Is it love?

Hi everyone!!! I've been commenting for a long time now and thought of starting
a new FF.
In my FF Armaan is a 17 year old boy and Riddhima is a
15 year old girl.....
Note:- It is based on true life incidents
So most of the things will be real but I may add fictious
things as well
Hope you all like it
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"Oye ! Kya kar rahi hai? Marna chahti hai kya?"
She was horrified at what she was about to do...........

NOTHING !!!

She was angry at her best friend now
"Muski !! Main kuch nahi kar rahi thi.Kyu bekaar mein darra rahi hai?"
Muskaan had now burst into peals of laughter
"Arre! Tu kar to rahi thi...tu soch rahi thi.Agar tu apne
Itne chchote dimag par zyada zor degi na to phir to....khachaak!!!!"
She indicated with her hands as though she would be dead.

Riddhima Gupta and Muskaan Chaddha were best friends.
The whole class knew about them and though they pulled
each others legs no one would dare mess them when they were
together.
By now even Riddhima was smiling.
Ri:Muski,tujhe pata kaise chalta hai ki main kab upset rehti hun?
Mu:Madam ye jo aap apne sir par haath rakh kar baithe ho
to kai bachcha bhi bata de ki duniya ki biggest dumbo
upset hai.Kya hua?
Ri:Kuch nahi yaar,aise hi sar dukh raha tha.
Mu:Theek ...Oye! ye kya?[indicating to the ring on her left
hand] Uh..huh..engangement ?[with a mischevious grin]
Ri:Pagal ho gayi hai kya? Ye to aise hi dad lekar aaye the.
Mere right hand mein fit nahi ho rahi thi left mein pehen li,
dad ne bhi kaha ki koi problem nahi hai.Aaj-kal waise bhi kaun dekhta hai?
Mu:Hmmmm......theek hai tu bol rahi hai to maan leti hun.
Waise ring bohot achchi hai.
Ri:Haan.Platinum ki hai with daimond on it.
Mu:Fake to nahi hai na?
With that she dashed out of the class with Riddhima
running behind her....
"Ruk...Main tujhe nahi chodungi...Muskaan...
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Aaj ke liye bas itna...
and yeah your comments are a welcome with appreciation
and/or criticism...
Keep smiling !!!!
Love,
Munazza ^_^

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Part 14: The World Stopped that moment

Atul pushed the wheel chair slowly and as they approached the Cafeteria…Armaan heard something and signed Atul to stop…

They stood there and heard Rahul and Ridhima speak to each other…

Rahul: “Phir kya hua…???”

Ridz: “Main majboor thi Rahul…ek taraf papa ki izzat and doosri taraf mom ki tabiyat…main Armaan ke bina jeene ka soch bhi nahin sakti thi…”

Rahul: “Phir….????”

Ridz: “Sid aage aaya and bola main Ridhima se shaadi karne ko taiyaar hoon…na chahte hue bhi mujhe apne dil par pathar rakh kar haan kehna paraa…maine tou zahar khake aapne aap ko khatam bhi karna chahaa but kismet ne mera wahan bhi saath nahin diya…”

Rahul: “Haan Ridhima…hamesha aap jaisa chahte tou waisa nahin hota life mein…main yeh bahut achchi tarah se jaanta hoon…”

Ridz: “Phir achanak ek din Armaan laut aaya…”… she smiled and said… “Use dekh kar main sab kuch bhul gayi…apni woh zindagi bhi jou maine majboori mein chuni thi…”

Rahul : “Hmmm”

Ridz: “Usne jab mujhe pehli baar aane ke baad gale lagaya tou meri jitni bhi shikayatein thi apni kismet se sab khatam ho gayi…”… she had tears in her eyes, “But mere jaise pairon tale zameen khisak gayi when I recalled that I was no longer his…and Sid was my husband…”

Rahul: “Phir????”

Ridz: “Usse nazrein milane ki himmat nahin hui meri…main use kaise batati that uski basket ab kisi aur ki ho chuki thi…”… “Use jab yeh pataa chala tab woh Sanjeevani chorh kar Panchgani chala gaya…”

Rahul : “Aur tum???”

Ridz : “Ridhima Armaan ke alawa aur kisi ki nahin ho sakti…yeh baat mujhe Sid ko batani pari that main aaj bhi Armaan se pyaar karti hoon…main uski friend tou ban sakti hoon but use mujh mein apni best friend and wife shayad kabhi nahin milegi….”

Rahul : “Phir???”

Ridz: “Woh yeh jaldi hi samajh gaya… and usne papa se yeh baat ki???” … “Armaan ke jaane ke 3 month baad hi hamara mutual consent se divorce ho gaya and woh apni mom ke saath America laut gaya…”

Rahul : “Tou Ridhima tumne Armaan se kaha kyon nahin…???”

Ridz: “Rahul maine Armaan ki life mein problems hi problems layi hoon…is baar main uski problems aur barhana nahin chahti…kya yeh zaruri hai ki main jab use kahoon ki tum chale jao tou woh chala jaaye and jab bulaaoon woh bhaagta hua meri life mein wapas aa jaaye…woh ab mera nahin rahaa Rahul…”

Rahul: “Ridhima aapko nahin maloom but aaj bhi Armaan ki aankhon mein aap hi basi hui hain…woh chahe kuch bhi na kahe but uski aankhein aaj bhi sirf aapko hi dekhti hain and sirf aap hi ko chahta hai…”

Ridz : “Nahin Rahul…its too late now…maine use kho diya hai hamesha ke liye…”

They continued to talk, Armaan and Atul looked at each other…

Armaan had tears in his eyes…

Atul patted his shoulder…they did not know what to say…

Atul pushed the wheel chair and brought Armaan back to his bed in the ward…

He helped Armaan get up onto the bed…

His physical weakness and his emotional exhaustion after whatever he just heard had made him very tired..he closed his eyes and fell asleep…

He woke up when he felt at a drop of water fall on his palm…

He saw Ridhima sitting on the bed next to him with tears in her eyes…

As he looked at her, she quickly wiped off her tears and smiled at him softly…

“Chalo uth ke kuch kha lo….”

She had a bowl of soup in her hand….

He got up… and sat leaning against the bed stead…

She took a spoon of soup and brought it close to his mouth… he opened his mouth and she put it in…

“Mmmm…kitna hot hai…!!!”

“Sorry…”

She took another spoon and blew it softly…he looked at her face and her lips…

She again got the spoon close to his mouth and he held her hand while she put the spoon in her hand…

He did not let go off her hand, she looked down and said softly, “Armaan mera haath…”

“Sorry….”, he lets go…

After he finished the soup, she gave him his medicines and was about to leave the room, when he stopped her… “Ridhima ruko na please….”

She came and sat quietly next to his bed… “Kya hua???”

“Kuch nahin…main yeh poochna chahta tha… Main ab theek hoon…mujhe discharge kar karenge???”

“Hmmmm….Theek hai main Dr. Keerti se baat karti hoon….”

“Achcha ab tum aaraam karo…main rounds ke baad tumse milti hoon…”

She was about to leave the room when she suddenly turned around…and said, “Armaan main tumhare liye kuch layi thi…”

“Haan pataa hai…Soup jo maine abhi pi liya and medicines jo tumne abhi mujhe di…”

“Armaaaaaan…”

Armaan was looking away when a set of comics appear in front of him…,

“Comics???”, he smiled brightly… “Tumhe ab tak yaad hai????”

Ridhima stood there looking at Armaan and said to herself, “Armaan main kabhi bhi tumhari koi baat nahin bhool sakti….”

“Kuch kahaa tumhe…???”

“Nahin…”, she said and walked out…

Armaan opened a comic and started reading excitedly like a child…

Ridz walked out of the ward and looked at him standing outside…she smiled to see her innocent Armaan, who meant everything in her life…

Guys thanks a lot for your lovely comments Aditi, Anuj, Ashima, Poonam, Vaishu and Hinal and thanks to all the silent readers who pressed the Like Button...each of you mean a world to me....Thanks again.

Love
Mandira

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Dill Mill Gayye April 16 Episode

Serial: Dil Mil Gaye (Dill Mill Gayye)
Channel : Star One

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Part 23: The Story of a Prince and a Princess

A RAINY-NIGHT

Arman bed per leta hua hai....……but oose need nahi aa rahi hai....……atul paas hi soya hai aur need mein beech-beech mein hi "Anji I love you" kahta jar aha hai.....….arman ko hansi aati hai....….jo abtak anjali se ekbaar bhi shayad hi 'I love you' kaha ho....…wo sapne mein na jaane kitni baar kah raha hai.....….

Arman ke AIIMS ke rejult aa choke hain....…oosne top kiya hai.....….aur wo bahoot paresaan hai..........…..bush yahan aur kuch deen...….feer Mumbai wapus aur feer oose riddhima ko chorkar delhi jana parega....……oosdin ke baad basket ko bhi ye place achcha lagne laga hai....….ab wo dono apni duty khatm karke everyday evening oos garden mein ghoomne jate...…..garden mein wo dono soonhare sapno mein khoye rahte.....…saadi ke baad ye karenge,wo karenge.....….kabhi kisi baat ko lekar dono mein fight bhi ho jati....….feer thori der baad ek doosre ko 'sorry' kahte....…..per oonhone oos deen ke baad apples nahi khaye....…pata nahi nashe mein kya ker baithe!arman ne apni basket ka hath apne hathon mein lekar oos apple trees se wada kiya hai ki after marriage ,wo dono yahan aayenge aur dher saare apples khayenge....…..

Per pata nahi oonki saadi kab hogi!!!….

Arman ko lagta hai....….dr.sashank jaan boojhker oonki saadi ko late kar rahe hain....…..jab se wo hadsa hua ...….dr.sashank riddhima ko apne se alag hi nahi karna chahte.... …..aur oosh deen wo arman ki jaan bachane ki koshish mein hi injure hui thi....….shayad ish liye dr.sashank basket ko ooske saath chorna hi nahi chahte...…..yahan aane se pahle bhi anjali ko bar-bar yahi kah rahe they ki riddhima ka khyal rakhe…......
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

Window se cool wind aa rahi hai...…..arman khirki band karne ke liye oothta hai...…..bahar poonam ki chandni se sab kuch saaf-saaf deekh raha hai.....….shayad baarish aa rahi hai...….arman bahar garden mein aata hai……doooor!!!!…..pahari deekh rahi hai…..arman was wondered!!!aisa sceane to oosne kabhi nahi dekha....…..barsaath ki choti-choti boonde pahar se ootarti hui!!……parbaton se neeche ootarti hai!!..….feer maidan mein! ….koi awaz nahi!….mano koi apne piya se milne ke liye nange paanw(bare feet) choopke se aa rahi ho!…..feer maidan se hote hue arman ko choo jati hai...….but jabtak arman ooski presence ko feel kare...…..oose choote hue nikal jaati hai...…..mano riddhima ne ooske oopar apni choonri dal di ho aur jaise hi wah ooski khushboo ko feel karna chahe....….wah apni shararat bhari muskoorahat ke saath choonri hata le....…….

Arman ko apni basket ki yaad aati hai...…..basket agar ish beautiful sceane ko dekhe to kitni khush hogi! wah dheere-dheere oon logo ke room mein enter karta hai....…..khirki khooli hui hai aur girls ko shayad thand bhi lag rahi hai....….they covered themselves with blankets…..ab arman riddhima ko kaise pahchanega?face se blanket oothaye aur oonki need khool jaaye to!!!

Achanak ooske dimag mein idea aata hai aur wah khud se hi kahta hai…..”wah....…sirji kya idea hai....….

Wah dheere se blanket hathaker oonke pair(LEG) dekhne ka try karta hai...….wah pahla cover hatathe hi najar aata hai...…..komal,whitish pair!!!….golden nailpolish aur golden paayal....….jo oosne basket ko valentine day mein gift diye they....….riddhima like golden colour so much....….keun na ho!!she is also a golden goodiya(doll)….…..

