Episode 76: Rok Sako To Rok Lo

Rok Sako Toh Rok Lo
Episode:76

Hi guys! hru all? I hope sub theek honge..long time rite?? atleast mere liye..I guess everyone knws the reason why I skipped so many days..I'm sorry for keeping u all awaited..I received ur mails..and i owe a huge thnx to everybody who mailed me...thnx alot...I guess its coz of u all tht i came bak to the blog to write again...Thnx alot everyone..I love u all soo veryy much..!!

Anyways isse pehle ke main rona start kardon here's the epi...enjoy!

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£Sam this is for u...U always wanted me to write...And ur eagerness to read these parts...I just want to say tht I really miss u alot..Wish u could cum bak..Dad,Mom and I really miss u :( Love u alot!

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Recap: Armaan announces the party.Ranbir comes to know about Chris and Tanvi.The interns go for shopping.

Scene:1
Ranbir's place

Ranbir reaches his house..rings the bell and the old maid opens the door.

Lady: Ap agaya Ranbir baba!
Rex: ......... (enters quietly)
Lady: Chalo hum abhi khana lagata hai...Ap fresh hojao!
Rex: ........ (moving twrds the stairs)
Lady: Aj humne apka fav dish banaya hai!
Rex: ..............
Lady: Ap kuch bolta kyun nai hai Ranbir baba?
Rex: ......... (strts to ascend the stairs)
Lady: Arey hum toh bhul hi gaye Tanvi ka phone aya tha..
Rex: .... (stops)
Lady: Woh kafi tensed tha ... ap se baat krne ko mangta tha...Ap usko phone krdena!
Rex: Main sone jaraha hon! (in a low tone)
Lady: Ranbir baba Tanvi ko phone kardo woh kafi tensed thi!
Rex: ......
Lady: Tanvi ko ek dafa phone toh karlo!
Rex: Main sone jaraha hon Aunty !! (trying to control his anger)
Lady: Aur agar Tanvi ka phone phir se agaya toh?
Rex: (turns in anger) TOH USSE KEH DIJIYE GA KE MAIN USKE LIYE MARR GAYA HON!!!!! (in real anger)

The lady lukin at him strangely plus in shock...Ranbir luks at her...thn feeling sorry he says..

Rex: I'm sorry aunty! meri tabiat kuch theek nai..main sone jaraha hon!
Lady: But Khana?
Rex: Mujhe bhook nhe!!

He enters the room slamming the door after him...goes to the washroom...and without removing his clothes opens the shower...As the water pours dwn frm the shower he remembers everythin...

"Main tumse bht pyar karti hon!"
"Main tumse door nahi rehsakti Ranbir!"
"Main tumhein khona nahi chahti!"

He cumz outta the washroom after changing...Thn stands in front of the miror...

"Main tumhare bagair marr jaongi Ranbir !!"

Rex: Arghhh (bangs the mirror into pieces) Jhoot !! (starts to cry) Sub jhoot !! Tumne mujhse jhoot bola...mujhe dhoka diya!! Mere pyar se khelti rahi tum !!!

Sits dwn on the ground and luks into the broken pieces of miror..

Rex: KYUN TANVI...KYUN KIYA AISA...KYUN MERE PYAR KO ISTAMAL KARTI RAHI...KYUN??!!!! (shouts)

Stands up and throws the things kept on the dressing table dwn...!!

Rex: Arghh!! Hah...SNIFF...(starts to cry and sits dwn on the ground)

The lady enters..

Lady: Ranbir baba!! (rushes to him)
Rex: (still crying loudly)
Lady: (hugs him) Ranbir baba...kya hua apko? Arey ! (luks at his hand) Apke haath men toh chot aya hai!
Rex: (still crying) Chot toh yahan mere dil pe ayi hai !! Yeh ... yeh hath ki chot toh mamoli hai ... yahan yahan...(hits his hand on his chest) Yahan dard horaha hai...aur yeh dard iss chot se bht bara hai!! Bht bara hai...(cries even more)
Lady: Ranbir baba sambhalen ap apne ap ko! sub theek hojayega!
Rex: Sub theek nai hosakta aunty...usne mujhe dhoka diya hai..she..she has betrayed me!!!!!! ;(

The bell rings..

Rex: She has betrayed me...!!!!
Lady: Ranbir baba...control karen..sub theek hojayega!! Ap aise nhe toot sakte..ap toh bht strong haina?
Rex: Meri himmat woh thi...meri taakat woh thi ... Ab...ab main bilkul akela hon !!
Lady: Ap akele nai ho...God apke saath hain..ap apne apko control karo...
Rex: Main usse bht pyar karta hon! (still crying)
Lady: Apko apne apko strong banana hi hoga...apko usse ehsaas dilana hoga ke jo bhi usne kia woh galat hai !!
Rex: (stops to cry)
Lady: Ap apne apko strong banao..aur usse bata do ke ap nhe toot sakte itni jaldi..ap usse itni ehmiyat hi na do...ap aise behave karen ke woh apke liye koi mayine nai rakhti!
Rex: Ap theek kehrhi hain aunty !! Main apne apko strong banaoga aur usse bata donga ke mujhe koi farak nai parta woh jaisa bhi kare mujhe koi farak nai parega!!
Lady: Hmm.. main khana lagati hon ap ake kha lo!
Rex: Nai Aunty i don't feel lyk eating...
Lady: U will hv to...Remember wht u said just nw?
Rex: No aunty not today i relle dun feel like eating! gud nite!
Lady: Gud nite Ranbir baba! Ap take care karen!

She leaves the room...The guard cumz to her and says tht a young maiden has cum to meet Ranbir...She asks him to call the girl inside...The girl enters..

Lady: Tanvi ap?
Tan: Aunty mujhe Ranbir se milna hai!
Lady: WOh bht sad hai..woh apse nai mil sakta!
Tan: Aunty plz..sirf ek baar...i promise main fir nai aaongi!
Lady: But woh...
Tan: Plz aunty!!
Lady: Ohk...go he is in his room!
Tan: Thnx aunty!!

She rushes upstairs to his room...opens the door slowly...And finds him sitting on the bed wid his hands on face...

Tan: (slowly enters) Ranbir !!

He removes his hands and luks at her...First gives her a sad face but thn immediately turns away...

Tan: Ranbir...
Ran: ..........
Tan: Ranbir Chris ne jo bhi tumse kaha woh...
Ran: (snaps) Woh sach hai...janta hon!
Tan: Nai woh sach nai hai..Chris aur mere beech kuch nai hai!
Ran: Tanvi plz..mujh men aur jhoot sehne ki shakti nai hai...plz jao yahan se !! (controlling his anger)
Tan: Ranbir...plz ek baar meri baat suno..Chris ne tumse jo kaha woh sach hai...magar usne tumse jo batein kahin hain woh saari sach nai....
Ran: (luks at her angrily) Janta hon...woh sub sach hai...aur tum ek jhoot..meri zindagi ka sub se bara jhoot...dhoka..fareb!!! (shouts) Aur ab main tumhari surat bhi nai dekhna chahta!! Plzz for God Sake chali jao yahan se!!
Tan: Ranbir plz meri baat ek baar suno...main tumse bht pyar karti hon!!
Ran: PYAAR!!! (holding her arms tightly) Pyar ka lafz tumhare muh se acha nai lagta Tanvi!!! Tum jaisi ladkiyon ko toh maza ata hai..har ladke ke saath pyar ka natak karne men...Tum....(leaves her) Mujhe sharam aati hai Tanvi...Ke maine...ke maine tum jaisi ladki se itna pyar kia!! (lukin on the othr side) .... Kya kami thi mere pyar men ... maine itna toot ke tumhein chaha... (sadly) tumhe har woh khushi deni chahi jiski tum haqdaar thi...magar tumne.. (shouts) tumne mujhe dhoka diya...
Tan: .......... (crying loudly)
Ran: Afsos iss baat ka nai hai Tanvi ke tumhare aur Chris ke beech koi najayiz rishta tha...
Tan: (luks at him in shock..."hw can he say 'najayiz'...?")
Ran: Balke afsos toh iss baat ka hai ke mujhe yeh baat kissi aur se pata chali..! Girlfriends meri bhi thi...magar unke baare men tum janti thi...maine apni har choti bari baat tumko bataye..tumse kuch nai chupaya...aur tumne badle mere saath... :(
Tan: Ranbir?? (luks at his hand) Tumhare haath pe chot ayi hai... (abt to move forward)
Ran: (a bit loud) Plz Tanvi...ab aur nai...mujh men aur himmat nai hai...main aur tumhara ehsaan nai seh sakta...toh plz Bhagvan ke liye yahan se chali jao...iss se pehle main kuch kar bethon!!! (luks on the othr side)

She is lukin at him in shock...tears flowing dwn her eyes...taking away all the shine of her face wid them which was nw pale...her lips wanted to say something but her voice dint cum off...she moves a step bak...

