She was lost in her thoughts till the extent that she did not even hear her mom's voice calling her. She kept crying until when muskaa entered the room to call her because others were all very busy in attending the guests. Muskaan who knew little about all that was taking place because the gupta family wanted to be a bit too personal was shocked to see the show stopper of the day crying her heart out on the grief of she doesn't know what
Muskaan: kya hua ridzi? Tu ro kyun rahi hai?
Ridhima: kuch nahi muskaan I just wasn't feeling too well
Muskaan: oye tu is shaadi se khush nahi hai kya?
Ridhima: ek baat puchun muskaan?
Muskaan: ridzi tu ek nahi do baat puch lekin roti kyun hai?
Ridhima: muskaan tumhe rahul se pyaar kaise hua aur tum kitna pyaar karti hai?
Muskaan: ridzi is samay ye question ?
Ridhima: muskaan tune kaha tha ki tu sach batayegi
Muskaan: ridzi keh to aise rahi ho jaise kabhi bataya na ho ye to main tujhe fursat se baith ke bataungi
Ridhima: muskaan main abhi jaana chahati hun
Muskaan: ridhima dekh main aur rahul jabse mile the tabhi se ek dusre se itna ladte the ki ek dusre ke saamne aa jaayen tabhi sabko ye darr satata tha ki kahin hum ek dusre ka khun na kar dein (muskaan slightly smiled and was lost in her own words there were flashes of their past in front of her eyes) main use kankhajoora bulati thi. Usse itni nafrat karti thi kiram ki ravana ke liya nafrat phiki par jaaye uske saamne. Phir hum saath mein sanjeevani mein interns ban ke aaye uske aage to tumne dekha hi hai. Halke halke mujhe uski logical baatein aur usse mere nakhron mein sense dikhne laga. Ek din vo nahi hota to jaan nikal jaati. Lagta tha kisse ladoon, kisse dil ki baat kahun, aur kaun mujhe aakar chede (tears sweeled in her eyes) lekin by the time humne apni feelings realize ki bahut der ho chuki thi,pehle hum pyaar se bhaag rahe the aur phir pyaar humse. Rahul ko jaana pada aur main bhi tanha ho gayi lekin phir vo kankhajura ek din bina bataye hi chala aaya, tabse maine usse jaise dor se baandh liya ho, apne se door jaane hi nahi deti, ise mera pyaar keh le ya darr, aur aaj dekh hum apne chote se parivaar mein kitne khush hain, rahul main aur (she blushed and slightly caressed here stomach which looked like an inflated baloon as she was 5 months pregnant.
Finally a smile played on ridhima's lips but went unnoticed by muskaan
Muskaan: acha chod tu bata tu kyun puch rahi thi , kahin tune bhi to kahin dil vil nahin laga liya(she slightly shrugged ridhima's shoulder and ridhima went all red not because of blushing but in pain)
Ridhima: muskaan chod na
Muskaan: ridzi ab main vo purani vaali muskaan nahi rahi jo teri baat palatna na samjhe chal bol
Ridhima first said to herself:ab ye ridhima bhi pehle vali ridhima nahi rahi
Then to muskaan: nahi muskaan aisa kuch nahi hai
Muskaan :ridzi tu is shaadi se khush nahi hai na?
(muskaan said this not questioningly but with seriousness in her tone)
Ridhima looked up alarmed as if caught red handed
Muskaan: arrey tu aise dar kyun gayi main to mazaak kar rahi thi main jaanti hun ki tu sahil se bahut khush
Ridhima inspite of herself nodded in a yes
Muskaan: dekh baaton baaton mein main ye bataana bhul hi gayi ki ladke vaale aa chuke hai jaldi chal
Just then a man who was eavesdropping them since the time they were talking came to break the seriousness
Man: muskaan yaar tujhse chota sa kaam nahi hota hai tu itni der se ridz ko niche nahi laa paayi
Muskaan: rahul tu bhi naa aate hi gala phad phad ke dahadna shuru kar diya kuch to sharam kar baap banne vaala hai
(muskaan realized what she just said and bit her lower lip and blushed rahul was lost in her)
Ridhima: vo rahul main tayyar ho rahi thi . I am sorry maine tumhe muskaan se itni der dur rakha
(she said in a teasing tone but was not her jovial self anyway the good point was she smiled throughout the incident, she didn't know why but seeing this couple makes her feel that there is a lot of resemblance of her and armaan in them)
Muskaan blushed a bit and then continued: chal ridhima ye to yahi duniya se anjaan khada rahega.
Returning to her serious self ridhima got up did the last touch ups to her make up when finally a question entangled her mind. Finally she decided to seek the answer
Ridhima:muskaan niche kaun kaun aaya hai
Muskaan: niche kaun kaun aaya hai se kya matlab saahil aaya hai tu tension mat le
Ridhima: muskaan please
Muskaan : ridhima kaun kaun se kya matlab yaar humara intern gang hai i mean atul anji main rahul ,dr keerti, dr shubhankar, dr shashank, padma aunty, nani aur saahil kekuch relatives
Ridhima: aur armaan ?
Muskaan ; ridhima hum jaante hain ki vo tera best friend hailekin yaar vo nahi aa paaya vo kya hai na usse kasauli jaana pad gaya bi ki tabiyat achanak kharaab ho gayi
Ridhima knew he lied to them
Muskaan: humne usse kaha bhi ki function ki zimmedaari hum sab interns ko mili hai lekin tune apni seniors ki daant tak kha ke tayyari mein koi kasar nahi chodi aur ab tu ridzi ko wish kiye bina hi chala jaayega usne kaha ki uska is duniya mein bi ke alava koi nahi hai so usse jaana hoga
Another tear trickled down her eye yet she wiped it and left with muskaan leaving rahul behind
Rahul muttered to himself: kyun apne aap ko aur usko itni badi saza de rahi ho ridhima,
Vo nahi jee paayega, aaj to hum sab se jhooth bol kar apne aap ko akele sambhal raha hai kyunki vo jaanta hai ki uski ridhima uska dukh samajhti hai lekin ghut jaayega vo, ridhima main jaanta hun ki usne hi aapse mana kiya hai ki vo aapko bhaga kar nahi le jaayega lekin vo isliyakyunki vo nahi chahta ki aap itne saare rishte khoye. Uske pyaar mein to itna dum hai ki saare purane rishtey bhulakar vo aapko naye rangon mein lapet de lekin shayad use yeh darr hai ki kahin vo apne maa, baap aur behen ko na kho de
Ridhima in her mind: kyun armaan, itni jaldi umeed haar gaye,apne par na sahi apni basket par to bharosa kar sakte the, kyun sabse jhooth bolkar itna dukh sehen kar ke tum nahi aaye, apni basket ko is jode mein to dekh lete, uski haathon mein vo mehendi to dekh lete jo rachi hi nahi,uske dil ki vo aahat to sun lete jo tumhare dastak dene ka intezaar kar rahi hai, uske labon pe vo dard bhari muskaan to dekh lete jo tumhaari chodi hui nishaani hai, uski aankhon mein vo armaan to dekh lete jo tumne adhure chod diye mere se mera sab kuch to le gaye piche chod gaye to ye dil jisme dhadkan nahi, ye mann jisme asha nahi, ye tan jisme ruh nahi sab kuch le gaye armaan sab kuch, kuch to chod jaate is ruh mein apna ehsaas to chod jaate jiske choote hi main kaanp uthti hun, apne labon ki vo nishaani to chod jaate jo koi chaaha kar bhi mujhse alag na kar paata,
Armaan ye sab chod gaye tum yahaan tak ki apni basket ko, mujhe, bhi chod gaye. Tum hi to kehte the ki pyaar karna aasaan nahi hai lekin pyaar mein itni taakat hoti hai ki saari mushkilon se aage badhta chala jaaye. Aur dekho main bhi kitni badi paagal thi ki jo tumne kaha usse pathar ki lakeer samafh ke maan liya aur bina soche samjhe tumhaari ho baithi.
