”
“Kyun? Humaari yaad nahin aayi?”
“Bohot aayi! Lekin kyunki main wahaan uske saath bohot khush thi. Mujhe usse door kabhi nahin hona tha. Papa…voh mujhe bohot bohot pyaar karta hai. Aur main usse. Main Sid ke saath kabhi khush nahin thi. Koshish toh maine bhi ki thi us rishte ko badana. Lekin jab mera dil hi Armaan ke paas tha toh main kuch kaise…” she broke down crying in front of her father. He couldn’t bear to see her like that but took a deep breath and said.
“Toh tum dono ek ghar main, saath rehte they?”
“Haan…aur Pichle hafte, humne shaadi bhi ki.”
Now he made sense of the mangalsutra and sindoor. But he was shocked. His daughter, taking such a huge decision without informing her father? Was he no one to her anymore? No. She might have been forced into this marriage!
“Kya usne shaadi se pehle kuch bhi…”
“Papa! Please. Armaan ne mujhe chhua tak nahin un 6 mahine main! Humari pyaar ki itni kyun beizatti kar rahe hain? Papa, aapko mujhpe bharosa nahin hai? Aapki parwarish par bharosa nahin hai?” she sobbed harder, and ran out of the room. Padma who had come to call them for tea saw that and guessed the situation. She went and told Armaan to handle Riddhima, while she gave a few choicy words to her husband. Even though Riddhima wasn’t his biological daughter, Armaan was right. They shared the same stubbornness.
“Shashank, yeh kya?”
“Padma, voh ladka humari beti ke liye theek nahin hai!”
“Aur aapne kya kiya? Jab Sid ke saath shaadi karwani thi uski family toh door ki baat hai, uska background bhi nahin pata tha aapko. Kya voh ladka kisi aur se pyaar karta tha…kaisa hai voh ladka…America main kya kiya tha…kya nahin. Vahan se yahaan kyun aaya tha. Itni jald shaadi karwali. Dekha nateeja?”
“Lekin Padma kaun usse shaadi karta? Uski izzat mitti main milgayyi thi!”
“Aur voh bhi Dr Sid ke wajah se.”
“EK galti toh hoti hai na insaan se?”
“Toh Armaan se kyun nahin? Ek baar galti ki hai unhone. Riddhima ko chodkar. Lekin main isko galti nahin maanti. Usne sahin faisla liya tha. Kya tum kabhi Riddhima ko ek pagal insaan se shaadi karne dete?”
“Nahin lekin…”
“Lekin kya? Aap kyun nahin dekhte, ki Armaan Riddhima ke liye bana hai! Voh dono shaadi bhi karchuke hai. Please, un dono ko khush dekhna chahteho toh aashirwaad deejiye. Varna voh dono kabhi khush nahin reh payenge. Please. Bohot imtehaan hogaya un dono ke pyaar ka. Abh aur nahin. Maan jaiye na. Sab ki bhalaiy isime hai.”
“Main nahin manta” said Shashank, but his face was doubtful on his own decision. She sighed.
“Mujhe jo kehna tha voh maine kehdiya. Aao Chai peelo. Phir Naina aur Yuvraaj ki sagaai ke liye tayar bhi hona hai. Kisi ke Papa ne toh pyaar ke saamne kuch nahin kahan. Armaan ko maine aur dadi ne roka tha. Agar usse khush nahin dekhsakte, toh please unhe dookh bhi mat pohnchao! Itna achcha khayal rakha hai humari beti ka.” With that she left, leaving Shashank in a whirlpool of thoughts.

Meanwhile in Riddhima’s room.

Anjali was trying to console Riddhima, who was crying non-stop and couldn’t believe her father. And now it seemed as though she had to choose between two people she loved the most. Armaan entered the room, and seeing Riddhima in this condition made his heart wrench apart. Anjali upon seeing Armaan enter, left knowing they needed privacy.

Armaan slowly made his way to Riddhima’s bed, and put his hand on her shoulder. Knowing his touch, she immediately sat up and hugged him. He also put his arms around her petite body, (I’m imagining Jenni but for those who imagine Suku please ignore my description… plus it’s not that I dnt like Suku, she’s just not someone I’d describe as petite.) and consoled her. She knew her tears were tearing him apart. She tried stopping them. What had she decided? This time, she would do everything. She would not make her Armaan face her dad again. If her dad needed to agree with her and Armaan’s relation, SHE would make him. This time, Armaan would just have to support her. She was not going to make him go through so much ever again.
“Armaan…”
“Hmmm?”
“Papa maan jayenge. Tum fikr mat karo.”
He pulled her apart, slightly shocked. The Riddhima he knew would be questioning him about that, and he would be the one consoling her. He shook his head at her, and said,
“Haan. Voh zaroor maan jayenge.” Framing her face, he leaned in, and kissed her closed eyelids, then her forehead. Then taking her hands in his, he brought them to his face, and grazed his lips over them. She hugged him tighter, fitting her head in his neck. After sometime, they both drew apart and went downstairs for some tea, before they head home to get dressed for the engagement.

Shashank was observing Armaan’s every movement. How Armaan made sure Riddhima had something atleast, even though she seemed too lost and sad to even think about food. Armaan also joked around, keeping everyone’s mood lifted, including Dadi’s. He complimented the cooking, making Padma blush, and Shashank found himself chuckling at that. Anjali caught her dad smiling, and decided to go over.
“Kitna pyaar karta hai na sabse?” she asked Shashank purposely.
“Voh..main…”
“Jaanti hoon papa. Uski harkaton par hass rahe they.”
“Bachpana kabhi nahin gaya.”
“Nahin papa. Yeh bachpana sab ka dil jeet leta hai. Aapka bhi.”
“Kya?” he pretended to be busy immersed in hi newspaper.
“Papa, jitna bhi koshish karlo chupane ki. Sach yeh hai…aur aap bhi jaante ho. Riddhima ke liye Armaan se behter koi aur ladka hai hi nahin!” and she left.

When Riddhima and Armaan were about to leave, they both went to Shashank for blessings. He looked sat them sternly, and Armaan stopped mid-way. He then called them to him and looked furious at them. They held each other, and went slowly to them.
“Shashank…”
“Bas Padma! Abh mujhe joh kehna hai, voh sun leejiye!”
“Beta..”
“Nahi Ma. Please in dono ki tarafdaari matt karo.”
Armaan and Riddhima were both looking at the floor. Armaan finally looked up, and said,
“Sir, agar aapko kuch kehna hai toh mujhse kahiye. Riddhima se kuch nahin.”
“Nahin. Riddhima bhi sunegi. Aaj se…”
Riddhima looked at Armaan wondering if their father would forcefully split them up. She held him tighter.
“aaj se…tum dono ke saath…mera aashirwaad hamesha hai.” He smiled. He had finally realised no one could love his daughter more than Armaan could. Everyone in the room was stunned to hear that. Padma started crying out of happiness, and Riddhima finally hugged her father when she managed to co-ordinate again. Anjali hugged Atul, and Dadi smiled, proud of her son. Armaan then hugged Shashank as well, who was now hugging both Armaan and Riddhima. Their hands met behind Shashank’s back, proving their bond to be stronger, now that it was supported by her father. Riddhima was crying, and as Shashank was about to withdraw his hand from Armaan’s back to wipe her tears, Armaan wiped her tears with his free hand. His grip on Armaan grew stronger, knowing that Armaan would always be there to take care of his precious daughter.
Precap – More surprises!!

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Thanks a ton for the wonderful comments guys..!! Who’s hating DMG right now? I am!! Cant believe Riddhima actually once loved Armaan..!! I mean she’s acting as though he had a high skul crush on her and she rejected him..!!! NOT fun to watch..!! really hope she burns with jealousy once she sees Armaan with Shilpa..thats the only reason I want AS to get together…and ofcourse..to see Armaan smile again..!! :)

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Part 6: Love not at First Sight

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Part 6


"I don't know if I love her or ''"armaan stopped as he saw her standing at the door'

"riddhima '" he whispered seeing her looking at him and before he could say or do something riddhima slammed the door on his face and locked herself inside the room..armaan tried talking to her as he banged the door but there was no response'

"riddhima please open the door ..please riddhima..let me explain.." he tried so many times to make her talk to him but all vent in vain'in the end he had no other option but to open the door with the duplicate key and as he was about to open the door he heard riddhima's voice'

"armaan..can we talk about this later..please.." .. the pain in her voice didn't went unnoticed by armaan and he knew that she was crying but he also knew that one wrong step and everything will be over so without saying anything more he left the house'

Armaan and rahul went to the office but whole day it was just riddhima in his mind'. He wanted to talk to her but was scared as he remembered how shocked she was hearing him.. armaan was trying his best to remain calm but when he couldn't he picked up his bag and left the office without even waiting for the office hours to finish..rahul saw him leaving the office and knowing his state of mind he didn't even stopped him'

Armaan entered the apartment and pressed the door bell but getting no response he got a bit panicked 'he shouted her name "Riddhima.." but still no response'he was about to call when Mrs. Khanna, his neighbor, came with his house keys..

"armaan'your house keys".. she said handling the keys to him..

" and where is riddhima?.."

"I don't know ..she handed me the keys and told me to give it to you.." she said and left '.

Armaan opened the door of his apartment and saw everything was in proper place..he kicked the wall in frustration and sat on the sofa holding his head as tears rolled down his eyes..

"how could you just leave me like this..why riddhima?.." he was mumbling this to himself but stopped when he felt someone's hand on his shoulder'

"riddhima.." he looked up with a smile on his lips but his smile vanished as he saw rahul standing in front of him'

"rahul she left ..she left me like everyone .. first mom left me and now riddhima' she too left me ..i don't want to lose her..rahul ..i love her ..." rahul had seen him so desperate , so weak when his mom left and now after so many years he was seeing him in this condition'.. " you know rahul the whole day I have been thinking about her and now I know I can't live without her ..i need her rahul'" he said as rahul saw his teary eyes'

"you really love her..armaan" he asked to see him nodding'

"so what are we waiting for..let's go and find her.." he said and the faint smile was back on armaan's lips'

Four hours passed but still there was no sign for her..they searched every possible place where they could find her but there was no sight of her' it was now close to midnight and even rahul had lost some hope of finding her but armaan knew he'll find her and she is somewhere here only when he saw her at the same bridge where he saw her for the first time' she was standing at the bridge looking at the sky...

