Part 2: Dostana

Dostana
by keddie

PART:2
Hey all..whts up? hope every1 is gudd..! Well I'd like to thank u all for ur lovely comments and support! I had been extremely busy due to my studies tht why i dint reply 2 ur comments! I'm very grateful to Modji who has given me a small corner in this blog..love u for that modji! And thank u guys for ur love ... i'm grateful to u all!
Now here is the 2nd part..hope u like it too..do comment !!

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SANJEEVANI

Standing on the gate of Sanjeevani Are two best friends....yes!They are Shilpa and sukriti.

Sh:Uff....Thank God time pe pohunch gaye!...chal...lets go in!
she went a few steps 4wd but suks dint move.seeing ths she turned to look at her.
Sh:kya hua?...chalo na!
Suk:You know wht Shilpa....em getting really very nervous...
Sh:Ufho!.....tumhara to hamasha se yehi problem rehta hai....arey baba...isme nervous hone wali koi baat nai....mujhe dekh men nervous horahi hoon kya?....agar tum confident nai hogi to ek achi doc nai ban paogi
But Sukriti wasnt convinced n whn Shilpa noticed this she grabbed her arm and started pulling her towards the door.They entered Sanjeevani n went to the nurse station.
Sh:Err...hi..hum..wo er..hamara yahan 1st day hai...aur..
Nurse:Oh...Hello ji Aap naye interns hona?
Sh:Han!
Nurse:Welcome ji welcome!eh...mera naam Lovely hai ji.
Sh:Oh...nice name Lovely ji.
Lov:Thank you ji...oh han 'name'...aap ke naam kya hain ji?
Suk:Mera naam Sukriti hai...er..SUKRITI KHANDPAL!
Sh:And m Shilpa Anand!
Lov:Oh...nice meeting u ji!
Suk:Er...koi aur intern nai hai kya?....i mean aya nai hai kya?
Lov:Nai ji.....Dus naye interns ane wale the aap pehle ho!
Suk:(to Shilpa)Oh wow...we'r 1st!
Sh:Like Always!
Suk:Koi nai...tumhari waja se late bhi hosakti thi.
Sh:But hui to nai na!
Lov:Ji....late nai hui....ap sabse pehle aye ho.
Suk:Jab tak koi aur aye tab tak kya karen?
Lov:Ap locker room men apne apne lockers dekhlo....oh ji men apko dikha deti hoon!
Sh:Gr8....lets check out the hospital!
They moved about exploring each place in the hospital...and later they came to the locker room.Two people entered there who got thm surprised...infact they all were surprised to see each other.The two ppl wr KARAN and SHWETA!
Ka/Swet/Sh/Suk:TUM!!!??(in a loud voice wch ecoed in the room)
Ka:Tum dono dumy heads....yahan par bhi!
Suk:Hey mind ur tongue!!
Ka:Y shud i han?!..wese tum dono ki isme koi galati nai....jab ladkiyan mujhe ek baar dekhti hain to follow karte karte kahin bhi pohunch jati hain...!!its quite natural..u know!
Sh:Oh Shut up!hum dono men se kisi ko bhi tumme koi interest nai hai!
Ka:(wid a naughty laugh)tum ye baat apni friend se bina confirm kiye kaise kehsakti ho?!
Shweta:(seriously)Ok stop it Karan!(looking at the gals)ok u gals tum log yahan kaise(softly)
Suk:Hum log yahan interns hain....er i mean pehla din hai!
Ka:(in shock)Ur kidding me....rite?
Sh:(still in anger)No we're not!kyun tum dar gaye kya humse(wid a sly smile)
Ka:Ofcourse!!ofcourse men dar gaya.
Shweta:Wat?...wat r ya saying Karan?
Ka:(talking to Shweta but looking at the gals wid wide open eyes)Haan yaar....baki ki life in bhootniyon ke saath kaam karna padega!!...God help me!
Both the Gals look angrily at him.....Sukriti opens her mouth to say something whn......''Hey guys!!''
A cute looking gal gets in setting up her hair.

She goes to thm:HI M DHRUSHTI! She moves her hand 4wd for a shake in such a way tht her hand comes exactly in the middle of the surrounding crowd of 4 people.They all looked at each other,not knowing whom she wanted to shake hands wid....suddenly in a jiffy all of thm hold her hand in order to shake 1st!(lolz)
This confused Drushti.
Ka:Hey gals leave her hand...she wanted to shake hands wid me!
Sh:Oh plz tum itne hot n handsome ho nai jitna khud ko samajhte ho!
Suk:Rite!
Shweta:Gals plz...no fight!
Suk:Ye tum apne ''cool dude'' se hi kehdo na!(in a funky voice,making a face at the words''cool dude'')

Holding Drushti's hand they start fighting.And wid every rude sentence they unknowingly press it hard.Finally she gets v.very irritated n shouts at the top of her voice.

Dru:(voilently snatching her hand outa their grip)Shut uuuuuuup!!!!!!!(long shout)
Everybody leave her hand n straighten themselves except Karan!
Dru:(angrily)Oye Hath chor mera!(he leaves)PAGAL HO KYA TUM SAB!!(now rubing her hand gently as its itching)Agar ek mint aur kheechte to mera hath toot jata!oye tum log kya mental hospital se bhag kar aye ho?
Just Then Pankit enters.
Pan:Hi everybody!
Suk:HI!New intern?
Pan:Han!mera naam Pankit hai.
Dru:Oye tu kahan mar gaya tha?han?pata hai ye sab ke sab bilkul pagal hain.hath todne pe tule the mera!
Sh:(sweetly)er...SORRY Drushti!
Suk:(inocently)Yea unjane men hogaya...very sorry!(the other 2 also apologise)
Dru:Bas Bas theek hai!
Soon the other interns also come and After all of thm are introduced to each other,they go to Dr.Keerti's cabin after hearing an announcement wch said to do so.All except 2.
Amit:Hi...shayad apne mujhe pehchana nai!(speaking to a gal)
Gal:(rudely) pehchana....but its nt important to talk rite now em getin late!
Amit:Yea..i kno!just wantd to say sorry for joggers park incident!btw way m Amit......er..as i already told evry1!
Gal:Evn i told evry1 who i'm n i dun lyk repeating myself...besides ''golden words r never repeated''!!
Amit:(awkwardly)yea....Sunaina!(she already left n now he followed her)
...........................Dr.Keerti's Cabin..........................
All the interns enter the cabin xcept Amit n Karan.There they all confronted their boss!
Keerti:Good morning interns!
All:Gud morning mam!
Ke:So...ur here on tym....gud!coz i completely hate late-comers(she talked sternly)b4 starting up let me check ur names on the list!(Looking at the list in a file)Dr.Shweta Gulati?
Shw:Yes mam!
Ke:Dr.Pankit Thakkar?
Pan:Present mam!
Ke:Dr.Sukriti Khandpal!
Suk:(in a low tone)Yyyes mam!
Keerti looks at her as if examining n thn again looks at the file calling out names.
Ke:Dr.Jenifer Winget?
Jen:Ya mam.
Ke:Dr.Drushti Dhami?
Dru:Ji mam!
Ke:Dr.Mayank Anand?
May:Yes mam!
Ke:Dr.Shilpa Anand?
Sh:Yes mam!
Ke:Dr.Sunaina Gulia?
Sun:(in complete attitude)Yea mam!(Keerti gazes at her thn again looks at the file)
Just thn Amit enters n exactly at the same time his name being called out.
Amit:Sorry mam!
Ke:(sternly...as we all kno the ''Dr.Keerti style'')Dr.Amit! iss hospital men apka pehla din hai..aur pehle hi din late akar kya sabit karna chahte hain aap?
Amit:Wo actually mam...bahar ek patient buht serious tha...to...i was...just trying to help..!
Ke:Ok Dr. Amit aj men apko xcuse karti hoon but nxt time u beter be on tym!
Amit:Thank u mam!
Ke:(looking at the list)Dr.Karan Grover?
Silence...
Ke:(repeates more sternly)Dr.Karan Grover??
Karan enters...

Ka:Yo Doc!sory actualy men wo rasta bhool gaya....to..er...(in a cool way)

Ke:DR.KARAN!aap apni anken agar sahi jaga rakhte to shayad in logon ke sath direct yahan cabin men pohanchte...!

Now talking to everyone...

Keerti:DOCTORS itna yaad rakhiye ke ek doctor ke liye punctual hona itna hi important hota hai jitna ek insaan ke liye saanse lena..!Doctors ko bhagwan ke kareeb hi mana jata hai..kyunki wo apne pure dil-o-jaan se ye koshish karte hain ke unka patient jald se jald bilkul theek hojaye!ye kaam sirf paison ke liye nai hota...kyunki paise to kisi b tarah kamaye ja sakte hain...par dil jeetna har kisi ke bas ki baat nai hoti......agar apko ye position chahiye to iske liye...buht mehnat karni padegi!...Isliye before we can begin....its better u ask urself first....Are u ready to work hard days n nights for becoming a successful doctor?...are u ready to devote urself for the sake of the lives of other people? ARE U READY INTERNS

Everyone is now too excited n joyfull,more bold n courageous after listening to her words!The nervousness has now left n they are all feeling very proud to get such a great opportunity....wid full confidence they,all together reply her:''YES MAM!''

Ke:(4 once wid a very light smile)Ok thn lets go....men apko sare rules n regulations samjha deti hoon.(she shows thm around n tells thm everything thr is to kno)Sanjeevani men har month ek intern of the month award diya jata hai us intern ko jiska performance sabse acha raha ho!uski details abhi necesary nai hain.n yea as aj aap sabka pehla din hai to me aj aap sab ko half-day deti hoon.matlab aap apna real job kal se start karenge!aaj ke liye aapko duties derahi hoon so listen carefully.

Amit-Sunaina-children's ward.
Pankit-shweta-Aids ward.
Jenifer-Drushti-O.P.T.
Shilpa-Mayank-cancer ward.
KARAN-SUKRITI-Path lab.

Sh/May/Amit/Sun/Jen/Dru/Pan/Shw:Yes mam!
Ka/Suk:WHT!!!??
Ke:Ji Doctors.....aap dono ko koi objection hai?(lookin at thm in such a way tht no one wud dare to meet her eyes)
Ka/Suk:(looking at each other thn at her n thn immediately looking down)Nnno mam!
Ke:Gud!now get to work!

.................................Karan-Sukriti in Path lab......................

Both of them are working busily without talking or even looking at each other as non of thm wanted to.Suddenly Sukriti decided to act normal to the guy.

Suk:Er...Karan plz zara mujhe Arsenic pass kardo!