Tan: Agar tumhari yahi marzi hai toh...toh main tumhein aur disturb nai karongi...main jarhi hon Ranbir...tumhari zindagi se...humesha humesha ke liye...magar main tumse ek baat kehna chahon gi...ke ... ke main tumse ... tumse bht ... (takes a deep breath) ... Gud bye Ranbir...humesha khush rehna...aur ho sake toh mujhe maaf kardena... :( bye!!

She finally turns around and opens the door to leave...his bak facing her...she luks at him one more time...hoping to see his face...hoping that he might stop her...but in vain...he dint turn...she moves out of the room slowly...and closes the door behind her...

Ranbir turns round with tears in his eyes...

Ran: Mat jao Tanvi...plz don't go...i cannot live without you...plzz...

He falls on his knees .... begins to cry for his love which has now vanished...how could she do this to him....the girl whom he loved more than anyone had left him like a piece of toy...and had broken his heart like a piece of glass...

"Bejaan dil ko...bejaan dil ko...
Bejaan dil ko tere...ishq ne zinda kar diya...
Phir tere ishq ne hi...iss dil ko daba diya....

Tadap Tadap ke iss dil se ahh nikal ti gayi...
Mujhko saza di pyar ki aisa kya gunaah kiya...
Toh lut gaye..han lut gaye..
Toh lut gaye..hum teri muhabbat men...

Scene:2
Outside

Tanvi comes out of house...slowly walks to her car...sits inside ... luks at the house again...thn starts to drive the car....

Tan: Tum mujhse pyar nai karte Ranbir...agar karte toh mujhpe bharosa hota...tum Chris ki baton pe yakeen nai karte...Tum... tum mujhpe bharosa karte... :( magar afsos... ke tum mujhe kabhi nai samajh paye...kabhi nai...aisa kyun hota hai Bhaghvan...ke ap jisse bht pyar krte ho ussi ko safayi deni parti hai...ussi ko harr ilzaam ka jawab dena parta hai...halake usse toh khud ap pe bharosa hona chahiye...ap pe yakeen hona chahiye...magar nai...tumhein mujhpe yakeen nai hai Ranbir!! matlab tumne kabhi mujhse pyar nai kiya!! kabhi nai !! :(

Scene:3
Ranbir's house

He is sitting dwn wid his arms on the bed and head on his arms...he remembers...their first meeting in the club...thn the hospital...their hatred for eachothr...which was soon turned into love...his confession...the love song...thn the wedding...he wore Indian dress for the first tym coz of her...the way she chnged his life-style...frm a flirty guy to a decent but cute person...and nw..everything was over...all the love and affection lost...he could see her real face her real personality now...Ranbir luks at the Idol of Jesus Christ placed on the table...!

Agarr mile Khuda toh...
Poochon ga Khuda ya..
Jism mujhe de ke miti ka..
Sheeshe ka dil kyun banaya...
Uspe diya fitrat ke woh karta hai muhabbat
Wah re Wah teri gudrat...

Sisak sisak ke iss dil se aah nikal ti rahi..
mujhko saza di pyar ki...
aisa kya gunaah kiya..
toh lut gaye..han lut gaye...toh lut gaye hum teri muhabbat men...

Scene: 4
Sanjeevani---Early nxt morning

Nurse Station:

All the interns are present in the nurse station waiting for Anjali to come...

Abhi: Tanvi Ranbir nai aya?
Tan: Mu..mujhe nhe pata.
Chris: Mayb he won't cum !!
Maya: I guess coz last night bhi woh bht tensed lagrha tha! Tanvi tum gayi thi na uske paas kya hua?
Tan: Woh...actually tensed nai tha..thak gaya tha!!
Reva: Mayb he was really tired!

Anjali enters...

Anj: Gud morning Interns !!
ALL: Gud morning!
Anj: As everyone of u knws tht this month is coming to an end and after every 1 month we announce the intern of the month award which is to be given to the highest scorer i.e. Intern!
All: Yes maam!
Anj: So tomorow before the party in Sanjeevani we will announce the Intern of the Month award along with the best team work award!!! Now for ur duties...

Dr.Nakkul and Dr.Tanvi general Ward!
Dr.Reva and Dr.Abhimanyu Path lab!
Dr.Chris and Dr.Maya

Reva: And maam wat abt Dr.Ranbir?
Anj: Woh hain kahan?
Reva: Maam he is not here yet!
Anj: Not here?? He is late! (chcking the watch) Unhein khayal nai hai apni duties ka! Anyways waise bhi woh Rectal exams de rahe hain!

Ab-Nak-Reva-Maya: RECTAL EXAMS ???!!
Anj: (luk at thm in anger) So? any problem? ap logon ko bhi dene hain??
All: NO MAAM!
Anj: Thn get bak to ur duties!! (she leaves)
Ab: Rex ko Rectal exams dene hain???
Tan: hmm...
Maya: But kyn?
Tan: (lukin around) Take care..hum baad men milte hain! (she leaves)
Maya: Isko kya hua?

Ranbir cumz...

Chris: Hey Ranbir!!
Rex: (luks at him angrily but thn recovers) Hi!! (lukin at others and trying to smile)
Abhi: Tujhe Rectal examz dene hain? but why?
Rex: Bas ek galti hogyi!
Maya: huh? Galti?
Rex: Bht bari galti hogayi!!
Reva: Ohk...guys lets go warna Anjali maam phir se agyi na toh hum sub ko rectal exams dene honge!
Maya: Hmm rite...Acha listn Rex Tanvi ki duty General ward men hai!
Rex: So? maine pocha kya?
Maya: No i was wondering if....
Rex: Whtevr! i dun care...! (he leaves)
Chris: Whts wid him?
Reva: C'mon guys lets go...and stop wondering around!! (Nak,Reva along wid Maya leave)
Abhi: Main janta hon Rex ko...koi na koi problem toh hai...and i will find it out!!! (leaves)
Chris: Brother !! U're rite...problem toh hai! But u'll never resolve it ... NEVER!!

Scene:5
Ridhima's cabin

Maya knocks on the door..

Maya: May I cum in?
Rid: Yes Maya cum in...sit!!

She sits...