Arman riddhima ke face se dheere se cover hatatha hai....….riddhima ki need khool jati hai aur wo ek pyari si muskurahat ke saath arman ke galey mein apni baahen daal deti hai....….ooske payal baj oothte hain....….roonnn!!…..roonnnn!!…jhoonnn!!.…jhoonnnn!!!!!!!!!!!!

Muskan need mein hi barbarati hai....….."chor na rahul....…keun tang karta hai....….

Sab need mein apni-apni pyar bhari dooniya mein khoye hue hain...wahan atul....yahan muskan....per arman ko apni dooniya khooli aankho se pana hai......

Arman riddhima ko apni bahon mein oothaker bahar le aata hai aur garden mein ootar deta hai.....
Riddhima : "ab itni raat ko yahan keun le aaye?
Arman : "basket,toomhe kuch dikhana hai...
Riddhima : "morning mein nahi deekha sakte they?
Arman :"nahi basket....…wo oodhar pahari per dekho...….

Riddhima was amazed!!!pahari se aati hui baarish aur dheeme se oose chooker goojer jana!!

Riddhima baarish dekh rahi hai aur arman apni basket ko....…..’kitni khubsoorat lag rahi hai!mano koi choti bachchi ko ek raja ki kahani soonai ja rahi ho!riddhima ki kajrari aankhe aur bhi bari-bari hokar fail gayi hai...….…..lips per wahi kill karne wali muskurahat!

Riddhima : "how beautiful!arman.... ….poet wadsworth ne thik hi likhe they...….”how beautiful is the rain”!!

Arman : "nahi....….oonhe likhna chahiye tha....…”how beautiful is riddhima in the rain”
Riddhima : "arman..…toom bhi na....….kya mujhe dekhne ke liye aadhi raat ko yahan laaye they?
Arman : yes....…ish baarish mein toomhe.....….dill to chahta hai....…yahin rah jaaoon....….roj toomhe ish baarish mein bheegte hue dekhoon aur like wadsworth poem likhoon…..

Riddhima : aur mai agar beemar per jaaoon...…..
Arman : ye toomhara lover doctor toomhare paas kisi beemari ko aane hi nahi dega…..

Achanak joron se barsaat hone lagti hai...…..mano oonki khushi mei shamil hone aa gayi.....….arman ki baahon mein riddhima!!!…..bheegti hui!…..baarish arman ko chooti hui riddhima tak pahoonchti aur riddhima ke lips mano oonhe sokh leti...….
Arman : "not fair basket..….
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Riddhima :'kya?
Arman : toom pyaas boojhao aur mai pyaasa rahoon!...….aur wah riddhima ke waist mein haath daalker oose ooper ootha leta hai..….ab thik tha....

….riddhima ke black shiny hair ko...… forehead ko....….pinky cheeks ko...…rosy lips ko...….dill ko...…dharkan ko....…. chooti hui baarish ki boonde arman ke lips tak pahoonch rahi thi aur 'AMRITYA' banker ooski pyaas bujha rahi thi.....…..



hai frnds......dear aditi(shilpa),hinal(pyari sis),vaishali,ankit,sweety and all frnds...thanx for your comments....hope aapko ye part bhi achchi lagegi....plz.do comments....and press the tab also...but meri kuch pyari-pyari frnds...nitisha,aaku,mandy,prats,prachi mere last ff mein missing hai...plz.wapus aao...i miss you yaar....love...
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Poem for Karan: Na Jao Armaan

"NA JAO ARMAAN"

NA JAO ARMAN...
ISH TARAH TO NA JAO
ROOTH KAR APNE RIDHZ SE
KHOOD KO NA EUN TARPAAO


YE DOONIYA BARI JAALIM HAI
KOOCH CHEENO TO DETI HAI
BHALE BANKAR GIRGIRAO TO
AANKHE FER LETI HAI

APNA HAQ CHEEN LO FEER SE
RIDHZ KO TOOM APNAO
AANKHO MEIN AANKHE DAALKER OOSKE
SACHCHI BAAT OOGALBAO

TERA PYAR,TERA KHWAB
NAINO MEIN OOSKE SAMAYA HAI
OOSKE DILL MEIN TU HI TU HAI
SIDH BHI SAMAJH YE PAAYA HAI

NAASAMAJH BANKER TOOM EUN
KISMAT KO NA THOOKRAO
APNI TO BUSH PRAY HAI ITNI
RIDHZ AUR TOOM MILL JAO

(love---karan"kabhi goodbye mat kahna")
punam(purnima)

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Part 13: The World Stopped that moment

Part (a)
Atul was looking all this while and smiled recalling the old times when they were together…a couple everyone thought were made just for each other and no one could separate ever….not even GOD…

Ridhima knocked lightly on Dr. Keerti’s cabin door… “Come in….”

She entered and saw Dr. Keerti looking into a case file… “Dr. Ridhima…main abhi Dr. Armaan ki report dekh rahi thi…did you check him????”

“Haan maam, BP, pulse wagarah tou theek hai under control but fever uska abhi bhi 104 hai… convulsions lekin nahin hain like last nite…”

“Ridhima typhoid ke baare mein tou pataa hi hai…its takes several days to heal… stomach ache tou nahin hai????” she looked questioningly at Ridz…”Kabhi kabhi dekha gaya hai…”

“Nahin usne complain tou nahin kiya about it…”

“Theek hai…aap unhe closely monitor kijiye and unhe liquids, soups, juices khilate rahiye…weakness ho jayegi nahin tou and it he will take longer to recuperate…”

“Maam appetite loss ho gaya hai uska…”

“I know…but abhi hamein unka khayal rakhna parega…ziddi bhi tou bahut hai Armaan…bilkul ek chote bachche ki tarah…”

“Theek hai Dr. Keerti main aapse milti hoon…Armaan ki medicines ka time ho gaya hai…”, Ridz said and left the room….

As she entered the ICU…she saw Armaan awake and looking blankly at the ceiling…

“Armaan kya hua…how are you feeling…???”…she asked as she took out a tablet and poured some juice from the jug into the glass…

“Ridhima woh main kuch soch raha tha…something that I wanted to ask you…”

She extended her hand to give him the tablet and looked at him quietly… he took the tablet and the juice glass and swallowed it…

He was about to look at her to continue his sentence but instead of words, a cry came out of his mouth as he held pressed his stomach and grimaced in pain…
“AAAAH”…

“Armaaaan…kya hua???”

Armaan didn’t say anything and pressed his stomach harder… “mmmmmm”, he groaned….

The nurse paged Keerti and she came immediately…

She looked at Armaan and at Ridhima who stood like a stone staring at Armaan…

“Ridhima…Ridhimaa…Dr. Ridhimaaa…”, Ridz looked at Keerti… “its just another symptom…kabhi kabhi ho jaata hai…get an abdominal scan done immediately and bring me the reports as soon as they come in…OK???”

“Ji maam”…

Ridz ran with the scan report to Keerti’s room… “Maam…”, she had a very scared look on her face as she handed the report to keerti…

“Hmmm…intestinal hemorrhage …”

“Ridhima, Armaan ko immediately yeh medicines IV dijiye…”, she said and wrote down on a piece of paper and gave it to Ridhima…

Ridz entered the ICU with the medicine when she saw keerti waiting for her…she was stroking his head and trying to calm him down… “Calm down Armaan…sab theek ho jayega…”

She looked at Armaan, he was in lot of pain and she was tears roll down his cheeks and his eyes closed tight…

She quickly took the medicine bottle and started an IV line on the back of his palm… Armaan slowly fell asleep…


(b)

Armaan’s condition slowly started to improve…. Ridhima, Atul and Rahul constantly looked after him…they took turns to stay by his side and never left him alone even for a single second…he was a person who was very special for all of them…he had done his best and even risked his life to be by their side from day one…

After one week…

Armaan is sleeping peacefully and Atul is sitting next to his bed and reading the Sunday Times…

Armaan opens his eyes and speaks to Atul...

“Champ….”

Atul keeps the newspaper aside and looks at Armaan…. “Haan bol…”

“Champ kitne din ho gaye hain mujhe isi bed par lete lete…suraj ki roshni kaisi hoti hai main jaise bhul hi gaya hoon…Bas yeh hospital ki chaar diwaarein and yeh tubelight ki roshni…”

Atul smiled and said, “Ab teri tabiyat hi itni kharab thi…kya kar sakte hain…???”

“Chal na champ bahar chalte hain thori der ke liye…”

“Pagal hai kya??? Hitler…”, he smiled… “Dr. Keerti aa gayi tou tujhe bhi dantengi and mujhe tou shoot hi kar dengi…”

“But I feel much much better and thora khuli hawa main jaoonga tou achcha lagega…”

Atul looked at Armaan’s face… “Achcha ruk main Dr. Keerti se pooch kar aata hoon…”

He left the ward and Armaan started to wait for him to return…

Atul knocked on Keerti’s cabin door… “Come in…”

He opened the door and went and stood near the table… “Maam…woh main aapse kuch poochne aaya hoon…”

“Boliye Atul kya baat hai…”

“Dr. Keerti Armaan kuch der ke liye sunlight mein jaane ki zidd kar raha hai… bol raha tha…”

“But Dr. Atul Typhoid ki wajah se bahut weak ho gaye hain woh…mujhe nahin lagta that….”

“Maam aap Armaan ko nahin jaanti…and main hoon na…”

“Dr. Atul theek hai khayal rakhiyega that he doesn’t exert at all…ho sake tou use a wheel chair…agar weakness se phir koi problem ho gayi tou mushkil hogi…”

“Ok maam”…Atul smiles and leaves Keerti’s room…

We walks into the general ward with a wheel chair… “Le teri savari…aa gayi….”

“Champ…Armaan ko iski koi zarurat nahin hai…”

“OK…”

Atul pulled of the sheets and Armaan got up from the bed but the fortnite on a liquid diet and the disease had taken a huge toll on his health…

He immediately sat down on the bed… “Mujhe lagta hai wheel chair theek rahega…”, he winked at Atul and said…

Atul smiled and nodded his head… he helped Armaan sit on the wheel chair and put his hand on his shoulder and said “Chal…”

Atul pushed the wheel chair slowly and as they approached the Cafeteria…Armaan heard something and signed Atul to stop…

They stood there and heard Rahul and Ridhima speak to each other…

Thanks to all of you for your comments Anuj, Naimat, Ashima, Dr. DS, Vaishu and Punam....

@Punam..i sure liked the dream sequence in your FF and hats off to your poetic bend of mind...the Garden of Eden seemed a painting...

@ Dr. DS...Thanks for your suggestion...but i hate Armaan in so much pain, can't give him more of it...anyway i checked on the internet and tried to keep the typhoid sequence as genuine as possible...God what all doctors have to deal with...hats off to you...

Appreciate the silent readers who pressed the Like Button....

All of you are my inspiration to go on...my rockstars...continue to comment and press the Like button...

Love
Mandira

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Dill Mill Gayye April 15 Episode

Serial: Dil Mil Gaye (Dill Mill Gayye)
Channel : Star One

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Part 422: Muhabbat Ki (Nayi) Raahon Me

I had written this part last week only, but it got delayed because of my health.

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DISCLAIMER:

Certain characters are/were from the TV show DILL MILL GAYYE. Although aspects of this story are loosely based on medical drama, artistic liberty has been taken as this is a FICTIONAL story. Please take note that the author does not have a medical background and that the incidents, medical and law procedures may have a vast difference from reality.


TITLE SONG:

Dill ki tadapti saanson me
Preet ki mehekti baahon me
Dabe-chhipe se alfaazon me
Behke pal ke jazbaaton me
Band palkon ke khwaabon me
Khatti-meethi si baaton me
Jhuki hui si nigaahon me
Nayi-purani kuch yaadon me

Kabhi bichhde dill mill jayenge
Kabhi mill ke bicchad jayenge
Kabhi ladenge, kabhi manayenge
Kabhi rooth-rooth se jayenge
Armaan-Ridhimaa ki muhabbat ka
Hum fir se saath nibhayenge

Fir ek baar...
Manzil ki nayi chhaaon me

Fir ek baar...
Muhabbat Ki Nayi Raahon Me


RECAP:

Kuch zyada to tha nahi... only the wedding night description.


