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hey guys this ff has been written by rucha.
i just wanted to know if have read it or not. becoz its very nice .i f you have not read it thyen i will post it here but if u all dont want then plz do tell.
i just wanted to share some nice ff with you al
It would be a Mini FF.., It would be a serious one.. you've read AR romancing nd fighting for their love or relationship ibut here you'll see them standing against eachother , revenging for the betrayal they've faced years ago.. but the truth remains hidden from them untill the only common relationship in their lives is at stake..
He sat there in his house hugging his one day old daughter nd crying his eyes out.. He has got the biggest affront of his life today.. his girlfriend or we can say his Ex-would-be-wife has broken all her ties with him nd his daughter.. she was heartless enough to not even look their daughter's face once.. "Main tumhe kabhi maaf nahi karunga.. bhula dunga uss jhoote pyar ko jo kabhi tumne mujhse kiya thha.. aur apni beti ko lekar yahan se bohot dur chala jaunga.. jahan iss pe na tumhara nd tumhare papa ka sayaa bhi padega.." he said cursing her under his breath nd remembering their last meeting at the hospital..
He had waitied for this baby girl like anything nd she wasn't even ready to accept her.. he was then recollecting all the time they had together ever.. He was brought back on Earth when the baby started to cry in his arms.. he quickly got her milk bottle nd craddled her to sleep.. since the first minute she was born she has only felt love in her father's embrace so she was clam with in a few minutes.. Armaan silently put her in the crib nd kissed her head lovingly..
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Saturday, May 1
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Hey guys this is the last part of belonging. Actually it was a one shot ff written by someone I don’t know but I m giving this end to this story with the help of some other ff .
Becoz we all know that love is above everything but in our society marriage is considered everything especially the respect of our parent, so here it goes.
After the scene in party the new intern gang dropped ridz home as armaan can’t go and tell shashank what all has happened in the party nor anyone else so they quietly dropped her home. The other side armaan was really happy but was tensed too that how shashank will react to this but his happiness knew nobounds. The other side sid was feeling like killing himself but at that tine the intern gang help him to understand the situation through which AR and their love had gone through but he was not ready tounderstand anything.
The next day when ridz woke up, her head was thumping like anything;
Ri: aaaahhhhh, ,mera sir……….
Then she looked around and found herself in her room
Ri: main.. yahan kaise. Then she remembers what she had done in the party. Tears started flowing down from her eyes.
Ri: ye maine kya kar diya…………….. jo baat maine apne dil ke andar dabaa kar rakha thaw o maine sab ke saamne keh diya.
Ab main kaise sab ke saamne jaaungi. Nahi main sabse keh doongi ki maine nashe me wo sab kaha tha par armaan mai uska saamna kaise karungi.
Ridhima ko kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha aise me usne padma se baat karma thek samjha.par jaise hi wo unke kamre ke baahar gayi usne suna
Sh: dekha padma, main kehta tha na ridhima humari izzat pe koi daag nahi lagne degi. Usne sid ke paas jaane ka sahi faisla liya hai.
Pa: ha shashank aap sahi hai, maine galat socha akhir main kaise bhul gayi ke ridhima me aapke sanskar hai wo koi aisa kaam nahi karegi jisse society me humari badnaami ho.
Ridhima heard all this and she ran to her room crying. Bohut sochne ke baad usne ek faisla liya
Sid is at home when his phone rings.
Siddhant meine apna decision le liya hai. Lekin mein chahti hu ki main tumhe aur armaan dono ko yeh decision saath mein sunau. Kya tum sanjeevani aa sakte ho?
h..hh..haan mein .. mein abhi ata hu bus 15 mins mein I'll be there.
On the other hand armaan gets similar call at his home from ridhima and even he says he'll be there in 15 mins.
Armaan and siddhant reach sanjeevani at the same time and after parking their vehicles they are about to enter the hospital when they saw an ambulance coming and they are shocked when they saw the patient. Yes it was riddhima who was bleeding heavily and really hurt. They both rush towards her and try to talk to her and call her name but she doesn't respond. Dr. Shubhankar checks her and recommends some tests. Within 20 mins the test results come and he check on riddhima again.
Its been an hour and armaan and siddhant are sitting outside riddhima's room waiting for dr. Shub to tell them about riddhima. Shashank, all interns, padma and nani all are there and atul, anji, rahul, muskan, abhi and nikki are all on their way as they have been informed of the situation before hand.
Dr. Shubhankar comes out and comes straight to armaan and sid.
Sir riddhima kaisi hai, woh theek toh hai na?
Kya hua sir,
Armaan tumhe yaad hai last time jab riddhima ko goli lagi thi toh it damaged her spine?
Kaise bhul sakta hu sir.
Uss baar tumhare jaane ke baad pata chala tha ki shayad riddhima kabhi theek nahi ho sakti lekin she recovered. But she was still weak aur aab iss baar phir se usi place par chot lagi hai. .... internal bleeding kafi hai, meine medicines di for it lekin she is not responding to them... aisa lag raha hai jaise use jena hi nahi hai
All are shocked and sid and armaan look at each other thinking the same thing "kya tha riddhima ka faisla?"
Ek option hai surgery ka lekin agar humne surgery ki koshish bhi ki toh riddhima ussi waqt apni akhri saans legi. She won't survive.
Toh surgery nahi hogi
Jee dr. Shashank, siddhant, armaan. Riddhima bhi yeh surgery nahi karana chahti, lekin phir internal bleeding rokne ka humare pass koi rasta nahi hai, aur maximum uske pass 1 and half hours hai.
All are speechless and there are tear tracks on everyone's faces.
Armaan, siddhant, riddhima sirf tum dono se milna chahti hai, jao woh tum dono ka intazaar kar rahi hai.
Both of them walk towards ridzi's ward and see her with her eyes closed and machines attached to her body, tears are flowing from armaan eyes and siddhant's eyes are wet but not as bad as armaan.
Both of them take a seat on each side of her, armaan to her right and siddhant to her left and both holds her hand. She opens her eyes and looks at both of them and smiles weakly at them.
Siddhant. thank you
Kis baat ke liye riddhima?
Mera saath den eke liye. Muje sambhal ne ke liye, apni dosti ke liye aur muje armaan ke bagair jeene ka hosla den eke liye. Siddhant, tum ek bohot ache insaan ho, ek bohot ache dost, *smiles at him and he smiles back* muje bohot khushi hai ki tum meri zindagi mein aye aur muje ek aise daur se bahar nikalne ki shakti di jo mere liye bohot mushkil tha. Aaj mein tumse kuch kehna chahti hu, mein tumse pyaar nahi karti, lekin tumhari mere dil ek khas jagah hai, aur mere liye tum mere sab se special friend ho, jisse mein kuch bhi keh sakti hu. I m sorry ki mein tumhare liye ek achi patni nahi ban payi.
Nahi riddhima tum ...
Nahi muje bol ne do. I m sorry, mein jaanti hu ke mere faisle se tumhe bohot takleef hogi lekin iss situation se bahar ane ka mere pass aur chara nahi tha, mein itni bhi bahadur nahi hu, jitna tum muje samajte ho *smiles weakly at him*
Armaaan (turning towards him with a smile)
Bas bohot bolti ho tum, abb chup chap araam karo tumhe aram ki zarurat hai, dekho kitni chot ayi hai tumhe,
Bilkul apna khayal rakhna nahi ata tumhe. Aab chup chap aram karo bateein hum baad mein kareinge jab tum theek ho jaogi.
Phir toh kabhi nahi ho sakti baatein.
Riddhima ye tum
Mere pass waqt bohot kam hai armaan
Muje bolne do, kabhi toh meri baat maan liya karo armaan
...nahi tumhe koi faisla karne ki zarurat nahi, har baat ka koi solution hota hai riddhima, hum sab mil ke iss baat ka solution nikalege, bass tum theek ho jao, u need to fight riddhima
Mein har gayi armaan, mein aab aur nahi lad sakti
Nahi, mujme ab aur ladne ki shakti nahi hai armaan, mein tut chuki hu. Aaj tak meri zindgi ke faisle dusro ne ya phir kismet ne liye hai, aur meine mane hai, lekin aaj kismet ko aur sab ko mera faisla maan na hoga. Armaan, I love u, I love you a lot. Tumhare ek faisle ne muje bohot dard diya, muje bohot shikayat hai tumse, *smiles* agar aaj mujme shakti hoti toh tumhari khub pitayi karti *both smiles* lekin tumne bohot der kardi, tum muje batao muje kya karna chahiye
Tumhe wohi karna chahiye jo tumhara dil kehta hai, tumhara dil kya kehta hai riddhima?
(closes her eyes and then smiles and opens them)
Mera dil kehta hai ki woh tumse bohot pyaar karta hai, aur tumhare bagair nahi reh sakta lekin, kehta hai ki tumhare liye woh siddhant ko dukhi nahi dekh sakta, itni himaat nahi hai usme. Woh kisi ko khushi dene ke liye kisi aur ko gam nahi de sakta.
Riddhima agar tum armaan ko chuno gi (if u choose armaan) muje gam nahi hoga I swear.
*ridz smiles at sidhant*
Sachai mein tumhari ankon mein dekh sakti hu siddhant... khair, mein keh rahi thi ki (*her breathing gets faster*) meine faisla kiya hai ki, mein tum dono mein se kisi ek ko choose nahi kar sakti. Tum dono mere liye khas ho aur tum dono ki mere dil ek khas jagah hai. I hope ki agle janam mein muje tum dono mein se ek ko choose nahi karna padega.*chuckles while both armaan and sid has fresh tears in their eyes, ridhzi is gasping for air* I am.. I am sorry mein har gayi. Mujme aur shakti nahi hai. Mein chahti hu ki tum dono khush raho
Nahi riddhima, iss armaan ki dhadkan, tumhari saanso se judi hai, mein tumhare bagair nahi jee sakta, plz aisa maat karo.
Armaan, I m sorry. ... can I have hug plz? Mein tumhari bahon mein safe mehsus karti hu, aur usi feeling ke saath jana chahti hu. Please?
*armaan has tears in his eyes but looks at sid who nods and then armaan puts his head near her cheek and arm around her neck while riddhima moves her face to touch armaan's face*
Its been almost an hour and 15 mins and they hear sid calling out riddhima's name and crying. Everyone goes in and finds armaan and riddhima in same position and ridhzi's face chows peace and contentment while armaan is not moving at all and his face is hidden in the nape of riddhima's neck. Everyone is crying and after 20 mins armaan still hasn't moved even an inch and sidhant is now crying silently and is looking at riddhima's face. Meanwhile atul moves over to armaan
Armaan, uth, dekh riddhima chali gayi hai, uth yaar, hum hai na tumhare saath dekh mein hu tera champ
But armaan doesn't respond so atul shakes him a bit and armaan falls over limply. Everyone panics and dr. Shubhankar checks his pulse and is shocked. He checks his breaths and his heart and his face pales and is now white as a sheet.
Armaan... armaan is no more.
Everyone is shocked and sid for the first time looks up and his face is gone white as sheet
Armaan sach keh raha tha, uski dhadkaan riddhima ki saanson se judi thi....
Everyone cries even more, sid moves out and is feeling very guilty. He sits in fire escape and feels that its bcz of him that riddhima had to do this, its all his fault. He keeps on blaming himself saying he shouldn't have entered riddhima's life when suddenly he sees riddhima and armaan. Both are holding hands and smiling
Siddhant muje khushi hai ki tum meri zindagi mein aye. Apne app ko dosh mat do, yeh mera faisla tha. Tumhara koi kasoor nahi hai. Meri manzil muje mil gayi *shows hers and armaans entwined hands* lekin tumhe abhi jeena hai, apne pyaar ke liye apne sache saathi ke liye. Woh aa rahi hai, use khush rakhna, aur khud bhi khush rehna. Aur haan mere aur armaan ke bare mein use zaroor batana.
