Saturday, December 20

Hum Saath Saath Hain - Episode 19

hey guys thanks for your vote i have never thought that i would write this again bt i guess u all want me to write so here it goes
epic 19

Haldi rasam because of ridhima health rahul muskan armaan ridhima haldi have been taking place in gupta house only. Mini and gappu were also there

House was decorated beautifully in the hall was divided into two parts with a parda so that guys can have different section and gals have different section. Armaan was literally frustrated with this he is just not able to see her beautiful girl face for last half an hour seeing his face anybody can make out that he is missing ridhima. While rahul was frustrated with whole haldi which was put on him and looking like a joker

Armaan and rohit(hope u guys remember rohit anjie a nd ridhi childhood friend)

Rohit: are iska chera dekh kar to aisa lag raha hai jaise agar do min main ridhi aapko nahi dikhi to

Armaan: was fuming with anger on him

Rohit: acha baba sorry no ridhi ridhima ok mujhe pata hai use sirf aap hi ridhi,basket janu jaan , love bula sakte ho aur koi nahi

Gappu: oye armaan bhaiya janu jaan wah kya kya naam hai

Armaan:haan haan bada mazza aa raha hai na tum logon ko mujhe tang karne main ek to itne der se use dekha nahi upar se

Atul: are mat tang karo mere bhai ko

Armaan: ek tu hi hai me sacha dost

Atul: waise ridhima KO abhi dekh ke aaya hoon badi pyari lag rahi hai who haldi keh rang main

Armaan: tub hi chalu hogaya huh bada kehta hai sacha dost

Atul: main to bas aise hi

On ridhima side same thing is going on

Anjie: pata hai mini abhi main waha armaan ko haldi laga ke aayi na bechare ka cehra pura utra hua tha bechara apni basket ko kitne ghante se nahi dekh paya

Ridhima: diiiiiiiii aap bhi na shying

Anjali: are wah meri choti behen sharmate hue kitni achi lag rahi hoo ek dumm lal lal


Armaan bi: hato meri bachi ko mat tang karo bechari pehle se hi

Suddenly there was pain on ridhima;s leg shouted ahh

Hearing this armaan just came running

Armaan: kya hua tum thik to ho kaha tha na paron main haldi lagane ki zarrorat nahi hai par tum sunti kaha ho ab dekha kya hua

All at one streach never given any one chance to speak

Bi: armaan beta

Ridhima: armaan kuch nahi hua bas aisehi Dard aaya tha ab thik hoon

Armaan: mujhe kuch nahi sunna waise bhi tumara pair main dawail lagane ka time hogaya hai just picking her up never realizing everybody is seeing them.

Taking her to the room and keeping her carely on the bed
Ridhima: tum hi na choti baton se pareshan ho jate hoon sabke samne utha ke leke aaiye bahar sab kya soch rahe honge

Padma coming : kuch nahi beta yehi ki yeh befkuuf tumse kitna pyar karta hai

Armaan: dekha maa aap bhi samajhti hoon par yeh jab dekho chilati hai

Ridhima: main kaha chila rahi thi haan

Padma: bas bas ab yeh nautanki band karo armaan main iske pair saaf karke dawai laga doongi tu ja naha le

Armaan: nahi maa main kar loonga

Padma: par beta

Armaan: maa pls

Padma: thik hai jaise Teri marzi par jaldi haan phir mehendi bhi laga ni hai

Armaan: haan par usmain parda to nahi hoga na maa

Padma: are parda to hoga hi warna tu mehendi kam lagayega aur isske peeche zada ghomega

Armaan: maa pls parda nahi main thik se mehendi lagwaunga pls ma pls (like baby

Padma: are itni besabre hai ek pal ke liye bhi door nahi reh sakta na

Armaan: just nodding to say no

Padma: acha thik hai ab jaldi kar

Armaan: hugging her thanks maa

Armaan ridhima

Armaan brought tub full of warm water and with towel wiping the haldi ridhima seeing him lovingly armaan looking at her

Armaan: aise kya dekh rahi hoon ha

Ridhima: tum kab tak yeh sab

Armaan: ridhima phirse wahi baat maine kaha tha na agar zindagi bhar karna pada to bhi karunga aur ab tum chup chap mujhe kaam karne do.

Ridhima: kyun na jab tak main thik nahi hoti hum nurse

Armaan: nahi ridhima mere hote hue kissi aur ki kya zarrorat aur humari shadi ke baad to yeh mera haq hai Na

Ridhima: par

Armaan: basket acha ek baat batao agar aisa mere saath hota to tum kya mere liye yeh sab nahi karti

Ridhima: not saying anything

Armaan: karti na to ab bas

Then he massages the oil on her leg kissed her forehead ab tum aaram karo main naha kar aata hoon un bandaron ne haldi laga lga kar pura peela kar diya. Aur haan ek aur baat agar koi bhi problem ho yeh bell hai baja Dena utne ki koshish mat karna bilkul bhi thik hai.

Ridhima just nodded having tears

Armaan: wiping the tears hmmmmmmmmmm basket main hoon na sab thik ho jayega aur tum hi to kehti ho na main hoon to tumhe kuch nahi ho sakta to phir.

Ridhima: to tum kyun

Armaan: yeh to bas aisehi tumhe dekh kar dekha tumne mujhe bhi rula diya ab so jao main aarha ok

Ridhima: hmmmmmmmmmm

Meanwhile anjai and rohit are watching all ths both have tears in there eyes.

Anjali: kya itna pyar koi kar sakta hai

Rohit: haan bas apne pyar ko pehchane ki deri hai

Anjali: matlab

Rohit: matlab atul

Anjali: rohit pls

Rohit: dekh yeh sach hai main tujhe bachpan se pyar karta hoon aur shayad aab bhi main isse liye aaya shayd tum ab lekin tumari ankhon main saaf saaf dikhta hai tum atul se pyar karti hoon

Anjali: aisa kuch nahi

Rohit: jhoot mat bol aaj kal jab who tere aage peeche nahi ghoomta to tu usse miss nahi karti

Anjali: aisa nahi hai

Rohit: use rok le isse pehle ki der ho jaye anjie

Anjali: tumkehna kya chahate hon

Rohit: us idot ko yeh lagta hai ki who tumare layek nahi kyun ki who itna smart nahi hai na

Anjali: pls rohit atul bahut smart aur cute dono hai

Rohit: are yeh baat to tujhe usse samjhani chahiye

Anjali: matlab

Rohit who aur armaan baat kar rahe the maine sun liya

Anjali: kya



Armaan,atul


Armaan: tu aisa nahi kar sakta tu usee chod ke kaise ja sakta hai

Atul: ab bahut ho gaya waise bhi who aur rohit ek saath ache lagte hai main to bas

Armaan: aisa kuch nahi hai who dono sirf dost hai

Atul: rohit usse pyar karta hai maine uski ankhon main dekha hai

Armaan: rohit karta par anjali

Atul: shayad who bhi karti hai

Armaan: who tujhse karti hai idot

Atul: dekh armaan agar who mujhse karti to ab tak usne keh diya hota ab bahut ho chukka main jar aha hoon tum dono ki shadi ke baad ab aur discussion nahi

Anjali,rohit

Rohit: isse liye kehta hoon use rok le warna der ho jayegi

Anjali: par main

Rohit: acha apni anhkehn band kar tumje hamesha apna carrer dikhta tha na mujhe dekhna hai aaj kya dekhta hai


Anjali: yeh kya bachpana hai tab hum bache the us waqt

Rohit: bachpana hai to whi sahi and just closing her eyes

Anjali was dumstuck her dreams have changed now she was not seeing her carrer any more rather than she can only see atul following her giving her gifts and then as if he is going leaving her she just shouted atulllllllllllll

Rohit: maine kha tha na usse rokle anji use rokle

Anjalijust hugging her thanks par tum mujhe bhul paoge

Rohit: pata nahi par main sirf tumhe khush dekhna chata hoon aur tum uske saath hi khush reh sakti hoon to ja

Meanwhile armaan and rahul both are lisning this and are very happy for there champ

Rahul: abe fahde hum log thdi der aur ghade rahe na aise to haldi ka rang utrega hi nahi jaldi chal

Armaan: are haan chal chal warna meri basket mujhe dekh kar dar jayegi

(sorry guys itna seriosness main break lagana tha)


evening time mehendi rasam

muskaan and rahul were busy in instructing how they will put mendi to the person putting them

muskaan: are dii aise nahi who pate wali lagon na

di: pate wali nahi aapke haath main yehi achi lagegi

muskaan: scraching her hand maine kaha na

rahul: di aap yeh jo kehti hai who karo warna pura ghar utha legi

muskaan: oye chup kar ek to tere liye aasani ho mera naam dhoone main isseliye asan wali lagwa rahi hoon aur tu hai ki

immediately stps realize what she has said right now and was blushing

anji: are wah muksaan abhi se hi isski itni chinta hai


armaan and ridhima

ridhima was watching how padma aunty was putting mehendi as uaual our armaan is as susual staring on her

background

Tu Hi To Jannat Meri, Tu Hi Mera Junnon
Tu Hi To Mannat Meri, Tu Hi Rooh Ka Sukun
Tu Hi Ankhiyon Ki Thandak, Tu Hi Dil Ki Hai Dastak
Aur Kuch Na Janu Mein, Bas Itna Hi Jaanu..
(Tujhe Mein Rab Dikhta Hai, Yaara Mein Kya Karu) - 2
Sajde Sae Jhukta Hai, Yaara Mein Kya Karu
Tujhe Mein Rab Dikhta Hai, Yaara Mein Kya Karu..



He can imagine armaan soul and ridhima soul were dancing at the centre stage with her hands on waist ridhima hands on her shoulder they were fully in each other no one was there.

Kaise Hai Yeh Doori, Kaise Majboori
Mene Nazaron Se Tujhe Choo Liya
Kabhi teri Khusboo, Kabhi teri Baatein
Bin Maange Yeh Jahan Pa Liya
Tu Hi Dil Ki Ha Rounak, Tu Hi Janmon Ki Daulat
Aur Kuch Na Janu, Bas Itna Hi Janu..
(Tujhe Mein Rab Dikhta Hai, Yaara Mein Kya Karu) - 2
Sajde Sae Jhukta Hai, Yaara Mein Kya Karu
Tujhe Mein Rab Dikhta Hai, Yaara Mein Kya Karu..

Meanwile armaan was also staring at ridhima with tears which ridhima realize and ask with eyes what happen armaan just ask her to see centre stage she cannot see anything again looking to armaan what happen asking. He told her to imagine with his eyes signaling( meri nazron se dekho) now she can see the same thing what he is seeing

Vaasde Vaasde Vaasde, Dil Di Dil Vich Vaasde
Nachde Nachda Nachda, Dil Ro Ve The Nachde
Rab Ne... Bana Di Jodi.....

Vaasde Vaasde Vaasde, Dil Di Dil Vich Vaasde
Nachde Nachda Nachda, Dil Ro Ve The Nachde


cham cham aaye, Mujhe Tarshaye
Tera Saya Ched Ke Chumta..
O O, Tu Jo Muskaye, Tu Jo sharmaye
Jaise Mera Hai Khuda Jhomta..
Tu Hi Meri Barkart, Tu Hi Meri Ibaadat
Aur Kuch Na Janu, Bas Itna Hi Janu..
(Tujhe Mein Rab Dikhta Hai, Yaara Mein Kya Karu) - 2
Sajde Sae Jhukta Hai, Yaara Mein Kya Karu
Tujhe Mein Rab Dikhta Hai, Yaara Mein Kya Karu

Vaasde Vaasde Vaasde, Dil Di Dil Vich Vaasde
Nachde Nachda Nachda, Dil Ro Ve The Nachde
Rab Ne... Bana Di Jodi.....

Vaasde Vaasde Vaasde, Dil Di Dil Vich Vaasde
Nachde Nachda Nachda, Dil Ro Ve The Nachde

Now they both are hugging each other and standing at centre stage in dreams finally both came out of dreams when everybody told them there mehendi is over .

