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Saturday, August 29
Debate Desk: Arranged Marriages vs Love Marriages
Labels: Debate Desk, DMG Family
Part 4: Dostana
Dostana
by keddie
PART:4
Hey all,
Till now i've posted 3 parts of Dostana,but i've never replied on all of ur comments,as i never get time to.so today i thought that i should do it.so here goes:
Munaza: Thanks alot...u commented on every post..! :)
Jiya: Thank u soo much 4 being a regular reader :)
Rabi: Thank u very much 4 commenting....wo thoda busy thi isliye chota part likha...studies u know...! :)
Shruti2 di:Thanks alot 4 reading the FF...hmm...sign han?..well signs to men derahi hoon aur deti hi rahoongi..lolz..:)
Ranbir bhaiyya:Its ok.agar pichle parts pe comment nai kiya to tht doesnt matter..atleast u liked my work..nyways Thank u :)
Cathy di:Thank u soooo much..im very happy ke itni awesome writer ko bhi mera ff pasand aya...thanks :)
Pooja di:Thanks! :)
heart: Di m glad u commented...Thanks alot!n yea best of luck 4 ur xam! :)
henna:Thanks alot! :)
amreen:Thanks...AR reveal kardoongi dun wory...kab karoongi tht i wont say :p...thoda time lagega!till thn enjoy...!! :)
Roshni:Thank u :)
Karan bhaiyya:Thank u soo much... :)
Zara:Thanks alot... :)
simi di:Oho di...itna confusion!!aap itna confuse mat ho :p thanks anyways!
Guys...em glad u all liked my FF i know all of u wana know who's Gona be AR....
chalo finally bata hi deti hoon........AR men se Armaan to Karan hoga aur RIdhima..................hmm.......chalo ek to bata diya na....abhi ke liye ek hi kafi hai :p
guys....coming parts men pata chal jayega....have patience..clues men deti rahoongi....ap log predict karlena!...evn i m xcited abt it.....no no mujhe to pata hai...em xcitd to see ur xcitement..lol....nyways buht bak bak kardi mene...zada nai....here goes the nxt part:
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......................Mayank-Drushti........................
Drushti is in the children's ward chasing a child who is running around the ward,while the other kids are sitting on their respective beds watching n having fun wid the scene n also encouraging the running kid.
Dru:(runing after the kid)Arey suno....ruk jao.....*phuff*....ruko...*pant*...bhagna band karo...ruko...
she has been runing after the kid for 40 mins now n is phufing n panting(tired noises while runing)by now..
Other kids:bhag Johny bhag!!
Dru:(stops runing n angrily looks at the kids)Abey chup!(thy stop shouting n straighten thmselves)Kya bhag johny bhag!(making a face)chup chap betho...iski to....(runing after the kid again)
The kid gets alarmed and charges towards the door of the ward...whn he bumps into Mayank,who holds his arm and pulls him bck to the ward.
May:(to the kid):To...kahan bhagne ki tayari horahi thi?
Kid:(confidently)bahar!
May:(raising an eyebrow)Acha!but unfortunately...ab aisa nai hosakta...!(puling him inside slowly)Ur nt goin anywhr!
The kid tries very hard to free himself but it seems Mayank is much stronger thn him.He takes her to Drushti.Who slightly slaps him on his back.
Dru:(to Mayank)Hmm...Thanks.par tu itni der kahan tha...thodi der aur iske peeche bhagti to pair(feet)toot jate mere!(angrily)
May:Wo men...locker room men tha...sorry...btw hi...m Mayank!er..friends?
He moves his hand 4wd in order to shake hands wid her..Giving a chance to the kid to escape.He grabs his luck at 1nce n runs.
Dru:(angrily)Oye...mujhe pata hai tu Mayank hai...aur ab ye dekh tu ne kya kiya...wo phir bhag gaya...(Slaping the hand wch he had moved 4wd)
May:Dun worry....isse to men dekhta hoon..
Dru:(sarcastically)Han han ja ab!
Mayank runs after the kid n grabs his arm b4 he cud get outa the ward.He pulls him back in and makes him lay on his bed.
May:Now dun you dare get up frm here..chup chap so jao..
The expression on the kid's face suddenly changes frm angry to a very happy one.But Mayank doesn't take tht in notice.The kid immediately goes closes his eyes n soon goes to sleep..Thn Mayank goes to Drushti,who has her mouth wide open and her eyes narrowed and is looking angrily at Mayank...
May:(smiles proudly)Dekha..bacho se aise baat manwate hain!
Dru:(fuming wid rage she slaps his bck)Oye...tujhe pata hai men iske peeche kyun bhag rahi thi?
May:(confused)er....nai!
Dru:(shouts)Oye to pehle pooch to leta!
May:Kyun Drushti?...kya hua?...chup chap so gaya na wo!?(in a low tone,confused)
Dru:Abey...wahi to kehrahi hoon...use sulana nai tha....balke soone se rokna tha!
May:(still confusd)rokna tha?...par kyun?
Dru:Oye usne dawai nai pi.....(now xplaining him)Amoxil pilani thi....ward men khatam hogai thi...wardboy bahar se lane gaya tha aur ye nakhre kar raha tha.....aur wo gadha wardboy bhi pata nai kahan mar gaya(in an irritated way)
May:(now understands n apologizes inocently)Oh...i m soooo sorry Drushti..mujhe pata nai tha...
Dru:Oye..tere sorry ki aisi ki taisi....pooch nai sakta tha?(shouts)
May:(geting angry wid her behaviour)Han to...ab sorry bolraha hon na?!kaha na pata nai tha!
Dru:To ab tere sorry ka men kya karoon...wo to so gaya na...ab dawai kaise pilaongi?
Just thn the wardboy comes wid the medicine...
Wb:Dr.Drushti....ye lijiye Amoxil....
Dru:(starts fuming on seeing him now,she shouts loudly at him)Oye tu kahan mar gaya tha?...dawai lane gaya tha ya purey hospital ko dawai pilane gaya tha?
Wb:Wo....Dr.....
May:Its ok...(taking the medicine)tum jao yahan se..(now slowly to himself)run 4 ur life...ise men dekhta hoon...
Dru:(now controling her anger)Ab ye to so gaya...dawai bhi nai pi.....
May:(trying to ease her)koi baat nai..jab uthe ga to piladena...
Dru:(iritatd again)Oye tu chup kar(in the old Muskaan way....damn i sooo miss tht Muski)Ek to usse sulakar ab apne sade huye ideas de raha hai!mere paas itna tym nai hai ke men ab iske uthne ka wait karoon!...ek kaam kar..tu ye dawai le(handing the bottle to him)jab ye uthjaye to ise pila dena....waise bhi tere paas buht fazool waqt hai......
She goes outa the ward angrily,leaving him....dumbstruck!
........................Amit-Shweta...........................(continued)
The body of the patient swings up n thn thuds bck to the bed....this shocks both Amit n Shweta!
Amit:(in a shocked way)nnnnumber kitna hai?
Shw:(more shocked n scared thn him)eeek mint(she checks the number n gets a double shock on seeing the no. raised to 7)SSSSSSEVEN!
Amit:(shocked n angrily)Kya??Tum pagal ho kya?...7!!!!itna high number...tumhe pata nai 7 pe beam kitni powerful hoti hai!...
They both look at the patient in horor..His body was trembling..his hands and legs bent...Shweta's eyes grew wide in horor..Amit lukin at him with fear in his eyes...
Amit:(questioningly)Tum itni irresponsible kaise hosakti ho?...itni badi bewakoofi?
Shw:(In a very shocked state)Wwwo ttum iiitni jaldi kar rahe the...ttto...mmen
Her heart thuding rapidly in her chest....she's very very scared n is nt able to move her eyes frm the trembling patient...
Amit:Arey...itni bhi kya jaldi thi??....
Shw:Wooo mmmen....wo.....huh huh(now wid hard sighs she starts off...crying very badly)
Amit takes his wide open eyes off the patient to look at her....She is crying very badly as it was her 1st ever surgery n all ths had happened all bcoz of her so he cud understand how she might be feeling.....somehow he knew tht she was nt the only one at fault...afterall, it was his idea of giving the patient a shock n he realised tht he WAS actually in a hurry tht confused her n made her do ths...now he thought of being nice n calming her down n do sumthing abt it! So he goes to her and tries to console her.
Amit:er.m.. Shweta....er..ro mat...wo...sab theek hojayega.....its ok!
Shw:(crying badly)yye mene kya kr diya!..tum theek keh rahe the Amit..men kitni bewakoof hoon...how cn i be soo irresponsible abt it....*sob* (now looking at him wid full red eyes,wid a scared tone she questions him)Ab kya hoga Amit?agar .....*sob* agar ise kuch ....*sob*kuch hogaya tto?huh uhuhn....*sob*yye mene kkya krdiya..*sob*
Amit:Nai Shweta....dun say tht...kuch nai hoga...dun worry....mmen kuch karta hoon...
Shw:Han Amit...plz help me out*sob*(too scared)Plz Amit....do sumthng...plz usse bachalo...*sob*plzzzz!!(begging)
Amit:Dekho...u..u just relax men kuch karta hoon!
Confused n a bit scared himself,he manages to speak up these words to her but he,himself was not sure abt wht he had said...afterall,it was his 1st surgery as well...He somehow manages to gather some courage..thn he makes her sit on a sofa in the room.Thn moves towards the patient who is still shaking...Thinking wid evey step he moved n reached the patient's bed..At first he thought tht he wud take the help of some senior doctor but thn Shweta's sobs made him realize tht if he did so, thn Shweta will probably have to face alot of trouble,so he decided to try n cover up the situation himself widout making any1 know abt it...
Amit:Yaar...Shweta ko bol to diya ke men kuch karta hoon...but akhir karoon kya?
Thinking Hard he 1st put a blanket on the patient comforted him...he put some more blankets on him to warm him up...thn he rubs his feet...later he injects him n thn after alot of effort the patient not only comes to his normal state but also regains conciousness.
Amit's eyes grow wide n he jumps wid joy n thn starts shouting....
Amit:Shweta.....Shweta..!!
Shweta who is still in a shock n is still crying gets attentive n comes to him...
Amit:Shweta see...mene kaha tha na sab theek hojayega...see sab theek hogaya...!! he's soo f9 now..he's sooo well!!
On seeing ths Shweta's joy n happiness knows no bounds n she starts jumping....They both are very very happy now n in their excitement they hug each other very tightly....They are sooo happy and relieved as if they've got all the happiness in the world....they hug 4 sumtym thn suddenly the xcitement fades away n awkwardness fills the room..they slowly n awkwardly move away 4m each other..They look into each other's eyes for sumtym thn Shweta finally changes the topic and brings back the excitement.....
Shw:(joyfully)M very happy Amit...Thank u sooo much..Tum ek buht.....buht ache doctor banoge!
Amit:(smiles)Thanks!...er...tum bhi!
Shw:(her smile fades)Nahi.....men nahi!mene to sab bigaar diya!