He is so engrossed in his work that widout a word he quietly passes it to her.She uses it,in the meantime,he was trying hard to concentrate on some samples wch he was testing under the microscope,whn she returned the bottle of Arsenic to him to keep it bck to whr it ws.He got a bit disturbd but he dint want to leave his work in order to fight wid her,so he dd the task..

Suk:Karan zara ye bottle bhi wahan rakhdo aur Antimony pass kardo plz!(nt knowing tht she was disturbing him)

Completely irritated he finally shouts.

Ka:(angrily)Kyun?.....Kyun karu men tumhara kaam?baap ka naukar samajha hai mujhe?.... Antimony peekar suicide karne ka irada hai??...han?
Suk:(Angrily...nt knowin wht sudenly hapend to him)Dr.Karan behave urself!!
Ka:Y shud i han?...kabse ek to men concentrate karne ki koshish kar raha hoon upar se tumhari baasuri baje ja rahi hai...baje ja rahi hai....band hi nai horahi!! (shouts with wide eyes)

He spoke ths so loud n quick widout a pause tht it left her completely stunned 4 a sec n thn she too started shouting at him as she dint want to accept her fault!

Suk:Agar itna hi problem horaha tha to bakwaas nai kar sakte the ke tum busy ho!
Ka:To....Batana zaroori hai kya?tumhe bhagwan ne ankhen nai di....dekhne ke liye?kabse order kare jarahi ho...!
Suk:Karan shayad tum bhool rahe ho ke hum colleagues hain n we're supposed to help each other!
Ka:Ohoho!..Help han?..agar tumhe har choti badi cheez men meri help chahiye hogi to tum ek kaam karo...ghar chali jao.....yahan tumhara kaam men kardeta hoon....tumhare badle men Dr.keerti se points bhi men hi leloonga...Intern of the month bhi leloonga...(now more loudly moving his face closer to hers)AUR TUMHARE BEHALF PE DOCTOR BHI MEN HI BANJAONGA!!...help chahiye na!huh!!(sarcastically)

Sukriti is dazzled by his behaviour.She suddenly felt so heavy-hearted.Controlling herself she shouts at him..

Suk: FINE! TUM JAISE BATAMEEZ KI HELP MUJHE CHAHIYE BHI NHI!!

She keeps the bottles down and tries to pass by him to take the bottle of Antimony herself,when her sandle heel twists and she falls landing directly into his arms...Karan looks into her wet eyes..She was a bit confused as she has never been in a situation like this b4....they look into each others eyes for a moment n thn she quickly stands on her feet....N they get back to their work widout another word!

............................Amit-Sunaina in children's ward..............................

Its a noisy place,all the kids are running here n there,laughing loudly and making irritating noises.A confused Sunaina is trying hard to control her anger as well as the kids.she is running after the kids to make thm sit on their beds n stop shouting.

Sun:(in a tired tone)Bachon chup hojao..plz...stop shouting...!!(a kid runs past her making funy faces at her)HEY!!....dekho bhago mat..plz...betho apne bed par.....plz!!
One of the kids shouted to her...
Kid:Bed par baithne se hume kya milega?
Sun:Arey! wht dya mean kya milega!?
voice:Chocolates!!
She turns to find Amit standing at the entrance with a big box of chocolates in his hands.
Kid:Arey dekho dekho uske paas kitni sari chocolates hain!
Amit:Han.....aur ye saari chocolates tum sabke liye hain!
Kid:Hum sabke liye??
Kid 2:Par tum hame itni chocolates kyun dena chahte ho?....hmm....guys lagta hai dal men kuch kala hai!
Amit:Ahan!(goes upto the gal and sits on his knees near her)Is dal men kuch kala nai hai....ye chocolates tum sab ko free men milengi...but...only if u listen to us n sit quietly on ur beds!
Kid 2:Dekha men keh rahi thi na ke kuch gadbad hai!hum bed par nai jayenge....kyun guys?
Amit(laughs):acha!zara peeche mudkar to dekho...tumhe support karne wala koi nai hai!
The gal turns to find every kid lying quietly on their beds.she makes an innocent face n looks at Amit.
Sun:Jitni masoom dikhti hai utni hai nai!(folding her arms n rolling her eyes)
Amit:(whispering in the gal's ear)agar tum chup chap apne bed par jaogi to tumhe men sabse zada chocolates doonga!
Kid 2:sach?
Amit:Sach!
Kid 2:Promise?
Amit:Promise!(lightly n gently slaping her cheek)
She now obeys.He stands on his feet n walks to Sunaina.
Amit:lagta hai ke tumhe bache pasand nai hain!
Sun:Rite!they r always so irritating!kabhi bhi baat nai sunte!
Amit:Sunte hain...zaroor sunte hain agar unse pyar se baat karen....agar unse dosti karlen to!they r always so sweet n adorable!
Sun:Phu'leeease!u might be a big child lover but i'm nt!
Amit:Sach baat to ye Dr.Sunaina Gulia....ke aapko ye nai pata ke bacho ko kaise treat kiya jata hai!
Sun:F9!nahi pata...kya karlo ge?
Amit:Chalo atleast tumne accept to kiya!nyways i gtg babye!(leaves)
A kid comes to Sunaina..
Kid:Didi...sorry humne aapki baat nai mani..but aap itna chilla rahi thi!
Sun:(innocently,puting her hand on his cheek)Em sorry!
Kid:its ok didi...age se aap humse pyar se baat karna to hum aapki baat manege.DEAL?
Sun:(smiles)Deal!(lightly pinches the kid's cheek)
..........................outside sanjeevani........................
Shilpa-Mayank-Sukriti:
The Half-day work of all the interns is over now.Sukriti and Mayank are standing outside Sanjeevani.
May:Kahan rehgai ye yaar tumhe irritation nai hoti?
Suk:Dont u know...iska hamesha ka hai...thts y m sooo used to it!
May:I feel so sorry 4 u...!
Suk:Arey nai yaar i shud feel bad 4 u..coz tum dono to ek he ghar men rehte ho...(laughs)
Just thn Shilpa comes.
Sh:Sorry 4 late guys....tum logo ko bahar garmi men itna wait karaya....
Suk/May:(interupting)Whts the xcuse?
Sh:(cutely)Xcuse?...oh yea...xcuse is ke men Dr.keerti se kuch baat karne gai thi.
May:Baat karne men itni der..tu mere sath nikli thi 1 ghante pehle...baat karne men tujhe pura 1 ghanta laga?
Suk:Tum baat karrahi thi ya Dr.Keerti ko koi ram katha sunane gai thi?
Sh:Nai yaar wo actualy cancer ward ke ek patient ke case ko lekar kuch suggestion lena tha but Dr.keerti Emergency ward men ek surgery men busy thi...isliye mujhe bahar hi wait karna pada!
Suk:arey to aj baat karna zaroori tha kiya?
Sh:Ofcourse zaroori...
May:(interupting)Arey to ab kyun lad rahe ho...ghar nai chalna kya?
Sh:Han men bhi to yahi kehrahi thi Suks ko!chalo chalo lets go!
They sit in the car n drive home!

Karan-Shweta:
Both of thm r siting in Karan's car.
Shw:Kaisa raha tumhara din?
Ka:(in a low tone)Theek tha!
Shw:Aisa kyun kehrahe ho?
Ka:Yaar..kuch maza nai aya!
Shw:(Giggles)Karan..ye hospital hai...college nai jahan maza aye!
Ka:lekin yaar kuch to amusing hona chahiye na...i mean yahan koi bhi friendly nai hai yaar..jisko dekho mu banaye betha tha....Dr.Keerti...wo..Drushti aur wo do bhootniyan....they r all soo boring..!
Shw:Think positive karan...aj pehla din tha...aur wo bhi half day...itne men tum kaise keh sakte ho ke sab log boring hain..ab dekho meri duty Pankit ke sath thi n he's a very sweet guy..buht friendly hai and...n i realy enjoyed working wid him...!
Ka:Aur meri duty..un dumy heads men se ek ke sath thi....tht Sukriti...!aur wo..pata nai kya samajhti hai apne aapko...u kno wo mujhse apna bhi kaam karwarahi thi...she was teling me to pas things to her...!(complaining in a childish way)
Shw:Arey..to kya hua....tum kardete na..
Ka:Yaar Shweta...men apne kaam men concentrate karne ki koshish kar raha tha but tht silly gal dint get it!tht creep!(angrily)
Shw:(being more optimist)Arey...Karan...Usne nai dekha hoga ke tum busy ho.!
Ka:(geting irritated)Sweta tum uska side le rahi ho...awh who m i kidding(now loudly talking to himself so tht she cn hear)Karan beta..tu bhi kya umeed laga betha hai..ek ladki ke saamne doosri ladki ki burai karega..to wo to usi ka side legi na!(acting)yahan par tera koi nai hai...huh(sighs)bas men aur meri tanhai!(making a puppy face)
Shw:Bas bas...buht hogai nautanki!
Ka:Wese tumhe meri ek baat par to agree karna hi padega Shweta...yahan college wala maza nai hai!
Shw:ho bhi nai sakta...college ki baat hi kuch aur thi...(dreamily)
Ka:Hmm....kash wo din wapas ajayen....wht fun we used to hav in college(joining the dream wid her think abt college)HEY!!(sudenly brightening up)Shweta...aj half-day tha....hosakta hai kal se life itni busy hojaye ke humare pas apne liye waqt hi na bache...to kyu na hum abhi college chalen?
Shw:Wht?college?kyun?
Ka:Ek akhri baar...saari purani yaaden taza karne ke liye...just for once!
Shw:(sadly)N for all!nyways lets go(smiles)
They Drive through,all the way to their college...n reach there within an hour!
..............College.................
Both Karan n shweta are now in their college.
Shw:2 months!we're here after 2 whole months!!(sigh)feels soo gud!
Karan:Gosh!!feels gr8!!
Both of thm were very happy to see their college again whn thy knew thy wr here for the last time..!They talked about their old friends,and the many adventures they had.As they walked to the cafeteria Karan pointed at a table wch was the closest to the canteen.
Ka:Remember this table Ms.Wow!
Shw:Ofcourse...humara reserved table!koi yahan baithne ki himmat nai karta tha everybody knew it was overs!(laughs,she cud find her heart filling up)
They had a story to tell about every place in the college.It seemed to thm tht thy had come home after a long journey.They went to the huge playground.
Shw:Kitna khali khali hai playground...infact,pura college!
Ka:Yea...obviously its vacations!
Shw:(smiles but tears in her)hmm...i just love being here..dil hi nai kar raha yahan se jaane ka!
Ka:(smiles his dimple smile)frankly,mera bhi!...wo saari mastiyan..wo cafe ka ek prominent place...daddu ke sath fights..bike-races,basket-ball matches,hurdle races...different sports!chemistry lab ke wo experimens...
Shw:Ya fir disasters..(laughs)
Ka:(smiles)Wo competitions...
Shw:Wo bets!
Ka:Wo examz...!
Shw:Mayu ki wo jealousy....haha(laughs...but now her voice trembled as she was crying too)
Ka:(he too was emotional by now)Wo gal friends!
Shw:Wo fights n break-ups!
Ka:Wo ek doosre ko help karna!
Shw:Wo friends......
Ka:(hugging shweta)Wo hamesha sath rehne ke waade!
They hug for sometime..Then seeing her cry He controls his emotions,comes to his normal state n tries to comfort her!
Ka:Kya yaar Ms.wow..!tum ladkiyan choti choti baaton pe itna emotional kyu hojati ho?!chilax yaar!hum to aise baat kar rahe hain jaise hum dunya ke sabse dukhi friends ho...no ways....stop it now(wiping her tears wid his both hands)ab rona band karo...arey college khatam hua hai..life thodi khatam hui hai....Sanjeevani men kaise bhi boring log hon...hum apne aapko nai badlenge!okay...!(showing her his hand waiting 4 a high-5...she gives him)
Then he starts singing:

Kab Milenge na hum jaane yaaron phirse sabhi
Laut kar ab naa aayenge woh masti bhare din kabhi
ho dil yeh apna kahe ki aye dostonnnnn

Kab Milenge na hum jaane yaaron phirse sabhi
Laut kar ab naa aayenge woh masti bhare din kabhi
ho dil yeh apna kahe ki aye dostonnnnn

Woh hoh oooooo
I m really gonna miss this place
I am gonna miss my college days

They enter a classroom..Shweta standing near their usual seat..moving her hands on the desk..Karan cumz to her and keeping his arm across her shoulder he sings...

Yaad hai woh saare lectures, humne jo bunk kiye the.. (she smiles)
Proxy ka pakda jaana, Lafde kya kam kiye the...
ohhh , milke likhna woh journals aur submissions last minute pe
Exams ki woh tayyari, aur likhna woh teen ghante
Aur Baahar aakar woh kehna, "Saala kya Bekaar paper set kiya tha yaar"

She laughs at this..

Milta 1st class kabhi yahaan, toh lagti thi KT kabhiiii!
Laut kar ab naa aayenge woh masti bhare din kabhi
ho dil yeh apna kahe ki aye dostonnnnn
Woh hoh oooooo
I m really gonna miss this place
I am gonna miss my college days

He wipes her tears and hugs her,caressing her hair....and in the end they walk off the college,looking bak for the last time...

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Precap: Mayank and Karan's fight in the cafe!

Dear Friends,
I m very glad that u all liked my new FF.I was truely amazed to see such response n i hope tht i can make this FF live upto/according to ur expectations.
Guys i know tht all of u r excited to know that wch jodi is gonna be the AR of my FF.But u guys have to wait for quite sometime,to know this,as this is the thing tht makes my FF different frm the others on the blog :)
Guys i just wanted to say that you can request me anything related to this FF except for the main jodi i.e The AR of the FF.

sorry if i offended u but plz guys i m just a 14 yr old gal who can be considered as ''LITTLE'' as compared to many of the other blog members.I dont want to upset or disheart anybody.And tht is y all the requests,confuse me! :(

This post is especially for the fans of these 3 jodis
KaSh....KaSu....KaJen.

agar men ek jodi ko AR banaon to plz baki dono jodis ke fans disheart hokar FF read karna mat chordena....PLZ bura mat manna bcoz Ridz to kisi ek ko hi banna hai (obviously)!!
so plz co-operate! n yea all the predictions are always welcome!:)

hope u guys dint mind.
comments ke through,batana zaroor.

Will be back soon with another episode of Dostana!
Till thn
Take care
Goodbye and keep smiling :)
lots n lots of love,
keddie :)

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Comment Replies:

Munazza,
Hey..thnx for ur comment sweety! No,i don't really remember whether the 'cuppy cake' poem was sung by Ammy or not..coz i started watchin DMG frm september! So really dunno abt tht..And yes its 'Strawberry Shortcake'
Thnx for ur comments!

Simi,
Hi..! Thnx baby for ur comment..u'll find this part quite intresting..it was just written coz u guys wanted AR and MA parts! so here u go..enjoy!

Shruti,
Thnx alot!! And yes nice question who is the main lead couple of RSTRL hmm..well its ofcourse Abhi and Maya..but u can count Rex and Tanvi in too...i love both the couples..and for me both of thm are the lead! :) Keep commenting..loads of love!!

Amreen,
The w8 is over..here is the episode enjoy and do comment!!

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Episode:81

Recap:Reva asks Nakkul for dinner.Armaan and Ridhima have been invited for dinner by Dr.Shashank.Rahul,Muskaan and their little son enjoy a family moment together! Abhi makes Ranbir realise that he still loves Tanvi.Ranbir goes to meet Tanvi at her house.Tanvi is about to tell him the big secret of her life.


Scene:1
Mallik Residence

Armaan and Ridhima getting ready in their room while Maya in her own...

Maya's room

Maya wearing a white skirt and shirt of sky blue colour..lookin very pretty! With a very light make-up on her face and lens of brown colour...

Maya: hmm now for the finishing touch...(she takes a kajal pencil and puts it in her eyes) Hmm...nw m done!

She brushes her hair one last time...Suddenly she sees someone's shadow frm the miror (reflection of the balcony)

Maya: Yeh kon hai? ( a thought flashes in her mind) Chor??!!

She takes the hairbrush and slowly goes towards the balcony...she hides behind the curtains...as the person enters the room...she moves forward and is abt to hit the person whn he shouts...

"AHHHH........!!!"

Maya: ABHI!!??
Abhi: Ahhh!! (thn luks at her) Maya?? tumne mujhe darra hi diya!
Maya: Maine? tumne!! tumne mujhe darraya!!
Abhi: Phew!! (catching his breath)
Maya: Mujhe ek baat batao..ke tum yahan aye kyun ho??
Abhi: woh...main tumse milne aya hon!
Maya: Kyun? hum subah hi toh mile the!!
Abhi: Bas mera dil karha tha!
Maya: Abhi...tum bhi na! agar dad ne tumhein dekh liya na toh tumhein main kya mom bhi nhe bacha sakengi!
Abhi: Mujhe tumse milne ke liye agar....err...
Maya: 'err' KYA?
Abhi: err..Mujhe tumse milne ke liye agar Mountain bhi climb karna pare toh woh bhi main karonga! (proudly)
Maya: err..Abhi are u okay?? Yeh mountain kahan se agaya?
Abhi: Eh...kahin se nhe! (gigles)
Maya: Tum bhi na Abhi!
Abhi: Acha tell me one thing..why r u getting ready?
Maya: Hum dinner ke liye jarahe hain!
Abhi: Dinner ke liye? lekin abhi toh 6:30 hue hain (chckin the clock)..itni jaldi?
Maya: No...dinner se pehle mom dad ke saath movie pe jaongi!
Abhi: Konsi?
Maya: Kambhakht Ishq!
Abhi: Oh..mom dad ke saath jaogi..mere saath ane men tumhein koi problem hai kya? (nw sitting comfortably on her bed)
Maya: Abhi? jao yahan se!
Abhi: Kyun? (resting his head of her pillow)
Maya: Abhi agar dad agaye na...

Her sentence was left incomplete whn Armaan knocks at the door...

Arm: Pari !! Pari tum ready hogayi?
Maya: Papa??
Abhi: (jumps) Armaan sir!!! oh shit!
Maya: Kya hua beta ? abhi toh ap bari bari batein karahe the ke tumse milne ke liye mountain bhi climb karna pare toh karonga??
Abhi: Pagal ho kya? mujhe kahin chupao!
Arm: pari? kya hua? (knocks at the door)
Maya: Nhe main toh nhe chupaongi...anne do papa ko!

She is abt to go towards the door to open it whn he pulls her bak.

Abhi: Tum mera murder kyun plan karahi ho??
Maya: hehe...murder?
Abhi: Han aur kya? tumhare dad!!
Maya: Woh kuch nhe karenge main abhi darwaza kholti hon..
Abhi: Nhe!!
Maya: Toh ab?
Arm: Pari!! kya hua baby ??

Ridhima also cumz thr...

Rid: Kya hua Armaan?
Arm: Pata nhe Maya darwaza nhe khol rahi! (nervous)
Rid: Maya!! darwaza kholo! (knocks at the door)

Maya opens the door.....

Arm: Darwaza kyun nai khol rahi thi? are u fine?
Maya: Yes papa...i'm fine!
Rid: Hum darr gaye the!
Maya: Mom...main washroom men thi!!

They both are nw sitting on a sofa placed in her room while Maya herself is standing near the bed...

Arm: Bas thori der men chalte hain...maine driver ko car service karane ke liye bejha hai!
Rid: Hmm...Maya tum khari kyun ho sit dwn!
Maya: No mom i'm fine!
Rid: Baith jao hum abhi nai jarahe!
Maya: Nai i'm fine..woh papa hum driver ke saath jayenge?
Arm: Nai usse sirf car service karane bejha hai..i'm goin to drive the car!
Maya: Oh!

Armaan's phone rings after 15min...It was the driver informing thm about the car...

Arm: Okay chalo woh agaya hai!
Rid: Hmm...

The two of thm leave the room...

Rid: Chalo Maya?
Maya: Main aati hon mom...bas 2 sec!
Rid: Okay!

Ridhima leaves the room and Maya quickly locks the door..

Maya: (standing with her bak at the door) Ab tum bahar asakte ho!

Abhi cumz outta the wardrobe...breathing hard...

Maya: So hw was the wardrobe?
Abhi: Man! (catches his breath finally)
Maya: So? kisne kaha tha aane ko?
Abhi: Meri Maa...ainda se main tumhare kya kisi bhi ladki ke kamre men chupke se nhe aaonga!
Maya: Kisi bhi matlab? tum kitni ladkiyon ke kamre men jaate ho?
Abhi: Ab toh kisi ke bhi jaonga!
Maya: Acha nw leave...
Abhi: Waise which theatre are u goin?
Maya: PVR cinemas!
Abhi: Kitne baje?
Maya: 8 bje!
Abhi: Gr8 man! have fun!
Maya: Thnx!

Scene:2
Nakkul and Reva

Nakkul still in the hospital working on a case...It has been about 2 hours frm nw tht he has been sitting in the Pathlab...all other interns i.e.Maya,Abhi,Ranbir and Chris have left for their homes...He takes out the laptop placed on one corner of the Pathlab and begins to work with it...after half an hour...

