Saturday, October 11

Dil Ka Rishta - Episode 18

fri-sun.....

TITLE SONG:

Dil Ka Rishta Bada Hi Pyara Hai.....(2)
Kitna Pagal Yeh Dil Hamara Hai......
Hum To Ek Doosre Pe Marte Hai........(2)
Jaanta Hai Yeh Jahaan Sara Hai.......
Dil Ka Rishta Bada Hi Pyara Hai........
Dil Ka Rishta Bada Hi Pyara Hai.......!!!!!!!!!

CANTEEN:

ARMAAN,RIDHIMMA,ANJALY,ABHIMANYU AND NIHA ARE SITTING IN THE CANTEEN...CHATTING ABT THE DAY....

anj:vohhhh abhi u knw tum to aaj bach hi gaye hitler se.....lucky guy u knw...!!!!!!!!

arm:bach gaye kya matlab...????

anj:haan armaan u knw aaj abhi ka dhyan pata nai kahan tha....bas surgery per nai tha definately....so den gabbar's gussa....vo to dad ne dr kerrti ko calm down kiya....leaving him on the condition dat it was his first surgery....

abhi:haan yaar aaj pata nai kya ho gaya tha bas surgery mein assit karne ka mann nai kar raha tha...!!!!!

rid:kya matlab abhi....tumhara aur kaya karne ka mann kar raha tha....u ok...tabiyat to theek hai naa....

niha:abhi tumhari tabiyat theek nai hai to u can take a leave...bt i dont think so dr keerti provide karengi....waise bhi aajkal bahut kaam rehta hai sanjeeavni mein upar se psx bhi leave per hai...!!!!!!!!!!



abhi:haan yaar bas aise hi...(he smiles at the mention of psx's name......he was confused within himself dat actuallly wat was happening inside him ....a sudden change dat he liked....a feeling of careing sumone.....a feeling of missing sumone badly so much dat he was unable to concentrate on his work....a feeling of being cared by sumone.....a feeling of doing nythn to get a glimse of sumone......)



arm:i can't believe dr shashank ne dr keerti ko calm down kiya....its strange naa...jo har waqt mujhe per gussa karte hain vo dusron ko calm down bhi karna jaante hai...!!!!!!!

rid:armaan ....

arm:haan basket...

abhi:wat wat did u jus said...

armaan becomes alert....he realises dat abhi did'nt knw abt his relationship with ridhimma....!!!!!!

niha:arre yaar kuch nai....vo armaan ridhimmaa ko tease karne ke liye basket bulata hai bas.....

abhi:ok..ok...basket...nice name...dr ridhima....

ridhimma smiles....while armaan takes a deep breath.....he gives a thanking expression to niha.....!!!!!!!!



vicky comes.....and sits next to niha.....
niha feels a little akward next to him so she decides to leave....



niha:guys i gotta go....kaam hai...

rid:wat..???niha tum kuch to kha lo...break khatam hone mein abhi time hai...!!!!!!

niha:thanx ridzi...bt really mujhe bhook nai hai.....mai chalti hun....carry on...!!!!!!!!!!

arm:niha....suno to....

niha:armaan...sorry...bye everyone....!!!!!!

vicky understood dat niha left because of him......they had fought earlier and now due to his being seated next to her she avoided him....

anj:yaar yeh baaki sab kahan hai...????

rid:di aapne mani ko kahiin dekha kya...????

anj:mani.....uski duty to tumhare saath thi naa....to tujhe pata hoga naa vo kaha hai.!!!

rid:yehi to problem hai di pata nai subah se kahan gayab hai...???koi phone aaya tha uske liye aur abhi tak nazar nai aayi....i hope everything is ok...!!!!!!

anj:ya i hope so.....

the rest of the interns also come...

mus:oye rahul.....mujhe bhuk lagi hai....!!!!!!

rah:to..

mus:tu pitna chahta hai...????maine kaha mujhe bhuk lagi hai....!!!!

rah:mere pass paise nai hai muskaan....

mus:abbe bikhari ki aulaad....tu conjuss....kabhi tere pass paise hote bhi hain...????

rah:muskaan tu meri family ke baare mein mat shuru ho samjhi...nai to teri saton peediyon ki aisee ki taisi kar dunga....!!!!!!

mus:accha....teri yeh himmat....!!!!

atul:oye rahul....muskaan....bas karo yaar......hadd hoti hai...
i'll get sumthn.....anjaly tum kya logi...the same sandwich and coffee...????

anj:jab pata hai atul to puchte kyun ho..????

atul:vo to bas confirm kar raha tha....!!!!

vic:armaan tumne adi ko kahiin dekha kya....????

arm:nai to....yeh aaj kay disappearing day hai.....pehle mani...ab adi....baki to sab yahan hai...ab kahiin niha b gayab na ho jaye.....!!!!!!

rid:armaan mujhe lagta hai ki mujhe sis luvly se baat karni chahiye...shayd unhe kuch use phone ke baare mein pata ho..!!!!

arm:yaa...dat wud b much better.....!!!!!chalo mai bhi tumhare saath chalta hun...!!!!!

rid:theek hai chalo....

armaan and ridhimma leaves...

anj:ab inhe kya hua....????

shik:arre anj tumne mani ko dekha...ya niha ko....????pata nai kahan hai dono....

anj:shikha....niha to bas abhi abhi yahan se gayi hai....aur mani ko subah se doondha ja raha hai.....!!!!!

shik:wat..????kyun...is'nt she here...?????

anj:pata nai....shaayad ridzi yehi pata karne gayi hai....!!!!!!!!

shik:okk...kuch pata chale to mujhe zarur batana....!!!!!!

anj:for sure shikha...hey hav this.....

shik:i already had loads...bas yaar varna kaam karte karte i'll fall asleep...!!!!!!(her pager rings....)ohh....chal i'll catch u guys later bye.....

anj:bye.....



ARMAAN AND RIDHIMMA AT THE NURSE STATION.....

rid:luvlyji....

luvl:ji ridhimma ji...

rid:vo aapko pata hai ki dr mani kahan hai...?????

luvl:vo...dr maniji ka to phone aaya tha ji....phir vo hadbadahat mein hospital se half day ki leave lekar chali gayin....

arm:kya...???half day leave...kuch bol ke gayin kyaa...???

luvl:nai ji armaan ji...mujhse to bas kaha ki mai dr keerti ko inform kar dun....aur keh rahiin thi ki jald hi laut kar aa jayengi....aur shayad dr aditya bhi unhi ke saath gaye hain....!!!!

arm:adi mani ke saath....ab yeh dono kahan jaa sakte hain..????

rid:i hope ke sab theek ho armaan....

arm:chalo locker room chalke unhe call karte hain....

as soon as they turn....they see three familair faces....its.....mani,adi and psx....



rid:armaan wahan dekho.....mani....

arm:abbe yaar...tum dono kahan chale gaye the yaar....pura sanjeevani chaan maara.....kahan the tum log.....????psx tum yahan.....

adi:vo psx ke ghar se phone aa gaya tha ki uski tabiyat kharab hai....to bas wahiin gaye the.....aur mani ki car puncture ho gayi thi isliye uske saath mai gaya tha....

rid:ohh....lekin yeh psx.....psx u ok...agar tumhari tabiyat kharab hai to yahan kya kar rahi ho...u had taken a leave....????

psx:ridzi...mai agar ghar mein rehti na to meri tabiyat aur kharab ho jati.....isliye in logon ke saath mai chali aayi...!!!!!bt nyways i'm feeling much better...all thanx to mani sweethrt....!!!!!!

adi:accha.....aur mai miss...????

psx:haan haan u too...waise bhi agar tum na isse lekar aate to mai yahan nai aa pati....

adi:dats much better......

arm:chalo guys lunch break over hone waala hai....canteen chale....????

all:chalo.......



HEY GUYS I WANNA THANK ALL MY READERS FOR ALL UR HEARTWARMING COMMENTS AND APPRECIATIONS....THANX ALOT.....

HERE ENDS TODAYS EPISODE HOPE U ENJOYED IT......!!!!!!!!!KEEP READING,,,,

LUV MANI..

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Kucch Toh Hua Hai - Episode 5

MALLIK HOUSE:

(3rd April)

Armaan sitting in the drawing room reading the newspaper. The bell rings.
Rahul and Atul enter fighting over something.

Ra: Main kabse ise keh raha hun aaj holi hai toh yeh jacket utaar. Is tarah Anjali ispe colour nahin laga paayegi aur yeh humare saamne rone baith jaayega.

At: Lekin agar sabne mujhe colour kiya toh Anjali mujhe dekh kar dar jayegi.

A: Oye! Chilaana band karo! Meri Beti jaag jayegi! Chup karo yaar!

Riddhima comes out from the kitchen.

R: Armaan! Kya hua?! Kyun chilla rahe ho? Oh hi guys.

At: Anjali! (bends on one knee in front of Riddhima)

Riddhima gets scared by this sudden act and hides behind Armaan.

A: Oye! Kya kar raha hai?! Bhabhi hai teri!

Ra: Accha guys badmein ladna abhi chalo humein Holi khelne jaana hai. Chalo. Riddhima bohut bhook lagi hai kucch khaane ko hai.

R: Sorry Rahul breakfast bas abhi abhi khatam hua hai lekin I could make you guys a Chocolate sandwich. Armaan tum change karlo. Humein Radhika koh mom-dad ke paas chhodna hai.

A: Ok sweetheart.

BASKETBALL COURT:

All Interns present there and all are chatting with one another except Trisha and Abhi who are engrossed in each others eyes.

A: Guy hum log Holi khelne aaye hain! Baat karne nahin! Chalo! Rang!

Atul as usual puts Herbal colours on Anjy and Rahul and Muskaan basically fight with each other, Keerti and Shubhankar put yellow all over each others hands.
But, Armaan and Riddhima were unique and were soaking each other with water and Riddhima was painting Armaan’s face with her fingers. Suddenly the wardboys start offering mithais actually they thrust some into their hands. The effect of bhaang in them starts taking over our interns.


Jai Jai Shivshankar
(Atul throws colour on everyone.)