Amit:(consoling her)Shweta....tumhari koi galati nai...it was just the 1st time...dont worry.....com'on now gimme a smile..(she smiles)hmm...thts better..!
........................Karan-Jenifer (cafeteria)...........................
Jenifer is sitting in the cafeteria after completing half of her work.She orders a cup of tea for herself and is waiting for it.She is sitting wid her head,down on the table.Soon, Karan enters the cafe and sits wid.
Ka:Hey Jen...wadsup?(now shouts to the waiter)A cup of black coffee plz!
Jen:Kuch nai...thak gai thi isliye socha thoda rest karloon..
Ka:Sahi socha...men bhi isiliye aya tha...
Jenifer is nt a mood to talk but she keeps replying him in a low,tired tone.
Jen:Kya?
Ka:I said...men bhi isiliye aya tha...rest karne!
Jen:Oh!
Ka:Er...tum kuch logi?(sweetly)
Jen:No thanks...mene already apne liye chai order ki hai!
Ka:Oh!..Acha!...er..ok(wanting to talk)...so...er so howz it goin?
Jen:Wht..?(sighs...moving her hair backwards)
Ka:Err...ur work...here...at Sanjeevani!
Jen:Its gud(trying to put off the conversation)Er....Karan plz...men abi baat karne ke mood men nai hoon....im sorry!(in a tired low tone)
Ka:(not geting her point)Koi baat nai.....tum chai peelo...phir baat karte hai...fresh ho jaogi!
Jen:Nai Karan.....
B4 she cud say more,the waiter brings her tea and his coffee.
Ka:Lo...tumhari chai agai...!
She silently have her tea while he keeps on talking to her....He had suddenly started to blaber tales of his bravery,wch were mayb true of maybe he was just saying thm but she just had no interest.She wanted to have her tea and thn go bck to duty but he just wont stop n now she was getting irritated.
Ka:Wese meri chodo..tum apne baare men kuch batao na...
Jen:Karan...dekho mene pehle bhi kaha....mera baat karne ka mood nai hai...men bas yahan chai peene ayi thi...ab mujhe duty par jana hai...
Ka:You kno....tumhare iss itne khoobsurat chehre par ye dukhi se expressions suit nai karte...
Jen:I dont care....(now geting more irritated)
Ka:Ok ok f9...tumhe duty pe jana hai...jao....
Jen:(sighs)Thnx!(she turns to go)
Ka:(stoping her again)Acha ek mint ruko.....
Jen:(an irritated sigh,thn she turns bck to him)Wht?
Ka:Er...Jenifer i was thinking...erm...how abt....U n me...go out....together...er
Now she gets EXACTLY wht he wanted frm her.She gets real angry now.
Jen:KARAN....YOU....tum phirse....TUM MUJHPAR LINE MAAR RAHE HO!tumhe zara bhi sharam nai ati?!!
Ka:Whoa....i dint mean to.....
Jen:Dint mean to wht?....hum yahan hospital men hain n ur flirting wid me.......tum yahan kaam karne aate ho ya ladkiyan patane?
Ka:Arey lekin men to...
Jen:Tum to kya han?
Ka:Men to wahi keh raha tha ke....hospital men nahi....duties ke baad!
Jen:WHT??!!no ways....tum jaise flirty ladke ke saath men kahin nai jaongi.....samajhte kya ho apne aap ko?
Ka:"Cool dude!"
Jen: huh?? kya?
Ka:Tumhi ne toh kaha ke kya samajhte ho apne apko toh maine bola "Cool Dude"
Jen:Shutup!!!tumhe ladkiyon se baat karne ki tameez nai hai....buht hi badtameez ho tum....aur tum chahte ho ke men tumhare sath date pe jaon....no never..!!(she glares at him) Badtameez,idiotic,ill mannered brat!!
Ka:Itna bura hoon men....(making a fake sad face)Thank you mujhe batane ke liye....hmm...ab men kya karoonga?!!tumhe itni manners ati hai to tum hi mujhe sikhado na....TEACHER!!
Jen:Tumne mujhe teacher bola?
Ka:Hmm....shayad kuch parhane wale ko teacher hi bulate hain TEACHER....
Jen:You stupid....idiot...(trying to come up wid more words)Ill mannered....brat! Btw mere paas tum par waste karne ke liye time nai hai....so im leaving....Duffer kahin ka!hmf!(saying this she leaves)
Ka:(shouts behind her)Thank you...TEACHER!
........................Locker room...........................
The Day ends and after a tiring day at work all the interns are in the locker room except Shilpa and Sukriti..
Whn they enter,they see a sight wch amazes them...it is something like this:
Sunaina is busy putting some stuff into her locker,Pankit is reading a file sitting on one of the benches,Amit and Shweta are peeping into their locker but their eyes keep glancing at each other from time to time,Karan is lying on a bench in such a way as if its nt the locker room but his own bedroom,Jenifer is sitting on the other bench rubbing her temples and also angrily looking at Karan while Mayank and Drushti have restarted the fight on the day's incident in the children's ward.
May:Oye tu samajhti kya hai khud ko?ek galati kya karli tu to subah se sar kha rahi hai mera!
Dru:Oye tujhe ek baat bataon..teri aj ki galati dekhkar na mene tera future predict karliya...tu na ek buht bakwaas doctor hai...aur kabhi ek acha doctor nai ban sake ga(shouts at him)
Hearing this Shweta remembers abt her surgery and sadly looks at Amit wid tears in her eyes.He shakes his head saying her to calm down.While Drushti and Mayank are fighting,there's nobody to stop thm.thn Suks and Shilpa come to put off their fight.
Suk:Arey ye tum log kya kar rahe ho....kyun lad rahe ho khamakha?
Mayank narrates the whole incident to thm.
Sh:Arey to kya hua?...ufho..itni si baat pe jhagad rahe ho...tum dono ache se friends nai ban sakte kya?
Dru:Dosti...aur iske sath?....kabhi nai!
May:Han han mujhe bhi koi shauk nai hai iss bhootni ke sath dosti karne ki!
Dru:Tune mujhe bhootni kaha...?
Suk:Arey arey...dont start off....yaar men aur Shilpa abhi yehi baat kar rahe the...
Dru:Kya?
Sh:Yehi ke Sanjeevani men bilkul maza nai..(this grabs Every1's attention...esp Karan's)College men itna maza ata tha....wahan sab friends the...aur yahan to.....sab har waqt jhagad te rehte hain...i mean y cnt we all be freinds?
Suk:Han....afterall,hume ab hamesha sath hi kaam karna hai...to i think we shud co-operate wid each other!
Sh:Yea...so y nt we all 4get our fights n be friends?
Suk:YA!does any1 think we'r wrong?
Amit:No ur nt!
Shw:Nt at all....
Jen:Im in!
Sh:Gr8...so lets all be friends!
They all shake hands...
Shw:(whispers to Amit)Thanks 4 helping me up today..
Amit(Smiles)FRIENDS?(moving his hand to her)
Shw: (shake hands)friends!
Drushti still hesitates.but later on shakes hands with Mayank...soon the all shaking gets over and every1 settles down 4 a good chat.........
LATER.....
Suk:Hmm...now it feels much better!
Sh:Yea....(sudenly brightens up)Hey guys....ab jab hum sab friends hain...to kyun na iss nai dosti ki ek achi si start karen....
Jen:Wo kaise?
Sh:Hmmm.....ermm..PARTY!!
Ka:Wow....man i love parties!!
Shw:(gigles)Yea lets hav a party!
Sh:To done...kal raat ko duties ke baad...kisi achi si jaga par chal kar party karenge!
May:Lekin kahan?
They all think 4 a while thn....
Ka:(to shweta)the old party place?!
Shw:(gigles joyfully)Yea!
Suk:(confused)Kahan?
both Ka/Shw together...joyfuly:CANDY CLUB!!!!!!
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Precap:
Ka: (starts singing)GAREEBON KI SUNO...WOH TUMHARI SUNEGA...TUM EK PAISA DOGE...WOH DUS LAKH DEGA!!
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Soo guys i hope u all liked this one.Do comments!
Loads of love!
A BIG DMG Fan,
Keddie
Labels: Dostana
Parts 9-12: BLUE - The color of pain and love
BLUE- The color love & pain.
TO ALL THE BLOGERS , I WISH YOU HAPPY RAMADAN.I WISH ALMIGHTY ALWAYS BLESS AND GUIDE US IN THE RIGHT WAY OF LIFE.
ENGLISH ALWAYS DOESN’T EXPRESS THE FEEL WHICH WE WANT TO EXPRESS.THERE IS NO ENGLISH WORD OF “ABHIMAN”.THEN HOW CAN YOU EXPRESS THIS FEEL.THERE IS LOT OF WORD WHICH HAVE NO ENGLISH.
“ABHIMAN”=ANGER WITH LOVE.
(SORRY IF I HURT ANYONE).
Part-9
An:I think so ridzi. Kam se kam pata to chale ke uss ke dil me kya hai.jo use paresan kar rahe ho,
Ri:par di mujhe bahaut darr lag raha hai.
An:koi dar nehi rdzi, woh tumhe kuch nehi kahega.
Ri:shayed.
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riddhima and anjali step down from the car.
Ri: di main yehi armaan ka intejar karta hoon.
An: woh abhi taka aye nehi.
Ri:nehi di, maine tisha se puchhi thi.woh log abhi tak nehi pauche.
An: thik hai tu yehi pe un logon ki intejar kar.main andaar jati hoon. agar dr kirti aajati he to main tujhe inform kar dungi.
Ri: ok di.
An:all the best. (kissed on her chick).
Ri: thank you di.
anjali left the place. Soon armaan tisha came there.riddhima tried to talk with him.but armaan
just step down car and went inside.he even didn’t look at her. She felt little bad.
Ti: riddhima ,tum khadi kyun ho? Andar nehi jan kya? Chalo.
riddhima didn’t give her any answer.tisha left the place.riddhima’s cell start ringing, she came
out of that , pick up the phone.
Ri:haan di.
An:jaldi aaja, dr kirti aane wali he. Armaan se baat hui ke nehi,
Ri: woh di…..
An: pehle tu aaja phir sunenge.
She cut the phone. Riddhima also entered into the hospital.in nurse station all were present in
their. Dr kirti assigned them duty. armaan and riddhima has to work together in general ward. All were leaving the place. anjali was talking with riddhima.
An: kya kaha armaan ne.
Ri: kuch nehi.
An:kuch nehi matlab.
Ri:usse baat nehi ho payi di, main use kuch puchta usse pehle hi woh wahase nikal gaya.
An:khair koi baat nehi, aab tum dono ki duty to saath me hai na, tabbaat kar lena.
Ri: ok di.
the two left for their duty.in general ward riddhima reached their after armaan. Armaan was
already started to check the patient.riddhima also started too. after a while riddhima came in
front of armaan.
Ri:armaan.
Ar:haan raddhima bolo.
Ri: armaan woh tumhe……………..(before she complete)
Ar: tumne inhe ye medicine prescribe kia tha.(showing her he chart)
Ri:haan.