"riddhima .." armaan whispered looking at her face with had so much pain ..he had the feeling of guilt inside him as he knew that it's all his fault..he is responsible for her condition'riddhima turned and looked at him and the tears which she was holding back from so long came out from her eyes'

"why armaan? ..why?.." she whispered with so much pain' looking at her miserable state anyone could have guessed that she was crying from several hours and with a thin shawl wrapped around her the cold weather wasn't doing anything good for her'

"riddhima please listen to me..it's not what you think'I was just.."

"I was just what armaan..you know I thought you are different from other's ..but you have proved me wrong' you are just like them'.thank you for everything Mr. Malik'" she said and turning around she started to move'

"it's not me but rahul..he loves you.." he said without even realizing what he just blurted out as riddhima stopped in her tracks' realization came back and he closed his eyes in frustration , smacking his forehead ' "what did I just said..rahul loves you'oh god I am so dead now..rahul is definitely not gonna leave me now..but I had no other option'if I had told her that it's me who loves her ..she'll definitely leave me and this is something I don't want'sorry rahul'" he thought as he saw her coming towards her'



Rahul who was sitting in the car a distance away , saw her coming towards him and got out of the car.. "hey riddhima'everything fine now.." rahul asked smilingly but seeing the look on her face he stopped himself from saying anything further'

rahul I thought you are a good man but you too'" ' hearing her he looked at her confusingly as he had no idea what she was saying'

"riddhima are you alright?... " he asked narrowing his eyes'

"you are asking me rahul..i thought you are a nice human being just like armaan..but no even you are like other'playing with women "'

"but What's wrong with playing with women ..i am playing with them since I was a small kid..and even now I play with them'"

"WHAT?..." armaan and riddhima both shouted together looking at him in shock ..this was something unexpected for armaan too..

"yeah.." he said rolling his eyes'. "armaan why are you surprised even you play with women..just last week we were playing and I'"..riddhima turned and looked at armaan in shock as he shook his head..

"rahul are you out of your mind'.kya bakwaas kar raha hai'" '

"main bakwaas kar raha hoon..acha 'last week who won the match..it was me' now don't say that I am lieing.."

"match 'which match?.." armaan asked as riddhima looked at both of them'

"the basketball match..which I won..remember'" 'now armaan realized what he was talking about and smacked his head'even riddhima understood what he was talking all this while and felt like killing him'.

"Enough rahul'don't try to change the topic'"

"Change the topic?'which topic are you talking about' is there any debate going on'?..."'this was like the limits for riddhima'she was so pissed off that she was about to slap him when armaan came in between and stopped her'

"riddhima let me handle this'" he said trying to calm her down '

"no armaan this is between me and rahul and I know how to handle it myself.." she said and looking at rahul she asked him.. "so.. you have feelings for me 'right..you love me.." she asked looking at rahul as he looked at her confusingly.. he was shaking his head but stopped when he saw him standing behind her , pleading him to say yes by joining his hand' rahul was fuming in anger looking at armaan as now he understood what all was going on'. but he can't say no to him so the shaking was changed to nodding'

"yes riddhima I love you..aur mujhe tumse pehli nazar mein hi pyar ho gaya..jabse maine tumhe dekha hai..mujhe aur kuch nazar nahin aata..har jagah sirf tum-hi-tum nazar aati ho' yaha bhi tum yaha bhi tum har taraf bas tum hi tum, main pagal ho gaya hoon tumhare pyar mein'riddhima..i have fallen truly, madly deeply in love with you ... I love you from the bottom of my heart'.i mean main tumhe apne tan, man ,dhan se bhi zyada chahta hoon' aur mein jaanta hoon ki tum mujhse pyar nahin karti or na hi kabhi karogi'par pyar one sided bhi to ho sakta hai na'and I can spend the rest of my life thinking ki maine bhi kabhi kisise pyar kiya tha..that even I loved you' and now it's your turn..say something.." rahul said in a single breath as riddhima looked at him stunned'even armaan was too stunned to say something as he had never seen this side of him before'riddhima was still trying to digest what all rahul said a moment ago when armaan pulled him and took him to a corner'

"are you out of your mind..and what is all this..tan, man dhan, you just had to say a simple yes..and you'Arggh'.start using your brain rahul'. brainless creature'" armaan was freaking out thinking what if riddhima actually believed him and even she starts liking him.. he looked at rahul who was standing in front of him looking at him so coolly as if nothing happened'

"chill armaan'she is not going to fall for me'" he said keeping his hand on his shoulder as armaan started biting his nails looking at riddhima who was still standing there in shock'

"but how do you know'that she won't fall..what if she actually'"

"armaan it's a tried and tested formula..she is not going to fall for me..infact she'll try to stay away from me just wait and watch..you know this is one of the cheapest filmy dialogue which men use to impress women and women hate this to the core..so just relax..trust me'" seeing the calm and composed look on rahul's face even armaan believed that everything going to be fine'

"btw armaan, you know what does this mean.. right..this time you are so gone buddy'"rahul smirked looking at him'

"yeah..yeah'I'll do whatever you'll want me to'yehi sunna chahta tha na.." rahul nodded grinning even more after hearing him'

"so what should I do now?' " armaan asked looking at her who was still looking shocked'

"you just take her home.. she is not looking good and we'll think about this later"..rahul said giving the car keys to armaan..

"and what about you 'aren't you coming?..." armaan asked seeing him going away'

"no..you just take care of her ..i'll meet you tomorrow'" rahul said and left them alone'

Armaan cleared his throat, closed his eyes and after playing to god started moving towards riddhima'he stood in front of her and called her' "Riddhima'" he said but seeing no response from her , he shook her a bit as riddhima came out from the shock'

"armaan..rahul'he loves me and what all'." She was stammering as she was looking was rahul' "where is rahul?..." she asked looking around as armaan was just smiling looking at her cute- shocked face'.

"rahul..left and I think we should go home too'it's very cold outside.."

"but rahul'"

"riddhima..we'll talk about this at home..i am feeling hungry and I know even you haven't eaten anything'"

"but'" she tried speaking but stopped when armaan glared at her'

The whole journey was a silent one that's what riddhima thought but the fact was throughout the whole journey riddhima was cursing rahul' "I still can't believe I cried the whole day for rahul..idiot sturid moron'.he loves me and I thought it's armaan'I said so many bad words about armaan without even listening to him' I am sorry armaan'and that rahul..you just meet me again..i swear I am gonna kill you'mujhe filmi dialogue sunata hai'what the hell does he think of himself that I am gonna get impressed by him..my foot'rahul you are gone'" she was muttering this under her breath without even realizing that armaan was listening to her all the way'

Riddhima tried talking to armaan about this but he always made some excuses just to avoid talking about this as he himself had no idea what is he gonna tell her' and riddhima too felt it's not worth talking to armaan and she need to talk to rahul personally'



next day as riddhima was busy preparing breakfast the door bell rang'knowing very well that it's rahul..riddhima made her way to open the door but armaan reached their first and opened the door '.rahul entered his house and without even waiting for armaan to say something made his way towards riddhima....and before she could say something' "riddhima..i know after last night ..i mean it's so awkward to stand here and talk with you..but I just wanted to say this.." he said and closing his eyes he took a deep breath, composing himself he opened his eyes and looked at her as she was just staring at him' "riddhima I take my words back'what all I said yesterday..just forget about it'please riddhima..i know you must be hurt but please riddhima..i love someone else..i met her yesterday aur mujhe usse pyar ho gaya hai' you know love at first sight'so I hope you won't take this in the bad away'and"'..SLAP'. without uttering anything she left the two as rahul stood there rubbing his cheek'

"thank god she didn't took it in a bad way'" rahul said as he heard armaan laughing behind his back' he turned and looked at him and seeing the anger on rahul's face he stopped all of a sudden'

"why did you stopped armaan..hass le..aur hass..it's all your fault ..here I am trying to help you and you are laughing at me'" rahul said as if he was really hurt'

There was a moment of silence as they both kept looking at each other but when they couldn't take it any longer they started laughing holding their stomach'.

"what happened to you man'and what is this new thing..you and love'" armaan asked in between his laugh'

"I'll tell you in the office ..you won't believe last night I saw her and she saw me and we both'" he said to himself as he was in his own world and went down towards the car'

As rahul left armaan entered the bedroom where he saw her sitting in some deep thoughts'

"riddhima are you okay..?.." he asked her as to see her smiling faintly'

"yes armaan..i am fine..you should go..you are already late'"

"are you sure..if you want to talk..i mean'"

"no armaan I am fine'"

"okay'" armaan said and picking up the bag left the house'



In the evening he reached the house and pressed the door bell and not getting any response he felt weird as this had never happened before'he asked his neighbor but even they said that they have no idea'he tried one more time and was about to call rahul when his cell rang' he looked at the caller id but it was an unknown number'. He picked it up and was about to say when'

"waiting for riddhima?'" he heard someone saying this on the other side'as he heard him laughing'



End of part 6

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Dill Mill Gayye July 16 Episode

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Segment 14: A Duke and Duchess' Story

"arman chala jar aha tha…..dooooooor..doooooor tak bus oose banjar,dry dharti deekh rahi thi...….arman ko aur kuch bhi nazar nahi aa raha tha….…..oose pyaas bhi lag rahi thi....…..aasman mein kale- kale baadal chaye they….arman ko apni manjil ki talash thi………..per kahan hai manjil?? Charon taraf khamoshi aur andhera…….………

oosne aasman ki oar dekha….god! mai bhatak gaya hoon…. kuch aisa karo ki ye baadal chunt jaye aur mujhe apni rahen deekhen……………..

shayad god ne soon lee aur aasmani nikhar aaya...……halke neele aasman mei halke safed baadal hawa mein idhar –oodhar bikhar rahe the!!!!……

tabhi arman ne dekha oos apsara ko!! Red dancing dress pahne hontho per sweet si mooskan liye!….safed badal per baithi!…. aasman se ootar rahi thi......

arman ko laga ishe kahin dekha hai….arey ye to ooski duchess hai! wo jaise-jaise neeche aa rahi thi…..charon taraf sab kuch badal raha tha…..flowers khilne lage….charon taraf hariyali cha gayi……soonhari kirne bikharne lagi…...arman mano bahak raha tha…..oosne kuch madhosh aawaj mein hi poocha…..” toom koun ho?”

but oos angel ne koi jawab nahi diya……….