Maya: Apne mujhe bulaya mom?
Rid: hmm...tumse baat krni thi!
Maya: Jee kahiye?
Rid: Maya tumhare papa aur main chahte hain ke ab tum humare saath apne ghar men raho!
Maya: Jee?
Rid: Hmm...main aur Armaan chahte hain ke tum humare saath raho...apne ghar men...!!
Maya: Mama main kaise?
Rid: Arey main kaise ka kya matlab hai?? Tum humari beti ho...!!
Maya: I knw!
Rid: Toh phir? u hv to cum wid us tday ok??
Maya: Hmm...okay mama main apke saath aj ayongi!! :)

Scene:6

Abhi: KYA???!!!!!!!!!!
Maya: Abhi??
Ab: Lekin kyun?
Ma: Abhi woh mere parents hain..and beti apne parents ke saath hi rehti haina!!?
Ab: Han par kyun?
Ma: ABHI!!??? (glares)
Ab: Okay sorry i over-reacted!!
Ma: Yes u did...(starts to walk in the corridor)
Ab: Okay..so i won't be able to call u?
Ma: Yupp!
Ab: Kyun?? main toh karonga!!
Ma: Arey abhi toh tum kehrhe the ke u won't call!
Ab: Han lekin i'll!!
Ma: Okay i hope dad won't mind....!!
Ab: Why would he..??
Ma: I guess...anyways ab mujhe jana hai bye!
Ab: Ohk..(lost in thoughts) I wonder if he would allow...
Ma: ABHI!! (glaring again)
Ab: H-uhuh...
Ma: C'mon..main jarhi hon! bye!!
Ab: Ok bye..(she leaves) I guess woh allow karenge..or no..nhe nhe yes...wht if no????

Scene:7

General Ward

Nakkul chcking his patient..Tanvi engrossed in a file or her thoughts??

Nak: Hey Tanvi..tumne Mrs.Arti ka file work complete kia?
Tan: ......... (lukin into her file)
Nak: (luks at the file) Tanvi? tum kya krhi ho? (a bit louder)
Tan: Huh..file..file parhrhe hon!
Nak: Ulti file??
Tan: Ulti? (she luks at the file) Oh..nhe..(turns the file) Actually main...
Nak: Choro...main tumse kya pochrha tha..hah..Mrs.Arti ki file?
Tan: Woh Nurse station pe hai..collect krlo waha se!
Nak: Ok. (he leaves)
Tan: (luks at her patient who is lukin at her) Kya hua?
Pat: Tum apni file nhe parahi thi!
Tan: Matlab?
Pat: Tum kuch aur sochrhi thi!
Tan: Han toh??
Pat: Toh tumne jhoot kyun bola uss doctor se?
Tan: (sits nxt to her) Maine usse kuch nai kaha...
Pat: Lekin tumhara meaning wahi tha.
Tan: Kuch batein aisi hoti hain jo kissi ko batayi nai jati! (takin her file heads towards the fire-escape)

She reaches the door...peeps inside it to find sumone else sitting thr...

Tan: Yeh kon hai?

Scene:8
Pathlab

Reva has been assigned duty in the pathlab..but it seems tht no doctor is intrested in their work...

Reva: Usko western type ladkiyan nai pasand? (remembers "Mujhe total desi type ladkiyan pasand hain") Lekin main toh western dresses hi pehanti hon...(luks at her jeans) Toh ab??

Abhi: (enters) Kisse batein krhi ho??

Reva: Huh? kisi se nai.

Abhi: Oh..shayad maine suna..!

Reva: KYA??!!

Abhi: (luks at her) Wo wo wo..chillax! Itni excited horhi ho jaise maine koi tumhara secret sun liya ho! (holding a test-tube)

Reva: huh..(relaxes.."Shayad kuch nai suna") err..Abhi!

Abh: Huh?
Reva: Agar main Shalwar kameez pehnon..toh...eer..
AB: toh?
Reva: Toh kaisi lagongi??
Ab: Tum?? heheh..shalwar kameez..!! hahaha!! (laughs)
Reva: Abhi! main serious hon!
Ab: C'mon Reva...tum aur shalwar kameez...gimme a break dear! hahaha...u'll luk strange!! (leaves)
Reva: Strange? (makes a sad face) Ab kya karon??

Scene:9
Fire-escape

She opens the door and steps inside..The person sitting doesn't notice her..she goes and luks at him..

Tan: Ranbir?

Ranbir turns to find her standing...his eyes full of tears...pale face..which has lost its shine...she luks at him in pain...he stands up to leave...

Tan: Ranbir...kya hum men itni doori agayi hai ke ek minute baat bhi nai karsakte?
Ran: Doori tum leke ayi ho Tanvi...main nhe! (leaves)

She sits dwn....her head resting on the wall...

Tan: Doori main nhe...tum laye ho Ranbir...mujhpe shak krke... (sighs) Kyun maine pyar kiya? na karti toh shayd yeh dard nai sehna parta !! :( Pyar karne ki itni bari saza...! (begins to cry) Kyun? kyun Ranbir? hum men bharosa nai hota? kyun har kahani ki tarah humari kahani men bhi vishvaas nai hai...we don't have faith in eachother? (wipes her tears) Lekin main tumhara intizaar karongi...main janti honke mujhse door tum bhi khush nai ho...magar phir bhi tum mere paas nai aoge..! but i'll w8 for u...chahe meri poori zindagi kyun na kat jaye...iss intizaar men..!!

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Lots of Love,
Catherine

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Hi guys! hru all? I hope sub theek honge..long time rite?? atleast mere liye...I hope tht u all still remember me? Yaan bhul gaye hmm?? These days were very hard for me..very! The thoughest days of my life! I dunno how I spent my nights...anyways won't get into that!
I realllyyyy missed u alll very much!! U guys hv always been there for me in my heart...! Thnx alot for all the support..for all the mails and cards! I am very proud to say that I belong to a very lovable and caring Blog Family,which is led by one of the most beautiful person in this world! :) Love u all !!


Now some words for my very dear friends:-

Belmi,
Dear...in just a less period of time u've managed to book a very special corner for urself in my heart...I really love u and owe soo much to u...thnx alot for everything..If Jesus asks me for a wish which he will grant i would wish to see u once...! :) love u loads...always !

Sanju Bhaiya,
Welcome bak..apki posts toh miss hogayin bht i'll read thm soon deff!!

PnP,
I'll mail u soon dear !! Chorongi nhe :p

Vish,
Welcome bak dear! Apse baat nai hue but i'll cum in the GupShup esp 2 talk to u! And i'm very happy that u're bak again!

Simi jee,
Apka ff..hmm...it was kool dear ... subse hatke tha...the Rathode and Khannas...cute episode! Sorry comment nhe karpayi but i promise to comment in da nxt part...promise! and ya jaldi post karne ka! :)

Miths,
I read ur ff too..Armaan's new style was awesum! Lookin forward for more..! sorry couldn't comment but will do in the cumin epis..! :) love ya!
And Yes..I'll definetly mail u RSTRL's nxt epis but only on one condition..ke apko blog pe wapis aana hoga...plzz for everyone who loves u..main nhi janti ke apne blog kyun chora..but i knw one thing tht everyone including me misses u alot..I hope u're reading this..Its my humble request...I've also mailed u..plzz cum bak...This blog is like a futile land without 'Karan ki dewaani Mithila' :(

Khushboo,
Welcome bak to u too...! I'll mail u soon!

Prachi di,Prats,Belmi,Karan,Rans,Akshu,and Miths for ur mails! Love u guys alot!

Neha Di,
I also missed u alot! Rans told me abt the chat..I also missed u guys in every breath of mine!

Keddie,
Hey thr baby! I also missed u alot! I'll read ur story soon and will comment on it! Love u too..!

Karan,
Happy belated Birthday! Sry couldn't wish u..but i wrote on ur fb wall chck it!

Others all,
Keddie,Yashika,Karan,VJ,Abeer,Akshu,Angel,Sanjana,Ehsaas,Riza,Aman, Pooja,Kruttika,Diksha,Jay Bhaiyya,Lovy,Aditya,Armaan,Heart,Shruti,Zara, Payal,Rini,Ritika di,Prachi Di,EDK angels,Salmaan,Dipika,Nikki,Amber,Raaj, Nishi,Zoya,Zahra,Sitara...

And many more friends and supporters of mine on the blog..I just wanna say u tht i really missed u all ... Thnx for all ur support and love which has brought me this far...!! :)

And lastly Modji,
I hope apne mujhe miss kia ho?? Hmm iss khamoshi ka matlab main kya samjhon...han ya phir na?? hehe..apne mujhe bhale na miss kia ho but frankly speaking sub ke saath maine apko bhi bhtttt saraaa miss kia! Love u infinity!!