Ar:mujhe lagta hai ki ye medicine change karne ki jarurat hai.
Ri:kyun?
Ar: inki tabiyat aab pehle se better hai, agar abhi bhi ye itne powerful tablet lenge to shayed
halat bigad bi sakti hai.
Ri:mujhe lagta hai hume inki report aane tak intejar karna chahiye.
Ar:inki test karwayi thi tumne,
Ri:haan.report aane hi wali hai.
Ar:thik hai.
Ri:armaan mujhe tumse kuch baat kaarni hai. woh armaan…………..
Ar: main inki report le aata hoon lab se.
he left.riddhima this time can’t talk with him. after sometime armaan back with the report.they
discuss about that.
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after finishing their duty all are present in the cafeteria.they are chatting with each other.
At: children ward me duty karna bahaut mushkil hai.
Ra: kyun? Bachche to bahaut achche hote hai.
An: bagwan ke roop hote hai.
At:bagwan nehi saitan ka roop hote hai.
Mu:yeh tu kya keh raha hai?
At:thik hi keh raha hoon.tujhe pata hai unhone mere saath kya kia?
Ti:kya kia tumhare saath?
At:bachcheo ko pehle dawai lene ke liye bola to sab ne inkar kar di. Uske baat sab bachche
milke mujhe chro taraf se gher liye, uske baat sab milke mere kapde khicna suru kar dia. Ek
bachche ne to mere baal bhi kichna suru kar dia.dekhona un bachcho ne mera kya haal kar dia.
All look at him. he was looking like that he just came from a war.his pant was a little torn.
An:atul tumhare pant kya hua?
At:bachco ne jab pant khichete tab shayed ye hua haga.
Ti: sukar hai tum hara pant sirf itna phata hai, agar who tumhare pant pura phar deta to kya hota.
Mu: kya hota, yeh full pant ghum raha hai, tab half me ghumte.( laugh)
all laugh that.
at: (little upset).main tum logon ko aapne problem ke bareme bata raha hoon aur tum log mere
hi majak bana rahe hoon. ahar armaan hota toh aise kabhi nehi karta.
Ra: haan yaar, par woh kaha?
An:pata nehi.
Mu: armaan thoda ajeeb behave karta hey.
An:haan, humesha kuch khoyi khoyi se rehte hai.
Ra: college me bhi woh kabhi kabhi aise behave karta tha.aur phir kuch dino baad aapne aap
thik ho jata tha.
Mu:tum ne kabhi puchchha nehi woh aisa kyun karta hai.
Ra:bahaut koshis ki par woh kuch nehi bata tha.
An: shayed tisha ko pata hogi ke woh aisa kyun karta hai?
Ti: nehi yaar, mujhe bhi nehi pata. Maine bhi bahaut koshis ki par who kuch nehi bolta.
Jab bhi usse puchti who kuch na kuch bolke baat ko tal deta tha,aur jab tal nehi pata tha tab
kehta mujhe is bade me kucj nehi bolna. Bahaut jiddi kai woh ek bar na keh dia to woh kabhi
haan nehi hota hai.
in that time riddhima came their.
Ri: tuk logon ne armaan ko kahi dekha.
Ti:nehi. kyun?
Ri:bas aise hi. (she turned to leave).
An:kaha ja rahi hai.? coffee to pi ke ja.
Ri:nehi di mujhe thoda kam hai. main baad me milti hoon tum logon se.
She left the cafeteria. Searching for armaan in the whole saanjeevni .she could not find him.she asked a nurse about armaan.
Ri:nurse, aap armaan ko kahi dekha hai.
Nu:jee haan,
Ri:kahan pe.
Nu:kuch der pehle unhe terrace ki taraf jate hhue dekha tha.
Ri: achcha thik hai. she rushed towards the terrace.she found him there sitting in a bench.he
was looking at the sky.from far riddhima saw him.she came near him. sit beside him.armaan
did not realize that someone has sit beside him.riddhima kept her hand on his shoulder.
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In night after taking the dinner riddhima came intp her room. she changed her cloth into night
dress. She came near the window and sat there.anjali came out of the wash room.she saw that
riddhima was sitting their. She came their.
An: kya hua ridzi?
Ri:kuch nehi di.
An:armaan se baat hui.
Ri:nehi di.nehi ho payi usse baat.main usse baat karne ke liye hi tab gayi thi, par baat nehi ho
kar saki.
An:kyun?
Ri:kaise ho pati di, armaan sadi hospital me nehi thi.ek nurse ne kahan ke woh terrace par
hai.main daur kar terrace par gayi. waha woh ek bench par betha tha.main uski pas gayi.woh
mujhe notice hi nehi ki.tab maine uske kandhe par haat rakhi thi.phir bhi who meri tadaf nehi
dekha.phir maine usse pukara ,
Ri:armaan armaan(slowly)
woh meri tadaf mura.jab maine uski sakal dekhi mujhe lagai nehi ke yeh armaan he.uski akhon
me sunapan tha.ek blank dristi lekar who meri tadaf dekh rahi thi.woh chehra dekh kar mujhme
himmat hi nehi thi usse kuch puchne ki.thodi der baad woh phir se asmaan ki tadaf dekh raha
tha. phir me wahase chali aayi.
An:koi baat nehi ridzi, kal phir se try karna.(she look to the sky).
Tune to kaha tha ke armaan asmaan ke tadaf dekh raha tha.par asmaan me to aaaj dekh ne ke
layek kuch bhi nehi hai.
Ri:haan di, woh yehi asmaan ki tadaf dekh raha tha, jis me na aaaj koi tar hey aur na chand.aisa
lag raha hai jaise armaan ke saath saath ye asmaan bhi uske dukh me dub gaye hai.
An:strange!
Ri: I know.
An:chal abhi sochna band kar aur so ja.kal subah duty pe bhi to jana hai.
Ri:haan di, agar late hogaye to dr kirti mujhe phir se double duties de degi.
An:good night (kissed riddhima’s check).
Ri:good night di.(hug her)
next morning in saanjeevni riddhima again tried to talk with armaan.till the lunch break she
PART-10
next morning in saanjeevni riddhima again tried to talk with armaan.till the lunch break she
failed.after that she again tried but this time she did not find armaan.she searched for armaan.
while passing the fire escape she look through there. She found that armaan was their.he was
their and talking with himself.
Ar: kyun humesha mee saath hi aisa hota hai. jab bhi mere jindegi me kuch achcha hota hai tab
ye yaadien mere sab kuch bigad deta hai. kyun? He bent down, visualizing something in his
mind.
(a boy of 7 years was lying in a bed.his right leg was plastered fully.a pillow was supporting his
broken leg.he has an earthen toy in his hand.a figure of a woman appeared.after that a man
Wo:kya hoga iska.abhi pair gaya, baad me haat bhi jayega. Agar pair thik nehi hui to zindegi
bhar langde ban kar padi rahega.tab ise kaun dekhega.
Ma: main to yeh soch raha hoon ke abhi isse kaun dekhega.tum to tumhari badi beti ke saath
jaogi.tab isse kaun dekhega.
Wo:pata nehi he mujhe,aur achcha nehi lagta mujhe ek to pehle se hi itni musibaat thi upar se
yeh aur ek musibaat. She look towards the boy with an angry face.the boy then lower down his
face.)
same time riddhima touch armaan.armaan screamed with a jerk
Ar:nehi mujhe kahinehi jana. Maa muhje………..
he found that it was riddhima. She was little scared that time.armaan took some breath rapidly
came into reality.he saw that riddhima was their , she was afraid ,for armaan behavior she
forget to blink.armaan broke the silence.
Ar: riddhima, riddhima,
she did not reply.armaan again call her.
Ar:riddhima,riddhimaaaaa.
Ri:haan, haan bolo armaan.
Ar:riddhima woh I am soory.mujhe maaf kardo.
Ri:its ok armaan.bas thodi dar gayi thi.
Ar:mujhe tumhe darane ka koi irada nehi tha. its just happen.main khudme nehi tha. mujhe
laga ke ………khair chodo. I am really sorry.
Ri:koi bat nehi armaan. armaan main tumse kuch kehna chati hoon.
Ar:haan bolo.
Ri:armaan tumhe kya hua hai? tum har pal aise udas kyun rehte ho?
Ar:nehi kuch nehi hua mujhe.
Ri:kuch to hua jo tum hum sabse chupa rahe ho.
Ar:nehi riddhima aesi koi baat nehi hai.
Ri:kuch tu hua hai, jo tum kisi ko nehi batana chahte ho.kisi ko na bato thik hai. kam se kam
mujhe to bata sakte ho. (she said that all in that tone ,she has some right on him).
Ar:(glared at her).
Ri : (understanding what she had told). mera matlab he ke tum mujhe trust kar sakte ho.
Ar: (smiled slightly) main janta hoon.
Ri:to phir batao ke tumhe kya hua?
Ar: (release a deep breath)har sawal ka jawab nehi hota riddhima.
Ri:(little irritated) hota hai armaan.agar tum bata nehi chahte hoon to mat batao.
she stood up for leave. Crossed some stairs. Turn back and look at him. armaan also raised face
towards her.
Ri:agar kabhi tumhe ye lage ke tum mujhe bata sakte ho to jarur batana.
Ar: hmm, he nodded.
riddhima left the place. armaan was still their.lost in his own thought.
Ar:tumne thik kaha riddhima , har sawal ka jawab hota hai. magar har jawab bataya nehi jata.
kuch jawab na mile to hi behtar rehta hai. (saying that he also left the place).
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In canteen without armaan and tisha all are present their.tisha was assisting dr kirti in a surgery.
An:ridzi tum kya logi?
Ri:ek coffee.
Mu:tujhe coffee bahaut pasand he hai na. jab bhi canteen aati hai ek coffee to piti hi hai.
Ri:haan mujhe coffee bahaut pasand hai.aur armaan ko bhi coffee pasand hai.
Ra:par woh hai kaha.
An:pata nehi, achcha ridzi tune usse baat ki.
Ri:haan di maine usse baat ki.
An:usne kuch kaha.
Ri:kuch khas nehi. but who bahuat dukhi hai. jab maine uske pass gaya tab woh kuch ajeeb
behave kar raha tha.
armaan came in the cafeteria.
Ar:(in a very much low tone) riddhima mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai
Ri:haan,
Ar:(little loud) mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai.
Ri:haan kaho?
Ar: who I am sorry. Mere behavior ke liye main bahaut sarminda hoon. mujhe maaf kar dena.
main aayenda se dhyan rakhunga ke aisa na karo. I am really sorry. Mujhe tumhe hurt karne ka
koi irada nehi tha.
Ri:bas hogaya, kitne bar sorry bologe armaan.its ok. mujhe bura nehi laga, anjaane me ho jata
hai kabhi kabhi. Aur haan tumne hi to kaha tha ke doston me no sorry no thank you.
Ar:haan phir………..
Ri:phir koi baat nehi.
Ar:ok.
Ri:coffee piyoge.
Ar:nehi mujhe kahi jana hai.
Ri:meri tadaf se
Ar: thik hai.(he cant refuse her).