Armaan: basket main jaanta hun ki tum yahi soch rahi hogi ki maine jhooth kyun bola lekin basket main majbur tha, main nahin dekh sakta apni basket ko kisi aur ka hote hue, is dil mein jo thodi si umeed baaki hai vo bhi tut jaati jo main hone na deta basket, main tumhe nahi kho sakta lekin main apne parivaar ko tut ta hua bhi nahi dekh sakta, tum dekhna dr shashank khud mujhe aur tumhe ek karvayenge, ye mera vaada hai tumse. Bus ek bhikh maangta hun ki tum mera saath mat chodna. Tumhaare bina armaan phir se adhura hi jaayega, nahi sah paayega duniya ko, ridhima dr shashank ye nahi sehen kar paate ki sanjeevani band ho jaaye aur ek baar ko agar vo ye sehen kar bhi lete to vo ye na sehen kar paate ki unki ridhima unki baat na maane, main jaanta hun ki tum soch rahi hogi ki ridhima to meri hai lekin ridhima meri na to thi, na hai aur na hi hogi, meri to basket hai. Ridhima to ek aisi ladki hai jiski pehchaan hai dr shashank ki beti ya dr anjali ki behen, jisko agar koi mazzak mein bhi kuch keh de to turant aansu bahane lag jaati hai, humesha duniya se darti hai aur kisike saamne chipkali ban ke baith jaati hai lekin meri basket aisi nahi hai. Vo basket jisse maine pyaar kiya tha vo to ek passionate ladki thi, jo nakchadi thi, jise haarna nahi aata tha, armaan mallik se bhi better basketball aata tha, jise ladna bahut pasand tha, jo aakhon mein ek famous doctor banne ka sapna li hui thi, jo itni strong thi ki jab armaan tut gaya tha aur sanjeevani chodkar kasauli chala gaya tha tabhi vo nahi tooti aur jo apne pairon pe khade hokar dusron ka naam karna chahti thi, ye ridhima ki acting karte karte meri basket na jaane kahan kho gayi aur jis din vo basket vaapas aa jayegi usi din dr shashank tumhe legally mera kar denge.
He said all this sitting in loneliness in his room and imagining how would his ridhima be
looking in the dress of a soon to be wife
Sahil thought to himself: kyun ridhima, kyun main tumhaari aakhon mein vo pyaar nahi dekh paa raha hun jo meri aakhon mein tumhaare liye hai. Kya tum kisi aur se pyaar karti ho aur agar aisa hai to mujhe bata kyun nahi deti, mujhe bura zaroor lagega lekin ye teen zindigiyan kharab karne se to acha hi hai na, ridhima mujhe tumse is baare mein baat karni hi padegi, tumhaari aakhon mein ek aisi parchai hai jise ek taraf to vo aine ki tarah dikha rahi hain aur dusri taraf aansu ke parde se chupa rahin hain. Ridhima I am sure jitna pyaar main tumse ya tum usse karti ho usse kahin jyada pyaar vo ladka tumse karta hai kyunki hum aansu tab dete hain jab kisi apne ko chot pahuchate hai lekin hum dil mein dard tab dete hain jab hum apne kisi hisse ko apne se alag kar dete hain aur tumhaare dil ka dard tumhaari aankhein saaf bayaan kar rahi hain, I hope ki tum mujhe sach bata deti lekin I promise ki tum bolo ya na bolo main us ladke ko dhund ke rahoonga kyunki main nahin chahata ki main tumse tumhaari koi bhi khushi cheenun aur main jaanta hun ki usse jyada khush yumhe duniya mein koi nahi rakh sakta hai.
"Never lose hope because it is in hoping that we live and in defeat that we die. But it is better to live before we die because we never know whether we will ever get a chance to live again but we know that we can never lose a chance that summons us to death"
Anjali sat there thinking to herself moving her index finger tip through the entire circumference of the glass kept in front of her and some thoughts entangled her mind so much so that she felt silence all around her and just the spirit of friendship talking to her. She involved herself deep into these thoughts to analyse whether what was done was right and if not then why is it ridhima and armaan who are suffering: dad ye sahi to kar rahe hain na,I mean ridzi loves armaan and armaan is not that bad a guy afterall, infact he is the best dad can find for ridzi and he understands ridzi better than anyone of us. He knows it so damn well. He loves her more than anyone of us does. He can even sacrifice his own life just for her fake smile to reach her eyes. He can feel her when she is not ven near him but in another corner of the place. Dad ko lagta hai that love is just not enough for one to lead a good life, one needs more so how can one make him understand that armaan has it all .infact dad hardly knows ki his so called material things and money matters are just sweet nothings for armaan. He is worth much more than all dad owns . Be it ridzi's wish for the smallest thing on earth or the most expensive thing existing he fulfills them all. It always seems like her wish is his command. He knows when ridzi is unwell or when she has missed sleep for a case study even before we do. He understands her cravings for chocolates and icecreams which she definitely has like no other. He knows that she is one person on this earth who has a lot of girlish moodswings. At one moment she wants to have a chocolate icecream and the other her wish is for something which has mouthburning spices. He is the one to fulfill all her wishes,he knows that she loves icecreams infact she can just hog on them and he also knows her love for fresh flowers, soft toys and chocolates. He feeds her with as many icecreams as she wants and he loads the house with chocolates and fragrant flowers whenever she is feeling sad or sounding down and just leave all this to add more he has the perfect sixth sense which can tell him where, when, what and how of everything concerning ridhima. He spends hours with her on the phone trying to console her sniffs and sobs which usually even iritate me and sometimes disturb dad and then even get a scolding from his seniors for not completing his case study. Even after being on that end of the line he can always make out ridzy's expression and can even guess when I mischeivously attend his call on ridzi's account and try to let out the same sigh which ridzy always lets out when attending his call and that totally turns him on. Is it not love? I mean simply anyone can guess it. And how can ridzi be ever so sacrificing I mean though I haven't confessed to atul yet if dad would have asked me to do similar thing like ridzi I never would have. I mean how can one just live without true love. And I am all the more shocked with armaan's behaviour, I thought him to be a brave man but he is even more sensitive than ridz. How can he be so respectful, selfless and caring to a man who is stealing away his life, hats off to him. I will need to talk to dad about it. And dad he has never acted as coldly, I mean how can he be just so rude about armaan, what's wrong in him, he is nowhere close to perfection instead he is perfect. Such caring feelings over which one can go all crazy, damn chisseled body with the perfectly curved muscles , looks no less than a greek god and sense of humour can leave even the greatest grave of this planet in splits of laughter. He can definitely leave any girl jaw dropped asking for more. Such bright sharp features that he is like every girl's dream, girls don't need to be after him they need to run after him and he is crazily in love with ridzy which I don't know why no one can realize. Anyone can fall for him. Even I would have if I would not come to know about ridzi's relationship with him at the right time.
Here comes our champ, atul
Atul: hey anjali, tum itni udaas kyun lag rahi ho
Anjali:hey atul, comeon have a seat, vo na main kuch pareshaan thi
Atul:anjali kyun kya hua tum jaanti ho na ki mujhe ekdum acha nahi lagta ki tum pareshaan ho
Anjali: I know atul but this is just too serious to be discussed
Atul: I understand anjali, acha anjali main sirf tumhaare liye ek gaana gaun
Anjali was about to refuse but she just couldn't instead she nodded in a yes
Atul: kabhi kabhi anjali zindagi mein yuhin koi apna lagta hai
Kabhi kabhi anjali vo bichad jaaye to ek sapna lagya hai
Aise mein koi kaise apne aansuon ko behne se roke
Aur kaise koi soch le every thing's gonna be okay
Anjali: she lightly caressed his cheek with her palm
Anjali: how sweet atul, tum mera kitna khayal rakhta ho, you really are a very good friend, I hope duniya mein sabke paas tumhaare jaisa sweet sa friend hota.