PART 422:

Tamanna knocked at the door a little too strongly, and to her utter surprise, the door flew open. She didn't dare step in.

Tamanna: (calling softly) Ridz... Ammy...

No one answered. Tamanna called out once again. Still there was no answer. Irritated, she barged inside the room and switched on the lights.

Armaan and Ridhimaa, both seemed fast asleep in each others' arms. Tamanna sent up a silent prayer to the heavens seeing the two and approached Ridhimaa.

Tamanna: Ridz... Ridz...

She shook Ridhimaa slightly.

Tamanna: Ridz...

Ridhimaa opened her eyes drowsily and felt Armaan's arms holding her posessively. She smiled, hugged him tighter and again closed her eyes.

Tamanna: (loudly) Ridz utho...

Ridhimaa's eyes jerked open instantly. The sight of Tamanna standing over her head made Ridhimaa go red with embarrassment.

Ridhimaa: (letting go of Armaan immediately) Wo... main... I'm really...

She tried to push Armaan's hands away from her too when Tamanna stopped her.

Tamanna: Relax Ridz...
Ridhimaa: Main... wo... hum...
Tamanna: (cutting Ridhimaa short) Maine door knock kiya to khul gaya...

Ridhimaa did not reply but made a quick note in her mind to scold Armaan for this.

Tamanna: (guiltily) I didn't want to disturb you both...
Ridhimaa: (earnestly) Tamanna please... aise kyun bol rahi ho? Tumhe poora haq hai ki... actually, galti meri hai... mujhe jaldi uthna chahiye tha...
Tamanna: Abhi sirf paanch hi to baj rahe hain Ridz... aur kal tum dono kitna thak gaye hoge... you both need rest... but... mujhe aur Matt ko waapas jaana hai aaj... isliye main tum dono ko...
Ridhimaa: (exclaiming) Tum log aaj hi waapas ja rahe ho?
Tamanna: Haan...
Ridhimaa: Lekin... tum log to rukne waale the na kuch din? Fir achanaq se...
Tamanna: Maine us case ke baare me bataaya tha na... jis ki wajah se hum log Rahul ki shaadi me late aaye the... dad bata rahe the ki kuch complications aa gayi hain... hum dono ko jaana hoga...

Ridhimaa looked disappointed.

Tamanna: (giving instructions) Tum uth jao... aur Ammy ko bhi utha dena... fir fresh ho ke neeche aa jaana... saari rasmein jaldi-jaldi karni hongi... 9 o'clock ki flight hai.

Ridhimaa kept nodding at each instruction obediently.

Tamanna: Kya hua Ridz?
Ridhimaa: (her eyes full of tears) Tum log itni jaldi ja rahe ho... main yahaan sab kaise... akele...
Tamanna: (wiping Ridhimaa's tears) Ridz! Ammy ko pata chalega ki tum meri wajah se ro rahi ho to maarega mujhe...

She looked at Ridhimaa's face, expecting a smile, but Ridhimaa was still sobbing.

Tamanna: Hum log jaldi waapas aa jayenge Ridz... aur tab tak Ammy hoga na tumhare pass. Main usey samjha dungi... wo tumhara bahut achhe se khayaal rakhega...
Ridhimaa: Wo mujhe pata hai, lekin...
Tamanna: (naughtily) Oh... tumhe to sab kuch pata hai...

Ridhimaa blushed.

Tamanna: (cupping Ridhimaa's face in her hands) Ridz... mujhse better tum ye baat jaanti ho ki Ammy ke hote hue, tumhe kabhi koi takleef nahi ho sakti... wo tumhe har haal me khush rakhega... humesha. Hai na?

Ridhimaa glanced at the sleeping Armaan for a second and nodded.

Tamanna: (smiling) Fir tum kyun darr rahi ho?
Ridhimaa: (confessing her fears) Agar... agar main Armaan ko khush nahi rakh paayi to? Mujhse koi galti ho gayi... agar meri wajah se Armaan... main... main kya karungi... kaise usey...
Tamanna: (lovingly) Tumhe kuch karne ki zaroorat nahi padegi Ridz. Tumhara saath, tumhara pyar hi Ammy ke liye kaafi hai. Wo tumse aur kuch nahi chaahta... sirf aur sirf tumhe khush dekhna chaahta hai. Tum khush rahogi, to Ammy bhi khush rahega. Aur main itna to jaanti hoon ki tum Ammy ki khushi ke liye kuch bhi kar sakti ho... fir bhi tumhe kyun lagta hai ki Ammy tumhare saath khush nahi rahega?

Ridhimaa remained silent. She was contemplating on what Tamanna said. Not a word of it was untrue.

Tamanna: Aur agar kabhi Ammy tumse gussa ho jaaye aur daantne lage... to...

Ridhimaa looked at her enquiringly.

Tamanna: (with a big smile on her face) To tum bhi usey daant dena. Isme to tum dono expert ho hi...

Ridhimaa returned the smile. Fully reassured, she looked over at Armaan again, wanting him to wake up and look back at her.

Tamanna: (faking a cough) Ahem-ahem... main abhi yahin hoon Ridz...

When Ridhimaa started to blush again, Tamanna kissed her forehead.

Tamanna: Kal Ammy ne zyada pareshaan to nahi kiya? Achhe se so liye na tum dono?

Ridhimaa nodded while blushing heavily.

Tamanna: Haye! Tumhe abhi tak jhooth bolna nahi aaya... kya hoga tumhara?
Armaan: (piping up) Wahi hoga jo manzoor-e-patidev hoga...

Tamanna smiled, realising that Armaan had heard the conversation, while Ridhimaa started to free herself from Armaan's grip.

Armaan: (holding Ridhimaa firmly) Good morning Dr.Mrs.Ridhimaa Armaan Mallik...
Ridhimaa: (turning a deeper shade of red) Armaan... chhodo...
Armaan: Tumhare maayke me tumhe sikhaaya nahi gaya? Patidev ke good morning ka jawaab... good morning kiss se dete hain...
Ridhimaa: (conscious of Tamanna's presence) Armaan!
Armaan: Waise, agar maayke me nahi sikhaaya... to sasuraal waale sikha denge... actually sasuraal waale kya... iske liye to ye patidev hi kaafi hain...
Ridhimaa: (hitting Armaan's arm) Armaan! Chhodo!
Tamanna: (warningly) Ammy... Ridz ko tang mat karo...
Armaan: (to Tamanna, jokingly) Subah-subah kyun disturb karne aa gayi?
Ridhimaa: (shocked) Armaan!
Armaan: (unwavering, still in the mood of a joke) Tammy... abhi jao... abhi humara romance time hai...
Ridhimaa: Armaan! Tamanna ja rahi hai...
Armaan: Good... bolo jaldi jaaye...
Ridhimaa: (tears again springing into her eyes) I mean... wo aaj waapas Canada ja rahi hai...

Armaan was so shocked that he left Ridhimaa and sat up straight. Ridhimaa too straightened up.

Armaan: (to Tamanna) Tum ja rahi ho aaj?
Tamanna: Ab tum bhi mat rone lag jaana... itni mushkil se Ridz chup hui hai...

Armaan looked at Ridhimaa, who was blinking back her tears.

Armaan: Tum royi thi, Ridhimaa?

Ridhimaa did not answer. Armaan gave her a one-sided hug.

Armaan: Tum royi kyun? Tammy jaldi waapas aa jayegi...

Armaan looked at Tamanna, desperately wanting her to confirm.

Armaan: Aaogi na?

Tamanna smiled and nodded. Ridhimaa pulled her too in the hug.

Tamanna: (separating after a while) Achha chalo... ab jaldi-jaldi fresh ho jao... abhi saari rasmein baaki hain. Main bhi jaati hoon... tum dono fresh hoke aa jaana. Aur haan... Ammy, Ridz... aaj ka Reception cancel karne ke baare me sochna bhi mat.
Armaan, Ridhimaa: (together) Tumhe kaise pata?
Tamanna: (pinching one cheek each of Armaan and Ridhimaa) Bas pata hai... but don't you both dare, ok?
Ridhimaa: Lekin tum yahaan nahi hogi to...
Tamanna: To tum dono ko disturb karne waala bhi koi nahi hoga...
Armaan: (lovingly) Tammy...
Tamanna: Just joking! Waise main call kar ke reception ki saari details poochhungi... isliye... sochna bhi mat!

Armaan smiled and so did Ridhimaa. Tamanna moved towards the door, where she stopped and turned around.

Tamanna: And yeah... aaj se door lock karke sona...

Saying so, she went away. Armaan bit his lip and looked at Ridhimaa sheepishly. Ridhimaa smiled at his cuteness.

Armaan: (surprised) Tum daantogi nahi?
Ridhimaa: Nahi... aap to mere patidev hain na... patidev ko kaise daant sakti hoon?
Armaan: (pulling Ridhimaa closer) Daant nahi sakti to pyar hi kar lo...
Ridhimaa: (bowing her face) Armaan!
Armaan: Ab nakhre mat karo... jab main so raha tha, tab to tum kitna chaah rahi thi ki main tumhe dekhun...
Ridhima: (nervously, without meeting Armaan's intense gaze) Tum... tumhe kaise...
Armaan: Waise hi... jaise tumhe pata hai ki ab main kya karne ja raha hoon... jiski wajah se tum mujhe dekh nahi rahi ho...

Ridhimaa's cheeks grew warmer. Armaan kissed her forehead, then brushed his nose againts hers and was proceeding towards the lips when Ridhimaa pulled away.

Ridhimaa: Jaldi se fresh ho jao... rasmon ke baad pagphere ke liye bhi jaana hai... aur mujhe room bhi theek karna hai... warna tum kal tak isey aise hi chhod doge...
Armaan: Kal tak? Tum aaj wahin rukogi kya?
Ridhimaa: Of course, Armaan...
Armaan: (making a face) But kyun? Main akela yahaan pe kya karunga?
Ridhimaa: Wahi... jo aaj se pehle karte the...

Armaan turned his face away in a huff.

Ridhimaa: (trying to cajole him) Armaan...
Armaan: Nahi... mujhe kuch nahi sunna. Tum nahi rukogi wahaan pe... bas!

Ridhimaa smiled and took Armaan's hand in hers.

Ridhimaa: Itna miss karoge mujhe?
Armaan: Nahi...
Ridhimaa: (puzzled) Nahi?
Armaan: Issey bahut bahut bahut bahut zyada...

Ridhimaa, beaming, hugged Armaan, who hugged her back.

Armaan: (asking like a child) To tum aaj wahaan nahi rukogi na?
Ridhimaa: (choosing her words carefully) Armaan... maine humare liye sabko chhod diya... wo ghar... wo log... wo saare pal, jo maine us ghar me bitaaye the... sirf tumhare saath zindagi shuru karne ke liye. Tum mujhe humari zindagi se ek din nahi de sakte... un yaadon ko fir se dill me basaane ke liye? Sirf ek din... us ghar me rehne ke liye... jahaan kal tak maine na jaane kitni zindagiyan dekhi hain. Tum mujhe ek din nahi doge Armaan?

Armaan, overwhelmed by Ridhimaa's words, understood her feelings. He kissed her tenderly but passionately on both her cheeks and then held her face in his hands, very close to his own.

Armaan: Wo ghar abhi bhi tumhara ghar hai Ridhimaa... tum jab chahe wahaan ja sakti ho... jitne din chaahe wahaan reh sakti ho... main kabhi tumhe nahi rokunga.

Ridhimaa smiled once again. She knew it all along that her Armaan would definitely understand her.

Armaan: Sirf tum hi kyun... main bhi rahunga tumhare saath wahaan...
Ridhimaa: (shocked, separating herself) Tum?
Armaan: Haan... after all, wo mere bhi Mamma-Daddy ka ghar hai...
Ridhimaa: Haan, lekin...
Armaan: Lekin?
Ridhimaa: (trying to infuse sense in Armaan) Armaan... ye achha thode hi lagega ki tum wahaan ja ke rehne lago...
Armaan: Kyun? Achha kyun nahi lagega?
Ridhimaa: Kyunki ab tum us ghar ke damaad ho... bete nahi...