Nak: Hmm...! (chcking the file one last time) Oh no! (a fear rolls dwn his stomach) Unko...unko AIDS hai?!!! (he reads the file) HIV test POSITIVE!! But...but hw is tht possible? (he dials a number) Hello dad! are u still in the hospital? (he gets a positive reply) Okay dad i'm coming rite away!

He takes all the files and head towards Atul's cabin.After telling him all the details..

Nak: But dad how can that be possible? woh toh pregnant haina?
Atul: Hmm...yes woh pregnant hain but she has AIDS!
Nak: Lekin dad unka bacha?
Atul: Mayb he gets affected too.We cannot provide her with the HIV medicines before the delivery! It can be dangerous for the coming baby!
Nak: But dad we can't just let her die? Can we? (in horor)
Atul: (looks at him) ... (as if studying his thoughts)
Nak: Dad! Its her first stage and we can treat her..but if we wait for her delivery...no! it can be very dangerous!
Atul: Nakkul! don't be emotional! Unka treatment tabhi hoga jab unki delivery hojayegi! Hum baby ko leke koi risk nhe utha sakte!
Nak: Dad...(starts to say something but stops)
Atul: Everything will be fine.Maine apni life men bht se aise case dekhen hain! Stop worrying!
Nak: ....
Atul: Ab ghar jao! U look very tired! Gudnite!
Nak: Gudnite dad! (dryly)

He stands up and after taking the files leaves the cabin...On walking through the corridor he meets Reva...

Reva: Tum free hogaye?
Nak: (nods)
Reva: Gr8! main kitni der se wait karahi thi! hum bahar jarahe haina?
Nak: (nods again)
Reva: Ok! (excitedly) Aur tumhara din kaisa tha?

Nak is abt to answer her but stops at the sight of the general ward...

The same lady who has HIV was sitting with her husband..both talking about their coming baby and the husband looking at the lady's stomach is chatting with the baby..Nakkul looking at them smiles...

Husband: Aww...toh apko mama ne khana nhe khilaya! very bad mama! hum mama ko dante ge! (thn luks at the lady) Very bad mama...apne mere baby ko khana nhe khilaya! (in a baby tone)

Lady: Nhi Shekhar mujhe bhook nhe hai!

Husband: Tumhein bhook nhe lagi magar mere baby ko bht bhook lagi hai...haina baby?? (again looking to the stomach) Dekho han bol raha hai...yeh lo yeh lo..ab jaldi se khana kha lo! (holding a spoon of rice)

Lady: Tum bhi na Shekhar! (eats it)

Nakkul looking at them ... smiling...

Reva: Thts so cute rite? (also looking)
Nak: Yea...! (but thn remembers "hum delivery tak treatment nhe start karsakte!" he gasps) Kitne sapne dekhe honge unhone apne aane wale kal ke liye!
Reva: Obviously! jab ek aurat maa banne wali hoti hai toh woh apne bache ke saath saath apne dil men bhi hazaaron armaan palti hai...!
Nak: (looks dwn sadly) Lekin apko kya pata ke apka kal kaisa hoga?
Reva: Aise kyun kehrahe ho?
Nak: Humesha aisa kyun hota hai Reva ke hum jis cheez ko dil se chahte hain woh hi humse Bhagvan cheen leta hai? (looks at her)
Reva: Kya baat hai Nak? Tum aisa kyun kehrahe ho? (keeping her hand on his shoulder)
Nak: (looks at the lady) Janti ho...inko .... (takes a deep breath) Inko AIDS hai!

He could hear her gasp...she luks at him in horor...

Reva: Kya?
Nak: Haan...(looking dwn) Inki ... inki reports positive hain!
Reva: (trying to figure out wat to say) Nak?
Nak: Maine dad se consult kia...and he said that we cannot start the treatment until her baby is born!
Reva: What? (shocked) But ... but she is only one month pregnant!
Nak: Ya! i knw...!
Reva: But why can't we start the treatment?
Nak: The medicines are too strong! They can affect the baby!
Reva: Oh My God! (she looks at Nakkul's sad face) Nak...don't worry! sub theek hojayega! Em sure Dr.Atul koi na koi solution zarur nikalenge! (trying to calm the situation)
Nak: Ya...i hope so! (looks at her) I really hope so...!!
Reva: And I knw so! now chill! (trying to cheer him up) C'mon lets go for dinner shall we? aur waise bhi tum ek ladki ko itna wait toh nhe karaoge na? (trying to scold)
Nak: (smiles at her) Chalo!
Reva: (smiles bak and goes wid him)

Scene:3
PVR...7:45

Armaan,Ridhima and Maya enter the theatre..

Arm: (to Ridhima) Main tickets leke aata hon tum donon jaake snacks lo!
Rid: Okay!

Armaan goes to the tickets counter while Ridhima and Maya go to the snack bar.

Rid: Bht bari line hai.
Maya: We will wait mom!

After 15min their turn cumz...

Maya: (to the guy standing on the counter) Three popcorns and three drinks!

"Make that four!!", a guy says standing next to Ridhima.

Both Maya and Ridhima look at them.

Rid-Maya: TUM!!?? (shocked)

Waiter: Maam would u like popcorns spicy or normal?
Rid: One normal and two spicy!
Waiter: ok and which drink?
Rid: One pepsi and two sprite!
Abhi: And i'll have spicy popcorns with a glass of pepsi!! (thn turns to them) Hi!
Rid: Abhi? what a surprise!!

The three of them take the snacks and move outta the line...

Abhi: Movie dekhne aya hon! (smiles)
Rid: Konsi?
Abhi: "Kambhakht Ishq!" (lookin at Maya who is staring at him in anger)
Rid: Hey hum log bhi wahi dekhne jarahe hain! Wht a coincidence! haina Maya?
Maya: (luks at Ridhima) huh..yea mom! (thn luks at Abhi) ... what a coincidence! (angrily)

Abhi winks at her...

Abhi: Main ticket leke aata hon!
Rid: Arey tum ruko main Armaan se kehti hon ke 3 ke badle 4 leke aye!
Abhi: No maam its fine main...
Rid: C'mon Abhi its fine! (she goes away)
Abhi: Hieee (gestures with hand)
Maya: TUM YAHAN KYUN AYE HO?? (angrily)
Abhi: Man! tumhare yahi words takiya kalam ban gaye hain...jab main tumhare ghar aata hon wahan bhi tum yahi kehti ho ...'tum yahan kyun aye hoooo..!!' (sings)
Maya: Abhi! shut up! (lightly slapping his bak)
Abhi: Ouch!
Maya: Tum na...
Abhi: Yahan kyun aye ho? yahi pochne wali thi na? well main tumhein yeh batane aya tha ke main tumhare dad Dr.Armaan Mallik se nhe darrta!! :D
Maya: Abhi! tum na kabhi nhe sudhro ge!

On the other side..

Rid: Armaan!
Arm: RIdhima? tum Maya ko akele kyun chorke ayi ho? tum jao main tickets leke ata hon!
Rid: Armaan! stop acting like a father!
Arm: Ridhima...i'm a father!
Rid: Well atleast not in front of me! (naughtily) Mere samne toh sirf tum mere hubby ho! (pinching his cheek)
Arm: Awww...kya baat hai Dr.Ridhima? ap aj public men shuro hogayi?
Rid: Noo!! main toh yeh kehne ayi thi ke 3 ke badle 4 tickets leke aao!
Arm: 4 kyun? humare 'upcoming' baby ko bhi movie dekhni hai? (teases)
Rid: Nhe baba! Abhi yahan aya hai!
Arm: Kon Abhi?
Rid: Abhi! Abhimanyu! (glares)
Arm: (luks on the other side) Acha Abhi! (thn immediately luks at her) ABHI??!! woh kyun aya hai yahan? (a bit angrily)
Rid: Well wahi jo hum karne aye hain! movie dekhne!
Arm: Ridhima u don't know this boy yeh yahan picture dekhne nahi aya! (just like a typical father)
Rid: (scolds) Armaan!! Tum bhi aise hi the! (nw being normal) C'mon jaldi tickets leke aao! and yes unke samne plz don't act childish!!
Arm: Ohk! (makes a face)
Rid: Thts like my hubby! (holding his arm)
Arm: (smiles) Ab jao woh donon akele hain!
Rid: Armaan? phir se?
Arm: (backing up) Ah..i mean woh donon bache akele hain!
Rid: Armaan! (scolds) Woh donon bache nhe hain...and Abhi is there for Maya!
Arm: Says who??
Rid: Says I !! (scolding again) Ab jaldi aao i'm waiting! (she leaves)
Arm: I've got my eyes on u Abhi!! (like a daddy) Hahaha!

The guy at his bak shouts...

Guy: Abey aage dekh na! humari baari bhi aani hai!
Arm: Ya sorry! (goes to the tickets corner) 4 adults!

He after buying the tickets quickly makes his way to them and finds Abhi munching the popcorns standing with Ridhima while Maya with her arms folded is standing in front of thm.

Arm: (looking at thm frm a distance) Sumthing's rong? (he goes to thm) Hey!
Abhi: Hello Armaan sir! (shwing his hand waiting for a shake)
Arm: (looks at him suspiciously)

Ridhima glares at Armaan and asks him to shake hands with Abhi.Armaan obeying her shakes hand...

Arm: Hi! er..tum yahan bhi agaye?
Abhi: Yupp! aap jahan main wahaan! (proudly)
Arm: Oh..thts...err..nice! (thn looks at Maya) Kya hua?
Maya: Kuch nai dad!
Rid: Abhi tum bht funny ho!
Abhi: Thnx mam! (thn puts sum popcorns in his mouth)
Rid: Armaan ki tarah!
Arm: Wat?? main funny nai hon!
Rid: Armaan c'mon! humari internship ke days men Armaan se funny intern aur koi nai tha! :D
Arm: (looks at Ridhima) Thnx for telling! (rolls his eyes)
Rid: Welcome! ab chalen?
Arm: Please! (sarcastically)
Abhi: Its gonna be fun!
Arm: Yea!

Maya holding her daddy's arm walks with him to the theatre while Abhi telling his silly jokes to Ridhima walks behind thm...they reach the dark theatre ... the screen is showing sum trailors...Maya holding her daddy's arm walking wid him enters a row followed by Abhi and RIdhima...

Arm: err...Ridhima tum mere saath..nhe Maya ke saath betho main Abhi ke saath bethonga!
Abhi: No sir! main aisa nhe karsakta! (a bit louder)
Arm: Kya?? (confused)
Abhi: Apki wife ke hote main apke saath nhe bethsakta! (trying to act innocent) Main apko apni wife se door nhe karsakta!

Abhi moves Ridhima forward to Armaan...