Atul: don't worry anjali tumhaara ye friend tumhe chodkar kabhi nahi jaayega aur vaise bhi maine to sabki care karna armaan se sikha hai . vo kabhi kisi ko dukhi nahi dekh pata na aur sab yahan tak ki tumbhi use itni impressed rehti ho.
hearing this anji got all the more pestered to talk to her dad as she knew that counting armaan's good qualities was impossible but still she might have to list up some in front of her father to convince him
Anjali: chale atul
The difference between silence, smile and speaking is that when you speak you solve many problems in seconds, when you smile you forget many problems for seconds and when you are silent you avoid many problems for seconds
THAT WAS IT
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TRIED TO ADD ANJY IN THESE PARTS
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Saturday, October 10
Introductory Segment : Pyaar Ki Ek Kahaani Suno...
[Though, this is not exactly a Fan-Fiction, still it is related to DMG and AR in some way, which you will come to know about very soon]
Labels: Writers Corner
Zahida rushed out the door and saw a Red BMW with its roof down in the garage, beside the car, someone was leaning against it. He was wearing a black shirt with shorts, wearing the best type of Ray Ban glasses. He was fiddling with his Ipod as it had stopped working for some unknown reason, He turned around and looked even more cute and
mature from the front
Guy: hello? Zara u okay? We are getting late!
Zahida came back to reality as his smooth deep voice had reached her ears, She looked around noticing nobody else was out on this beautiful sunny day, which was very odd.
She looked at him one more time, and quickly put her head down. She wanted a quick glimpse to make sure she wasn’t dreaming. She did imagine this day but had never thought it would come true. She kept pinching her self to make sure it wasn’t one of her silly dreams. She looked at him one more time, but this time when she lifted her head she had a tear stuck to the middle of her check. She ran to him and flung herself into his arms…
Guy: atleast tumhe yaad toh hai mein kaun hoon
Zah: bhaiyya (coming out of the hug and punching him on his arm) tum badle he nahi
Guy: ahh! Aur tum bhi nahi, u still punch me on my arm like when we were young, and wats with this bhaiyya?
Zah: hey, ab bachpan ki addat hai, toh kya karray? Anyways, main tumhe bhaiyya nahi bulaongi, I will call u by the sweet little nickname I gave u when we were 10, remember?
Guy: sure, but anything but bhaiyya, u know na, that I feel like a budha when u call me that! (starts to laugh)
Zah: (giggling) I know, that’s y I do it Ammy BHAIYYA (stressing the word bhaiyya)
Zahida starts running around the car trying to get away from her long lost brother Armaan but she knew all her attempts would be futile. Armaan was too fast for her.
Now catching Zahida…
Armaan: baccha, u know that im faster than u but u still try to run from me, by the way, u r going to get late for ur exam
And with that said, zahida’s smile faded and a her eyes started to become bigger, she became very worried and started panicking…
Zah: Ammy, plz drop me, I have to go, plz im getting late! (almost begging as if asking for her life)
Armaan: only on one condition…. U will not call me bhaiyya at home or at school, or even if we are alone, ( a mischievous smile started to form on his lips)
Zahida: no way!!! Aisa nahi hosakta
Armaan: okay, im not going to drop u off, sorry, (he started to walk away slowly as he knew she was going to agree the second later, as she can never afford to miss an exam)
Zahida: Armaan! I wont call u bhaiyya but plz drop me off, im getting late, and I really need ur help, plz!
Armaan turned around to c zahida’s eyes starting to turn red and tears just ready to drop from her eyes at anytime. She was shaking a bit as she cant afford to let anything to get in between her abu’s dream. It was one of things that he said before his last breath. Armaan could see how much love she had for her parents that she would go to any extend to fulfill their wishes. Whenever he had looked at her, she had reminded him of her dad, Simply, caring, determined, and very warm hearted. Armaan rushed to her and hugged her like a father to his daughter.
Armaan: sshhh… baccha, I was just joking, I can never c u crying okay, I luv u too much to even hurt u, I was just joking, u can call me bhaiyya okay,
Zahida’s face lightened a bit, but she had missed the feel of a father to long which really broke her
Armaan: zara baccha, u r very lucky, u know y? because u have two people to look after u from there(pointing to the sky) and u have 4 people to look out for u here,
Zahida had stopped crying by now as she had tried to control her emotions.
Zahida: I now, lekin 4 nahi 5
Armaan: kaise, mein, Ams di, mom, dad, uummmm…… aur kaun hai? (with a very confused look and tone trying to think if he forgot anyone)
On a old worn out brown bench, sat a beautiful young girl wearing a black kurta with black jeans. She had her toote beside ready to be taken with her as soon as she got up. She was staring at the swings that were slightly swaying back and forth as the wind was pushing them. She felt like she could see a man in his late 40 swinging on the left black swing and a little girl around the age of 7 wearing a white and blue knee length dress swinging on the swing next to him. Both were laughing and giggling like it was impossible to stop them.
BEEP BEEP BEEP
She came out of the trans, and took out her cell to see who was calling her so early. She looked at the screen which had Muskaan written on it flashing in pink. She quickly picked it up….
Girl: hello, Muski? Where r u? I need to talk to u urgently, plz tu jaldi aja, aur zahida ko kuch nahi batana, she wont be able to do good on her test if she finds out.
Muski: arey yaar, mein traffic mein pasgayi, u know how busy it is in the morning especially when ur taking the bus, but don’t worry I’ll be there faster than u can take ur name. and don’t worry okay, and give me a smile (she said this in one go)
Girl: how would u know if I smiled or not, tum toh yah nahi ho
Muski: agar mein wa nahi hoon toh kya wa, mein tere dil mein toh hoon na, mein Muskaan hoon, mera kaam hai sab ke hotho par muskaan lana...right?
The girls lips curved into a smile, feeling very thankful to god that she was given such a friend that can read her heart without even being right beside her
Muski: dekha, u know u look very sweet when u smile, but still u have that ugly frown on ur face. U better throw that frown out of your life and I mean it!
Girl: Muski, u r the best, u know, this is y I luv u so much, u understand me and u have been there for me when I needed u the most, u have been a blessing from god to me, u have no idea wat u mean to me
Muski: no ridzi, u don’t understand, u have taught me so much in life, u have become more then a best friend, but u have became a sister to me. I have luved u like a little sister and I always will, U have taught me that in life anyting can happen, I cant even define wat u have given me, all I know is that it’s the most beautiful experience I have ever had, and that’s y I luv
Riddhima: u know, when I look at u and see u so happy and strong, I get my strength from u, u have given me the strength that I need to fight for my own survival, u have given me strength when I didn’t have a home, I don’t think I will ever be able to repay u back
Riddhima starts to have tears flowing from hers, one tear crossing over her upper lip and slightly touching the lower, making her taste the salt that it carried. A soft, gentle touch is felt on both her cheeks, wiping her tears away. Riddhima looks up to see a white faced Muskaan staring at her with her eyes bright red from crying. Muskaan sits down on the bench beside her so she is face to face with Riddhima.
Muski: its weird how life works, isn’t it. U look at me to get strength and I look at u for strength. We r each others strength and weakness. Aur haan, don’t u dare say that u wont be able to repay me back. Im not doing anything for u that I would deserve it.
Riddhima: I know, okay chal rona band kar, aur school chalte hai, aaj ams di nahi aingi drop karne, and anyways we have to wish zahida best of luck for her exam, u know it’s a big day for her!
Muski: yeah lets go, but by the way whos dropping zara off then?
Riddhima: I don’t know, I didn’t get to talk to her but ams di was saying its her neighbour, I think his name is Armaan, but not sure….