RSTRL FANS:
Hi ppl! hru all? I missed everyone of u shooo much! Ur comments, mails,suggestions..everythin!! I guess everyone knws the reason why I skipped so many days..I'm sorry for keeping u all awaited..I received ur mails..and i owe a huge thnx to everybody who mailed me...thnx alot...I guess its coz of u all tht i came bak to the blog to write again...Thnx alot everyone..I love u all soo veryy much..!!
And yes i'll post the nxt epi i.e. Episode:76 of RSTRL tonite...! Will be w8in for comments! Love u all..! :)

Okay guys thts all i wanted to say...Will be lukin forward to talk to u all...!!
Take care of urself and other's around u...Thnx once again for all the love and support!!

Lots of love,
Catherine

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Part 3: Ssshh...Ridhhima Rona Ban Karo

part 3

thnxxx alot for commenting to all of u ....each and every person...though the comments were less but they mean alot to me..!!

and a very very HAPPY FREINDSHIP DAY TO ALL MY SWEET FRENDS...AND TO ALL MY TO-BE-FRENDS..AND TO ALL THE BLOGGERS..!!

SO HERE GOES THE NEXT PART :

Now armaan was finally ready to go to sanjeevani He reached and ........
In locker room :
Atul : Hi armaan..
A : hi champ..!!
Atul : kaisa hai ??
A : theek hu..
Atul :arre itna dull dull sa theek kyu keh raha hai...thore josh main bol..
Atul : chal once again..once again..
Atul : kaisa hai armaan??
A : kaisa dikh raha hun..??
Atul : (when he was about to say something ,interrupted by:
R : (when she finished peeping and setting her locker) vo kitne achhe se puch raha hai...tum dhang se jawab nahi de sakte ??
A : main theek hun atul,raat main bohot acchi neend ayi aur bohot accha sapna bhi dekha,par suba utha to pata chala ki vo sapna hi tha , vaise muje raat main aise hi sapne ate hain jo muje lagta suba uthakr pata chalte hain sapne hi the ...fir main utha maine nahaya apne kapde pehne..sanjeevani tak khud drive kar ke aya aur ab finally tumhare samne hu{(in a low tone) apni suba kharab kar raha hu }kaisa lag raha hu ??
Atul :tuje ek baat batau ??
A : haaan plzzzzzzz main suba se beetab hu teri " baatein sunne ke liye..
Atul : agar tu roz iss tarah se apni raatcharya(dincharya used for day)batayega to kirti mam hume hospital se nikal degi..
A : oh vo hitler..
Atul : haan vahi hitler i mean Dr. kirti jo bohot gusse main hai hai and ab tuje ...


Kirti :double duties doongi..
A : Dr. kirti sach main...shit...tu tu...tuje to main chodunga nahi....(and atul ran frm there..bye armaan..sorryy)
K : Dr. armaan ab apko to main nahi chodungi...
A : (in a low tone) aur hum sabklo lagta tha aap Dr. shubhankar se pyarr karti hain
R&K(together): humne sun liya...
A : oh to apne sun liya..huh..sun liya aapne..(slightly smiling so that to change or drop the topic)
K : jee hann....
A : (feeling courage..courageously):to uysme kya badi baat hai ...jiske pass kan hai vo sunega hi....vaise bhi ladies ke kaan tez hote hain....
R : armaaaaaannnn...mai bhi ????
A : whatt ???( as if not knowing anything)
after a second.understanding what Dr. kirti is gng to do...
K : ridhima...catch...hold...(lil bit confused)
R : (shying) mam...how can i !!
A : suddenly huging ridhima and aparting and....i love you ridhima..and ran...as fast as he could..
R : totally blushing by the time...
K : oh god..seeing ridhima..and ran behind armaan...
and finally the race stopped in Dr. kirti's cabin.


in the cabin : ( where ridhima is also present)
K : to Dr. armaan aap kya keh rahe the..abt ladies..
A : mam vo (widout hesitating)ladies ke kaan bohot tez hote hain...
R : (on the side of kirti facing armaan, as she was helping kirti in some work)in mute voice , signaling him...dr. kirti Dr. kirti..!!
A ; bye basket..!!
R : (finally, leaving)bye..!
K : Dr. armaan....


kynki aaj aapki shirt ka colour meri file se matching hai isliye main aapko chod deti hun.,...
A : relieved.. thnxxx mam
K (sternly): but.....

you're hot as ever......

R : (frm back):maam.....aap iske sath flirt nahi kar sakti
A & K together:tum ab tak gai nahi??
K : Dr.Ridhima on duty "now"!!
A : jao na...ridhima aaj Dr. kirti kitne acche mood main hai....
R : mood my "foot"..!
A : Feet
R :what?
K : ridhimaa.....he means plural..plural of Foot..haina Dr. armaan??


And for the last time Ridhima shaked armaan..and screamed in his ears.......
R : armaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaannnnnnnnnnn....!!
A : huh kyha hai chialla kyu rahi ho ??
R ; kahan kho jate ho baar baar ?? atul bhi bichara hi klarke chale gaya aur tumne use jawab tak nahi dia...amin itni der se tumhe bula rahi hun...no response...??Dr. kirti hume duties dengi chalo...time bhi ho gaya hai...chaloooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo(almost pulling)

A : ridhima...
R(hoping to listen the same) : i love u too armaan....
A (not even knowing what did she said jus now..)Dr. kirti to vegetarian hai na ??

( hey i know this part isn't so funny ...i am sorry...i wanted to tell u that i may not be able to post till 16-17 as some guests are to arrive...but still i'll try..)

enjoy life
have fun
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What Riddhima Gupta wants She gets !

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Chapter 3: Dear Diary...

"Dear Diary"

Chapter 3
Birthday Hues


Dear Diary,
=^.^= ! 17th June ! Hummmmmmm...... The best day of my life.....It was her BIRTHDAY. She's a total Party-Animal ,so, I decided to give her a SURPRISE. I organised/organized a party for her at the BEACH.

Details:

I kept her busy till the others left for the party....believe me.....it wasn't easy!! I DANCED, I FOUGHT, I SANG, I JUMPED, I SOMERSAULTED, I did everything that was possible..just to keep her busy.She acted like a 5 year old Kid.
Then I had to forcefully pick her in my arms (Wink...Wink....Blush) and take her to the car, because she was not ready to leave Sanjeevani. Then she totally damaged my car with her fists and Anjali's lipstick(I Don't know what was it doing with her). She acted like a 7 year old Kid !!
Twenty Minutes later, we entered a pulsating throng, which was the party...it was NOT the party I planned/expected.... The floor was sticky and sandy. The music was loud and the conversations were louder. She was really happy to see the party and due to her excitement she HUGGED ME! and then ran towards the crowd due to her embarrassment. She acted like a 10 year old kid!!
After a few hours of dancing, I sat on the counter.. because i really HATE loud music. I saw her coming in my direction...with her face covered with cake !! She didn't even bother to wipe it off. She acted like a 16 year old kid

"Thanks" she said
"For what?" I ask
"For this party"
"Oh! Its....its Okay.......by the way are you really having fun?" I ask
"To be honest I'm not" she replied
"Wow" I say...smiling and reveal my dimples
"Cute Dimples" she said...touching my cheek
"Thanks" I say, rather blushingly

She looks around humming the tunes, which were playing at the dance floor...
"I'm not having a good time either, wan't to hang around for some air?" I ask
"Definitely" She replied

A few moments later we were away from the party, in blissful near-silence. We could still hear the noise from the party, but the deafening roar had mellowed to a gentle lull.

"This is so much better" She said, sitting down, wetting her feet in the sea.
"No Kidding" I say, following her example
"You known what Armaan?" she said, looking at me with her cake-layered face.
"Hmm..." I say, taking out a handkerchief from my pocket and wiping her face.
"You're the best person I've ever met."