Kaanta Laage Na Kankar.
(Armaan pulls Riddhima closer)

Ke Pyaala Tere Naam Ka Piya
(Rahul hugs Muskaan)


Ho Gir Jaungi
(Riddhima falls over Armaan and they fall to the ground)

Main MarJaungi
(Anjali points at Atul)

Jo Tune Mujhe Thaam Na Liya
(Riddhima jumps on Armaan’s back)

Ho Sau Rab Di
(Muskaan dances with Rahul)

All of them spend the whole morning like that. By the time they have to go home the men are back in their senses and are taking the women to Armaan and Riddhima’s house in Armaan’s car.

(Rahul and Muskaan are sitting in front with Atul and Anjy in the middle seat and Armaan and Riddhima on the last with Riddhima in Armaan’s lap)

R: I love you Armaan!

A: Love you too sweetie!

R: I love you Armaan!

A: Love you too sweetie!

R: I love you Armaan!

A: Love you too sweetie!

R: I love you Armaan!

A: Love you too sweetie!

Ra: Abey Armaan yaar ise thoda chup kara main gadi nahin chala pa raha hun.

A: Pichle ghantein se har do second mein yahi boli ja rahi hai. Shayad kucch zyada pee lia hai.

Finally they reached Armaan and Riddhima’s house with all girls asleep in the car. Atul holds Anjy and walks her to the guest room. Muskaan gets supported by Rahul to Radhika’s room. Riddhima is asleep in the car so Armaan carries her to their room.
Once everyone is dressed and in their senses all off them sit on the terrace with Jai and Radhika back home.
Armaan sits leaning against the wall with Riddhima in his arms and Radhika in Riddhima’s arms. The others are lying on the carpets and Jai is playing on Armaan’s laptop.

A: Guys dekho hum sabko to apni zindagi mil gayi lekin mujhe lagta hai ki humein Trisha aur Abhi ko paas lana chahiye. What say?

Ra: Great idea yaar! Then even if they are with us they wouldn’t feel left out.

Everyone Laughs

R: So done, next mission ; Mission Trisha Abhinav Get Together. (she holds her hand out)

Everyone grins and gives in.


- Love
Riddhima
Ritu

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Hum Saath Saath Hain - Episode 10

recap (muskaan asks rahul to marry)

Rahul is totally shocked by this sudden action of muskaan he is just out of words

Muskaan: again mujhse shadi karlo

rahul: yeh nahi ho sakta
muskaan: kyun nahi dekho rahul mainnahi chahati ki agar tumhe kuch hojaye to mujhe tumare bina jeena adhe isseliye

rahul: nahi tume mere begair rehna sikha na hoga agr mujhe kuch hua to tumhe kissi aur se pyar karma hoga muskaan karma hoga

muskaan: yeh nahi ho sakta aur tum hi to kehte ho napyar ek baar hi hota hai
rahul: nahi main galat tha aur mujhse pehle to tum armaan
muskaan: yeh to tumhe bhi pata haiarmaan who sirf mera infatuation tha aur one sided love pyar nahi hota rahul main sirf tumse pyar karti hoon aur karti rahoongi
Rahul:main janta huun par tumhe
Muskaan: mujhe sirf ek hi baat pata hai rahul agar tu mujhse shadi karega to thik hai warna (just taking out poison bottle from the bag) main yeh pee lugi tumare begair jene sai to marna hi acha hai
she was very ahead of rahul as rahul ws coming near she warned her )
aage haan bolo aura age mat barna warna main ye

rahul: nahiiiiii muskaan aisa mat kar pagal ho gayi hai kya
muskaan: mujhe yeh sab nahi sunna rahul sirf haan ya na

gupta house
armaan is sleeping peacefully with all his tentions out after all he was sleeping in her princess lap how he can be tensed while ridhima is not in mood to sleep she is just admiring him sleeping lokking extreamly handsome, and cute. slowly caressing his hairfrom one hand and other hand armaan is holding tighly)
Padma just entered: who beta
Ridhima: gesturing with her fingers dhere
Padma: are yeh to so Gaya very softly

Ridhima: haan bas abhi abhi needn aayi hai

Padma: par tum kab tak aise rahogi use bed par leta do aur tum guest room main sojao

Ridhima nodding tried to free her hand from armaan hand bt it ws so tighly held that she ws afraid if he wakes up

Ridhima: maa aap chinta mat karo main thik hoon agar abhi hilaya to shayad uth jayega waise bhi itni der baad neend aayi hai
padma: r u sure
ridhima: haan maa aap jao
padma: ok and just closed the dorr and went to sleep

Rahul, muskaan

muskaan is still holding the bottle in her hand and repeating same thing irritated when rahul don’t response and just opened the bottle

rahul: nahiiiiiiiiiii pls aisa mat kar jo tu chahati hai waisa hi hoga pls aisa mat kar pls
muskaan: to hum kal subah hi shadi karlenge wada

rahul: wada just coming clser then and snaching the bottle and throw it away and hugging her yeh kya kar rahi thi agar kuch ho jata to socha hai kabhi mera kya hoga
muskaan: main bhi to tumhe wahi samjhane ki koshish kar rahi thi rahul agar tumari yaddah chali bhi jayegi to kya hum dono mil kar saath rahenge aur there there sab thik ho jaye ga lekin tu to
rahul: acha baba sorry ab khush kal shadi kar rahe hai
muskaan: haan now she is smiling aur tune kya socha yeh poison hai
rahul: matlab
muskaan: matlab khasi ki dawai ke bottle ke upper poison likne se who poison nahi hojata samjha ghade
Rahul: to yeh sab matak tha to main bhi
Muskaan: puting her fingers in hands who natak nahi tha sirf who bottle poison ki nahi thi agar abhi
rahul: nahi nahi main to bas aise hi mazak kar raha tha hum shadi karenge kal hi ok
muskaan: haan
then they are looking at each other and lost in there world
bc
tere liye jiyu
tere liye maru
teresang hi rahu
tu har khushi
tu jo saath hai
sab kuch khas hai
tu hai mera khuda
tu bandage

now its 7 o clock in morning armaan is awakw and is shocked that he is sleeping whole night in her laps and he didn’t even woke har up now ridhima is just leaning to the backside stand of her bed and sleeping. by felling armaan movement shw wake up

armaan: yeh kya mujhe utha deti sari raat aise aur tumara pair bhi to chot aayi thi na

ridhima: justyawing: are ab tum aisi gheri neend main so rahe the ki uthane ka maan hi nahi kiya
armaan: yeh kya pagal pan hai
ridhima: wah jo tumne kal hpspital main kiya dr keerti ke samne bhi mujhe nahi uthara who kyat ha
armaan: who pyar tha
ridhima: tumara pyar pyar mera pyar pagalpan
armaan: are basket tum to gussa hogayi mera matlab tha jsb maine tumhe uthaya to mujhe chot nahi lagi thi ar tumare par main to
ridhima: just getting up from bed mera pair ab thik hai armaan just taking one step her leg again get hurt screams ouch and just began to fall armaan ws there holding her
armaan haan who to dikh raha hai kitna thk hai again picking her up
ridhima: armaan yeh mera ghar hai
armaan: just putting her in the bed mujhe pata hai par yeh tumara ghar hai isske liye mere liye tumara pyar aur concern kam to nahi hoga na and just went on searching
ridhima:smiling a bit kya dekh rahe ho armaan
armaan: haan balm ya kuch hai pair main laga doon
ridhima: iski zarrorat nahi hai
armaan: then finding the balm zarrorat kaise nahi hai and just carefully holding her legs and massaging it more carefully tum bhi na basket dekho kitna sojan aa gaya hai

meanwhile padma is watching all this and is very happy to see that her daughter gets the best person in this world hw much he loves him just a slight pain of her daughter she he cant bear

padma: tum log uth gaye aajo natta karo gud morning armaan

armaan is too busy in massaging her leg he don’t even realize that padma is in the room and moreover talking to him he does not responds
ridhima: armaan maa

after 2 or 3 times ridhima calls
armaan: kya hai ek to itna sojan aagaya hai atum tum mujhe dikh se masaage bhi nahi karne de rahi aur aaj tum hospital nahi aa rahi ho ok its final
ridhima: armaan
armaan: maine kaha na
padma lisning this and smiling
then ridhima realizes nopoint in telling him he just turn his face towards padma
armaan: as turned ws shocked and stand up woh main who ridhi
padma: pata hai pata hai ab zada bano mat aur nashta karma chalo
armaan: par dr sansk
padma: armaan
armaan: oh sorry dad
padma: haan unhe maine keh ditya ke tum ridhima ke saath ho
they both are shocked and their eyes are wide open
padma: are aise kya dekh rahe ho yaar yehi kaha hai ke tumdono mil k case ke bare main discuss kar rahe ho
armaan: get relieved and just hugging padma thanks maa thanks for everything and is backside ws ridisi he just give her a flying kiss
padma: acha acha ab tumara ho gaya hai to chale
armaa very happy and getting phone call from rahul hwe ws shocked hearing that wt rahul tells him
after the conversation
padma: kya hua
armaan : ws still in shock
ridhima: sensed it muskaan ne rahul ko bana liya
padma: kis liye
ridhima:shadi ke liye
now padma ws also shocked
ridhima: are ab aap logon ko kya hua dekho armaan shadi to unhe karni hi hai to aaj kyun nahi
armaan: par aise
ridhima: bhul gaye tum hi to kehte ho pyar main admi baki sab bhuul jata hai aura b tum hi
armaan: are nahi nahi mujhe unki shadi se koi problem nahi hai who to bas main un hi acahnak suna to acha thik hai abhi mujhe rahul ne court main bulaya hai 10 baje main maul main bulaya hai magalsutra aur ring lne ke liye aur shadi 2 baje hai phir usse admit bhi to hona hai 4 bajeghar jake tayar hota huun aur 9:30 ko tum bhi ready rehna main tumhe pick up karluna tumhe to pata hai court marriage ke liye do witness ki zarrorat hoti hai
ridhima: lekin itni jaldi unhe kaise mil gaya court main to line lagi rehti hai na
armaan: are rahul ka koi dost hai acah main baad main milta hoon be ready

while muskaan and rahul were arranging other necessary things garland, sindoor etc

armaan and ridhima

armaan is waiting sharp at 9: 30 at front of her door

armaan:as she comes out of the door he rushes holds her hand tumara leg thik to haina tum chal to paungi na

ridhima: haan thik hai aur tum to ho hi jab dekho haath pakad lete ho ya phir uhta lete ho

armaan : smiling and thenquicly open the door and make her sit carefully and close the door
armaan: quickly com sfrom next door and got inside ridhima trying to fasten the seat belt

armaan: coming lao main karta huun and fasten it
ridhima: ab itni bhi bimar nahi hoon armaan
armaan: haan haan pata hai aur yeh tumare haat main kya hai

ridhima carried allo ke parathe for him wrao in foil
ye hallo ke parathe tumare liye main janti hoon tumhne subah se kuch nahi kahaya hoga
armaan; oh basket par main abhi kaise kanunga car chala raha huun na
ridhima: uske liye main hoon
while armaan ws driving the car ridhima ws feedind him with the parathas

then at shop they bye the ring and mangal sutra armaan had not left for once her hand while walking and always forces her to sits where ever getiing place.