The effect of Ridhimaa's words was easily visible on Armaan's face. Dejected, Armaan got off from the bed. Ridhimaa understood that what she said might have hurt Armaan, somehow.

Ridhimaa: Armaan...
Armaan: (formally) Tum apne liye dress select kar lo... main tab tak fresh ho ke aata hoon...

And he went inside the washroom. Ridhimaa frowned and went towards the cupboard (where Armaan had arranged her clothes) with a firm resolution in her mind. Seeing Armaan's formal behaviour, she knew that her task ahead wasn't going to be that easy. But she would accomplish it any way... by hook or by crook. After all, everything's fair in love!

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Part 12: The World Stopped that moment

Part (a)

Ridhima sat next to Armaan’s bed and looking at him… He was sleeping... She moved the sheets and covered him properly and felt his forehead…

Suddenly her pager beeped… she opened the screen and read and stood up…

“Ji sister???” she said as she reached the nurse station…

“Dr. Ridhima…yeh Dr. Armaan ki reports”… the nurse said as she handed a file to Ridz.

She opened the file and looked in…she closed it and went to Dr. Keerti’s room…

She knocked on the glass door.. “Come in…”

“Dr. Keerti Armaan ki reports aa gayi hain…” she gave the file to Keerti…

Dr. Keerti opened the file and read the details and looked up at Ridhima…

“Typhoid attack hai…”

“Yes Dr. Keerti…”, Ridz looked worried at Dr. Keerti…

“Hmmm…theek hai…unhe kya treatment karna hai aapko maloom hai…aap unki attending doctor hongi Dr. Ridhima…”

“Ok Dr. Keerti…” she got up and walked to the door…

“Ridhima…” she turned around… “Aap manage tou kar lengi??? … Mera matlab you know…aap logon ka background…you know what I mean right???”

“Dr. Keerti…please aap chinta mat kijiye…i am a doctor first, the rest of it all comes later…”, Ridz smiled meekly...

“Good…”

Ridhima slowly walked through the corridor back into the ward… she reached Armaan’s bed and looked at him.

She saw beads of sweat on Armaan’s forehead…she wiped them off with her hankerchief slowly not to disturb him… then she checked on the IV line… and walked out to the Cafeteria to get a cup of coffee…

She planned to stay back that night at Sanjeevani, just in case Armaan needs anything…

She came back with the coffee and sat down next to his bed…and looked at him… he moved a little in the sheets…

Ridhima placed the back of her palm on his forehead… his fever seemed to be increasing… she got worried…

She paged Dr. Keerti… Dr. Keerti came to the ward…

“Kya hua Ridhima???”, Dr. Keerti came and stood next to her…

“Maam Armaan ka fever aur zyada barh gaya hai …” she said still looking at Armaan.

Dr. Keerti asked “Aapne kaun si medicine prescribe ki hai…???”

Ridhima gave her the charts…

Keerti looked at them and said “Antibiotics ki dosage aur strong kar dijiye and give him this injection IV…”, Keerti said updating the prescription…

“Sab theek ho jayega… don’t worry …”, she touched Ridz on the shoulder, “koi zaroorat ho tou mujhe page kar dena Ridhima, aaj waise bhi meri night shift hai…”, Keerti walked out of the ward…

Ridhima went to the pharmacy and took the medicines and injections that Dr. Keerti had prescribed…

She stood in front of the Ganpati idol in the passage and folded her hands, “Bhagwaan please Armaan ko theek kar do…main ek baar use kho chuki hoon… ab shayad woh mera nahin raha par please use itne taqleef mein main nahin dekh sakti…”, a tear rolled down her cheek…

An announcement suddenly startled her and she opened her eyes, “Dr. Ridhima jaldi general ward mein aaiye”…

“Armaaaaan…”, she said and ran to the ward…

“Kya hua sister…???” she asked the nurse…

“Dr. Ridhima…fever ki wajah se Dr. Armaan ko convulsions ho rahe hain…”, the nurse said and looked in Armaan’s direction…

She ran to Armaan’s bed and looked at him… he was sweating and his face was absolutely red … he removed the sheets and took his arm in her hand… his fist was clenched tight…

“Armaan…relax sab theek ho jayega…”

“Ridh…Ridhima…mmmmm…..”, Armaan rolled on the bed and tears welled up in
Ridz eyes to see him so sick and in so much pain…

“Nurse…please doctor Keerti ko page kar dijiye…”, she turned around and told the nurse and started massaging his hand…

“Kya hua Ridhima…????”, Keerti said as she came running to the ward…

“Maam, ise convulsions ho rahein hain and bahut zyada fever hai…”

“Aapne who injection diya jo maine likha tha????”

“Nahin maam main dene hi waali thi…”, she poined at the syringe and the glass vial that she had just brought from the pharmacy and kept on the table next to Armaan’s bed…

Keerti picked up the syringe and filled it from the vial…she quickly rubbed the back of his palm with a antiseptic dipped cotton and pierced the needle in…

“Ridhima inki condition closely monior kijiye…check his pulse and BP every 10 minutes… and shift him to the ICU…”

Ridhima sat next to Armaan’s bed in the ICU… she was checking his BP when Armaan suddenly moved again… “Kya hua Armaan…???”

“Mmmmm….”, Armaan groaned in pain…

“Ridhima tumne shaadi kar li and ek baar nahin socha main tumhare bina kaise jeeoonga…tum meri zindagi, meri saansein, sab kuch tumhi ho…”, Armaan muttered in his fever…

Tears welled up in Ridz’s eyes… “Armaan mujhe maaf kardo…I gave you so much pain…”, she said aware that Armaan could not hear anything she was saying…

Ridhima brushed her hand on his forehead and wiped the newly formed beads of sweat…she stroked his hair softly…

She checked his temperature…it seemed to be decreasing slowly…she sat down on a stool next to his bed…and kept looking at him intently… slowly her eyes closed and she nodded off to sleep with her hand on his shoulder…

Armaan suddenly opened his eyes…his throat parched with thirst…he saw Ridhima sleeping on the stool next to him and felt her hand on his shoulder…he did not want disturb her… he looked at the table next to his bed and saw a glass and a glass jug filled with water kept on it…

He tried to get up a little to pour himself a glass a water from the jug… but he could not get up and pulled the IV line on his wrist… “Aaaah…” he grimaced in pain as the needle pierced his skin…

Ridhima opened her eyes with a jerk hearing his cry… “Kya hua Armaan????”

“Kuch nahin…bahut pyaas lagi hai mujhe…Pani…woh main…”, he looked at her with his eyes filled with guilt having woken her up…

“Armaan mujhe kyon nahin kaha…silly…????”

She poured a glass of water from the jug…Armaan tried to get up to drink the water…Ridz helped him and pulled the pillow behind his shoulder…

She held the glass to his lips while he drank slowly… his eyes were fixed on her face when he suddenly choked on the water and started coughing…

Ridhima patted his back... “Aaraam se…”

Armaan was still looking at her face and she looked down…his eyes closed slowly and he fell asleep again…

“Ridz…”, Ridz opened her eyes as she felt someone touch her shoulder softly…




Part (b)

She looked up and saw Atul standing there…it was already morning…she looked at Armaan, he was sleeping peacefully…

She got up and straightened her dupatta that had rolled down her shoulder and had covered Armaan’s arm and was almost near his face…

“Kya hua Armaan ko…main tera phone try kar raha tha but it continued saying switched off …”

“Haan woh pura discharge ho gaya tha..”…

“Tests mein typhoid detect hua hai…”

“Oh… tou ab kaisa hai???”

Atul touched Armaan’s forhead, it seemed cooler than last evening…

“Kal raat mein kaafi serious ho gaya tha…bahut zyada fever…ab theek hai…”, she said looking at Armaan…

“Achcha main iske paas baithta hoon…tou ghar jaake fresh ho le…”

She felt better as Atul, she knew could do anything for his best friend, feeling relieved that Armaan had good company and Atul was a good doctor, she nodded and said “Theek hai…main aati hoon in 2 hours…koi problem ho tou please call kar dena…”

“No issues…”, Atul said and sat next to Armaan as Ridz walked out of the ICU…

Ridhima went home and took a bath…she stood in front of the mirror combing her hair and lost in her thoughts… when suddenly her phone started to ring…

She picked up the phone and looked at the screen…it said, “Atul calling…”

She suddenly recalled last night and grew very scared and pressed the call button…

“Atul Armaan theek tou hai na???”

“Ridhima abhi Dr. Keerti aayi thee Armaan ko check karne…uska fever abhi bhi kaafi hai…”

“Atul main half n hour mein aa rahi hoon…”

She hung up, picked up her purse and ran out…

She came and stood next to Atul, who was sitting next to Armaan’s bed and looking at him…she placed her hand on his shoulder and he looked up…

“Ridz…”

“Atul main abhi Dr. Keerti se mil kar aa rahi hoon…unhone ek aur blood test ke liye bola hai to see if the medicines are having any effect on him…”

Atul looked away as he saw Ridhima pierce a needle into Armaan’s arm to draw blood… Atul took the cotton and rubbed the area…

Atul did not like Armaan when they first met but then a bond slowly developed between them and they became the best of friends…Atul asked Armaan for his advice to impress Anjali and Armaan asked him when he was stuck on some sensitive issue with Ridhima…

Armaan opened his eyes slowly and saw Atul sitting there…”Champ…tou…???”

“Kaise hai Armaan???”

“Theek hoon…”, he tried to sit up…Atul pulled up the pillow behind his shoulder…

“Can you give me a glass of water… bahut pyaas lagi hai…”

Atul was pouring water from the jug kept on the table next to the bed when Keerti walks in… “Dr. Armaan aapko bahut weekness ho gayi hai…Dr. Atul give him some orange juice instead…”

“But Dr. keerti mujhe kuch bhi khaane ka mann nahin hai…waise bhi mooh te taste ki band baj gayi hai…”, he sulked like a small child.

Dr. Keerti smiled

“Aap log itne responsible doctors hain, phir bhi aap logon ka bachpana kabhi nahin jayega…”

She gave Atul a glass of orange juice that she had brought from the Cafeteria and told him to make Armaan drink that instead of giving him plain water…

Armaan takes a sip and makes a face and tells Atul to keep it away… “Achcha thora aur pi le..”

“Nahin bas…”

“Bas kaise…chalo khatam karo yeh glass…”, Ridhima said as she walked into the ward…

“Tumhe kya…???”, Armaan says and turns his head away…

“Main tumhari attending doctor hoon…tou tumhe meri baat maan ni paregi nahin tou main Dr. Keerti ko complain kar doongi” she said taking the juice glass from Atul

“Chalo drink it…achche patient ki tarah behave karo…”, she said as she took the glass to his lips…

He looked at her face and got mesmerized by her big brown almond colored eyes… she looked into his eyes and made him drink the whole glass…

“Baatein bana ke kaam karna tou koi tumse seekhe…”, Armaan said faking an angry face…

Atul was looking all this while and smiled recalling the old times when they were together…a couple everyone thought were made just for each other and no one could separate ever….not even GOD…

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Dill Mill Gayye April 14 Episode

Serial: Dil Mil Gaye (Dill Mill Gayye)
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Part 3: Kabhi Pyaar Toh Kabhi Takrar

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PART-3

A car came towards Riddhima,and she asked for a lift.

A handsome hunk came out of the car and yeah u guessed it right
it was Armaan.

Ri: Tum?

Ar: Ha mai! tum kiska intezar kar rahi thi?

Ri:Kisika nahi,tum jao.

Ar:arre par abhi toh lift mang rahi thi?

Ri:par mujhe tumhare saath nahi jana.

Ar:tumhe kya laga, ki tum lift mangogi toh SRK tumhe lift dega?

Ri:nahi,mujhe laga ki ek insaan lift dega.

Ar:very funny ab chalo.

Ri:maine kaha na ki mai tumhare saath nahi jaungi.