Haan dude, aur agar nahi bataya na toh mein bhoot banker tumhe satane aunga. Aur jab armaan kisiko satane ki thaan leta hai na toh phir use koi nahi bacha sakta chaho toh kisi se bhi puch sakte ho jo muje mere internship ke dino mein janta tha*chuckles**even sid smiles at that*... but seriously dude. I wish ki hum kisi aur tarah mile hote aur hume kuch aur time saath mein milta, I would love to be your friend. Tum ek bohot ache friend ho and I m proud to know you.
armaan and riddhima disappears. Sid now doesn't blame himself but wishes to go away so he decides to go back to USA. And no one stops him. He is at air port after 2 days when he sees tamanna coming back and she is crying he goes to her and she cries saying that she didn't realise but she loved him and that her engagement is broken now. He hugs her and then after few months get married with the blessings of shashank. Sid and tamnna lived happily and somewhere up there 2 more people are happy for them. and yes sid did tell everything about AR to tammy and got friendly with the old intern gang and got to know about AR a lot and realised that they truely were soul mates and realised how pure riddhima's last decision was, and that she had planned her accident, as it was her who had called old intern gang to be there a few days before. She really did wanted to go, it made him realise that it really was her decision.
I m really sorry if I had hurt someones feeling. Once again I want to say that the starting of this part was written by me. The rest I had taken from another ff .
Thankyou very much for your comments.
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On your birthday,
I’m thinking about how much light and sparkle
you freely dispense wherever you go,
how your sunny smile lights up any gathering.
Every birthday marks another year
of you radiating positive, happy energy,
that infects all who come in contact with you.
May your next birthday find you the same--
glowing from within,
beaming bright joy on everyone you meet.
I feel blessed to know you.
A very very Happy Birthday to both of you... and may you have many many more!
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Heyy guys...i really did post a huge section last night. but sumhow it went missing. maybe its just the internet. but anyways. ive done it all over again, and made it better, hopefully. and will post part 4 soon as well. Hope u guys enjoy this.
Next Morning Sanjeevani:
Riddhima is hurrying up to Armaan’s cabin. How could she forget the report she was supposed to hand over the previous evening? Dr Keerti will really blast at them this time. Maybe if they could do it together right now, she wont have a huge fit! As soon as Riddhima reached Armaan’s cabin, she could sense that something wasn’t right. Something was missing. But she couldn’t put her finger on it. Shaking away the feeling, she proceeded to knock. After waiting for 10minutes, she pushed open the door, only to find the cabin empty of everything. No files, nothing. The desk was clear too, yet unknown to her, waiting for the next occupant.
R – Yeh Armaan bhi na!! kabh sudrega? Ek baar bhi time par nahin pohonchta. Khud ko sabkuch samjhta hai, lekin ek baar galti maan ne keliye tayaar nahin hota. Ufff..aaj toh sach main Dr keerti mera khoon kardegi! Kyunki voh master abhi bhi so raha hoga!
She hurried off to Dr Keerti.
Armaan’s House: (This part is different in the first draft, just thought of making it better. Armaan was waiting for Riddhima, but then it makes him sound like a slightly negative character splitting up Sid and Riddhima..hence I changed it. Hope its better..!)
Sorry basket. There was no way I could stay. Maybe you deserve a life without me. After reading that letter, you might forget me and move on. But I won’t ever forget you. With these thoughts, Armaan swept his eyes over the place he used to call home, turned and with tears threatening their entrance, locked the door of his house, his heart and his eyes. He then drove off to the bus stop without taking a last look at the city he once used to love.
Dr Keerti’s cabin
The sunlight seeped through the open windows lighting up the whole room. However, Riddhima was sat in a shadow, daring the sun rays to touch her. They hadn’t yet. Nor did they yesterday, or for the past month. Not since Armaan had gone from Riddhima’s life. Her thoughts were disturbed, as Dr Keerti entered her cabin.
Dr Keerti – Dr Riddhima aap yahaan? Itni subhah? Kuch kaam tha?
R – Haan voh actually…maam …voh kal ka case…voh reports…
Dr Keerti – Chinta mat keejiye, Armaan ne mujhe kal hi reports hand in kiya tha. (Adds to herself) aur ek bada sa shock bhi diya tha.
R – kya? Kal aapko reports hand in kiya tha? Toh abhi voh kahan hai?
Dr Keerti – Mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai. Shayad ek Doctor hoke nahin, lekin ek behen hoke toh zaroor. Voh, Dr Armaan ne resign kar liya.
The world stopped for Riddhima that moment. What? She thought. He left her! All over again! But this time she was prepared.
R – Voh hamesha jo karta aaya hai, khud ke liye kiya hai. Pehle bhi chod kar chalagaya, toh phir iss baar kyun nahin?
Dr Keerti – Voh bohot dukhi tha yahaan pe. Tum to jaanti ho na (puts her hand on Riddhima’s shoulder.)
R – Maine bhi kuch kam dukh nahin sahen.
Dr Keerti – theek hai. Lekin voh kahin bhi jaayega, voh sanjeevani ki koi clinic main kaam karega. Tum shayad jaanti ho kahan jaa sakta hai voh.
R – main nahin jaanti Armaan kahan jaa sakta hai. Naahi jaana chahtihoon. Voh jo bhi kare. Uski Marzi.
She ran out of the room, weeping at her fate. She couldn’t even blame him as such for leaving, because she knew how much pain he was going through watching her with someone else’s sindoor. But didn’t he know she needed him right now? She needed someone! And he left her!
Locker room: (This part was not here in the first draft)
Sid - Kya Armaan Sanjeevani ko shod kar chalagaya?
JP - Haan! Abhi voh tumhari aur riddhima flower ji ki zindagi se (whistles)..gayab..hain na jiggy?
Jiggy – (nods, his glasses falling off)
Sid – Lekin, iska matlab main aur Riddhima humesha saath rahenge? Armaan toh usse bohot pyaar karta tha.
Su – lekin jitna tum karte the, usse thoda kam. Voh jaan gaya ke mera superman jaisa bhai ke saamne koi nahin jeet sakta! Aakhir sachcha pyaar toh jeeta hain in the end!
Yuvi – Aur abh mere bhai, Riddhima sirf aur sirf tumhari hochuki! Jaa apne pyaar ka izhaar kar.
Naina disgusted at their talks gets up, slams the locker and walks out. What do they know about love? She was pretty sure Armaan’s love was ten times deeper than Sid’s. It takes a lot of courage to take that step. And who was Yuvi commenting about ‘pyaar ka izhaar’ when he himself had betrayed her this much? She walked past the nurse station, and the nurse called her.
Nurse – Naina maam.
Naina – haan? Kya baat hai?
Nurse – Yeh please Riddhima mam ko deedijiyega. Maine usse aaj subhah se nahin dekha. Lekin shayad aap dekha ho. Bohot urgent hai.
Naina – voh rahi. (pointing at Riddhima) main dedungi
Naina – Riddhima didi, aapke liye yeh hai.
Riddhima – yeh kya hai? (takes the brown envelope)
Naine – Mujhe nahin pata.
Riddhima opened the envelope, and the photos fell on the floor. The horror struck like lightning. The same photos which had tarnished her reputation! It all played like a movie in front of her. How everyone used to talk about her. How she tried and tried to plead innocence. How her father told her he believed her, but couldn’t do anything to prove Sid wrong. The same photos which were the reason Sid married her! It hit her!
Meanwhile, Naina bent down gathering up the photos to prevent people from seeing them. Amongst them she saw a letter. And after reading it, she passed it on to Riddhima. She had been right all along. Armaan had deep, deep love for her didi. And for that, she was happy. Riddhima came out of her reverie, as she took the letter. With one glance at the handwriting, she knew it was Armaan. Each word dug a sword deeper into her heart. She didn’t fail to notice some blotchesaround the paper.
Gussa mat ho, shayad akhri baar bula raha hoon. Toh tume pata chal gaya hoga. Main Sanjeevani se jaa raha hoon. Shayad kush hogi, ya dookhi. Lekin jaane se phle ek baat kehni thi. Tum hamesha khush raho. Haan meri baat alag hai. Lekin sid tumhe hamesha khush rakhega, aur jaise Dr Shashank ne kaha tha ‘tumhe meri tarha chod ke kabhi nahin jaayega’.
Aur, haan. Maine yeh photos kal dekhe the. Tujhe bore nahin karunga mera dukh describe karke. Main yeh nahin jaanta tha ki tum mujhe bhulane ke liye ek raat bitaa sakti thi Sid ke saath. Main jaanta tha ki tumhe bohot dukh huwa jab main tumhe chod ke chalagaya. Lekin kya tumhe humare pyaar par bharosa nahin tha ki tumne mujhe bhulane ke liye ek raat ek gaer mard ke saath bitaaya? Kya main kabhi meri basket ko chod kar jaa sakta hoon? Agar voh apahij hogayai to main zindagi bhar uske saath h chalta, taaki usse kabhi apne pairon ki kami na hoti! Lekin mujhe tumhe meri bhimaari ka dard nahin dena tha. Meri galti hai na?
Haan basket. Sab meri galti hai. Us din terrorists aaye the Sanjeevani main, meri galti. Main bhimaar hogaya, meri galti. Main tumhe tumhari liye chod ke chalagaya, meri galti. Main wapas tumhare liye aaya, meri galti. Maujhe pata nahin tha tumhaari shaadi hochuki hai, meri galti. Abh phir se main tumhe chod kar jaa raha hoon tumhari khushi ke liye, meri galti. Sab meri galti hai na?
Aur haan, ek vaada kiya tha tumse. Kahin vaade tod chukka hoon, lekin abh nahin. Uss din maine tumhe kahan tha ki main tumhe zarror bataunga ki main kyun tumhe aur Sid ko saath main dekhna chahta hoon. Tum dono ko saath dekhkar main kahin maut margaya. Jab main jaane wala tha yahaan se, mujhe Dr Shashank ne roka. Kaha tumhe himat chahiye apne ateet se ladne ke liye. Rukgaya tumhare liye. Ek din Dr shashank ne mujhe kaha tumhe Sid ko divorce dene se rokun. Usne kahan, main tumhari shaadi shuda zindagi barbaad kar raha hoon. Tumhari aur Sid ke ‘khushyan tod raha hoon’. Abh aur nahin. Mera vishwaas hi toot gaya hai. Khud se. mujhe nahin pata agar main Sanjeevani main rahunga mujhe aur kya kya dekhna aur sunna padega. Main jaa raha hoon Basket. Hosake toh mujhe maaf kardena, aur khush rehna. Bhulana itna mushqil nahin hoga.
Tumhara (jo kabhi tha)
The sky came crashing down upon Riddhima once she finished reading the letter. The world, which had once stopped spinning, was now swirling like a whirlwind, controlling her every move. Her muscles and brain froze, as she felt herself sway. Suddenly, a pair of arms caught her before she could hit the ground. Coming back to her senses she saw Sid. The care in his eyes was nothing compared to the love Armaan always had in his for her. How could she have been so blind? How could she not notice oceans of love swarming in those eyes?!
Sid – Tum theek toh ho na?
R – abh agar tumhare mahaan banne ka natak ho gaya, toh mujhe chodo please.
Sid – kya?
R – Maine kahan mujhe chodo. Humari laday ka anjaam, tumhaari bewakoofi! Tumhaari bewakoofi ka anjaam, humari shaadi! Humari shaadi ka anjaam, Armaan mujhe phir se chod kar chalagaya! Iska anjaam meri yeh halat! Thank you Sid. Kitne achche, mahaan pati ho tum!
She ran away. As far as she could from the man who had put her in this state. Nothing he did was ever right. He claimed to love her! And this is what his love was? Love she could never see? Just care? NO. Love was Armaan for her. Armaan was everything for her. And now because of her actions, and the photos and everything, Armaan had left her, thinking she had a better life without him. Little did he know that she didn’t exist if Armaan didn’t. Then why had she been so blind the past few weeks? And her father?! How could he stab Armaan like that? Stopping him from leaving at first, then blaming him for the divorce papers that SHE had signed? Hadnt he told her he would always be by her side? Whatever she did or chose? She broke down on the floor of her cabin cursing destiny, life and her own actions.
After some time she got up. Not anymore, she thought. She had to speak to her father right away! And she left to go home.
Precap - Riddhima and Sid seperate. And riddhima sees armaan everywhere.