Arman : "toom koun ho jo mere life mein aate hi mujhe manjil deekhne lagi?

Wo sirf mooskoorati rahi…………..bush pink soft lips mein kuch white pearl se deekhe!....
Arman : "kya toom meri love ho……….
Riddhima (goongoonayi) : "nahi to...…mai toomhari life hoon……….
Arman : "lekin mujhe toomse koi lagaw keun nahi……….

Riddhima : "arman hume pahle life milti hai...….ooske saath rahte hue hume oosse lagaw hota hai…..love hota hai…..
Arman : "kya mujhe toomse pyar ho gaya hai?
Riddhima : "agar toom abhi tak ye nahi samajh paayye to mera chale jana hi behtar hai…..shayad mere jaane ke baad toom samajh pao……….

Arman : "toom bahoot khoobsoorat ho..….kya mere saath ek dance karogi?
Riddhima : "ok……….





Dono dance karte hain...……aur ek doosre ke bilkul karib aa jate hain...…..arman oos beauty ko bush ekbaar touch karna chahta hai...………

Riddhima : "mujhe jana hoga………
Arman : "ok,mai toomhe rokoonga nahi...…..but kya mai toomhe bush ekbaar apni bahon mein le sakta hoon?

Riddhima kuch nahi kahti….ooski aankhen num hai……….

Arman : "toomhari aankhe to greyish thi riddhima…..feer ye neeli-neeli keun hai?
Riddhima : "arman ye to toomhari aankho ki chaya hai...….ab toom jo mujhme sama gaye ho…………...

.arman goongoonane lagta hai…

Song----(pee loon tere neele neele naino ke shabnam)

Hoonnnoooonnnnnnn…….
aaaaaaaaa………
pee loon tere neele neele naino se shabnam
pee loon tere geele geele honthon ki sargam
pee loon hai peene ka mausam
tere sang ishq kaari hai
tere sang ek khumari hai
tere sang chain bhi mujhko
tere sang bekaraari hai
tere sang ishq kaari hai
tere sang ek khumari hai
tere sang chain bhi mujhko
tere sang bekaraari hai
tere bin jee nahi lagta
tere bin jee nahi sakta
tujh pe hai haare maine waare do jahan
qurbaan meherbaan ke main to qurbaan
sun le sada………….
tere qurbaan…………...
hosh mein, rahoon na kyun aaj main
tu meri baahon mein simti hai mujh me samayi hai yoon
jis tarah, tu thodi hai nadi
tu mere seene mein chubti hai sagar tumhara main hoon
pee loon teri dheemi dheemi lehron ki cham cham
pee loon teri saundi saundi saanson ko har dam
pee loon hai peene ka mausam………
tere sang ishq kaari hai
tere sang ek khumari hai
tere sang chain bhi mujhko
tere sang bekaraari hai
tere sang ishq kaari hai
tere sang ek khumari hai
tere sang chain bhi mujhko
tere sang bekaraari hai
shaam ko, miloon jo main tujhe
to bura subah na jaane kyun kuch maan jaati hai yeh
har lamhaa, har ghadi har pehar
bhi teri yaadon se tadpa ke mujhko jalati hai yeh
pee loon main dheere dheere jalne ka yeh gam
pee loon in gore gore haathon se humdum
pee loon hain peene ka mausam
tere sang ishq kaari hai
tere sang ek khumari hai
tere sang chain bhi mujhko
tere sang bekaraari hai
tere sang ishq kaari hai
tere sang ek khumari hai
tere sang chain bhi mujhko
tere sang bekaraari hai
tere bin jee nahi lagta
tere bin jee nahi sakta
tujh pe hai haare maine waare do jahan
qurbaan meherbaan ke main to qurbaan
sun le sada..
tere qurbaan…………………………



Riddhima ooske dill ke karib aa jati hai..…..arman ko ooske num eyes ke saath bheege hue honth deekhte hai...…….pink ,soft,larazte bheege honth!!…..oose feer se pyaas lagti hai....….wah bush ek baar oon honthon ko chooker apni pyaas boojhana chahta hai....…..wah apni aankhe band kar leta hai aur ahista se oon hontho ko touch karta hai………..aur ooski aankhe khool jati hai……………
.................................

Arman ki aankhe khool jati hai....……wah apne bed per hai…..oose sach mooch bahoot pyaas lagi hai………….shayad bahoot raat ho chooki hai....……apne sapne ko yaad ker wo muskurata hai....……..room ki halki neele roshni mein wah sofe ki taraf dekhta hai jahan wo "sleeping beauty" soi hui hai...…..haan wo sote hue bahoot khoobsoorat lagti hai....….ish liye arman ne oose ye name diye hain.....…..aur arman ki to aadat hi ho gayi hai....….aankh khoolte hi riddhima ko dekhna .....….




(SLEEPING BEAUTY)

But aaj sleeping beauty apne bed per nahi hai……….arman ghabra jata hai....….oosne kya kaha tha?jaker doosri jagah padho....…to kya wo chali gayi!

….arman ek jhatke se ooth jata hai....…aur door ki taraf dekhta hai....….per wo to ander se lock hai...….feer riddhima kahan hai?

Wah kuch samajh nahi pata…....ab wah kya kare? Papa ko boolaye?nahi.....achanak ooski nazar bed room ke right side mein bani store room ki taraf jata hai jisme se halki kirne aa rahi hai...........kya riddhima ander hai?but ye room to bahoot hi chota and dirty hai...

Arman dheere se door ko push karta hai..........riddhima ander hi hai.............shayad padhte-padhte need aa gayi hai....oosne books ko hi pillow banaya hai aur floor per simti so rahi hai...............
Arman dabey paaun ooske paas jata hai...........shayad roi hai.....aankhon se bahthe aansoo soft galon per sookh chooke hain................

Arman oose ahiata apni bahon mein ootha leta hai aur sofe per laker soola deta hai…..riddhima shayad bahoot tired hai….oose pata bhi nahi chalta……


IN THE MORNING

Riddhima ki need khoolti hai to khood ko sofe per pati hai....…wah kuch samajh nahi paati....….khirki se dhoop as usual aaker arman ko disturb kar raha hai...…wah oothker curtain laga deti hai aur wash room chali jaati hai……………

Wo ready hoker jaldi se neeche jana chahti hai...….uncle shayad ooska wait kar rahe honge...….feer wo Singapore chale jayenge aur wo feer arman ki need khoolne se pahle hi yahan se nikalna bhi chahti hai……

Ooske kadam door ki taraf badhte hain tabhi oose soonai deti hai...….’idhar aao”….
riddhima oosse oolajhna nahi chahti....…so choopchap arman ke paas jaker khari ho jati hai………
arman : "store room mein keun so rahi thi?
Riddhima : "mai so nahi rahi thi...…padh rahi thi…..
Arman :" but why?
Riddhima :" mere exams najdeek hain............
Arman : "ok,sorry....….mujhe toomhe aisa nahi kahna chahiye tha…..
Riddhima : "it’s ok……..
Arman : "ek sach baat batao……
Riddhima : "mai jhooth nahi kahti………..
Arman : "ok,ok,kal toomne papa se kya kaha?
Riddhima :" mujhe ek anatomy ki teacher chahiye ....
Arman : "kya???toomne papa se meri sikayat nahi ki?
Riddhima :" mai kisi ki sikayat nahi karti............
Arman : "ok,to papa se kahne ki kya jaroorat?mai toomhe padha sakta hoon....
Riddhima (dheere se) : "uncle ne bhi yahi kaha..........
Arman : "ab se kuch bhi jaroorat ho mujhe kahna.....
Riddhima(oosi tarah) :" uncle ne bhi yahi kaha............
Arman : "aur ye uncle..uncle kya laga rakha hai....ab wo toomhare bhi papa hain……
Riddhima(feer ooshi tarah): "uncle ne bhi yahi kaha………….
Arman(softly) :duck....mai janta hoon mai bahoot boora hoon per kya humari frndship ho sakti hai? kya toom meri frnd banogi?………..kaho uncle ne ye bhi kaha…………..
Riddhima : "nahi uncle I mean papa ne ye nahi kaha………..

feer dono ek doosre ki taraf dekhker muskoora oothte hain…………..………..

Shayad frndship ki soorooat hai………….

( DR.ADITI—SENIOUR DOCTOR)




Arman ka mood aaj achcha hai……morning mein starting achchi hi hui hai…..ab papa ne jo responsibility dee hai oose poora karna hai……wah papa ke cabin mein aata hai….wahan dr.aditi ooske intjaar mein hai…..

Dr.aditi : "welcome dr.arman…..mai dr.aditi....your senior doctor………
Arman : "thanx…..nice to meet you….kya papa ke hospital mein aap jaisi beautiful dr.bhi hain……..pata hota to pahle hi join kar leta……….