Ar:Riddhima aise kyon behave kar rahi ho,hum dono ko Sanjeevani hi jana
hai na.,toh mere saath chalo.

( Riddhima was feeling a bit weird,that how can she go with someone whom she does not even know properly.)

She did not feel comfortable n said ''no'' and started moving forward.

Armaam wanted to stop her and therefore held her hand n pulled her
towards himself.She bumped into his chest. A kind of shiver went through
their bodies.Riddhima looked at ARMAAN .Some of her entaggled hair came on her face.Armaan carefully n gently moved her hair with his fingers.

Armaan was kind of lost in her beautiful green eyes.Riddhima was feeling secured n safe in his arms.A sudden belive came in her that she is , was n will always be safe with him.

Every think seemed to be stopped.only they both where there around n no 1 was there to interfere between them.

suddenly Riddhima realised what she was doing n immediatly moved her eyes off Armaan.on seeing this even Armaan got back his senses and they both immediatly separated from each other.

There was silence as both were feeling awkward.
Riddhima broke the silence n said ....

Ri:I will go with u to SANJEEVANI , but I think we should hurry we r
getting late.
Ar: yes let's go.

They sat in the car n moved towards sanjeevani.
On the way both chit-chatted on how they had been for so long.

In the locker room of sanjeevani.
Two new interns erter.
intern 1 = in1
intern 2= in2

in1=Hi, r u a new intern too.
an:yes,I am so ? (with arogance)
in1: hi, I'm sapna,I mean Dr.sapna.
in2: AND hi I 'm Dr.Atul Joshi.
An: Whatever, I am Dr.ANJALI.

After reaching Sannjeevani...

Ar: Basket tum jao,mai park karke aata hu,waise bhi late ho raha hai.
Ri: basket???????....
Ar: oh sorry,wwoh tum BB khelti ho na is liye,par kya mai tumhe pyaar se BASKET bula sakta hu.

Ri:Ha jaror mujhe accha lagega.
(on hearing this ARMMAN FELT VERY HAPPY & started smiling like a baby.0

Ri:aur tum gaddi park kar lo,hum saath andar jaenge,tum bhi toh meri wajah se late ho gayye,kyon ki tumhe mujhe lift deni padi.

Ar:Accha thik hai tum ruko mai gaddi park kar deta hu.

Armaan parked the car n both went inside.
When they went inside every one was looking at AR ,BECAUSE THEY SEEMED TO BE BEST FRIENDS.
no 1 could say that they were no good friends.Many thought that they were in love.
Ri: oh shit mera resistance form toh car mai hi rah gayya.
Ar: koi baat nahi,tum jao mein le aata hu.
Ri: thnx.

In the locker room.

Ri: di aap phirse mujhe chodkar aa gaye.
An:Ridzz ye teri galti thi.
sa:oh hi tum bhi intern ho
Ri: ha ,mai Dr.Riddhima.
Sa: hi mai Dr.sapna.
At: aur mai Dr. Atul.
AN: yeh meri bahon hai.
Sa; arre wah.
An : Ridzz ja tayyar ho ja.
Ri: ha di.

riddhima moves towards her locker n armaan comes in .


Hey guys thats it for today.
Do post your comments n let me know whether u liked it or not.
thnx to all those who have posted there comments till now n even thanx to those silent readers who clicked the like button.

thanks to all.
take care,
be happy n keep reading n posting your comments.

loads of love,
vaishali.(vaishu)

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Part 10: Kya Inke Dil Mil Payge

part 10

sabki internship ke bad shadi bhi tay ho chuki hain
matlab 1 year bad ….

Pehle abhimanyu aur nikita ki shadi hain
Uske 2din bad riddhima armaan aur ajay diya ki shadi hain ek hi mandap mein
Uske kuch dino bad rahul aur muskan ki shadi hain

Shadi ke bad after 1 year
At malik’s house

Armaan & ajay went to medical conference
Riddhima and diya are alone at home suddenly landline phone rang
Diya took the phone
Di: hello dr. diya here
Aj: I know u r diya dear
Di: ajay ka baa rahe ho tum?
Aj: we are at airport dear.
Di: airport par.
di: Melbourne air port ke Mumbai airport??
Aj: darling we are at Mumbai airport…
Di: di
Aj: are pagal bhabhi ko mat batana surprise hain unke liye bhaiya ne mana kiya hain
Di: well tum ghar par aao tumhare liye bhi aur jiju dono ke liye mene aur din e surprise rakha hain ok bye
Aj: bye

At home

Ghar ke door bell ki ghanti bajti hain
Di: Di can u pls open the door mein kitchen mein hu
Ri: ha mein khol rahi hu.
Ridzi was shocked to see her love and her dever
Ar: hi riddhima
Ri: tum logo ne nahi phone kiya aur ese hi aagaye
Aj: kyun bhabhi kya hum log surprise nahi de sakte?
Ri: ha hum dono behno net um dono ke liye surprise rakaha hain..
Ar: aur wo kya hai?
Ri: yeh lo mere reports. Ajay diya khana bana rahi hain aur yeh rahe uske reports
Aj: reports kis liye?
Ri: pado
Armaan and ajay ne zor se chilaye armaan ne riddhima ko god mein utaha liya aur use gol gol ghumane laga aur chikh ne avaz sun kar diya bhi bahar aajati hain aur ajay use apni bahu mein leleta hain…

Aur khushkhabri yeh thi ke riddhima & diya are pragnent..
Aaj wo charo bahut hi kush the..

After 1 year

At sanjivani…

Armaan and riddhima got a baby boy and his name is samrat

Diya & ajay got cute one baby girl and her name is nupur…

Anjali & atul got a baby boy and his name is … siddhant

Nikita & abhimanyu got twins a baby boy and baby girl, the name of boy is akshay and girl’s name is sneha

Muskan & rahul have one girl and her name is Tanya…

After 10 years

Aaj sab friends ne armaan ke ghar par ek party rakhi hain jismein sare purane dosta ane wale hain… sabhi log masti karne wale hain…
aur unke bacche bhi…

Sam: (chilate hue) dad aap logo ke frienz aagyae hain...
nu: bhai meri dost sneha aur Tanya bhi hain na??
Sam: ha nupur sabhi log hain...

Sbhi log andar ate hain aur sam aur nupur dono hi apne frienz ke pass bhagte hue jate hain

Sam: hey chalo in bade log mein bethoge na to hum log boar ho jayge andar chalte mere room mein..
Sid: ha chalo
Nu: ek miniut bhaiya har bar aapke kamre mein kyun ha iss bar mere kamre mein.
Ar: ek kam karo sabhi ladkiya nupur ke kamre mein jao aur aap sabi ladke samrat ke kamre mein.. is it ok nupur??
Nu: ji chachu

Sab bachein apne apne room mein chale jate hain aur sab bado ki shetaniya shuru ho jati hain

Hey friends this is the end of the story ....
Sorry kuch bacho ne bola nahi kyun ki wo log abhi chote hain aur niki aur abhi ki beti hostel mein padhti hain isiliye

Lots of love
kshiti

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Part 11: The World Stopped that moment

Armaan opened his eyes after hearing the ever familiar voice…His basket stood right in front of him…
He was speechless…

She was standing with a yellow white colored cup in one hand and a tablet in another…

He continued to look at her and she just stood there and it seems that time had run back and it stood still… the way he had been getting lost in his world and his past memories, he thought that probably it was just one more of his pleasant dreams.. he closed his eyes as he did not want to wake up from this one for some time…

“Achooo…Achooo”… his head was pounding with pain…

He felt a soft hand being placed on his head…

“Are tumhe tou bahut bukhar hai … tum apna khayal kyon nahin rakhte Armaan”

No this wasn’t a dream… if it was then he would not have felt her touch… he opened his eyes again…

“Chalo utho…” …

Armaan seemed as if in a trance…he got up as if hypnotized by her voice and she lead him holding his hand and he followed her quietly…

They reached the OPD room and her magic continued to play on his mind…

She made him sit on the bed and took the thermometer from the tray… he continued to look at her without blinking even once..

“Open your mouth…”
He looked at her soft shapely pink lips as she said…

He opened his mouth and she put the thermometer in…and he continued to stare at her…she took the thermometer out and checked the temperature…

“Tumhe itna bukhaar hai… have you eaten anything???”

Armaan didn’t answer…just continued to stare…

“ARMAAN….” she said waving her hand in front of his eyes…

Finally he came back to his senses… “Haan…???”

“Tumne subah se kuch khaya hai???”

“Nahin…abhi tou aaya hoon…” he came back to his surroundings, he saw her break a glass vial and fill an injection…

The sight of the injection scared him…”Main theek hoon…injection nahin lagana mujhe… halka bukhaar hai theek ho jayega… itne se bukhar ke liye injection…are basket suno tou….”

He was still trying to convince her like a small child while she started rubbing a cotton ball dipped in antiseptic on his arm and before he could realize it, poked the needle

“AAAAH” he closed his eyes…

He pouted as he started rubbing his arm with the cotton ball…

“Bachche hi rahoge tum…”…she looked at his innocent face…“Tum thori der so lo yahin…the conference doesn’t start till another 2 hours”… “Main aake tumhe jagaa doongi” she said and left the room while he lied down on the bed…

He closed his eyes and fell asleep immediately…

“Armaan…chal yaar.. presentation dena hai remember…???” Atul woke up Armaan…

“Kya hua…teri tabiyat zyaada kharab hai kya…???” He touched Armaan’s forhead and it felt very warm…

“Nahin theek hoon…chal…”

In the Conference Room…

“Good Afternoon everybody… I am Dr. Shubhankar Rai and I wish to welcome the delegates from Swiss Medical Corporation to Sanjeevani, Mumbai…” Dr. Shubhankar addressed the people in the conference room…

“Let me introduce you to our Doctors from the various Sanjeevanis across India…”
“Dr. Armaan Malik from Sanjeevani Panchgani… Dr. Atul Joshi from Sanjeevani Lonavala… Dr. Ridhima Shashank Gupta from Sanjeevani Mumbai and last but not the least…” he pauses for some seconds and looks into his pad … and then at the empty chair on his left…

“Oh there he is Dr. Rahul Grewaal from Sanjeevani Bangalore…” they look at the door and see a very fair guy with green eyes dressed in a light blue shirt and cargos enter the room..

A smile comes on all of their faces to see Rahul after such a long time…

They come up one by one and give their presentations and the delegates listen to them very carefully… but Armaan is lost somewhere else…he manages to glide through his presentation but something keeps bothering him all the while “Dr. RIDHIMA SHASHANK GUPTA…”…his mind races back and forth… “ARMAAN MERI SHAADI HO CHUKI HAI AND AB MAIN RIDHIMA GUPTA NAHIN RIDHIMA MODI HOON…”

After all the presentations, they get up and Dr. Shubhankar leads them to the board room leaving all the doctors in the conference room… they all walk to Rahul…

“Kahan chala gaya tha and when the hell did u rejoin Sanjeevani and woh bhi itni door Bangalore jaake…”

All asked the same question almost at the same time…

Rahul smiled… “Lambi story hai..bataunga guys…and how are your guys…”
“Armaan, Ridhima I heard about the terrorist attack..”

“Sab theek hai Rahul”… Ridz said and walked out of the conference room looking down…

“Lambi story hai..” Atul said “Cafeteria chalein…????”

Armaan was about to turn around and go with the others, when he suddenly felt dizzy and caught hold of Atul’s arm and pressed it..

Atul looked at Armaan and held him by his shoulder… “Armaan kya hua…???”

“Kuch nahin champ achanak bahut weak lag raha hai… chakkar sa aa gaya”, Armaan said pressing his eyes with his hands…

“Baith ja…”, Atul looked worried and helped Armaan sit down on the chair.

“Teri tabiyaat kharab lag rahi thi mujhe…”, he touched Armaan’s forehead and found it very hot… “Bukhaar tera barh gaya hai yaar..”, he took out the phone from his pocket and dialed…

“Ridz tum zaraa conference room aaoo please…its an emergency!!!”