The end

(prerecap anjali will tell atul ar rm marriage)

hope u are enjoying it agar zada bada hogaya ti sorry

love u karan
karan ki dewani
kalyug ki meera mithila

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Stop Bashing up Ridhima's character

Guys and Gals....

I know that in these few past gone days,, we all have been deeply and highly affected where DMG is concerned......


Also,, i agree wid all u people out here,, that LAST WEEK,,, DMG ad kind of lost its old appeal,, and charm........

REASONS

1. Karan went and got married,,, wch obviously resulted in people especially girls getting heart broken.....

2. Karan having an accident....and not being able to work properly....cos he was totally stif,, and couldn't move his left hand what so evr.........

3. Armaan's and ridhima's chemistry ....wh we dint get to see post marriage,, or as we all call them MOMENTS...!!!!!!

4. The script had to be changed to accommodate Karan's injury in real life,, wch is very much understandable......

5. The whole SOUND FIASCO of d tuesday episode...wch was a GOOD episode whose impact wasn't felt,, cos d sound quality was bad.......



now comes d main part of my making this post...........

We people on d blog,, have been bashing up Ridhima's character........for what reason,, ask urselves.......

If u all agree wid me,, for evn an iota as to what ive written is d truth,, then i think we all should SPARE SUKIRTI..........



Guys,,

CUM ON......

d girl is doing a FANTABULOUS JOB in DMG.....

Her role in question for many of us,, leaves a lot to be desired.....

I'm not counting myself,, cos i now made peace with myself,, that Ridhima's character has to go on these lines itself,,,

REASON'S..

1. Armaan is her pillar in life,,w here any questions of problems arise........

2. She being RIDHIMA ...she relies on ARMAAN.......

and d MAIN PURPOSE OF NOT DOING ANYTHING TO HELP ARMAAN OR HER OWN FATHER IS JUST ONE SOLE REASON.........

WHICH IS

TOTALLY,, COMPLETELY,, RESPONSIBLY,, SOLELY THE CREATIVES TAKE....!!!!!!!!


So Guys and Gals,,,

we realli ,, truly desperately need to cut SUKIRTI AS RIDHIMA some slack.........and d creatives as well...

cos give them some credit guys,,,,,

they must be going through SHIT themselves right now....

cos

1.Which creative or actor would love to go and get injured purposely in REAL LIFE...when d actor himself/herslf knows that THAT person is d main lead of d show........

Cum on guys,,

give d creatives a chance........

Cos d very reason that they want nd are planning nd going to make a RIDHIMA do a solo dance in d concert......means

they know as to what is to be done....

how to keep d audiences cum back for more.......

how to pull d track forward.....

how to give d audience what they want...evn if that means to make them happy in parts ,, nd not all together in one go........


Okay,, i know it was a damn longggggggg post....

but after d end of TWO WHOLE WEEKS......and just reading negative criticism where RIDHIMA is concerned.........I JUST HAD TO POST THIS.....

I mean,, if they can give a week,, whr she PUSHES ARMAAN away from her........and STUNS HIM AND D AUDIENCE ALDO....while making them fall in love wid her all over again........MEANS

that d creatives ARE UNDERPLAYING D character if RIDHIMA themselves,,, cos they might have something HUGE OR BIG PLANNED FOR HER.........

so now,, i just request u

TO PLEASE STOP BASHING D CREATIVES ALONG WID RIDHIMA....

COS she is just doing her JOB at d end of d day.......

i dunno what u all think......but i had to post this,, cos too much of RIDHIMA BASHING has got wayyyy out of control....cos each n evry comment is now like a snide comment wid ridhima actually being d punching bag for all of us.......


so now..

hope this bashing of creatives ,, ridhima,,arm,aan,, etc etc.......STOPS............

cos they gave us ROCKING EPISODES WID ALL D OLD FLAVOUR CHARM AND EVRYTHNG.........BANG ON...!!!!!!!!!

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Kya Pyar Aisa Bhi Ho Sakta Hai - Part 22 - 25

thanks a lot guyss for voting, sorry for late update, my exams are going, that's y didn't find time to update In morning.....


thanks a lot once again,i try my level best to live up to ur expectations...

thanks a lot moderatorji for giving me chance to continue this ff, really waiting for this day.......

from today second journey of AR start filled with love, romance, masti, problems which are very small in front of AR’s love….so here goes second journey……

kya pyar aisa bhi ho sakta hai- second journey......

part 22-25.....

Part 22


Starts with the introduction of armaan riddhima house, I've to include this part, again bcoz of armaan who had made this house for riddhima…. Hope u r not bored

It's 3:00 o'clock, their alarm start ringing..



Armaan puts off the alarm, shifts towards riddhima whose back was facing to him, put his arm around her waist…



A: (sleepy voice) riddhima utho 3:00 baj gaye hai…hume jana hai…



R: (turn towards armaaan and she also put her arms around his waist) gud noon… (and kiss him on chest)



A: gudnoon basket ( kisses her forehead) ab aap uth jaiye aur nahane jaiye, aapke kapde with jewellery sab uss table par pada hai……



R: armaan thodi der aur sone do na, mujhe neend aa rahi hai (and she moved more closer to armaan and put her head on his chest)



A: uth jao na late ho jayenge…



Riddhima finally goes in bathroom and got ready, she was wearing a mahrun heavy saree, with all the jewellery (same as marriage) as usual looking beautiful, armaan also got ready, he was wearing black suit, both were looking very sweet with each other…. Armaan put her pallu on her head covering her face for muh dikhai rassam…



Fianally completed with riddhima's muh dikhai rassam, they went to chirag house for riddhima's pag phera rassam….



At chirag house, riddhima was feeling little awkward,



Ritu, armaan aur chirag were busy in doing their eyes talk, chirag cell starts ringing… he jumped with happiness: ho gaya….



Armaan also smiles: ho gaya, very good…



R: kya ho gaya???? (all start looking at each other)



Ri: (changing topic) ab tum dono niklo, tumhe jana nahi hai kya???



R: haan jana hai, par jaldi kya hai????



A: nahi riddhima jaldi hai, hume chalna chahiye… (he almost pulled her hand)



R: mujhe unhe byee to kehne do..



A: are kahin nai jaa rahe wo, yahin par hai, milti rehna… chalo ab…



Finally they reached their destination…



Armaan cell starts ringing…



A: riddhima tum chalo mai aata hun, wahan se jana hai (he points towards door)



R: par armaan (before she cud say anything, armaan got busy in his cell, as soon as she took 2-3 steps forward, armaan hides behind his car…)



Armaan: ok on kar do… (he cuts the call)



One step more……



WELCOME RIDDHIMA TO R NEW HOUSE (with lights on wall)



Riddhima surprised, look back but didn't find armaan, then she move forward towards the door….. she looked on right side…



It's written on name plate which was decorated with plastic flowers…



RIDDHIMARMAAN MALIK NEST…

HEAVEN FALLS HERE



Just below this plate, a heart shape wooden plate on which it's written



LOVE IS LIFE ….



On door a chart was hanging..



Riddhima jayda confuse mat ho, ye hamara hi ghar hai, hamara ghonsla (nest)

Riddhima was astounded didn't know how to react, but anyways…



Riddhima tumhare left side par haldi ki thalli padi hai, aapne haath mai lekar left side jahan mere haath ka nishan hai uske aage tum bhi laga do aur phir darwaja kholo, apne pairon se wo chawal se bhara lauta(container) gira do.… she did so,



Then passed through the sindoor water…. Moved straight and stopped to see a Red plastic flowers curtain, she slightly pulled that curtain aside and was over-whelmed to see a very sweet, cute and small temple, made up of sandal wood with beautiful carving on it…



Temple was full of small figures of different god… she again find a small chart..



Riddhima I know ki tum har cheez ki shuruwat inhi ka naam lekar karti ho, isiliye hamare ghar ki entrance par maine inka chotta sa mandir banwa diya, challo ab jyot jala do….



Aur itni badi jyot dekh kar hairan mat hona.. maine socha hai ki hum iss jyot ko hamesha jala kar rakhenge jab tak hum inke pass nahi pahunch jate… acha idea hai na, mujhe pata hai… challo ab jyot jala do jaldi se, phir yahan se right mudna, kyunki left mai jagah nahi hai….. (haa haa haa)



Riddhima mumbles ye armaan bhi na..(she smiled) idea bahut acha hai par hum dono saath mai jyot jalayenge…



2-3 steps ke baad left mai kitchen rooms etc etc…hai, samne balcony hai 3-4 steps neeche uttar kar,



balcony was too big, square in shape, bangle curtains was making the boundary of balcony, each bangle has several ghngrus giving an extra ordinary look, in the centre of balcony one swing was there, dinning table and sofa set were placed on the corners and right in the front a very big lcd….



POP and interiors was just wao, and color combination, everything was perfect, riddhima turned left, a beautiful heart shape mirror was there, whose edges was covered with lights, a paper was pasted on it..



Riddhima ye magical mirror hai, jab bhi tum iske pass hogi ye tumhari image dikhayega aur jab dur…… khud jakar dekhlo pata chal jayega… riddhima little moved aback oh god she was surprised… all the sweet photos of them starting from when they met till their marriage was running turnwise, she placed her hands on her face out of pleasure



After sometime she stepped forward and entered into kitchen, again got a card..



To riddhima ji ye aapki sweet si pyari si kitchen hai, jisme aap bilkul nahi aayengi kyunki aapki khidmat mai hamesha ek servant pass rahega, jo saara kaam kiya karega, phir bhi kabhi aapka mann kare to aapke liye humne, I mean ritu ne saare containers ke uppar slip laga di hai ki kisme kya hai….



Ab aap apni crockery aur kitchen ka dhyan se nirikshan (judge) kijiye, agle stoppage tak ke liye namaskar……. (riddhima smiled)



Kitchen was fully modular, have all the facilities…. , after that washing room , then about 8-9 inches waterfall with a lovely couple standing in between, after that stairs follows..



Then one room…..



As soon as riddhima opened the door she was amused,



white foam was falling on their bed looking like snow, bed was bounded by offwhite net curtains, on front wall there was big photo of armaan riddhima of their marriage looking very sweet…



On windows beautiful wind chaims were hanging, to the right there was store room and to the left dressing room followed by bathroom, riddhima found a chit on curtains of store room….



Riddhima ji aapka apne store room mai swagat hai, 1st almirah kholiye, riddhima opened it and was surprised to find lods of sarees nd suits and all were stiched, 2-3 night suits, 4-5 gowns, jeans- tops and the thing was these were the same clothes which she had selected when she used to go with ritu in market… she again found a note….



Oe basket hairan mat ho, ye sab preplanned tha,mai tumhe market lekar ja nahi sakta tha, saara surprise khatam ho jata, isliye ritu tumhe market le jati thi… ab ghar mai har cheez tumhari pasand ki hai, mujhe pata hai tum meri tareef karna chahogi…. Ohh thanku, thanku, thanku…..



Acha tumhare jewellery saari locker mai hai, aur footwears sabse last block mai…



She closed the almirah and was movin to second almirah, found a note…



Riddhima iss store room mai ab saari almirah's tumhari to nahi hogi na, isse na kholna ye meri hai….



Riddhima smiled… then she looked other three rooms also…… she proceeded towards terrace…



On terrace there was one room made up of glass, in this also one bed was there, and from this room, one way was going downwards, she followed the way and reached in to a beautiful and colourfull garden, full of flowers…… she heard a voice…..



A: Aur ye hai aapka pyara sa bagicha (he came from back and holds her) kaisa laga aapko hamara chotta sa aashiyana……



R: (turned back, kissed him on forehead, then leaned her head on his chest) bahut bahut sundar, bilkul dream house jaisa, sab kuch ek dam perfect… ab aapke surprises ka silsila khatam ho gaya hai ya kuch aur bhi baaki hai…….



A: bas ek aur surprise, uske baad phinish (finish)….