Abhi: Aap Ridhima maam ke saath bethenge!
Rid: Aww thts so sweet Abhi! (keeping her hand on his shoulder) Armaan main tumhare saath hi bethongi! Maya tum mere barabar men beth jana aur Abhi tumhare barabar men! ok?
Maya: err..sure mom! (is confused)
Arm: Nhe! Abhi tum mere saath...

The guy frm behind shouts...

Guy: Uncle jee plz beth jayen movie start hogayi hai!!
Arm: Uncle jee? tumne ...
Abhi: (a bit louder) Tumne Armaan sir ko uncle jee bulaya?? woh uncle nhe hain! Sir ap jaldi beth jayen! c'mon mam sit sit sit!

He forces them to sit...

Abhi: Chalo Maya jaldi beth jao! sit sit! movie start hone wali hai!

The four of them sit...Ridhima sitting in the middle with Armaan on her left side and Maya on her right..Abhi sitting with Maya!

Abhi: Thts better!
Maya: (whispering) Abhi? yeh sub kya hai?
Abhi: Plan! (winks) Dekho ab hum saath bethe hain! :D
Maya: Abhi! tum bhi na!
Arm: (shouts frm the other side) Maya tum theek bethi hona??
Maya: Ha..haa ..n dad! i'm fine!
Rid: (slowly whispers to Armaan) Armaan! stop it woh theek hai! aur main uske barabar men bethi hona!

Armaan looks at Maya and Abhi who are looking at the screen...

Rid: Armaan...chup chap movie enjoy karo...!!
Arm: (makes a face) .... (looks at the screen)

Ridhima smiles at him and thn holds his arm and starts to watch the movie...Abhi notices tht both the father and mother are nw busy in movie..he slowly slips his hand in Maya's

Maya: (instantly looks at him) Abhi?
Abhi: Ssshh aage dekho! Warna tumhare dad phirse yahan dekhenge!
Maya: ... (smiles and looks straight)
Abhi: I dunno why is he so suspicious of me? Main koi daako gabbar singh nai (looking straight)
Maya: Abhi...he is a father!
Abhi: Han toh maine kab kaha ke he is a mother? (jokes)
Maya: (smiles) I knw papa bht zyada possesive hain mujhe leke!
Abhi: Kuch zyada hi! (making a face)

Maya doesn't say anythin just smiles!

Abhi: Yeh lo popcorn khao! (he makes her eat sum with his own hand)

Maya eats silently...and thn takes her pepsi and is about to drink whn he stops her..

Maya: Kya hua??
Abhi: Meri drink men se peeyo!
Maya: Abhi mere paas meri apni hai!
Abhi: Main janta hon..magar tum meri piyo...isse pyar bharta hai! (shwing her a broad smile)
Maya: Abhi! (she smiles and takes the drink frm him)

Scene:4
Nakkul-Reva

Both Nakkul and Reva reach a well-maintained Restaurant...they both sitting on a table which is placed at a corner...Both of thm facing eachother...lost in eachothr's eyes...dead to the world...a soft silent music playing at the background...Both of thm lost in eachothr's eyes...He couldn't control himself...

After a few minutes a waiter cumz..."Dr.Nakkul Joshi?!!"

Nak:.......
Waiter: Dr.Nakkul Joshi!!
Nak: ....
Waiter: (a bit louder) DR.NAKKUL JOSHI!!!
Nak: Huh...! yes..main hi hon!
Waiter: Apne order nai kia?
Nak: Oh...(luks at Reva) Kya khaogi?

Reva gives the order and Nakkul sits thr admiring her...After she finishes ordering...

Reva: Nice place na?
Nak: Hmm...(admiring her)

She looks at him...smiles..!!

Reva: Kya hua Nak? is sumthin wrong?
Nak: Nai...(smiles) Unhi!
Reva: :)

The order arrives and she starts to hv her dinner...

Reva: Tum khaoge nai?
Nak: huh..oh...khata hon!

They both begin to eat...Nakkul looks at her eating ... lookin very pretty...!! After the dinner...

Nak: ("abhi theek waqt hai..main Reva ko propose kardeta hon!") Err...Reva mujhe tumse...kuch kehna hai!
Reva: (drinking orange juice) Han Nak bolo!
Nak: err...mujhe...tumse...
Reva: (she looks at him.."Kahin Nak?") Huh? bolo na!
Nak: Main...err..main tumse ....

He is interupted by a phone call...

Nak: Excuse me!
Reva: Hmm!

He picks up the phone...its frm Sanjeevani..

Nak: Hello !! (after a sec) KYA??!! (he stands up) Kaise?? Main abhi aata hon!! (hangs up)

The smile on his face fades away...a sad expression arrives on his face...he looks at Reva....

Reva: Kya hua?? (worried)
Nak: Woh...Mrs.Mehra...
Reva: Kya hua unko?
Nak: Woh...

Reva gasps as she understands the situation.

Reva: Nak! chalo..
Nak: Hmm!

They rush to Sanjeevani...Thn to the OPT...

OUTSIDE O.P.T...

Nak: Kya hua unhein?
Nurse: Pata nai Dr.Nakkul..abhi toh theek thi achanak unko ulti hue..aur uss men blood aya!
Nak: WHAT? BLOOD!!??

Nervousness rolls dwn his face...

Nak: Oh God! koi aur doctor hai Night duty pe?
Nurse: No aur koi doctor nhe hai!
Nak: Oh Shit! (he looks at Reva) Reva?
Reva: Main Dr.Atul ko call karti hon..u just don't worry!!
Nak: Nurse tum mere saath chalo..

Reva goes to call Atul while Nakkul enters the O.P.T...

Reva: (talking to Atul) Sir! yahan bht problem hogayi hai! (she tells him the whole story) Ap plz jaldi se ajayen..Nak bht tensed hai! plz!! (hangs up) Oh God plz sub theek kardena plz!!

She goes inside the O.P.T and finds Nakkul giving the patient necessary medical precautions...she can see the tension in his eyes...! She comes out to find the lady's husband standing outside...

Hus: Doctor..kaisi hai woh?
Reva: (dunno wht to say) Woh...don't worry...hum koshish karahe hain!
Hus: Mere bache ko toh kuch nhi hoga??
Reva: (luks at him) Nhe...Baghvan pe bharosa rakhen!
Hus: Pata nhe kya hogaya...achi bhali mujhse batein karahi thi...Hey Bhagvan plz Savitri ko kuch mat hone dena!!

Atul cumz running towards Reva...

Reva: Sir!! (worried)
Atul: (gives her a little hope) Don't worry! She will be fine! Nakkul kahan hai?
Reva: Andar hai! plz kuch kijiye!
Atul: Hmm!

He enters O.P.T...After one hour Nakkul comes out...

Reva: (stands up frm the bench) Nakkul kya hua??
Hus: Kya hua? woh theek toh hai?? (anxiously)
Reva: Nakkul plz batao na!
Nak: (looks at the husband) Woh theek hojayenge! don't worry!

After saying this he goes silently to the locker room followed by Reva...

Reva: Kya hua Nakkul? kuch toh bolo plz!!

He looks at her...and instantly hugs her...and starts to cry...

Reva: (unable to say anything) Nak...
Nak: Unhein HIV hai Reva...woh maa banne wali hain...hum unka medical treatment start nai karsakte...main...i'm so hopeless...main kya karon kuch samajh nhe araha !! (SOBS) Main kya karon?
Reva: (separates) Nakkul...how can u lose hope?? Be brave...em sure tum zarur koi na koi hal nikal hi loge...don't worry...(she wipes his tears) Main hon na tumhare saath !!

Her words worked like magic for him...he looks at her full of hope.."Main hon na tumhare saath" The words rolling dwn in his mind...

Reva: Unhein kuch nai hoga...mujhe tumpe poora bharosa hai! :)
Nak: Thnx Reva...for being there .... !!
Reva: I'm always there for u !! (keeping her hand on his)
Nak: Thnx alot Reva...!

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Writer notes:
Guys the next part will be of Tanvi and Ranbir only in which Tanvi will tell her past to Ranbir..!

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I hope u all liked it..I'll see u all nxt tym till thn u ppl take care of urself and other's around u..!! Wishing u each and every happiness in the world :)

Lots of Love,
Catherine

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Dill Mill Gayye Aug 13th Episode

Serial: Dil Mil Gaye (Dill Mill Gayye)
Channel : Star One

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Introduction - Which Way to Go?

Introduction - Which Way to Go?

Thing to think about:
Who is the person who is in a dilemma and what the person’s problem is.


Plot:
One of the characters is stuck in a serious dilemma and doesn’t know what to do. When the person asks anyone else for advice they all be quiet because they don’t know a way to get him out of the dilemma.

Characters’:
Armaan - 22 yrs old from a good family. He is good looking charming and handsome, all the girls fall for him except for 3.
Anjali - 21 yrs old. She is an older sister and thinks she can rule over her. It is hard to impress her and she can have a bit of an attitude, but she is a kind girl at heart.
Atul - 22 yrs old. He is very cute and sweet. Everyone likes him; if someone is sad he will do his best to cheer him, her up.
Riddhima - 21 yrs old. She is cute simple and sweet. She is friends with everybody and everyone likes her. She focuses on her work and talks to her friends. She is a bit too concerned about cleaning.
Vicky - 22 yrs old. He loves to take risks and do stunts. He is very rude but some people like him. He try’s to show off all the time and some people get irritated of him.
Sumanta - She 21 yrs old. Talks all the time, doesn’t let anyone do their work. She wants to be the centre of attention. She doesn’t have any friends but has had too many boy friends.
Rahina – She is 32 yrs old. She is shy to talk to everyone but people always try to make her talk. She is dead serious about her work if she is a micro second late to see a patient she slap’s her self. She dosn’t have any friends.


Zara

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My Life My Fate

heyloo guys! thanks a lot for ur love and support!! I really like the name you all have given me and thanks a lot catherine that u have considered me as ur late younger brother.. But I am girl... But the best part is that.. I have been considered as a boy by everyone..! that is really LOLZZ! But the fact is I am girl. And "Sam" really sounds... WOW!! thanks a lot! And everybody... especially the writers.. who commented on this.. I am really happy..

You all know what?? I was really depressed on the day when i wrote the post but the day counting the next of it.. till today i am happy.. may be it is just because of the love and blessings of you all on me.. Really guys thanks a TON!!! I really want to share my life with you guys right now! Because you all became my sisters(:D :P) OK-OK jokes a part!! You know what.. I would like to tell my name and my identity to all of you.. (provided you agree) So my name and identity in the next part.. But but but.,.. I will not forget the name given to me... PROMISE!!!

And now a last request.. who all commented on my last post please comment now also.. if you dont comment i will think that you all ar enot interested.. (sorry.. i am like this only)Please tell me how did you feel after this post.. I am very happy!!!