Everything was quiet for a change, There were no tantrums being yelled, or loud music being played, and the tea kettle wasn’t even on. Something was different, something had changed that day. Something was wrong,
An elderly woman was fixing her bed in her room, while a woman in her early 50s was brooming the floor of her room. Since last night no one, had not spoken to each other. Although some were deeply hurt others had no remorse to wat had happened the previous night. A man in his mid 20s came up the staircase and went straight into his room, The women followed him…
Woman: do u think its better if we don’t keep contact with them after we move from here? (in a depressed tone, wishing she didn’t have to say it)
Man: mom, rite now I think that’s the best way, she was fighting with u for no reason yesterday, when she should be living so peacefully rite now since we have only 9 more days left to move!
Mom: I know beta, lekin hum kya karein? Riddhima se rishta torde? Usko aur takleef de hum ?
Son : mujhe yeh karna toh nahi hai, lekin humme karna hoga, kyunki agar humne aisa nahi kiya, toh uski ma humesha use aur takleef dengi, i dont want her to get into more trouble than she already is in....
Mom: tu bilkul sahi kah raha hai....... lekin ma?
Son : nani…. Agar unko kabhi humse baat karni hai toh woh hume phone karsakti hai
(Having a determined face and tone)
Mom : i dont feel rite doing this
Son: mom, ur going to have to, and don’t worry, Riddhima is almost 18, which means she’ll become an adult and will be able to do whatever she wants, then she can come and visit her arjun bhaiyya and padma aunty, now give me a smile
They both smiled, and had a little prayer together hoping for the best, and wishing that nothing happens to anyone as they were the only family they had for each other.
A group of boys were sitting on the benches. Two of them were looking very tough as if they could beat anyone at that moment if they had to. Three of the boys were joking around and looking at girls passing by, and the last one was just revising for his exam
1guy: Ryan, y r u so worried about this exam? I told u, if u wanted I could have gotten u the answer sheet and u wouldn’t have to worry about anything.
2guy: I know, y do u waste ur time studying, and anyways u missed a party because " u had to go study for the exam" (saying it in a nerd tone)
Ryan: I told u guys, im not studing, im pretending to study, u know that girl that always walks down the hall with her friends?
2 guy: the one with her two friends
Ryan: yeah that one! Well I have something planned for her, u know how I leave at 8:45 to sit alone at the bench, well its just a little show so she thinks im very hardworking, and by the way I have the answer sheet
(pulling the answer sheet from his textbooks)
Once I’ve gotten her trust, then watch wat happens, u’ll enjoy it! And I assure u of that........
A mischievous smile played on his lips with the glint of evil in his eyes
Precap: the Uninvited, a mistake in the happening!
thank u for ur support, i really luved ur replies, i really do hope that u guys like this part aswell, i know this part may seem boring to u but it was some what important
This part was very true, The lines that are written actually happened, but im not going to tell u who, and for the ppl that know, dont tell anyone!
and plz guys do comment either good or bad, as i would like to live up to ur expectations, i want to write only if u guys like it!
hey, im good, wat about u,
thanks, but if there r any mistakes do tell me so i can fix them, and sorry of u thought it was boring when u read this part. i do hope u like this part though, and its up to ur expectations! plz do comment on this one aswell
walakum salam ams di,
and i know, if u thank me then im not going to accept it, so dont even think about it, ofcourse,
theres always something cooking in my mind, i think this part may have been a surprise to u when u read it, i dont think that u could have imagined it, but sorry if u thought it was boring,
i know, but i just want to remind u so u never forget that i'll be there,
hey pooja, thanks for commenting, i'm really happy that u comment, im glad that u liked it aswell, but very sorry if this part was boring for u, if u dont like something do tell me and i'll try to fix it, do keep commenting,
hey munazza, thanks for commenting as it does mean a lot to me, and thanks for liking it aswell. i hope u liked this one but u might have felt a bit bored so sorry for that. do keep commenting
hey angel, kaise hai meri sweety baccha? and as i say to ams di, how ever many times u guys say thanks or sorry im not going to accept it. so next time dont think about it. and i understand y ur late, so no need to say sorry, yeah ams di did tell me that u read it and liked it, but do tell me parts that are bad cuz i'll try to fix it, and if u thought this part was boring then im sorry for it,
yeah unfortunatly riddhima was slapped but thats the truth that it actually happened!
thats very sweet, and i luv u so much for saying that,
yup armaan is here, but how riddhima and armaan r going to meet will be very interesting, so here was the next part, do comment on this part as well as ur comment means a lot
thanks guys for liking it,
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Friday, October 9
"But Riddhima.....what is the poblem if you come with me??"
"No Armaan, we are just friendz...and if we go in the party together...people will think wrong...God!! i feel like killing Muskaan."
"Lord!!!its impossible to make u agree" He exclaimed almost frustrated.
Riddhima had questioned Armaan about his cabin. He told her that he and Rahul were the on board managers of the ship. So the cabins were provided by the company n they din have to pay for it. On an instinct she asked him if Rahul was a rich guy to which Armaan shrugged his shoulderz in confirmation. They both knew that Muskaan din like rich people much. It was cause of money that her family had broken apart. But Armaan assured Riddhima that Rahul was doing this job infact to prove himself. That he has a self identity.Rahul would reveal everything to Muskaan when he would find the right moment for it.
Presently she was walking hither thither on the deck and Armaan was running behind her to make her agree to come with him to Rahul and Muskaan's party. The lovebirds had decided to throw a party in the cruise's party corner to celebrate.
And as the word "CUNNING" din suit anyone better than Rahul ...He had decided to make it a couples only party....You had to have a partner to enter their party.The plan was basically Muskaan's.
She had been furious when she found Riddhima chit chatting , or rather staring at Armaan in his cabin. She had searched the whole ship with the least idea that she would be in his cabin. She had been hell worried.
When Riddhima gave her the reasons of being there. she had calmed down but had sensed "Love" in the air.She disscussed it with Rahul and they came up with this plan. They knew their friendz would never miss their party and their was no question that they would take someone else for their partners.
When Armaan and Riddhima had learned about thier theme they found it quite interesting....considering themselves out of the rule.....as they wouldn't need an entry...they would just be there...right??
"And let me make it clear guyz....the rule applies to you both too....if u wanna be there in our party better find urselves someone....No "Saathi"....No Entry..and Nooo Party"....Rahul had said so and walked away hand in hand with Muskaan leaving Armaan and Riddhima in utter shock.
"For the last time Riddhima....why do u care what people think?? We can't miss their party ...come on they are our best pals..."
"But Armaan the party is only for couples....and we r not a couple."
"Who carez Riddhima...its just a matter of getting entry into it...."
"No Armaan....we can't"
He was pissed now. He got hold of her and made her turn towardz him. he started moving closer to her. She moved back and he moved ahead. Finally she touched the railing and he kept moving closer.
Her breaths got quicker and tougher...She din want to look in his eyez as she was scared he would sense the desire in herz....she looked away....he held her chin and made her look at him.....She got lost into them....He moved closer, her tingling sensations growing by the second.....
"Riddhima.." ..he whispered very softly....
She still kept looking into his eyez.....
" You will come with me to the party right???"...this time his voice wasn't even a whisper.....it was a hush...
She gave a slight nod in agreement still not looking away..She was so lost in his eyez that she even hadn't realized what he asked and shook her head just like a doll.....He smiled...
He knew this was the only way she would say yes.... .He knew this would happen...he knew she would get lost in his eyez and say yes....He was himself losing his composure when he got close to her but struggled to keep his mind and heart in place...Now that he got what he wanted he decided to bring her back to reality...
" Riddhima" he whispered again...."What will people think if we both keep standing like this staring at each other.Will they not think we are a couple??"
She broke the contact.
"Noooo, I am not coming with you.." She literally screamed when she realised his trick....
"Sorry honey.its already decided.......i will pick u from your cabin in an hour.....be ready...."....He winked at her and left.
She smiled......She had herself wanted to go with him since the beggining...but how could she simply say yes like that...That wasn't a girlz style....was it??? She smiled again and moved to her cabin to get ready.....
"Riddhima i had said one hour...and its almost 2 hourz now...how long will u take???