2 pm

at court
rahul and muskaan have signed in the registrar office and get married and then for sometime they both were left alsone srtctly told by armaan to come at 4 to the hospital


karan shradha cancer hospital

rahul got admitted all the test have been done and the reports were ok now only the opration has to be done tomm at 11 whole night muskaan ws sitting with rahul and armaan and ridhima were together while armaan ws studing for the case and ridhima reklaxing him in between

next 11 0 clock

armaan and karan were inside the operation theatot doing surgery and other were outside muskaan has not eaten any thing for the morning although she had been force bt not eaten anything she ws just stiiing in form of ganesh ji idol in hospital and ridhima ws there with her all the time suddelnly the red light goes off and armaan and karan come out
thanks modji
love u karan
karan ki dewani mithila

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Live-In Relationship

no offence meant to any one on the blog....

this is with ref to the discussion on the blog abt the live in thig...


for one i know we all love armaan and obviously the same is read by many of us as Karan....

for one it will be good if u guys realise one thing

- he has a life of his own- where like u and me he has every right to do wad he thinks is right! we dont like it at times when our parents tell us to do sumthings we dont like! agreed we have made him wad he is today- but why do u forget we have liked him only because of what he has delivered to us in the first place. he also deserves a holiday,a guarded personal life as well as a slip here and there....

i know we all love the guy so much for what the effect he has created in our lives thro DMG- but we must not forget that he has a life beyond DMG and so do we! we choose to ignore it....

whether he is living in with his gal, or he is engaged to her, he has chosen to act in a movie! all his choice! all his take....

let me remind u all as to what happned during shilpa's exit! the same kinda discussions happened... we all thought the show has made her what she is today and she would never abandon the show! lekin hua kya? chali gayi na?

fame and adulation is one thing, but infringing into personal space is another! in the last few days, thanks to his absence from the scene there have been so many wild speculations all over the place! i mean, give it a break guys!

this kinda liking is scary and suffocating for anyone to handle! what will u all do the day DMG comes to an end??? watch the show and enjoy the feel, but be ready to switch off at a certain point...

the voting thing, if he really deserves to win, will he not? just because some gal's frnds have stooped to some level, u guys also wanna do the same? what the difference then? on the 1st two days i had a feeling this whole thing is a fair game and i wanted him to win, i even posted a comment there saying, this is for u bringing Armaan into our lives.... but then come day 3! u know the state.... remember the lines by our dr.riddhima long back, gire hue ko uthaneko madad kehte hai, lekin gire hue ko uthaneke liye aap khud bhi gir jaao ise madad nahi kehte...

all m saying is think guys! and dont do sumthing just to prove a point...

i know many of u will not like me saying all of this- but this post comes out of general concern for my fellow bloggers who are so blinded by the whole Armaan madness that they seem to have happily forgotten that Armaan is not for real!

think abt it!


love,
niha

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Ehsaas Dillon Ke - Episode 53

Scene 1

Armaan Tammy in Armaan's house next morning

Armaan is in a rush to get to Sanjeevani and see for himself that Riddhima is okay. He makes a quick call early morning – Anjy had to go home to get ready so she took Riddhima with her. Armaan breathes a sigh of relief that Anjy had the sense not to leave her alone at all.

As he passes Tammy's room, he hears her coughing. He frowns – has she been smoking again? It sounds like it. Getting annoyed, he knocks briefly and walks into her room.
Tammy is sitting by the window again, looking out. As he enters, she coughs again, but there is no cigarette in her hand or smell in the room. He is relieved, but only slightly.
Ar: Why are you coughing?
Tammy gives a start and looks around at him.
Tam: Sorry, bhai, I didn't hear you come in …

Ar: Tum tayyar nahin ho? Hospital nahin jaana kya?
She scrambles to her feet.
Tam (guiltily): I'm just coming, bhai. Aap aaj jaldi jaa rahe ho …?
Ar: haan … agar tumne saath chalna hai …get ready. (as she nods eagerly, and starts for the bathroom) … Tam … sach batao … are you smoking again?

She looks at him startled and then a nervous look comes over her face.
Tam (earnestly): No!!! bhai, no, I'm not!!! I swear to you!!! Uss din se maine cigarette ko haath nahin lagaya …! Dekhiye, maine to saari cigarettes phenk di … ab mere paas ek bhi nahin hai …. I promise bhai … see …
She runs to her bedside drawer, opens it to show him … "see" … she throws open her cupboard … "kuch nahin hain … I swear, bhai …

She runs to her chest of drawers and starts coughing again as she is trying so hard to tell him and show him at the same time that she has nothing now …
Armaan feels very bad that he misjudged her – she is obviously telling the truth and is so eager to show that she is trying her best … he catches hold of her and stops her in her mad rush.

Ar (gently): Tam? It's ok … I believe you … stop it … tumhe yeh sab karne ki zaroorat nahin hai …

She looks at him half fearfully. He smiles at her, gives her a hug and kisses the top of her head.
Ar: It's okay. Really.
Tam: I swear, bhai … (she coughs again. He frowns).

Ar: Phir yeh khaansi … dikhao zara …
He gets a torch and looks at her throat, then checks her with his stethoscope. She stands quietly while he examines her, feeling choked … her big brother … he is so concerned about her … she feels a warmth and love from him that envelops her and almost wants to make her cry with relief. When he finishes, she looks at him earnestly.
Ar: Kuch khaas nahin hai. Davai li … (she nods) … kaunsi? (she shows him a bottle. He looks at it.)
Ar: yeh itni effective nahin hai … main tumhe kuch deta hun … okay? Tum tayyar ho jao, phir hospital chalte hain.

Tammy gets ready, feeling a glow inside her, a glow of being wanted, being loved, being cared for … she swears to herself that she will never upset her relationship with her brother again … and with Riddhima … if Riddhima means so much to Armaan, she will have to accept her and learn to love her … and she will do it, thinks Tammy grittily – Atleast ill try!

Scene 2: Asma and Nikhil

They are in the locker room and both of them are pouring into their respective lockers. There is silence as there is no one else. Asma wants to talk but the look on his face and the vibes he was giving made it impossible for her to make a move from her side.She looks at him- but he isn’t looking at her… then she looks back into the locker pulling out a few papers… Nikhil now looks at her and she is now reading the papers and he also decides he wont talk to her right now….

Nikhil is exceptionally cold towards Asma even though they had cleared out the little awkwardness that had crept in after that dinner where she had arrived late. He had need thinking a lot lately and he somewhere this thought had crept into his head that Asma was not the same anymore and that she had very little time for him. It was true that she had to study and had a future to make. But did all of that come before him? He didn’t like the thought or the idea…. Why? He knew she loved him.. He knew she would be there for him always? But is that all he wanted? He wanted her around him! All to himself…. After the ice cream she that night she was in a hurry to run back home because she was wanting to read some thesis…. This was madness! How could someone be so obsessed with studies? But then he knew Asma, if she was passionate about something, she would give her heart and soul into it…. And he also knows that she was as passionate about him as well.. but why was he now beginning to feel that a wall was slowly forming between the two that he was failing to break….

Asma on the other hand though is looking into the file is thinking only about Nikhil… why does he look so upset and angry. Did he do something unknowingly? Nowadays their little chats were turning into arguments and her harmless statements were turning into cold hearted one liners. She didn’t know what to say or do and this really irked her, She noticed from past experience that, Nikhil is best left that way when he was upset and in a day or so he would come around. Talking would only mean he would get irked more. So though she badly wanted to say lot of things right now she decides the best was to stay that way…..

Unfortunately though this time for Nikhil he wanted Asma to make the first move and break the ice. He wanted her to start a conversation and say something… Disturbed and almost angry he walks into the changing room. He washes his face to control his restlessness and while coming out hits his hand against the wall, hurting himself….obviously he was being careless about the whole thing…

As: Nik ! ( totally worried and taking his hand in hers)… Ye kya kar diya tumne…. Pagal ho kya? Dekh ke chala karo yaar…. Kahin sprain to nahi ho gaya… shit… ! ye haath…. Yaha dard ho raha hai? Yaha? ( she examines his wrist and presses it to check.)

He looks at her smiling….

Ni: to aap ye sab ek Doctor ki haisiyat se kar rahi hai Dr. Asma…

As: Doctor baad main…. Dekho…na… kitni zor se lagi… maine dekha tha…

Ni: lekin mujhe toh laga tum padh rahi thi….

As: Haan Haan…. Jiska boy friend, uske liye thoda sa bhi waqt nahi nikaalta ho, uske liye uske kitabe hi toh sahara hai…

Ni: what the hell? Mere paas tumhaare liye time nahi hai? Yeh sahi hai? Tab se doll ki tarah quit tum thi… aur ab mujhe hi?

As: toh tum baat nahi kar sakte the?

Ni: Tum bhi toh baat shuru kar sakti thi na? har baar main kyun karoon?

As: tum chance do toh na?? uss gusse waale face se toh koi bhi dar ke mare chup ho jaayega…

Ni: (now realizing may be made his worry too obvious and now rethinking in that moment that perhaps he over reacted to the whole thing and that perhaps him thinking all this was in thin air… Asma was so worried when he just hurt himself a little.. he was wrong! He was just over reacting… she loved him… yes she loved him… and now he smiles genuinely….) Sorry Kangan! Wo main….

Voice: Dr. Asma turant Cancer Ward main report kare….

As: (still holding his hand) Nik, please bandage laga lena…. Aur jyada haath hilana mat… kuch bhi ho…. (Nikhil can just think of the concern she is showing towards him and that’s made his day)… mujhe bula lena okay????? Main chali….

Most unexpectedly for him she kisses him on his cheek and before he can react slips out of the room. He stands there smiling.