Ra:yeh to batao tum dono ke bich kya hua ke jo sorry bol rahi ho.
Ri:kuch nehi rahul.
Ar:actually mere bajayse riddhima dar gayi thi.mujhe nehi pata tha ke woh mere pass kab aayi.
An:yeh baat hai.
Ri:haan di. Aur dekho yeh is karan mujse maafi mang raha hai.
Ar:mujhe achcha nehi lagta koi mere bajay se udas ho jaye.to maine usse sorry bol.i am sorry
riddhima.
Ri:phir nehi bolna.warna bahaut marungi.
Ar: tum kisi ko mar nehi sakti.
Ri:achcha kisne kaha.
Ar:maine.
Ri:marke dikhao.
Ar:dikhao.
An:armaan sambhal ke ye sach me mar degi.
Ar:nehi maregi.
but riddhima really punch on his hand. Its hurt him
Ar: (groaning) ohh. Itni jorse koi marta hai kya.
Ri:tum to keh rahe the ke main mar nehi sakta.
Ar: galyti hogayi ma. tum mar sakte ho.
Ri: bahaut jod se laga.
Ar:haan.
Ri:dikho (she was caressing his hand)
armaan look at her.he kept looking at her, forget to blink. Lost in her eyes.when she touch his
hand he feel like that all her pain has gone away. The thing which was making him upset from
someday also has gone out.she was asking him something but he did not reply.
Ri:armaan main tumse kuch puch rahi hoon.
She look at him, found him staring at her.she also lost in his blue eyes.they stay like that for a
while. a sound of something breaking make them came out of them.riddhima blushed a little
for her this behavior.
Mu:thik se kyun nehi pakda rahul. Tere galti ke bajayse ye tuut gaya.
Ra:maine kyu kia Yaar.mere pakad ne se pehle tune hi to chod dia.
Mu:mujhpe blame maat daalo.tumne toda to iski bharpay bhi tumhi karoge.
Ra:thik hai main de dunga, tu shant ho ja meri ma.
An:how sweet. Dekha muskaan humari rahul ko teri kitni fikar hai.
PART-11
In night in armaan’s room. he was thinking something.
Ar: main aapne bajayse kisi aur ko dukh nehi pauchna chahta hoon. kal se main phir se normal
behave karne ki koshis karunga.us yaadon ku bhula neki koshis karunga. I know I will do
that.magar itna aasan bhi nehi hai. kam se kam usse avoid karunga.
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In locker room.
At: (entered) hi anjali kaisi hoon?
An: thik hai atul.tum kaise hoon.
At:main bhi thik hu.good morning riddhima.
Ri:good morning atul.
armaan entered with tisha.
Ar:hi everyone.good morning.
all stare at him.
Ar: kya?
atul came to him. hugging armaan.
At:mere bhai tu thik hogaya.
Ar: (hugging him back)haan muin thik hoon aur khus bhi kyunke nujhe tuj jaisa bhai mila hai.
An:armaan hum bhi hai.
Ar: mera matlab ke mujhe tum jaise dost jo milka hi. Main kitni din udas rehta bolo.
Mu:good to see you back.
Ar:thank you.
They all hug each other.finally a group hug was taken place. armaan took his lab coat from the
locker and turn to leave.tisha call him
Ti:bhai tum kuch bhul rahe ho,
Ar:kya, ?
Ti:id card.
Ar:thank you little tairo.
Ti:kabhi to yaad se le lia karo.
Ar:tu hai na, mujhe yaad dilane ke liye.
Ti:thank god ke tum abhi normal ho. Pata hai maine in dino tumhe bahaut miss kia.
Ar:sorry tairo.aapne bhai ko maaf kardo.
Ti:har bar tum yehi kehte ho.is bar aisa nehi chalega.
Ar:thik hai batao mera sajan kya hai.
Ti:umm…….. tum hum sabko ice-cream parlor leke jaoge.
Ar:thik hai.aab khus.
Ti:haan bahaut.
Ar:woh riddhima.
Ri:bolo armaan.
Ar:kal ke liye I am really sorry.
Ri:its ok armaan. jo hua so hua usse bhul jao.
Ar:phir bhi I am soory.
Ri:mar khane ka irada hey.
Ar:nehi. phir bhi I am sorry.(he run away)
Ri:armaan ruko tum…….(she also running behind him)
An:chalo guys warna late ho jayenge.
At:haan chalo.
they all leave.armaan was running to the nurse station. Riddhima was also running,as she wants
to beat armaan.armaan saw that dr kirti was present there. So he stop running near the nurse
station and came there by walk.riddhima was still running as she was far behind armaan but
she couldn’t saw dr kirti.
Ar:good morning dr kirti.
Ki:good morning dr armaan.
Ridhdhima came there, without noticing dr kirti he bit armaan. armaan did not make a
sound.riddhima did not understand why he was not reacting.
Ri:phir ek bar sorry bole to tumhara……….
Ki: dr riddhima aap shayed bhul gaye ke yeh ek hospital hai. aapke khelne kudne ki jagah nehi.
Ri:sorry dr kirti.
Ki:you better be. Aayinda se dhyan rakhiye ki aisa na ho.
Ri:ji dr kirti.
the others reach at that time.they all said good morning to dr kirti.
Ki: aaj aap logon ko pair me bat di jayegi.armaan , anjali I.c.u m, atul and riddhima children ward.
hearing the name of children ward atul screamed.
At: nehiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii.
Ki:kya baat he dr atul.
At:dr kirti please mujhe children ward me duty maat di jiye.
Ki:(sternly)dr atul yaha pe duty sirf me deta hoon.aap nehi.
At: (with a sad face) ya dr kirti.
Ki:muskaan and tisha general ward me duty karenge.
Kirti turn to leave but armaan call her.
Ar:dr kirti.
Ki:yes dr armaan.
Ar:dr kirti agar kisi patient ko koi dr treat nehi kar paye to dr badal na chahiye na.
Ki:haan.
Ar:agar kisi doctor kisi patient ko treat karne jaye aur patient usse bura bartab kare to bhi dr
change karne chahiye.
Ki:haan, par aap mujhe aisa kyun puch rahi hai?
Ar: woh dr kirti last time jab aapne dr atul kom children ward me duty di thi tab bachchone dr
atul ko thoda pita tha.aur bchchone atul ki kapde bhi phar di.
Ki:woh, to phir dr atul ko waha duty nehi di jayegi. thik hai aap aur dr atul duty interchange kar
li jiye.
Ar:thik hai dr kirti.
dr kirti left the nurse station.
At:armaan mere bhai tujhe pata tha ke bachcho ne mere halat kharab kar di.
Ar:of course champ.
At:is hospital me ek tu hi hai jo mere problem samajta hai.aur mere madat bhi karte he.
An:atul hum tumhare madat nehi karte?
At: nehi(shake his head).
Ri:kya???????????
Ar:haan agar madat karte to bechare ke liye kuch bolte.
At:haan kuch bolte.
Ra:bolke dr kirti se dant khani hai kya.
Ar:sun darpok kabhi kabhi himmat karke doston ki madat kar.
An:jis himmat ki kimat dr kirti hume double duties de kar chukai.
Ar:nehi, dekho maine himmat ki aur kimat me riddhima ke saath duty mil gayi.
all look at him.
ar:mera matlab hai, atul ko children ward me duty se bachaya.
Ri:khud ki tadif karna band karo. Aab yeh kucj jyada ho raha hai.aur chalo mere saath.
Ar:haan chalo.
riddhima thinking in mind, tab to dr kirti ki bajayse bach gaye the dr armaan . magar ab tumhe
kaun bachayega mujse. Ha ha ha ha ha. (she laughed)
Ar:tumne kuch kaha riddhima.
Ri:nehi kuch bhi to nehi.
Children ward
armaan and riddhima was doing their duty in there.riddhima was waiting for the moment.
Ar:hello bachche log kaise ho?
Ch: pehle khus the par aapko dekh kar dukhi hogaye.
Ar:kyun meri sakal itna bura hai.
Ch:nehi aap bahuat handsome ho.
Ar:achhcha. to phir dukhi kyun ho.
Ch:jab bhi aap log aate ho to hume injection dete ho.isse bahaut dard hota hai.
Ar:nehi hoga dard.thik hai hum aapko injection baad me lagayeng pehle aapka check up to karne do.
Ri:jara muh kholo,
Ch: di mujhe kya hua hai?
Ri: kuch nehi hua, thoda sa bukhar hai. agar aap yeh dawai pe loga to aapka bukhar chala jayega.
Ch:nehi mujhe nehi peni.
Ri:kyun?
Ch:dawai bahaut karwi hoti hai. mujhe dawai pena achcha nehi lagta.
Ri:agar aap dawai nehi piyunge to thik kaise hoge.
armaan came their and asked her
ar:kya baat he riddhima?
Ri:.yeh dawai nehi pe raha hai.
Ar:lao mujhe do.
Ch:nehi mujhe nehi pina.
Ar:thik hai mat piyo maine tumhe bola hai pineko.nehi na.
Ch:haan.
then armaan stood in the middle of the ward.
Ar:attention please. Yaha pe jo bachche aapne dawi pi lenge un bachchko unka man pasand chocolate de dia jayega. aur haan unki ek khwaish bhi puri kar di jayegi.
Ch:saach
Ar:haan, mainkabhi jhoot neho bolta.
Ri:armaan tum ye kya keh rahe ho. Yeh bachche tum hara bhi wahi hal kar dega jo inhone atul ke saath ki hai.
Ar:relax riddhima , kuch nehi hoga.bas tum mere ek chota sa kum kar do.
Ri:haan bolo.
Ar:in bachchio ke liye kuch chocolate la do.
Ri:nehi. bilkul bhi nehi, agar dr shasank ne dekh liya to
Ar:kuch nehi hoga.
Ri:thik hai main koshis karti hoon.
Ar:that’s like a good girl.(pinch on her chick)
riddhima turn to leave.
Ar:riddhima,
Ri: (she turn)
Ar: kal ke liye I am really sorry. Mujhe maaf kar do.
Ri:idhar aao.
armaan came near her. She holds her ear and twist it.armaan screamed.
Ar:ahhh…………….hhhhhh.
Ri:phir se sorry bologe to isse bhi bura hal kar dungi.
Ar:thik hai meri ma maaf kardo.(twist his ear more tightly)
Ar:ok, ok, nehi bolunga sorry aab to chod do.
Ri:that’s better.
After sometime riddhima came back with the chocolate.she saw that armaan was in the floor.
Ri:armaan, yeh tum kya kar rahe hoon.
Ar:kuch nehi bachcho ki wish puri kar rahi ho.
Ri:matlab.
Ar:inki wish thi hki main ghoda ban jao.to main ban gaya.
Ri;lagta hai tumhe bachcho se bahaut pyar hai.
Ar:nehi, mujhe bachcho se pyar nehi bahaut lagaw hai.we don’t belive but I hate kid specially crying baby.
Ri:kyun?