“Aa rahi hoon…”, Ridhima hung up and came running to the conference room…

“Kya hua Armaan???”, she worriedly asked when she saw Armaan sitting on the chair with his eyes closed…

“Ridz iska fever bahoot tez ho gaya hai…”, Atul said while Rahul stood there with a worried look on his face with his hand on Armaan’s shoulder…

They shifted Armaan to the ward while Ridhima paged Dr. Keerti…

Dr. Keerti came to the ward and checked Armaan…she told Ridhima to get some tests done and told her to get the reports to her as soon as they came in…

Atul and Rahul stood next to the bed…

After Dr. Keerti left the room…Ridz turned to Atul and Rahul said, “Tum log chinta mat karo…main yahan hoon Armaan ke paas…tum log jao…I will keep you informed…”

Ridhima sat next to Armaan’s bed and looking at him… He was sleeping... She moved the sheets and covered him properly and felt his forehead…

Thank your for your comments guys...Anuj, Ashima and Hinal... Appreciate the silent readers who pressed the Like button... Please comment....They encourage me to write further...

Love
Mandira

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Part 22 (b): The Story of a Prince and a Princess

(ADAM AND EVE)

Arman : "riddhima ye apple khaker dekho....….mahi liked it so much....…ishliye runbijay ne ishke trees himalaya ki pahari se mangaye aur ish garden ke charon taraf laga diey....….

They tested the apples and found it very nice.....….
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Arman : "ek baat batao basket.....…toom lover’s point keun nahi gayi.....….

Riddhima (dheere se): "mujhe ye marne ki baaten ab achchi nahi lagti arman....….mujhe dar lagta hai.....….maine mout ko bahoot karib se dekha hai arman....….toomhe khone ka dar.....….sab kuch cheen jaane ka dar.....…nahi......mujhe achcha nahi lagta....….mai jeena chahti hoon arman toomhare saath....…..

They ate more apples….but what a strange feeling!!!!

Lagta hai riddhima ko jaise nasha sa ho raha hai.....….wah arman ki bahon mein jhool jati hai.....….arman ko bhi lagta hai ek meetha sa nasha ooske tun-mun mein chad raha hai.....….he is also walking unsteadily....….wah riddhima ko sambhal nahi pata....….aur dharraam!!! They fell on the flower-bed .......….ek doosre ki bahoon mein lipte hue....y….behoshi sha halat mein bhi arman apni princess ko chot nahi lagne deta aur oosko khudper sambhal leta hai....….. but also gulmohar made the flower-bed for his prince….....….…so oose bhi chot nahi lagti....…. .the gulmohar covered them softly with red flowers blanket.... …..…

Arman felt like the double-doze of nectar.....…ek apple ka nasha....…and riddhima ka nasha...….it made him unconscious....….tabhi riddhima kuch kahti hai....….arman is trying to answer but couldn’t succeeded....…..wah apni ankhe kholne ki kosish karta hai....…basket ki aankho mein kitna nasha!! Like a black pearl with pink thread!....…..….basket kahin naraj na ho jaayye! Wah muskurata hai....….riddhima ko bush kuch moti dikhte hain....….like some white pearls in an oyster…......achanak wo arman ke bilkul karib aa jati hai aur baccho jaisi machal oothti hai...….’mujhe moti chahiye....…I want your pearl…..

Before arman could understand anything.... ….she sank herself into the deep ocean for pearl!
Arman apne hosh khone lagta hai.....….what is it? Ye kya hai? Wine or honey!!!…each and every sip made him twice as much addict for it.....….but no...….arman was always conscious about riddhima.....….his madness may hurt her....…….wo dheere se oose alag karta hai.....….riddhima ka face thik ooske saamne hai.....….black shiny eyes with pink thread....…pink cheeks....…deep pink rosy lips........…ye koun hai!!arman sab kuch bhool gaya hai!....….wah koun hai?.....yes…wo to Runbijay hai.....…aur ye ooski Mahi.....….oonhe ab palace loutna hai....…Raja Digbijay is waiting for them…......

Riddhma ka head arman ke chest per....…perhaps she is sleeping.....….arman whispers in her ear....…."Mahi…chalo hume loutna hai...…

But riddhima nodded her head in ‘NA’….
Arman : "nahi jaogi…
Riddhima : "no..…no I am not Mahi....…
Arman : "but I am Runbijay....….
Riddhima : "no...….they died...….i hate death....…I love life....….but who are you!!!
Arman : "I don’t know...….

Riddhima was saying sleepily :" but I know...…you are not Runbijay.....….your name is starting.with ‘A’...…..you are a very very good guy....….you gave me nice apples....…ADAM”S APPLES.....….yes.... ….you are "ADEM and I am EVE"....…and this is our paradise....……it is the garden of EDEN…..we live here.....…..we will make this world beautiful.....…full of love....….i love you ADAM.....….i wanna spend my life with you.....….i hate death....…I hate suicide.....….I love to spend every moments with you.....….mai tumhare saare ahsaas ko khud mein sama lena chahti hoon....….tumhari her khusboo ko apne jism se lagana chahti hoon.....…..mere rom-rom mein toomhe chati hoon....….i love to spend my life with you and yes.... …I love to spend my life with our kids.....….dheeeeeeeeer saare bachche......….i want to make our own world!!!!!!!!......

(song--i wanna spend my life with you)


(Arman) : “Like a dream you can't explain…….
: love can chase a beating of your heart…
Like the sunshining in the rain………..
love can make your whole world fall apart…

All i wanted now…………

(riddhima):”I just wanna spend my life with you…..

(arman) : ‘Time will show me how……
Suddenly everything has turned me inside out….
Suddenly love is the thing that I can't live without…..

You are my dream, my love, my life….
I just wanna spend my life with you………..
You are the one that makes me smile
I just wanna spend my life with you………..

God I love somehow...
(riddhima):” I just wanna spend my life with you”…..

(arman ): “You can show me how…….

Suddenly everything has turned me inside out….
Suddenly love is the thing that i can't live without……….

You are my dream, my love, my life….
I just wanna spend my life with you……
You are the one that makes me smile
I just wanna spend my life with you………

What have you done to me?
Is this how its meant to be
Can't control this feeling in my heart…………
can see better days glowing inside your eyes
And I know you feel it in your heart…………..

All I wanted now…..

riddhima :”I just wanna spend my life with you……….

(arman) :”Time will show me how…………..
Suddenly everything has turned me inside out…
Suddenly loves the thing that i can't live without………..

You are my dream, my love, my life……..
I just wanna spend my life with you……………..
You are the one that makes me smile
I just wanna spend my life with you…………

Love is a crazy thing
Its like when you wanna sing
And the words are deep inside your soul……………
When somebody comes along together you sing a song……………..
You just let the music take control…………..
And i wanted now….

(riddhima): “i just wanna spend my life with you……………

(arman) : “Time will show me how………….
Suddenly everything has turned me inside out…………
Suddenly loves the thing that i can't live without...

You are my dream my love my life
I just wanna spend my life with you…………………
You are the one that makes me smile
I just wanna spend my life with you………………………
YOU…………………..YOU…………


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Dill Mill Gayye April 13 Episode

Serial: Dil Mil Gaye (Dill Mill Gayye)
Channel : Star One

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Part 9 (a) : Pyaar Impossible..........(or)It's Possible???

RAHUL – MUSKAAN
She frowned as the rays of the sun hit her face. Covering her face with the pillow she cursed the sun for disturbing her beauty sleep. If it was possible she wud have killed the sun as well……bt kya Karen kuch cheezein humare haath mein nahi hoti na :P
Her cell phone rang making her frown even more…..she picked up her cell ready to blast at the person who dared to disturb her sleep
“ooye gadhe ullu ke patthe!!!!itne subah subah koi phone karta hai kya??? Kya kaam tha? Baadme nahi kar sakte the???? Pata nahi kya dushmani hai mujhse sab logon ko……..pehle yeh suraj aur ab tum…uff!!! Yeh duniya mujhe sone nahi degi” she said in a go without even seeing whoz there on the call
“waah 8 baj rahe hain aur yeh madam ab tak so rahi hai……….theek hai soti reh aur aaj sanjevaani mat aana aur haan keerti di ko jawaab tu hi dena” the person on the other end said
Hearing this she got up with a jerk……..NO!!! not because she was getting late for her first day in sanjeevani bt coz she heard keerti’s name :P
“ooyye sadu tu ab phone kar raha hai???? Rahul aaj agar di se daant padi toh main tujhe chodungi nahi samjhe” she said getting highly irritated
“oyye chup kar muskaan…………ek toh tujhe phone kiya tujhe lene yahaan tak aaya peechle 15 min se tere ghar ke bahar khada hoon……..aur tu mujhe thnk u bolne ke jagah daant rahi hai…………theek hai main jaata hoon tu khud aana akele” he said shwing fake anger
“oyye tu ruk……..sry yaar abhi do min mein aati hoon” saying this she cut the call and moved towards the main door murmering ‘ aaj toh is rahul ke bache ko sry bolna pada……koi nahi muski musibat ke waqt to gadhe ko bhi baap bana na padta hai’ and chuckled and opened the door
“ooyye itna time lagta hai darwaza kholne ko??? Kachua chap”
“KACHUA CHAP!!! Tune mujhe tortoise kaha??? Aaj toh tu nahi bachega rahul” bt thn her eyes fell on the clock which was shwing 8: 05 and she had to reach the hospital by 8 :45….
“chod tujhe toh mein baadmein dekh lungi abhi toh mujhe tayaar hona hai………tu baith I will come in 10 min”
Saying so she rushed to get ready and after tat both of thm left for sanjevaani

ANJALI – ATUL

TRING TRING!!!!
An : hello………..haan atul bolo
A : hey anjali kya tum aaj mujhe pick kar sakti ho???
An : haan sure atul main bas abhi nikal hi rahi thi………par aaj kya hogaya???? Tumhe apni dearest cycle pe nahi jaana????
A : woh….woh kya hai na anjali………aa toh main cycle par hi raha tha par beech mein iska tyre puncture ho gaya……..itne der se taxi bhi nahi mil rahi……toh socha ki tum aur ridz toh issi taraf se jaaoge……..so u can pick me……….i hpe tats nt a prob
An : ohhh shut up atul!!!! Mujhe kyun koi prob logi???? Aur waise ridz nahi hai……..she is comin wid armaan n dun wry I will reach der in 5 min……..ok bye
A : bye anjali
Saying so he smiled and thought

‘waah aaj toh din bada acha hai………subah subah anjali ko dekhunga toh din toh acha hi jayega’

Anjali reached there in 5 min and off they went to sanjevani

ARMAAN – RIDDHIMA (finally :P)
“armaaaaaannnnnnnn……….jaldi karo na hume late ho raha hai…………..GOD!!!! armaan tumhe toh ladkiiyon se bhi jyaada time lagta hai tayaar hone ko” she shouted at him for the last time bt getting no response from him she hit her palm on her head in frustration
“kya hai basket khudko kyun maar rahi ho???? Itna hi shauk hai toh mujhe bol deti………main maar dunga……..khud kyun itni takleef kar rahi hoo” saying so he winked at her
“shut up armaan and common nw lets go…………hurry up” she said picking up her purse and looking at herself in the mirror checking if everything was perfect
“oyye ms. India chalo jaldi ab hume der nahi ho rahi” he said irritating her to no end
“haan haan chalo na maine kab mana kiya hai itni der se khud late kar raha tha…….idiot” she gave him a few more curses under her breath making armaan smile
“oyye madam baithne ka kasht karogi????” he said wen he saw tat riddhima wasn’t sitting on the bike since 5 min
“Armaan……..bike kyun liya??” she asked softly getting a bit nervous
Armaan chuckled on seeing her expression
“riddhima………tumhe bike pe baithne se itna dar kyun lagta hai??? Car servicing ke liye gayi hai……so we dnt have ne other option”
“armaan mujhe bike pe baithne se darr nahi lagta bt bike chalane waale se lagta hai……….tum aur tumhari speed……….first promise me ki u will drive slowly”
“okay madam as u wish ab baitho toh”
Riddhima sat on the bike and armaan started driving…………after 5 min wen riddhima was really irritated she yelled at him
“armaaaaannnnnnnn yeh kaise chala rahe ho????humse toh fast raste pe log chal rahe hain……aise chalate hain kya bike????sanjevani agle saal nahi aaj he jaana hai aur who bhi 5 min mein…..”
Armaan giggled on hearing this
“arre tumhi ne toh kaha tha dheere chalana toh lo m driving slowly”
“fine meri galati……..ab jaldi chalo” she said trying to calm herself down n nt to fight wid him on the first day of her job
“as u say mam” saying so he zoomed off the bike

ABHIMANYU – NIKITA
Abhi entered the locker room whistling merrily. Entering the room he realized he was the first one to reach there
“whoaaa!!!! Soo m the first one…….hurry up guys varna aaj tum sab ko bahut daant padegi aur mujhe bahut praises milenge” he said heading towards one of the lockers bearing his name.