Scene 3: Armaan, Riddhima and Tammy

Riddhima comes out of her house and she see’s a car waiting for her at the door. It has Armaan. He opens out the front door for her and she sits there. She looks at him smiling… and then places her palm against his face looking into eyes as though trying to tell him how glad and grateful she is that he was around last night for her. He holds her hand with his and smiles tenderly. Actually he was not supposed to come back for another two days but he had come back only gauging the tension and the worry in her voice. Armaan always knew when Riddhima wanted him around. It was the most unsaid and unspoken understanding they shared. People who heard their tale would call it filmy, but for her, it was happening right there in front of her eyes and it was so true so for her it was filmy then it meant films depict reality.

Tammanna is sitting at the back. She clears her throat….

T: Bhai! Jaana nahi hai kya…

Riddhima quickly pulls her hand away from there…. Embarrassed like it were the first time she was caught with Armaan and looks away. Armaan tells her its okay thro his eyes but she is obviously not very comfortable… they drive to the hospital. Armaan stops at the entrance and asks Tammanna to get off and says he needs to park. She does and shuts the door behind her. Even Riddhima is about to remove her seat belt when Armaan holds her hand that’s on the seat belt strap asking her to wait. She smiles. He drives the car to the parking space.

R: Thank you Armaan… kal raat ke liye…

A: Ab basket… kin kin baton ke liye Thank you bologi haan? Tum ho hi itni lucky ke main tumhe mil gaya…. Issi liye tumhe apne zindagi ko hi sabse bada thank you bolna chahiye… kyun? ( he saying smiling naughtily)

He fails to notice that there are tears in Riddhima’ eyes…

A: Riddhima…. Tum ro rahi ho ( Niha says: sorry guys- am totally in Thursday’s trance, I had to put this line here)

R: Armaan….

A: Please Riddhima… ro mat… ( with a mixture of helplessness and anger taking over him as he thinks of all that happened the earlier night) … main tumhaare saath hoon na… (tipping her chin)..

R: mujhe bahut dar lag raha hai Armaan…. Tumne uski aankhen nahi dekhi Armaan… aur uski aawaaaz…. Aur usne….

A:ssshhh.. Riddhima… mere taraf dekho… ab tum uske bare main nahi sochogi…. Tumhe koi kuch nahi kar payega… mere hote hue main kisi ko tumhaare kareeb tak aane nahi doonga…. Itna to bharosa hai na mujh par basket??

Riddhima nods through her tears…. He wipes them away gently and softly touches his lips to hers and this time she doesn’t refuse him as she feels more assured by the kiss. He engulfs her in a warm hug as though promising her he will never let her part from him even for a second.

A: ab dekhna Riddhima main tumhe apne aap se ek pal ke liye door nahi jaane doonga…

She feels elated for the minute not knowing what this statement would turn out to be like during the day much to her annoyance.

Scene 4

Riddhima is getting ready to go into the OT for an operation. Armaan lands up there as though he had come to wish her luck like he did all the time. She is happy to see him there as she enters the OT. Inside the OT she sees him still conversing with her fellow doctor, who is supposed to operate along with her. She then bends her head down to get ready with the whole operation. Within minutes the fellow doctor walks in, and his face is masked only showing the eyes. She cant believe what she sees. Armaan had talked and traded with the doctor to operate with her in his place. She is amused. But she smiles. They operate. They come out of the OT and she is washing her hands… She turns side ways to looks at Armaan who is also washing his hands seriously….

R: Armaan tum andar kaise aa gaye

A:wo bahut dino se maine appendicitis ka operation nahi kiya nahi kiya hai na Dr. Riddhima, to I thought, before I lose touch, I need some practice…

R: Accha?

A: yes ofcourse….!

R: hmm….Armaaaaan….

A: Kyaa… Armaaan?? I am tired… coffee peene chale?

R: In Kapdo main? Main change karke aati hoon… tum canteen main mujhe milna…

Armaan doesn’t say anything… Riddhima goes into the changing room and comes out and finds Armaan standing right there still waiting for her….
R: tum nahi gaye…

A: wo.. maine socha… akele chalte chalte main bore ho jaunga.. so I decided to wait for you…..

R: tum bhi na Armaan… chalo.. they go to the canteen….order for her hot chocolate and his coffee…

They are sitting there when Armaan gets a page to collect some reports from the pathlab. He sighs looking here and there. He finds Nikhil sitting there with Asma talking to her.

A: Dr. Nikhil…(he screams across the tables such that others also look up)

Nikhil who is holding Asma’s hand jerks it away in embarrassment…

Ni: jjjjii sir….. (he stands up)…

A: Yahan aayi ye…. (nikhil comes)….. please go to the path lab and pick up this file for me… and please hand it over to Dr. Tandon…. Thank you…

Nikhil nods but is surprised at being given these instructions from Armaan.. it was not like him to do that…. But he obeys him and leaves the place….

R: Armaan tum ye kya kar rahe ho? Tum khud bhi to jaa sakte the na… reports lane…. Use kyun bhej diya… dekha nahi… wo Asma ke saath tha…

A: toh… kaam ke waqt use romance sooj raha hai? Hum yahan aate kyun hai Dr. Riddhima?

R: accha? Aur tum kya kar rahe ho iss waqt?

A: wo… main … tumhare saath waqt bita raha hoon… aur Main senior Doctor hoon….yaad nahi Dr. Shubankar humse kitne kaam karvaate the….. ab humara waqt hai jaani….

Another fellow doctor comes asking Armaan to come with him for some work and Armaan makes a flimsy excuse to not go with him looking very genuine… Riddhima now wonders why he is doing all this… when it strikes her… he is actually living upto what he said in the morning of not leaving her even for a minute….

R: Armaan… tum jaao…. Main theek hoon really… itne saare log hai yahan pe… I am okay……

A: Sorry Dr. Riddhima… I have already applied for leave today… leave grant ho gaya… I am free today…. At your sevice madame…

Throughout the day, he hovering around her annoying her to the hilt by the end of the day and now its time to get back home.

Tammanna looks at Armaan all over Riddhima and he is annoyed. Just in the morning she had decided she would try and be nice to Riddhima but now she felt her brother wasn’t paying any attention to her at all…. So she walks in front of him coughing loudly again…. Armaan is carryout some random conversation with Riddhima at the nurse station before signing out and Tammy coughs loudly…. Only to see her brother’s reaction if it would be the same even with Riddhima around….

Armaan turns….

A: Tam, tumhaari khasi ab tak theek nahi hui…

T: Nahi bhai ( talking innocently coughing once more….)

A: Dr. Dikshit… ( he calls out a fellow doctor) aap please inko check kijiye… and give her the right medication… she is very careless…. Aur Tam mujhe raat ko prescription dikha dena… I am off now… mujhe kaam hai…… take care gal…..

He takes Riddhima and walks out of Sanjeevani much to Tammy’s annoyance and jealousy once more….

Scene 5

...as he drops her home.. a shadow is lurking behind the tree watching the pair with pained eyes....

RIDDIMA IN HER ROOM..

She is shaking her head , a soft smile playing on her lips.. Armaan's behavior in the hospital towards her was an evidence of the previous night effecting him as deeply as it shook her too...she is in thoughts as her phone rings...

R: …. hello.. kya ! accident??!!! (her face changes completely, she goes pale) ... kahan !... voh theek toh hain??!!! chot lagi hai???!!! ji batayie ... haan, haan sun rahi hun, jaldi boliye ... ji mein likh rahi hoon....120 SADOLA ROAD...NARAYAN CIRCLE... MANSORAVER...

ON REACHING THE ADDRESS....
She gets off her car hurriedly leaving her purse behind... holding onto her mobile only...
she bangs on the rusty door once...twice and then harder....the moment she is about to knock again, the door gives away and creeks open...she steps in hesitantly and unsurely...

R...hello...koi hai ..?

just then she hears a moan coming from the door next to her right ...Armaan !!! she rushes over quickly and pushes the heavy door aside..on entering the room,darkness envolopes her...Armaan!! she calls out...she stumbles ahead hitting her feet to something on the floor...suddenly as she makes her way forward, the door behind her clicks shut...she spins around..the very same time the overhead light pours in blinding her for a second......
.
R: TUM !!!

(and suddenly all the pieces fall ....the call.. the accident...everything... she was trapped...it was a set up...) Vicky turned to lock the door...

R: " yeh tum kya kar rahe ho..."she doesnt know from where but her presence of mind kicked in and she silently hit the speed dial button 2 ... atleast Armaan would hear the conversation and know where she was...

V....he turned around to face her grinning eerily...in a new alarmingly familiar voice he says "darwaaza band kar raha hoon..."

R.. dekho Vicky, samajhne ki koshish karo... jo kuch bhi tum kar ahe ho , woh theek nahi hai...agar Armaan ko...(then suddenly she thinks and says)
"yeh tumhara ghar hai... na..nayi jjagah hai..par tum toh...paying guest they na? change kab kiya ??(hoping armaan was listening.. by saying that she then blurts the address hoping armaan would catch it...)


V...cuts her instantly..."Riddhima..Riddhima..Riddhima... !!! Dr. Armaan ke baare mein baat karke time waste nahi karte hai... lets leave him out...!!! chaliye chodiye yeh sab baatein... aapko yeh kamra kaisa laga...!!

He steps forward as she stumbles backward.. and doing so she hits her back to a statue...for the first time she looks at it and then the room...to her horror it renders her speechless..her complete astonishment quickly receeds with onslaught panic...by act of will she tamps it down.. he wanted her to be afraid.. and he was succceeding by the minute...

R.. please vickey.. mujhe jaane do...i promise mein kissi ko kuch nahi bolungi !!( panic now clearly in her voice)please !!!

(Armaan has by now heard everything on his mobile..rushing to his car,he shoves it open and startes the engine..he stamps on the accelerator as hard as possible ..leaning over the steering wheel,he peeres through the darkness ,cursing the driving rain and his inability to see beyond the hood ornament. time was running out....he could hear Riddima's plea to vickey to let her go through his cell which was on speaker now.....his eyes turned red and he slammed his fist on to the wheel.. " "Riddhima bas thodi der aur... bas kuch sec... usse baton mein uljha ke rakho, please riddhima mein bas aa raha hoon '" thats my girl..!!! he keeps driving like a mad man...in a heartbeat he comes to the address that riddhima had given very cleverly over the phone....seeing her car, he brakes, skidds and fishtails, and then shoves the automatic transmission into park and opens the door...he calls the police having reached there asking them to reach the address as soon as possible….he hurdles out slamming the door shut and dashes through the rain towards the front door..