R: aur kya surprise hai armaan….



A: challo to sahi… (he took riddhima in one wooden room In the centre of garden)



R: waoo…. Armaan ye bahut sundar hai.



A: hum har Sunday ko yaha par ek get together kiya karenge, abhi tak rahul auron ne bhi ye ghar nahi dekha, kya kehti ho????



R: bahut acha idea hai….. saara din saath mai bitayenge aur shaam ko sab aapne ghar chalein jaya karenge….



A: par surprise ye nahi hai..



R: phir kya hai???



A: kal hum subah ki flight se vaishno devi jaa rahein hai…..



R: kyaaaa????? (muh hi khula reh jata hai…)



A: riddhima muh band karo….



R: par tum aur vaishno devi, I mean aisi jagah????



Exactly humne bhi yehi pucha tha……. Ritu enters (hugged riddhima)



Ri: maine bhi yehi pucha tha ki honeymoon par tum yahan kyun ja rahe ho??



A: honeymoon par kaun ja raha hai, wahan to hum new year par jayenge 15 days ke liye, abhi to bas mata ko thanks karne ja rahe hai…



Riddhima: (excited and hugged armaan) waoo armaan kitna maaja aayega, mai aaj tak vaishno devi nahi gai….. ritu tum log bhi saath chal rahe ho na???



Ri: armaan se puch lo, hume koi problem nahi hai (looked naughtily at armaan)



R: tumhara kabhi majak khatam nahi ho sakta na????? acha ab pehle ghar chalo jyot jalani hai…. aur phir packing waoo…..



Ri: packing ki koi jarurat nahi hai, aapke bags taiyar pade hai, shawl, sweaters sab pack kar diye hai, aapko koi kaam nahi karna nanadjiiiiiii..



Riddhima thanked ritu, then they lighten the jyot…..



after having dinner ritu gave instructions to riddhima and then retire to their home…



Armaan and riddhima back to their room… riddhima was going in bathroom for changing her clothes and was surprised to see the door, actually the door was made of glass…



R: armaan, ye darwaja to…..



A: glass ka hai… to???



R: armaan glasss… isme se sab najar aata hai…



A: curtains bhi to hai kar lena… mujhpar bharosa nahi hai kya????



R: bilkul bhi nahi… (naughtily)



A: achaaa… (he moved closer to her) nahi hai.. (more closer)



Riddhima rushed in bathroom closed the door and tease armaan from glass showing her thumb,



A: riddhima ye bathroom lock nahi hota, bahar se khul jata hai, ye special bathroom hai, sirf hamare liye…



But riddhima won't able to hear this due to glass, dragged the curtain…



Armaan mumbles naughtily aaj nahi phir kabhi ghussenge bathroom mai…..

Part 23


It's 6:00 o'clock, riddhma and armaan were ready..

A: riddhima tickets check kar li??? (Riddhima nods) to phir chalein…

Finally they reached airport, announcement had been done for their flight..

After few minutes they were settled on their seats…

A: riddhima tumhe kuch khana hai??? subah se kuch nahi khaya tumne….

R: (putting her arm around his arm making a lock and leaning her head on his shoulder, closing her eyes) nahi armaan, mujhe neend aa rahi hai..

A: kitna soti ho yaar, kal subah se so rahi ho, neend nahi puri hui abhi tak… mere bare mai to koi sochta hi nahi hai.. (making a puppy face)

R: armaaaannnnnn… mujhe neend aa rahi hai..

A: tum kitni unromantic ho.. (but riddhima had already lost in her dreams, armaan looked at her, finally kissed her on her cheek, then caressed her hair, she smiled in dreams also, armaan put his arms around her shoulder, now her face was on his chest)

Finally they reached jammu, and did taxi for hotel…

Reception: yes

A: I'd booked one room with double bed..

Re: ur name plzz..

A: armaan malik..

Re: yes sir, ur room no. is 155, plz sign it here…. After all the formalities armaan and riddhima retire to their room….. it's 7:00 o'clock in evening

A: riddhima kal subah hum chadhai shuru karenge, jayda saaman na lena, carry karna
Mushkil ho jayega….

R: haan armaan maine alag bag laga liya hai,

A: riddhima dinner bahar lene chalna hai ya yahin par order kar de…

R: armaan yahin par order kar dete hai, I'm tired…

A: riddhima saare raste soti hui aayi ho, abhi bhi thaki ho??? Ye line to meri honi chahiye thi, abhi tak meri arms aur chest mai pain ho raha hai, ek to itni moti ho aur uppar se saara bhar mujhpar daal diya, haaye mera haath bechara ( he caresses his hand)

R: kya kaha mai moti hun??? (she throws pillow on him)

A: aur kya kha kha ke tunn tunn hui ja rahi ho, (before riddhima cud react, knock at door, waiter cums in and took the order, finally leaves)

After dinner, both changed their clothes, finally, riddhima sitting on bed supporting wall and armaan was lying on bed and his head was on riddhima's lap, continuously staring each other, don't know what happened, riddhima little bent down and kissed his eyes, then forehead, then cheeks….

Armaan really enjoyed this, then put his fingure on his lips, riddhima slightly blushed, then put hands on his eyes and closed them, start caressing his hair, both were enjoying their silence romance… after sometime, armaan shifts to his pillow and riddhima stretched out on bed, put off the lights…

In mid night riddhima felt very cold, blanket was not enough, she shifted towards armaan, and put her arm around his waist, they were face to face (sideways), his body was so hot, riddhima felt so relaxed, his hot breathe was doing wonders this time, riddhima slightly moved more close to him, to cover herself in him.. she was feeling so comfortable, now she was asleep….

It's 7:00 in morning, armaan cell start ringing, he slightly opened his eyes,cut the call coz he was in no mood to attend it, then again closed his eyes, but quickly opened it and was surprised to see himself and riddhima…

He was half lying over riddhima, his arms around her waist, and riddhima's arms were around his chest, their faces were crossed, they were so near, so emersed in each other

When armaan was wondering riddhima also opened her eyes, their faces were so closed, that armaan's nose was touching her cheeks with very little gap between their lips….

Armaan slightly kissed on her cheeks…

A: gudmrng basket…

R: (she felt his breathe, feeling tickly in her body, closed her eyes..)

A: waise aapne raat ko kya kia tha hamare saath jara vistaar se batayengi…

R: maine kya kia.. (very sweetly)

Armaan now shifts completely over her, move his head towards her neck so that she cud feel his breathe.. which was doing havoc for riddhima…

A: bataun kya????

R: (slightly whispers ) armaaannnn…..

Though riddhima was unable to control her body reactions for this close contact yet she was enjoying, she wants to put her arms around him, but… knock at door…

Both didn't like this interruption, but.. but…….

Armaan got separated with her, she was blushing, when going to open the door armaan pulled the blanket over her to neck as riddhima was in her night suit…

Riddhima liked his possessiveness… waiter came in for giving newspaper and bed tea…

Armaan again got a call, it's from ritu…

A: (giving cell to riddhima..)

R: hello..

Ri: hiii, gudmrng.. pehle kyu call katti, kya kar rahe the tum dono??? (she naughtily asked that question)

Riddhima blushed and looked at armaan, then: kuch nahi..

Ri: kuch nahi, matlab sab kuch… bata na????

(armaan took the cell, as he had heard what she was saying)

A: rituuu… yaar hum so rahe the, abhi abhi uthe hai, kyu subah subah chep ho rahi hai, pata nahi chirag kaise jhelta hai tujhe…

Ri: armaan tum wapis aao phir batati hu tumhe to…….

A: theek hai, par tab tak ke liye to baksh de hume…

Ri: wo kya haina ki chirag ko pni bahen ki badi fikar ho rahi thi ki wo tum jaise langoor ke saath theek bhi hai ya nahi isliye phone kiya tha…

A: (fake anger) tune mujhe langoor kaha, tu chipkali, (chirag took the phone)

Ch: kyu tum bacho ki tarah ladte rehte ho, tu bata kit um theek se pahunch gaye the aur kab chadhai shuru karoge….

A: haan theek hai, bas thodi der mai nikal rahein hai…

Ch: okk then byee, take care, enjoy..

A: byeee…

Riddhima already gone for bathing, after sometime when both were ready to go,

R: I luv u armaan… (hugging him from back)

A: oe hoye.. I luv u too jaan…

Then both leave for their yatra…. Armaan had already gathered all the information, means from where to start, what to see etcc.. etc….

Their taxi finally stopped from where the actual yatra starts… they stepped down from taxi, both were not wearing their footwears…

Armaan went to yatra registration counter and took the yatra slip…

Now they were finally starting their yatra, both were happy… they crossed the darshani darwaja, their first step… they showed their slip at banganga check post….

After walking few meters their first stoppage that is banganga arrived, they stepped down.. and settled on base, looking the flow of ganga….

R: waoo armaan kitna saaf aur nirmal pani hai, kitna sundar lag rahi hai ganga maiya, maine aaj tak itna sundar naajara nahi dekha…

A: haan, kehte hai mata ne dharti mai teer mara aur ye ganga prakat hui thi…. Tabhi
To itni saaf hai..

People were bathing in this water, sumone told them to take bath, then proceed forward…

Riddhima was wearing a casual suit, so she decided to get down in water in this suit only and armaan put out his jeans and shirt…

Armaan first stepped down in water, it was too chilled as if ice, he gave his hand to
Riddhima so that she cud easily come down..

As soon as she put her leg in water she stepped out and sits on ground…

R: armaan ye to bahut thanda hai, mai nahi naha paungi..

A: pani ke andar aa jao, dekhna khud thand lagni band ho jayegi…. He opened his arms wide so as to take her in his lap..

R: nahi armaan mai nahi aaungi, finally armaan from water put his arms between his legs and thighs and one arm holding her from back, lifts her up, riddhima shouting- nahi armaan, bahut thanda pani hai….

But armaan finally dropped her in water.. she was screaming mummy kitna thanda hai (like a baby) and enclose herself in his arms.. armaan also put his arms around her… both were standing like this until riddhima felt better…

And the other people were enjoying them, from riddhima mehendi and her chudda everyone understood that they are newly married…

A: riddhima ab bhi thand lag rahi hai????

R: nahi, ab theek hai.. (finally they realized that they were in public place, they got separated)

Riddhima naughtily spilled water on him, armaan in return did the same, both were enjoying very much, playing with water then holding each other hands jump in to water together…. (pehle pani ke andar jane ka mann nahi tha aur ab pani se bahar aane ka mann nahi tha..) after sometime they both get out..

Armaan started changing her clothes, riddhima took out her clothes from bag and searching for bathroom… stopped someone…

R: kya aap mujhe bata sakti hai ki bathroom kahan hoga????

Lady: yahan bath room to nahi hota, aapko nahi pata??? Yaha to saare chunni(duppatta), bedsheet ki oat (shed) banakar change karte hai……

She left after saying this and riddhima was still confused,wondering…….


Part 24


She left after saying this and riddhima was still confused,wondering…….

Armaan came near her after changing his clothes..

A: kya hua riddhima, abhi tak kapde nahi change kiye, thand lag jayegi…

R: armaan yaha koi bathroom nahi hai, mai kaise change karun????

A: (thinks a bit, then holds her hand) challo mere saath…(He took her a little back, near the wall) riddhima tum folding mat layi ho na???

R: haan, bag mai hai, par kyu????

A: nikalo.. (riddhima gave him mat, he makes a boundary around riddhima, on top puts the duppatta so as covering her from all the sides, he protectively holds the corner of mat, and asked her to change her clothes)

Riddhima settled down and start changing her clothes, armaan give her clothes then turned his face… riddhima felt too touched with this incident, armaan had made a sweet little bathroom for her,
she mumbles: tum mere saath ho to kissi ki bhi jarurat nahi hai mujhe armaan… i luv u jaan, don't need anyone, just u.. so lucky to have u..

A: riddhima tumne change kar liya hai????

R: haan armaan.

A: chalein..