I stop . Our faces just an inch away....I look in her caramel eyes.....I could see "LOVE" (OMG! LOVE!!!!) I could've collapsed/drowned in them... but she looked away on the right time . She acted like a 23 year old "Lover Girl"!!

"Thanks and you too!" I say.
I was On cloud Nine !!!
I LOVE HER !!!

Love,
Armaan {Armi, Maan, Maani,Bhai,Jangli,Chweetu,Boy-friend,Nautanki}

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Chapter 5: The Legacy Of Divine Love

The Legacy of Divine Love

FF Name: The Legacy Of Divine Love
Pattern: Book (In Chapters)
FF Writer: Angel


Chapter:5- Feelings

This part’s specially for Karan Uncle (for me..!!), a sort of a wish for his Birthday from my side..!! I know..I know..You turn 16 today, so, I’m still Kiddo..!!

Happy Birthday Karan..!!

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Recap: We came to know that Anjali and Atul are a happy couple-to-be and are very much in love now. A kind of interaction between Armaan and Riddhima that showed the amount of love they have stored in them for each other. A lot of truths revealed, from Rajeev’s relationship with the Guptas to the secret of Shashank. We also came to know that the fight because of which AR had separated was a plan of no one but Doctor Shashank Gupta himself. Shashank was bursting the truth out of rage in front of Anjali and Raajeev, when they heard the door of the office closing and somebody’s fading footsteps. Raajeev went to check out who it really was BUT..Now, READ AHEAD.

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Shashank, on the other hand, couldn’t control himself, and burst out, “HAAN..mein ne karwayi thi woh ladayi….!! Mein ne hi Armaan aur Riddhima ko alag karwaya tha. Kyunki mein jaanta hoon ke Armaan Riddhima ko Kabhi khush nahin rakh sakay ga. Yeh sirf do-chaar din ke pyaar ka junoon hai jo jald hi uttar jaayega, rather uttarna shuroo bhi ho chuka hai, dekha nahin tum ne kaise uss ne itne dinon mein aik dafaa bhi Riddhima ke baare mein nahin socha aur naa hi poocha? Aik dafaa bhi uss ko khayal nahin aaya ke meri beti uss ke pyaar mein marr rahi hai. Pagal ho chuki hai. Na kucch khati hai ; na kucch peeti hai, na waqt par soti hai ; aur na hi Kabhi time se jaagti hai. Marr jaaye gi woh….Nahin, nahin dekh sakta mein apni beti ko martay huay. Mein uss Armaan Mallik ko apni beti ki Zindagi se nikal ke rahoonga. Uss ki waja se aaj meri beti ki yeh haalat hui hai. Riddhima shaadi karegi, ussi se karegi jisse mein chahta hoon.”

Anjali looked at him with horror stored in her eyes.

Suddenly, they heard the door of Shashank’s cabin close and somebody’s fading footsteps. Rajeev went to see who it was….BUT….


“Yahan par toh koi nahin hai..Lagta hai jiss ne bhi yeh sab kucch sunna, woh chala gaya ya chali gayyi yahan se,” Rajeev said disappointed.

He had never ever thought that Shashank could fall to such an extent. He thought that he loved his daughter-his Riddhima-the Riddhima who loved him from the core of her heart. And today, when she had loved someone else so much, how the hell could he just do all that that he did to separate them?

He looked at Anjali’s tear-stricken face. It seemed as if she was all drained out. He had never seen her cry so much, but he knew that she loved her sister deeply. Perhaps, she was the only person in her life, with whom she had shared all her secrets and who had been with her throughout all her ups and downs, Riddhima had been like a pillar- a pillar of support for Anjali. He very well knew how much the two sisters loved each other. He now knew, why Riddhima had become upset at the sudden mention of Armaan. He felt sad for her. He wanted to console her, to make her realize that everything was going to be okay. All she had to do, was to have faith in herself. Woh usse yeh Ehsaas dilana chahta tha, ke woh Armaan ko uss ki Zindagi mein wapis la kar hi rahega. Chahay uss ke liye usse, jo kucch bhi karna ho. Chahay iss ke liye usse Shashank ke against bhi kyun na jaana pare. He wanted to see her happy, smiling, laughing, giggling, chatting, speaking endlessly, humming, he just wanted to bring the old Riddhima back, to be said in the least.

He saw Anjali going out of the room, slamming the door behind her out of rage, and Shashank looking at her retreating figure.

Shashank looked at Rajeev, and forced a smile to his lips, which Rajeev didn’t return, and left the room with a blank face, leaving Shashank to himself.

He looked at Rajeev leave the room, and broke the barriers he had built around himself and bursted out crying. He kneeled down against the wall and kept on crying bitterly.

“Mein jaanta hoon ke mein tumhari nazron mein galat hoon Anjali, par mein apni beti ko khush dekhna chahta hoon. Mein uss ka baap hoon, mein uss ke baare mein galat kaise soch sakta hoon? Mein helpless tha beta. Mein jaanta hoon ke Dr. Armaan aik bohot hi acchay insaan hain, aur bohat hi acchay dost hain. Par jiss Armaan ko mein jaanta hoon na beta, woh Kabhi bhi apni life mein serious nahin ho sakta,” wiping his tears, “ Issi liye, mein nahin chahta ke uss ka saaya bhi meri beti ki Zindagi par paray. Woh apni life mein Kabhi bhi serious nahin ho sakta. Uss ke liye ladkiyaan sirf kucch waqt ke liye hoti hain. Na jaane iss se pehle unn ki kitni girl friends reh chuki hain….Aur waise bhi Riddhima ke liye mein ne pehle se hi ladka dekha hua hai, jisse mein jaanta hoon ke woh Riddhima ko Kabhi bhi beech raah mein akela nahin chodega, uss ki suraksha kare ga, uss ka khayaal rakhega, usse apni jaan se bhi ziada pyaar karega. Usse apni palkon par bitha kar rahega. Usse itna pyaar dega ke usse humari bhi yaad nahin aayegi. Aur tab Riddhima ko samajh mein aa jaayega ke mein kyun chahta tha ke woh aur Armaan alag ho jaayien, meine usse aur Armaan ko kyun alag kiya. Usse tab yeh Ehsaas hoga….aur uss ke saath saath Tumhien bhi,” he said getting up.

Sitting on his chair, he cleaned the tears that he had just shed, and sighed and resumed his work….


Rajeev and Riddhima

Rajeev was looking for Riddhima everywhere. He had nearly checked the whole of Sanjeevani in search of her. He just couldn’t find her. He was worried about her, and he feared that it was her who had overheard the conversation. If the case was so, she must have been crestfallen, what if she tried to run away from the place? What if she tried to harm herself? What if she might attempt something that could prove harmful to her? What if she had a nervous breakdown as she was not strong enough to bear all that she had just heard? What if she, out of shock, died?

“Nahin, usse kucch nahin hoga,” Rajeev was perspiring badly. He needed to see her.

Rajeev was not one of those known for their optimism. Perhaps, he was the only person thinking and making out all the negative possibilities, especially when it came to the people he loved and cared for a lot. He was indeed a pessimist. Thinking of everything, but nothing positive.

Same was the case at the moment. He was running through the whole of Sanjeevani in search of her- Riddhima.

Suddenly, his eyes fell on a figure in the terrace. He need not waste another second to recognize that it was no one but Riddhima. He went over there. She was sitting on a bench, her back facing him. He could see how life had been stirred out of her all of a sudden. And he now knew the reason behind all of it. He wanted her to spill out all her worries and sadness in front of him, he wanted to soothe her, to make her feel relax. He himself felt helpless at the moment. He didn’t know what he wanted to do. He didn’t know what he could do to bring her back to her normal self.

He went and stood behind her bench and lightly placed his hand on her shoulder. Riddhima knew who it was. He heard her sob lightly.

“Hey, it’s okay….Sab theek ho jaaye ga, Riddhima, please, rona band karo, pleassshhh Riddhima,” he tried to lighten the moment but instead of getting quiet, Riddhima started crying bitterly.