Hope this was good enough for u guys. im really sorry abuot what happened yesterday. seriously. i was pretty peeved off after all my work went, so i couldnt start it all over again. after getting up i said i cudnt put it off anymore. so i restarted it, and enjoyed redoing it actually.! hope u guys enjoy reading it as well!!! :D Btw, i really didnt wanna change characters, becoz i wanted to make it like the present Dill Mill Gayye, coz if Sidma end up together (fingers crossed..HELL NOOO!!! PLEAASSEE NOOO!!) then this will be the ending in my head!
Many many many many many thanks to:
Hannah - i did not get a headache after reading ur post! it just put a HUGE smile on my face for the rest of the day!! (especially after such a crap afternoon i had had!)
for commenting. and all those likes. and silent readers. U guys just make me feel amazing about this whole thing.
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Sukriti and Pankit come outa the I.C.U after the surgery washing their hands
and start removing their surgery costumes.
Suk:Went quite gud rite?
Pan:(heaves a huge sigh of relief)yeah!
Suk:Relax Pankit..all's f9 now..patient ab bilkul theek hai aur kuch din men discharge bhi hojayega rite after sum final tests..
Pan:Han...yar...men to abhi bhi kaamp raha hoon...
Suk:kaamp rahe ho?kyun?
Pan:Pata nai...1st surgery yahan par...kuch galat hojata to puri internship ka impression kharaab hojata..aur points bhi nai milte..phir intern of the month to wese bhi gaya!!
Suk:(chuckles)Relax Pankit!ur taking it too hard!U knw jab bhi darr lage to aakhen band karke..sacche dil se ek baar khuda ko yaad karna chahiye..
Pan:Tumne bhi kia tha?
Pan:(kinda thotfully)Han han..isiliye to tumhe darr nai laga!
Pan:Arey..khuda se yaad aya..chalke ek baar khuda ko thank u karke atey hain..aakhir unhone hi to surgery ke tym par hamare dimaag aur hamare haath chalaye..tabhi to hum kaamyaab hue..!(dear old innocent Atul way :P)
Jenifer is walking in the corridor wid a file in her hand whn she hears her name being called frm sumwhr..She looks here and thr but no sign of anyone..thn suddenly she finds Shweta racing towards her as if a bull charging towards her ready to hit her any moment nw..not being able to think clearly,she bends down a bit and covers her face wid the file in a panicked way..Shweta,intends to stop in front of her but due to running in full speed she canot control her feet and bumps into Jenifer..Luckily Jenifer is able to keep up her balance on tym and despite being taken a back both of thm stay safe frm falling..thn they straighten thmselves and Shweta speaks up in a rapid speed without breathing..
Shw:Jenifer...*puff**pant*Thum..kahan *puff* huh *Sigh*....
Jeni:(stops her)Hold on hold on...Shweta wats wrong..araam se..atleast breath properly..
Shw:Yhea..*huff* ritehh..jus...just gimme a sec..huh..
Shweta breaths hard..thn finally..
Shw:Okhay!sorry yar wo men buht jaldi men thi...huh..kuchh zada hi xcited thi...
Jeni:Thats okay...par hua kia?
Shw:Woh..tum abhi kahan ja rahi ho?men bhi tumhare sath chalti hoon..
Jeni:Men Dr.Keerti ke cabin men jarahi hoon..unhe ye file dikhani thi..
Shw:(pauses)oh..ok...to tum jao..men tumhara cafe men w8 karti hoon..ok?
They are at the nurse station near the statue praying to God wid hands joined 2gether and thanking abt the help during the surgery..
Pan:Helo bhagwan ji..aj aapne meri..i mean hamari help ki aur hamari pehli surgery kaamyaab hogai aur ab hitler..er..ahem..mera matlab hai Dr.Keerti ke saamne hamara impressioon acha hojayega aur humse khush hokar hamen intern of the month banadengi!
Suk:(Gigles)Jee bhagwan ji..thank u sooo much ke aapne hamare patient ko theek kardia...
Pankit looks at her and a smile comes across his face..She has her hands joined and has a very cute and chubby xpression on her face and is talking to God wid true devotion..
Suk (Continues):Aur aap hamesha isi tarah hamari madad karte rehna..aur hamare hospital se kabhi koi bhi dissapoint hokar na jaye..
Pan:Han taake hum khoob tarakki karen..naam kamayen..
Pan/Shw: Aur khoob mehnat karke Sanjeevani ka naam roshan kar saken..!!
........''Aisa zaroor hoga doctors!!''...........
They turn to see Dr.Mohnish who had said this and had over heard their last lines..he had a proud smile on his face..
Pan:Good afternoon sir!
Suk:Good afternoon sir!
Pan:Ssir aap kab aye?
Moh:Bas abhi abhi Dr.Pankit..and i feel very happy ke main iss mokey par yahan aya (now looking at Pankit)and i ALSO thank GOD for this...So..1st surgery han?
Moh:good good!..to kaisa raha sanjeevani men surgery ka pehla xperience?
Pan:(being xtra frank)Very scary sir..
Moh (a lite laugh) Nai Dr.Pankit..kabhi bhi darr ko khud par haavi mat hone do..hamesha darr ko ignore karo lado apne darr se...aur dekhna tum hi jeeto ge..!!(the kind of forceful speech Shanky usually gives)i hope ur getting my point?
Moh:Gud!wese mujhe aapko iss waqt yahan..aise dekhkar buht khushi hui....aap dono agar aise hi dil lagakar kaam karenge to yakeenan aap iss hospital ka aur mera naam zaroor roshan karenge..im very proud of u doctors..keep it up!!
Pan/Suk:Thank u sir!
He leaves..and they look at each othr wid HUGE victory smiles on their faces...they join hands in front of God once again and thn leave to blabber abt ths to the others (lolz :P )
Shweta is siting in the cafeteria whn Jneifer comes and sits wid her...
Jen:So..kuch kaam tha mujhse?
Shw:Yhea..woh..Jenifer actually abhi kuch time pehle mene Basketball court men Karan aur Shilpa ko ladte hue dekha...
Jen:To fir....Karan...ugh...mujhe pata tha..wo theek ho hi nai sakta..zaroor usne firse kuch kia hoga...
Shw:Nai nai..bilkul nai..Karan ne kuch nai kia..wo to acha hi behave kar raha tha..but Shilpa ne aaj subah wali baat ki waja se phirse jhagda kia..
Jen:Aur karan ne bhi usse fight shuroo kardi..wah wah..ek to chori upar se seena zori!
Shw:Cumon Jenifer..u knw Karan ki koi galti nai ti..wo jaan boojh kar dressing room men nai gya tha!
Jen:Ok f9..agar galti nai thi to he shud have tried to xplain it to her rather thn joining her to a fite!
Shw:Han..wo to hai..but u knw Shilpa ne usey basketball par challenge kia..aur Karan aisa hai ke he just cant resist a challenge!
Jeni:kabhi kabhi mahol ke hisaab se..logon ke hisaab se insan ko badalna padta hai.
Shw:Yhea..ur rite...but Jenifer..i really want 2 put off these fites.
Jeni:hmm...uske liye ek hi raasta hai!
Jeni:U'l hav to get Karan to appologise to Suku!
Shw:Wht?er..i mean..okay..ofcourse..sure..i'l talk to him (uncertainly)
Jen:But wait...usse pehle hamen Sukriti se baat karni hogi coz wht if Karan usse baat kare aur waha phirse koi fite hojaye?!
Shw:Hm..ur rite..to chalo chal kar Sukriti se baat karte hain..
Thrs no 1 in the locker room xcept Sukriti who is reading some file stranding in front of her locker.Jenifer and Shweta find this as their best chance and go to talk to her..
Jen:Hi Sukriti!(in a very jolly way)
Shw:Hi Sukriti..kaisi ho tum?
Suk:(Smiles)main theek hoon..hru guys?
Shw/Jen:HUM?HUM TO BILKUUL THEEK HAIN!!
They have talking as if they've been her bestfriends since childhood!
Jen:Arey wah wah..aj to tum buht khush lag rahi ho..!
Shw:Han aur buht acche mood men lag rahi ho...haina?haina?dekho dekho kaise itni cutely smile kar rahi hai..
Suk:(almost blushing)Yhea..aj men buht khush hoon..u knw aj surgery ke baad men aur Pankit....(tells thm all tht had happened)Aaj buht achcha din tha!!
Shw:Tumhare liye!(serious nw)
Shw:Han Sukriti Dr.Mohnish ne tumhari buht tareef ki...isliye tum buht khush ho..par agar iski jagah unhone tum par koi bura ilzaam laga liya hota to kya tumhara din itna hi achcha hota?
Suk:Shweta..ye tum kya kehrahi ho?main kuch samjhi nai...
Shw:Ofcourse Sukriti..tum kyun samjhogi?aj subah wali baat..tumne Karan par itna bada ilzaam lagaya aur uske baad ab tum sab bhool gai...aur Karan ka kya?
Jen:Usme Karan ki galati nai thi Sukriti...tumhe aisa nai karna chahiye tha!
Shw:Lekin?(scolds)Sukriti tum khud bhi jaanti ho ke Karan ka koi kasoor nai tha kyunki agar aisa hota to tum iss baat ko itni asaani se bhula nai deti..!
Suk:Lekin Karan ko to wese bhi koi faraq nai padta na?!kyunki agar aisa hota to aj basketball court men wo Shilpa se dobara jhagda nai karta..jee han...Shilpa ne mujhe bataya tha!
Shw:Sukriti Karan ek shareef aur achcha ladka hai..aur koi bhi ladka apne upar aisa ilzaam bardaasht nai kar sakta...aur rahi baat jhagde ki to jhagde ki shurwaat Shilpa ne ki thi..jee han!!(copying her)
Suk:Ok Ok alrite!usne jaan boojhkar nahi kia hoga i believe u..okay?jakar usse kehdo..
Jen:Nahi...hum usey nai kahenge..ye baat tum khud jakar usey bologi..
Suk:Main aisa kuch nai karoongi!
Jen:Sukriti plz...dekho we want these fights to end now..ab ye sab kuch zada hi horaha hai..jabse Sanjeevani join kia hai tum log hamesha ladte hi rehte ho...aren't u guys fed up!
Suk:Ofcourse we are..we'r fed up of Karan and all the nonsense of his!aur wese bhi mujhe pata hai usi ne tum dono ko yahan bheja hai..aur Jenifer tumne to kaha tha na ke tum hamare saath ho!?
Shw:Baat kisike sath ki nai hai...baat hai jhagda khatam karne ki!
Jen:Han Sukriti..humen yahan Karan ne nai bheja..he's a good guy and trying his best to prove it..bas tum log usey ek moka do..ek baar usse jhagda na karke uski taraf dosti ka hath badha kar dekho...mene bhi yahi kia and thts the reason im here to advice u to do the same!
Shw:Han Sukriti wo aj subah wali baat par buht upset hai..bhale hi wo show nai karta but...agr tum phir bhi convince nai ho to wo tumse maafi bhi maangega..i guarantee u..par plz meri ek request hai ke jab wo aisa kare to tum uske saath koi aur fight mat kar bethna aur plz Shilpa se bhi baat karlena...okay?
Suk:(inocently)ok!btw guys ab men chalti hoon...bye!
Jen:Lo!Sukriti maangai aur ab wo Shilpa ko bhi mana legi (smiles)wese ab mujhe bhi chalna chahiye its getting late!
Jen:Wese friend to tum bhi buht achi ho..tumne apne dost ke liye itna kuch jo kia...
Shw:Usne bhi mere liye kuch kam nai kia..but thts a long story..anyways see ya later..bye.
Shw:Hmm..ab ek aakhri kam..jo mujhe akele hi karna hai!(sighs)
Karan his lying upside down on his bed and playing a video game whn his cell fone rings and he picks up...its Shweta...
Shw:Hey Super cool!
Ka:Hey ms Wow...hru?
Shw:Main theek hoon..whts goin on?
Ka:Kuch nai yar..was just getting bored isliye ridge racer 7 khel raha hoon..