R: armaan bindi aur sindoor laga do phir chalte hai… ( armaan picked up bag then moved forward)

After walking few meters their was a small temple like structure…

R: armaan ye kya hai????

A: I think charan paduka hogi mata ki, uss guide ne yehi bataya tha.. mata ke pairo ke nishaan,
Riddhima and armaan bent down and touched the foot prints of mata with devotion.. and stepped forward

R: armaan mai thak gai hun..

A: riddhima abhi to 9 kms aur chalna hai, challo… (he pulled her hand)

Riddhima slipped her arm in his arm and crossed their hands, they started walking slowly slowly, in between riddhima was resting her head on his shoulder… in this way they were walking… although tired yet both were enjoying a lot…

Finally they reached near one temple…

Riddhima screamed vaishno devi ka mandir aa gaya, aa gaya…

A: (slightly hitting her head) riddhima abhi nahi aaya…

R: to ye kya hai???

A: ye garbhjune guffa hai, abhi yaha se 7 kms aur upper jana hai…

R: aacchhaaa… (making a puppy face)

Anyways they passed from the guffa, rest a little in ardhkuwari mandir finally start… the atmosphere start turning a little chilly

After 2-3 hours they reached sanjhichatt, all the place was covered with snow giving a very beautiful look…

Riddhima and armaan start playing with snow, throwing balls on each other, then made one snowman of ice and took lots of photographs…
then proceed towards bhawan… both were very excited,

Took parshad and entered into bhawan, both were stunned to see the beauty of bhawan.. finally they were in front of mata, for few seconds they were lost then they gave packet to panditji and bent down… both thanked mata lovingly and prayed for their long lasting relation…

Finally proceed for bharavnath mandir… when they were on return.. snowfall starts…
Riddhima enfold herself in his arms, armaan put his arm around her shoulder, riddhima place her head on his chest, slipped her hand in his pocket… they were having pleasure enjoying snowfall as well as their closeness…. Once more they thanked mata heartily…

Next morning they were back to their hotel, both were very tired, wanted to fall on bed but armaan was not feeling ok, he had vomited twice in an hour, riddhima was worried… it may be due to chilly weather,

Riddhima checked his fever but it was normal, so she was some where relaxed, she finally helped armaan to change his clothes and asked him to lie down on bed, then pulled blanket over him and off the lights,

R: armaan mai abhi aa rahi hun, (saying this she went out of the room)

After sometime she came with a bowl in her hand and locked the door and dragged the curtains, put the heater closed to armaan…. Armaan was still not ok, he was still feeling like vomiting..

A: riddhimaaaa…

R: armaan bas 15 min do, abhi theek ho jaoge tum…

Riddhima finally unbuttoned his shirt and took warm oil from bowl and start massaging him from chest to stomach, so as to produce heat in his body, then did the same thing at back…. Armaan felt somewhat relax,

R: armaan feeling better???

A: nods his head…

R: tum pehle halka sa kuch khalo phir medicine le lo…

A: nahi,mujhe phir se vomiting aa jayegi,(he says it like a baby)

R: sirf 3-4 biscuits and tea…

A: hummmm…. Finally riddhima feeds him, then gave him medicine and place his head in her lap, start massaging his hair to make him feel better, armaan was fast asleep…
Then she gave him massage at his legs, while giving massage she slept on floor coz she was too tired…

In evening, armaan was feeling like chuhe kud rahe ho pate mai, so he woke up, he was now fine, searched for riddhima, looked down, she was sleeping on floor rolled in herself..

armaan sit beside her, pulled the strand of her hair back, bent down and kissed her on cheeks and lifts her, put her on bed, looking at her lovingly….

Start caressing her hair, riddhima felt something and opened her eyes, saw him admiring her, smiled,

R: armaan kaisa lag raha hai???

A: aapki maherbani se hum bilkul theek thak, hasht pusht aur tandrust ho gaye hai, see.. aur hamare pate mai chuhe bhi jor jor ke chhalange maar rahe hai…

R: (putting her hand on his face) aap rukiye hum abhi taiyar hokar aate hai, phir dinner lene chalte hai… (as soon as riddhima stood up she felt pain in her legs, not able to walk but she still managed somehow..)

They took dinner, then went for shopping for their friends…

A: tumne kuch apne liye to liya nahi???

R: le to lia sab kuch… (armaan confused) are baba mere liye to sab kuch tumhi ho, aur mujhe kuch nahi chahiye…

A: (smiled his million dollar wali) acha challo uss cloth house mai, waha se kuch dekhte hai..

R: okkk….

Finally armaan and riddhima liked one sweater..

R: bhaiya ye wala sweater pack kar dijiye..

Bhaiya: kaunsa colour, red ya blue..

A: blue..

R: red

(ding dong…. Blue was the favorite colour of riddhima and red was the favourite colour of armaan)

A: nahi riddhima tumpar blue jayda suit karega..

R: nahi armaan red jayda suit karega..

A: blue
R: red
A: blue
R: red
( riddhima want red colour coz he likes it and armaan blue coz she likes it, both started fighting)

bhaiya got frustrated with their fight, I mean they were fighting like kids

bhaiya: aap dono lad kyu rahein hai????

A: hum lad nahi rahe, mai to bas inhe samjha raha hun ki blue jayda acha hai:

R: armaan red jayda acha hai…

A: lets toss..

R: okkkk…. ( and riddhima won the toss and she jumped, armaan make a bechara face)

Bhaiya: to ab mai red pack kar doon…

R: (looked at armaan) nahi bhaiya aap blue hi pack kar dijiye..

Bhaiya mumbles: to abhi tak kyu paglo ki tarah lad rahe the, jaise ek dusre ka sir hi phod denge…. Mera saara waqt barbaad kar diya..

Armaan as if murjhaya hua phool phir se khil gaya ho….mujhe pata tha tum blue hi logi… I luv u…

R: yehi to problem hai ki I luv u too

When done with shopping they retired to their room and finally settled on bed..

Armaan back was facing riddhima…

R: armaan idhar muh karo na.. (armaan turned towards her, riddhima slightly shift near him to cover the little gap between them, and took his arm place it across her tummy)

A: ( pleased with her gesture) kya baat hai aaj to aapke mijaaz kuch badle badle se lag rahein hai, sab kuch theek to hai,( saying this he put his head near her neck, his chin was touching her shoulder)

Ridhima slightly blushed, but she wants to remain like this, as she really enjoyed this closeness… armaan kissed her on neck…

R: (change topic) armaan kal hum wapis ja rahein hai???

A: kyu nahi jana kya???

R: armaan mai soch rahi thi ki itni dur aayein hai to baaki ki deviyon ke bhi darshan kar jayein, what say??

A: actually maine bhi yehi socha tha, par puchna bhul gaya…

R: par mai kissi bhi devi par ab chadhai nahi karungi, meri tango mai sach mai himmat nahi hai… bahut dard ho rahi hai..

A: (little worried) tumne pehle kyu nahi bataya, lao mai massage kar deta hun..

R: are ab to theek ho gai hai, maine khud hi oil laga liya tha, bas halka pain hai kal subah tak theek ho jayega, don't worry…

A: r u sure???

R: haan baba… ab lights off karo aur so jao…

Armaan put off the lights, riddhima kissed him on head, armaan tightly helds her from waist, riddhima in return holds his arm tightly, both were lost in dreams…


Part 25


Next day:

It's 6:00 o'clock, they left hotel and did taxi for three days and had visited to the following devis
chintpurni devi, chamunda devi, mansa devi, jawala devi, vajreshwari devi, shakambhari devi, kalika devi, Naina devi, thanked them with one wish in heart i.e. there long lasting relation nothing else they want, took many photographs, enjoyed a lot…

this was their first trip together which was just superb, for both of them it was just out of the world, it was full of love, masti, understanding, passion, enjoyed every bit of it,they celebrated every moment of togetherness

armaan had never been interested to visit such kind of places par wo kehte hai na pyar sabko badal deta hai…. This trip added more sweetness in their relation,

finally on forth day they were on airport…

A: to riddhima kaisa laga aapko yahan aakar???

R: jaise jannat mai ghum rahi hu, waise jahan bhi aap honge hamare saath wo jagah khud hi jannat ban jayegi, (saying this she put her hand in his arms)

A: (smiles) I luv u riddhima..

R: I luv u too… (announcement for their flight)

In evening they reached Mumbai, ritu and chirag were already waiting for them

Ch: heyy armaan kaisa hai??? Kaisa raha tumhara honeymoon (hugged him)

A: bahut badiya…

Ch: aur riddhima tum kaisi ho??? Jayda pareshan to nahi kiya armaan ne (hugging her)

Ri: (hugging riddhima) waise chehre ka noor dekhkar lagta hai ki aapka honeymoon bahut acha gaya, phir bhi aap bata sakti hai agar aapko armaan ne pareshan kiya ho to…

Riddhima smiled and shakes her head to say no…

Ri: dekha maine pehle hi kaha tha, riddhima ke chehre ki rounak hi bata rahi hai, waise riddhima armaan ne tumhe mata ke darshan to karwa diye the na… (she naughtily asked that)

A: ritu tu phir shuru ho gai…

Ri: oooo ohhh…. (teasing him)Riddhima ko kuch kehne ki der hai aur aarmaan ka baaja bajna shuru ho jata hai (all start laughing)

A: ritu hum airport par khade hai, sab dekh rahe hai…

Ri: haan jiski aankhein hai wo dekh kar hi chalega, ab aankhein band to kar nahi lega na, bhagwan ne aankhein shayad dekhne ke liye hi di hoti hai,

Chirag and riddhima wondering: kyu ye ladte hai itna..

A: mujhe maaf kardo ritu ji humse bahut badi galti hui jo aapse ulajhne ki sochi… (he put his hands together)

Ri: pair chuo phir maafi milegi… (show him her leg)

R: rituu….. plzzz ghar chalein hum thak gaye hai,

Finally they went home… when entering in to house, riddhima's feet slightly clashed with the stairs due to which she lost her balance and bumps into armaan's back…

A: (turning back) riddhima tum theek to ho??

R: haan bas wo (ritu cuts in between)

Ri: kahi chakkar to nahi aa gaya tha??

R: (understanding what she wanna say) nahi ritu bilkul nahi, mera pair mud gaya tha isliye….

Ri: (she whispered in her ears) oh aisa mujhe laga kahi koi gud wali news na ho..

R: batane ki jarurat nahi hai, mai pehle hi samajh gai ki tum yehi kahogi…

Ri: (sitting on sofa) are wah pehli baar kissi nanad aur bhabhi mai itni achi understanding
Dekhi hai…

R: haan aur pehli baar maine aisi bhabhi dekhi hai jo har waqt apni nanad ki tang khinchti rehti hai…

Ri: waise tumhe switzerland, mauritius jaisi jagah jana chahiye tha apne honeymoon ke liye… ya kahin aur jo achi si dekhne ki cheez ho…

R: nahi ritu vaishno devi jakar bahut maaja aaya, aur tujhe pata hai wahan mata ne scheme nikali hui thi….

Ritu and chirag together: kya matlab????

A: mai samjhata hun, mata ne scheme ye nikali hui thi ki mere darshan karo aur muft (free) mai pao jharne (waterfalls)

R: side scenes jo kabhi na dekhe ho…

A: water kingdom where we can play with water (banganga remember)

R: snow where we played with lot of ice…

A: snowfall bhi hui thi, aur sabse badi baat hum logon ko free mai mila ek dusre ka saath, 48 hours haath pakadkar masti mai chalna

R: aur uske baad mata ke darshan.. ahh haaa… aakhein khuli reh gai thi maa ka bhawan dekhkar….

A: ab tum batao itni achi aur sasti scheme kahin aur milegi??? Sab kuch to dekh liya.. aur mata ke darshan bhi ho gaye

Ri: ohh to ye baat hai……par abhi tum mata ki chadhai nahi kar rahe ho, ab tum apne ghar par ho, phir tumne riddhima ka haath kyu pakad rakha hai…

Riddhima gave her a frustrated look..