She wasn’t sure if Rajeev knew about Armaan or not, but all she knew was that she needed a friend, someone in front of whom she could lay all her worries and tensions.

She got up from the bench, and stood in front of Rajeev, who in turn looked at her helplessly. She broke down in front of him.

“Riddhima, tum mujhay bata sakti ho….mein uhh….mein….Mein Armaan ke baare mein sab jaanta hoon,” he said hesitantly.

It seemed, that it was all that Riddhima wanted to hear, as listening this she kneeled down and started crying bitterly.

“Raajeev, wo mujhay chod gayya *sniff*, mein ne pata nahin aisi kya galti kar di thi, jo mujhay uss ki itni bari saza milli, mein to Shayad jaanti bhi nahin hoon, ke mujh se aisa *sniff* kya ho gaya..jiss ki waja se woh mujhay chod ke chala gayya. Pata hai kya Raajeev, woh aaj bhi mujh se utna hi pyaar karta hai, par….par….ab woh….ab woh meray paas wapis Kabhi nahin aayega. Kucch karo Rajeev, kucch karo, mein uss ke bina marr jaoongi….please Rajeev, kucch karo..!! Mein uss ke bina nahin jee sakti Rajeev, please kucch karo,” she said continuously crying.

Rajeev was scared looking at her condition.

“Riddhima, shhh….I promise Armaan tumhari Zindagi mein wapis aayega. Just Don’t Worry..Please,” Rajeev said trying to soothe her.

He made Riddhima stand up and hugged her, trying to relax her from all her worries. Trying to tell her, that he’ll be there for her no matter what- like a wall to support her, to be there for her ALWAYS come what may.

She kept on crying, still hugging him….

Regret-On its very peak:

He was steering his car away from that place. He was crest-fallen. He never came to know when his grip had tightened over the steering wheel so much, that it was hurting him. But this pain was nothing in front of the pain he had felt when he had overheard their conversation. He couldn’t believe that it was him- who had done all that. And that his Riddhima was innocent. How could he have done that? How could he have suspected her? How the hell could he have just left her? Why? Why? Why did he do all this? Why didn’t he even give her a chance to speak? To clarify? But, she didn’t even know what had happened. He, himself 9new the whole truth now.

Yes, it was Armaan who had overheard the conversation.

An hour ago:

Armaan’s Cabin:

Armaan was still busy in going through the files and the documents. He glanced at the clock to see the time, when….

“Shit, mein late ho raha hoon. 2 : 00 o’clock to mujhay Dr.Shashank ke saath yeh cases discuss karne hain, and it’s already 1 : 30 pm, aur abhi tak toh mein ne saari files dekhi tak nahin hain. Damn. Hurry Up Armaan, Hurry. Nahin toh teri naukri bhi jaaye gi,” he thought to himself.

He rushed through all the files and it took him no more than 15-20 minutes. Once he was satisfied with his preparation, he stole a glance at his watch which showed 1 : 45 before leaving.

He hurriedly rushed out of the cabin and paced to Shashank’s cabin. As he was nearing the cabin, he heard somebody talking, or say shouting. But the voices were not clear, as he was still quite away from the cabin. Curiosity took its toll on Armaan and urged him to listen what actually was going on in there.

“Nahin, it’s not a good thing. Mujhay kya? Unhien jo bhi baatien karni hain kartay Rahein. Mujhay usse kya lena dena?”

“Nahin Armaan sirf Riddhima ka dost na hi tha, nahin hai aur na hi Kabhi hoga....,”

“Yeh mera naam….Aur Riddhima….Mein….Riddhima….Dost?....Kab??,” he was shocked and surprised. Intrigued, he made his way near the cabin.

“Aisa kucch bhi nahin hai beta, woh dono sirf aur sirf acchay dost
thay..!!”

He was surprised at hearing Shashank, that too, clarifying the relationship that Armaan and Riddhima shared. But to WHOM? [Armaan is still unknown to Rajeev, his existence, his relationship with the Guptas, and his sudden entry.]

He wanted to hear more, and he was sure, that now it was high time. He had to listen what Shashank thought and felt about their broken relationship.

He loomed the door and placed his ear near to it, to listen. Eavesdropping, he was surprised at what he was hearing.

“Dad.. Bas haan bohot ho gayya. Aap Ridzi ke saath aisa kaise kar sakte hain? You know that she loves Armaan. Toh fir / phir aap aisa kyun kar rahay hain?? Kyun Dad? Kyun? Kya aap se Ridz ki khushi nahin dekhi jaati? Aakhir aap yeh sab kar kyun rahay hain Dad? Aap ko kya lagta hai ke mujhay nahin pata ke aap ne kya kiya tha??,”


“Yeh kiss baare mein baat kar rahi hai? Aisa kya kar diya Dr.Shashank ne? Unhien toh yeh bhi nahin pata hoga ke humari ladayi hui, toh hui kyun?”

“Anjali..shh..,”

“Ab yeh kaun hai?” he tried to peep in but could see nothing but a person’s back facing towards the glass door through which Armaan was trying to look through.

What he heard next, left him astounded. Never in his dreams had he imagined it.

“Nahin Rajeev, aaj mein chup nahin hoon gi..aur na hi ab se chup chaap baithoon gi....Rajeev….tum nahin jaantay….tum nahin jaantay, pehle bhi Riddhima aur Armaan ki ladai sirf aur sirf inhi ki waja se hui thi..hai na Dad? Woh sab aap ne jaan boojh ke kiya tha na?”

He now knew the person’s name whom the unfamiliar voice belonged to. But he cared the least for it at the moment. He was startled at the truth that had just been revealed for him.

“Kyun kiya aap ne Ridz ke saath aisa Dad? Kya bigada tha Armaan ne aap ka? Woh ladai..jiss ki waja se..*sniff* *sniff* *sob* *sob* Armaan aur Riddhima ki ladai hui thi woh bhi toh aap ne hi karwai thi..haina Dad? Aap aisa kaise kar saktay hain Armaan aur Riddhima ke saath, Dad? Kaise? Aap jaantay hai na ke Armaan jitna pyaar Riddhima se karta hai..utna toh hum bhi usse pyaar nahin kartay..toh phir kyun?? Kyun kiya aisa aap ne Dad? Riddhima ne toh tab kucch kaha bhi nahin tha, usse toh Shayad pata bhi nahin hoga ke uss din jiss baat ki waja se ladayi hui, woh baat bhi toh aap ke hi kaaran thi na, Dad. Armaan ko lagta hai ke Riddhima galat hai aur woh phir / fir bhi abhi bhi apne aap ko doshi manta hai,, uss din zaroor ussi ne kucch kaha hoga, aur Riddhima, woh toh apne aap ko humesha se hi galat samajhti aayi hai..Kyun Dad? Aap ne kyun unn dono ke beech mein misunderstandings khadi ki? Aur ab aap Riddhima ki shaadi karwana chahtay hain? Aap ko ho kya gayya hai Dad?,”

He heard her sob. But he didn’t care. He heard her burst out. But he didn’t care. He finally came to know about the truth. But he still didn’t care. He was wronged. Who Cares? He was cheated on. Who the hell cares? He did care for something; and that was only the pain that Riddhima had gone through, and that too, without complaining even once. Riddhima had gone through enough; that he was sure off, but the only thing he was more than sure off was: it had happened because of him, himself only.

Armaan’s eyes were swollen red. His eyes reflected the rage and wrath that he was containing in himself at the moment. He wanted an answer. Tears seeped down his eyes as he could no longer bottle them up.