SAME TIME IN THE ROOM..

She steps back, her spine coming up hard against the doorknob of the closet...she doesn’t notice the pain...nothing registered except his menacing smile and raspy voice..she was now profoundly astonished to see vickey as a complete derranged person... did he even know what he was doing? on seeing her in this state... he gives a very taunting smile...
She tries to keep her face impassive and not let him see her distress...at the same time she was trying to figure a way out of the room and away from the house....he could hurt her, not that he could take it that far,she reassures herself.he only wanted to terrorize her....
He takes 3 menacing steps towards her.. the closet was behind her.could she step in, shut the door and lock herself in till armaan comes looking for her……

V..."darwaaze ka lock toot gaya hai , agar aap aapne aap ko band karne ka soch rahi hai toh bhul jayi ye...."(he knew her each move)

she looks at the window which was pained shut.. she would not get there without having to fight her way with him...and the thought of him touching her repulsed her...her means of escape was through the doorway leading into the hall which was being blocked by him....swallowing her pride and her repugnance,she again asked vickey to let her go... but .in a jiffy he gripped her hand and pulled her forward...she heard wimpers of fear and draining energy and realized they were coming from her...she had minimized the real threat he could pose to her safety , but had miscalculated...his breathing was short and choppy panting of a madman...he was stronger than he appeared... had insanity given him this inordinate strength...??
she screemed..." chodo mujhe".... please jaane do....!!!!(armaan kahan ho....)… He grips her arm tight as he drags her to a fully blown up portrait of hers… she is smiling in it… she cant gauge when he had clicked it….

Vi: Dekhiye…. Har jagah pe aap hi ho…

He turns on the tube light of the dimly nit room…. There is a collage of her picture…. She is shocked beyond her wits… could someone be so crazy… but this was not in the least bit flattering… she drags her to the closet… he opens it… “ ye .. ye…. Aapki saari kapde… aapke jhumke…. Sab kuch aise nahi lag raha jaise ke aap apne hi kamre main ho???? Koi kar sakta hai aapse itna pyar… he turns off that light now.. and flashes a torch on the wall opposite them… there are a series if enlarged Xerox copies of all the intern of the month and other awards she had won…

Vi: Kya wo Armaan karega aapke liye ye sab… isse kehte hai pyar Dr. Ridhima… jo sirf main aapse karta hoon.. wo nahi… aap samajti nahi hai…

R: Armaan ke bare main tum baat mat karo.. wo.. wo( she is teary and scared as he is still holding her… )… ouch… chodo. Vicky… please…

Armaan is boiling with rage outside as he is struggling with the latched door…. He can hear her screams more clearly now….. and he is ready to break Vicky’s skull into a million pieces….

Vicky now flung her towards the centre of the room...she reeles forward,stumbling in darkness over paint boxes ...broken glass..and falling against the edge of the bed she hits herself on the waist...she doubles over in pain and descends into blackness of unconsiousness.....

Armaan threw open the door on hearing her screem...he pauses...shouts" riddhima"..

.vickey turnes in surprise to see him ...armaan's blood freezes when hears her cries on his cell(thk god she called him and kept him online)....now he could see her lying half on bed and half on floor... he rushes to her...holding her face upclose... "riddhima".. please aankhein kholo !!...but she was not responding... putting her back silently....he whipps his head around... reaching vickey,he yankes him by the collar...he in rage and unthinkingly, slings vickey against the wall..vickey slides down but not before armaans fist slames into him...vickey squeals and falls...armaan gives him a one last disgusted look before he goes back to riddhima......placing his arms around her he lifts her to a sitting position...

A.. RIDDHIMA!..please aankhein kholu... mein yahan hoon... vickey will not bother you any more....meri taraf dekho... please !!"

The police also arrive in time and take Vicky away…… Armaan is not in a mood to look at the police or make conversation. He dryly given them all the details and they leave. After then… Armaan looks at Riddhima… wiping all the sweat her face… he caresseses .. tears rush out of his eyes looking at her in this state…. He calls out her name… slapping her lightly on her face…. Sprinkling some water…. She slowly opens her eyes…. Looking at him weakly……

R.. Armaan...woh...(voice very tender and faint)

A.. sshh !!... its ok... sab theek ho jayega...(smoothes her hair strands back. She hugs her close to his chest, glad and assured that she is okay) i luv u basket... you took 10 years off of my life...( bringing in all luv and intensity in his voice)he bents his head down, bringing his face close to hers.. even pale and disheveled, she looks beautiful....he kisses her forehead.. hugs her tight......saying...
" ghar chale"....

She nods feebly… He doesn’t allow her to stand.. he carries her and takes her out, making her sit in the car and drives back home….

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The Green Blue Hues - Part 3

Painful Revelations


Riddhima sat on her sofa, biting her nails, looking at Rahul. They both had been sitting in her apartment for about 2 hours, and they both were quiet. Silence prevailed over the room, as both looked at the clock time and again. Sighing exasperatedly, and no longer able to control herself, Riddhima speaks up.

Riddhima: Do you think he’s okay??

Rahul looks up, startled as she spoke. Then, hearing her question, he smirks a little.

Rahul: who…Armaan or Vivek??

Riddhima glares at him

Rahul: oh okay…Armaan? Yeah….definitely he’s okay…Vivek doesn’t stand a chance against him…(settling back into the sofa)

Riddhima: then why isn’t he back yet…?? (biting her lower lip)

Rahul: Riddhima…don’t worry yaar….he will be okay…perhaps got stuck in the traffic….

Riddhima puts a hand through her hair and sighs

Riddhima: Armaan must have beaten the pulp outta Vivek…(worry lines etched across her face)

Rahul: and why do you care?? (raising his eyebrows)

Riddhima: oh come on!! I dun care about that ba*****!! I care about Armaan…he beat him up in the university premises…might get into trouble…

Rahul: doesn’t matter…what Vivek tried to do to you, he deserves several rounds of punching after that…

Riddhima: (biting her nails vigorously) I shouldn’t have told Armaan…I knew he would do something stupid….he is going to get into so much trouble…

Rahul: tch…Riddhima…(holds her hand) don’t worry…he’s Armaan…nothing will happen to him…

Riddhima: Sure???

Rahul: Confident!! (nodding)

They both smile and start talking when Rahul’s phone rings.

Rahul: Hello…??? Yeah, that’s me speaking….oh hi!!! How are you…? Nah he isn’t here…..yeah tell me…..WHATTT???

At his sudden shout, Riddhima looks up startled and scared.

…………………………………..

Armaan entered the house and saw no one around. He looked in the kitchen and the lounge to check for Riddhima, but didn’t see her anywhere. Lightly blowing onto bruised hand, he took two steps at a time and went up the stairs and towards his room. Surprised to see the light on, he opened the room and was surprised to see what was happening in the room.

Riddhima was taking out clothes from his wardrobe and putting them into two bags she had put on the bed. His room was in a drastic mess, and she herself wasn’t looking in a good state. Her hair was all over the place, and her eyes looked like she had cried. Tentatively stepping into the room, he closed the door behind him and stepped closer to her. As she folded a pair of his jeans, he stood behind and quietly whispered to her.

Armaan: umm…Ragz??

Riddhima turned to look at her. Armaan was surprised to see her bloodshot eyes. Instantly, his hand went up to her shoulder as his eyes furrowed in concern.

Armaan: what happened…are you okay??

Riddhima bit her lower lip and nodded

Armaan: are you sure…?? What happened….why are you crying…?

Riddhima sighs loudly to calm herself down

Riddhima: ye…yeahhh!! I am fi—fine….

Armaan: doesn’t seem like it…(puts a hand on her cheek) is this about Vivek…

Riddhima’s eyes meet his and he sighs, knowing the issue of her concern

Armaan: look Ragz..i didn’t mean to hurt him but the moment I saw him, something burst into me and I…I just couldn’t control myself…seeing him for the first time after what he did to you…I just couldn’t…

Riddhima: its okay Armaan…I understand…(sits down on the bed)

Armaan holds her hand and sits down next to her

Armaan: look Ragz…I think its high time we talk about it now….I know you really loved Vivek, but he just wasn’t worth it…he was never in love with you, he was just lusting after you….you remember I tried to warn you about him but you were so much in love with him that you didn’t listen to me…

A tear drops from Riddhima’s eye as she remembered how Armaan had tried to warn her about Vivek

Armaan: no…I am not blaming you…I am just telling you that people make mistakes…everyone makes mistakes baby, its not only you…you remember how I wouldn’t let him come to our place or ever stay over…? That was because I knew what kind of a guy he was….but you just weren’t ready to listen….every time you were with him, I was there or I sent someone to be around you because I feared he’d take advantage…and that’s exactly what he did the one freaking day I wasn’t around…

Riddhima: so he knew too…?? (looking at Armaan)

Armaan: of course he knew I knew everything about him…that’s the only reason he was with you for such a long time….cuz I wouldn’t let him anywhere near you…

Riddhima starts crying silently…

Armaan: look Ragz…you should just thank God that he wasn’t successful in his dirty plans….i thank God every second that Rahul came there before he could….(he couldn’t even say anything)….i tried tracking down Vivek at day’s end but he probably ran away somewhere…and today, when he thought I wasn’t taking any action cuz probably you hadn’t told me anything, he had the guts to come and talk to you. That’s why I beat him up, the anger was too much to bear…

Riddhima tightly clasped his hand, tears running down her cheeks.

Riddhima: I thought he loved me…

Armaan: tch….I know you did Ragz…but he didn’t, and that’s the truth…you should accept it…

Riddhima: I thought…he was the one…after everything, after mom’s death, after dad marrying that…that s***…I thought I got the person….I thought my life was finally getting normal…and then….no one loves me Armaan, I am so alone…

Armaan couldn’t see her crying like that. He instantly takes her in his arms and keeps her there, protected, shielded, her head carefully tucked under his chin and her arms around his back as he quietly rubbed his arms around her back to calm her down, lightly patting her head once in a while too. She cried out all the pent-up feelings after a long time, and he let her stay that way till she had calmed down. Slowly, after crying for a long time, she parted from Armaan and looked at him thankfully.