A: apni basket ka hi haath pakad rakha hai, tera haath to nahi pakda na…

Ch: ab bas karo yaar bahut bhook lagi hai, kuch khane ko milega???

R: haan par thodi wait karni padegi, kyunki abhi khana banana hai… (she got up from her seat, armaan pulled her back, riddhima looked him questionlly)

A: riddhima maine kaha tha na kitchen mai tum bilkul nahi jaogi.. (then he shouts ramu khana ban gaya kya??? Everyone looked at him) wo actually maine ramu ko pehle hi keh dia tha ki wo khana bana kar rakhe…

Ch: tujhe itni akkal hai (teasingly said him) anyways they have dinner, ritu and chirag left for their home…

Riddhima stretched on sofa..

A: riddhima upper apne room mai challo, wahi par sona, challo jaldi se..

R: armaaaannnn (she said it sooooo sweetly)

A: (turned back) haan..

R: (stretched her arms) armaan goddi.. (said like a baby, then make a puppy face)

A: ohh my sweetu..

he lifts her up, riddhima put her arms tightly around his neck, looking him continuously, then start playing with his hair, finally they were in their room, armaan put her on bed, but she was still holding him from his neck…

A: riddhima tum apne room mai aa gai ho, (he thought that she slept, but riddhima was awake)

Riddhima shook her head to say no…

A: basket aapke iraade hume jara nek nahi lag rahe…

R: iraade bhi nek hai, aur hum bhi nek hai, bas aapko chodne ka mann nahi kar raha

Armaan smiled, opened his shoes with his foot, moved on riddhima, he really loved these little gestures of riddhima… armaan kissed her on forehead now happy… (riddhima smiled and kissed his cheeks, then fast asleep…)

Next day it was Sunday, they slept till 11:00 o'clock, in evening went to chirag's house, enjoyed there…. That's how their Sunday was spent….. both were excited for tomorrow as they'll join sanjeevani almost after a month of holidays, they'll meet their friends.. tomorrow will be the first day after their marriage

Waoo from now they'll go together, no more lukka chuppi, no more darr ki haye ye dekh lega ya koi sunn lega, no more pranks, but one thing remain the same that's their fire escape…. Let's see how they are welcomed in sanjeevani….





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Thursday, December 18

Dill Mill Gayye Dec 18 Episode

Serial: Dil Mil Gaye (Dill Mill Gayye)
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Wednesday, December 17

Episode 18: Pyaar Ishq Aur Mohabbat

Hi guyz..

Sorry.. Actually mera interner kharab hai.. Isiliye main.. Week mein sirf ek baar online arahi hoon. Main aaj apne internet company ki band bajane jaarahi hoon..

Wish me all the best..

Anyways heres the episode..
Enjoy and dont forget to comment!!

Title: Pyaar Ishq Aur Mohabbat
Episode: 18
Author: Abeer Khan



Recap: Old Intern Gang and New Intern Gang go to a club to have some fun together.. But lagta hai.. Maine Ridhimma ke liye kuch aur hi soch rakha tha...

La: You have to leave Ridhimma.. Kyunki agar tumhari yeh saanse chalti rahengi.. to mera armaan mujhse door hojayega.. And I dont want that.. So say your prayers.. Cuz its time to say good bye...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ri: Nahi... AAAAA...

Anjali enters..

An: Ridzee....

Ri: Di....

The lady runs away...

Ridhimma hugs anjali...

An: Oh ma god... Ridzee woh kaun thi??

Ri: Maine kaha tha.. that was no joke.. Woh phone calls.. They were for real.. and this time.. she came to kill me di.. Woh mujhe maar na chahti thi.. She had a gun with her.. She was this close to kill me.. Thanks for saving my life di...

An: I have to tell armaan about this.. Its high time he knows about this..

Anjali runs outta the ladies room..

Ridhimma realised Anjali's intentions and ran behind her...

r: nahi di.. pls..

an: armaan.... armaan.. huhuhuh.. armaan.. ridzee...

a: kya hua anjali.. relax.. breathe.. relax..

an: there was some women in the ladies room to kill ridhimma...

a: what!!!!! armaan lost his senses he ran towards ridhimma..

A: Ridhimma. tum theek to ho na..
he was literally in tears... He was just looking at Ridhimma...

The others were really worried..

Avni ran towards the Ladies room to check again... She might find the Lady..

Av: Yaha to koi bhi nah..

She found something lying on the floor... Something black..

She opened the door of the Bathroom..

She found a Burqa lying there and the window open..

Av: Shayad woh inhi kapdo main thi...

She went back to others.

Av: Sir, Waha sirf yehi hai... She showed the burqa..

An: Armaan woh inhi kapdo main thi...

Ka: Sal..adi.. chal. Bahar chalke dekhte we might find something...

Ar: No.. Let me handle this..Ridhimma. kia chahiye usse..

Ri: quiet..

Ar: Ridhimma.. pls..( Quietly)

Ri: Tum..

Ar: Huh?

Ri: Armaan woh jo koi bhi hai.. Woh tumhe chahti hai.. She wants you.. Woh kehti hai.. that i came in between u.. n her.. isiliye woh mujhe marrna chahti hai..

Shilpa and Ermeena gasps..

Ar: Chalo..

Ri: Kaha..

Ra: Oh god.. Muskaan yeh bohut gusse mein hai. yeh might do something...

Ar: Chalo...

He tightens his grip on ridhimma's hand..
And takes her outside..

At: Guyz hame bhi chalna chahiye. before... woh koi galat kadam uthale.. Armaan ka gussa bohut kharab hai..

Armaan goes to his car open the door for ridhimma and sits on the drivers seat.. He drives like crazy...

Ri: Armaan.. pls.. aahista chalo. pls...

Armaan was quiet but he could realise that ridhimma was scared of the speed.. But his anger was in power....

He reached home.. he comes out and finds everyone's car behind him.. Rahul, Muskaan, Atul and Anjali... He also saw The new interns.. Shilpa and ermeena were crying.. Avni was trying to calm them down..

Armaan walked upto ridhimma.. And found ridhimma all scared inside the car.. crying.. she almost lost her voice.. and she dint look at armaan ...

He opened the door and Ridhimma came out he got hold of her Hand and took her inside..

Everyone followed them...


Armaan looked around their garden.. he found wooden sticks.. lying in the corner..

He brought them in the middle..


Scene change...

A girl is throwing things in the room...
and a man is standing in the corner looking at her..

Ma: Yeh sab karne se kuch nahi hone wala.. U shud have been more careful.. Atleast they dint see u.
You should be thankful.

La: Shut up.. Thankful... I dint kill her.. do u realise.. Woh ek aur raat mere armaan ke saath hogi. I can't stand this.. Main jaarahi hoon.. I am going to kill her.. Tonight..

Ma: Paagal pan mat karo.. Maine kaha na sab theek hojayega.. we just need to be more carefull..

scene change...

Armaan fired the wooden sticks...

Ri: Armaan.. yeh sab..

Armaan ridhimma ka haath pakad leta hai..

Ar: Ridhimma.. Hamne aise hi.. Agni ko saakhshi maankar ek doosre ko aapna banaliya tha.. Aaj jab tumhe darr hai.. ke hum alag hojayenge.. toh main apni rasmein aur kasmein dohrana chahta. hoon..

scene change..

La: Usne Agni ko saakhshi maankar 7 phere liye the na... Main uske un phero ko ultadoungi..

scene change..

A: Main agni ko saakhshi man kar doobara yeh vachan leta hoon..(guyz i am makking this armaan custom made.. vachann.. i hope that i am not hurtinng and religious feeling.. If anything then i would like to apologise)


KE MAIN ZINDAGI BHAR TUMHARA SAATH NIBHAONGA..

scene change..

La: Zindagi ke 7 saath saal us ridhimma ne mere armaan ke saath guzare.. main ridhimma ki har ke saas se unka hisaab loungi...

scene change..

Ar: HAR DUKH MAIN HAR SUKH MAIN MAIN HAMESHA TUMHARE SAATH RAHONGA..

scene change:
La:Mera sukh chain cheen kar usne mere armaan ko aapna banaya tha na.. Ab se uski zindagi main sirf aur sirf dukh hoga..

scene change.

Ar: KISI DUKH TAKLEEF YA PAREESHANI KO TUMHE CHOONE BHI NAHI DOONGA..

scene change..

La: Pareshaan hona toh bohut choti baat hai.. Yeh prem kahani Khtam kardoungi..

scene change..

AR: MAIN TUMHE AAPNI JAAN SE BHI ZYADA CHAHONGA.. MERA CHAAHAT.. MERI MOHABBAT TUMHARE LIYE BESHOMAR HOGI. USKA KOI HISAAB NAHI HOGA..

scene change...

LA: bohut chahta hai na armaan usse.. uski chahat ka sahi matlab to tab pata chalega.. jab main yani ke uska asli pyaar uske saamne ayega..

scene change...

AR: MERI HAR KHUSHI TUMHARI AUR TUMHARE HAR GHAM MERA...

scene change:
La:Ridhimma ki zindagi main koi khushi nahi rahegi.

Scene Change:

AR: HAMARI IS PYAAR KI HIFAZAT MAIN MARTE DAM TAK KARTA RAHONGA..

scene change:

La: Yeh kaahani main jaldi maut ka chapter aane wala hai.. ridhimma ki maut main hi meri zindagi chupi hai.

scene change:

AR: (he stop and looks at ridhimma) MAIN VAADA KARTA HOON.. KE MARNE KE BAAD BHI.. HUM EK SAATH RAHENGE.. KYUNKI MAUT BHI HAMARE PYAAR KE SAAMNE CHOOTI HAI...


ri: armaan... She hugs him..

Every body around them gets very emotional..

ADI: Dekha.. Pyaar isse kehte hai. Jo maut se bhi na dare..
Av: Sach.. Aise pyaar karne waale pehli baar dekhe hai..

Shi: Hey bhagwan.. inki raksha karna.. inke pyaar ko kisiki nazar na lage..
Ka: Dont worry.. inke pyaar ko kisiki nazar nahi lagegi...Aur hamare pyaar ko bhi ( quietly)..

Sal: Oh god.. I hope sab theek hojaye..
Er: Dont worry.. Jo log saccha pyaar karte hai.. unka koi kuch nahi karsakhta..

Anjali and Muskaan were very emotional.. and were crying..
Rahul and Atull were very proud of their friend...


Armaan and Ridhimma were still hugging and Crying..



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Dill Mill Gayye Dec 17 Episode

Serial: Dil Mil Gaye (Dill Mill Gayye)
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Creatives Are Underplyaing Riddhima

I have made this observation in the last few weeks... i get this strong feeling that the creatives for some reason are underplaying the character of Riddhima for reasons best known to them... in the last three weeks she has added nothing to the story other than being a compliant girlfriend who has immense faith in the love of her life... i mean wasnt Riddhima supposed to be alot more than that? isnt she the lead lady of the show... in the past days, we get to see her only of Armaan is in the frame. Otherwise even when, she is with the entire team, she just has one line... at first i thought perhaps i am just over reacting to the situation... but now i think after yesterday's episode, i am sure about my doubts... for one, i think the character of Riddhima, who was shown to be someone who strong minded and indepandant has taken a serious toss! do the creatives think she is not capable of doing more? i mean, the week when Armaan was not on the scene, they could have used her anguish to show how torn she is because she is the only one who actually knows what her father is going through… so in her capacity should she not be doing something, for starters not just barge into Modi’s room and giving him gyan about him taking her father’s seat… but actually doing something from her side to show, that she will get him out of there… Armaan has not been around, but does she not wanna do anything at all???