Shw:Hmm..to fir darwaza kholo aur haarne keliye tayar hojao..i'l beat u up ths tym!
He gets over joyed and runs to open the door and Shweta gets in...
Shw:Han..kyun?men yahan nai asakti?
Ka:Ofcourse asakti ho..infact,its gr8 ke tum yahan ayi..pata hai men akele khelte khelte bore hogya tha..(jumps on his bed takes his remote controler and starts to set up a two player game)its time we had a race!!
Shw:Sure!(takes the 2nd remote)its tym u lose n i win..!!
Ka:OH YHEAH!!..the old golden days!!
They start racing..
he is completely INTO the game whereas Shweta has other thoughts!
Shw:U knw Karan..our Friendship is soo precious...unbreakable...n EVEN!
Ka:yhea...we ARE even!always!na tum hamesha jeetti ho aur na men..kabhi tum kabhi men...hamesha equal!(thinking only abt the game)
Shw:Hmm...lekin men wo baat nai kar rahi thi..men to life ki baat kar rahi thi..nt abt the game!
Ka:Life ki?oh yes..ofcourse we're gr8 friends..we' always been..and we WILL always be!!
Shw:Hmm...we will!!aur isi dosti ki khatir men tumhe hamesha khush dekhna chahti hoon...
Ka:Men khush hoon Shweta!
Shw:Mene mana kab kia karan..(he quietens nd continues to play wid a serious xpresion nw)Karan..aj subah Sukriti ne tum par jo ilzaam lagaya tumhe bura nai laga?
Ka:(nt looking at her)Nai!
Shw:Basketball court men Shilpa ka behaviour..wo bhi bura nai laga?
Shw:Mene Sukriti se baat ki..and she understands it nw..n she regrets wht she dd...
Ka:Hmm..(In an ignorant way..still nt looking at her)
Shw:Lekin Karan..chalo aj jo Sukriti ne kaha wo tumne jaan booj kar nai kia tha..lekin isse pehle tum teeno ke beech jo kuch hua...uske zimedaar to tum bhi hona?
Ka:Hmm...(agreeing but wid the same ignorant voice)
Shw:Sukriti ke sath shilpa ke general ward men fight..phir Sukriti ke sath aj locker room men aur shilpa ke sath basketball court men..karan men ye kehna chahti hoon ke tumhe un dono se maafi maangni chahiye..to prove tht ur really good atleast un mistakes ke liye jo sach much tumne ki hain..thts the only way u'l get sum peace at Sanjeevani..wht say?
Ka:(realising)Hmm...ur rite..i'l do it!
Thn finaly he throws his remote in the backward direction i.e it falls on the bed whr he was lying..n finaly looks at her and smiles.
Ka:I won!(in a very soft tone)
Shw:(smiles back)U will!
Karan is walking in the corridor towards the locker room whn he bumps into Sukriti..
He doesn't wait for her to say anythng and moves fwd whn she calls him and he confronts her..
Suk:wo mujhe tumse kuch baat karni thi...
Ka:(soothes)Actually..mujhe bhi tumse kuch baat karni thi..
He holds her arm and pulls her into the firescape and down a few stairs..
Ka:Tumhi ne to kaha ke akele men baat karni hai..
Both of thm are very awkward..
Suk:Ttum kkuch kehna chah rahe the?
Ka:Han wo...men ye kehna chahta tha ke..(thinking whr 2 start frm)ke..er..yes..jabse humne sanjeevani join kia hai..ek baar bhi theek se baat nai hui na?
Suk:Yea..tumse to baat hi nai hui...
Ka:Han...err...au aur ttumhari..tumharaa..erm..tumhara kaam kaisa jaraha hai?
Suk:Acha chal raha hai..(also tels him briefly abt the 'after surgery incident')
Ka:Hheyy..tthts gr8..just gr8..u ur a very lucky gal!congrats!
Ka:(shouts)Abey yaar!(in full speed)men tumhe yahan isiliye laya tha kyunki mujhe tumse maafi maangni thi..mene jo bhi UNINTENTIONALLY kia uske liye im sorry..aur ab men aisa nai karoonga.!!
She looks at him in amazement 4 sumtym...as he breaths hard and stares at her..thn she starts laughing...
Soon he realises and starts laughing wid her...n after the laughing is over she smiles at him..
Suk:its ok..nd im sorry too...hamari fights ki waja se baki log bhi pareshan hogaye..Shweta..Jenifer...
Ka:Shweta ki to adat hai..wo hamesha mere liye pareshan hoti rehti hai..
Suk:Hmm..she's a very sweet gal..ur very lucky to have a friend lyk her..
Ka:Yea i knw..wese lucky to tum bhi ho..tht u'v got a bestfriend lyk Shilpa..baat baat par tumhare liye mujpar bandook taanne ajati hai..(jokes)
Suk:(gigles)plz..no jokes abt MY BEST FRIEND!!
Ka:Okz..no jokes!wese tum itni buri bhi nai ho..
Suk:(smiles)tum bhi..Karan ab hamen chalna chahiye briefing ka tym horaha hai..aur agar kisi ne hame yahan par dekhliya to sahi nai hoga...
Ka:Rite!lets go..ladies 1st!
She smiles as he makes way 4 her and she moves a step 4wd widout looking and her heel slips over the stair and she's abt to fall whn he holds her into his arms...they look at each other verrryyy awkwardly and just thn Shilpa gets in...!!
hope u guys liked it....
waiting 4 response..
loads of love,
Friday, April 30
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Part 9Lo aa gaya aap sabka hero heroine ke ghar par....
Ridz opened the door and found him in a mess.
Hair dishelved ,part of the shirt was tucked in and he was
leaning on the wall and sleeping!!!
Ri:[barely able to suppress her laugh]Armaan!
Now she couldn't take it any further and brought a jug of
icy water and........
Ar:AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!! Baarish !baarish! nahi snow !snow!
He said all this with his eyes closed
Ridz puri lotpot hokar has rahi thi
Ar:[looks around and finds Ridz on the floor clutching her
stomach and laughing] Riddhima!!!!!!
Ri:[tries to speak but no words come out except for]Hahahaha
Oh my God!!! hahahahaha
(Imagine the scene guys)
Adi had come out and had started laughing too...
Padma:Kya hua?Ye awaz....
Sees the scene and tries to laugh but controls it and says
Pad:Riddhima! Chalo utho aur Armaan ki madad karo.Armaan
beta ummm tum geele ho gaye ho to... Adi Armaan ko
uske room tak le jao aur towel do.
Ar:Thanks aunty warna apki beti aaj mujhe maar hi daalti.
But Adi and Ridz are still laughing soon Padma and Armaan
Ar:Waise ahem achcha tha
Ri:Kya? baarish! baarish! nahi snow! snow!?[imitating him]
Pa:Bas bas.Armaan tum jao aur change karo warna thand lag
Shashank was not home and Padma had to go out for some
emergency and Adi was at his friend's house to study.
Nishant bhaiyya too had gone back.
It was evening and Armaan was in his room when...
Ri:Armaan kya kar rahe ho?
Ar:Padh raha hun.[bachche ka XII hai padhna chahiye]
Ri:Theek hai[ goes inside]
runs out of the room into the hall.After composing herself
and recalling what she saw in the room she starts laughing.
Eager to know what she saw?
Well she saw Armaan...........SHIRTLESS!!!!!!!
Armaan came out [wearing a shirt] and said
Ar:Kya hua? Tum aise kyun chillai?
Ri:Tum...andar...wo...shirt pehen kar nahi reh sakte the
Ar:[trying to digest what she said]What!!!Tum andar kab aayi?
Ri:Jab tum besharmon ki tarah baithe hue the....bina shirt ke.
Ar:To?Room me koi nahi tha, room band tha aur mujhe kya pata
tha ki tum andar aane waali ho.
Ri:Kuch nahi.Par agli baar padhte waqt shirt zarur pehenna.
Ar:Tum agli baar batakar andar aana.
Ye part sirf AR ka tha.Batao kaisa laga?
Ridz came and told every1 of what all happened in the
weekend and soon every1 was on the floor laughing like
Di:OMG! Tumne uspar thanda pani dala?
Nu:By God! Kitna maza aaya hoga na? use aise dekhkar?
Ri:Hmm.Bohot maza aaya.And 1 aur baat batani hai.
Ri:Maine Maya ki photo dekhi.
An:So how does she look?
Ri:Umm achchi dikhti hai.Wo uske saath roz chatting
Gu:Hmm.Tum nahi karti?
Ri:Main kya karungi usse chatting karke?I hardly know her.
Ni:To kya hua?Baat karne se hi baat banti hai.
At:Hey! Ye to Airtel ki ad ka dialogue hai na?
Ni:Tumne bhi dekha?Sharman looks so cute hai na?
Abhi:Tum log kahan se kahan aa gaye ho.And Nikki tumhe
wo kabse cute lagne laga?
Ni:Excuse me! Mera man hai.Koi bhi cute lag sakta hai.
At:Hey! Tum log ladna band karo yaar.
Ma:Chalo Maths class ka time ho gaya hai.
After the school
Mu:Arre yaar! Ye 1 hi sum hai jo mujhe nahi aa raha.
Ri:Haan mujhe bhi nahi aa raha.Ghar jaakar usse puchungi.
Mu:Kya yaar! Bichare ka itna achcha naam hai uske naam
le na.Teri uske saath shaadi thodi na hui hai jo "wo"
"wo" kiye jaa rahi hai.
Ri:Theek hai meri maa! Uska I mean Armaan ka naam lungi.
Mu:Jeeti raho beta!
Ri:Hey Rexx! Kaise ho?
After thoda bohot cuddling,she saw Armaan in a corner
Ri:Armaan kya hua?
Ar:Tum uske saath kaise reh sakti ho?I mean wo hamesha
bhonkta rehta hai.
Ri:Armaan! Agar tum usse friendly nahi rahoge to wo bhi
tumse darr kar tumpar bhonkega.Uske saath friendly
raho phir dekhna wo bhi tumhe pasand karega.
She forcefully drags him towards Rexx and makes him pat
Rexx's back.Rexx in turn wags his tail.
Ri:Dekha.Rexx bhi tumhe pasand karne laga hai.
Ar:Hmm.Par mujhe thoda time lagega.
Ri:Armaan! Mujhe tumhari help chahiye.
Ri:Hume kuch sums diye gaye the karne ke liye.Mujhe 1
chodke baaki sab aa gaye.
Ar:Theek hai.Tum fresh hokar aa jao.Main dekhta hun.
Mu:Oye! Ridzie,sum aaya?Abhi tak Mayank aur Gunjan ka
bhi pata nahi hai nahi to unhi se puch leti.
Ri:Haan Armaan ne samjhaya.
Mu:Maths mein genius hai kya?
Ri:Har subject mein.Apne class ka topper hai.
Mu:Wow yaar! Waise abhi wo sab chod aur sum bata.
She explains the sum the same way as Armaan had.
Mu:Samajh mein aa gaya.Thanks bolna meri taraf se
Ri:Armaan meri 1 book tumhari pass reh gayi hai.
Ar:Le lo.[engrossed in his laptop]
Ri:Kya kar rahe ho?
Ar:Maya se chatting.Aao baitho.
MA [ ] And AR [ ] will mean their chatting.
MA [Kahan ho? Tution par bhi nahi aaye?]
AR [At my ex-fiance's home sitting right next to her]
MA [What the hell are you doing with her?You had a
AR [Had a patchup too.Do I smell something burning?]
MA [Shutup Armaan now don't talk to me.]
With this she went offline.
Ri:Armaan tumhe aisa nahi karna chahiye tha.
Ar:Chill! Main usse baat karta hun.
Calls her up.
Ar:Hey! Sorry baba! Mujhe nahi pata tha tumhe itna bura
Ar:Good good tum bhi sorry bol rahi ho achcha hai.
Ar:Haan theek hai wait for 5 mins
Disconnects the call
Ar:Khud hi jaan lo.Usse tumse baat karni hai.
Starts a video conference.
Ri:[looks at Armaan he gives a nod]Haan?
Ma:Hey I'm Maya.
Ma:Wo abhi jo hua uske liye I'm sorry.Mujhe aisa nahi
nahi karna chahiye tha.