Riddhima: I am…I am sorry Armaan…I shouldn’t have…

Armaan: shut up!! I am always here for you…and never every say you are alone again….why do you feel lonely when I am here…huh??

Riddhima smiles, clearing aay her tears

Armaan: oh and…don’t think no one loves you….I love you…!! (patting her cheek)

Riddhima: you do…?? (looking at him expectantly…smiling)

Armaan: of course I do dum-dum…I love you a lot…(puts an arm around her and she puts her head on his shoulder)

He looks down at her, and is about to ask her why she was packing when they both hear a voice

Ryna: what the hell is happening here…???

They both look up to see a furious Ryna standing at the door, looking at the scene before her. Armaan stands up quickly and walks towards her as Riddhima stands up too.

Armaan: listen Ryna…you are…

Ryna: I want to talk to you…now…ALONE!!

She says, glaring at him and makes her way out, slamming the door behind her. Armaan looks back at Riddhima who gives him a ‘dude, you are busted” look. He frowns and leaves the room.

Riddhima is left thinking in the room. She is clearly upset about something too,

Riddhima: now how do I tell Armaan…?? God, this should so not be happening…(sighs to herself and picks up his shirt, folding it too)

……………………………………………..

Armaan: listen baby, you are taking it all wrong…

Ryna: I AM TAKING IT WRONG? ARMAAN, YOU ARE TELLING ME THAT I AM TAKING IT WRONG…GOD, YOU HAVE GOT TO BE KIDDING ME…I CAUGHT YOU RED-HANDED WITH THAT B**** AND YOU HAVE THE AUDACITY TO TELL ME THAT I AM TAKING IT WRONGG????

Armaan: (angry now) Shut up Ryna….enough about Ragz…don’t you think you are so over-reacting about this…?? She was just upset and I was trying to cheer her up…

Ryna: by telling her that you love her…?? (raises eyebrows) Wow, isn’t that just the most awesome way to cheer up a FREND…?

Armaan: ENOUGH!!!! How many times do I have to tell you to stop doubting mine and Ragz’s relationship…we guys are just friends…plain old simple best friends…that’s it…there is nothing between us….its only you who keeps on thinking there is…

Ryna: oh yeah Armaan…?? Its me… fine!! Then tell me why does she matter so much…if she just a plain old simple friend, why does she matter more to you than your own girlfriend….why would you rather be staying with her than with your girlfriend….why in the freaking world would you say I love you to her when you haven’t precisely said those words ever to ME????

Armaan is now at a loss of words.

Armaan: listen Ryna…(taking a deep breath) you are seriously taking it all wrong…Ragz is just….she is just a friend…everything I do for her is because I care for her…she’s got no one…I am her everything…you don’t know her, you don’t know what’s happened in her life…its just that, she needs me….after everything that has happened, she is just like a small frightened kid…I need to take care of her…I am her best friend…

Ryna: Armaan…I think its high time you both realized that you guys have grown up…SHE is an adult….she doesn’t need anyone to take care of her….its just you who thinks she needs all that…and why wouldn’t you, she’s been clinging to you for her every stupid silly problem…

Armaan: Ryna…you are my girlfriend and everything, but even you don’t get to bad-mouth her in front of me…(in strict tones)

Ryna: SEE?? That’s what I am talking about!!! She matters more to you than me…

Armaan: OF COURSE SHE DOES!! (at last loosing his temper) She matters hell lot more…she matters more to me than anyone else on this whole entire world…cuz she is the only one who has always been there for me….she is my freaking everything….and I wont let you or anyone else come in between us…so you know what?? I end this thing between us, today, right now, this second…

Ryna looks at him, shocked out of his wits….

Ryna: Armaan, you…

Armaan: yes Ryna, me…I am fed up…fed up of you complaining and bitching all the time…I am so sick of this relationship…I just can’t do this anymore….i just cant…

Ryna: well, neither can I!!!

Armaan: FINE then!! I am done with you….this thing between us, is over…its so over…

Ryna: well, I am done with you too…..

Armaan: Fine…(stubbornly)

Ryna: FINE!!!

Stomping her foot, she makes for the door angrily as Armaan turns around and abruptly goes upstairs to his room, fuming with anger.

As Ryna opens the door to walk out, she sees Rahul standing at the door, about to enter. Rahul is surprised to see Ryna so angry, and he decides to ask her. Amongst their whole group, Rahul is the only person Ryna actually liked.

Rahul: hey Ryna…what happened, is everything okay??

Ryna looks at him with tears of anger in her eyes

Ryna: no…its not…I…I just broke up with Armaan…

Rahul: Oh…(he is quite surprised)…umm…don’t mind my asking..but why…??(raising his eyebrows)

Ryna: (smirks sarcastically) huh…the only reason that could be…Riddhima…

Rahul raises his eyebrows even higher

Ryna: you know what Rahul…I was a stupid fool to think Armaan would actually fall in love with me…(cleans her tears) I should have understood before…

Rahul: understood what…??

Ryna: understood why he didn’t fall in love with me…(giving him the look)

Rahul gets the clue and bends his head in agreement

Ryna: even you know…(shakes her head) the only two people who don’t know that Armaan loves Riddhima ARE Armaan and Riddhima…

Rahul smiles and nods his head

Rahul: you are right…Ryna, I am so sorry about all this…

Ryna: its okay Rahul…(affords a smile) I will see you around…take care…

Rahul bids her a last goodbye as she moves out of the house.

……………………………………………..

As soon as Armaan enters the room, Riddhima gets up from the bed and rushes to him.

Riddhima: Armaan, I want to tell you….

Armaan: (cuts her in between) I am sooooo pissed at her…

Riddhima: huh…?? What??

Armaan: Ryna!! I am pissed at her..!! In fact, I just broke up with her....(angrily pacing the room)

Riddhima: YOU WHAT??? You broke up with her…with Raina??

Armaan gives her a look and she becomes quiet.

Riddhima: ok..fine…sorry…you broke up with Ryna? But why…??

Armaan: she was just getting on my nerves…I just couldn’t take her anymore…

Riddhima walks over to him and pats his shoulder

Riddhima: well, all I can say is, good riddance…

Armaan looks at her and she smiles. He smiles back at her.

Riddhima: Chill!!! Believe me, you are better off without her…

Armaan: (sighing) yeaaahh…(looks around the room) oh and by the way, where are we going….??

Riddhima: (confused) huh???

Armaan: are we going somewhere…?? (raising his eyebrows)

Riddhima: nooo…

Armaan: then why are you packing my stuff…?? (looks at his luggage confused)

The expression on Riddhima’s face tighten. Putting a hand on Armaan’s shoulder, she first bites her lower lip and then finally decides to speak up.

Riddhima: Armaan….it’s your mom.
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Guys, thats it for today. Hope u guys liek it. Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do comment. Love kiran!!!

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U Me Aur Hum - Part 18

RECAP: Armaan tells Ridhima they are going to Goa day after tomorrow
Next Day
4 pm

Armaan is lying on the bed checking something on his laptop n Ridhima is standing in front of the wardrobe, deciding what to take for Goa. Arima was sleeping soundly next to Armaan.

R: Armaan….yeh waali ya yeh…??she pointed to two shirts...Mujhe nai pta chal raha kaunsi shirt ki baat kar rahe ho…

A: Arre yaar…wahi blue waali…the one Anji gave me for my last birthday…remember..?

R: ohh…wohhhh…..ohhh….achha…aur…? yeh white waali daal dun…? Aur yeh shoes….

Ohh..!! Armaan please Arima ko dekhna….main iska doodh laati hun…

A: hmm…engrossed in his work, he took a look at Arima who was in a cranky mood after waking up

A: baass Arima…mummy abhi milk laa rahi hain….he caressed her hair…as she continued to cry

A: baass..Aruimaa…bassshh…aaww le…meri baby itni ro rahi hai…achha achha..

He moved his laptop aside n picked Arima up…

A: itnaa zyaada rote hain kya?? Abhi mummy aapke liye milk laa rahi hain…hmm…chalo rona band karo….he wiped her tears…



Ridhima came some moments after to find Arima there with Armaan. Armaan was playing with her soft toys in order to make Arima smile

A: aur yeh dekho…teddy bear bolta hai…nai main yeh ice cream tumhein nai doonga….Ridhima smiled at his baby talk

A: aur yeh…yeh doll bolti hai…nai…mujhe khaani hai…main ice cream khaoongi….

Arima chuckled….Armaan picked her up…n planted this huge kiss on her cheek which made her smile even more

R: achha..achha…bass…chalo Arima ab milk peeyo…..She took her from Armaan n put her bib around her, then opened the cap of her bottle n put it into her mouth. Arima started drinking while she gazed at Armaan who now continued to work



R: Armaan tumne bataya nai ki tumhein kaunse shoes le jaane hain…

A: hmm…abhi bata ta huun…

R: Armaan…jaldi batao..phir mujhe Arima ki bhi packing karni hai…

A: hmm…..not even listening to her


Arima finished her milk then started to play with her toys when Ridhima announced she was gonna take a short nap
She spoke to Armaan

R: bohot thaak gayi…tumhari almost saari packing ho gayi hai….aur Arima ki bhi ho hi gayi hai…ab bas meri hi bachi hai...

Ridhima sat on the bed then pushed Arima’s toys n Armaan’s papers to one side…then making enough space for herself…she lay down…n soon dozed off

A: Ridhima…yeh…..he stopped as he saw her lay there, right beside him with this really cute expression on her face, her hair all over her right cheek. Armaan smiled down at her, then carefully put her loose locks behind her ear n bent down to kiss her forehead


Arima: aayyee…yeeaaa …yayyyee

Armaan: ssshhhh…shor nai machana…mamma so rahi hain..he put his finger on his lips

Arima also put her finger on her lip n remained quiet



When Ridhima woke up after a while she became very busy. She packed an enormous bag for Arima carrying a million things. It was Arima’s first holiday, n she seemed excited for it , too! She was hardly five months, but Ridhima put about a dozen pair of clothes for her, her little clips, some of her toys, her cerelac products, her empty milk n water bottles, some more clothes, her hankies, her lil red towel n then finally her pram was folded neatly into the bag.

Armaan came into the room to look at Ridhima doing all this

A: Ridhima…kya kar rahi ho..?? hum sirf 5dinon ke liye jaa rahe hain…5 mahinon ke liye nai…

R: wahaan jaayeinge na…phir pta chalega…Arima 4 mahino ki hai…itni chotti baby ke liye sab chahiye hota hai..