Well I really don’t know what the problem is, but I personally think, Sukirti is a wonderful actress, atleast by what we get to see on screen and, she has done a good job of being Riddhima.. the creatives need to give her character more substance… they need to show more of her in terms of quality… if you show one scene of her per day, fine, but show her add something to the storyline… here she is doing none of that…. I personally loved that week where she was really shaken by the whole Sanjeevani crisis, when was crying it on her shoulders…. I personally think she must do something from her side as well… when she is with the gang she looks like a mere extra and that’s not what I want the lead actress of a show to be portrayed like….

I am kinda sick of this. I want Riddhima to be a lot more than that… and I hope the creatives do have something nice in store for us…

I think when the character of Riddhima was conceivedm their whole idea was to show a woman of today, who has her principles intact, but she had her issues with life as well… she was not simple… she was complex, she was a combination of a normal daily next next door main lead and a girl who is so not easy to get or please. Perhaps that was one of the reasons that had drawn Armaan to her… so today, when she has her lover by her side, does her world come to an end… is she content with life… does she not want to make anything else out of her life… I mean.. tell me… if that’s what they actually wanted her to do, then I am fine by it, I will not except much out of her… I mean is she a doctor at all? Some days back, it was so ridiculous, when she see’s Armaan’s pictures with Niki and she is in the ward and Armaan comes to ask her if she felt bad, she takes two tablet strips and asks Armaan tell me what medicine to give this guy? Does she not know that much? Will she never handle a case? What happened to the cases like the one’s with Sumit and also the very first complicated pregnancy case Riddhima had handled…. Didn’t it evoke certain emotions in all of us… didn’t we all relate to it… didn’t we think for once, had I been Riddhima, perhaps this is what even I would have done…,

The creatives are so busy establishing the love story that they seem to have totally forgotten that Riddhima is an intelligent woman. Where is the variety. Stop playing it safe creatives… its time to take on a risk… how long will you show AR as the couple who doesn’t see the world beyond love… I mean its so ridiculous… Riddhima is so openly dependant on Armaan and everyone over looks it… chuck logic, but still, if you want the make love story your theme, keep it that way, but don’t divert for the purpose and the crux of ur show…. If you want to say, you are just using the hospital as a backdrop, then make sure, you use tools around the hospital in a meaningful manner… I haven’t seen the OT used in ages, except for a small recent one which was turned into a comedy sequence… what happened scene like the one where Armaan was operating, and coulnt concentrate cos of the Riddhima tension, or another one, where he is tensed but still does his bit so well… Armaan I understand is important… but please don’t demean Riddhima’s importance, by saying her world starts and ends with Armaan… if I have pegged ur story right, it was always Armaan who was supposed to be edgy when it came to Riddhima…. She was the one who always gave him the push to be on his best behavior… if you are trying to say their love story has progressed, and its now all a smooth sailing for the couple, then bring in situations where you establish that Riddhima would actually be Riddhima and not just Armaan’s girl friend in a crisis situation… why havnt u done that…. When you have given each character such deep and profound meaning, don’t kill it now, by focusing on plots that look like a mere ad hoc story line…

I personally never really thought, all the characters of DMG are perfect actors, except Karan ofcourse, but still each character has a certain mannerism… Writers of the show, u do ur bit, the acting hopefully should come along…. I know there are TRP’s to take care of… but do you really care about us, if you do, please realize that in the past few weeks no one has been very happy with way DMG is going… and its time major changes are made to the treatment given to the show we love so much…. We love it so we say all this… you may have ur internal reasons for not being able to deliver a certain thing, but if a show is not able to deliver something, that we have always expected I really calls for a check! Now is that check going to come from our side in the form of withdrawal or from urs to pull up urs socks is totally ur call…

Hoping for a change….. hope you are listening…. Ever optimistic… never will stop loving DMG

Loads of Love,
niha

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Tuesday, December 16

Dill Mill Gayye Dec 16 Episode

Serial: Dil Mil Gaye (Dill Mill Gayye)
Channel : Star One

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Monday, December 15

Dill Mill Gayye Dec 15 Episode

Serial: Dil Mil Gaye (Dill Mill Gayye)
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Lesson 37: Principles Should Be Set In Concrete

Lesson 37 (every Mon)

Thanks rini and angel
YOUR PRINCIPLES SHOULD BE SET IN CONCRETE
BUT NOT YOUR METHODS
Change is the only constant in life. As a motivational speaker my life has been all about helping people. U see I learned that principle is’ help people.’ Now my method is normally to speak publically but I discovered others methods to help people. One of my gifts is the ability to raise finance for charities. Another one to coach people one on one which I use in a corporate setting. I did not have to be on stage all the time to be helping people. The principle is to help people but the method changed to helping charities raise money and coaching a small circle of people.
It is amazing how people stick to one method of doing things. Some towns still ring the church bell because that’s the way people used to announce church hundreds of years ago. Now they ring the church bells and everybody thinks its wedding. The congregation has never stopped to ask if this method is working or if there is a better way.
As great as Henry ford was he had poor people skills. When people wanting to buy his model t fords started asking him for a different color car, he would answere u can have any color u want as long as it is black.’ That’s when his business started to decline. He believed that the model T ended the need for any other car.
In the movie five easy pieces, jack Nicholson goes into a restaurant and asks for a side order of toast and when he is told it is not on the menu he comes up with a solution. He orders chicken salad on toast then he instructs the waitress saying no mayonnaise, just butter hold the chiken salad.
(Extract fromPower principles to rise above adversity
By pat mesiti)
Guys I donot think many people read this and those who read are just not able to come always because of their busy schedule so from now it will be on Monday so that they all can read it.
Love u karan
Karan ki dewani
Kalyug ki meera mithila

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Sunday, December 14

I Met Someone - Are friends trustworthy

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I MET SOMEONE - 9

Are friends trustworthy


This compilation is for all my friends out here.All characters
are purely fictious and does not have resemblence to any
real persons.It may contain material which is inadequate
for person lesser then 15 Years of Age.Hence reader
descretion is suggested.
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God.She is just no where.I even checked in restrooms and all the places that could be checked. Has she left from the party.But she could have spoken to me and gone.I dont think she has left.She should be somewhere else.

and I continued checking for her..

somewhere else.
Voice: common baby.Its quite ok..whats the problem.
Mayandhari: stop it Anjan..please..I m begging you.
Voice: (gave a tight slap to her) Just shut up..OK..just shut up..You are ruining my mood baby..lets just get on with it..
Mayandhari: Aahh..How could you slap me....Help..please help..anyone..
Voice: You wont stop troubling me..right..Ok..then..lets go from here(He dragged her to a nearby room...)..

After some time..

The person came out of the room and got mixed with the crowd.Mayandhari who couldnt believe what has happened with her was still in naustic frame of mind.She came out of the place and sat on a stone near the gate.....and started crying.Her friends who were searching for her got her on gate and were more than shocked to find her in that state.They soon find the cause.

Riti: Tu bus uska naam bata de.
Priya: Mayandhari..tu sun rahi hai na..
Riti: God damad..please...
Mayandhari: Mujhe nahi malum yar...Vo andhere main..(..subak..subak..)
Priya: Mayandhari tu last time kiske sath thi..
Riti: Anjan...shhh...
Priya: Oh My God..He doesnt look like he...
Mayandhari: please stop it guys..mujhe nahi malum ki kaun tha..now please is cheez ko yahin khatm karo..I dont want ki yeh baat papa ya kisi ko bhi..
Riti: Mayandhari tu yeh kya bol rahi hai..How dare he..chalo police station chalte hain..
Mayandhari: maine kaha na..please yar..please..
Riti: fine...ab chalo yahan se..I dont want to be here anymore...

They took their jeep from the place and started.Mayandhari was feeling pathetic and soon started hating herself.Her innerself was not at all giving her any consolance.It spoke of hatred and only hatred.The hatred was for her herself and for..Anjan.."I will never forgive you anjan...Never..".Soon the jeep crossed limits of the party house.

Party got over by 1 am but I didnt find her.My friends came searching for me.

Avi: abey yar...tu kahan ghoom raha hai..Chal party khatm..
I: yaar vo mayandhari..
Avi: kaun..
I: yar vo jo mere sath thi..
dushi: avi..vahi yar jo anjan ke sath dance kar rahi thi..
Avi: oh man..tu kabse aisa..
I: yar yeh sab chod..vo 12 baje ke bad gayab hi ho gayee..I mean..she just left..kaise yar...
Pawan: abey aisa hi hota hai..jyada seriously nahi lene ka..she might have got an urgent call or something..chod na..
I:(thought for sometime)..Ok guys..lets go..
Avi: ya we will leave..but wheres puneet..pata nahi kahan hai..
Puneet:(from no where..) yahan hoon..chalein..
Dushi: kahan tha yar..
Puneet: Bus masti kar raha tha..
Avi: Aur tere gale main yeh cut kaisa hai..I hope nothing major
Puneet: kahan..(toches the area..feels the pinch)..oouch..
Avi: I m sure its not minor then..kaise hua..
Puneet: pata nahi yar..
Pawan: yeh to kisi ke nakhun ka nishan lagta hai..puneet beta..batao kahan se mar khake aa rahe..ho..
Puneet: guys..nothing..chalo abhi..

We started back to our school.We got a lift from a coming truck.For the rest of the journey I tried to justify myself with the happenings but I didnt succeed in that.

I was lost in school memories before Maya made a click sound with her fingers.I came to present CCD in no time.

Maya: so..
I: thanks for reminding me everything..It was such a lovely time in school.
Maya:(hits the table very hard..everyone else starts looking at us)..WHAT..lovely time..
I: Maya..please..common..this is a public place..and I dont know maine aisa kya kaha ki aapko itna gussa aa raha hai..
Maya: To us raat sab theek theek hua tha..right..
I: offcourse..except ki Mayandhari mujhe bina kuch kahe chali gayi..
Maya: u..damad..tumne use aisi halat main choda tha..ki vo tumhe kuch kehke jaati..
I: what..! what r u speaking..
Maya: aapko abhi tak kuch pata nahi chala na...I dont think mere face main itna change aaya hai anjan..
I:(started reading her face..),,I didnt get..
Maya: main hi mayandhari hoon Anjan..Maya is my short name..
I:(looked her in surprise..after some time..) Oh God..whats this..
Maya: haan ab to bhagwan hi yaad ayenge..
I: listen girl..yeh to bahut achi baat hai ki tum hi mayandhari ho..but I m not able to understand ki why are you behaving like this with me.
Maya: stop it..anjan..just stop it..If you want to listen then..listen..you RAP** me that night you BAS****.


I:(the whole world came down..I wasnt feeling at all in minds...what the hell man..) R U MAD..
Maya: ya..I m..us hadse ke bad normal to reh nahi sakti na..
I:Tumhe shayad janke ajeeb lage but after the clock ticked 12 that night..I didnt saw you in the party at all...
Maya: kya matlab..
I:yehi ki after you left for restroom.We never met.
Maya:acha to vo kaun tha jo andhere main mere sath..(eyes moist)
I:Maya..believe me that was not me..Main to upne friends ke sath vapas chala gaya tha....
Maya: thats a complete story and not truth.
I: OK..agar tumhe believe nahi ho raha to main tumhari baat Avi se karwa deta hoon.He is still in contacts with me.
Maya: and why should I believe you..
I: Is there any other way out..
Maya: No..
I: then..
Maya: OK..fine..

I took out my mobile and placed a call to Avi.

He works in London.He has been the most successful of our batchmates.After Military School,he continued higher studies in bangalore and pursed MBA from IIM-B.Post that,he got a job in london and he is settled there.

The call got connected.

Avi: you bugger..ab yad aayi dost ki..vo bhi itne dino bad...bata kaise hai tu..I mean long time haan..
I: yar..(serious)..tujhe mayandhari yaad hai..

The call disconnected.

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I MET SOMEONE
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Everything is gonna all right.
Anjan

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Ehsaas Dillon ke: Epilogue !!!

The wind is blowing ...the sky is very very blue with slight clouds showing from time to time...the smell of crips freash leaves is filling the atmosphere...and the sounds of laughter echoes across the little pond which lies in the middle of huge lush carpet of grass...