PART-12
Ar:nehi, mujhe bachcho se pyar nehi bahaut lagaw hai.we don’t belive but I hate kid specially crying baby.
Ri:kyun?
Ar:mujhe rona dhona achcha nehi lagta.aur bachche kapdo me susu kar deti hai yaar.
Err..r.
Ri:waise tum khud bhi kisi bachcho se kam nehi ho.
Ar:KYA!!!!!!!!!!!
Ri: (laughing )haan .
Ri:bachcho yeh lo aap logon ki chocolate.all kid ran towards her.they all collect their chocolate. Armaan also came their.
Ar:mujhe bhi ek milega?
Ri:haan kyun nehi. yeh sab bachcho ke liye hi to hai.
Ar:main yeh aapne liye nehi kisi aur ke liye le raha hoon.saying that he left the children.
Riddhima looked at his going figure.
In cafeteria
At: armaan tere duty kaisa tha.
Ar:bahaut achcha.
An:kisine tum hare pant nehi phare.
Ar:nehi anjali,koi nehi phada.
Mu:haan .sab tere charm se khus hogaye.
Ra: oh aab bachche bhi iske pichche pad gaye.
Ar: (feeling shy) aisi baat nehi hai yaar.
Ri:dekho armaan kaise Sharma raha he. ( Pinching his chik ).so sweet.
An:armaan tum sharmate hue aur bhi achche lagte ho.
Ti:arre tum logon ne abhi iska sharmana dekha kaha hai.iski sharmane ki ek kahani batao.
Ra:kaun sa?
Ti:arre woh kamini wali.
Ar:tisha nehi bilkkul bhi nehi.
Ri:haan yaar batao.
Ar:riddhima nehi yeh mat suno,
Mu:tu chup reh , tisha batao.
An:haan bato. Its sound interesting.
Ar:gayamain abhi. OH no!!!!!!!!!! (covering his face).
Ti:jab hum college me the ye tab ki baat hai.yeh banda hai to bahuat handsome.un dino main ,
armaan aur rahul hum tino dost the.college ki ssari khubsurat ladkai armaan ke pichche marte
the. Isse dekh kar bahaut sare ladke jalte the.rahul bhi kabhi kabhi.
Ra:mujhe bich mat ghasit yaar.
Ti:thik hai .thik hai. jab armaan college aate the to ladkia inke liye ful lekar khade rehte
the.humare ek mmiss thi jise iski gal khichna bahaut achcha lagta tha. aur ye miss ke jane baad
aapna muh dhone nikal jate the. Ladkia inke liye gana te the aur yeh hai ke kuch kaan pe dete
nehi.usse sirf ek hi bhasa samaj aata woh hai book ki.ladkia mujhe kabhi kabhi lunch bhi kar
wati thi sirf iss liye ke main armaan ko manao uske saath date pe jane ke liye.aah!!!!!!!!!! kitne
achche the woh din (thinking about the food).
Mu:aage bata.
Ti:haan, aur phir humare collrge me aayi kamini.
Ra:jot hi college ki sabse khubsurat ladki.jispe sare ladke marte the.yaha tak ki main bhi. Magar
usse pasand tha yeh armaan.armaan ka dost hone nater main usne mere saath friendship
ki.kahin bar free movie bhi dikhai.woh armaan ko bahaut pyar karta tha.armaan ne hum sabke
force me aake friendship to karli magar kabhi usse pucha tak nehi ke kaise ho. Bechari is intejar
me kuch mahine gujar di.phir ek din who armaan ko akele milne ke liye bulaya.lekin armaan nehi aaya.
Ti:phir kamini ne bahaut royi.usne kaha agar main armaan ko aapne pyar pe majboor kar
dunga.usse mere pass aana hi hoga.27 tarikh ko woh mere ho kar hi rahega.uss din armaan
college aaya nehi tha. kamini ne mujhe bola kisi bhi tarah armaan ko 27 tarikh sam sat bajhe
juhu beach leke aana.uss waqt mujhe bhi pata nehi thaki uske dimag me kya chal rahi thi.
Ra:phir ye mere paas aaya aur kaha ke usse please juhu beach leke jaa.maine armaan ko bahaut
samjhaya, who jane ke lieu tayar nehi tha.maine kaha sirf mil to le.bahaut mehnat ke baad ye
janab raji hue.tisha tujhe yaad hai armaan uss din kya pehna tha.
Ti:of course main usse kaise bhul sakti hoo. Maine hai ti usse dress select kar ke diye the.woh
blue denim , lemon t- shirt aur white knitted jacket dala tha.
Mu:aagey batao, kya hua phir.
Ra:armaan waha paucha mere saath.humare saath sare college bhi waha thi.armaan ko is baat ka pata nehi tha.
End of part 12.
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MASTER.
Friday, August 28
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Chapter 9: The Legacy Of Divine Love
The Legacy of Divine Love
FF Name: The Legacy Of Divine Love
Pattern: Book (In Chapters)
FF Writer: Angel
Chapter:9- Nayye Interns Ke Nayye Rang-2!!
Recap: Introduction of new interns Ruslaan, Tanya, Aryan, Varun, Rhea/aka/Roshni and Anushka Gujraal. NOW READ AHEAD,PLEASE.
Scene : 1 : Outside Sanjeevani:
A girl, dressed in a stylish, green, three-quartered sleeved top, and blue jeans with high heels and matching earrings was standing right at the entrance of Sanjeevani! Many colourful bands were tied on her right wrist while on her left wrist, was an elegant black and silver watch cum bracelet. She had her eyes closed and was praying, “Please, meri help kijiye ga. Aaj mera Sanjeevani mein pehla din hai, kucch galat mat ho! Warna pehle hi din, mujhay nikal diya jaaye ga Sanjeevani se! Mujhay Mummy-Papa ka sapna poora karna hoga. Woh chahtay hain ke mein doctor banoon toh mein doctor hi banoon gi chahay mujhay uss ke liye apne dream ko sacrifice hi kyun na karna ho! Mein aik successful doctor ban ke dikhaoongi! Mein unn ka sapna poora karoon gi.”
Scene : 2 : Flashback:
Morning; Desai Residence:
She was getting ready when she heard a slight knock on the door of her room. She shouted, “Abhi aayi! Ek minute bas!”
She went and opened the door, and found her Bhai-Bhabhi standing at the door looking at her!
“Good Morning Baccha!” Her Bhabhi greeted her!
“Good Morning Bhabhi! Hi Bhaiyya!” She hugged her Bhabhi and Bhai.
“Hmmm….so somebody’s grown up now,” Her Bhai said smiling.
“Ji Bhaiyya!”
“Toh, aaj humara chota sa baccha apni internship shuroo karne jaa raha hai na! Best of Luck!” Her Bhabhi said smiling at her and her Bhai added, “Dekho Tumhien kaun wish karne aaya hai!” She was surprised. There was no one around! Her Bhai-Bhabhi gradually stepped aside, revealing two cute kids smiling at her. Her lips broke into a smile looking at them….
“Besshhtt ooff lucckk!” the younger child spoke.
“Aww….Thank You Sameer!” She replied smiling cutely at them.
“Ohho, Sammy, Tumhien kitni dafa samjhana parega ke it’s “Best Of Luck!”, tum usse sing-a-song type kyun kar detay ho?” Sameer’s elder sister, Divya, said fully irritated.
“Arre, Princess! Sameer tum se Chota hai na….jab tum chotti thi na, tab tum bhi aise hi bolti thi!”
“Par….”
“Princess, Champ! Tum dono ladne aaye ho ya fir wish karne?” Her brother scolded his kids!
“Sorry! Best Of Luck!” Both of them said grinning from ear to ear.
“Thanks….,” she said as she bent down placing her cheeks in front of them. They both kissed her on her cheeks and went with their parents to get ready for school.
She waved them bye and resumed getting ready when she heard another knock on the door.
She went and opened it, and her lips broke into yet another a smile looking at the person in front of her.
“Di!” she said smiling, but her sister didn’t return the smile, and in a serious tone, continued to say, “Priya….tum yeh sab kyun kar rahi ho? Jab Tumhien doctor nahin ban na toh tum kyun ban rahi ho? Tumhien toh desig….,” She was cut-short by Priya who said, “Di, aap jaantay ho na ke meray liye Mummy-Papa aur aap logon se, apni family, se important kucch nahin hai. Aur jab woh chahtay hain ke mein Doctor banoon toh mein doctor hi banoongi! I know I won’t regret this later.” She said, smiling slightly, to reassure her sister that she was OKAY with her decision.
“Par Priya….”
“Di….meine decide kar liya hai. And I am happy with my decision. So, Chill my Sweetoo!!” She smiled reassuringly and when she saw no return smile from her sister, added, “Mia di! Cummon na! Mein bilkul theek hoon.” Her sister lightly patted and ruffled her hair, and giving her a weak smile, left the room.
She closed the door, locked it and leaned against it, as a lone tear made its way to her eyes. She cleaned it hurriedly and told her self convincingly, “Mein theek hoon! I’ll do whatever makes my parents and family happy and proud of me….”
She hurried downstairs and her parents and the rest of her family wished her luck and she came to Sanjeevani….
Flashback Ends….!!
“Yeh mera apna decision hai. And I won’t step back from it now.”
Another tear made its way to her eyes, and even before she could clean it, her eyes fell on her wrist watch which indicated 9:55 o’clock, making her mouth wide open as she rushed inside in fear of getting late on her very first day.
Nurse Station:
Aryan and Rhea were standing on the Nurse Station, as it was already 9:55 am. They both were standing at opposite ends. Suddenly, a girl and a boy came running inside Sanjeevani, causing Aryan and Rhea to look at them. The two of them had not noticed Aryan and Rhea and were talking, and at the same time laughing uncontrollably.
“Ruslaan, jhoot mat bolo *hehehehe giggles*! Mein tum se jeet gayyi.”
“Tanya, jhooti! Cheater! Cheating kar ke pehle kaun bhaaga tha?”
“Ruslaan, dekho, ab mein KKHH [Kucch Kucch Hota Hai] ki “Cheater-Teacher” fight nahin shuroo karna chahti! Tum haar gayye ho, toh sacchai ko accept kar lo Ruslaan,” she said making a fake, sympathetic face.
“Hi!” Their conversation was broken by Rhea and Aryan who gleefully said “Hi!”..!!
Ruslaan looked at Aryan and shook hands with him, “Hi! I am Ruslaan!”
“Hi….I am Tanya….new intern.”
“Hi :) Rhea here, mein bhi new intern hoon!”
“Kool!”
“Aur mein Aryan….Aryan Chopra!”
They were busy exchanging pleasantries when Anushka entered Sanjeevani closely followed by Varun. And later Priya!
They were in middle of their introductions when Anjali came over there.
“Good Morning Interns!”
“Good Morning Ma’am!”
“So, aaj aap sab ka Sanjeevani mein pehla din hai, so Welcome to Sanjeevani! Aaj aap ki internship ka…..”
“Sorry Ma’am! I am late!”