He opened the locker and was busy putting his belongings there still whistling. Juzz thn nikki was about to come out of the changing room bt she heard him whistling. She was bout to go out bt thn a plan came up in her lil devil mind and she smiled mischievously. She slowly came out and quickly slid behind abhimanyu making sure tat he didn’t notice her. she smiled once again and thn said imitating KEERTI’s voice
“dr. abhimanyu modi……..aap yahaan kya kar rahe hain???? Yeh ek hospital hai koi music hall nahi so is tarah whistle kar rahe ho………….”
Abhi froze on hearing the voice. He knew this voice very well. He dare nt turn around he was about to say something bt heard keerti urf nikki :P saying
“aur mujhe aapse yeh umeed nahi thi pehle hi aap late aaye ho…….aapko saza jaroor milega” nikkita said suppressing her giggles
Abhi looked at his watch confusedly……..i m late??? Not possible…….infact main toh 5 min jaldi aaya hoon
“par di……….main toh 5 min jaldi aaya hoon “ he said still nt daring to turn around
“ohhh toh ab aap mujhse argue karenge…………aur yeh diii diii kya laga rakha hai??? Dr. modi yeh ek hospital hai….aur main aapki di nahi dr. keerti hoon……..i hpe m clear”
Hearing this abhi was hell scared……..beads of sweat formed on his head. He knew his sister vry well(YES……..Keerti is abhimanyu’s sister :P ). She was a thorough professional wen it came to work. He gulped and said “jiii……..sorry mam”
Nw this was it………..nikki cudnt control herself anymore………….she burst out laughing at abhi’s condition. Abhimanyu heard nikki laughing n was confused. He slowly turned around and found nikki holding her stomach and laughing like a maniac. He was first confused bt then understood the entire thing
“nikki ki bachi main tujhe nahi chodunga…..tu ruk abhi” saying this he ran behind nikki who was already running for her life still laughing
“pehle pakadke toh dikha de modi “ and again burst out laughing and was about to run out of the locker room when

BANG !!!!!!!!!

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Okay guys……..sry for the late update n plus it’s a short one………..bt I promise to give nother short update soon……….do comment guys they mean a lot to me
And yea since all the comments have disappeared frm my last post coz of the new commenting system cant reply individually bt thnx a lot all of u for u comments………It encourages m a lot :)

loads of love
take care
aditi

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Part 9: Kya Inke Dil Mil Payge

KYA INKE DIL MIL PAYGE??

Part 9

Do din bad jab DG puna se waps ata hain wo riddhima ka rishta uske purane dost ke bade bête ke sath tay kar deta hain… aur iske liye shashnk ne abhi,riddhima,diya&padma ko ek sath baat kar ne ke liye bulaya hain…

Dg: aao muze aap sab logo se ek zaruri baat karni hain.
Di: dad esi kya bat hain jis ke liye aapne hame is waqt bulaya hain?
Dg:riddhima
Ri:ji dad?
Dg: beta aab yeh waqt aa gaya hain ki tumhari shadi ki bat ki jay..
Ri: dad shadi?
Dg: ha beta shadi
Ri: par kis se?
Pad: wo tumhare dad ke purane dost hain dono school mein sath padha karte the inko puna mein me hi mil gaye the wo apne bade bête ke liye ladki dundh rahe hain, to inhone onko wada kar diya hain ki riddhima ki shadi unke bade bête ke sath karvayge
Ri: mom dad muze puche bina hi? Mein esi shadi nahi karugi.hargiznahi.mein use ladke ko janti tak nahi aur shadi? No way bhaiya aap kuch kahiye na pls
Ab: mein is mein kya bolu?
Di: kya bolu matlab kya? Wahi jo do din pehle hum logo ne aapko bataya tha
Ab: abhi nahi bol sakta ( diya ke kan abhi bolta hain)
Di: why??
Ab: mami jab akeli hogi na tab unhe batayege.
Di: thick hain
Ri: nahi mein use ladke se shadi nahi karugi…
Pad: par wo log tumhe dekh ne kal aa rahe hain…
Ri: nahi mein use ladke se nahi milugi…

Next day in sanjivani

Riddhima is still upset.dia trys to make her happy but she is still unhappy. Utne mein hi armaan ata hain aur riddhima ko sad dekh ke wo bhi sad ho jata hai…

Ar: diya kya hua hain ise?
Ri: diya no…
Di: why di?
Ri: nahi matlab nahi use ladke se to mein kudh hi nipat lugi..
Armaan yeh sab nahi suntan hain…utne mein hi armaan ka
Mobile bajta hain
Mob: dill mill gayye, dill mill gayye hummmm(it’s a his mobile ring tune)
Ar: aab kis ka phone hai? Dad? Yeh Mumbai ka baa gaye??
Ar: hey dad.. how r u?
Dad: I’m good & how r u ? and hows ajay?
Ar: we all fine.. par dad aap Mumbai kab aye?
Da: beta hum log Australia gaye hi nahi… hum log to puna gaye the..
Ar: u mean aap ne muze se zuth kaha?
Da: teri bhalai ke liye.. accha sun aaj tum dono apni dutie jaldi khatam kar ke aajana…
Ar: kyun?
Da: hume tumse kuch bat karni hain.. actually hum log tuze leker ladki dekhne jane wale hain
Ar: what??? No dad u can’t do this to me… this is not fair…
Da: no beta it’s fair… ok bye jaldi aajana ha?
Ar: ji daa..
Armaan apna phone end karta hain aur aab wo bhi tension mein hain.. par wo riddhima ko aur tesion mein nahi dekhna nahi chata tah isi liye use ne riddhima ko kuch nahi bataya..

Shamko
armaan aur ajay ghar par hain.. aur armaan apne mom dad se argue kar raha hain aur un logo ko ajay ne riddhima ke bare mein bata diya hai… isi liye uske mom dad aur bhi tension mein aa gaye hain

ad= armaan& ajay dad
am- armaan & ajay mom

am: yeh tumne kya kiya armaan beta?
Ar: mom dad pyar kabhi puch kar ya bata kar nahi hota sirf ho jata hain..
Ad: par ab jo kuch bi ho mene mere dost se baat karli hain aur mein aab use na nahi karuga use ki beti se ek bar baat kar to le badd mein uski aur tumhari marzi ok?
Aj: bhaiya shayd dad sahi kaeh rahe hain
Ar: par muze riddhima ko yeh sab batana padega…
Aj: abhi kuch mat batao bhaiya… badme kal sanjivani mein bata dena.
Ar: yeh bat bhi thik hain
Ad: to chale wo log hamari rah dekh rahe hoge
Ar: ha chaliye..


Gupta’s house

Niki & diya riddhima ko tiyar kar rahi hain… but riddhima is still upset.. Because she loves armaan aur wo yeh baat nahi apne dad ko bata sakti hain aur nahi use ladke ko... Kyunki wo apne dad se bahut pyar karti hain aur wo unki baat nah tal sakti hain…

ni: yeh sab kya ho raha hain? Ridzi ne pyar kiya armaan se aur uncle iski shadi tay bhi kardi… aur riddhima paglikuch boli bhi nahi.. pagal hain ek number ki …
ri: niki tu to janti hain na ke mein dad ke samne kuch bhi nahi bol sakti… par use ladke ko sari asliyat bata dungi ke armaan se pyar karti hu…
di:that’s good idia.. aur phir niki,abhibhaiya & riddhima, armaan ki sagai ek hi mandap mein hogi how cool..
ni: ek mini mene esa kab kaha ki mein abhi se shadi karne ke liye tiyar hu ha??
Di: I know u will say yes… kyun ki mein tuze achi tarh se janti hu.. samji??
Ri: aab bate karma chodo aur tiyar ho jao… abhi ladke wale aate hi hoge…
Abhi niche se un teeno ko bulata hain
Abhi: chalo ladkiyo tum log tiyar ho gi ya nahi?? Ladke wae dus mini mein puch hi rahe hain…
Ni: tum kyun pareshan ho rahe ho?? Hum log 5 mini mein niche puch jayge

Abhi se aab aur jyad chilay nahi gaya aur isiliye wo upar riddhima ke room aagaya

Ab: kyat um log abhi tak taiyar kyun nahi hue?? Dulhan ke sath uski saheliya bhi tiyar ho jay to acha rahega aur diya madem kuch bhi bol ne se pehle yeh sun le ki yeh order mein nahi de raha hu mamaji ne diya hain samji?
Di: ha ha wese bhi mein kuch bolne wali nahi thi… samje?
Ab: ha ha tuze mein baut achi tarh se janta hu… ab time waste mat kar aur tiyar ho jao aur ha apni hone wali bhabhi ko achi tarh se tiyar karma ha?
Ni: kyaa?? Tum pagal ho gaye ho kya?? Mene shadi ke liye kab ha kaha??
Ab: niki tumhare mu par hi dekhta hain ki tumhari ha hain…
Di: wah badi jaldi pehchana liya…
Ab: chupchap tiyar ho kar niche aajao ladke wale aagaye hain…
Di: ha na aap jao na…
Ab: ha ha ja hi raha hu… zyada natak mat kar…
Di: natak yah par nahi hota natak na stage par hota hain samje??
Ab: meri ma tere se bhes karma hi bekar hain…
Di: to phir karte hi kyun ho??
Ni: abhi aab tum niche jao ge to hi hum tiyar ho payge na??
Ab: ha… wese tumhari HA hain na??
Ni: (shrmake, hasti hue) ha hi hain…
Ab: are wah mamaji mamiji niki ne ha kardi…
Niche se avaj ati hain
Dg: aab nice bhi aajao beta ladke wale aagaye hain..
Ab: ha abhi aya… bye bye beautiful ladies..
Tino ek sath: byee…..