Dr.aditi(mooskoorate hue): "you are very naughty ……mai aapke baare mein sab janti hoon……..
Arman(muskurate hue) : "yahi ki mai bahoot talented hoon…..mere peeche sabhi girls diwani hai……..

Dr.aditi :" ya..…and ye bhi ki meri sabse pyari and fav.student ko dekhte hi aap dewane ho gaye aur saadi kar lee………..lekin mai agar oos time Poona mein rahti to mana karti keunki wo abhi choti and innocent hai and ooske exams bhi hain…..aapne aisa keun kiya?….

Arman : "oosh innocent ko koi kidnap ker leta to!…….mai kahan jata?....ish liye oosh beauty ko apne ghar le gaya……….apne paas……….

Dr.aditi: "how sweet!!..really like it…..aapki aur meri achchi jamegi….now we are frnds……………



MASSAGE FOR FRNDS

HEI @ADI SIS AND @ANUJ DEAR THANX FOR YOUR COMMENTS…….LOVE YOU …..
HEI @MANDIRA….THANX FOR COMMENTS….CHALO TOOMHARE LIYE MAINE OONKI FRNDSHIP KI KOSHIS KI HAI……HOPE YOU LIKE IT…..LOVE….
HEI @SAIRA SWEETY….TOOMHE ACHCHI HINDI NAHI AATI FEER BHI MERI FF PADHTI HO! YEHI MERE LIYE BAHOOT BARI BAAT HAI…….GREATFUL TO YOU DEAR….LOVE…

HEI@ JYOTI SWEETY…THAAAAAAAAAANX ….MAINE LOVE SCENE DENE KI KOSHISH KI HAI….HOPE YOU LIKE IT…….LOVE DEAR…….

HEI@ RELLA….AB AGAR SOORRY BOLI TO KAAN KHEENCH DOONGI…..TOOM LOGO KI COMMENT HI MERE LIYE SAB KUCH HAI….LATE TO HO HI SAKTA HAI….OOSKE LIYE AB KABHI SORRY MAT KAHNA….AND THANX FOR COMMENTS DEAR……LOVE…….

HEI @AAHANA…THANX FOR COMMENTS DEAR………..LOVE..

AND HEI MERI PYARI SIS @VAISHALI ……HAPPY TO SEE THAT TOOM FF MEIN LOUT AAI…..JO TOOMHE PAHLE ACHCHE LAGTE THEY….I MEAN FF PADHNA OR STORY BOOK PADHNA OR MUSIC SOONNA….OOSE CHOR MAT DENA DEAR…..YE TOOMHE BUSY RAKHENGE…AUR DHEERE DHEERE TOOM SAMBHAL JAOGI……ACHCHA HUA EXAMS NAHI HUE…BUT STUDY IS THE MOST IMPORTANT PART OF STUDENT-LIFE….SO JAB THORI SAMBHAL JAO….APNI PADHAI PER BHI DHYAN DENA….DEKHA DI HOON TO DANTTI BHI HOON…….LOVE YOU SIS…..

P.S.I AM ALWAYS WITH YOU….

AND ALSO SILENT READERS…..THANX FOR LIKE TABS…..

LOVE YOU ALL
LOVE YOU ALWAYS
PUNAM

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Part 17 A: Jab Dil Miley

Part 17 A


Ra: bhai mein aap ko bulane aya thaw o ek case aya hain…
Ar: chal! Priya tu riddhima( b4 he could continue priya said)
Pr: ke pass beth. Uska kyal rakhna. Use dawi time par dedena... i know jiju.
Ar: gud girl!!! Aur ghar ka nam abhi se soch na shuru kardo….
Pr: thik hain aab aap jaiye….
Ar: ha ha ha ja raha hu...

Armaan & raj left...

Priya & riddhima was talking abut sumthing...

Yaha armaan & raj were abut enter to sanjivani… the voice came behind from there….

Vo: raj! Ammy!!

Armaan & raj were very surprised…..

Ar: tum???? Tum yaha kya kar rahi ho????

Vo: ammy m very sorry.... plz muze maf kardo.... plz plz… raj tum kuch smjao na ammy ko…
Ra: mein kya samjau unhe mein bhi unse agree hu… u were very wrong on that time. U even didn’t belive us. Humane tuze kitne bar kaha ki yeh ladka tumhare liye thik nahi hain, but u didn’t listen to us…. Hame tuz par kita vishvas tha… aur tunhe kya kia??? Hume chodkar chali gai…..

Ar: aab bahut hua tiya mein tumhe kabhi maf nahi karuga….
Ra: aur mein bhi nahi…
Ar: mana tu meri choti behn hain par is bar mein tuze maf nahi karuga. Tuze kitni bar samjata tha k avinash tere liye thik ladka nahi hain.. par tune uske liye apne bhio ko dhukh puchaya….




(here is the site of tiya’s face, muze is se accha koi aur nahi mila.)



Tiya: plz bhai mein aap ko kuch batana chahti hu…
Ar: mat bulao bhi muze….
Ti: bhai plz…. Mein bilkul tut chuki hu…
Ra: bhai she is crying…

Armaan ko acha nahi lagta jab koi roye. Aur uski choti sis to bilkul bhi nahi… so he truned around her & : tiya??? Kya kiya use avinash ke bache ne mein use nahi choduga…. Meri sis ko rulaya hain usne….. just then armaan & raj’s pegger rang…

Ra: bhai ICU emergerncy…. Chaliye…
Ar: tu ja mein tiya ko riddhima ke pas chodkar aata hu….
Ra: bhai unhe batana mat….
Ar: thik hain..
Ti: bhai aap jaiye mein une se khud hi milligi

Ar: ok…
& he left wid raj…


tiya, ridzi,& priya…

tiya knok the door.
Ri: come in

Pr: ji aap kun??
Ti: ji wo mein dr. armaan ki behn hu…
Ri& pr: what?????
Ti: aap dono mein se dr.riddhima kun hain??
Ri: mein hu riddhima. Par armaan ne aap k bare mien kabhi kuch bataya nahi to phir..

priya knows abut raj’s twin sister..
pr: muze bataya hain raj ne…
ri: kab??? Armaan ko to mein nahi chodugi…
kaha hain wo??
Ti: ji wo ICU mein gaye hain..
Ri: use to mein bad dekhlugi…
Pr: tiya tum ro rahi thin a??
Ti: tum priya ho na?>>
Pr: ha…
Ti: wo mein aap loh=go ko sab batugi par abhi nahi pehle yeh bat muze bhaiya ko batini padegi…
Ri: tumhara bhai muz se kuch nahi chupata. Mein tumhari bhabhi hu. Use se pehle yeh bat tum muze batao. Mein use kuch nahi batugi. Trust me!
Ti: bhabhi??? Ammy ne shadi kab ki???
Ri: 3 maheni pehle…
Pr: aur shadi ke bad di ka acccednt hua aur wo komma mein chali gait hi. Aaj hi hosh aaya hain….
Ti: bhabhi aap thik to hain na???
Ri: mein bilkul thik hu. Par pehle tum muze apne problem ke bare mein batogi…
Ti: bhabhi… wo acyually 6 saal pehle ghar mein bahut bada zagada hua tha.. use mein armaan bhai ne ghar chod diya mere aur raj bro ke bich mein bhi zagde hone lage the. Hum wese nahi rahe jese hum hua karte the….
Phir ek din mene bhi ghar chod diya…

Aur phir se hum sab kausli mein mile the.. tabhi mene armaanbhai ko avinash aur mere bare mein bataya…

Ri: yeh avinash kun hain??
Pr: is ka BF..
Ri: tuze kese pata chala???
Pr: di raj ne muze sab kuch bataya tha…
Ri: ok. Tiya tum age sunao…
Ti: mere dono bhai aur avinash college ke sabse bade dushman the.
Armaan bhai flirt kar te the par aaj tak kisi ladki ki zindagi unhone barbad nahi ki. Yeh bat bhai jante the ki avinash ne college bahut sari ladkiyon ki zindgi bigadi hain. Aur avinash ne bhai ka badla muz se liya. Agar use din mene bhai ke sath zagada na kiya hota to…..

Just then armaan & raj came in…
Ar: to aaj teri shadi karva di hoti aur apne pati ke sath maze karti… use avinash k piche apni puri zindgi tumne bigad di…

Ti: I promise bhai aap jis se kahe ge mein us se shadi kar ne k liye tiyar ho jaugi…. Is bar no arguments… I love u bahi…
Ar: l love u too kiddo..
Ti: bhai aab to mein badi ho gai hu aab to kiddo bulana chodo do…
Ra: yeh kabhi nahi ho sakta…
Then armaan move toward riddhima…
Ar: sorry muze tumhe yeh sab batakar pareshan nai kar na tha isiley mene tumhe nahi bataya…
Ri: aur khud pareshan hote rahe….
Ti: bhabhi aaj tak mom ya dad ne muz se kabhi thik tarik se bat nahi ki. Nahi kabhi payar se muze kuch lake diya hain…
Jo bhi kiya sab kuch bhai aur rajbro ne kiya… kya aaj se aap bhi muze kiddo bulaygi??

Riddhima had tears in her eyes…

Ri: ha, mein tumhe kiddo hi bulaugi… aur tum muze bhabhi nahi bulaugi…
All: why???
Ri: kyun ki priya ki tarh yeh bhi muze di bulaygi…
Done??
Ti: done..