Everybody looked at the intruding voice and saw a young boy clad in a fashionable outfit, running, rushing in, coming in and panting. His hands were full of wrist bands. Anjali glared at him demanding for an answer. He looked down and said, “Woh Sorry Ma’am. Car ka wheel puncture ho gayya Tha.”
“Oh….I see….toh aap ki car ka wheel puncture ho gayya tha,” Anjali said ironically and received a nod back in reply which further enraged her. “Aap apne aap ko samajhtay kya hain? Koi hero? Ya fir/phir kahin ke president? Aap kya kahin ke hero hain? I Mean, in case mujhay pata na ho, ya phir/fir yeh meri information mein na ho!”
“Umm, sorry for the correction ma’am [Anjali glares at him.] [looking straight in her eyes.] Hero samajhta nahin hoon, Hero HOON!” He said, with confidence dripping from his voice.
Everybody’s jaw dropped to their knees, looking at his confidence and how stupid he had been to answer that so that so. Rohit, on the other hand, was smiling from ear-to-ear, and thinking in his heart, “Hunh! Bolti band kar di! Bari chabar chabar kiye jaa rahi thi! Ab kya muh pe lock lag gayya? Aayi bari mujhay kucch kehnay waali!”
Anjali shot him a look, and at once, Rohit was petrified with the dangerous look that she had just gifted him with, and started looking downwards. Anjali looked at him with daggers in her eyes, and continually every now and then, eyeing him, started saying, “Aap se mein baad mein baat karoongi! Please come and join everyone here.” He did as she said and Anjali, after shooting another horrendous glare at him, started off again, “Toh jaise ke mein keh rahi thi….Aaj aap ki internship ka pehla din hai. I’d like to be clear about a few things, Firstly, I hate late-comers. [shooting the boy a look yet again!]. Secondly, many people have a doubt ke internship is very tough, yes, indeed it is, par Sanjeevani mein we all are like friends, families, guides….and so on and so on….!!!! Par, I am very strict about work. Work comes first before everything. Mujhay result chahiye hai, aap ki mehnat ka aur lagan ka. Mujhay aap logon se 100 % devotion towards your work ki guarantee chahiye. Mein chahti hoon ke aap log apna kaam apne dill-o-jaan se Karien. Sanjeevani mein aap ek kaidi nahin hain, Aap sab aise insaan hain jo baaqi logon ki jaan bachaaiyen ge! Jab patients doctors ke paas aate hain, toh woh aik umeed ke saath aate hain, ke unka Doctor unki madad kare ga. Aur mein chahti hoon ke aap sab unn ki umeedon par poora uttrien, aur yeh bhi jaanti hoon ke aap unn sab ke umeedon par poora uttrien GE, aur mera sar garv se aur uncha kar dien ge naa ke sharam se meri naak katwaayien ge aur sar neechay jhukaayienge. Mein hoon Dr. Anjali Gupta, aur aaj se mein aap sab ki briefing kiya karoongi! Aap sab apni problems meray saath share kar saktay hain, and trust me, I will try my level best to help you people. Mein yeh nahin kehti ke no masti, OR no fun….You can have fun aur aap masti bhi kar saktay hain, par only if once your work is done and finished. Jab mein aik intern thi, [everybody listening to her attentively], toh hum ne bhi bohot mazay kiye thay, par hum sab ke liye, sab se ziada important cheez thi, our work. Hum sab mein aik lagan thi, jeetnay ki, aik doosre se aage barhnay ki, aik accha doctor banne ki, kissi ki madad karne ke layik honay ki, in short, hum mein lagan thi, apne kaam ko excel karne ki. Aur ussi lagan ko yahan Sanjeevani mein appreciate kiya jaata hai, aur sab se ziada mehnat aur lagan se kaam karne waale ko “Intern Of The Month” ka award diya jaata hai. It’s like a motivation, to win, to struggle, to strive to be the best, to excel your work. Issi liye, Working hours mein, mein aap ki senior hongi aur aap meray interns, par working hours ke baad, we can be a group of good friends, but mind you, only once after your work is finished. Mind You! Working hours, mein aur yahan ke baaqi sab senior doctors bhi, yahi chahien ge, aur aap sab se we all will expect just one thing, Working Hours mein sirf work, and no extra masti and fun. Uss masti aur fun ke liye aap logon ko bohot waqt diya jaaye ga. You’ll be having breaks, and at the end of the day, aap log free ho kay, ya jab bhi aap log free hon, from your work for the day, aap log mazay kar saktay hain. After all, bohot saara maza, aur fun aur masti ke saath, along with hard work and devotion se, aap sab ka safar yahan Sanjeevani mein suhana rahay ga, aur aap ki internship kab khatam ho jaaye gi, aap sab ko pata bhi nahin chalega. All the hard work that you do now, will one day for sure, pay off the double. Abhi/Now, Dr. Shashank Gupta, the dean of Sanjeevani [Aryan’s eyes widened with fear!], would like to talk to all of you and welcome you people, toh chalien ab hum unn ke cabin mein chaltay hain. I hope baaqi ke senior doctors bhi wahan par aap hi ka wait kar rahay hongay. Chalien? [Everyone nodded]. Toh Chaliye..!!
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Scene : 3: Shashank’s Cabin:
They all went to Shashank’s cabin, everybody [The Old Star Intern Gang!] was comfortably seated in Shashank’s cabin on the sofas present in the room itself, while Shashank was sitting on his chair/seat. Armaan and Riddhima were sitting away from each other and were still hiding the truth of their being together from Shashank.
Armaan looked at Riddhima, and winked and Riddhima at once, blushed and said through eyes, “Armaan! Bas bhi karo na yaar! Papa ne dekh liya na toh pata chalega!”
Armaan replied, with his eyes, “Mein kya koi unn se, Matlab The-Great-Dr.-Shashank-Gupta-Jee-URF-/-AKA-Sasur-Jee-! Se darrta hoon kya? Woh kya kar lien ge mera? Hunh?”
“Dr. Armaan,” Shashank said, making Armaan terrified and scared, and scaring the hell out of him. Riddhima started to laugh silently looking at his scared face, and signaled, “Dekha? Kaun darra? Ab kyun darray tum Armaan?” she said through eyes mockingly and added with a wink, “Darr gayye kya?”
Armaan, making a disgusted and ridiculed [ridiculous] face said with eyes, “Very Funny!” and again looked and turned to Shashank after giving Riddhima a wink, and said, stammering and faltering, “Je….Jee….J….Ji S…Sii….Sir? Ji Sir?”
“Aap aik/ek dum se itna darr kyun gayye hain? Meine kucch kaha kya? Meine toh kucch nahin kaha! Aap ne kucch suna kya? Ya kucch dekha?”
All the rest of the Senior Doctors, were trying their level best to hide their laughter, and maintain their silent and hidden smiles and laughter.
Armaan cleaned the drops of sweat that had started to appear on his face and forehead, and said, “Aap ko kucch kaam tha Sir? [looking down]”
“Ji, bas yahi kehna tha, ke aap AC ke thermostat thora kum kar dien, par aap ko dekh ke lagta hai, ke aap ko kaafi garmi lag rahi hai, so, let it be!”
Everybody except for Armaan and Riddhima, started laughing uncontrollably and their laughter was so infectious, that Armaan and Riddhima both had to give in to their laughing and smiling uncontrollably.
Shashank stole a glance and looked at Riddhima, smiling and laughing to her fullest. He wondered what had happened to her. I mean, she was so sad just a day ago, and now, today, she was laughing like this. Riddhima, caught him red-handed and at once stopped smiling and laughing, Shashank also hurriedly at once, started looking at a different direction pretending to have not seen her yet. He was trying to laugh and smile like before, apparently, but continuously there was a fight, no, rather, instead, indeed a battle, going on in his mind, between his heart and mind/brain. Shashank knew that something fishy was going on in there. But he decided to leave it for some other time. After this thing, he made sure to steal a glance at either Riddhima when she wasn’t looking or at Armaan when he wasn’t looking.
Golmaal hai, bhai, sab Golmaal hai!
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Anjali knocked at the door, and Shashank asked her to come in. She entered with the rest of interns following her closely by.
“Aahh! The New Interns, hum sab aap ka hi wait kar rahay thay. Good Morning,”
“Good Morning, Sir!”
“Welcome to Sanjeevani!”
“Thank you Sir!”
Everybody was looking nervous, frightened, scared and terrified. Shashank giggled looking at their nervousness and spoke, “Don’t Worry! Hum aap ko yahan par maarien ge nahin!”
All the senior doctors shuffled a laugh while the new interns seemed a little relieved. Looking at their relaxed faces and expressions, Shashank continued, “Hmm….So, aaj aap sab ka pehla din hai Sanjeevani mein. Aaj se aap log train hongay to be good and affluent doctors. Let me make one thing very clear to all of you [suddenly seriously], mujhay sirf aur sirf aap ke kaam se Matlab hai. Mein aap logon ko apne aap ko over-burden karne ke liye nahin kahoonga, of course you can relax, even during your working hours, aap ko uss ke liye break miley gi, but while working, mein nahin chahta ke aap log apna saara dhyaan masti aur mazay mein laga dein, Kaam ke waqt sirf aur sirf kaam hi hona chahiye hai [Everybody nodded, listening carefully to him, Aryan’s head down!]. Aap logon ke mentors hongay jo aap sab ki madad Karien ge, aap sab ki help Karien ge, aap ko guide Karien ge [Ruslaan was listening very carefully to Shashank.], galtiyon par daantien ge [eyeing Aryan] aur jab bhi aap accha, koi bhi accha kaam Karien ge, toh aap ke saath aap ki khushi ko celebrate bhi Karien ge. Woh her kadam par aap ki madad Karien ge aur aap ko aik accha intern aur aik successful doctor bannay mein madad bhi Karien ge. I hope you have a good and fruitful time in Sanjeevani and enjoy every single moment that you spend here. Anyways, now I’d like all of you to introduce yourselves to us.”
Ruslaan who was standing first said, “Good Morning Everyone! I Am Doctor Ruslaan. And I’ll try my level best to fulfill your expectations and prove myself to be a good and a competent doctor. Meine apne medical ki parhai London ke famous medical hospital se ki hai.”
Taking cue, Tanya, who was standing right next to Ruslaan started, “Good Morning Everyone. I am Doctor Tanya Ali. Meine bhi apna medical London ke medical hospital se kiya hai Dr.Ruslaan ke saath. Mein apna kaam poori imaandari ke saath karoongi aur mein poori koshish karoongi ke aap sab ko mujh se koi complaint na ho. I’ll try to go to every extend to prove myself capable of being a good doctor.”
Rhea who was standing next to her, said, “[smiling] Good Morning All of you. Mein hoon, Rhea….Rhea Kapoor, meine apni studies New York se ki hain, aur mein apni taraf se poori mehnat karoongi yeh prove karne ke liye ke mein bhi aik acchi Doctor hoon!”
“Hey [Anjali glared]….I mean….Good Morning Doctors! Mein hoon [wid oodles of attitude] Rohit….Sanjeevani ka new intern and a future doctor.”