Ri:It's OK.I understand.
Ri:Hey mujhe padhna hai.I'll take your leave.Bye!
As she reached the door she heard Maya say
"She's really sweet!"
With a smile Riddhima left Armaan's room.
Armaan goes back.
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A tear dropped from his eyes and he separated himself from Riddhima just enough to see her face, but not so much that any spark might reach her. He put a hand under her chin and lifted her face up to his....
Arm - (finally) Main tumse kuch...umm...poochna chahra tha.
Rid - Tho pucho na Armaan.
Arm - (looks at her) Tum uss din mujhe chor kyun ayee thi?
Rid - (stops in her tracks) ...
Min - (Grabs his arms and hangs from them, she looks up and Armaan sees her cute innocent little face) Please! Main tumhe na sab se achi chocolate khilaoungi! (trying to bribe him)
Arm - (Sees her innocent little face, how could he not help her, so he bends down one his knee and comes to her level) Sab se achi vaali chocolate?
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hello everyone once again. while you wait for the further part of my ff "Friends Forever", here is another story or rather a short story written by me a year ago. please leave your views after you read the stories.
so here is the story.
“Hey nice to meet you after a whole long year!” Sheena hugged me as I came out of my college.
“I searched you all over the campus, you fool, where were you? Did you forget about our meeting today,” she said getting annoyed.
“Nopes didn’t forget. The lecturer wouldn’t leave us. Thankfully his question was answered soon else he would have taken another half an hour to end. Well is everyone fine at home?”
“Yeah no probs at home. Listen, I have loads of things to tell you”
“Hmm, and I am eager to listen, go on”.
“Not in the campus. Let’s go somewhere else”
“Ok, how about our favourite hangout, Juhu beach?”
“Great, here’s an auto. Ask him”
Soon we were on the beach. We got down and started walking on the unclean yet the most beautiful hangout place. With cold wind blowing gently, waves playing pakdapakdi with people, it seemed a perfect place after a very boring lecture.
It was 4 in evening and the beach was full of people around, kids playing in water, college students enjoying panipuri, photographers busy persuading couples for a photo and we both walking silently.
“Oh please no one can replace me when it comes to keeping long silences. Will you speak up?”, I asked her.
“Do you remember my best friend from the aviation base?” she said as she kicked off a seashell out of the way.
“Beautiful sea shells, aren’t they? My sister just loves them. Will take this for her” I said picking up that shell.
“Will you answer my questions first?” she snatched the shell from me.
“Oh Yes, well…. yes I do remember”, I said
“No you don’t. You have the worst memory and I know that”, she said.
“Nopes, I do remember her Sneha right?”, I asked somewhat doubtfully.
“What about her?”, I asked trying to make myself involved in the conversation.
My mind was swaying away to the panipuri shop. Too hungry to resist I asked her
“Lets have some thing to eat, I am hungry”
“Shweta, will you listen me first? ”, she was annoyed this time. God I hate her adamant behavior.
“Go on”, I said as I sat on the rock stairs and opened my tiffin.
“Listen, last vacation I didn’t return home you know that. I had been at Sneha’s place. After spending a few days at her place, I guess she became more comfortable with me. She told me that she had a secret which she wanted me to know”
“It’s a secret, so obviously you aren’t telling me”
My offered piece of peanut butter sandwich was still in her hand.
“Stop being so honest. It won’t help you anywhere. and by the way she didn't tell me her secret”, she said biting of a small part of the sandwich.
“You haven’t stopped advising me this and I haven’t stoped disobeying you. Well continue with your story”
“Yeah, here it goes. She was just about to speak up her secret, but was intruded in between the way you did just now. “
“Oh is that so. Have another piece. Got to finish these before I get home. Anyways who was the intruder?”
”Siddharth. A smart, decent well-behaved guy, her so called cousin. Days passed. I never got to know her secret. Three days before the end of vacation, I declared that I am in love. Sneha was surprised but happy for me. The excitement showed up on her face clearly. But soon as I told her the name, her expressions changed, her smile withered and looked at me worriedly. When asked she told me nothing. I couldn’t put off the thought. After that day her moods dropped quite frequently, but she never told me the reason.”
“Chai, Madam chai”, a boy interrupted us.
“No thanks”, we said in unison and looked at each other.
“I can’t believe it. You hate boys as far as my knowledge about you is concerned ”, I said returning to the topic.
“Yes, but Siddharth isn’t like everyone.”
“So days passed and we returned back to hostel. Then on the next day Sneha was out in the library completing her assignments. I was cleaning our room. I found her personal diary in the box kept below our bed. I suddenly remembered her secret. I thought of going through it. Opened and started reading. A diary maintained and updated regularly from past five years, took me 2 hours to read. As I came to the part of my visit to her home, I felt no need to read further. I was about to shut it down when one word captured my eyes. Sacrifice. I started reading further. You wanted to have panipuri, isn’t it? ”, she said trying to get up.
“No, these people are not hygienic”, I said dragging her down. Who would like to be interrupted while listening to an interesting story!
“Oh fine. Then let’s take a bus back home. Will tell you on the way” she said getting up.
Soon we got on the bus. Eager to listen the further part I asked, “Then what happened?”
“Then I read that part. What I found out after reading further left me shaken. Siddharth and Sneha had been in love for past 3 years. And she had decided to break up just for me. I shut the diary down. I didn’t know what to do next. But I had decided to bring the things back on the right path. I didn’t want her to sacrifice anything for me. “, she said wiping of a tear drop from her cheek.
“So, what did you do?”
“I lied to her. I told her that I never loved Siddharth. I had just fooled her. And I still remember the way she stared at me. The cheerfulness was back her face. She had a hearty laugh and I pretended to laugh back. Soon she was out with her secret and I was relieved that I got my friend back”
“Hmmm”, said wondering what to say.
The long silence between us made us feel like strangers. But we didn’t speak.
As we got down from the bus, she asked me “When are you free in next week?”
“There is nothing sure about my schedule. I will let you know. And don’t worry you will meet someone even better. Forget and keep smiling” I told her smiling for the first time after her story.
“Well, I will try to”, she said smiling back and turned to the left lane. I took the right lane and started thinking about an apt title to this story.
keep smiling and keep commenting,
Monday Morning at Sanjeevani…
Keerti with interns at the nurse station assigning the duties for the day… Armaan waiting for her to finish…
The interns disperse and Keerti looks at Armaan…
“Haan Dr. Armaan boliye…”
“Maam yeh Mr. Sharma ki case file…unhe aaj discharge kar raha hoon…aap se socha ek baar consult kar loon…”, he hands over the case file to Keerti.
Keerti goes through the file… “Hmmm…achchi progress dikhayi hai unhone…good job Dr. Armaan…theek hai unhe hum discharge kar sakte hain…”
“Dr. Armaan…main soch rahi thi aap agar kuch din ruk jaate main thori busy hoon and I want you to assist Dr. Ridhima with the new case…it will be a great help…”, she looks at Armaan…
Armaan smiles and says… “Ji… sure Dr. Keerti….i have no issues…”
Dr. Keerti smiles and looks at him…
At Keerti’s cabin…
Riddhima and Keerti talking…
“Maam main bahut khush hoon aaj…”, Ridz says and looks at Keerti…
“Haan Ridhima main samajh sakti hoon aap ko kaisa lag rahaa hoga…”
“Maam, ab hum dono hamesha saath rahenge…”, she smiles brightly…
Keerti feels very happy for them…
They came as interns and became a part of Sanjeevani and Keerti started as their reporting doctor and became a guardian for them in these years… they were her family…
“Ok Dr. Keerti…main chalti hoon…mujhe rounds par jaana hai…”
Keerti gets up from her chair, comes and hugs Ridz like an elder sister, “All the best Ridhima…ab dekhna sab kuch theek ho jayega…”
Ridhima standing at the nurse station and reading a file…
Armaan comes from behind and comes very close, and brings his face very close to her ear… “I love you basket…”
Ridz turns around and says… “Bas pyaar he sujhta hai…Mr. Romantic…”… “Kuch kaam kar lein…???”
Armaan pouts and says, “Theek hai… bolo what is the new case all about…??”
“Armaan ek purana case hai… Leukemia ka… theek ho gaya tha but relapse hai… a degree of malignancy has been detected…”
“Hmmm…too bad…anyway… file do…”
He takes the file and walks into the ward thinking that he would first reassure the patient that it is going to be fine…
He reaches the bed, and sees that she is a young girl about 10 years old and sleeping with her back towards him…
He decides not to disturb her and turns around to walk out of the ward when suddenly he hears something and a smile comes to his face…
“Boyfriend… mujhse mile bina hi jaa rahe ho???”
He turns around… “Are girl friend…mujhe lagaa tum so rahi ho…tou socha tumse baad mein mil loonga…”, he smiled and sat on the stool next to the bed…
“Itna bhi nahin so rahi thi ki tum mile bina chale jaoge…”
Armaan holds his ears and says… “Sorry nanima…maaf kar dijiye galti ho gayi…”
They laugh and then suddenly Armaan becomes a little sad realizing the gravity of the situation…
“Uff ho boy friend… tum sad mat ho…maine kaha tha na pehle bhi agar log bimaar nahin parenge tou tumhara itna baraa hospital chalega kaise… bolo…”
Armaan smiles… “Haan who tou hai… Mini tum bikul theek ho jaogi…main hoon na…”
“Ailaa boy friend tum tou bilkul pehle ki tarah baatein kar rahe ho… aur tumhari basket… kahan hai woh…???”
“Yehin mere paas…”, Armaan gets up from the stool and sits on the bed… he tenderly kisses Mini’s forehead.
Ridz was standing outside the ward all this while and listening to their conversation…
These cute little things made her love Armaan all the more…
She smiled and left the old lovers in each other’s company and went for her rounds…
After a while Ridhima was walking past the fire escape and sees Armaan sitting on the stairs…
She walks down and sits next to him…she puts her hand around him… “Kya hua sonu…???”
Armaan looks at her teary eyed…
“Main Mini ke baare mein soch raha tha… uska Leukemia ka relapse… woh theek tou ho jayegi na…???”
Ridz keeps her head on his shoulder… “Jab tak tum ho tab tak use kuch nahin ho sakta… dekhna woh bahut jaldi bilkul theek ho jayegi…”
“Thanks basket… I just needed these words… apno ki taqleef dekhar main apne aap ko bahut weak feel karta hoon… thanks ki tum aaj mere saath ho… we will beat this disease together and dekhna kuch hi time mein woh mere saath basketball khel payegi…”
Ridz gives him a reassuring smile and they hug each other…
After some time Armaan and Ridz at the nurse station…
Ridhima completes the entries in the day book while Armaan is intently looking into a file…
Ridz looks at him, he is completely lost in his thoughts…she places her hand on his shoulder… he looks at her…
“Kya hua Armaan… if you are done tou chalo ghar chalein…??”
“Nahin Ridhima main aaj yahin ruk raha hoon Mini ke paas…”
“Armaan tum bilkul nahin badle…aaj bhi wahi care wahi usi tarah thoughtfulness…”
Armaan did not say anything… He takes Ridz’s hand and places the back of her palm on his cheek… “Main ghar jaake bhi usi ke baare mein sochta rahoonga and phir waapas aanaa parega isse achcha hai lemme stay back please…”
Ridhima smiles at him softly… “Lekin chalo pehle kuch kha lo…main jaanti hoon…tum chinta mein khaoge bhi nahin…”
Armaan nods and they go to the Cafetaria…
Armaan is still lost in his thought…
Ridhima goes and orders a sandwich and brings the plates and keeps it on the table… she takes a sandwich and brings it close to his mouth.. “Chalo khao…”
Armaan takes a bite and says… “Tum…???”