Ar: ok now. To tiya kya karne ka irada hain???
Ti: wo bhai mein soch rahi thi ki
Ra: tiya tu soch ne kab se lagi???
Ti : dekha bhai abhi bhi ese pareshan kar raha hain.. mein yaha ayi thi taki phir se sab thik ho jay!!
Ar: to thik to ho hi gaya hain...
All: matlab??
Ar: matlab yeh ki tiya aur raj ki subh zagda kiye bina nahi hoti….
Raj & tiya hits him playfully on his head
(u know bhai bahen pure 6 saal bad mile hain thodi to masti karege hi lolzzz>>>)

Ar: accha aab masti nahi… tiya what r u going to do??/
Ti: bhai mein yaha par internship chalu kardu???
Ar : neki aur puch puch !!!
Ri: ha yeh to bahut accha hoga kyun armaan??? Mein bhi rahugi…. Priya raj aur tum… sab iska khal to rakh sakege na….
Ar: ek mini riddhima tum hospital join nahi karogi…
Ri: par kyun??/
Pr: di juju hum log chalte hain humare duty hourse bhi finish ho gaye hain..
Ar: ok. Tiya ko bhi apne sath le jao..
Ti: nahi bhai mein chali jaugi..
Ra: koi zarurat nahi hain..
Pr : agar wo avinash kahi se aakar tumhe kuch kar diya to ???
Ti : aap log mera kitna khyal rakhte hain...
Pr: wo to rakh nahi padega na. Aap meri hone wali nannd jo hain.. aab chalo...
Ti: ha chaliye priya bhabi!!
Pr: bhabi??? Plz yar abhi se bhabi mat bulao... u can call me priya !!! plz??/
Ti: ok priya
Ra: ohh madamji agar aap dono ki batein ho gai ho to chale aap dono yeh batein car mein bhi kar sakte hain…
Pr & Ti: hum batein kar rahe hain??? Kab se bake to tum ja rahe ho......
Ra: ha ha mein hi bake ja raha hu... aab chalo bhi!!!
Ti: chalo priya warna yeh hume kaccha chaba jayga!!
Pr: ha chalo!!!

After they left AR

Ri: armaan??
Ar: hum???
Ri: armaan mein phir se sanjivani kyun join nahi kar sakti??

Thats all 4 today!!!!
I’ll post next part very soon!!!

Most of all ur guess were right!!! Actually sabhi ke guess sahi the!! Lolz>>>

Mene individual comments to kar diye hian, but thanQ once again!!!

Precap!!!

Priya & raj knows the truth abut tiya….
What happen to her…
Anji & her family back to mumabi!!!!

Tab tak ke liye enjoy this part!!

Tc
Kshiti

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Part 11: Dostana

Dostana
by keddie

PART:11
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note:The capitalized words in the dialogues mean that the character has layed stress on those words while speaking.(hope you guys knew that).
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@@Sanjeevani@@
Its night time and Sukriti goes to the locker room for keeping a file in her locker..

Ka:Hey!
Suk:(surprised)Tum?..Tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?tum to chale gaye the na?
Ka:Han..chala gaya tha...but phir mene socha...er...mene socha ke...
Suk:Ahan?tumne socha ke?
Ka:(hesitantly)Wo..actually...mene tumhari aur Shilpa ki baten suni...aur..er..
Suk:kya baat?
Ka:Yehi..ke..tum..aur wo...are gona hav fun..to..em...ahem..to men wapas agaya..
Suk:(chuckles)Karan...tum isliye wapas aye..just because u thot we were gona hav fun...i mean...wht dya YOU hav 2 do wid OUR fun?...(eyeing him in a normal friendly way)hey are u here 2 ruin our nite?
Ka:(flexibly)ofcourse nt...ab men itna bhi bura nai hoon..i mean..wht dya gues think of me?

''Lallu!!'' They turn to find Shilpa...

Sh:(to suks)I ws here 2 check wht was taking u soo long...but now i want 2 ask..(nw looking sarcastically at him)YEH yahan kya kar raha hai?
Suk:Woh..woh..Sshilpa..ye...mujhe nai pata ye yahan kya kar raha hai..mene to isey kaha bhi..mmen nai jaanti..(acting)Aey..tum yahan par kyun aye ho?(puting a hand of friendship on shilpa's shoulder)kyun meri aur meri friend ki friendship ke beech ana chahte ho...
Sh:Suks...tum bahar mera wait karo..mujhe issey akele men kuch baat karni hai...
Ka:(acts)Nai Suks plz..plz...mujhe chodke mat jana..(holds her dupatta and covers his face wid it)warna ye chalaak lombdi (clever fox)hamare akelepan ka fayda utha kar..mujhpe najaane kya kya atyachar karlegi...plz mujhe iske saath chodke mat jao..plz!!
Sh:(shouts)Tum...tum samajhte kya ho apne aapko han?...tumhi ne bola tha Suks ko ke tum apologize karna chate ho aur ab ye nautankiyan dobara nai karoge..to phir kya hua?
Ka:(surpised)Mene?mene bola?..men..Apologize...aur woh bhi tumse?...never!

Now both Shilpa and Karan understand tht Sukriti had lied...

Ka:Whoa whoa whoa...let me guess..ke tumne(pointing at Suks)Shilpa se jhoot bola...(trying 2 put up a fire between thm)
Sh:(gasps)Suks..tumne...tumne MUJHSE jhoot bola?
Suk:Shilpa woh...men...
Ka:Shilpa..woh..men...yeh sab kya hai han?...Suks tumne apni ''miss queeny of the world''...apni BESTFRIEND se jhoot bola....
Sh(irritated):Oh U JUST SHUTUP OK? yeh Sab kuch tumhari waja se hua hai...jis din se tumse mili hoon meri to life hi bigad gai hai..tumhari waja se meri BESTFRIEND ab meri nai rahi...pata nai tumne usey aisa kya paath padha dia ke woh ab mere against tumhe defend karne lagi hai...i HATE her recent behaviour and most of all I HATE YOU!!!!!(shouts all of this at the top of her voice)
Ka:Oh yea?...well i dont love u either miss Queeny weeny!men to kitne time se tumse dur hi rehna chahta tha but tumhi meri har baat men involve hojati ho..har waqt bas mauka dekhti rehti ho ke kab men Karan se baat kar paon..
Sh:Wht the?..men mauka dekhti hoon?...n wht the hell makes u think tht?tum hamesha meri aur Suks ki friendship ke beech ana chahte ho u knw y?BECAUSE U ARE JEALOUS!!
Ka:Oh yea?..tum mujhse baat karne ka mauka nai dhoondti?
Sh:NAHI!
Ka:To phir abhi kya tha?..''Suks tum mera bahar wait karo mujhe Karan se AKELE MEN BAAT KARNI HAI''(imitating her)
Sh:1st of all tum usey 'Suks' nai bula sakte only i can call her tht u get it?...and 2ndly U knw mujhe kya baat karni thi?...men tumse apologize karne wali thi..ye sochkar ke shayd waqai tum itne burey nai ho..aur mujhe laga ke shayd tumne waqai men apologize kia hai..aur tumne Suks ki help ki hamara patch up karwane men aur uske sath hospital men time spnd kia...BUT NO!ab mujhe samajh aya..Suks tumhe misunderstand kargai..tumne uske sath time spend kia just becoz u were pulling up on her..aur wo meri maasoom si dost tumhare jaal men phas gai...
Ka:(Interupting)u knw mene waqai men Suks..whoops i mean (tossing his fingers sarcastically) Suk-ri-ti...ke sath time spend kyun kia?..just bcoz i became friends wid her...n tht was bcoz i FELT ke mene uske sath galat kia and i KNEW ke woh tumse zyada infact buht zyada achi aur sensible ladki hai...n tht U are just too foolish to be my friend!n im sure tumhari friend bhi mera side isiliye lerahi hai coz she knows tht I M MUCH MUCH MORE INTELLIGENT AND BETTER THN U...haina sukriti?

both of thm look in the direction where Sukriti was standing and tht is whn they realised tht she was long gone..

Sh:Suks?
Ka:Sukriti?(to shilpa)ab ye mat kehna ke yeh bhi meri waja se hua hai...
Sh(ignoring him walks out to search 4 suks)Suks?..

Karan follows her and both of thm search for Sukriti.Canteen....Nurse station...Reception area...Wards....

Sh:(geting worried)Iski to buht pehle se aadat hai...jab bhi upset hoti hai..pata nai kahan bhaag jaati hai..ab ro rahi hogi.....Great!my friend needs me and i dont even knw whr to find her!(sighs)
Ka:I think i knw whr she might be...
Sh:Kahan?

He takes her to the fireescape...but no sign of Sukriti...Shilpa gives him a serious+sarcastic look...

Sh:kya kaha tha tumne?(imitating him)''I think i knw whr she might be'' Mister ''i knw evrything in the whole wide world''?!
Ka:Wht?...u cant get a better place to be alone thn the fire-escape...!
Sh:Well wht dya knw?...wo yahan nai haina..!
Ka:Han to mujhe kya pata tha?!
Sh:(geting tired of ths)(sighs)Karan dekho...plz..ab..mujhe koi argument nai karni..ye baat hum dono acchi tarah jaante hain ke Suks buht upset hai...aur woh bhi humari fights hi ki waja se.to lets just nt fight again ok?
Ka:hmm...yea...guess ur rite!lets go..
Sh:kahan par jayenge?
Ka:Wht if wo sanjeevani men na ho?
Sh:Hey..terrace par to nai check kia!oh shit!men kaise bhool gayi..agr wo kahin hogi to terrace par hi hogi...
Ka:How can u say tht?
Sh:er..ahem!shayd tum bhool rahe ho ke woh meri bestfriend hai..ofcourse i knw her na?!
Ka:Oh yea..ok!lets go thn...

They go to the terrace but still no Sukriti...This hurts Shilpa alot...she calls out..

Sh:Suks!...suks...are u here?...suks!(she sighs again n thn in a low tone)Suks...m sorry yar...agey se nai hoga..pakka wada plz...look m apologizing...tumhe pata haina men kitna kum apologize karti hoon...par dekho men tumse sorry bol rahi hoon..plz 4giv me...(she sits down on the floor..she's so upset tht she gets to begging)suks plz yar..dont do this to me...atleast saamne to ajao..we cant talk it out..plzz...

She closes her eyes in pain whn a hand of sympathy touches her shoulder..she looks up to find Karan looking at her as if he could feel the way she was feeling rite nw...