“HAAN..mein ne karwayi thi woh ladayi….!! Mein ne hi Armaan aur Riddhima ko alag karwaya tha. Kyunki mein jaanta hoon ke Armaan Riddhima ko Kabhi khush nahin rakh sakay ga. Yeh sirf do-chaar din ke pyaar ka junoon hai jo jald hi uttar jaayega, rather uttarna shuroo bhi ho chuka hai, dekha nahin tum ne kaise uss ne itne dinon mein aik dafaa bhi Riddhima ke baare mein nahin socha aur naa hi poocha? Aik dafaa bhi uss ko khayal nahin aaya ke meri beti uss ke pyaar mein marr rahi hai. Pagal ho chuki hai. Na kucch khati hai ; na kucch peeti hai, na waqt par soti hai ; aur na hi Kabhi time se jaagti hai. Marr jaaye gi woh….Nahin, nahin dekh sakta mein apni beti ko martay huay. Mein uss Armaan Mallik ko apni beti ki Zindagi se nikal ke rahoonga. Uss ki waja se aaj meri beti ki yeh haalat hui hai. Riddhima shaadi karegi, ussi se karegi jisse mein chahta hoon.”

All the emotions that he was trying to control in himself, broke all the barriers and came out in the form of more tears. He couldn’t contain himself any longer. He tried to run away from the place, but in process the door shut close and he took no longer than a second to escape the place.

Present:

He tightened his grip even more on the steering wheel and drove to a far-off place. He wanted to relax his nerves. He felt sorry for Riddhima. More sorry than he had ever felt for anyone in any case at any time in the whole of his life. He wanted to hurt himself as he himself was at fault; he had hurt her, and that too badly. But instead, he stopped his car at the nearest destination-The Beach.

It was nearing the evening and so he was lucky enough to have witnessed the setting Sun. The colours of dusk amalgamating with each other- from sunny yellow to autumn orange and finally to the dark night blue sky.

Armaan never knew when he went down, back down the long lane of memories floating afresh.

Note: The flashback is in first person; that is, i.e.: from Armaan’s points of views.

“Oh..how so she looked gorgeous in that attire of hers. Bilkul aasmaan/aakaash se aayi hui Pari ki tarah. Meri Pari ke jaise,” I couldn’t help wondering.

I continued looking at her playing basket ball. Clad in a red churidaar, she looked gorgeous- just out of the world.

Kucch kum..
Roshan hai Roshani..
Kucch kum..
Geeli hain baarishien..

Kucch kum..
Leharati hai hawa..
Kucch kum hain..
Dill mein khwaahishien..

Tham sa gayya hai..
Yeh waqt aise..
Teray liye hi..
Thehra ho jaise..

hmmmmMmMmmMMhHHmm..hhmmm..HhHHMMMmmmm..Hmmm..
hhhmmmmMMMmmHHHmmmm..hhmmm…mmmmm..hhhhh…MM..HH..hmm..

Kuch kum..
Roshan hai Roshani..
Kucch kum..
Geeli hain baarishien..

Kucch kum..
Leharati hai hawa..
Kucch kum hain..
Dill mein khwaahishien..

Tham sa gayya hai..
Yeh Waqt aise..
Teray liye hi..
Thehra ho jaise..

Hhmmm..hhmm..hhmm…hmmmmm..
Hhmmmm…hmmm..hmmm..mmmm..hhh..mmm..hhhhh..

I continued looking at her with awe at how beautiful she was. I didn’t know when, but I actually went, and stood, right behind her, looking at how her hair were disturbing her. She looked pretty, to be said in the least.

Her hair were flying all over her face, making her look more beautiful than ever.

“Riddhima,” I whispered.

I know she blushed at that time. I could just feel it. She need not waste another second to recognize my voice. But to my surprise, she was in a teasing mood then. I deduced this, when she said with her eyes cocked, “Hmm..toh Mr. Armaan Mallik. Care for a game of basket ball?”

“Hmm..lagta hai aaj kissi ko haarne ka shauq ho raha hai.., sure. Ms. Riddhima Gupta Soon-To-Be-Armaan-Mallik,” I teased back.

She blushed at my “Armaan Mallik” remark. *Smile*

“Hmm....somebody’s getting over-confident. Soch lien Dr. Mallik, agar aap haar gayye toh....aap ki reputation ka toh.... *tusk* *tusk* *tut* *tut*,” she quipped back.

“Ajji....hum toh pehle hi aap ke saamne haar maan chukay hain....rahi baat iss basket ball match ki,” I said, snatching the ball as she dribbled it on her place, “yeh....toh mein jeet ke hi rahoonga.”

“We’ll see....,” she said, with her beautiful smile still playing on her lips.

The game started. We were continually dribbling the ball. It was with Riddhima then. Ahhhh....I want that ball.

“Hmm..Riddhima, tum kab se itna accha khelne lagi?” I tried distracting her.

“Well, mein ton humesha se hi itna accha khelti thi, Shayad tum ne ab notice kiya,” I didn’t miss the tinge of naughtiness in her voice.

“Hmmm..Kya Karoon ab mein yaar? Itni khoobsoorat ladkiyaan....,” Just the name was enough to make her look at me, making her miss the ball.

Taking the opportunity, I snatched it from her. I expected her to snatch the ball from me, BUT....she looked straight in my eyes and started off, in the most emotional voice she could have ever imitated or used, “Toh kya ab kucch ladkiyaan, Tumhien mujh se bhi ziada important lagne lag gayyi hain?”

I could see tears.

Kyun meri saans bhi..
Kucch bheegi si hai..
Dooriyon se hui..
Nazdeeqi si hai..

Hmmm..

Kyun meri saans bhi..
Kucch bheegi si hai..
Dooriyon se hui..
Nazdeeqi si hai..

Jaane kya..
Yeh baat hai..
Har subha..
Ab raat hai..

Kucch kum..
Roshan hai Roshani..
Kucch kum..
Geeli hain baarishien..

Kucch kum..
Leharati hai hawa..
Kucch kum hain..
Dill mein khwaahishien..

Tham sa gayya hai..
Yeh waqt aise..
Teray liye hi..
Thehra ho jaise..

hmmmmMmMmmMMhHHmm..hhmmm..HhHHMMMmmmm..Hmmm..
hhhmmmmMMMmmHHHmmmm..hhmmm…mmmmm..hhhhh…MM..HH..hmm..

“Riddhima, mein sirf mazaak kar raha tha....,”

More tears.

“Riddhima, listen, suno....,” I said, dropping the ball.

She caught me by surprise as she snatched the ball and sticking her tongue out to me ran away with the ball, and in no seconds the ball was through the basket. I kept on looking at her with my mouth agape.

I wasted not a second, and in the other, she was right in the middle of air, bring twirled around safely in my arms.

“Armaan..hehehehe..Armaan choro..please..hahahaha..arre baba, mein sirf mazaak kar rahi thi....,” she said laughing.

And in the same position, with her in my arms....we laughed and enjoyed the bliss of our being together for endless hours that very day. I fell in love with her all over again on that very day....”

Present:

Phool mehkay nahin..
Kucch gumsum se hain..
Jaise roothay huay..
Kucch yeh tum se hain..

Phool mehkay nahin..
Kucch gumsum se hain..
Jaise roothay huay..
Kucch yeh tum se hain..

Khushbooien..
Dhal gayyi..
Saath tum..
Ab jo nahin..

KUCCH KUM..
ROSHAN HAI ROSHANI..
KUCCH KUM..
GEELI HAIN BAARISHIEN..

THAM SA GAYYA HAI..
YEH WAQT AISE..
TERAY LIYE HI..
THEHRA HO JAISE..

Hmm..hhhmm..hmmm….
Hmm..hhhmm..hmmm…
Hmm..hhhmm..hmmm….
Hmm..hhhmm..hmmm…

[Listen to this song, it’s beautiful….Kucch Kum-Dostana.]

“Kaash..Kaash tum yahan hoti Riddhima, meray paas. Hum saath hotay, jeeney ke liye yahi kaafi tha….Meri Zindagi tum se hi shuroo hoti hai..aur tum par hi khatam. Mein jeena chahta hoon Riddhima….Tumharay saath, wapis aa jao meri Zindagi mein. Mein tumharay bina adhura hoon….”