“Main ghar jaake kha loongi…”
He finishes the sandwich and kisses her good night and Ridhima leaves…
Armaan comes and stands in front of the Ganpati idol with his hands folded… “Kal se Mini ka chemotherapy session shuru ho raha hai..please use isbaar bilkul theek kar dena God…”
He goes and stands outside the Cancer ward and sees Mini sleeping peacefully…
He goes and sits in the locker room and opens and starts reading a medical journal…
Throughout the nite… Armaan sits outside the ward and continuously goes and checks if she is alright, if the IV line is fine…and finally at 6 he falls asleep on the bench outside the ward…
Ridhima could not sleep all nite as she was missing Armaan and also worried if he was fine…
She distinctly remembered how had built a wall around him and did not let anyone come near him…
She was fully aware that Mini had a special place in his heart….
She got ready as soon as the alarm rang at 6 and rushed to the hospital…she came directly to the Cancer ward…
She saw Armaan sitting on the bench outside the cancer ward with his eyes closed and his head against the wall...
She came and stood near him…
He looked exhausted…
She touched him lightly on his shoulder and he opened his eyes…
“Armaan main… tum theek ho..??”
“Haan… woh Mini…”
“Armaan main abhi ander gayi thi…she is fine… main uske paas baithti hoon…tum jaake thori der so lo…”
“Main theek hoon…”, he stood up…and twisted his neck…
“Pataa hai tum superman ho lekin please Sonu…”
Ridhima smiled that Armaan was changed in that he trusted her more now…
He agreed and said, “Theek hai main thori der rest kar leta hoon…koi bhi problem ho tou please call me and also chemo session se pehle mujhe page kar dena…”.
Armaan went and lied down in the room next to the locker room… he was tired having not slept for a minute at night and fell asleep immediately…
Mini’s chemo went fine.
Armaan stayed by her side during all the sessions and talked to her after the therapy till she did not fall asleep.
After 4 days...
She looks at him, he has a needle in his hand to draw blood to see if the chemo has had the desired effect...
"Uff... phir se machar...dookhega na..??"
Armaan sat next to her..."Main jab bhi suyi lagata hoon...dookhta hai that aaj dookhega...huh???"
She grimaced as Armaan poked the needle to draw blood from her arm... "Ouch..."
"Oye...jhooth mat bol...koi dard nahin hua mujhe maloom hai...nautanki...", they start laughing and the ward filled with the unhampered sweetness and innocence...
Armaan goes to the lab to test the blood...
Ridhima stands with her hands folded and baited breathe...like a child stands before the final results are going to be declared...
Armaan smiles and turns to Ridz..."its clear...no malignancy"...
They rejoice like two small kids having cleared their exams with flying colors...
Armaan, Ridz and mini at Sanjeevani’s gate… Armaan opens the front door of his car… he helps Mini in…. Ridz sees her off… “Mini apna dhyaan rakhna…”
“And aap mere boyfriend ka khayal rakhna…”, she waves to her and Armaan drives off…
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Labels: The World Stopped that moment
Thursday, April 29
My kps freinds visit to meet him recently there it was taken i cant go this time fo some personal reasons still was jumping when my freind told he was asking about me hahaha how sweet na this video tells how much he loves his fans
this video is there at kps thread and dmg forum in india forum and youtube too so i posted here pls dont post anywhere else without asking me
enjoy ksg interview for his fans tc
karan ki dewani mithila
Heyy sorry for not giving my introduction. My name is Sanaa. Thank you for the comments. They are actually amazing. Really persuaded me to write again. as for the the 2 dis likes..uhmm could u plz comment nd tell me why u didnt like it? Ill try and improve it for u guys seriously...
so heres part 2..personally i dnt like it and i guess u will see why..and maybe agree if u read it. but in my defence..this has to happen if Armaan and Riddhima unite in the end.
Recap: Armaan riddzi have a moment. Armaan about to see Ridzi nd Sid's photos.
AR: Thanks yaar.
W1 - ab main chalta hoon.
Armaan, curious to see what was in the envelope, opened it and slowly took the photos out. The first one he saw made him drop the whole lot in shock. Riddhima? How could she? was that really HIS riddhima? HIS basket? he bent down and picked them up. The ground beneath him disappeared and he felt his knees drop to the ground. The colour drained from his face and he cudnt get rid of the flashbacks between him and riddhima. How he cudnt kiss her for respect. He turned the photos around to look at the date. this was before she came to look for him in Panchgani. Did she hate him so much that she spent a night with someone to forget him? (as the ward boy said) At that point, didnt she trust HIS love? Tears made their way out against his will. what more was in store for him? What more did he have to face? WHY hadn't he just left when shashank told him not to leave. Slowly he stood up. And in a fit of anger punished the very walls which once brought him closer to Riddhima. The pain in his hand was nothing compared to the piercing sword in his heart. It opened up old wounds and grazed them while silent, but not common, tears escaped. Riddhima was right. Uski basket margayi!
Just then there was a call for him from the nurse station.
CALL: 'Dr Armaan please report to Dr Keerti at the nurse station'
Wiping away his tears, and putting a stone in front of his heart, he left. Dr Keerti had called both Armaan and Riddhima to the nurse station. There was another case which they had to handle.
DR K - So Doctors, aap jaldi keejiye shaam ke baad mujhe reports chahiye. Phir I'll handle the case myself.
AR + R - Yes maam
As soon as DR Keerti left, Riddhima turned to Armaan. One look at his face and she knew he had been crying. She knew she was the reason.
R - Voh abhi bhi meri aur Sid ki shaadi ko lekar..she thought and her eyes saw his injured hand.
R - Armaan, yeh sab kya hai?
Ar - Kuch nahin
R - Itni geheri chot. Aur tum kehte ho kuch nahin?!
Ar - Tumne..(he stopped correcting himself) Zindagi ne jaise chot deeyen hain, uske saamne toh yeh kuch nahi hai.
And he raised his eyes to look into hers. Maybe for the last time. As soon as his eyes met hers, her body froze. The hurt etched in those grey/brown marbles was evident. She had never seen it before. Not to that extent. And it caused her stomach to churn. Every muscle in her body wanted to hug him. Take that hurt away. Not being able to bear it, she disappeared from his sight, half walking and half running, her tears getting the better of her.
YU - Naina meri baat toh suno
Naina - Yuvi, abh mere paas tym nahin hai
JP - usne bola na uske paas tumhare liye time nahin hai
YU - JP, agar ek aur shabd bhi bola na toh tujhe gutter main phekdoonga chuhe ke saath
JP scared, shuts up.
Naina - Usko kyun daant rahe ho? Jao Suvarna ke paas. Jaise us din. Maine mere PAPA ke against gayi thi kyunki tumhe pyaar karti hoon. Lekin sirf ek hi pal main, tumne mera bharosa tod diya? kaise?
YU - nahin Naina dekho
Just then Armaan enters the ward. The interns upon seeing him keep quiet. But Armaan is not paying attention to them. He goes to the patient DR Keerti was talking about. Riddhima follows in. Her eyes puffed up, show that she's been crying uncontrollably.
Naina - Didi, kya huwa aapko? aap theek toh hain?
R - Haan main theek hoon. (Forces a smile) Tum jao kaam karo.
And she leaves to go to the patient.
YU - Us Armaan ne zaroor kuch kiya hoga.
Naina - Chance marte hi aap Armaan ko humesha dosh kyun de rahe ho? EK toh insaan hai is duniyan main joh sachcha pyaar karta hai.
YU - yeh? toh Riddhima ko kyun chodke chalagaya.
Naina - PYAAR karta hai usse! Tum kya jaano?! dekho main Sid ko blame nahin kar rahi hoon. Jaanti hoon voh Riddhima se pyaar karta hai. Lekin Tamanna se bhi pyaar karta tha. Uska kya huwa?
JP - lekin Tamanna flower toh chaligayi na?
Naina - Haan..waise hi agar Riddhima didi chali jaayegi, shayad Sid ko apna sachcha pyaar mile?
YU - tum kya keh rahi ho?
Naina - tumse kya?
And she leaves the Ward with Yuvi following behind her still asking for forgiveness.
Armaan - (TO the patient, an elderly man) aap Fikr mat keejiye. Sirf minor burns hain. Not even 3rd degree. Aap bulkul theek hojayenge
Man - Lekin meri beti. Uske paas itne paise bhi nahin hai. mera illaj kaise karwayegi.
Ar - itni si baat hai? Main hoon na, aapke illaj ke paise main doonga. (Smiles)
Man - Main yeh kaise leloon?
Riddhima - Uncle ji, lelijiye. Jab poori tarha theek hoge toh vaapas kardejiyega. Abhi aapko araam ki zaroorat hai. Injection maine tayaar kardi.
Man - Bhagwaan aap dono ki jodi hamesha salaamat rakhe.
Ar - Ye meri biwi nahin hai. Mera uske saath koi rishta nahin hai.
These word stung Riddhima. but she managed to keep a straght face.
Man - arre. Aap kitne achchae ho. Mere jaise paraya ko itna jaldi apna banadiya?
Ar - Kya karen. Jab koi Apna hi itna hi paraaya hojaye, toh paraya ko bhi apna karne ka moke dena chahiye na?
He looked at Riddhima who pretended not to hear any of it. sighing, he got up and left to prepare the reports. Riddhima ran to the back room, and broke down once again.
DR Keerti's Cabin
DR K - come in. Oh Dr Armaan. Thank you for the reports. Aur yeh kya hai?
AR - khud dekhlijiye.
DR K - KYA? aapka resignation letter? kyun? Yahaan par sab koh tum bohot pasand ho
AR - lekin ek khaas insaan ko toh nahin
DR K - (changes her doctors attitude to a sisterly/motherly one) Aap theek toh hain na Armaan?
AR - Theek tha. Main aur dukh nahin seh sakta. Mera jaana hi sab ke liye behtar hoga. Aur waise bhi yahan par abhi koi apna nahin raha aapke sivay. Please mujhe jaane do. Mere sab cases maine khatam kar diyen.
DR K - theek hai. Lekin ek shart par. Sanjeevani ko tumhari zaroorat hai. Toh please, Sanjeevani ke kitne branches hain, kisi aur Sanjeevani main kaam karo.
AR - Thank you.
They hug and Armaan for the last time looks at the one place he used to love very much. Taking a deep breath, he stepped outside. Ready to do his packing. Ready to become someone new. Someone who takes life seriously. Someone who doesnt believe in love. But there was unfinished job. He had promised Riddhima something. And a letter to her would be enough. After that, she will live happily, and he will live in those memories.
Precap: whats in that letter that makes riddhima shout at her father? She goes hysterical. And who will take care of her this time?
Heyy guys..hope u enjoyed it. I dont like it cz yes..armaan is leaving. But i think its essential to do that to make riddhima realise how much armaan means to her. Also brought in a bit of Yuvi and Naina to make it more like the present Dill Mill Gayye. oh...and Thank a lot for the wonderful comments. please do continue commenting..
Labels: Torn Between two
ARMAN vs RIDDHIMA (segment--3)
Riddhima ko dr.mallick ne apni beti ki tarah sambhala tha....…..oonhe apna promise yaad tha,jo oonhone ek choti bachchi se kiya tha-----"oose kabhi bhi akela na chorna".....actually oonhone to riddhima ko dr.sashank ke house mein akela rakhna hi nahi chaha tha....…but riddhima ne oonke ghar jaane ko mana ker diya tha.....….oose pata tha ki dr. mallick ki family hain jo yahan nahi rahti.....…..wo ab kisiki family mein problem nahi banna chahti thi.....……
Dr.mallick ne oonhe bahoot pyar diya tha.....….oonhe pata tha......riddhima love painting.......…wo khud oose Sunday ko Poona ke ek famous artist ke paas le jaate---riddhima wahan painting sikhti …….. .riddhima ki tamanna thi....….painting sikhker apni ma ki,apne papa ki (dr.sashank) ki painting banaye.....…..study,painting,dancing and kuch frnds....…..yahi riddhima ki life thi....….but dr.mallick riddhima ke liye every time anxious rahte they.....….’choti larki akele!’ ……..ish liye oonhone kaki ko riddhima ki resposiblity de rakhi thi....….kaki deen mein dr.mallick ki ghar ki jimmedari le rakhi thi aur night ko wo riddhima ke paas rahti thi....…..
kabhi-kabhi kaki bhi riddhima se kahti....….”bete dr.sahab herdum toomhare liye paresaan rahte hain.....…..oonka ghar to khali hi para hai...….oonki family to yahan shayad aayenge hi nahi...….toom oonke paas jakar raho to oonhe bhi chain mile aur mujhe bhi......…
aur riddhima ne jawab diya tha: “aap nahi janti kaki…meri life jiske saath joori…..wo khud barbad ho gaye....….mai nahi chahti ki mera ye sahara bhi cheen jayye....….mai thik hoon....….aap hain,dr.uncle hain…mujhe kuch nahi hoga…..