A: achaa…?? He put his arms around her, her back facing him…aur pta abhi mujhe kya chahiye…he moved close, his cheek now touching hers

R: Armaan..please…mujhe bohot kaam hai..tum jaoo…… her arms moving, she tried to free herself

R: aaahhhhh…Armaaan..!!!

A: sun raha hunn….bolo… he said simply as he nuzzled into her hair

R: huh..Armaan…please mujhe chodoge…..??

A: nai.…bilkul nai...he pulled her more close

Ridhima now started hitting him as hard as she could….

Armaan laughed

A: baasss…?itna hi maar sakti ho…?too bad Basket!

Ridhima tried n tried but he was too strong for her. She gave up after several attempts

A: kya hua…thakk gayi..??

Ridhima frowned n pouted

Armaan looked at her n smiled

Then kissing her cheek, he let her go.

PRECAP: Finaly off to Goa!!

Okay guys, I know its a really short part n I also know I am updating it after quite a long time....Well ,really sorry for the delay
Seeing yur comments I thought of updating it right now....n in this short span of time, I wrote a lil part for yu guyss
Some of yu wanted to know the exact days when I'll be posting my ff....umm...Guyss...I hardly get time n when so ever I do, I just sit n write....so like I have no fixed day for writing n posting...I do it whenever I get time....really Sorry for the inconvenience
Apologies for not writing the Goa part today, I know yu guys must be wanting to read it....but the actual reason is that I wanted to write it when I am totally free with nothing else in my mind...So next part...we are gonna have some masti with Armaan, Ridhima n lil Arima in Goa...!!! Stay Tuned....I'll be back in a few days! n yea thank yu sooooooooo much for yur comments..!!
Sometimes yu really blow me up with them! Please do keep commenting n telling me if yu like it or no
All suggestions n comments are welcome. You may also contact me on my e mail id: spriha.atray@gmail.com

Love yu
Spriha

P.S. I want to tell yu all, that the idea for letting the three go to a vacation, was not mine, but Pradeepthi di's...aka Deepu di...
I felt it would be really bad if I take all the credit for something that isnt mine...ok...see ya!!

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Dil Ka Rishta - Episode 17

fri-sun.....

TITLE SONG:

Dil Ka Rishta Bada Hi Pyara Hai.....(2)
Kitna Pagal Yeh Dil Hamara Hai......
Hum To Ek Doosre Pe Marte Hai........(2)
Jaanta Hai Yeh Jahaan Sara Hai.......
Dil Ka Rishta Bada Hi Pyara Hai........
Dil Ka Rishta Bada Hi Pyara Hai.......!!!!!!!!!


RECAP:VICKY APOLOGISES TO NIHA BT AT THE END THEY FIGHT AGAIN....ARMAAN AND RIDHIMMA DREAMING-ROMANCING ON A BEACH......


psx's mom leads both of them towards her room....psx is lying on her bed unconscious.....!!!!!!

mani:oh...mera bag...

adi:yah raha madam...aap bhul gayi thi...

mani:thanx....

she checks her throughly.....gives her an injection....

mani:aunty...maine isko injection de diya hai...adi plz yeh bahar se medicines le aao......

adi:ok....

mani:unconcious aunty isko temperature ki wajah se hai....she has a mild fever....bt she'll be ok...koi baat hui kya aunty....i mean kal to bilkul theek thi....!!!!!!!

aun:pata nai beta....kal jab se laut ke aayi hai kamre mein hi thi.....maine subah uthaya sanjeevani jane ke liye to mana karne lagi ki aaj mann nai hai....dat she's nt feelin ok...maine bhi fir force nai kiya.....aur bahi kuch der pehle apne room mein jaa rahi thi nad she fall down.....main kitchen mein thi ramu ke saath kaam mein busy thi .....mujhe nai pata ki kab yah room se bahar aayi aur kab yeh sab ho gaya ....aaj iske dad bhi subah hi bahar gaye hain isliye sanjeevani phone kiya....ki tum,niha ya shikha mese koi aajaye.....!!!!!!!

mani:its ok aunty....she'll be alright......ghabrane ki koi baat nai hai.....aap jayiye rest keejeye main hun iske paas.....

aun:theek hai beta kisi cheez ki zarurat ho to let me knw.....ok...!!!!!!

mani:ji aunty....

some time passes.....

adi:here are the medicines.....yeh lo.....

mani takes the packet from his hands almost touching his fingers....adi feels sumthng strange happening inside him on her touch....!!!!!!
psx starts gaining consciosness....

mani:psx...psx....u ok.....????let me check ur pulse....

psx:tu yahan kya kar rahi hai...???

adi:hii priya.....how are u feeling now..???

psx:hii adi....tum log yahan kaise...feeling better....mom ne ...ok....

mani:priya kya hua...tellme....

psx:kya..????kuch nai yaar bas thoda fever aa gaya...bas....

mani:psx u knw wat i mean...aunty ne mujhe sab bata diya hai....tell me xcatly wat happened kal to tu bilkul theek thi...to ek raat mein kya ho gaya....?????



ARMAAN-RIDHIMMA.....

FIRE ESCAPE....
they both are engrossed fully with each other....

arm: ridhimma.....basket...

rid:haan armaan...

arm:thanx for everythng.....tum nai jaanti ki tum mere liye kya mayane rakhti ho....aaj armaan mallik sirf aur sirf is duniya mein tumhara hai....aur ridhimma gupta sirf aur sirf meri....!!!!!!

rid:sach armaan....

arm:dill se.... hamara attoot rishta kabhi nai tootega ridhimma yeh mera vaada hai tumse....!!!!!

rid:vaada armaan...

arm:vaada ridhimaa....i luv u alot........

rid:i luv too......and they both hug each other.....!!!!!!!!


SAMEER-SHIKHA-RAHUL.....

sam:shikha....kya hua kya soch rahi ho...????

shik:nai bas....

sam:batao naa...ny problem...????

shik:mai bas yeh soch rahi hun ki priya aaj kyun nai aayi....i mean leave per jaati to batati zarur....abhi kal to keh rahi thi ki sanjeevani aayegi....to pata nai fir kya ho gaya usse.....i hope she'e ok....

sam:arre bas itni si baat....she's gonna b fine dnt worry.....koi emergency hogi maybe....ek kaam karna shift khatam hogi den call her ok...?????

shik:dats a brilliant idea.....thnx sameer....(she holds his hand...)thanx alot....

sam:(thrilled at her reaction.....)my pleasure as always....

rah:hey guys kay kar rahe tum log......????listen maine tumse vo report per conclusion manga tha u did it....????

shik:yes....rahul....here it is....

rah:thanx yaar vo hitler nahi to aaj mera band baja deti....

shik:ny time dear....


MANI-ADI-PSX.....

mani:tu batati hai yaa......

psx:dekh mai tujhse keh rahi hu naa.....tu kyun nai samjhti hai...(she gestures from her eyes at adi...)...mai keh rahi hun naa kuch nai hua....!!!!!!!!

mani:she looks at adi.....

adi understands...

adi:i think dat i shud wait outside....mani jab chalna ho to bata denaa.....

mani:ok....

he leaves...

mani:ab bolti hai yaa nai.....i won't talk to u otherwise....

psx:pata nai mani kal raat kya ho gaya tha mujhe vo armaann....

mani:no.....dn't tell me armaan again....u are totally foolish....kitni baar maine samjhaya hai psx tujhe per tu hai ki samjhti hi nai hai.....!!!!!!

psx:tu theek keh rahi hai mani....i was really foolish mai kya kar rahi thi,kya soch rahi thi.....u knw kal saare rasste armaan sirf ridhimma ki hi baat karta raha aur mujhe ab samjh mein aaya ki pyar vo hota ahi jo armaan ridhimaa se karta hai....mai unke beech kabhi nai aa sakti....mai kya koi bhi nai aa sakta....vo ridhimma ko khud se bhi jyaada pyar karta hai....vo dikhne mein do alag alag log hai mani....per mai yeh aaj samjh chuki hun ki vo ek hai...jaise do jism ek jaan....!!!!!!!!mai kitni galat thi kitni galat....and she starts weeping, and narrates her everything dat happened....

mani:come here psx......(she keeps her head on her lap and careresses her.....)dekh meri jaan....vo bhagwan hai naa vo har insaan ke liye kisi na kisi ko zarur banata hai......jaise armaan ko ridhimma ke liye banaya hai vaise hi tere liye bhi usne kisi naa kisi ko zarur banaya hoga....haina....to kyun bekaar mein yeh aansun baha rahi hai...????darling dnt worry....u knw kya pata tera dream man abhi tera wait kar raha ho....aur tu yahan ro ro kar bimar padi hai.....!!!!!dekh ...jus look at the trees outside...inki koi parwah karta hai,...aur vo builders dekh rahi hei ho sakta hai vo inhe apne matlab ke liye kabhi kaat de ....is darr se kya yeh ped ugna chod dete hain kya....vo fir bhi hume shade dete hain chahe hum unse pyar kare ya naa kare....ya chahe unhe apne matlab ke liye kissi din kaat hi kyun na de....!!!!!!!!isliye psx promise me ki tu aaj ke baad armaan ko bhul jayegi aur uske liye kabhi aansun nai bahayegi.....c'mon promise me.....and this time saccchha wala vo jhoota wala nai....haan...!!!!!!!!!

psx:i promise mani.....mai usse bhul kar dikhaungi......aur uski sabse acchi dost ban kar dikhaungi...yeh mera vaada hai tujhse....aur jaanti hai naa...

mani:haan haan baba jaanti hun ki psx jo vaada karti hai vo nibha kar chodti hai bass....!!!!!!

psx:hmmm and she smiles...

mani:aa aaa aaa dats wat i wanted to see...!!!!chal let me check ur pulse and temperature....!!!!!!

mani:hmmm everything normal bas halka sa temperature hai....bt vo bhi theek ho jayega....

psx:theek hai to fir chal...

mani:kahan...????

psx:sanjeevani...

mani:u gone crazy or wat..?????abhi tu behosh ho gayi thi aur aunty ka phone....aunty...shitt...mai to unhe tere baare mein inform karna hi bhul gayi....!!!!

adi comes in with aunty.....