And the one who had posted Itz my life.. is not me.. it is somebody else~~!! IT is not me!!!!!!Dont mistake him/her with me..

And bbye and have a lot of fun..
With love..,
Sam (real name in next post!)

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Episode 80: Rok Sako To Rok Lo

Hello beautiful ppl of this blog..hru all? Hope everyone is doin gud !

Before beginning with the episode i would like to reply u guys!

Prem,
Thnx alot dear for ur loveliest comment! I totally liked it! Best of luck for ur project! And as for the song i listened to it with Choco strawberry fudge and cherry sprinkles !! It was soo yummy i was like dancing on the ice-cream parlour :p Anyways in this epi u'll find ur requested song..hope u like it! And yesh keep commenting! Cheerzz! :D

Shruti,
Hey Dear..thnx a ton for ur comment too...! Keep reading..lv ya!

Simi,
Thnx honey for ur comment! I'll make sure u find more Abhi-Maya moments along with Ar-Ri in coming episodes!! :) ok?? Enjoy this one!

Lovy,
My! My! thnx for ur comment..dint expected! :) And thnx for tht song..!! And yesh i would like to say tht keep popping into my small ff sumtimes! lv ya too!

Karan,
Hey! Evn i felt like laughing on tht part whn i was editing the epi :p Thnx for ur comment!! Keep reading and yea enjoy ur vacations!!

Keddie,
Helllo sweety...U love 'fade away'? same here!! Thnx for ur comment and best of luck for ur cumin epi'ss...!!

Yashi,
Hey dear..thnx for ur comment too! No probs u can comment anytym u want..doesn't matter if u're late or wht! U can drop by anytime...! :)

Madhu,
I was like hahhahaha..reading ur funny prediction thingie!! Thnx alot anyways for ur comment...! And try to post ur comment on the blog if u can...! :) tcz...!

Other's all Prats,Jiya,XWY2,Angel,Pooja and Ranbir thnx a ton for ur comments too..! Love u all and keep reading !! :)

Belmi,Neha di,Miths,Vish,Riza and Abeer missing u guys alot!!

Ok nw enjoy this epi and do comment!!

Episode:80

Recap: The Gupta family is finally united as Dr.Shashank forgives Armaan and Ridhima.Maya also comes to know about her Grandparents.Ranbir is very hurt on seeing Tanvi and Chris together.Abhi comes to know about their break up and decides to solve the problem.Chris blackmails Tanvi

Scene:1
Nxt morning Sanjeevani

Nurse Station...

Everybody is present at the Nurse Station except Tanvi...

Ran: Dr.Abhimanyu and Dr.Chris Aids Ward
Abhi: Yes Dr.Ranbir!

Nak: ("Oh God plz aj meri duty Reva ke saath ho plzz!!")
Ran: (continues) Dr.Nakkul and Dr.Reva General Ward

Nak: Thnx alot Dr.Ranbir!! (excited)

Ran: Dr.Maya aj ap Dr.Smriti ko surgery men assist karengi theek 10:30 and baqi sare interns uss waqt examine karenge!!

All: Yes Dr.Ranbir!
Ran: And Dr.Tanvi apki duty aj Pathlab men hai! (after 1 sec) Dr.Tanvi apki duty Pathlab men hai!! (puts the file dwn to luk at the interns) Dr.Tanvi??

Abhi: Woh abhi tak nai ayi Ranbir!! (sternly..wants to see his reaction)
Ran: (shock) Nhe ayi? (controls) err..ap log apni duties pe jayen...woh jab ayengi main unse khud baat karonga!!
Abhi: As u say! c'mon gang!

Dey all leave and Abhi cumz to him..

Abhi: Tujhe fikar horahi hai?
Ran: Nhe toh...err..mujhe kyun tension hogi?
Abhi: Well..was just asking...c ya later!
Ran: Bye! (after Abhi leaves) 8:30 baj rahe hain...Tanvi abhi tak kyun nhe ayi? mayb i shuld call her...(he leaves)

Abhi cumz out...

Abhi: U still care for her...and i promise Ranbir ke tum aur Tanvi phir saath hoge...Tanvi aur Ranbir ko koi alag nhe karsakta...And everything will work according to plan !!

Scene:2
Ridhima's cabin

Ridhima on phone...

Rid: Nhe papa... iski kya zarorat hai? acha lijiye Armaan se baat kijiye!
Arm: (takes the phone) Hello...Namaste Papa! Aj raat ko? nhe main apko kaise mana karsakta hon...acha theek hai hum ayenge..jee! Namaste! (hangs up)

Rid: Armaan?
Arm: Kya Ridhima! Papa itne pyar se bula rahe hain aur tum mana karahi ho?
Rid: Main bas unhi...
Arm: Tum bhi na Ridhima!
Rid: Pata hai woh Di ko bhi invite karahe hain...tht means poori Gupta family ek saath! Kitna maza ayega!
Arm: Haan maza toh ayega!!
Rid: HUm jarahe haina?
Arm: Toh abhi hum kis baare men baat krahe the!
Rid: Hehe..just asking..main Maya ko inform kardeti hon phir hum saath men chalen ge..ok?
Arm: Hmm yeh theek rahe ga! Acha mujhe thora kaam hai main baad men milta hon bye!
Rid: bye! (after he leaves) Hey Baghvan bht dinon baad yeh khushi humare ghar ayi hai...ise barkarar rakhna!!

Scene:3
General Ward

Reva lukin at Nakkul trying to speak to him but he is working with sum file in hand..

Nak: CT Scan done..! Phir kya rehta hai man!! Every report is clear...toh phir inko...I think main Armaan sir se iss baare men discuss karta hon...

Turns and bumps into Reva..

Nak: Oh i'm sorry my mistake!
Reva: No its alrite Nakkul! (he is abt to leave) Listn!
Nak: Huh?
Reva: Mujhe tumse kuch baat karni thi...if u don't mind?
Nak: Han bolo!
Reva: Eerrr..woh...er..
Nak: Reva plz jaldi bolo i need to go!
Reva: ahh...Nakkul woh...i was thinking...err..
Nak: Reva em sorry but mujhe urgently Dr.Armaan se milna hai...so if u don't mind main...
Reva: Ohk...sure! bye
Nak: Thnx! (turns and starts to moves forward)
Reva: ("Agr tu aj nhe kahegi toh kabhi nhe kahegi!") Nak! I was thinking...shall we go out tonite??
Nak: (stops) Huh? (turns in amazement) Kya kaha?
Reva: err..woh main sochrahi thi...ke aj raat hum kahin...dinner ke liye jayen??
Nak: Dinner?? ("Wow man! isne toh mere dil ki baat kehdi!") er..i dunno well..
Reva: Plz Nak! mera bht dil chahraha hai!
Nak: (lukin at her innocent face) Ohk...! but ek condition pe!
Reva: Hmm?
Nak: Ke tum Shalwar kameez nhe pehno gi!
Reva: (luks at her dress which is shalwar kameez) Oh..kyun main ismen achi nhe lagti?
Nak: (cumz closer to her) Nhe...achi lagti ho..magar yeh tum nhe ho...aur main chahta hon ke tum mujhe apni real dressing men milo..instead of this fake one! (lovingly)
Reva: (quiet touched) Ohk Nakkul! main...shalwar kameez nhe pehnon gi!
Nak: Hmm :) ab main jaon?
Reva: Hmm jao!!
Nak: (smiles and leaves)
Reva: Yes!! Dinner! wow!!! :D (very excited) Yippy!!

Scene:4
Corridor

Ranbir quiet tensed about Tanvi is walking dwn the corridor...

Ran: Abhi tak kyun nhe ayi...koi phone bhi nhe kiya? kya karon? (goes to the nurse station) Call karke dekhta hon! (dials her no) C'mon C'mon pick up!! (No reply frm the oder side) Shit!! (puts the receiver dwn) Ab main kya karon? Nak..Nak se pochta hon!!

Runs to towards the general ward...enters and finds Reva thr..

Ran: Reva!! Nakkul kahan hai?
Reva: (who is very happy) Oh Ranbir aj main bht khush hon!
Ran: Kyun?
Reva: Aj main date pe jarahi hon!! (excitedly)
Ran: Oh thts nyc! (not evn bothering to ask wid whom) ab plz mujhe batao ke Nakkul kahan hai?
Reva: Nak? woh toh Armaan sir se milne gaya hai!
Ran: Ohk thnx! (runs away frm thr)
Reva: Oh God..thnk u thnk u!!

Ranbir runs frm thr to Armaan's cabin...knocks on the door...

Arm: CUm in!

Ranbir enters to find Armaan alone..

Arm: Yes Dr.Ranbir?
Ran: Sir apne Nakkul ko kahin dekha hai?
Arm: Jee?? (confused)
Ran: I mean woh apke paas aya tha na? kahan hai?
Arm: Dr.Nakkul yahan aye the..but woh chale gaye!
Ran: Kahan???
Arm: Mujhe woh nhe pata magar...
Ran: Ok thnx sir! (runs away)
Arm: Yeh Ranbir ko aj kya hua hai??

Again confused he passes the corridor and bumps into Abhi...

Abhi: Hey hey yar kidhar jarahe ho tussi?
Ran: Tune Nakkul ko kahin dekha hai?
Abhi: Kyun?
Ran: Bata na!
Abhi: Han maine usse abhi Pathlab jate dekha!
Ran: Ohk thnx!
Abhi: Sun toh sahi...
Ran: Baad men yar! (rushes to the pathlab and finds him thr) Nakkul!! (opens the door)
Nak: Hi Rex!
Ran: kahan tha tu tujhe kitni der se dhoond raha hon!
Nak: Main toh yahin hon..
Ran: Khair chor..mujhe bata aj Tanvi kyun nhe ayi?
Nak: Pata nhe!
Ran: Wht Pata nhe? woh tumhari behan hai aur tumhein pata nhe ke woh aj hospital kyun nhe ayi?? (angrilly)
Nak: (confused) Dekh Ranbir...mujhe nhe pata ke woh kyun nhe ayi..usse kal raat sar men bht dard tha...I guess uss wajah se woh nhe ayi!
Ran: Dard tha?
Nak: Yeaa..bht dard tha!
Ran: (nw scared) Usne koi tablet wagaira li?
Nak: Han shayad lee thi!
Ran: Wht shayad lee thi? tu pagal hai kya??
Nak: Ranbir?
Ran: Wht Ranbir? teri behan ki tabiat theek nai thi..aur tujhe malum nhe ke usne tablet liya yan nhe???!! U're disgusting Nakkul! kabhi kabhi tu kitna stupid behave karte ho!! (he leaves)
Nak: (hurt) Isse kya hua hai aj?

Abhi enters.