Armaan leans back against the trunk of a tree.. flexing one knee, he rests his arm across it, lazily watching the most endearing sight before him...Dia is trying her damnest hard to throw a ball back to Angel who is acting all grown up and monitoring the little devil... Armaan calls her " his shaitan bacha " lovingly... she is a spitting image of Rahul and have habits like her mother..Muskaan rightly pointed out that, Dia could surely pack a punch in kick boxing.. the bruise near his chin is evident enough... He smiles as he fingers his chin... soon, he would be experiencing the same kicks and punches on a regular basis...the future looks all like a battle feild in which he would love to lose everytime..

He shifts his gaze to a vibrant figure coming out of the house with a steaming dish in her hands...She hadnt changed at all.. Any moment she would start screeming her lungs out calling out for that khota husband of hers... Armaan shakes his head with a smile .. Thank god some things remained the same...speaking of that khota..."where was he".. He scans the farm..finally he spots Rahul with Atul near the bed of roses.. Atul is busy admiring the plants .. Atul has definately changed in last 6 months.. He has grown more responsible and mature.. His theatrics has lessened with time but he is as innocent as he was 4 years back.... with changing circumstances Atul too had mellowed down.. but his love for his plants and eco-friendly envoirment remained intact...infact the love he feels for nature has come in daughter too.. she loves to water all plants personally after she comes back from her pre-toddlers school...Armaan looks back at Angel once again.. she is so much like her mother ... everything has to be prim and proper.. even now she is trying again and again for Dia to catch the ball...He smiles at the 2 little angels in front of him...

Rahul is now walking towards him wih a cold drink in his hand.. How things had changed for Rahul since his sister passed away.. his moving to Patiala and then taking over Sanjeevani Chandigarh branch was so sudden...He is happy and contended from the looks of it.. he does miss him occasionally, but life is where destiny is...and his destiny lies with Muskaan and Dia..and his destiny is now walking slowly with a tray towards the table which is set for lunch...

"Riddhima"..the love of his live.. Armaan now watches her carefully catching her each movement...he just doesnt get tired of seeing her ever.. for him the last 6 months of his life is the most beautiful ones.. not that the last 4 years ever lessened the beauty of it... but now Riddhima was his wife, his soul mate...and they were complete now...

The wind blows and throws Riddhima's hair across her face.. she brushes them aside and gets a peculiar feeling of being watched.. she turns her head to where Armaan is sitting....she smiles at him with a question look "if everything is alright.." he justs nods and mouths " love you.." he is still amazed as to how she blushes evertime he says it to her...His love for her kept growing in time...he is stiil looking at her when a voice speaks up..

Ra:"tum logon ka romance abhi takchal raha hai..?"

Aramaan smiles sheepishly..."kya karoon yaar .. cant beleive she is actually mine and that too forever.."

Ra:" really man..! you guys have seen a lot... tough times... i'm happy for you yaar.."

Rahul pats Armaan on his shoulder and gives him his drink...

Ar:" Aur bata, kaam kaisa chal raha hai... last suna tha ke tum log mumbai shift hone ka soch rahe ho.."

Ra:" pata nahi Armaan ... abhi kuch finalise nahi kiya hai...Ma , baoji chahate hai ki hum mumbai shift ho jaye...unhe lagta hai ki Muskaan ka mann abhi bhi waha hai...par ek baat batao Muskaan has really changed .. woh sach mein badal gayi hai... usne kaafi adjustments ki hai..."

Ar:" can see that Rahul...but whatever you decide make sure uncle , aunty are fine by it.."

Rahul nods and they both go over to Atul who is talking to this hibiscus flower... both Armaan and Rahul look at each other and look up to the sky and exchange a look which says.."yeh waisa ka waisa hai"

Ar:" yaar champ, tu yahan kab se inse baatein kar raha hai.. hum se bhi baat kar le..."

Ra:" i know yaar... tu chahe toh yeh plant tu ghar le ja sakta hai.."

Both Armaan and Rahul give eacg other hi-five..

Atul turns around so excitedly.." sach mein.. tu mujhe yeh le jaane dega..."

He hugs Rahul in a tight hug and then later hugs Armaan too...All three laugh and remember the times Atul had got plants to the hospital and the whole of Sanjeevani was hiding it from Dr. kirti...They reminese old times as they walk upto the ladies who are in deep conversation...On reaching them Rahul takes peek in the dish Muskaan has got and gives her a thumbs up for doing a splendid job...Muskaan then tells Rahul to take Dia inside and change her diaper..

Riddhima is arranging her dupatta, making it fall back ... it slips like always covering Armaan's face...he slips the dupatta off and gently brings his arms around her waist pulling her back to him... he nuzzles her hair and whispers.. Hi ! Mrs. Malik..!

Ri":hi... voiceis laced with tenderness.." tumne abhi bhi Rahul aur Atul ko nahi bataya na?..

Armaan gently turnes her and lifts a loose strand off her face and tucks it behind her ear..." nahi, abhi nahi.." His touch lingers as he slowly smoothes back her hair.." this is special Riddhima..thode time tak apne tak rakhna chahata hoon..."

Riddhima completely understands his feelings... she lifts her hand to his cheek and looks at him lovingly...

Ar:" tumhe andaaza nahi hai tumne mujhe kitni badi khushi di hai... yeh sab tumhare saath share kar saku, this is the only thing i want from you... sirf tum , main aur hamari aane waali khushi.." you have given me a miracle basket !! he lightly pats her tummy and looks in her eyes..

The deepth in his voice is reflected in his eyes... !!ife is perfect for the them..!

Just then Angel shouts Mamma ! mamma !!

Atul, Riddhima who has turned away from Armaan looks at the car which has stopped and walks out a stylish figure.. Anjy..!! Armaan waves at her as his other hand keeps Riddhima still close to him... Anjy waves back... She too had changed ...

According to Atul who by the way now stays in the out-house of Armaan - Riddhima's .. they loved having him close by since he and Angel are the only occupants..Anjali's UN assignment was ending and she was on a 2 month break... Armaan , Riddhima were hoping for her next assignment in Mumbai...

Atul hugs Angy and she hugs him contendedly...A little girl now wiggles her way through her fathers leg to reach her mothers open arms..Angy hold her close and a peaceful look comes on her face...Angy goes to Riddhima and hugs her .. basically all hug each other..The gang is complete now...

Muskaan anounces lunch ...All take their plates and sit on the carpet.. The moment Riddhima is about to sit .. Armaan stops her and goes in quickly and gets a cane stool for her.. Suddenly four pair of eyes are glued to Armaan and his act....Armaan oblivious to all is making sure Riddhima is comfortable... RIddhima too grins and whispers to Armaan and says..." your little secret is out" !!!

Armaan looks up instantly and sees Rahul and Atul (who had to be told about whats happeneing) jump on him and hug him .. both of them are congratulating him, all while squishing the shit out of him..squeals of laughter pour in from the little devils....All enjoy Armaan 's discomfit and tease him non-stop.. he is by now red tomato embarrased...he looks at Riddhima for help, but she just shirks her shoulders and wink at him...He squints his eyes warning her by his look which said"i'l get you Basket" !!

Ra:" saale.. itni badi baat chupaiye... ! now all over Armaan..

At:" Tune theek nahi kiya Armaan... apne champ ko bhi nahi bataya.."

Its the first time that Armaan is lost for words... he looks at them and then at Riddhima for help...

Ar:" yaar aise baat nahi hai...( an idea hitting him) woh actually Basket ne kaha tha.. putiing all the blame on her ever so convineintly...

Ri:" ARMAAN !!

Both Anjy and Muskaan look at Armaan knowing very well , that such act can only be done by Mr. Armaan Malik...

Ar:" Alrigt ..Alright... so meine kaha tha..( trying to sound convincing, but failing miserably) yaar ab mein bhi husband hoon... kabhi kabhi toh meri baat manti hai....so i thought..

Suddenly Anjy and Muskaan start throwing cushions on Armaan and start a cushion fight,... boys on one side and girls on one side..Armaan through his eyes tells Riddhima to stay out of this cushion fight... she nods as the fight continues...Even Angel comes in and joins the boys gang... Armaan puts her on his shoulders with her legs dangling on either side.. Riddhima looks at the sweet sight and has a nostalgic smile on her face... this is what is life... life with friends.. she looks on to see Armaan , the man she was destined to be with.. Rahul, Muskaan who have always been true friends .. and finally Di and Atul, who have come a long way...she crosses her fingers at this happy site and says a prayer of thanks...

Finally all are exhausted , both the little devils have also spent their energy watching the elders behaving like complete jokers...all are now famished so lunch is served ...they all eat and talk about all happeneings which are taking place with each other ..Armaan rests his chin against his elbow on Riddhima's lap as she fingers his hair ..he occasionally enquires if she is ok..she tells him yes through her eyes.. Rahul Muskaan are arguing about something..and Anjy for once is genuinly interested in listening to Atuls Aids ward and its developments....After a long funfilled afternoon all couples retire to their respective rooms with their beauiful memories......

here is how they remembered their lovely times ...


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.... and the beautiful afternoon sets into the sunset....and eveing comes along...



Armaan and Rahul get busy setting up the barbecue, starting the coal to burn slowly, while Muskaan and Riddhima pull all the marinated meats and vegetables out of the fridge … Anjali sets the table outside with plates and cutlery while Atul takes care of Angel and Dia. Angel wants to 'help' with the barbecue, an idea which is firmly vetoed by her mother!!!

Anj (sighing as she picks up her daughter): Kisi cheez se darti nahin hai … she'll want to pick up the burning coal to see why it's bright red … Atul, isko aur Dia ko flowers dikhao … apne papa ki tarah thodi environmentalist bane to achcha hoga!

Riddhima and Muskaan carry the laden plates of food outside. Seeing Riddhima holding two large bowls, Armaan comes to her quickly and takes the bowls from her.
Ar (scolding her): tum kyun utha rahi ho? Mujhe bata deti … main le aata! Bhaari cheezein mat uthao … mana kiya tha maine …

Riddhima sighs as she looks at him.

Rid: Armaan, I'm pregnant … not sick!!! Main bilkul theek hun … aur yeh bowls bhaari nahin hain!!

Muskaan comes up to her with another two bowls.

Mus: Chhod, Riddhima … yeh nahin manega! Doctor hain, phir bhi aise behave karte hain jaise duniya mein kisi ke kabhi bachcha nahin hua! Yaad hai jab main Dia ke saath pregnant thi to Rahul kaise …

Armaan starts laughing at the memory.

Ar: haan, tera coffee chai … sab band kar diya tha … oho, main bhool gaya … Riddhima, tumhe bhi coffee …

Riddhima looks at him firmly.

Rid: Armaan … don't even think about it!!! Abh jaake coffee phir se achchi lagne lagi hai … pichle teen mahine maine pee hi nahin!! Ab mujhe roka to main …

Ar: Riddhima, bachche ke liye …

Rahul joins them, overhearing the last part of the conversation, he starts grinning.

Ra: bachche ke liye coffee theek nahin hai …

Mus: theek nahin hai – nahin … Rahul, tu kya kehta tha ? … haanikarak hai!!! Kitna pagal kiya tha mujhe!!!

Laughing, they all move towards the garden where the barbecue is now burning nicely … the men take over the cooking while the girls sit lazily with the two children. As they eat, they chat casually, bringing each other up to date with their lives …

Anj: abhi pukka nahin hai, lekin meri next assignment shayad Mumbai mein …

She is interrupted with shouts of delight from Riddhima and Muskaan!

Rid: Di!!! That will be great!!! Please aap vapas aa jao! Atul aur Dia ke liye it will be so good! Aur hum sab ke liye bhi! We all really miss you!

Anj (laughing): Ridzi, main khud try kar rahi hun … Washington is lovely but it's lonely … aur ab Angel badi ho rahi hai, use meri zyaada zaroorat hai … Lekin the really good news is that Atul ke center ke baare mein jab maine bataya to they're very interested to include it in their program …

Atul looks very pleased.