Ka:Relax..it'l be alrite...
Sh:(wid teary eyes)pata nai kahan chali gai wo...
Ka:(sits down wid her)She'l be f9 shilpa...dont cry...
Sh:(lies)im nt crying..im just worried ke wo kahan gai..thts it!
Ka:(chuckles humorlessly)relle?i can see tht!..(politely)atleast is waqt to egos side par rakhlo..
Sh:(sighs n rubs her face once wid both her hands)its my fault...shayd mene usey zyada presurize karlia...
Ka:Nops its nt..its my fault actually..u gals were gona hav a gr8 tym...mujhe yahan nai ana chahiye tha..i just thot i wud join in...but...u were gona do tht 2 makeup 4 ur fight aur mene aakar sab bigaad dia...
Sh:Nahi karan...its my fault...mujhe tum dono ki friendship se koi problem nai hona chahiye tha...aftrall..if im hr friend iska matlab ye nai hai ke wo koi aur friend nai bana sakti...
Ka:wo to hai...but...galati meri bhi hai...mujhe tum dono ki friendship ke beech ana hi nai chaiye tha...
Sh:Karan i dint knw ke usey itna bura lagega...fight mene start ki thi...i shud hav been more sensible...
Ka:Stop blaming urself 4 evrythng ok?.....actually sach to ye hai...galati hum DONO ki hai...aur Sukriti hum DONO ki waja se gussa hui hai...
Sh:Karan wo chahti hai hum friends ban jayen...but..but...we CANT be FRIENDS...i mean..i cant be friends wid U!
Ka:Hmm...same here(normally)
Sh:tum kyun nai?
Ka:I dun knw...tum kyu nai?
Sh:Well...i dun knw either...mayb becoz...i dont WANT to..i mean i dun knw y but...i dun WANA be ur friend...
Ka:Hey!same here...

(The situation,in short,clarifies tht they'r confused abt sumthng...they'r nt fighting nor arguing but talking as if thy'r alredy gr8 buddies and are discussing sum problm 2gethr but thy dun wana be friends! :) )

Sh:IDEA!
Ka:Are u thinking wht im thinking?
Sh:Mayb..well..the solution is...lets NOT be friends!
Ka:(joyfully)EXACTLY!lets just nt be friends...bas hum..er hum...kya ban kar rahenge?
Sh:(as if 4goten all the sadnes and got into sumthng interesting)wahi to!hum KUCH BHI NAI ban kar rahenge...
Ka:Kya?
Sh:Exactly!...hum ek doosre ke kuch bhi nai hain...na dost na dushman!
Ka:Correct!hum ab ek doosre se koi matlab hi nai rakhenge..i mean except 4 colleagues...obviously!
Sh:RIGHT!na baat na fights!
Ka:Exactly!
Sh:To wht say?deal?(raising her hand upto him)
Ka:(taking it)DEAL!

They shake hands wid big victory smiles on their faces...Suddenly Sukriti comes outta no whr and amazes thm..

Sh:(surprised)SUKS!(runs upto her and hugs her..thn parting away holds her hands)Kahan chali gai thi tum?
Suk:Main?..main firescape men thi..
Ka:HA HA...dekha!...i told u wahin par hogi..!but Sukriti humne wahan dekha tha...
Suk:Yea...mene tum dono ki awaaz suni..so i hid myslf..
Sh:Wht?to phir tum yahan?..
Suk:I kept following u guys...(gives a cute apologetic look whn shilpa grimaced at her)sorry!
Sh:u knw hw i was like?...(tears cuming back)
Suk:I knw!..but i had to do this...im sorry!shilpa...karan...thank u soooooooooo much!
Ka/Sh:4 wht?
Suk:Abhi jo tum dono ne kia...friendship na sahi but atleast u guys apologized to each othr n decided to end up the riots!thanks alot..!u were a real headache u knw tht!

The three of them gigle!

@@NEXT MORNING@@
NURSE STATION-DUTIES!

Shweta-Amit: children's ward
Drushti-pankit: General ward 2
Karan-mayank: OPD
Suks-sunaina-jenifer: general ward
Shilpa assisting Dr.Keerti in delivery.

@@Children's ward@@
Shweta is checking her patient when she feels as if sum1 was looking at her.She looks here and there but on finding no one she gets back to her work.Again she gets the same feeling and checks the place but no success.She feels quit wierd.Thn suddenly all the kids start laughing.

Shw:(Confused)kya hua?...tum log huns kyun rahe ho?
Kids:Sirf aap hi kaam kar rahi ho..bhaiya to kuch kaam hi nai karte..matlab is baar intern of the month didi lejayengi..hahaha...

She looks at Amit who is now blushing n looks down.She gestures at him saying ''whts wrong?'' and he replies as ''nufin i dun knw wht they'r talking abt''

Shw:(to one of the kids)Hey...kya hua?
Kid:Didi bhaiya to kabse aapko hi dekhe jarahe hain..lagta hai unhe kaam nai karna ata isiliye aapse seekh rahe hain..

She blushes within herself and then softly replies to the kid..

Shw:Nai to...aisi koi baat nai...Dr.Amit buht ache doctor hain..

Kid(Shouting to other kids)Ooooh to matlab aag dono taraf lagi hui hai...(they all laugh)
Shw:(trying to hide her blush)Shh..shor mat karo..warna agar Dr.keerti agayi to...
Kid:(interupting)To aap logon ka bhaanda phoot jayega haina?hahaha

Both Shweta and Amit blush.Then Amit gestures again to Shweta saying 'i'll be waiting 4 u outside''..She nods...

Some time later....

Shweta comes out of Children's ward and looks for Amit.She asks Jenifer.

Shw:Hey Jen..tumne Amit ko kahin dekha hai?
Jen:Han wo terrace ki taraf gaya hai...kafi jaldi men tha aur muskura raha tha...mene poocha to kehne laga ke ''aj kuch buht bada karne jaraha hoon...jo meri life badal dega''...isn't tht strange?
Shw:(Confused)Wht?
Jen:Yhea..wierd!..wese tum kyun poochrahi ho?
Shw:Nnai kuch nai..(leaves)

Terrace:

The terrace was very dark and empty whn Shweta gets there.This surprises her.She calls out..

Shw:Amit?..u thr?...er...hhello?!..look agar tum yahan par ho to plz bahar ajao..mmujhe andhere se darr lagta hai...

''Main tumhara har darr dur karsakta hoon..har problem solve karsakta hoon..har gum mita sakta hoon...zindagi bhar khush rakh sakta hoon...har akelepan men tumhara sath nibha sakta hoon..bas badle men sirf ek hi cheez maangta hoon tumse...''

He comes out from behind a wall and confronts her.Suddenly evrything brightens up.The place decorated with balloons and flowers.A complete romantic atmospere.Suddenly cold winds start blowing.He moves away a lock of her hair from her cheek.

Amit:Tumhara saath!
Shw:(having no words)Amit...?!
Amit:(gently caressing her cheek)Kya tum mera saath dogi Shweta?
Shw:(eyes closed)mmm...Amit main...(gently nods)
Amit:(Hugging her)I LOVE YOU SHWETA!
Shw:(tears in her eyes and smile on her lips)I i love u 2 Amit..(cries)
Amit:(confused)kya hua?
Shw:Kkuch nai...Amit?
Amit:Hmm..
Shw:Mujhe buht khushi horahi hai..
Amit:Mujhe bhi..
Shw:Amit..main..main kuch kehna chahti hoon..lekin...samajh nai araha ke kaise kahoon...
Amit:(parting away holding her face again)Kaho..
Shw:Amit..men 19 yrs ki thi..jab mere parents ka divorce hogaya..tabse lekar mere life men sirf ek hi insaan hai jo mere liye mera sab kuch hai..aur wo..mera best friend hai..Karan!...tumse pehle meri life men uske ilawa aur koi bhi nai tha..
Amit:(still confused)To?
Shw:(hesitant)To..to main bas tumhe batana chahti thi ke..main...i love you but Karan mera best friend hai aur wo mere liye buht important aur..aur...i cant part wid him agar tum mujhe kahoge phir bhi nai!
Amit(surprised)Kya?..Shweta?..mene tumse kab kaha ke tum Karan ke sath mat raho?
Shw:(feeling stupid)(sighs)Kuch nai..wo..actually kuch baat thi..isiliye mene socha...ke main clear karloon...aagey ke liye!
Amit:(chuckles)Shweta...i knw Karan is ur friend..
Shw:(Interrupting)Bestfriend!
Amit:Yea ok...bestfriend!..aur mujhe tum dono ki friendship se na koi problem hai..aur na kabhi hoga..
Shw:Sure?
Amit:Sure!
Shw:(sighs again)I m sorry Amit...i knw tumhe thoda silly lag raha hoga..par..mera tumse ye kehna zaroori tha...wo main waqt aane par tumhe batadoongi...
Amit:mujhe bhi tumse kuch kehna tha...meri life men bhi koi buht important hai...im sory but jo shayd tumse bhi buht zada important hai..
Shw:(worried)Kaun?
Amit:(chuckles)Mera bhai...Arjun!
Both of them laugh..soon their pager rings and they both are called for a meeting..

@@Locker room@@
All interns are in the locker room whn Amit and Shweta get in holding hands.As soon as they see evry1 they leave each other's hand.

Pan:Hey guys!
Shw:Hey Pankit..tum log sab yahan par aise kyun bethe ho?
Pan:Kaise kyun bathe ho?
Shw:I mean..
Amit:She means aise kyun bethe ho jaise meeting ''hall'' men nai yahan par ho?
Ka:Meeting yahin par hai!
Shw:Karan..yahan par?
Dru:Han yahin par..oye hum logon ne hi tum dono ko page karke bulaya tha..

Amit makes a face.