Sab kuch thik hi chal raha tha....…..riddhima ne khud ko sambhal liya tha....….ab bush mbbs university exam ke kuch month baki they jisme oose top aana tha….
“achanak feer se ek turn.....…..jisne ooski life ko poori tarah badal di……”
Abhi last month ki baat hai....….agle deen riddhima ki ma ka bd tha....….riddhima ne ek painting banai thi…ma ki.....…..wo bahoot khush thi....…ma ke bd per oonki pyari angel oonko painting gift degi....….aur ma jahan bhi ho....…..apni beti ko aasirwaad degi.....….life mein success hone ka....….dr.sashank ke sapno ko poora karne ka....……..apni frnd ria aur puja ke saath wo mallick hospital aayi thi....….apni ma ki painting mallick uncle ko dikhane....…..but uncle kisi emergency mein bahar gaye they....…..wo bahoot sad ho gayi thi....….wo oonke cabin se nikalker dr.aditi ke paas ja rahi thi...….uncle kahan gaye hain poochne….....ria aur pooja oose samjha rahi thi...…. "Itna sad mat ho..…dr.mallick kal wapus aa jayyenge",......but riddhima per kuch asar nahi ho raha tha…..ooske ek hand mein painting thi,jo oosne apne seene se laga rakha tha...….aur doosre hand mein mobile.....…jisse wo continous dr.uncle ko try kar rahi thi....….aur feer achanak’DHAAAAMMM’…..wo kisise takrai thi and ma ki photo jamin per geer gayi….
Riddhima immdiately neeche jhook gayi.... ….pic.oothane ke liye....…aur jo wo kabhi nahi dekh sakti thi....….wahi hua tha.....….shayad jisse takrai thi...…ooske hand mein coffee tha....….jo ooski ma ki pic. ko boori tarah bigaar diya tha....…..sabki nazar oos pic per thi and riddhima’s eyes were full of tears..... ……
Oose aansoo bhari aankho se kuch bhi dikhai nahi de raha tha....….per soonayi de raha tha...….jisse takrai thi....….wo "sorry...…sorry...…sorry miss beauty…sorry"...…. kahta jar aha tha….
Riddhima ne apni aansoo bhari eyes oothai...…..aur pal bhar mein ooski aansoo sookh gayye....!!…ooske frnds,ye hospital,ye dooniya....….oose kuch bhi dikhai nahi de raha tha!!!…..bush wo dekh rahi thi.... …."two blue eyes!!!!!!....jisne ooski ma ki life spoil ki thi....….aaj ooski ma ki pyari si photo bhi oonhi aankho ne barbaad ki....……..
Riddhima ko laga tha....….aaj tak oosne jitni nafrat apne dill mein choopaker rakhi thi...….…wo suddenly out burst ho gayi hai...….aur ooske hath oos ajnabi ke gaalon per ooth gaye they!taraak!!tarraak!!
But he was surprised!!!oosne aisa kya kiya tha jo ish larki ne oosper hath oothaye!!aur oosne sorry bhi to kaha tha!!ooske reddish cheek aur bhi red ho gaye they!!riddhima ki finger-marks clearly deekh rahe they!! Ooski blue eyes mein mano ab soonami aane wali thi....….but abhi wo ish incident se!.....….apne insult se itna amazed tha! ki speechless ho gaya tha....……mano ooski aawaz hi chali gayi thi!!…..
But ooske frnds to choop rahna wale nahi they…..
Maya said angrily: "toomhari himmat kaise hui dr.arman per hath oothane ki? Toomhe pata bhi hai wo koun hai?"
Riddhima(angrily) :"koun hai? King hai?"
Maya : "ye dr.mallick ka beta hai....toom jahan khari ho ye hospital ooske dad ka hai"....
Riddhima : "to kya oosne sabko kharid liya hai?"
Pummy : "arey choop rah!ye chahe to poore Poona city ko kharid sakta hai"….
Riddhima : "her cheez bikaoo nahi hoti"…
Maya: "ek photo hi to kharab hui hai....….toone humare duke ka insult kiya hai..... ….toojhe to sabak sikhlana hi parega….
Aur wo apni coffe bhi oos pic per daal deti hai...……riddhima bilkul mad ban jaati hai....….wo lily ke hathon se coffee cheen leti hai aur maya ke face per fenkti hai....…..per wo sidha arman per jaker girta hai....…..jo bilkul statue sa ban gaya hai.....…..itna insult!!!!
Shayad ooske liye ish hospital to kya ish city mein bhi one minute,one second,ek pal,ek chan goojarna mooskil ho raha tha....……mano kisi emperor ko ooske hi empire mein punishment soonai gayi ho!!! wah bina kuch bole wahan se nikal jata hai!!!!!!!!!!!…...…..
MASSAGE FOR MY LOVING FRNDS
THANX MY FRNDS..ADITI,SWEETY,ANUJ,ARNA,SHRUTHI,KSHITI,AND SILENT READERS AND ALSO THOSE FRNDS WHO ARE BUSY WITH LIFE...COZ I KNOW THEY READ MY FF BUT HAVE NOT TIME FOR GIVING COMMENTS.....HOPE YOU WILL LIKE THIS PART...PLZ.DO COMMENTS AND ALSO PRESS LIKE TAB NOT DISLIKE.....AS MY DUKE IS VERY SAD,INSULTED BY RIDDHIMA...SO PLZ.SUPPORT HIM WITH YOUR COMMENTS...
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hey aditi...sorry,toomne jab massage bheji mai com.band kar chooki thi....baad mein milti hoon....bye...love you dear....
Labels: A Duke and Duchess' Story
hey guys, i m not new to this blog, i hav just changed my id. i m aleena and i miss my old friends her mithila. ishanki di, lovy, abee so i m just posting this story i just wanna tell first that i m not the author of this ff.i just read it and i liked it very much as i m totally bored with the current track of DMG. so here is the story.plz if u like it then reply
The staff of Sanjeevani was enjoying the party thrown by Shashank. As Riddhima decided she would stay with Sid and not break her marriage.Armaan of course was hurt but he had accepted the fact that his basket was now Dr Riddhima Siddhant Modi..and he tried his level best to avoid her.Riddhima knew that Armaan was heart broken and she wanted to hug him and comfort him but being a wife she had to maintain a distance from him..Armaan was standing in the corner looking at the Interns dancing and playing pranks..He remembered his Internship days where he was so happy.He missed his friends so much and he so needed them right now.He wanted to cry on a shoulder and let his heart out.
Sue:I'm so happy for Bro..Usse dekho bhabhi ke saath kitna khush hai
Yuvi:Of course Riddhima Sid ke paas hi jaati.Uska pati hai after all
Naina:By the way guys abhi tak Sid aur Riddhima ne ek dusre se I love you nahi kaha hai
J.P:Arey ha!!Ye baat toh sabse zaruri hai
Sue:They won't say it so easily kuch karna padega
J.P:Humare paas ek idea hai!
J.P:Hum Dr Riddhima ko talli kar dete hai
Sue:Are you crazy??
J.P:Arey pura idea toh suniye..jab Riddhima flower jee talli hongi tab vo apni dill ki baat bata dengi aur unke dill mai toh Sid bhaiya hai!
Yuvi:Awesome idea J.P!
Sue:Are guys sure??
Yuvi:Ha Ha Sue..Koi tention mat lo..
J.P:Hum waiter ke pass jate hai
J.P goes to the waiter and bribes him..He tells the waiter to add alcohol in the orange juice and give it to Riddhima..The waiter obeys J.P and gives the Riddhima the orange juice mixed with alcohol. Riddhima is standing beside Sid.She drinks the Orange juice and feels dizzy...She excuses herself and goes away and switches off the lights..and goes and stands on the sofa..
Riddhima:Ligghtsss Onnn pleaaassseee
Armaan is shocked seeing Riddhima in that state..
Armaan:[murmers]Oh No!Riddhima's drunk!Lekin ye kaise
Sid:Riddhima chalo neeche utro
Riddhima:Tum kaun hote ho muje neeche utarne wale?
Riddhima:Pati??Haawww meri shaadi ho gayi!
Sid:Ye kaisi ajeeb ajeeb baate kar rahi ho Riddhima..
Sid:How do you know
Armaan:Riddhima ka 'Ligghtsss Onnn pleaaassseee' se sab pata chal jata hai
Riddhima:[gets down]Armaan kitnaaa smart hai..Sid tum naa dabbu ho!
Armaan:Dabbu means Duffer
Riddhima:Areeyyy...tum toh genius ho.Meri har ek baat jante ho.Mere junior hulk..
Armaan:Riddhima stop it..aur Sid what is wrong with you Riddhima ko le jao yaar
Riddhima:Kyyyuuuu??Mai nahi jaungi
Armaan:Shut Up!And go
Riddhima:Tum bhi phissuu nikle Atul ki tarah!
Armaan:Ridz mai phissu nahi hu..okay
Armaan:Muje kuch prove karne ki zarurat nahi hai.Sid take her man!
Riddhima:Chup Chup Chup!Tum *points at Armaan* meri baat kaan kholke suno..*pauses* Areyy kaan toh kholo!
Armaan:Mere kaan khule hai Riddhima
Riddhima:Accha?Okay toh mai keh rahi thi..ki Mai Sid ke saath nahi jaungi!
Armaan:WHAT!Riddhima pagal mat bano.He's your husband
Riddhima:But I love you
Armaan:[stares at her for a moment]Riddhima tum abhi nashe mai ho..Kuch bhi bol deti ho
Riddhima:Nashe mai hum sach hi kehte haina Armaan
Armaan:Don't do this to me Riddhima please
Riddhima:You don't do this to me
Armaan:Maine kya kiya
Riddhima:Tumne kya kiya?Tumne sab kuch kia..Tum cupid banne chale the na..Tumne Sid ko divorce dene se roka na..Tumne muje Sid ki aur push kia na
Armaan:Toh aur kya karta
Riddhima:Mere liye lad sakte na.
Armaan:*cups her face*Kaise ladta Riddhima??Jab tum hi meri saath nahi thi toh ladne ka kya fayda
Riddhima:Mai toh humesha tumhare saath thi Armaan
Armaan:Toh fir kyu humesha mujse dur bhagti rehti thi?
Armaan:Kis baat mai?
Riddhima:Meri shaadi ho gayi thi..aur papa bhi muje keh rahe the ki shaadi nahi todni chahiye vagera vagera..
Armaan:Toh tumne isliye shaadi nahi todi
Sue:Bhabhs app ye kya keh rahi hai *keeps her hand on Riddhima's shoulder*
Riddhima:Haath mat lagao
Riddhima:Has kyu rahe ho tum?
Armaan:Ye 'Haath mat lago' tum ne last year muje kaha tha isliye
Riddhima:Haaaaa..aur phir tum na kaha tha "Trust Me..mai haath lagana bhi nahi chahta"
Riddhima:[sadly] Abhi bhi haath nahi lagana chahte na
Armaan:[shocked]Nahi Riddhima aisi baat nahi hai
Sid:Riddhima chalo tum abhi kuch bhi bol rahi ho
Sid catches Riddhima by her shoulder and drags her..Riddhima looks back at Armaan..and makes a sad face..Her face was trying to tell him to stop Sid.Armaan looked at Riddhima.He didn't know what to do.On one side he wanted to stop her and on the other he felt it wasn't right
Sid:Kyu?Look at Riddhima's state man..
Armaan:Ha..toh toh vahi toh hai tum akele usse nahi sambhal paoge..last time bhi muje Anjie aur Atul ka support chahiye tha
Sid:Mai uska pati hu.I don't need help
Armaan:[goes and takes Riddhima on his side]Maine kaha na Riddhima yehi rahegi matlab yehi rahegi
Riddhima:Yaaayy'Armaan tum na bahuttt acche ho..Muje yehi rehna hai..Sid tum jao..tumhe jana hai na..tum jao.Armaan muje leke ayega.He's an expert in handling me.