"Just five mins Armaan please..."
"Since one hour you have been saying the same thing....come on hurry up." He shouted from outside her cabin...
"Why do women take so much time to dress up.....No wonder dad says that if its a dinner party...u have to tell mom its a lunch one..."...Standing their dressed handsomely for the party.....he pitied his dad now.
"Riddhima ...i am counting till five....if you dun come out i am coming in..."
"One...Two...........Three..........Four..........4.5..........4.75.......huh ...ok ....fiveeeeeee."
He burst into the cabin and his heart forgot to beat.
Hello every1....i am extremely sorry for such a short part......hope i am forgiven........wanted to clear sumthing......in d last part it has been mistaken as AR kissed each other....which is not true.....they were about to when the glass crashed........i am sorry if i am dissappointing any1......hope you all like this part...do comment....to appreciate n as well criticize.......loads of love n hugs......
hey simi.....i was sooooooooooo happy to read ur comment......pehli baar itna lamba comment mila.....n thts y ur forgiven....jus kidding......par mujhe sach me tumhara comment padke acha laga....thanks for describing every part so beautifully....mai tumhara jitna long reply to nahi likh sakti....but jus wanna tell u it means a lot.....thanks a ton........aur jaha tak tumhara guesses ki bath hai....thanks again.....i really wanted sum1 to guess so tht i know how d story is going on in ur minds.....mai tumhara guesses confirm ya disconfirm to nahi karungi....bt all i can say is.....some places ur on track....hope u like this part....do keep commenting.....
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I liked a story in Chicken soup and my this one is deeply inspired by it...hope u'll like it...!
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and do pray for Rucha di...we want her fighting fit...back really soon...!This one's dedicated to Rucha Di!
Food was perhaps the first and the last thing, I and my father never bickered upon. We used to scream our guts out at each other on almost every thing of the world -be it my grades, my subjects, my habits, choice of books,money shopping or my boyfriend-Armaan! We both had our own ways, wide away from each other.But food, used to glue us together.I completely trused his taste and kitchen was the only place where we actually enjoyed our time together cooking new dishes, discovering new recepies!
Armaan-my boyfriend, was one of the major reasons why I and Dad used to argue. An argument on him used to spring up every week regarding him, we'd have a heated debate which would end with Dad's warning and my open defiance to it.
Armaan, on the other side, always tried to gel up the distance between me and Dad.He'd encourage me to open up to him, to share my life and feelings with him.I still remember our 5th date, which, according to me was the most boring one, as all the time, he lectured me about me being the eldest lady of the house and how I should take care of Dad and my 10-year old sister, Mini'
Each time he tried to make peace between Dad and me, I used to get irritated and ended up saying'"You are as bad a preacher as the Church Parson'"to which he used to reply'"One day you'll realize the value of your Dad'"and the day, unfortunately came sooner that I could've thought'
Armaan and Principal Gupta walked towards the Library, where I was completing an assignment, wearing grim faces, imparting a feeling that something was wrong, very wrong..
"Riddhima'your father's ill'you must immediately leave for City Hospital'Armaan's taking you'"He had a sympathetic look, which scared me more'
"Ar'maan?'"I looked at him, as he picked up my books and stuff and then held my hand.
"Hurry up'your Dad needs you'"He was avoiding an eye contact, I noticed..
"He'll be fine'"He rubbed my back and I just stood there, bemused'
I sat besides my unconscious Dad, holding his hand. He had been suffering from lung Cancer since last two years. He had had 17 Chemotherapies and 12 Radiotherapies. I had heard him throwing up at the middle of the night after his Chemo , I had myself brought a hat to cover his bald after he lost his hair, I had sat besides him, wide awake till morning, when he had fever, or felt weak at all those times'His Doctor hadn't said anything worrying but I knew, I was going to lose him'forever'
"I love you Dad'"I said, holding his hand'Mini was being handled by Armaan, who had always been his favorite'
Those words echoed again and again inside my heart'That was the last I heard from him'My fears came true as I lost him'I didn't know what to do or say'Even tears didn't find way down my eyes'Kissing his hand, I came out to Armaan and his mom, Dr. Ananya, who were consoling Mini'
"He left me'"I went to Armaan, who was shocked hearing me'
His Mom ran inside Dad's room, but I didn't cry'Armaan hugged me tight, crying silently, but I didn't cry'I couldn't cry'
Days passed in grave silence'everyday I rummaged across the house, in hope to find a note by ad for me'His last words "me too'" sounded too hollow and distant'It wasn't enough for me'I wanted to talk to him ..It was so strange'I never opened up ever, before him, and when I wanted to, he had already left'
Every night, Armaan came for Dinner, lest I and Mini would feel lonely'I served him and Mini and quietly, left for my room'I seldom talked to anyone, or came out of my room'I had heard Mini groaning when she knocked my room, and I lied aloud '"I'm busy'"
I couldn't look into her eyes for the fear of breaking down before her'I had responsibilities over my shoulders'I asked her to take care of herself'and when she felt alone, she just called Armaan, who willingly helped him in any way, he could'
Two weeks later, I used our savings to get Mini admitted to a boarding school while I went to Ohio, for a PhD in medicine.I thought life would give me a second chance if I forget my past, but in an attempt to suppress my past, I began losing myself'None of my "college friends" knew about me being an orphan. I had busied myself with studies.I studied till I slept'Whenever, a friend will ask me to accompany her to call her home, I'd make a lame excuse.
It was like the more air breathed, the more I gasped'Armaan, was still in India, pursuing his MBBS. Every night he used to call me and assure me, that he was just a phone call away from me but I just replied harshly in monosyllables'
Then, one day, the entire college came to know about my "orphan" status and they all began sympathizing with me, or rather, pitying me'They'd often say "sorry" at the mention of word "dad" or "mom" before me to which, I irritatedly replied'"Its not your fault.."
Things went more complex when eating made me feel guilty 'It made me think "your Dad died because of you and you are merrily eating?'"I stopped eating and began having dizzy spells due to weakness'When I had to eat for survival, I found out a new way of escaping my guilt. After every meal, I poked a finger down my throat and puke everything out'Soon, it became a habit and I no longer needed to poke my fingers down there'I involuntarily threw up'It became a routine..Then, I realized where I was heading'I was going to die..
I called Armaan and for the first time, cried after Dad's death'I sobbed for hours on the phone'I told him what I felt, did and thought'He hung up the phone saying'"I 'm reaching Ohio by the next flight'I'll be there tomorrow morning'."His voice was shaky'
He kept his promise and I ran into him, hugging him like maniacs, crying my heart and soul out'He was my God at the moment'He let me cling onto him, for the entire day and then, we talked'
He explained my condition'He said'"Listen Riddhima'its Bulimia, you are suffering from'you've already got yourself into a big mess in my absence and I won't let you continue with it'you're a fighter and you'll have to fight off everything that obstructs you from reaching your happiness'Its you, who can make a change'it's got to be you'but yeah, I'll always be there besides you'and you know what..?All these years, you've been trying hard to rub off your past 'which is wrong! You don't need to fight or forget your past, you need to live with it'"
The very next day, he took me away to his place India'I came to know, he had left his last exams to be with me, and hence, wasted his entire year, but he had no regrets'His Mom treated me at home and took me to hospital along with her, whenever things went more complex'But I had strength inside me now, that I would be able to make it'I had my angel, Armaan with me'
8 years have passed since the day he brought me back to India'and now, days are as beautiful and sunny as they ever used to be. Mini has joined Armaan as his intern in Sanjeevani and Ananya Mom is now, the MD of the hospital. Armaan and I are expecting our first baby after 2 months and he's totally over the moon'
"RIDDHIMA'You haven't had your medicines yet na'??'Wait I'm coming to spank you'"He yelled from the dinning room, downstairs.
"Oops'!!I've got to go and have my antenatal tablets quickly otherwise, I'll be getting a good amount of scolding'.Run Riddhima'.!!!"Keeping her diary aside, she stepped out of the study table...!