Shw:Oh..acha..kyun?
Jen:Wo actually Shweta..hum soch rahe the ke kal sunday hai..
Amit:To?
Suk:Arey sunday hai..
Sh:Matlab holiday hai...
Pan:Matlab chutti hai..
Sun:Matlab Aaram ka din hai..
Dru:Matlab 'no kaam' ka din hai..
All:MATLAB MASTI KA DIN HAI!

Amit and Shweta exchange glances and then look at the others questioningly..

May:guys zada confusing mat bano..bechaaron ki shakal to dekho..
Ka:Abey yaar..Shweta hum log soch rahe the ke..kyunki sunday hai..chutti ka din hai masti ka din hai..to kyun na hum log ye weekend kahin bahar jaye..u knw enjoyment ke liye...
Jen:Picnic ke liye..!
Shw:(liking the idea)Yhea sure..great idea guys!
Sh:Chalo phir kal milte hain..picnic spot par..
Ka:Actually i think hum basket ball court ke bahar milte hain phir saath men chalengey wht say?
Sun:Thts cool..
Suk:Well thn guys we gota go kal milte hain..basketball court ke bahar.
Amit:(whispers into shweta's ear)main tumhe pick karne aonga..
Ka:Shweta main tumhe pick karloonga ok?
Shw:(hesitantly)Er..ok!

Amit makes a face and thn they all leave.

Precap:
Sh:hey guys...look!..ROLLER COASTER!
Ka:Dare to?
Sh:Done!



And the coaster runs off track...
Sh:KARAAAAAANNNN.......!!!!!

Hope u guys liked this one....
waiting 4 response..
Take care..
loads of love,
Keddie :P

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Part 1 - 2: Love Story

Hey guys thanks for the encouraging comments. I really liked them but i am a little upset because u guys didn’t give me any suggestions plz give me ur suggestions anyway i hope u like this next part. Guys just have to say one more thing that i am taking abhi nikki out of the story for now but i will put them in later.

Part 1

Guy: didn’t u hear what she said.....leave her now.
Vivek: Mind ur own business and leave can’t u see i am busy with this beauty (he laughs wickedly)

The guy turns Vivek around and punches him hard on the stomach. Vivek falls over and all the other guys run away. The guy sees Riddhima crying and runs to her. She is crying.

Guy: r u ok......listen plz stop crying
Riddhima just turns around and hugs him. She feels secure and safe in his arms. He also feels this weird feeling but chooses to ignore it. they both realized what they were doing and jumped apart.

Riddhima: um...ahhh thanks
Guy: no problem.......by the way my name is Armaan.
Riddhima: hi i am Riddhima
Armaan: so what say friends
Riddhima: Sure and thanks again
Armaan: Dosti main no sorry no thank u
Riddhima just smiles: so what class r u going to
Armaan: Anatomy
Riddhima: me to why not go together

Armaan smiles and they walk towards class. They reach the class and see Aditya and Sanjana sitting together and walk to them.

Rid: hey adi...this is armaan
Adi: oh hi.......but when did u guys meet???
Rid: well actually (she narrates the whole incident)
Adi; thanks so much armaan
Arm: come on yaar i told riddhima to dosti main no sorry no thank u
They all smile and attend the class.

NOW A FEW MONTHS HAVE PASSED AND RIDZI ADI SANJANA AND ARMAAN HAVE BECOME BEST FRIENDS.

The day is over and now armaan is playing in the basketball court. Riddhima comes looking for him but she accidentally gets hit in the head with a ball.

Rid: armaan u moron why did u hit me with the ball.
Arm: oh hello i didn’t mean to it was an accident
Rid: yeah right y do u even try u no that u will never beat me......
Arm: oh yah
Rid: yah
Arm: so lets have a match
Riddhima: sure get ready to loose Mr. Armaan Malik
Arm: but wait this wont be interesting without a bet.
Rid: fine what’s the bet???
Arm: u have to dance in front of the whole school tomorrow in the cafeteria.
Rid: What armaan r u insane???
Arm: awww r u scared???
Rid: no way but if i win then u have to dance.
Arm: fine


Part 2

They start the match. The score is tied and time is almost up but at the end moment armaan shoots and scores. He wins the match.

Arm: so Ms. Basket get ready to dance.
Rid: wait what did u call me
Arm: (simply) basket cause u r pretty good at basketball......but not better than me
Rid: well don’t get to overconfident cause i let u win.
Arm: oh really well doesn’t matter cause u lost. LOSER!!!

But before Ridzi could react armaan ran away from the court. But Riddhima had a plan form in her mind.

Rid: well Mr. Armaan Malik if i have to dance in front of the school so do u (she laughs and walks away)

Next Day

Everyones in the lunch room along with adi and sanj casue they were also informed about the bet. Suddenly the lights go off and when they open them they see Riddhima standing on a table.

The song starts

People on the floor (riddhima starts snapping)
Come and get some more
People on the floor
Take it away
Dhanno oh dhanno oh dhanno dhanno hey (riddhima starts dancing)
Oh dhanno oh dhanno oh dhanno
Main raaj dilon pe karti hoon
Mannchaley hai dhanno naam mera
Dhanno oh dhanno oh dhanno dhanno hey
Yeh soch ke mushkil badh gayi hai
Jaaney kya hoga hashr tera
Dhanno oh dhanno oh dhanno dhanno hey
Merey nooraani chechrey se
Na teri nazar hategi
Na terey din guzreingey
Na teri raat kategi kategi kategi (she pulls Armaan and Aditya in)
Apni to jaisey taisey (they both start dancing)
Thodi aisey ya waisey kat jayegi
Oh Apni to jaisey taisey
Thodi aisey ya waisey kat jayegi
Aapka kya hoga janaab-e-aali
Aapka kya hoga
Apney aagey na peechhey
Na koi upar neechey
Roney wala na koyi roney wali
Janaab-e-aali aapka kya hoga
People on the floor (the three pull sanjana in)
O bheedh mein tanhayi mein
Raat ki parchhayi mein
Raha na dil ka panchhi kahin akela re
Dhanno oh dhanno oh dhanno dhanno hey (Sanjana also starts dancing)
Haan haseenaon ka main banda
Mohabbat mera dhanda
Merey aagey peechhey
Pariyon ka mela re
Ho merey baad diwaaney tujhko
Na koyi aur jachegi
Na terey din guzreingey
Na teri raat kategi kategi kategi (Armaan and Riddhima have an eye-lock)
Haye apni to jaisey taisey (they start dancing again)
Thodi aisey ya waisey ho
Apni to jaisey taisey
Thodi aisey ya waisey kat jayegi
Aapka kya hoga janaab-e-aali
Aapka kya hoga
Apney agey na peechhey
Na koyi upar neechey
Roney wala na koi roney wali
Jaanb-e-aali aapka kya hoga
People on the floor
Come and get some more
People on the floor
Come and get some more
People on the floor
Come and get some more
Ho sach apney baaret mein
Fikar na kar tu meri
Main to udhta phirta awaara baadal re
Dhanno oh dhanno oh dhanno dhanno hey
Haye jawaani dhal jayegi
Baad mein pachhtayegi
Milega na koyi mera jaisa pagal re
Mujhsey milney jhulney ki
Na teri pyaas hategi
Na terey din guzreingey
Na teri raat kategi kategi kategi
Apni to jaisey taisey
Thodi aisey ya waisey
Apni to jaisey taisey
Thodi aisey ya waisey kat jayegi
Take it away
Aapka kya hoga janaab-e-aali
Aapka kya hoga
Aapka kya hoga janaab-e-aali
Aapka kya hoga
People on the floor
Come and get some more
People on the floor
Come and get some more
People on the floor
Come and get some more
People on the floor (The song is over and the four are standing in a pose)


The song is now over and everyone is clapping. Riddhima Armaan smile at each other then the four share a group hug.


Hey guys I hope u liked it. I tried my best but i know there might be to many details in the first part but the next part is going to be more interesting because i just wanted to show the friendship between the 4 characters.

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Dill Mill Gayye July 15 Episode

Serial: Dil Mil Gaye (Dill Mill Gayye)
Channel : Star One

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Love Story: Character Sketch

Okay guys before i start i just want to say that i am not a good writer and i am not good at writing in hindi. So this ff will be mostly in english but it will try to make it very fun and entertaining for u to enjoy. So wish me luck and i hope that i can live up to the expectations of the great writers on this blog. So here is the character sketch and part 1.

Character Sketch

Armaan Malik: cool smart and handsome just like in DMG



Riddhima Gupta: is a little different then she is in DMG. She is sweet, caring, acts like a kid at times and she wears modern outfits.



Aditya Gupta: Riddhima’s twin brother, but he is 2 minutes older than her. He is smart, caring, handsome and most of all he loves his sister.



Sanjana Kapoor: She is also a modern girl and has been Riddhima’s best friend since they were little kids. She is sweet, caring, and pretty.









Raj Malik: He is Armaan’s cousin, but they are like best friends. He is not at all like his character. He is sweet, caring and handsome, s lot like Armaan.




Nikkita Malhotra: She is just like her character in DMG.









Preview:

We see a car entering Sanjeevani Medical University (SMU). Out of the car comes Aditya, Riddhima and Sanjana. Suddenly Sanjana stops.

Adi: What’s wrong????
Sanj: I forgot my purse
Adi: okay no problem let’s go and get it/

Adi and Sanjana walk away and Riddhima heads towards class. On her way their she sees a gang of senior boys. She tries to avoid them but a guy holds her hand.

Rid: what do u think ur doing. leave me right now Mr. who ever u r.

Guy: My name is Vivek and how can i leave such a pretty girl. (he laughs wickedly)

Rid: (on the verge of tears) plz leave me.

At that moment Vivek feels a strong hand on his shoulder.

Guy: didn’t u gear her she said. leave her now.


ok guys hope u liked it. I will not continue unless i get responses. and i bet u all have probably guessed who the person is. anyway please comment. i will take any suggestions, sarcasm or anything.