Ar: Aur tum log …? (indicating Rahul and Muskaan) … kuch decide kiya?

Rahul shakes his head.

Ra: Abhi nahin, Armaan. Abhi chhe mahine hi hue hain humein vahan gaye … haan, Chandigarh Sanjeevani bahut achchi tarah establish ho gaya hai, so maa aur baoji humein bahut push kar rahe hain yahan vapas aane ke liye lekin …

Mus (also speaking very firmly): lekin humein yeh dekhna hai ki voh log kahan khush honge. Unki vajah se main befikr hokar kaam kar sakti hun, kyunki voh Dia ka khayal rakhte hain … agar voh hamare saath yahan nahin aana chahte, to hum nahin aayenge …

Rahul looks at her lovingly, Riddhima and Anjali in some surprise … Muskaan really has changed!

Ra (looking at Armaan and Riddhima): Aur tum dono …? Poochna zaroori to nahin hai … tum dono khush ho ki nahin? Chehre pe saaf dikhta hai …!!!

They laugh and Armaan shifts close to Riddhima and puts an arm around her. Riddhima looks at him lovingly.

Rid: Jawab dene bhi zaroori nahin … lekin haan … (she smiles) … bahut khush hain! Life is perfect … bas, tum sab ki bahut yaad aati hai …

Ar: haan … agar tum log bhi yahan hote, to it would really be perfect .. so let's hope …

Anj (agrees as he holds up her hands with fingers crossed): … let's hope and …

Riddhima gives an exclamation as she looks up into the night sky and points … a shooting star …

Rid: Jaldi … everyone … make a wish …

They all look at the star, then close their eyes and wish …


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As they make a wish, Armaan softly blows air into Riddhima's ear, and she blushes ….



Anjy: Stop it you too…



Rahul: I know…. har pal romance hi soojhta hai inhe….



Armaan confidently rests his head against Riddhima's shoulder, and holds her hand… he then shows, her ring in her hand, raising it saying…. " kam se kam ab toh chidhaana band karo yaar….. we are married…



Riddhima shies away, saying…. " Armaan… sab dekh rahe hai…..



A: uff… basket…. Tum bhi na….. yahan main sabko ye samjha raha hoon ke humari shaadi ho gayi hai…. Aur tum hoke, aise sharma rahi ho, jaise hum abhi abhi miley hai…



Anjy: Chalo, accha hai… nice to know something never change… ( looking lovingly at Atul, as she holds his hand for the first time squeezing it)… Atul looks at her smiling….



Rahul and Muskaan are busy with the baby, taking care and Armaan exchanges glances with Riddhima…..



Armaan is still holding onto Riddhima's hand and she is still conscious that no one is looking. She is smiling on the face of it, but anyway everyone is busy in their own world…



Dia starts crying and the moment is broken for all… " Main jaake isko sulaake aati hoon…. She gets up.. and as she is leaving.. she says… " Rahul…." And he gets up to follow her….



Atul and Anjali are also happy playing with Angel…. And Armaan and Riddhima have always wandered away… Riddhima is now lying in the hammock and Armaan is by her side….He kisses her on her forehead softly and she smiles….



Somewhere else….



USA- a small Apartment…



A small apartment, which has loads of books and loads of pictures of a couple… of marriage.. of holidays after, and the seminars, some other random pictures of different moments….



The girl mostly is shown sporting a pair of jeans and short polo necked shirts, she now sports a frameless glass as opposed to her older dorky ones. Her curls are still intact except that she now ties them in a folded pony, such that she has curls fall all over from behind…. She is sporting small white stone studs, but there are white and red bangles in her hand that she hasn't left wearing, that show she is now a married woman… her mangalsutra has a small heart pendant, which has the pictures of her and her husband…. That was the first gift she had received from him after they got married…. That they are one always….



As she is in the kitchen, getting breakfast ready she calls out to a guy, who is in his room, and hasn't gotten up yet she is sure, as he knows there is still time…. This is the 4th time she is calling him and everytime he has a different answer… she shows he is still in bed, but he is lying to her saying, he has gotten up, he has gotten ready and this one's like the worst….



Asma: Nik, doodh pee liya, table pe rakha hai….



Nik: Pee raha hoon baba…. ( Asma is standing in the kitchen and she can see the glass lying there on the table)



Asma: aur bacon kha liya? Microwave main rakha tha….



A pair of hands hug Asma from behind as he kisses her on her cheek and says… " patni sahiba, sab kaam agar aap kar lengi toh, main kya karoonga… chalo.. come…. Let me atleast feed you ( with a little accent in his English)

As: Sirf, 6 mahine hue hai idhaar aaye… "and you already have an accent" she apes him teasing him…..



Nik: Shut up Kangan, I don't have an accent…



As: I don't have an accent , she again apes him with a slight accent…..



He goes over to hit her, but she runs, and there is a mad chase in the house, as she runs from one room to another…..



She finally runs into the kitchen from one side and she cant help it now as Nikhil is now standing right in front of her…. Holding both her hands….



As: Late nahi ho raha kya? University nahi jaana?



Nik: abhi aadha ghanta hai… soch raha tha aaj Armaan ko call kar loo… bahut waqt ho gaya hai na…



As: haan, maam ka email aaya tha… suna hai sab Dr. Rahul ke farm house pe hai…. Chalo call karte hai…. She picks the phone up….



Nik: Wahan toh bahut raat ho gayi hogi Kangan……



Asma is about to cut the call, but someone picks up the phone and they hear a familiar voice…. " hello"



Asma and Nikhil now put the phone on loudspeaker… and they both settle down on the couch, as they speak….



As: Sorry to disturb you sir…. Hum log bhool gaye the ke wahan itni raat ho gayi hogi…



A: Ah! The newly weds… I understand… I understand… tum logon ko zamaane ka hosh kahan….



Asma and Nikhil blush…



Ni: Armaan… Riddhima di kaisi hai…



R: main yahin hoon Nikhil…. Aur mera yeh pati mujhe bahut tang karta hai…



Ni: Kaho to main kal hi flight leke aa jaun… after all rakhi baandha hai… I will protect you from all evils…



A: abbey chup… and I can see you have an accent now…



Asma giggles…



As: main bhi usko yehi kehti hoon.. he has an accent… ( Nikhil holds her around her waist and looks at her warningly, twisting her hand a little…)



As: Ouch she says.. and then goes silent… as Armaan and Riddhima giggle to themselves..



R: I can see you guys are happy…



A: Really Happy….



As: yeh sab aap hi ke wajah se hua hai sir, na aap wo scholarship arrange karvaate, aur na main yahan hoti…



A: don't be silly, you deserved it….



As: I know sir, but what did I do, to deserve this 6 foot structure as a punishment…..



A: hahaha… well, sukh hai toh dukh bhi toh hoga na…..



Ni: well said, Armaan.. aur waise bhi, yeh sab kehne ki baatein hai, mere bina ek pal nahi reh sakti ye…. ( kissing her as he talks)



She smiles….. " haan haan… Kangan, hum shaadi kar le? Ye baat kisne kahi thi.. wo bhi achaanak, yahan aane k eek din pehle, jaldi jaldi main shaadi kisne kit hi….



R: okay okay… bas….! We get the point…. Ab jaldi se, hume khush khabri be dedo….


Asma and Nikhil blush….



A: itni jaldi nahi yaar… shaadi main toh humaare saath compete kar liya, lekin kam se kam issi maamle main hume seniors rehne do.. take jab humaara beta bada ho, hum tumhaari choti si pyar Asma se uski shaadi karvaade….



R: Armaan… tum bhi na….



As/Nik: Riddhima di, aap pregnant ho.. wow… this is wonderful news… please aap hume apni latest pictures email kardo.. we want to know everything… we really miss you… abhi hume university ke liye nikal na hai… sabko humaari taraf se hi bol dena…



They hang up……….



Sanjeevani, AIDS WARD, INDIA



A pair of hands pick up the phone and dial a number….. its late but she has to talk….on the other end, a person picks up the phone….



At: Tammy, don't worry…. sab theek ho jayega…. Don't panic…. Tumne tablet li? Well, but aaram se ho jaao okay…



No voice is heard on the other side….



At: iss waqt? Pagal ho gayi ho tum…. Itna jagna tumhaare liye theek nahi hai… okay fine…. Bas 2 episode aur, that's it, uske baad tum s jaaogi okay



T: Okay Dr. Atul…. (making a face)



At: Kal hospital bhi toh jaana hai na…. David kaisa hai…



T: there is lots of improvement, maine uski medication change kardi hai, lekin as long as we have the time we do our best right? Aap hi se seekha hai…



At: you are a wonderful student Tamanna….



T: wahan pe sab kaisa hai? Aap sab log enjoy kar rahe honge na?



At: Haan…. Bahut….



Angel starts crying….



T: fir se ro rahi hai… Shaitan, I am sure aap Barbie saath le jaan bhool gaye, aap ko pata hai na Dr. Atul, wo apni Barbie ke bagair nahi soti….

At: aaj, wo apni mom ke saath hai, usko Barbie ki zaroorat nahi hai… main bhi chalta hoon Tammanna… bahut raat ho gayi hai….



T: Good Night Dr. Atul….



At: Bye Tammanna, take care okay?



T: I will…



She hangs up….



T: Life is really weird…. Maine kabhi nahi socha tha, ke mujhe Dr. Atul se pyar ho jayega… but like always, meri feelings koi samajhta hi nahi…. So I live on…. To enjoy life till the day it closes on me….. take care Dr. Atul… ( nostalgic)



Life has been mean to Tammy, or so she thinks, but she has now learnt to accept that… she still works in Sanjeevani, and she has only four important people in her life…. Atul, Angel, Arif and Tanvi… the latter two are now her buddies… she hangs out with them all the time, Tanvi gets food for Tammy every day and Arif, though is not like her best friend, he is tolerant towards her….. with time people and thinhs really change….



The night now breaks into a day, as everyone is at the breakfast table….. there is a simple breakfast on the table as, today, they are all to leave on a small streamer ride, to an island nearby that is in the middle of a river….



So having had, a quick breakfast… they all set out on the streamer, all of them in the midst of water…….. each of them are sitting… chilling and enjoying the sun, the climate and togetherness….they enjoy themselves on the island, they stop by at places they think they should stop and get clicked to relive those moments later……



They chat away and have their little moments of joy, and by the end of the day, when they return to their farm house, they know they all have to head back… to their own lives…. Only to meet again the next time….. hugs happen, a few tears are also shed…. Like they say, we meet to part and and we part to meet, meeting's a gain while parting's a pain…….. and quoting the lines of some unknown….. we must never forget, the world is world is round so we will meet again!



here is how ...Armaan & Riddhima...Atul & Anjy ..... and ..... Rahul & Muskaan will always be remembered in our hearts....as the intern gang who went on to become adorable DIL ke doctors....!!!!!zshare link

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Note .....

Don't worry friends…. This is not the end of EDK, it is the start of another phase of the 10 lives that we have known over a good 6 months now… I remember we started EDK on 13th of June 2008, its exactly 6 months today…. We are glad that we could tell you this story of the people you loved, in our way! Hope we didn't disappoint you at any stage…. we feel sentimental and nostalgic, as to us it means, not coming back next Friday, not getting anxious on a Monday morning as to what to write for that week….. but its been fun writing this bit, and it would never have been the same had it not been for you guys, you actually made us come back every week! We know many of you want us to continue, but want to wrap up when we still have a story to tell….



We promise you we will come back with something, nice, though to us, EDK will always remain special… personally to me, it gave me 2 very important people, Navya and Dia Di….



So people, wait up right there, for we will come back again with another story… but all in good time…



Thanks a ton! edk wouldn't have become EDK without all your love….



For one last time…..



Loads of love,

Dia

Navya &

Niha



Shit, I am so senti and emotional.. I don't feel liking stopping to write guys… but, I guess everything has an end somewhere… and this is it for this piece of work….. bye… take care okay! We love you loads….. hugs!



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