“Hello everyone! A very good morning to all of you, mein hoon Dr. Aryan Chopra! I’ll go to every extent/extend to prove myself as a compatible and competent doctor. Hope aap sab ko mujh se koi complains nahin hongi.”
“Good Morning! Mein hoon Doctor Varun. Mein poori koshish karoon ga ke aap sab ko mujh se koi bhi takleef na ho. Mein aap sab ko niraash nahin karoon ga aur apni poori lagan aur imaandaari se apna kaam karoonga aur aap sab ko Kabhi bhi complain karne ka chance nahin doonga.”
“Morning everyone. A very Good Morning to all of you. I am Dr. Priya and I’ll try my level best to be a good desig….I mean a good doctor!”
“Hi! This is Anushka! Anushka Gujraal. Meine apni medical ki parhaayi America se ki hai. I am sure you won’t regret your decision of calling me as an Intern in Sanjeevani!”
“Very well all of you, mujhay toh aap sab jaantay hi hain! Aap ko apne mentors OR Senior Doctors ka introduction baad mein mill jaaye ga. Abhi, you all are getting late. So, abhi you may all leave with Dr. Anjali for the briefing, with a promise, that you all will fulfill our expectations [Everyone smiled!]. Have a nice day ahead, Interns!” Shashank said proudly, as all of them left his cabin/office and the Senior Doctors too went to their cabins, leaving Shashank alone in the office.
Nurse Station:
Anjali first showed them the whole of the Sanjeevani - from the locker room to the fire escape, from the parking lot to the basketball court just near by - and then they went to the Nurse Station for the briefing.
“So Interns, aaj ke liye your duties would be as follows:
~Dr. Ruslaan and Dr. Tanya – General Ward 1
~Dr. Varun and Dr. Aryan – OPD
~Dr. Rhea – General Ward 2
~Dr. Anushkaa – Children’s Ward
~Dr. Priya – Aap pehle Dr. Raajeev aur Dr. Neha ko surgery mein assist Karien gi aur phir / fir you’ll resume your duties with Dr. Rhea in General Ward 2.
~Dr. Rohit – Path Lab
Aap sab ke pagers, lab coats aur stethoscopes aap ke Lockers mein rakhwa diye gayye hain Locker Room mein. Now, off to work! Disperse!”
All the eight new interns went to the Locker Room to get ready for their first day of internship.
Locker Room:
Tanya and Rhea entered the locker room first followed closely by Rohit and Ruslaan. Tanya was busy with her locker when she found a couple of arms….no actually, hands….cover her eyes. She rolled her eyes from beneath the hands and banged her elbow into the person’s, possessing the hands, stomach.
“Ouch!”
Without turning back, “Beta Ruslaan! Tujhay kitni dafaa kaha hai that panga with Tanya is not changa! [Dusting her hands with attitude..!! :P] Par tum kahan sudharne waalon mein se ho, hai na?”
Everybody’s mouth was wide open, how did she know it was him? They were keeping on wondering that only.
“Ouu….Tanya, that really hurts na yaar..!! Mein toh dekh raha tha ke tum mujhay pehchaan [*glare* from Tanya], okay fine, tum mujhay pehchaan sakti ho, par, I just wanted to reconfirm that ke kahin Tumhien woh white bhoot, actually, vampire [*glare* again, but who cares? At least Ruslaan doesn’t at the moment] Edward “Robert Pattinson” Cullen toh nahin Pasand aa gayya na? But Thank God..!! Tumhien mein yaad hoon, nahin toh *sigh* log pyaar mein dunya bhool jaatay hain [*sympathetically*] , toh hum kya cheez hain [*disgusted* look from Tanya]….[suddenly *cheerfully*] Par Shukar hai, Congratulations Miss. Tanya Ali ke aap, you’re 100 % not in love, warna humien kaun yaad rakhta? *sigh again* hayye….kismat!!”
When he turned back to look at Tanya, in came a swishing bag that hit him right on the face….
“Next Time, be careful, nahin toh….[a small pause while Ruslaan kept on rubbing his nose that had turned red because of with the force and intensity the bag was hit]….agli dafaa sandal lage gi muh pe. Tab samajh mein aaye ga. Aaya bara Edward “Robert Pattinson” Cullen kehnay waala.”
Priya was heard gasping when Ruslaan got the bag hit right straight on his face while Varun was heard sighing, and Anushkaa was seen with her mouth open, agape, while Rhea had her eyes closed, Rohit who was heard whistling earlier had stopped and his mouth and eyes were wide with horror while Aryan had nearly dropped his new “Touch-Screen” Mobile out of amazement.
Tanya now realized what she had just done, and the after effects of the forcefully hitting bag were very much vivid and evident on Ruslaan’s now very red nose. She suddenly dropped her handbag and looked at Ruslaan, and said, “Sorry, woh pata nahin kya hua tha ek dum se. Tumhien bohot dard ho raha hoga na? Bohot zor/jor ki lagi na Tumhien? Sorry, kaha na baba..!!”
Ruslaan smirked, and removed his hand from his nose, and looked at her face he wanted to tell her that he was okay, but, who can stop Ruslaan from his general nautanki stuff, hunh? No one actually, not even Ruslaan himself.
So, he again closed his eyes as if in pain, and started, “Auu!! Haan, Tanya. Dekho na kitna dard ho raha hai,”
“Bohot ziada dard ho raha hai kya?” a little change in voice.
“Hmmm….”
“Toh fikar kare meri jutti!!” she said rudely and harshly slamming her bag back in the locker-her locker.
Everybody was shocked looking at her varying shades, she continued, “Tumhien kya lagta hai ke tum apni nautanki kartay raho ge aur mujhay pata bhi nahin chalay ga? Huh..!! Beta Ruslaan Tumhien mein 22 years se jaanti hoon. Itna tum apne aap ko nahin jaantay hogay jitna mein Tumhien jaanti hoon, Aaya bara meray saamne nautanki karne waala!”
“Accha, Aunty Tanya! Mein bhi Tumhien 22 years se hi jaanta hoon. Agar tum mujhay jaanti ho mujh se ziada, toh mein bhi Tumhien tum se, actually sab se ziada jaanta hoon! No Big Deal!”
Both were pointing fingers at each other and the others were silently laughing at their silly banter!
“Accha, Accha Sorry Tanya, ziada over na ho?” Ruslaan said first, pulling back his finger that was pointing her.
Tanya was about to retort to his “over” comment and remark when Varun cut her short, “Arre, bas bhi kijiye na aap dono, hum bhi hain idhar, hum se bhi zara Kabhi kabhi baat kar liya Karien aap dono, hum bhi hai na raahon mein…. Waise, by the way, ji, mera naam hai Varun, aur aap humien pyaar se kucch bhi bula saktay hain, except for Varu, woh kya hai na, humaray parents, aur baray behan bhai, humein iss naam se bulatay hain,” he said as he blushed.
Rhea smiled at him and said, “Hey! Mein hoon Rhea, aur apne doston ke liye Roshni!”
“Phir/Fir to mein Tumhien definitely Rhea hi bulaoon gi, kyunki tum kahin se bhi abhi tak meri dost nahin ho,” Anushka replied rudely.
Rhea chose better not to answer her back.
“Hey! I’m Rohit,” Rohit said, extending his hand towards Priya, who was about to shake her hands with him, when he pulled his hand back.
Priya looked down with embarrassment taking over her face, and replied in a small voce, “Hey! I am Priya. Nice to meet you,” while Rohit smirked to himself.
If any single one was effected by this, it was definitely no one but Tanya, who looked at Rohit with daggers in her eyes, but hid it from him. She went up to him, smiling from ear-to-ear and looked at him and said, “Hey! I am Tanya! Would you like to be my friend??”
Rhea was shocked at this behaviour of hers and muttered under her breath, “Dikhnay mein toh kaafi sweet hai, phir/fir bhi pata nahin kyun, iss idiot ko apna friend banana chahti hai. Aur iss ke iss friend ko toh dekho, [she said eyeing Ruslaan], Kaise pagalon ki tarah hans raha hai aur smile kar raha hai. Banda apne friends ko iss Rohit jaise bhooton se baccha ke rakhta hai aur yeh hai ke, yeh toh ulta hans raha hai. Pata nahin what is so funny in it? Hunh! Apne aap ko uss ka dost kehta hai, aur who bhi khushi khushi usse dost samajhti bhi hai aur maan bhi leti hai. I Wonder what’s gotten into her?”
Tanya on the other hand extended her hand towards Rohit, who in heart was saying, “Wah Rohit! Dekh toh sahi kitni acchi ladki tujh se khud se aa ke haath milla rahi hai. Aur dost bhi bananay ko keh rahi hai. Not a bad chance! Let’s be her friend.”
“Tujhay toh mein abhi batati hoon! Bas dekhtay jaaiye aap Rohit jiiiii!!”
Rohit also extended his hand to shake it with hers, when at once she pulled her hand back. Everybody in the locker room burst out laughing, while those passing by were also heard shuffling a laughter while some of the passing by children couldn’t stop their uncontrollable laughter and some were even literally rolling on the floor with laughter. [ROFL.].
Rohit was way too embarrassed to say something. So, he angrily, still looking down, grabbed his stethoscope, lab coat and pager and rushed and hurried out of the locker room stomping his foot, and making his way to the Path Lab.
Priya walked over to the smiling Tanya who was dusting her hands with oodles of attitude and proud, and said, “Hey! Thanks!”
Tanya smiled reassuringly and comfortingly, and blinked her eyes and muttered a small, slow, silent and smoothing, “You’re Always Welcome..!!”
Anushka rolled her eyes and muttered, “Big Deal!”
Listening to this, Aryan, who had been watching this silent banter since long, decided that it was high time to interrupt, and make his presence known, so he went straight to Tanya and extending his hand said, “Hi! Mein hoon Aryan….Aryan Chopra….Naam toh….,”
“Nahin suna! Kabhi nahin suna!” Tanya said, cutting him short.
“Like your attitude,” Aryan said, winking his eyes.
“Everybody does, Tell me something I don’t know,” she snapped back.
“Apni bohot jamay/jammay gi. After all, Aryan Chopra hai hi beautiful girls ka Spider Man aur Super Man!”
“Watch out Mr. Spider Man aur Super Man! Webs khatam hotay ziada time nahin lagta,” Tanya cut him short and was in turn cut short by Ruslaan, who hi-fiving Priya and Rhea said, “For Example, Rohit on the latest!”
“Right! Bara hero banta tha!” Rhea said mockingly.
“Uh-Hun! How does he say that? [imitating him, in his voice and style.] “Uh-Hun! Correction! Banta hoon nahin, Hero HOON! You get that? Hoon! Mein hero Hoon!” Itni dafaa jo pehle baar, baar yeh bolta hai toh lagta hai ke khud ko hi confirm kar raha ho ke woh hero hai. Hero, my Foot!” Priya said making all of them, except for Anushka obviously, laugh and have get fits of laughter.
All of them were still chattering about everything but nothing, when they heard an announcement, “New Interns apni apni duties par report Karien, Dr. Kirti aur Dr. Anjali ke rounds 3 o’ clock shuroo ho jaayien ge.”