Saira

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Part 5: Love not at First Sight

hey guys, thx alot 4 ur comments,it really means alot ,these all appreciation goes to the real author, i m really thankfull to the author 4 giving me the opportunity to post this beautifull ff here.

PART 5

"WHAT?...." armaan yelled as rahul nodded…

"you are seriously joking ….right" armaan looked at him in disbelief after what rahul told him…

"armaan..first of all I never crack serious jokes and secondly..look at me ..you think I am joking right now..i am damn serious…"

"but still rahul…I don't think…I mean what you are saying is utterly rubbish..how can this be possible…riddhima and all this stuff…its nonsense…rahul and I don't believe it.."

"okay so do one thing.....just ask her these questions and wait for her reaction..if she gets nervous and panics you'll get your answer…" rahul said as armaan nodded ..but still somewhere he wasn't satisfied with rahul…

As soon as he reached home..he grabbed riddhima's hand and making her sit in front of him he looked straight in her eyes as riddhima looked around feeling awkward with the sudden closeness…

"armaan…everything ok?.." she asked as armaan shook his head..

"what's wrong?.." she asked keeping her hand on his cheek as armaan saw the concern in her eyes. He felt good seeing her concern for him when all of a sudden rahul's picture came in front of him…

"rahul just leave…" he said as riddhma looked at him with a confused face…

"rahul?.." she asked turning around looking everywhere…

"oh I am sorry riddhima…I was just thinking about something….just leave it… "

"okay"..riddhima said and stood up as armaan but armaan grabbed her hand and made her sit ….

"riddhima..can I ask you something…I mean don't take it in a wrong way.." he looked at her to see her nodding her head…

"riddhima..how should I start??…" he said looking around playing with his fingers..he was hell lot of nervous and riddhima sense that…seeing his hands shaking she kept her hands on his as she herself was surprised at her actions…

"armaan please say…now you are making me nervous…"….

"okay…" he said and he closed his eyes taking a deep breath he looked at her looking at him….

"riddhima..vo…actually…rahul was saying…I mean I don't believe him at all but you know… do you believe in voodoo and black magic…."….he blurted out and waited for her response…riddhima frowned hearing him .. armaan tried reading her facial expression… "she is behaving just the opposite of what rahul said …she isn't panicking at all…instead she is looking so calm and composed..what should I do now…should I leave?...or should i…" he came out of his thoughts when he saw her laughing looking at him….

"armaan you are joking right…" …she asked him still laughing…

"she thinks I am joking… this is all his fault ..rahul I am gonna kill you tomorrow ..i shouldn't have even asked for his help … just coz of him I made a joke of myself…and she is laughing at me…but she is looking soooo…what am I thinking..no way me and her..and I am just helping her…she consider me as her friend..and me too but then why do I feel good when she is happy and …"….

"armaan what are you thinking?…"

"no..nothing riddhima…can I ask one more question?…" he asked as she nodded…

"it's about my friend…I don't know what wrong with him..but since the past few days he is going insane ..i mean he met someone and helped her and now he is seeing her everywhere…even in his dreams …wherever he looks he just sees her… day –night…as in it's just her and her…what is happening to him and how should I help him?…" .. although he never wanted to discuss this with her but seeing no option available he asked her..some where he felt maybe only she can help him….he looked at her and saw her smiling at him… "what's so funny in this?…I am asking for her help and she is smiling" he thought looking at her….

"armaan…your friend is in love…." Armaan looked at her in shock.. "this means I am in love…but how can this be possible…I can never fall in love…but…" riddhima looked at him ..he was in shock…riddhima tried talking to him but seeing no response she shook her head, got up and went to the bedroom as she was tired ....armaan didn't even stopped her as he was still in shock and came out of it when his phone started vibrating… looking at the caller he fumed in anger…and switched off his cell…

He looked around and not seeing her he went to the bedroom but stopped at the door…riddhima was standing in front of the mirror looking at herself and smiling…she touched her stomach and the glow on her face bought a smile on his face….she was turning sideways keeping her hands on her belly, taking to her baby and smiling….he moved closer to her and stood behind her and watched her making all those cute funny expressions… riddhima had no idea when armaan came and stood behind her but stopped when she felt armaan's hand on her belly ..she looked above and saw him holding her from back ..his chin on her shoulder and he had locked his fingers with hers on her belly….

"armaan what..what are you doing?…" she asked stumbling with her words as she got scared with was armaan was doing…

"riddhima…you know…" he said kissing her on her neck as her body got stiffed at this sudden close proximity… "my friend whom I was talking about…I was talking about myself and I am in love with you…" he said as riddhima stood at the spot shocked. Releasing herself from his grip she turned around and gave a tight slap on his face….

"ouch…." Armaan rubbed his cheek as riddhima turned around and saw him standing at the door…

"armaan..are you okay…" she asked coming closer to him…

"riddhima why did you slapped me.. I was just…."

"I slapped you?…are you all right?... "

Armaan looked at her and realized he was dreaming.. "thank god it is a dream…" he thought as he looked at her confused face…. he smiled at his stupidity and saying good-night went to the couch..while riddhima stood at the door still trying to figure out what is wrong with him…

Armaan laid on the couch as riddhima words kept ringing in his head… "she said I am in love… am i?… I don't know..i am still confused but I do like her..yes I like her but love her?.. what is happening to me?...i mean me and her..she doesn't even think about me in that sense..i am just helping her but I do feel attracted towards her… I like spending time with her..being with her..even in office I am always thinking about her…why is she affecting me so much?..i can't think of something else..it's just riddhima everywhere…what should I do?...maybe I should wait for few more days…it just infatuation nothing else….yes armaan you are not in love…it's just an attraction..nothing else.. yes it 's just an attraction…yes it's just…oh god help me …guide me..give me some signal like always..i need you…I am closing my eyes now and by the time I get up please god give me a signal…I am waiting.."

Next morning armaan woke up late as the whole night he couldn't sleep how much he tried…he looked at the clock and seeing the time he ran to the bathroom and freshen up..he came out and saw his dress and everything on the bed…he got dressed up and as he came out of the room he saw riddhima making breakfast for him….

"I am sorry riddhima…" he said as riddhima bought the breakfast on the table…

"sorry for what armaan…" she asked as she sat next to him..

"you need to take rest and coz of me you have to get up and make breakfast.. . I promise from tomorrow I'll get up on time…"riddhima smiled as she served food to him…

"armaan I like doing this..and don't say sorry this is nothing to what you have done for me… and please let me do this for you… please.."

"but riddhi…"…

"armaan please…" she pleaded looking at him and armaan felt good ..after so many years someone was there to take care of him… he spent his whole life in the hostel and when his mom died there was no one to take care of him..although rahul and his family took him with them but the emptiness was still there.. and today when riddhima asked him..he felt complete…but deep down he know that once she is stable in her life she'll gonna leave him like everyone else and this is what feared him the most…. He came out of his thoughts as the door bell rang…riddhima stood up to open the door but armaan grabbed her hand and making her sit went himself to open the door coz he know who is at the other side….

He opened the door and seeing rahul standing at the door closed the door on his face….rahul rang the bell once again and how much he didn't wanted to see his face he had to as riddhima was there and he didn't wanted to create any scene in front of her….he opened the door and before he could say something rahul entered his house…

"what was that..?"… rahul asked entering the room as armaan was trying his best to control his temper….

Riddhima looked at them and seeing the awkwardness between them excused herself and left the two…

"what was that..?...you are asking me…and what about you…black magic ..voodoo…" armaan said narrowing his eyes as his anger reached its boiling point….

"see I was right..it's black magic isn't…" rahul still didn't got what armaan was trying to say….

"you know rahul..asking you for help is the biggest mistake I always do..till now it's a record you have never ever given me a correct solution..and this time too it 's the same….black magic…I still can't believe I even agreed for all this…thank god I didn't stretched this before riddhima got suspicious…."….

"what…?..this isn't black magic then what is this… maybe…it is……"….he was cut off by armaan…

"ARRGGHH….shut up…just shut up…don't you dare open your mouth…" he said stuffing his mouth with food …..

"thanks…" rahul said biting the food as he walked behind him…

"she said I am in love…" armaan said his back towards rahul as rahul threw the food out of his mouth…

"WHAT?..." rahul said and turning him around looked at his face…."you are not serious right…"…rahul was stunned hearing this…

"rahul I am serious she said I am in love…"

"and did you told her that you I mean…"

"no I said my friend is having this problem and she said he is in love…."

"oh..so what next..you think you are in love…" rahul asked looking at armaan who was confused himself…..

"I don't know….i was thinking maybe I should wait for few days..after that maybe…."

"armaan I was thinking…."he stopped as armaan glared at him….

"never ever use your brain rahul..your brain is nothing but a piece of garbage…."

"oh really …prove it…" rahul said as armaan shook his head…

"no.. no… just tell me..i am waiting…."

"forget it rahul.. we are already for office…."he said picking up his bag but rahul stopped him…

"no armaan I want to know….tell me…"…he said grabbing his hand…

"you want to know…then listen …remember when we were in school and you told me this girl in our class liked me…as she was always looking at me…"..

"oh that one…yeah I remembered…she liked you…so…"…

"in a brotherly way as I looked like his brother and coz of you I made a fool of myself as I proposed her …and in return I got a tight slap from her…." he said as rahul laughed looking at him…

"but that was just one time.. after that…"…

"don't you make me open my mouth …. what about after that….coz of your stupidity everyone thought I was gay… my half college life got wasted in explaining everyone that I am not gay….it all happened coz of you …."…

"oh that wasn't my mistake you know I was told to pretend that I am gay and chose my partner and as I knew only you I made you my partner…it wasn't a big deal…."

"not for you but for me it was…and this time I don't want to take any chance…so let me do it my way…got it…"….rahul nodded

"fine armaan so that means you love riddhima…right…"

"I don't know if I love her or …." Armaan stopped when he saw riddhima standing at the door…

End of part 5

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