Sid:Riddhima..tum meri baat.
Riddhima:Shhhhh...Tum meri baat suno..Mai Armaan ke saath rahugi!
Armaan:Sid can you move one minute
Armaan:Riddhima..ye tumhara pati hai..your husband..Apne pati se aise baat karte hai?
Riddhima:[thinks for a moment]Nai
Armaan:Good Girl..Toh chalo Sid ko bolo I am sorry
Armaan:Pleasee mere liye..
Armaan:Now that's like my Riddhima
Riddhima:'My Riddhima' Awwww'tum bhi mujse pyaar karte ho na..
Armaan:Ha karta hu..lekin..
Riddhima:[interrupts him]Meri shaadi ho gayi hai yehi naa..tum na kitna double bolte ho..ek taraf keh rahe ho ki tumne mera saath kyu nahi diya aur dusre taraf jab mai sabse kehna chahti hu ki mere dill sirf aur sirf tum ho tab tum muje meri shaadi yaad dila rahe ho.
Armaan:Mai tumhe apna banana chahu toh bhi kuch nahi kar sakta Riddhima
Riddhima:Divorce naam ki cheez suni hai tumne?
Armaan:[sarcastic]Divorce ya sure!
Armaan:Last time jab Sid ne tumhe divorce dena chaha tum toh itna bhadak gayi thi ki pucho mat!
Riddhima:Obviously..tab na muje Sid pe crush tha
Riddhima:Haaa..lekin ab chala gaya..ab sirf pyaar hai tumhare liye..
Sid:Crush?Mai sirf ek crush tha?
Riddhima:I'm so sorry Sid..lekin ha sirf crush..mera pyaar toh Armaan hai..Mera Armaan..
Armaan:Are you crazy Riddhima?Are you insane?
Riddhima:Ha mai pagal hu tumhare pyaar mai aur zindigi bhar is pagalpaan mai rahungi.Please Armaan muje apne saath leke jao..Mai nahi reh paungi tumhare bina..Muje tumhare bina jeena nahi ata..I love you Armaan.Please..please muje le jao
The staff and the Interns were shocked listening to Riddhima.They all thought Riddhima had moved on but no Riddhima hadn't moved on. She couldn't spend her life with out Armaan and that is what they realized right now..All the Interns felt that it would be really cruel if they kept Armaan and Riddhima apart just because of the marriage and the status in the society..
Armaan on the other hand was happy.He felt like dancing when Riddhima said those 3 words which he wanted to hear.He felt like hugging her tight and telling her 'I will always be there for you' and comfort her.He wanted to take her along with him but one thing which stopped was Riddhima.Right now Riddhima was drunk she didn't know what she was saying.Yes she was speaking her heart out but what if the next day she just rubbishes all these things.It would break him down completely.He wanted to take the risk of taking Riddhima along with him.The society,Sid,Dr Shashank didn't matter to Armaan as he knew he could deal with them but his main fear was Riddhima..At that moment Riddhima spoke as if she had read his mind
Riddhima:Tumhe lagta hai ki mai kal ye sab kuch bhul jaungi na
Riddhima:Bas ek baar....ek baar muje saath le chalo I promise mai kabhi bhi ye decision regret nahi karungi..Humesha tumhara saath dungi.Hum dono milke duniye se ladenge bas ek baar muje apne saath lelo
This was enough for Armaan.Riddhima's assurance gave Armaan the strength to fight which he had lost.He hugged Riddhima tightly. Riddhima hugged him back.The hug was passionate.Both of them hugged each other as if the world about to end..but well who could blame them.They had stayed away from each other for 8 long months.They had tasted the dish of separation and disliked it , hated it.Both of them couldn't stay with out each other.They were like 2 bodies but 1 soul..They broke the hug..A pair of tears made way through Armaan's eyes..Riddhima rubbed them of with her fingers and kissed his hand.Unknowninly making a promise that she will always be there with him and spend all her good and bad times with him.Armaan took Riddhima's hand and kept it on his heart.He tried to convey that he was sorry for leaving her in the hut and he promised never to do that again.He promised her that in all bad times he will be there for her.He wouldn't take any major decision regarding them alone..Riddhima smiled..Seeing Riddhima's smile Armaan smiled too he could now see the naughtiness in her eyes once again.They hugged once again..and this hug meant that they will always face the world together
Weeks passed...only a month left for a year to end. All of them forgot about going back. The gang of six teens was so strong that nothing could separate them. And Aryan and Sanjana? Well, they did realize their love, but no one had courage to confess. The six teens knew that they loved each other. Aryan had told the boys ad Sanjana had told the girls.(you know sharing with someone of youe gender is easy). But they girls and boys didnt tell each other.
It was a usual Sunday afternoon, and the gang was sitting in Tam and Kareena's room.
Avi was sitting on the couch, playing with a tennis ball, Adi was playing PSP, Armaan was doing something in his cellphone. Riddhima was sitting on kareena's bed reading a magazine, Kareena was doing her nails and Tam was sitting on her bed, reading a Novel.
Avi - Kya yaar kitna boring Sunday hai? .
Ar- I know right..he chal lets play that ball, better then nothing.
So they started playing the ball, and hit riddhima on her leg once, and once the ball hit adi's hand and PSP fell from his hand.
Ar - sorry dude..
Adi - Its ok waise bhi isse bore ho raha tha.
He stood up and went towards the door. And Avi and Armaa started playing again. Suddenly before Adi could open the door, he heard a loud scream. He covered his ears and turned around.
It was kareena. Well hua yeh ki this time the ball hit kareena, which spoiled her nails..^_^
So It was time to run for Avi and Armaan. They ran out of door pushing Adi even Kareena ran behind them with a bottle in her hand, but before she could target on Avi ya Armaan, she stumbled near the door and all the water fell on..u know who..
Adi - Kareenaaaa...
Kar - sorry woh...
but before she could say more Adi went behind her...the others were lifing like a maniac at them...then suddenly Adi bumped into Arya who had just came back from office..
Ari - Ab kaunsa naya hungama shuru kar diya hai
Ar ' Kuch nahi, har roz ka same waala...
Rid ' Aapka din kaisa tha bhaiyya?
Ari ' Bahot achha tha....magar thoda tiring tha.
Avi ' Are lo...jab sanj hogi toh achha hi hoga na?
Rid ' Matlab?
Avi ' Matlab yeh ki...(suddenly Armaan put hand on his mouth)
Ar ' kya bake jaa raha hai?? Matlab yeh ki Sanj hogi toh woh sab kaam sambhal legi na? Toh..
But it was too late...girls are too smart for this. So Riddhima made a plan in her mind.
Rid ' bhaiyya...aap..umm..Di se...i mean..!!
Aryan sighed..he knew this will come up some day..aaj nahi toh kal..!
Ari ' Yeah..! mein sanj se..i mean usse..bahot pyaar karta hu.
Aryan looked down and nodded.
Kar ' Bhaiyya....Dii bhi aapse BAHOTTTT Pyaar karti hai.
Aryan was sooo happy..he was on 9th cloud.his love..his life..! he was soo happy.
Rid ' Shitt..!!!
Tam ' isse kya hua?
Rid ' (she looked at the girls and winked in a way guys wont notice.
Rid 'Aaj toh di arush ko ha kardegi!
Rid ' haan...ek week pehle aarush di ka best friend, usne di ko propose kiya tha...but di toh bhaiyya se pyaar karti hai..so usne kaha ki agar 1 week ke andar bhaiyya ne propose nahi kiya toh woh..
By now Tam $ Kar knew wat to do..!
Tam ' Toh ab toh unhone ha kar diya honga na??
Ari ' KYA?
Kar ' ab apna kya kya baad mein karna..abhi jao!!
Without thinking anything more..Aryan ran out of the house. He went to Sanj's house..! He reached therre in 2min and rang the bell. Sanj was making parathas,she washed her hand and was going to open the door when her phone rang. She saw it was riddhima.
Rid ' di woh.............(she told her the plan)
Rid ' yess..ab jao darwaza kholo...
Sanj ohh ha..
And she opened the door, to find Aryan breathing heavily. He didnt say a word just hugged her tight. Sanj was taken aback.
"ok i know he loves me and came to propose me, but why is he...what? he is crying? Aryan.."
Sanj ' Aryan..Kya hua ( she broke the hug and looked at him tensed...Why are you crying??? Tum..!
Aryan just looked at her then huggged her again and said
"Please aisa mat karna..please. Mein tumahre bina nahi rehsakta. Tum hi mera aaj aur tumhi mera kal ho. Meri saari khushiya tum ho..tumhare bina meri zindagi aur mein dono adhure hai. Tum ho toh din hai tum ho toh raat hai. Meri har khwaish tumse shuru hoti hai aur tumhi se khatam hoti hai. Zindagi ke har mod ki manzil sirf tum hi ho sanjana..sirf tum.please mujhe apne se dur mat karo. Please."
Sanjana was really touched by this. She didnt know what to say. She just stared at in the volume, but her heart was doing summersaults. She was really happy. And aryan misunderstood her silence. He thought she has already said yes to Arush.
Ari ' Noo...aisa nahi hosakata...plzz Sanjana,..aisa mat karo..!
Sanjana suddenly came out of her thoughts when she heard this. And then she suddenly understood what happened.
Ar ' Please Sanjana.. I LOVE YOU,..please tum kisi aur ki mat hona. Mein mein mar jaunga..
Sanj- Shhh....bas ab aur kuch nahi..!! I LOVE YOU TOO ARYAN..I love you..and only you. Aur tumne kaise sochliya ki mein tumhare siva kisi aur ki ho jaungi huh?? Maine pyaar tumse kiya hai. Aur apni zindagi ka har sukun tumhe maana hai. Tum ho toh mein hu.
Aryan was now too happy. He cant explain even himself how happy he felt. He just carried her from her waist and twirled her.
Suddenly they smelled something.
Ari ' Whats this smell?
Sanj ' yeh toh...PARATHE.!
She ran to the kitchen..and Ari ran behind her. The Paratha was whole burned..lol(kisne kaha tha pyaar mein dubne ko?)
They reached there and saw the parathe were all black..She had to clean it all up, Aryan helped her and when they were done they sat down on the couch laughing hard.
Aryan was Lost in her beauty. She looked like an angel to him. Sanjana looked at him staring at her. Aryan took a strand of her hair that came across her face and put it behind her staring at her lovingly. Sanjana hugged him out of nervousness. Aryan to hid her in his arms Never to let her go.
Ar ' Pata hai Sanjana, ek pal ke liye toh laga ki tum Aarush ko haan kehdogi. Aur tum meri nahi hogi.
Sanj suddenly remembered about the plan. She smiled inwardly and then came out of her hug.
Sanj ' Waise tum chahho toh mein use dhund loongi..waise yeh aarush dikhta kaisa hai?
Aryan was suddenly confused."what?"
Sanj ' haan..ab tum uski baat kar rahe ho toh tumhe hi pata hoga na??
Ari ' mein...(suddenly everything made sense to him) Tum logo ne..
Sanjana just stood up and ran away..
Ari ' Is ridzi, Kareena aur Tam ko mein nahi chhodunga,,,par pehle isse toh pakdu..?
So that was the next Part..Sorry..small one again
Ok Guys..I know I am soo bad..I did all this things. But guys, I was actually gonna Stop this FF, but I thought Let me just ask my readers Last time. So i did. And All ur encouraging comments made me write this Part. And here it is.
I hope you like this Part. But there is one thing. I wont be able to reply to your comments unless its necessary. I will just like them. As I dont have much time. But i promise to do it whenever I get time ok.
Aryan Sanjana engagement, and .........
Armaan ' Oh shittttttt.!!!
Tam ' Sab meri galti hai, noo.. Avi...
Rid ' Its ok Tam, it wasnt your fault.
Kareena ' Aditya...no wayyyy!! Ridzi Adi nahi hai..
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