Armaan was in tears. He felt a hand on his shoulder….A hand that soothed his nerves….Made him close his eyes….Feel the sense of being….He felt a hand on his shoulder….

*Break* *Freeze* *Break* *Freeze*

Precap: According to your wish. Do you want the new interns OR Armaan-Riddhima’s patch-up in the coming part? Wanna know your answers before I write the part, so please….Comment Soon, with the answer to this too….Well, the official Precap is: Who is it who just came to Armaan? Kya Armaan Riddhima ke beech ki misunderstandings Kabhi kum or phir / fir khatam hongi? Kya khushi lautay gi unki Zindagi mein?

Jaan ne, ke liye….Parhtay Rahiye “The Legacy Of Divine Love” OR “TLODL”..!!


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Henna:

Gosh..!! Girly..!! Itna suspense?? Haww..!! Sorry..!! Kucch ziada hi suspense tha na?? Well, it might be clear now. Armaan had overheard it. And see, I have updated it nearly on time yet again, just a day late…. *Patting my shoulder myself :P* And yeah, Sorry, I won’t talk about stopping it. Thanks for liking the FF and this chapter. It truly, truly, truly, truly means a lot. So much that I can’t even tell it to you in words..!! Sachi Muchi..!! And you read it at 1:00 o’clock at night?? OMG..!! And your welcome. I would love to help you with your FF. Well, Thanks Once Again.

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Aww..you couldn’t wait for the suspense?? It’s all out now..!! Thanks for ur lovely comment..!! Truly means A LOT..!! Happy Birthday Once Again..!

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Hi Ambz Di..!! Kaisi ho aap?? It’s been real long since we have talked..hai na??

I Am back now..!!

Thanks for liking this part..!! Was missing ur comments soooooooooooooooooooooooo much..!! Finally, they are back now..!! Love you chhooo much..!! Sachi Muchi..!! Written soon enuf..hai na??

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Revenge of Brothers Grimm

Revenge of Brothers Grimm

This story/series is most definitely not original. The basic storyline is from Cinderella and as I proceed, the concept and storyline will be heavily influenced by other fairly tales. I find the whole concept of Disney-ed fairytale very fascinating because it's extremely biased (have you ever read about a heroine who is not drop dead gorgeous or not perfect?) and always have happy endings.


There is no philosophical aspect to this series and I promise that I won't be err' preachy. Not much, at least. This is my attempt at college drama and since this is my first time in writing drama with a tint of humor, I am a little nervous. Please, be patient with me.

Now, off to those things that matter'


Characters:

Heroes and heroines (The Good People)

Riddhima:

She is an ordinary girl living with her widowed step-mother and two step sisters.
Her life's ambition: finish college, get a job, go to England, marry Robert Pattinson and die. (A year or so ago, she would have said Daniel Radcliffe, but then Twilight happened.) She didn't mind executing this plan in its reverse order sans dying that is. She also hoped she would add a few words to Oxford dictionary. When she is not brooding, her favorite pastimes would be reading, listening to music, annoying people with complex vocabulary and generally irritating her step sisters. She is sarcastic, cynic, unapproachable and number one misfit in her college. She is pretty decent as a person and thinks that deep down everyone is good. Of course, with few people one would need an electron microscope to find that goodness or just theorize with the probability that "goodness" might exist; if you ask her to name a few she would spat the names out in an instant. She likes old books, ink pens, overly large t-shirts, her birth mother's glass bangles collection and her father's comfy chair. She is best friends with Muskaan and Atul. She thinks Muskaan is a human anomaly; the quantity of peppiness that Muskaan carries if bottled, can be a major energy source for a small country. Though she gets annoyed when Muskaan tires to get her into normal social circle, she would do anything to keep that smile on Muskaan's face. Her obsession with Robert Pattinson annoys Atul immensely and she makes it a point to rub it in face everyday. Atul, her other best friend, is a kindred soul who was very sweet. She thought he was too nave for his age and he never really understood the meaning of "subtle". She always held back her verbal punches when she was with her best friends. But with him, she was downright acidic.

We will come to him, later.

Muskaan:

She has been an amazing friend to Riddhima. The bubbly wild haired girl is all about rainbows, fluffy bunnies, pink frilly stuff, cuddly toys, unicorns and everything romantic. Her dream was to fall in love in the most clichd way. She believed in the concept of true love (Riddhima rolls her eyes at this) and soul mates (more eye rolls). She comes from a good family with loving parents and adorable siblings which Riddhima is mildly jealous of.

Atul

He is the guy whom you can wrap in a gift box and take home to your mom. He is every mother's dream son-in-law material ' sweet, caring, kind and loveable. Riddhima loved him to pieces but at times she felt even her toned down retorts could hurt him irrevocably. The three of them were inseparable.



Another set of Heroes and heroines (The Bad People)

Armaan:

In his college, he is known to be God's gift to womankind. While most of the ladies agree, Riddhima is often heard muttering, "God sure does have a great sense of humor". He was livid when he heard it for the first time. After that the two had had a huge argument in the hallway which had ended in them getting punished. He is a very handsome guy and quite well off and it showed in his attitude. A few people called him "a sweet young man" and Riddhima called those people "delirious". He comes from a dysfunctional family and he has found that when he broods, women seem to like him more. His friends are Abhi and Nikki and find them good enough to hang out on a regular basis. Of course, his tasks for the day includes - annoy Riddhima, make fun of Riddhima and argue with Riddhima; if any time was left, he got some reading done. It was pathologically pathetic to see him ranting and raving with a smug looking Riddhima that Anti-Armaan brigade (AAB, for short, mostly consisting of disgruntled girls rejected by him and disgruntled guys whose girlfriends ditched them to be with Armaan.) cheered on. Their arguments were dutifully chronicled by Rahul as he found that their vocabulary was much better than what his text book offered and perhaps better entertainment too. Armaan had once told Riddhima that Rahul seemed to have a crush on her as he is seen whenever they were arguing. At that Riddhima had raised an eyebrow and retorted "Are you sure it's me he has crush on?" He had wisely shut up then. Riddhima left her tongue wander freely, her words acerbic, sarcastic and caught up with her natural wit. He thought that she secretly enjoyed their verbal spar and one day he had even mentioned it on her face. She had slammed the door so suddenly that he had spent two days nursing his bruised nose. He didn't know what he wanted from his life. He had no plans, no designs so technically, everything seemed perfect. In really, nothing really existed for him.

Nikki:

The girl who has everything. Except for a conscience. She is your regular bad girl in the college; the personification of meanness.

Abhi:

Male version of Nikki.

People needed to move the story or complete the pairings (The Buffers)

Rahul:

The nobody; at least that's how he starts off as.

Anjali:

Not so obnoxious step sister. Riddhima seems to have a soft spot for her. She helps Riddhima whenever her sister is not around. She is scared of sister (who isn't?). She has a huge crush on the college's sweetest kid, Atul.

Shashank:

The dead father who is very much missed by his family.

Padma:

The step mom. Loves her daughters unequally.

Vikram:

Random bad guy. Who cares about him anyway?

--o00o--

The series (The back story; one that goes - Once upon a time...)

Many believe that the animosity between Armaan and Riddhima is because of Riddhima herself. Or rather, it was her attitude that started of this great verbal battle. In the beginning days of college, Riddhima was said to be approached by Armaan. This is how the chronicler (doesn't this word sounds like the name of a villain from badly written comic books?) Rahul seem to remember.

Riddhima was walking along the hallway with her friends Muskaan and Atul. She lacked the nervousness that was generally seen in freshmen. It was a classic case of boy meeting the girl. They collided in the hallway and in a matter of moments, books and paper were all around them. He shot a charming dimpled smile at her and stuck his hand out.

"Hi, I am Armaan" She stared at him and his hand and slowly shook his hand with hers.

"Hi, I am not interested." She quipped.

The rest as they say is history.

~Sookie

(To Be Continued. Obviously)

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