Abhi: Nak! Dun mind him!
Nak: Abhi? Tune dekha usne mujhse kaise behave kiya?
Abhi: I knw! isiiliye kehraha hon ke dun mind him!
Nak: I dunno Abhi magar mujhe lagta hai ke jabse Ranbir ko Intern of the month award mila hai woh bht change hogaya hai!!
Abhi: Nhe Nak! aisi baat nhe hai..woh kafi tensed hai...apni life ko leke!
Nak: Kyun?
Abhi: Bas..koi problem hai...and aj Tanvi bhi nhe ayi..toh woh aur tensed hogaya hai..! Just think tht he is doin this in love!
Nak: Hmm....okay!
Abhi: He is in love! (sternly) In love!! (Repeats)

Thn cumz outta the Lab...

Abhi: Em sure Ranbir ke tu abhi bhi Tanvi se utna hi pyar karta hai...tu uss se kabhi nafrat nhe karsakta..and i hv got a proof for tht! Ab its time for the second part of the plan!

He goes to Ranbir who is trying Tanvi's number at the nurse station..

Abhi: Ranbir kisse call karha hai?

Ran: Tanvi ko! (dialing again)

Abhi: Tanvi ko? kyun?

Ran: Tu janta hai phir bhi pochraha hai! uska koi pata nhe hai...Nakkul bhi nhe janta ke woh kyun nhe ayi..mujhe bht tension horahi hai!

Abhi: Kyun? tu toh us se ab pyar nhe karta?

Ran: (luks at him) .....

Abhi: Toh phir tujhe uski fikar kyun horahi hai?

Ran: (puts dwn the phone) ..... woh...main incharge hon sub interns ka...isiliye...(lukin on the other side)

Abhi: Oh...i see..waise agar Dr.Armaan hote tumhari jagah toh woh aise behave nhe karte...u knw ... like running to General ward thn to Armaan sir's cabin thn to Nakkul..trying out her number...woh aisa kabhi nhe karte jaisa tum karahe ho!

Ran: tum kehna kya chahte ho?

Abhi: (sternly and in anger) Tu ache se jante hai ke main kya kehrha hon! Tu abhi bhi us se pyar karta hai! Tujhe abhi bhi uski fikar hai...warna tu kabhi aise nhe behave karta!!!

Ran: Dekh Abhi mujhe iss bare men koi baat nhe karni! Aur waise bhi ab woh meri zindagi se door chali gayi hai!

Abhi: Woh chali gayi hai ya tune usse apni zindagi se nikal diya hai??

Ran: Aisi koi baat nhe hai! (controling his emotions)

Ranbir luks on the other side..Abhi notices tht he is still madly in love with her...

Abhi: (nw cooling off) Okay...as u say! anyways agar tum usse Dr.Ranbir banke dhoond rahe ho toh main 'APKO' inform kardon ke Dr.Tanvi ko kal raat se bht fever hai...

He luks at him immediately..

Ran: Fever? (worried)

Abhi: Yes,Dr.Ranbir,D r.Tanvi ko bht bukhaar hai...kal raat se isiliye woh aj nhe ayi!

Ranbir's face is immediately filled with tension...Abhi lukin at him...closely examining him...thn speaks up..

Abhi: Aur koi info chahiye DOCTOR Ranbir?? (pressing the word "doctor")
Ran: (luks at him in worry) No...thnx!
Abhi: Ur welcome!! (goes away)
Ran: Tanvi ko fever hai? woh bhi kal raat se...aur uske paas abhi koi bhi nhe hai? :(

He goes to the parking lot ... sits in his car and drives towards Tanvi's house...

His face full of tension...he remembers his behaviour towards her last nite...mayb he was very rude and harsh...not maybe surely he was...squeezing through the traffic,he drives as fast as he could...His eyes wet...his throat dry...

"I wanna heal, I wanna feel what I thought was never real
I wanna let go of the pain I’ve held so long
(Erase all the pain till it’s gone)
I wanna heal, I wanna feel like I’m close to something real
I wanna find something I’ve wanted all along
Somewhere I belong

And I’ve got nothing to say
I can’t believe I didn’t fall right down on my face
(I was confused)
Looking everywhere only to find
That it’s not the way I had imagined it all in my mind
(So what am I)
What do I have but negativity
’Cause I can’t justify the way, everyone is looking at me
(Nothing to lose)
Nothing to gain/ hollow and alone
And the fault is my own, and the fault is my own"

He breaks the forth signal on his way...risking his life..coz he knows that his Tanvi is not well...and thr is no one with her right nw...!

He finally reaches her house...runs to the door and rings the bell thrice...a small girl opens the door after 10 min...

Ran: Tanvi hai?? (quickly..trying to catch his breath)
Girl: Ap kon?
Ran: Main...main uska ... friend hon!
Girl: Main bhi unki friend hon..!
Ran: Woh ghar pe hai?
Girl: Han hai..magar bht beemar hai...ap uske friend hain isiliye milne de rahi hon warna ...
Ran: Kahan hai woh?
Girl: Andar apne room men...pata hai usko three time vomiting hue hai!
Ran: (shocked) KYA??? Thrice??
Girl: Hmm! (confirming)
Ran: Mujhe...mujhe inform nhe kia?
Girl: Nhe...Tanvi kehrahi thi ke woh kisi ko disturb nhe karna chahti!

Without listening to her rushes to Tanvi's room and opens the door quickly...

Ran: TANVI ??? (shouts)

Silence....!!

Scene:5

Rahul-Muskaan-Rohan

Muskaan is in the kitchen while Rahul is watching Tv!

Rahul: Muskaan!! (shouts) Khana ban gaya kya? bht bhook lagi hai!
Musk: Haan! bas do minute!
Rah: Jaldi karo yaar!!

After 15min..

Mus: Rahul!! (shouts)
Rah: Haan!!
Mus: Dekho toh sahi ke Rohan kahan hai...itni der se awaz nhe ayi uski?
Rah: Zarur koi shaitani karha hoga! beta kiska hai
Mus: Tera!!
Rah: Lekin lagta nhe hai...bilkul ladki bana ke rakha hua hai usse...tumhare saath cooking men help karta hai...table set karne men...yaan phir khana lagane men!
Mus: Rahul! jab tak uska admission nhe hoga tab tak woh ghar pe kya kare? isiliye usse busy rakhne ke liye yeh chote mote kaam karwati hon!
Rah: Han chote mote kaam karwa isse! (shouting)
Mus: Rahul toh tu kya chahta hai ke Rohan tere jaisa ban jaye?
Rah: Han...akhir woh ladka hai...lekin tu yeh baat nhe samjhegi...aur waise bhi woh mujhse zyada tujhse pyar karta hai!
Mus: WOh toh karega! akhir maa jo hon!
Rah: Whatevr!
Mus: Tu jake usse dekh...woh kahan hai!!
Rah: Ek second...(he goes to Rohan's room) Rohan!! Oh shaitaan kahan ho?
Mus: (shouts frm the kitchen) Rahul theek se baat karo mere bete se!
Rah: Han jaise mera toh woh kuch nhe lagta!! Rohan!! abey oye maa ke ladle kahan ho??

Rahul enters his own room and switches on the lights to find little Rohan holding his toy mike standing on the bed wearing his batman outfit...starts to sing his baby poem...!!

Rohan: (in a very cute voice)

"You are my honey bunch..sugar plump..
Pumy umpy ... pumpkin...
You are my sweety pie...

You are cuppy cake gum drop...
Slikum plikum your..
The apple of my eye...!! (gestering wid his hand)

And I love u soo..
And i want u know..
That i'll always be right here..

And I love to sing..
Presongs to you..
Because You Are So Dear!!!" :) :)

Ends the song leaving tears in Rahul's eyes...Rahul goes and instantly hugs his son tight..who has proved today with his dear voice that a child loves his parents equally...

Rohan: Papa...ap kyun cry karhe ho? (innocently)
Rahul: ..... Mujhe nhe pata tha ke Rohan papa se itna love karte ho!
Rohan: Papa ap cry mat karo...(wiping his tears)
Rahul: Nhe Rohan...main cry nhe karonga! (hugs him again)

After the hug...

Rohan: Apko poem gud laga papa?
Rahul: han mera baccha...bht gud laga!! Kisne sikhaya?
Rohan: Mama ne...unhone bola ke Rohan yeh poem Papa ke liye sing kare toh papa Rohan ko kiss karenge isiliye Rohan ne papa ke liye yeh poem sing kiya!
Rahul: (kisses him)

Rohan shows his thumb to Muskaan who is standing at the door...! Rahul turns to find her standing...

Rahul: Muskaan tune...
Muskaan: Ab toh yakeen hogaya na ke Rohan hum donon se equally pyar karta hai?

Rahul shws his arms to her asking for a hug...She cumz and hugs both the husband and son...the true angels of her life...

Rohan: Mama ab ap bhi cry karahe ho...Rohan ne apko sad kar diya? (innocently and wid a sad face)
Muskaan: Nhe mera baby! (carresing his cheek) Rohan ne aj mama aur papa donon ko bht happy kiya hai!! :)
Rohan: Oh toh Rohan gud boy hai!!?
Rahul: Rohan very gud boy hai!!
Rohan: Yaay!! (hugs both of them tightly) Rohan apse bht love karta hai papa mama!!
Rah-Mus: Papa mama bhi Rohan se bht love karte hain!! :) :) :)

Scene:6
Tanvi's house

Ranbir opens the door quickly...

Ran: TANVI ??? (shouts)

Silence...!!

Ran: Tanvi? (nervously) Tanvi??

The girl cumz frm behind...

Ran: Tanvi kahan hai??
Girl: Pata nhe abhi yahin toh thi? Kahan gayi? (goes into the room)
Ran: Tanvi?? kahan jasakti hai?
Girl: Main neeche check karke ati hon! (she goes outta the room)

Ranbir steps inside the room...the room properly made up.A tissue box kept on the bed with a thermometer...A book kept beside her bed...and a photo graph kept beside her pillow...He goes to her bed , Bends dwn to the pillow in order to take the photo , he finds the pillow all wet...A thought flashes in his mind...
"She has been crying all over??"

He bends dwn to take the photograph...he turns the pic..it was Tanvi's and his photo...
He luks on the other side of the bed to find a bag filled wid her clothes and other things! "She is leaving?" he thinks...he was still looking at the pic whn suddenly he hears a noise..he looks back to find Tanvi coming out of the washroom..she switches the light off and thn luks at him...

Tan: Ranbir tum?? (thn shudders) Tu phir se sapna dekh rahi hai Tanvi! yeh Ranbir nhe hai..sirf tera waham hai!

Ranbir staring at her...her eyes swollen..her skin which was as white as milk was now all pale...she was in her night suit...her eyes had lost all its shine...she comes and sits on the bed..looks at him again...