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aahana…am glad that u liked the story….and sorry for being late…
But for sure we are friends….
Here you go with next one…..
Ar: oye hoye…to basket chahati hai ke hum unase bad pyaar kare aur kuch nahi..(he just hold her from back…and put his chin on her shoulder) manjoor hai ye to hum apani puri life karane ko tayyar hia…waise muje nahi pata tha aapake khayalat itane nek honge (he tease her as he see that red color on her face..She just turns towards him and hide her face in his chest)
Ar: did I ever tell u that you look more beautiful when u blush….u turn into pink basket…
Rd: armaan..(riddhima just hit him playfully…all getting pinker with his comment)
Ar: ya my princess…my cute …adorable..Pink princess….(with this he kisses her forehead..)Please riddhima muje kabhi yu naraj ho kar mat chale jana
Rd: kabhi nahi armaan…
Ar: aur tum chinta mat karo jinaki wajase aaj meri basket mujase itana naraj hui wo yahi nahi hogi main unhe keh diya hai ke wo yaha se chali jaye…
Rd: kya?...armaan tumne…kyu armaan? Tumane aise kyu kiya?
Ar: kyu ka kya malab hai..unaki wajase jo hua..usake bad bhi..plz riddhima muje koi bat nahi sunanai…
Rd: dekho armaan main manati hu ke jo hua wo galat hua par ab to sab thik hai na..aur am sure unahe koi misunderstanding ho jayi hogi …tum unhe bataoge to sab thik ho jayega
Ar: nahi riddhima tum unhe nahi janati uar waise bhi unhe kuch manane na manase se koi pharak hi nahi padata…main unase kabhi bat nahi karunga nahi unhe kabhi maff karunga kabhi nahi…(and he just turn to other side)
Rd: armaan.. (and she make him looked at her) meri bat suno wo tumhari ma hia armaan …
Ar: chahe wo jiase bhi ho
Rd: ma kabhi buri nahi hoti..shayad halat kuch aise ho ke bachpan main wo tumhe time nahi de payi ho usake ye matalab ye nahi ke..ab tum uanake sath…dekho armaan tumhi kehate ho na ke ye jindagi nafarat ke liye bahot choti hai to..
Ar: ha riddhiam lekin mai unase nafarat nahi karata…am hurt …aur main unhe maf nahi kar sakata,….
Rd: armaan main tumhe unhe maf karane ke liye nahi keh rahi but atleast unhe yu yaha se jane ko to mat kaho…
Ar: riddhima aaj unhone job hi kiay usake bad bhi tum…..you know what…u are impossible
Rd: armaan…dekho main ye nahi keh rahi jake unase bat karo ya….sab kuch bhool jao..dekho main nahi janati ke kyu tumhare rishtye main ye kadawahat hai…lekin itana janati hu ke tumhe iss kadawahat se takleef ho rahi hai..aur main bas ye kum karana chahati hu…
Ar: to issaka yahi tarika hai ke hum ek dusarese door rahe…
Rd: nahi armaan isase bat aur bigad jayegi…aaj itane salo bad wo yaha hai…to tum door mat jao..main nahi chahati ke mere wajase tum dono ke rishtye main koi darar aaye….
Ar: ye darar bahot purani hai riddhima tumhari wajase kuch nahi hua hai…
Rd: par meri liye tum isse bharane ki koshish to kar sakate ho na
Ar: nahi main ye darar nahi bharana chahata kyu ki ye maine nahi banayai aur nahi unhe kuch karane dunga kyuki main janata hau wo kabhi ye karana nahi chahati…
Rd: ok lekin armaan tum kya meri khushi ke liye unhe yaha rehane bhi nahi doge..armaan main chahati hu ke hamari shadi puri ho mera matalab ahi usame koi kami na ho…waha sabake blessings hamare sath ho…tumhare mom ke bhi …mere liye unaka hona bahot important hai..
Ar: riddhima wo tumhe …tum nahi janati wo shayad tumhe…
Rd: armaan papa bhi tumhe pasad nahi karate the but tumane unhe mana liya na…agar tum hamare liye papa ko mana sakate ho to…now its my turn …main unhe mana lungi am sure ek na ek din wo muje jaroor pasand karengi…
Ar: lekin riddhima…
Ra: armaan plz…(making a baby face which armaan cant say no)
Ar: janati ho na ke tumase hamesha har jata hu…(and he kiss her hands)
Rd: (smiling) ha..waise ab tumhe ab aadat dal leni chahiye…
Ar: kisaki tumhare hatho ko uhi kiss karane ki….oye hoye basket any time yaar aise aadate dalane ko main hamesha ready hota hu…
Rd: armaan…mera matalab harane se tha
Ar: ohh…wo kyu?
Rd: wo kya hai na mr. Armaan mallik dekho ab hamari shadi ke bad to…tumhe hamesha harana hi padega na main tumhe hamesha haraungi ..to acha hai abhi se aadat dal lo…
Ar: ohh…to hone wali miss riddhima armaan mallik…..aapaka ye gulam aapaki in adaose (riddhima was blushing as he said her miss armaan mallik and he was really close to her ) pehalese hi hara hua hai,,.,..
Rd: (blushing) armaan..
Ar: bolo na..armaan ki jan…
Ar: kya riddhima tumhara dialog kuch alag tha…
Rd: armaan ghar jao…(pushing him towards window)
Ar: riddhima meri bat to suno…dekho…
Rd: nahi tum bas jao..wiase bhi tumhe unhe jane se rokana hai tumane muje promise kiya hai..
Ar: ha par ek aur bat bhi keh deta hu agar unhone tumhe phirase hurt kiya to main nahi manunga ok…kyuki muje pata hai unhe manane ke liye tum kuch na kuch jaroor karogi …
Rd: to kya nahi karana chahiye..tum hi kaho kya tumane nahi kiya tha papa ko manane ke liye..
Ar: unaki bat alag thi unaki permission hamare liye mayane rakahti thi lekin…
Rd: aur mom ki mere liye…
Ar: ok…but ya agar wo nahi mani then promise me tum apane aapako kise bhi bat ke liye blame nahi karogi aur nahi hi dukhi hogi….
Rd: ya..i promise…ab khush
Ar: yes but still if she hurt u then ,,,
Rd: ok samame aa gaya…ab tum joa na
Ar: tum muje bhgana kyu chahati ho yahase ha…dekho rat bahot ho chuki hai main dar gaya to..
Ar: nahi riddhima main sach main dar gaya to
Rd: to muje yaad kar lena…
Ar: aur agar tum dar gayi to….main ek kam karata hu yahi ruk jata hu wiase bhi anujali nahi ahi…
Rd: armaan ,…thodi der main di aajayegi…(pushing him towards window asking him to go…in order armaans hand get little hurt..actually it was nothing ..but armaan wants to get pamper so he)
Ar: aahh….kitani jor se laga
Rd: (she got worried) armaan (holding his hand checking that scratch)am sorry main tumhe hurt nahi karana chahati thi galati se ho gaya,,,am sorry
Ar: kya galatise ..acha hua sirf hath ko laga main gir ja ta to…
Rd: am really sorry armaan meri wajase tumhe,,,,bahot dadr ho raha hia?
Ar: (nod like a small kid)
Rd: (kissing at the spot) ab?
Ar: (smiling) ab nahi ho raha..
Rd: (smiling) dadr yaha tha hi nahi to dadr hoga kiase?
Rd: ha dard to yaha tha(putting her hand on his heart)
Ar: tumhe pata tha…
Rd:muje apane armaan ke bare main sab pata hai..(and with that she just pull his cheeks)
Ar: oye..hoye…waise wo kya hai na tum muje jab tak kuch hota nahi mere pass nahi aati to muje aise kuch na kuch karan apadata hai..galati meri nahi tumhari hia,,,
Rd: acha to ab ye galati sudharane ke liya hame kya karana padega?