Main hall mein

Shashank aur uski family uske dost aur uski family ka swagat karte hain… utne mein shshank ki nazar ladke pe padti hain..
Aur wo soch ne lagta hain ki kahi to usne iss ladke ko dekha hain par kaha yeh yad nahi aaraha tha. Utne mein hi abhi bolta hain ki

Ab: are dr. armaan aap??
Ar: dr.modi aap yaha kese??
Ab: are tum meri hi behn ko to dekhne aye ho.. are mamaji yeh dr. armaan malik hain sanjivani mein intern…
Dg: oh ha billy yeh tumhara beta hain?
Balvinder (billy) - bi
Ananya- an
Bi: ha mera bada beta, aur yeh hain ajay mera chota beta..
Dg: bily tumhare dono hi bete bahut ache hain, ache interns bhi hain, very promising doctors hain..
An: are bhaishab yeh dono koi shrarat to nahi karte hain na??
Dg: anny ye tum muzse mat pucho?
An: kyun? Aap sanjivani nahi jante??
Dg: mein to kabhi kabhi hi jata hu.. par yeh hena riddhima, diya aur anjali k eek lote bhai dr. abhimanyu modi yeh hi waha jate hain..
Bi: are yeh kya hum log ladki dekhne aye hain koi hospital ki batein karne nahi…
Pa: anny lo pani pio..
An:padma aaj bhi tu wesi hain jesi kai salo pehle college hua karti thi.
Pa: accha tu bhi to nahi badli hain…

Aur sab log hasne lagte hain
Shashank padma se kehta ke riddhima ko niche leke aao( dhere se) aur wo unlogo ko yeh batane ke liye upar riddhima ke room chali jati hain.. aur jab wo ladki niche utar rahi hoti hain to use lagta hain ki wo riddhima hain.. aur wo ajay se puchtahain

Ar: ajay kya yeh riddhima hi aarahi hain?
Aj: yes bro aap ko to kuch karna hi nahi pada aap ko ridzi se shadi karni thi to mom dad hi aapko yaha par leke aagaye how lucky bhaiya..
Ar: I know

Riddhima ka dhyan armaan par nahi hain par armaan abhi tak use hi ghur raha hain…jese hi ridhima niche aati hain ek achi Hindustani ladki ki tarh armaan ke mom dad ke pau chuti hain..
Aur yeh sab khatam (finish) hone ke bad uski nazar armaan par padti hain.
Ri: tum?
Ar: ha mein
Ri: abhibhaiya aapne bataya nahi ke yeh muze dekh ne anevla hain?( she whisperd to abhi)
Ab: muze bhi kaha pata tha ke mamaji ke dost ka beta armaan hi hain…
Di: aab aap dono kusur pusur karna bandh karo…
Ab: ha, na nakchadi
Dg: to billy in dono ko kuch der ke liye akela chode batein karne ke liye…
Bi: ha yeh bhi thick hain…
Pa: diyabeta zara riddhima aur armaan ko tumhare room mein le jao. Aur ha tum bhi waha mat beth jana samji??
Di: mom mein itni bhi befkuf nahi hu…
Sab hasne lagte hain….

In riddhima’s room

Armaan ko kuch suz nahi raha tha isiliye usne pele HI hi boldiya.

Ar: hi
Ri: hi(gusseme).
Ar: gussa ho kya?
Riddhima kuch nahi bolti hain…
Ar: basket aab maf bhi kardona
Ri: kyun maf karu ha? Batao?? Muze iss bare mein kyun nahi bataya??
Riddima bichare armaan se itne sare sval puch rahi thi isiliye usne riddhima ke mu par apna hath rakh diya aur wo dono ek dusre ko dekh ne lage…

Ar: itna zyada bologi to mu mein dard hoga..
Ri: acha aab muze batao ki tumne muze isbare mein kyun nahi bataya??
Ar: tum aaj subh baut hi naraz(sad) thi isiliye socha ki ladki dekh ke ata hu badmein shadi karne se mana karduga.. par agar muze pata hota ki wo meri basket hi hain to kabhi apne dad se zagda nahi karta…
Ri: to ab kya socha hain? Ha kin a???
Ar: obviously yes
Ri: to chalo niche chalk e yeh kushkhabri sabko sunate hain…
Ar: chalo, par kya tumhe pata hain niche hamari sagai ki tiyariya ho rahi hain mere dad ne aur tumhare dad ne sagai ki ring bhi karidli hain..
Ri: sach?
Ar: ha aur yaha tak ki rahul, muskan aur dr.kirti ko bhi bula liya hain..
Ri: I can’t belive this
Ar: chale?
Ri: chalo

In main hall

Sab log un logo ko wait kar rahe hain aur phir riddhima aur diya ki badi behne aur jiju bhi to aarhe hain. Abhi aur niki neb hi shadi ke liye ha kardi hain, rahul aur muskan ko pyar to ho gaya hain par abhi tak ekdusre ko bataya nahi hain… aur ajay& diya also in love but they have’nt tell to anyone yet aur yeh sab inlogo ko ek hi din pata chal jata hain… that they r in love aur sabhi ladko ne ldkiyon ko prapose karne ka plan bhi bana liya hain jese hi armaan aur riddhima ki sagai finish hogi us waqt sabhi ladke ladkiyon ko prapose kar lege… wo bhi sab ke samne

After armaan & riddhima’s angegment first abhi starts to talk to niki

Ab: niki..
Ni: kya hua abhi??
Ab: muze tumse kuch kehna hain
Ni: kya??
Ab: niki I love u I can’t love without u..
Ni: kya?
Ab: nahi sorry I can’t live without u, will u marry me??
Yeh sab kuch abhi ek hi sas mein bol gaya aur sab use dekhte reh gaye… still everyone is looking at them..
Ar: abhi??
Ab: oye mein sirf akela hi nahi hu yeh tumhara dost aur tumhara bhai bhi in dono ko prapose karne wala hain.
Dia,niki,muskan,riddhima aur armaan bolte hain WHAT R u saying
Abhi??
Ab: yeh sach hain esa hain to apne bhai aur apne dost de puch lo..
Ar: ajay rahul yeh sab sach hain?
Both of them 2gether: ha his right

Utne mein hi anjali aur atul ate hain matlab ki riddhima aur diya ke di aur jiju…
Anjali- anj
Atul- at

Anj: hi ridzi congratulations!
Ri: thanQ di
At: congratulations Sali shaiba..
Ri: thanQ jiju
At: are abhi yeh tum ese ghutno ke bal kyun khade ho?
Ab: kuch nahi atul wo
Anj: mein janti hu.
Ab: kya?
Anj: yahi ke aap niki ko prapose karrahe ho.
At: tumhe kese pata chala anjali?
Anj: atul aap bhi na bhaiya ke hat mein ring hain.
At: wo to mene dekhi hi nahi.
Ab: pls niki say yes or no??
Ni: yes I will marry you…
Sab log ek sath: ye
Aj: lo aaj riddhima aur armaan ke sath sath niki or abhi ki bhi sagai…

Anj: bhai hum log hamri honewali bhabhi se to mil liye ab jijaji kun hain?
Di: di aap gess karo?
At: mein karta hu
Di: kijiye jijaji
Atul ne armaan ki aur hat kiya aur kaha yeh hain ridzi ka dulha..
Anj: par aap ko kese pata chla?
At: yeh hi kab se ridzi ko dekh kar sharma jo raha hain aur ridzi ka bhi yahi hal hain
Dg: sahi kaha beta tumne yeh hain gupta khandan ka dusra jamai(son in law)..
Bi: dekh shashank mera nalayak beta teri dusri beti ko prapose kare uske pehle mein teri beti mangta hu. Diya gupta kya aap mere ghar ki bahu bane gi?
Di: ha
Aj: hash bach gaya muze abhi jesa karne ki nobat to nahi ayi

Sab log haste hain

Ra: muskan kya tu muz se?
Mu: ha I love u I will marry u.. will u?
Ra: ha

Abhi: lo yaha par to ulta ho gaya yaha to muskan ne rahul ko parpose kardiya..
Sab log haste hain aur sab ki sagai ho jati hain…

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Part 10: The World Stopped that moment

Serial: Dil Mil Gaye (Dill Mill Gayye)
Channel : Star One

He looked around…everything looked so familiar…like it was his second home… out of all the years this place was probably the one where he spend a lot of his time after Sanjeevani itself…there were 2 basket balls lying near the goal pillar… he took off his shirt and tied it around his waist…

He picked up one of them and threw it at the net…it was a clear throw and went through the basket…

“Bulls eye”…he said and smiled to himself and started playing on his own…

Today he was feeling light…

All the pain and restlessness that he had felt for 8 long months seemed to have vanished like magic after the night he spent talking to Abhi in his snooker room…

He had stopped geting that nightmare that had given him sleepless nights for these long painful month…

He still remembered Ridhima, his basket but no longer with questions deafening him…

He had no complaints now…he loved her but now her thoughts just brought back the memories of the good times they had spent together and he felt that those memories were enough to spend not one but seven lives…

He played on, hitting baskets one after the other and thinking about all the good times he has spent at Sanjeevani…

Finally he stopped after he hit one last basket.

His vest was dripping with perspiration and his hair was wet and fell carelessly on his forehead…he brushed his hair back with his palm and sat down on the court itself sipping onto some water from a sipper he had brought along…

When suddenly it started raining heavily…he looked up at the sky…and felt the drops falling on his body…he sat there…he was so pleasantly wet in his memories that the drops from the sky did not matter to him anymore…

His phone started ringing…he got up and took it out from his pocket and picked up the call… “Bol champ…”

“Armaan kahan hai…main tera wait kar raha hoon…wapas aa apan dono saath mein dinner karenge…Mujhe tou aaj bahut bhook lagi hai…”, Atul smiled…

“Aar aha hoon champ…abhi Sanjeevani mein hi hoon…I will be there in sometime…bata kya khayega I will bring it along…”

“Tou uski chinta mat kar…bas jaldi aa…maine pizza order kar diya hai…tera favorite double cheese pizza...”

“Chal milta hoon main tujhe half n hour mein”…Armaan smiled as he disconnected the call…

He was already drenched and by the time he reached Atul’s friend’s flat he was feeling a little sick…with a slight sore throat and a little bodyache...he pressed the bell button and Atul immediately opened the door..”Abe tou to pura bheeg gaya hai…” Atul said as he threw a towel at Armaan…

Armaan went in wiping his head with the towel and quickly changed into a black half sleeve tshirt and a pair of shorts…they talked about their lives in Panchgani and Lonawala over the pizza…

Atul was posted at the new Lonawala branch of Sanjeevani and it took care of the Sanjeevani orphanage….where they were sent at times to take care of the kids during their internship period….

They kept the pizza boxes away and went to the bedroom…they lay on the bed and talked for a long time about life in general…about their old times in Sanjeevani…their old friends – Muskaan, Nikki, Anji, Rahul…Atul made it a point to not mention anything about Ridhima because he was scared that Armaan would again become sad…

He had seen the depression on Armaan’s face when he came back after Ridhima had told him about her marriage with Sidhant Modi and but today he saw the sadness missing from his best friend’s face and did not want to do anything to bring it back...

He didn’t realize and suddenly asked “Armaan tujhe Ridz ki yaad nahin aati kabhi…????”

He immediately clicked his tongue and mentally kicked himself for asking him that question…

He did not get any answer and looked at Armaan and saw that Armaan had slept off…

Atul smiled as he looked at Armaan’s calm face…and switched off the side lights…

“Armaan uth…conference ke liye late ho jayenge…”, Atul shook Armaan after he came out of the bathroom after taking a bath with a towel hanging from his neck and wearing a jeans…

Armaan opened his eyes “Sone de yaar…baje hi kitne hain??? Achchi need aa rahi hai…”

“Abe 9:45 ho gaye hain…humne 10:45 tak pahoonchna hai…”

Armaan woke up with a badly sore throat and a body ache…he went into the shower and quickly took a bath and as he came out with a towel on he started to sneeze..

“Achchoo….Achchooo”

“Kya hua…tujhse jab baarish bardasht nahin hoti tou bheegta kyon hai…???” Atul smiled and said…

“Kuch nahin yaar…Champ chinta mat kar I am fine…”

Armaan’s sneeze bout became worse by the time he reached the hospital and his bodyache was killing him…

“Champ abhi time hai conference ke liye…chal tab tak Cafeteria chalte hain…”

“Chal…”

Suddenly someone called Atul from behind and he said “Tou chal main aataa hoon abhi”.

“Ok…Jaldi aa” and Armaan continued to the cafeteria…

He ordered his favorite black coffee with little sugar and sat on a chair wiping his already red runny nose..”

“Achooo….Achoooo”, his sneezes continued and he put his hand behind his neck and closed his eyes…his bodyache was seemed to be getting worse…

“Achooo…Achooo…Excuse me…”, he said to the waiter who came to give him his coffee mug…

He wiped his nose, “Achooo….AAAH”, he closed his eyes.

“Apne aap ko bimar karne par kyon tule huye ho…dawai khao and chaye piyo…”

Armaan opened his eyes after hearing the ever familiar voice…His basket stood right in front of him…

Thanks for your comments guys...I know your guys are angry with me that I showed Armaan so sad...i had to clear the air for Armaan...I cant see him in pain like its being showed in the series...Also thanks to the silent readers for pressing the Like button...continue to comment...they mean a world to me...

Love
Mandira

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