Everybody immediately stopped there blabbering and turned towards their respective lockers.
Everybody else didn’t get to talk too much in the locker room, except for the general hi-bye stuff as they didn’t want to get late on their first day of work. They just simply collected their stethoscopes, pagers and lab coats from their lockers and went to resume their respective duties, leaving their chats for their first ever break together! They didn’t need to introduce themselves to each other, they had had that bit in the Shashank’s cabin. They all left the locker room to start their duties for their first day of internship at Sanjeevani, Mumbai….
Precap: A lot of fun coming up……..
Note: And those of you missing Armaan and Riddhima….Sorry Guys! But these two parts were necessary, but, hopefully the next part will have Armaan - Riddhima in it..!!
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The Legacy Of Divine Love
Chapter - 8
Nayye Interns Ke Nayye Rang-1!!
Scene 1 : Sanjeevani :
Glad that you were excited to see the new interns. Even I was really excited to write about them :P. And double Yay ! Rajeev and Neha did join Sanjeevani, but who says ke ab AR ki fights honay ka koi chance hi nahin hai? ;)
Scene 2 : Someone's House :
Thanks a ton, for liking the scene in Tanya’s room and the lucky charm part.
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“Boys Will Be Boys !!”
EXACTLY..!! So true..!!
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Yes, Ruslaan sure is fond of photography. And you know what? I really liked this thought of yours that you just mentioned in the comment….:
"I-Love-Taking-Photos-Coz-People-May-Change-But-Photos-Never-Do!!"
I really loved it..!!
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Scene 3 : Nurse Station:
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Scene 4 : Locker Room:
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Scene 4 : Parking Lot:
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Chapter 4: Revenge of Brothers Grimm
Revenge of Brothers Grimm - Chapter 4
Chapter 4: Tracing the tangent of Cupid's arrow - Confusion in five senses
It was as if the entire universe was plotting against her; no, not for her demise but something more critical and expensive than death. Pride.
It was very simple actually. Every year their college hosted a festival of sorts where there were lots of frivolities which included producing a drama. Riddhima, the uncrowned queen of words, was naturally handed out the responsibility of scripting out a storyline and handing it over to their English professor who had to tone down the cynicism and many polysyllabic words. After her second year, she mocked her professor by presenting Green Eggs and Ham. Its not that she didn't like the book, but she seethed when her well thought out words were replaced with mundane ones. While the actors breathed a sigh of relief, Riddhima had snubbed everyone around her.
This year, however, her English professor made another professor tell her that she was partnered with Armaan for the script writing part. Yeah, he was that scared of Riddhima's bluntness. As anticipated, Riddhima boiled in cold anger and there was some guy asking people to clear the path for the wicked witch of the west. At least that's what Rahul told everyone.
Riddhima expected the first meeting to be full of energy and unnecessary egoistical arguments which usually resulted in whose word is bigger than the others game. But Armaan's game plan, if he had any, had thrown her off completely. First of all, when he saw her, he had given her a tentative dimpled smile. Riddhima had tried to smile back at him but it came out more of a grimace. During their entire conversation, Armaan was being very polite and understanding. It unnerved her immensely. It was slightly disturbing to know that she preferred a dysfunctional relationship over a normal one. During their meeting, Armaan didn't mock her or tease her but he gave his "constructive" criticism at certain parts. He scratched out "doleful existential complexity" and scrawled "life sucks" in its place. She was too stunned by his polite indifference to care for the red scribbles all over her script. When he handed over the updated script, she saw that the corrections were nothing major. With few choices of words, he had made the conversations in the play a little more casual. He smiled at her as if they were bosom buddies. She silently took her script back and stared at him.
"Is there something wrong Riddhima?"
"Yes. You." He frowned at her answer.
"What's wrong with me?"
"Why are you being nice?" He looked at her, eyes full of confusion.
"I am always nice", he scoffed.
"Not to me", she pointed.
"Oh, you are that type!" He exclaimed with teasing glint in his eyes. For him, it was impossible not to tease her.
"I am what type?" It was her turn to be confused.
"You know you are a kind of the masochistic type?" He waited a millisecond before he bared his teeth. It took less than that for her to lose her temper.
"Armaan..you'you'sicko", she spluttered. He made a mental note for future reference that sexual innuendos were definitely his trump card to win an argument. Of course, it was never in his agenda to make her mad but it was something unavoidable. It was simply natural to rile her up.
It was the same moment when Muskaan and Rahul dropped by.
Yes, they had hooked up'err'together.
(Author's Note: Since this is wholly Armaan and Riddhima's story, all other characters' development in their lives is completely ignored. This is a fairytale people, of course it is biased.)
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Muskaan dragged Riddhima out of the library talking mile a minute. Riddhima caught words like "Rahul", "ponies", "frappe", "Rahul", "Armaan", "crush", "Riddhima" and that's when she stopped her.
"Wait, what did you just say?" Riddhima asked her.
"Armaan has a crush on you." Riddhima stared at her and then burst out laughing.
"Muskaan, this is beyond your level of eccentricity." Muskaan simply shrugged.
"We think that Armaan has a tiny crush on you and we also think that he is doing all this teasing and taunting and scaring you in the corridors because he wants to spend more time with you." Muskaan drew out a sigh and looked as if she was ready to go to la-la land.
"Muskaan you make it sound like Armaan is some kind of an animal found in deep jungle of Amazons which is trying to attract its mate by dancing or acting weirdly", she said wryly. Muskaan rolled her eyes at Riddhima's scoff.
"Our understanding is really not that off the mark Riddhima. When he was talking to us at his friendship day party, his eyes was constantly searching for you."
"He would be gauging the damage that was happening to his living room Muskaan. His parents would have skinned him if they found that their precariously collected artifacts were found in pieces."
"We think otherwise." Muskaan said in a final tone which annoyed Riddhima further.
"Okay, stop." He stood directly in front of her. Muskaan looked at her questioningly.
"Your insistent use of "we", "our" and "us" is making me think if you are the couple's official spokesperson. Or is that some kind of monarchy in you which is making you use those words because what you are doing is bas***dization of personal pronouns and it has started to grate my nerves." Muskaan, bless her soul, laughed.
"Someone is jealous!" She sang. Riddhima gave a defeated sigh and huffed.
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At library, Rahul and Armaan were having a conversation. Armaan was quite surprised with Rahul's ability to hold out a conversation without sounding too obsessive or stalker-ish. Besides Muskaan, he was the happiest person in this world to know that Muskaan and Rahul were together. He didn't care for the reasoning or for the drama that endowed the outcome. During those times, even Riddhima steered out of Muskaan's path scared of the tears that would come for an innocent question or an angry rant for yet another innocent question. At least Rahul didn't like either Riddhima or him. He wasn't sure why he felt that Riddhima was single though. He was brought back to reality when he heard Rahul calling him repeatedly.
"Why do you tease Riddhima so much?"
"Because its fun", he said casually.
"Is that all it is to that or is it all you want to be at?"
"Why do you talk that way?"
"How do I talk?" Rahul asked.
"Like someone who is either confused or desperately want to confuse the other party." Rahul laughed at that.
"Definitely the latter." Armaan laughed at that.
"So'"
"Just spit it out."
"I think you have a crush on her."
"You think what?" Armaan looked flabbergasted.
"I think Mr.Cupid has shot an arrow with its tip dipped in love potion and has aimed straight to your heart." Armaan stared at Rahul, open mouthed.
"You really think so? With Riddhima in picture?" Armaan asked him.
"Nah. I think the arrow tip was dipped in poison and Cupid shot the arrow to your ass." Rahul laughed at his own joke. Armaan was contemplating on the authenticity of Rahul's accusation. Rahul stopped laughing when he found that Armaan had fallen into a silence.
"Its true, isn't it?" He asked Armaan. Armaan was looking out of window and was silent for a long time. When Rahul wished him good bye and left the table, he heard Armaan mumble a little "Yes".
Rahul grinned all the way back.
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A couple of weeks later, Armaan and Riddhima found themselves arguing about the script and Armaan's latest corrections. Armaan had taken loony-ness to a great level when he was being utterly polite and nice and everything she didn't associate Armaan with. Of course, soon enough, the other shoe had dropped and he had turned into the same smartass making snarky comments at her. She actually felt relieved when he had teased and taunted her in the hallway.
Half way into the argument, Armaan suddenly stopped speaking and looked over Riddhima's shoulder. A guy was clearing his throat trying to catch Riddhima's attention. Riddhima turned around to see a boy with his hand outstretched with a note in his hand. Riddhima raised her eyebrows.
"Vikram asked me to give it to you." He stammered. Riddhima shrugged and took the note from him.
Dahling Ridzzzy
I wantd 2 tel u 4m a loooong time. I luv u babezzz.
I lve u lots. I luv d way u talk, wlk n red. I wish u wer m9. I wld lve 2 tke u 2 romntic plce.
Urs,
XOXO
Vikram...
She glanced through the note and her eyebrows were automatically knitted. She looked up to see the guy still standing in front of her.
"Vikram asked me to wait and get a reply from you."
"Oh!" Her mouth turned to an O shape.
"Armaan, help me with this will you? I don't understand certain words." Armaan was little taken aback. Two and half minutes ago, she was ranting and raving at him for his obtuseness and here she was asking him to decipher a note. When he took a glance at the note, he corrected himself. It wasn't just a note. It was a love note. It was written in a language which Riddhima had failed to understand.
"What does m-nine mean?" She asked him. For a moment, he forgot about the animosity between them and marveled at the intelligent and ever curious mind. Of course anger would be unleashed once she understands every word in that note. Poor Vikram, he thought.
"I think it means 'mine'." He replied.
"What kind of logic it is?" She muttered. He didn't dare to answer.
"And what the heck "red" means?" She pointed the word on the note.
"I think he is trying to personify the color that your cheeks turn into when you are embarrassed or when you are angry. Or it could also mean that you look lovely in all shades of red." She raised her eyebrows challengingly. He sighed.
"It's a misspell. I think that idiot meant 'read' but one of vowels dropped dead or a birdie took it away before it made it to the paper."
"That's better. I hate endearments though."
"You do?" He asked surprised by her words.
"Yeah. I feel mollycoddled whenever Muskaan uses endearments mostly because she needs a favor from me." She smiled at an old memory.
"But not your parents?" She shook her head.
On that day in the library, reading silly little love note, Armaan understood Riddhima a little better than before.
"I should write a reply", she said looking out for loose paper. She scribbled quickly and Armaan peeked over her shoulder to get a glimpse of her writing and promptly burst out laughing. When she finished folding and giving it back to the boy who was waiting like a chamberlain, she burst out into giggles.
Dear Vikram,
WTF.
Regards,
Riddhima.
PS: Call me Riddzzzy or Babezz or something other than my name again, you will be only capable of adopting your children in future.
Of course, it was only matter of minutes when the peace that was surrounding them was shattered with their loud arguments and irrational words usage.
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(To be continued. It's not like I have a life anyway)
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