Ar: jo kahunga aap nahi kar pagegi meri sharamali kali…
Rd: sharamili kali ye kya hota hia tum kitane filmy ho armaan..…waise aap batayito sahi..
Ar: ok to then( he just bend forward and ask her to kiss him )
Rd: armaan..(she just went red)
Ar: kaha than a meri sharmaili kali ye nahi kar payegi…par kya kare muje tum issiliye achi lagati ho.kyuki tum sabase alag jo ho...(with that he close his eyes..)
Rd: …I love u,,,(she said this and kiss him on his cheek and runaway..)
Ar: (he open his eyes in jerk…as he felt her lips…)I love u too….my jan…(he left smiling to himself and thanking to god..that he have her in his life)
Aa: yash armaan kaha hai? (she ask him as she come back home from club and didn’t found him )maine har gaya dungda kahi nahi mila…
Ya: milega bhi kiase wo khud apane aap ko dhundane gaya hai…
Aa: kya? Ye kya bat kar rahe ho? Kaha hai armaan..
Ya: wo actually riddhima ko manane gaya…
Aa: iss waqt?
Ya:ha wo bhi yahi keh raha tha..tum ma-bete kafi ek jaise sochate ho u know…
Aa: wo bhi ye keharaha tha matalab?,,,(pause) aapane bheja use…
Ya: aur kon….(before he could complete his words…another joyful voice interrupt him)
Ar: (coming from door) buddy you are the best yaar…just best pa in the world..(hugging him )
Ya: (coming out from hug ) acha bachu riddhima man gayi to ye pa the worlds best pa ho gaye..thode der pehale ye to serious nahi lag rahe the aapako…
Ar: (gulps) are nahi buddy…wo to main tense tha na so…
Ya: chal man liye..waise bata…man gayi na meri bahu…
Ar: buddy armaan ke charm se koi bach sakata hai bhala…
Ya: chal pata hai …aakhir beta kisaka hia..
Ar: ya like father..am his buddy….
Aa: (interrupting their sweet convo) please aap dono muje batayenge yaha ho kya raha hai?
Ya: are batana kya hai armaan hamari bahu ko mana kar aa raha hai bas..
Ar: jo aapaki wajase udas thi
Aa: plz armaan grow up..and aap yash aap use hamari bahu samaj bhi kaise sakate ho..wo ladaki hamare armaan ke layak nahi hai.,…
Ar: I love her…and that enough for me…
Aa: no armaan kabhi nahi tum janate hi kya ho…muje pata hai wo ladaki kabhi tumhe khush nahi rakhegi …am mother armaan I know ke tumhari khushi kisame hia..
Ar: oh really so you know your child very well ha!
Ya: armaan (try to calm him down)
Ar: no dad…let me remind her something….(looking towards aarati) aap meri khushi ko samajati hai yahi kehana chahati hai na aap…to aap galat ho aap kabhi nahi samaj paye agar samajate to asama ke sath aap ….
Aa: armaan…(in high tone) aasama ke sath jo hua wo usame meri koi galati nahi thi…
Ar: ya right….
Ya: aarati tumhe riddhima se problem kya hai? Tum use milo to sahi am sure usaki sadagi tumhara bhi dil jeet legi…
Aa: usase mil chuki hu yash…aur maine subhe jo dekha..wo
Ar: wo ek misunderstanding thi….aur kuch nahi..aap riddhima me ke bare main janti hi kya hai…usase achi ladaki koi aur ho hi nahi sakati….yaha aap usaki burai kar rahe ho aur waha wo muje aapake sath mera relation theek karane ki bat kar rahi thi…aapane kya kuch nahi kaha use par usane ek bar bhi aapke bare main kuch galat nahi kaha…usane balake aapako mere samane defend kiya..aise hai meri riddhima…
Aa: sab natak hai armaan tum usake sath kabhi khush nahi hoge meri bat mano…main iss rishye ko kabhi kabul nahi kar sakati…
Ar: main janata tha..kyuki riddhima chahati hai issiliye main aapako ye samaja raha tha ke riddhima kitani achi ahi warana kabi ye koshish nahi karata…(leaving for his room) and ya chahe jo hojaye main riddhima se hi shadi krunga chahe aap mane ya na mane….(and he left)
Ya: aarati please tum armaan ki khushi ke liye bhi nahi man sakati? Sach main riddhima bahot achi ladaki hia…
Aa: nahi yash aur wajah aap janate ho..padma aur shashanki beti ko main kabhi aapana nahi sakati…unhone jo kiya usake bat to kabhi nahi…
Ya: beeti bato ko bhool jao…aur armaan ke bare main socho…wasie bhi wo aaj tak aasama ke sath jo kuch hua wo bhoola nahi paya hai,,aise main usaki in khushiyoko usase mat cheeno….
Aa: wok hush nahi reh payega…
Ya: tum apani jidd ke wajse armaan ka pyaar to kho hi chuki ho,….kahi ab apana rishta hi na kho do…(and he to left )
Aa: (to herself) agar ab main insase kuch bhi kahungi to shayad armaan aur nahi yash meri bat manege…muje kuch der intajar karana hoga,,,main aaj hi maya ko yaha bula meti hu am sure maya se milakar armaan riddhima ko bhool jayega…main shashank iss bar isiko ko mujse cheenane nahi dungi…kabhi nahi,….
ok as Shalzi as a punishment here is another one part….as u sad to me dear…hope u will liked it.
DSDT part 35
Ar: morning pa….(armaan said morning to yash..at breakfast table…but yash was busy looking at door…) hey buddy kya bat hai..kisaka intajar ho raha hai ha…
Ya: are kuch nahi..aagaya pahad todake…
Ya: are yaar exercise… jogging …
Ar: ya….but why pahad todake..?(armaan was sounding little bit irritated)
Ya: ha to tu iase jogging se aata hailadata hai ke jiase koi pahad todake aa raha ho?
Ar: ok…(armaan was restless…)
Ya: kya bat hai aaj tera mood kyu kharab hia roj jo jogging se bada muskurate hue aata hai..aaj kya hua?
Ar: kuch nahi aise hi..
Ya: ok aak riddhima se mulakat nahi hui issiliye..
Ar: ya pata nahi kyu nahi aayi..aur phone bhi nahi utha rahi..(said it in one go)
Ya: (giggle) armaan be carefull you are turning into devdas…no actually devD,,,(still giggling)
Ar: buddy…aur udalo mera majak…waise bhi jogging pe nahi mila hu aaj usase..hope hospital main busy na ho..(whispering to himself) I wish aabhi wo yaha aa jaye
Ya : (giggle) koi bat nahi aaj teri ye murad hum puri kar denge..
Ar: konasi wish? (try to act normal)
Ya: just turn around buddy…someone is waiting for you…
Ar: (armaan thinking its rioddhima turn in excitement)riddhima…(but suddenaly his expression turn into happy to sad..As there was ramu kaka holding his coffee..)ohh aap dijiye…
Ramu: kya hua…bhiaya ji..?
Ar: nahi kuch nahi aap jao..(Looked at yash)
Ya: what are when I said that she is waiting for you…
Ar: ya ya…I know,
Ya: (singing) intaha ho gayi intajar ki aayi na kuch khabar mere yaar ki…..
Ar: please aap…waise aap aapana breakfast kyu nahi kar rahe ho..ramu kaka..
Ya: are kya hua am just singing yaar..u know I like this song….aur rahi breakfast ki bat to ramu nahi aaj mereliye breakfast koi aur banana wala hai.,…
Ar: plz aap mujase koi umeed mat rakhiye…
Ya: muje marana nahi hai jo tere hath se khane ki umeed karunga…
Ar: then who else…am sure aap unaki umeed nahi kar rahe ho…(referring to aarati)
Ya: no….someone special …
Ya: wait you will find out…now stop missing her and have your coffee..