Tan: Kaash tum yahan hote Ranbir..magar main janti hon ke tum busy ho...hospital men..tum yahan nhe asakte...shayad ab tumhein meri zarurat nhi hai...shayad ab tum mujhse pyar nhi karte!

The girl enters...Tanvi luks at her while Ranbir is still staring at Tanvi...

Girl: Tum yahan ho? main tumhein kabse dhoond rahi hon!
Tan: Woh Washroom men thi!
Girl: Oh..phir se vomit hue?
Tan: Nhe bas thori si.
Girl: Tum kuch kha lo na Tanvi! tumne kal raat se kuch nai khaya! Tablet bhi nai li! (this catches Ranbir's attention and he looks at the girl)
Tan: Mujhe bhook nhe hai Nisha!
Girl: Yeh tum kal raat se kehrahi ho!
Tan: Mujhe sach men bhook nhe hai!
Girl: Acha! main thori der men ati hon..mom ne bulaya hai! main jaon?
Tan: Han bhale jao!
Girl: Aur ap kuch khayenge? (lukin at Ranbir)
Tan: Kis se baat karahi hai?
Girl: Iss se! (pointing at Ranbir) Tumhein nhe dikhraha?
Tan: (luks at Ranbir in shock) Ranbir??
Girl: Oh toh tumhara naam Ranbir hai! Acha Tanvi main thori der men arahi hon!

The girl leaves..Tanvi lukin at him in shock..it wasn't her dream this time..he was here...!!

Tan: Tum yahan? kaise?
Ran: Tumhari tabiat theek nhe hai?
Tan: No..i'm fine! kisne kaha? (luks on the other side)
Ran: Mujhe Abhi ne bataya! (lukin at her)
Tan: Abhi ne? (luks at him)
Ran: Hmm...tum khud toh inform karogi nhe..upar se phone bhi nhe utha rahi thi! tumne khana nhe khaya?
Tan: Nhe...mujhe bhook nhe hai! Actually party men bht kha liya tha na!
Ran: Tanvi tumne kal raat se kuch nhe khaya!! (sternly)
Tan: Ranbir plz...mujhe bhook nai hai!
Ran: Oh...i see...aur yeh kya hai? tum kal raat se ro rahi thi?
Tan: (gasps) Nhe...kisne kaha?
Ran: Oh toh phir yeh kya hai? (shwz her the pillow)
Tan: Woh...mujhse paani gir gaya tha!
Ran: Acha...paani! Kam se kam iss baat pe toh jhoot mat bolo Tanvi!
Tan: Main jhoot bol rahi hon!?? (in anger) Maine tumse koi jhoot nhe bola Ranbir!!
Ran: Aur yeh kya hai? (pointing at the bag) Tum kahin jarahi ho?
Tan: Tum mujhse itne saare saval kyun karhe ho?
Ran: Kyunki main janna chahta hon ke tumhein kya hua hai??

Now widhout controlling herself...

Tan: Mujhe kya hua hai? (shouts) Main pochti hon ke tumhein kya hua hai Ranbir?? Uss..uss Chris ki baton men akar mujhpe shak kiya TUMNE!! Jan bochke meri duties uss ghatiya insaan ke saath lagayi TUMNE!! Bina soche samjhe mujhse rude behave kiya TUMNE!! mujhe dhuk pohanchaya TUMNE!! mera dil tora TUMNE!! aur ab TUM mujhse pochrahe ho ke mujhe kya hua hai??

Ranbir luks dwn in guilt..

Tan: Please Ranbir..ab aur nhe...mujhse aur bardhast nhe hota...mujhe aur dard mat do...maine jab bhi kisi ko chaha..kisi ko pyar kia usne mujhe cheat kiya,mera dil tora...ab mujh men aur himmat nhe hai ... main bht thak gayi hon Ranbir..bht!! (crying) Please..Bhagvan ke liye yahan se chale jao...mujhe kisi ki zarorat nhe hai!! (luks on the other side)

Ranbir's eyes are also wet with tears...no words to say he stands up and goes towards the door...looks at her one last time in pain...thn opens the door..and is about to leave whn he hears her vomiting...He rushes to her..

Ran: Tanvi!!

She vomits into the dustbin placed near the bed...he gives her the tissue...she wipes her mouth...thn he gives her a glass of water to drink..she drinks sum...

Ran: Ab theek ho?
Tan: Hmm! (returning him the glass)

He gently takes her hand in his to chck her pulse...But the hand is very hot!!

Ran: Tanvi? tumhein fever hai!! woh bhi itna zyada tht ur hand is burning??
Tan: Main theek hon Ranbir!! (leaving his hand) M fine! (luks on the other side)
Ran: No u're not! tumhein fever...
Tan: (interupts) Main theek hon Ranbir! tum please..takleef mat karo...jao yahan se! (angrily)
Ran: I'm sorry Tanvi magar main tumhein iss condition men chorke nhe jasakta !!

He takes the thermometer and goes into the washroom to wash it...after washing he steps out of the washroom and finds her unconcious lying on the bed...!!

Ran: TANVI!! (he runs to her) Tanvi!!!

He takes her in his arms...

Ran: Ankhen kholo Tanvi!! Tanvi please open ur eyes!!

The little girl enters the room...And on seeing Tanvi like this rushes to her..

Girl: Kya hua isse?
Ran: Paaani do!!

The girl hands him a glass of water...he sprinkles sum on Tanvi's face...after 2 min she slowly opens her eyes...

Ran: Tanvi! Tanvi tum theek toh ho? (quiet worried)

Tanvi slowly opens her eyes to find herself in his arms...

Tan: Paani...Paani...
Ran: Yeh lo...(makes her drink sum water) Tum theek hona?? (quiet worried)

Tanvi luks at him and her eyes immediately are filled with tears...he was still lukin at her in pain...

Ran: Please mat ro Tanvi...please...meri wajah se ab apne apko aur dard mat do...please! (nw crying himself)

She manages to sit....

Tan: ....
Ran: (lukin at the girl) Kitchen kahan hai?
Girl: Kya chahiye?
Ran: Tanvi ne kuch nhe khaya na?
Girl: Main abhi khana lati hon!

The girl goes dwnstairs to take some food...

Tan: Ranbir...(feelin very sick) Main tumhein kuch batana chahti hon...
Ran: Abhi nahi Tanvi...tumhari tabiat theek nhe hai!
Tan: Nhe Ranbir...main tumhein sach batana chahti hon...Chris ne jo bhi tumse kaha woh...
Ran: Jhoot hai! janta hon...ab samajh gaya hon...tum mere saath aisa nhe karsakti...main ... mujhse bht bari galti hogayi Tanvi...jo maine tumpe shak kiya...tum..tum bht achi ho...bht!! Main...main bht bura hon...magar main kya karta...main tumse bht pyar karta hon...tumhein leke bht possesive hon...shayad issiliye mujhse bht bari galti hogayi...i'm really sorry Tanvi!
Tan: Nhe Ranbir...tumhari galti nhe hai...shayad mujhe tumhein apne past ke baare men pehle hi bata dena chahiye tha...
Ran: Nhe Tanvi...mujhe kuch nhe janna...main sirf ab tumhare aj aur aane wale kal men jeena chahta hon...please Tanvi mujhe maaf kardo..
Tan: Ranbir...please...sun lo...mujhse ab aur boj nhe saha jaata!!
Ran: Tanvi...

The girl enters with some food...

Ran: Pehle khana kha lo phir jo kehna hai keh dena!

He takes the tray from the girl.The girl asks their leave and goes.Ranbir takes a spoon of rice and makes her eat.After the lunch...

Tan: Ranbir...
Ran: Yeh lo juice!

She drinks it...

Ran: Nw feeling better?
Tan: Hmm! thnx...!
Ran: Woh kis liye?
Tan: Mere saath rehne ke liye!
Ran: Woh toh main humesha rahonga! :) chahe tum chaho ya na chaho!
Tan: (seriously) Mujhe tumhein kuch batana hai!
Ran: Tanvi..maine kaha na..mujhe tumhare past ke baare men jan kar tumhein aur dard nhe dena! Main pehle hi bht guilty feel kar raha hon!
Tan: Nhi Ranbir...plz main aj tumhein sub kuch sach sach batana chahti hon..taake jab kabhi tumhein Chris kuch bhi kahe tum usse muh tor jawab de sako!
Ran: Tanvi I believe u..main janta hon ke mujhse galti hue..main uski baton men agaya...ek pal ke liye meri ankhon ne mujhe dhoka diya...magar nw i feel guilty...main apne kiye par bht sharminda hon! I'm extremely sorry!! :(
Tan: (wiping his tears) I knw Ranbir...but phir bhi...mujhe yeh batana hai!
Ran: Theek hai Tanvi...agar yeh sub batane se u'll feel better toh main sunne ke liye tayar hon!
Tan: Thnx...!

She luks at him deeply for a minute...then takes a deep breath and starts...

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Precap: Armaan,Riddhima,Maya and 'WOH' in theature :p

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Sooo kaisa laga?? Excited rite? me too !!! :D okay okay zyada pakaon gi nhe...
Don't forget 2 comment..ok? hehe..i'll see u all nxt tym..till thn u ppl take care of urself and other's around u...This is me Cathy/Cats/Catherine signing off 4 today ... Wishing u each and every happiness in the world ! Hv a blast!

Lots of Love,
Catherine

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It's My Life!!!

Life is tears
Life is hurt
Life is grief
Life is smiles
Life is comfort
Life is happiness
Life is pain

Life is losing loved ones...

Life is sorrow
Life is laughter
Life is change
Life is loss
Life is sad
Life is happy
Life is hurting

Life is gaining yourself...

Life is healing
Life is loving
Life is losing
Life is joy
Life is want
Life is need
Life is love

But above all... Life is worth living...!!!


It is with a kind of fear that I begin to write the history of my life. I have, as it were, a superstitious hesitation in lifting the veil that clings about my life like a mist. The task of writing the story of my life and bringing memories that have been suppressed for a long time, which I would have perhaps preferred to have remained in the sediment of my life, is a difficult one. I usually find that fact and fancy look alike across the years that link my past with the present. A few impressions stand out vividly from nearly two decades of my life. Besides, many of the joys and sorrows of childhood have lost their poignancy; and many incidents have faded from my memory. In order, therefore, not to be tedious I shall try to present in a series of fictional, non-fictional sketches; only the episodes that seem to me to be the most interesting and important. Some of you might realise who I am in due course, but I would request you to respect my anonymity and abstain from bringing my name out in the open.

I’m eagerly waiting for your response. I would start only if I get readers who are interested in letting me go down my memory lane and in reading what all I have to say about “It’s My Life...!!!”


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Chapter 7: Jab Dill Milley

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