Ar: am not missing her…wo nahi aayi to na sahi.,…muje koi pharak nahi padata..
Ya: ok…tumhe koi pharak nahi padata..wo yaha abhi aa bhi jaye to tuje koi pharak nahi padega na..
Ar: off course not…am cool…
Ya: ya….are aao na riddhima beta…(looking at door..)
Ar: plz pa ab main nahi phasane wala…
Ya: ya..aur wiase bhi tuje to koi pharak hi nahi padega na…
Ar: ya muje kya pharak padana hai…
Rd: (from his behind) really armaan…
Ar: (armaan turn aroung just to get lost…she was wearing his favorite sos wala lal sute….het gair were left open they were coming on her face,,,she was looking like an angel his angel….)bascket…
Rd: (who was now red like her dress…as he was looking at her without blinking his eyes..) armaan..(she ask him not to looket her as yash was there..but he was not there he was in his la la land….)
Ya: aahh.aahh..(make a soung just to bring armaan back from his la la land) aao beta…
Ar: riddhima tum yaha..(with lost tone)
Ya: kyu tuje to koi pharak nahi padane wala than a..kya hua?
Ar: wo aise bat nahi hai…main to…
Rd: ha bolo na…
Ar: riddhima tum meri side pe ho…
Ya: kisane kaha…wo mere side pe hia…
Rd: sahi kaha uncle…(bite her lower lip..) I mean papa aapane..
Ya:hmm…(riddhima walk up to him and touch his feet..)khush raho…waise tu chahe to muje pa bhi keh sakati ahi jiase ye ullu kehata hai..
Ar: pa..(pout like a kid…while yash and ridz just giggle this)
Rd: are ha..ye lijiye aapaka halawa…(handling yash a box..)
Ar: ok aap yaha issiliye aayia hia…aur issiliye pahad todane nahi aayi thi…
Ya: are use chod na…waise beta halawa bahot acha bana..hia…
Rd: thank you papa…
Ya: sorry beta I know meri wajase tumhe subhe subhe ye banana pada hoga but I was really missing this test so cant help but call you for this,,
Rd: are aap aise kyu keh rahe ho..apaka haq banata hai,,aur muje acha laga aapne muajse ye manga to…(give him her sweet smile…which make armaan and yash simle)
Ya: ha haqk to banata hai tu meri ab bahu jo banana wali hai,,kyu armaan? (that make riddhima blush)
Aa: (coming out from kitchen)nahi ye hamari bahu nahi hai,,
Ar: aap..(but he was stop by ridz who hold his hands just to prevent him)
Ya: aarati ye tum kua keh rahi ho?
Aa: sahi keh rahi hu main..ye meri bahu nahi hai…
Rd: am sorry..(she had tears by now in her eyes she just turn to leave..)
Aa: ruko meri bat puri nahi hui…main kaha tu meri bahu nahi hai beti hai,,,
Aa: ha main apani bahu ko beti bana rahi hu koi problem hia?
Ar: ha..mera malab nahi..i mean are u sure…
Aa: armaan positive…am sorry ridhima maine tumhe galat samaja..lekin jab armaan ne muje bataya ke itna hone ke bat bhi tum muje hi defend kar rahi thi to muje smaj main aaya ke tum galat ladaki nahi ho…muje iss rishtye se koi problem nahi hai beta..
Rd: aap please sorry mat kahiye…aapaki koi galati nahi thi…(and she just bend down to took her blessings)
Aa: bas bas betiye pau (feet) nahi chua karati…waise muje halawa nahi milega..
Rd: ha main…wo actually main abhi garam karake lati hu…(and she left in kichen)
Aa: yash aap aur armaan mano ya na mano mere liye armaan ki khushi mayane rakhati hai,,,issiliye..
Ar: thanks …thank you..
Ya: ya aarati thank you very much…tum nahi janati aaj tumane kitani badi tension dur karadi…
Aa: I know,..
Ar: pa..main aabhi aaya change karake ok…(and went towards kichen..yash saw this)
Ya: waise tune bataya nahi tu aaj kal kichen main change karane laga hia,,
Ar: nahi wo maine socha..pani I need water so…(and he left without waiting for yash next comment)
(ridz was busy with halawa….she was smiling..Blushing as she was really happy today finally last person armaans mom was agreed for their marriage..she was so busy with herself that she doesn’t realize that armaan was staring at her ….armaan come in but stop in door itself as he looked at her she was making many faces..she was blushing..smiling to herself…and while doing her work..she frown when the stands on her hair fall on her face….armaan was just enjoying looking at her cute expressions…just then ridz realize his glaze …she just looked at him and blush…)
Ar: oye hoye…
Rd: armaan..tum yaha kya kar rahe ho? Kisine dekh liya to?
Ar: test karnae aaya hu…tumhare,,,(he left the sentence in mid)
Rd: (she just left her mouth open on his statement …and armman was grining wide looking that cute shock on her face..)
Ar: kya hua..nahi karu..(and he come close to her ..while she keep going back)
Rd: (recollecting herself…)armaan..(she has turn to red..)
Ar: kya mera itana bhi haq nahi hai…
Rd: nahi armaan …(now she was locked with counter) wo..(she was nervous)
Ar: janata hu pa ke liye banaya hai par main bhi to test kar sakata hu na…(saying he just took the bowl of halawa which was kept on counter behind ridz on counter...)
Rd: halawa…tum halaweke bat kar rahe the?
Ar: (with naughty smile) to..ek min basket tum kya soch rahi thi? You dirty mind….
Rd: wo..mmm.main..(Fuddling with words..)armaan..Tum halawa khao na..
Ar: ha…par ye mere liye itana meetha nahi hai…
Rd: kya..Shayad sugar kam ho gayi..Ab armaan main kya karu,,wo tumhari mom…I mean mom..WO..(She was getting all panic..)
Ar: riddhima maine (holding her hands) kaha ye mere liye itana meetha nahi hai..
Rd: armaan..wahi main keh rahi hu tumhe pasand nahi aaya isaka ,matab hai ke kisiko pasand nahi aayega..
Ar: riddhima..(little louder) muje ye kum meetha isaliye laga kyuki ki meri meethai (sweet) isase bhi kyada meethi hoti hia..(and with this he kiss her on his cheeks)
Rd: (she just blush…)armaan…
Ar: tum khush ho na riddhima…
Rd: (looked up in his blue ones who was full with love..)Ha armaan main bahot khush hu… (With this for his surprise she pull him in hug..Armaan smile and hug her back...)
Ar: waise (pulling out of hug) tum jo samaj rahi thi…if you want I can test that too..i would love to….
Rd: armaan..(And just hit him on his chest playfully) chalo papa hamara wait kar rahe honge…
Ar: ha chalo kisane mana kiya hia…waise ha..Halawa acha hai… (She smiles) par meri aur sirf meri special meethai se acha nahi... (With this ridz just run away with the halwa from their ….armaan follow her)
….thats for today ,,,,
Plz comment ….they really means a lot for me….
Ya: are aarati kahi ja rahi ho?
Aa: ha airport..
Aa: are bataya to tha..maya aa rahi hai..
Ar: wo…yaha kyu aa rahia hia?
Mu: par ye shadi bina kissi marriage hall ke kaise hogi?
Ra: ha aur gurudware main ki to kya phayada?
Ar: kuch sochate hia tu parehsan mat ho..
Mus: kuch nahi hoga….hamari shadi kabhi hamare parents ke sath nahi hogi..(and she started crying)
Ya: kyu nahi hogi…..waise mera farm house marriage hall jitana bada nahi ahi..but acha hai..
Ar: (one phone) yaar riddhima kaha phasa diya,,yaha koi maya nahi hia,,,tumane kyu kaha unase ke main yaha aayunga ha!!!
Rd: armaan dhyan se dekho wo wahi kahi hogi…
Ar: are yaha koi may sabarwal nahi hia..(just then one good looking guy put his hand on his shoulder…)
Guy: waiting for us?
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