adi:koi baat nai maine unhe bata diya ....

aun:kaisi ho beta...????u alright...????wat happened shaonaa..?????

psx:mom i'm totally fit...kaisi dikh rahi hun...????bas yeh sab to chalta rehta hai...!!!!

mani:aunty dekho naa yeh to...she's jus impossible....iss haalat mein yeh sanjeevani jaana chaahti hai......isse samjhao plzz....!!!!!!!!!!!!!

aun:priya tumhara dimag to theek hai naa....tum kaahin nai jaa rahi ho......!!!!!chalo now.....unki duty hai....let dem go and u rest....!!!!!!

psx:mom plz....apko pata hai naa ki aap ki beti ek baar jo thaan leti hai....to chahe jo ho jaaye ....no one can stop me...so plz......chalo mani.....

adi:arre aunty let her go.....she's a strong gal....can manage....agar fir tabiyat kharab hui to isse sanjeevani mein hi admit kara denge....dnt worry hum sab hai wahan....to miss priya shall v..?????

psx:hey dude.....thanx yaar for supporting me to aaj se aap bhi meri frnd list me.....!!!!!!mani kuch seekh usse....he's so supportive.....!!!!!!!

mani:haan haan ab yeh hi to rah gaya hai seekhne ke liye...!!!!!!4get itt....ab chal chalna hai to....bt one min....dr keerti....?????

psx:haha vo hitler....mai hun naa ...!!!!!!!

mani:issi baat ka to darr hai...!!!!chalo abb...

adi:ok aunty....b-bye....aunty waise vo pudding was yummy i'll definately come again.....!!!!!agar ye miss priya ki permission ho to...

mani:wat...????tum pudding kha rahe the...????ur jus impossible.....!!!!!!!

psx:arre chod yaar....adi ur always welcome....nytime.....aur tum is idoit ko yahan lekar aaye to meri taraf se party....aaj canteen mein sirf tumhare liye....okz...!!!!c'mon....lets go...

adi:hey priya ur too gud....tumse meri khub jamegi..!!!!!!yeh to miss attitude....hah...

mani:wat the hell yeh ho kya raha hai tum dono ke beech..????psx tum meri dost hona...den....yeh side change....????


SHIKHA-SAMEER...

shik:ahh finally the shift is over its lunch time...lekin pehle mai psx ko call karke aati hun....sameer i'll jus come....

sam:shikha...stop pehle lunch karo fir call kar lena...!!

shik:sameer mai bas paanch min mein tumhe canteen mein hi milungi....plz.....

sam:no no...nt at all.....chup chap pehle khaana fir bahana...

shik:bahana.????ab mai koi bahana nai bana rai...mai bas abhi aati hun....

sam:acchaa..lekin plzz meri khatir chalo pehle khana khate hain fir call kar lena....

shikha cud'nt refuse now.....so she agrees...

shik:theek hai...chalo...

sam:dats like MY SHIKHA....

shikha looks him awestruck at his wordings...."my shikha..."....she smiles.....admires his confidence.....and starts walking towards the canteen....!!!!!!



HEY GUYS I WANNA THANK ALL MY READERS FOR ALL UR HEARTWARMING COMMENTS AND APPRECIATIONS....THANX ALOT.....

HERE ENDS TODAYS EPISODE HOPE U ENJOYED IT......!!!!!!!!!KEEP READING,,,,

LUV MANI..

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Friday, October 10

Ehsaas Dillon Ke - Episode 52

Recap: (in that shady voice we hear on tv these days) hume pata chalta hai ke Riddhima ke peeche padne waala aur koi nahi balki humara Vicky hai... Armaaan Lonavala main hota hai aur isse Riddhima aur bhi pareshaan ho jaati hai... raat ke samay use ek aawaz sunayi padti hai... aur wo ek rod leke uss ka saamna karne pachunch jaati hai.. ab aage (lol... cant get over that voice)

Scene 1:



Its raining heavily.. he has not been close to her for 2 days now.. life without Riddhima is no life at all...he would give up anything just to catch a glimpse of hers.. For him life starts and ends with Riddhima... her smile ...her eyes... her compassion for people around her.....her gentleness ...these are the qualities that made Riddhima different from the others...he is so lucky to have found her and knowing she will be his.. .is truly a miracle ..!!!!





GUPTA HOUSE...



Riddhima pours her self a cup of coffee and walks to the balcony...the air is damp and cool,and no sun warms her skin...light music plays on regardless, contrasting with tension gripping her... a gust of apprehension washes through her... she sets the coffee down on the table and drops to the chair...the sound of her breathing overides the sounds of the music...she gets up , picks up the coffee in one hand and proceeds to check the main door... the moment she nears it.. their is a power cut which throws her off balance..she drops the coffee mug which comes crashing down on the floor...



Ri:"mujhe kya ho raha hai aaj!!"



everything today is just not right...she goes about to get a wash cloth when she hears some one fiddling with the door knob...she stops dead in her tracks.!!...sweat beads start to form on her fore head...she slowly retraces her step back to the kitchen and locates a torch and an iron rod...her breathing becomes uneven..she is clutching on to her night gown tightly in a fist....she cant even make a call , all telephone lines were dead because of rains... her mob is also in her room...



Ri:"Armaan agar try bhi kar raha hoga to ... ab mein kya karo..." her voice now cracking up slowly....



again the door handle twists...she knew it is him...by now her nighty is semi drenched with sweat and her hair is plastered on her forehead...she takes woobly steps and places her self behind the door with the rod up in the air...she can feel him closing in on her...she crouches in the darkness of the corner...her breathing becomes raspy...suddenly the door flew open and 2 legs makes it way forward...the moment he come close...she shouts..



"STOP RIGHT THERE"!!!!



She raises the torch light blinding him and the very same time bringing the rod down....he catches the rod in time as its about to smash his head into pulp....that very minute power hits back....

He comes to a jarring halt and turns to the imperative voice...he is struck in face by a brilliant beam of light and throws up both hands to ward it off...

She stares at him in utter shock as there is loud thunder and this time the power goes off once more causing complete darkness!



"Riddhima!...Riddhima !!....what the hell is going on...kya kar rahi ho...stop it !!...



R..Armaaan !!! (speaking through a complete daze)



Several seconds passed before he could focus...... the sight of her left him speechless...in one hand, she was holding a high powered flashlight, and other hand an iron rod....



On seeing Armaan she drops both the things and collapses to the floor...before she could hit the floor Armaan catches her in time in his arms...she seems unaware and is like a lifeless doll in his arms...he gets the final shock on seeing her face...she was ghastly pale, in stark contrast to the blue night gown she was wearing....her hair was pulled back away from her face and wound in a pony at her nape...slowly he lifts her in his arms and takes her gently to sit on the sofa.. she was staring at him fixedly, drawing his attention to her eyes...they were ringed with violet smudges, looking as though they had both been socked very hard...he then touches her face and hugs her as if never to let go again...his mind was running wild seeing her like this....for now she was safe and in his arms... that mattered the most...questions could come later... after few minutes he looks back, pushing her sweaty hair back which was so wet as if she had stepped out of a bath....caressing her softly ,he dropped little kisses to face as to reassure him of her being ok...he knew if he didn't talk now she would breakdown hysterically...



A: ... Riddhima ?(softly), meri taraf dekho...ab muhje batao yeh sab kya hai...?(hearing his voice for the first time...she snaps out of the daze and breaks down clutching his shirt...she hugs him tight as if there is no tomorrow... Armaan is so shaken by her loss of control that he holds on to her too... desperately...for as long as she wants....minutes pass by..(very gently he breaks the hug and tips her face up to ask once her more)

" bolo Riddhima... kuch toh batao...



....through her tears and soft hic-ups.. she narrates all what had happened and finally tells him that the person all along they thought as colleague was the one responsible for all this .......

R: " vickey" !!! Woh jaanta tha ki mein akeli hoon... jab bhi usne phone kiya.. tum surgery ya OPD mein busy the...do dinno se roz phone karne laga tha...



Armaan's jaw turns to granite as he urges her to... "go on"



R: aaj raat jab maine darwaaze ki khulne ki aahat suni aur phir light bhi chali gayi... to mein bohot darr gayi.!.. koi ghar pe bhi nahi tha...aur tumhara mob subah se switched off aarah tha..... mujhe kuch samajh nahi aaya...( crying with fear again)



A: puts his arms around her and drew her against his chest..."its ok... sab theek hojaye....tumhe koi chu bhi nahi sakta....i promise !! tumhe mujhe yeh sab pehle bata dena chahiye tha.. anyways now i'm here...(kisses her on the forehead with all intensity he could muster).. 10 minutes pass as he continues to soothe her fears….



While Riddhima goes to the washroom ...Armaan gets up and immediately hits the wall next him with his fist...anger poured through him...his eyes have all the murderous glint a lover has when his life (riddhima) is threatened...he wanted to kill Vickey with his bare hands... the sight of riddhima pale and colourless brought him short... it'l would take like million years for the sight to disappear...so much had happened in a short span and he was not even there to protect her??... Never again.!!... he hated himself for not being with her... to see her going through this all by herself made his eyes turn steel cold...



A..."bahot dukh dekh liye tumne riddhima ... ab bas ! aur nahi..."




Scene 3:



Armaan decides he would take Riddhima home with him but then looking at the clock he tells himself that perhaps...right now Riddhima needed to stay in her own familiar surroundings and more over she was to over wrought to make the drive to his place...he turns to her saying....



A: Riddhima" mujhe lagta hai ke tumhe yehi rehna chahiye"..



(She looks up to him and stares numbly now on the verge of tears...immediately he puts her fears to rest by saying)



A:" ghabrao mat...mein aaj raat yehi par hoon ..tumhare saath"...( touching her face gently).he continues..." basket , tumhe kya laga , ke tumko akela chod dunga ? main kahi nahi jaa raha..( he reads the confusion in her eyes) "i'l take the sofa.. tum jao aur change karlo".



(On listening to this her eyes become moist and her lips trembles.. she is about to speak , when he covers her lips with his fore finger and shakes his head ...)



A:" kuch bhi kehne ki zaroorat nahi hai basket….... jao change karlo....!



He turns around to get a bottle of water from the fridge after all the exhaustion, when

Riddhima comes from behind slips her arms around Armaan's waist and hugs him tight as tears fall rapidly now…Armaan knows what she is going through and does not stop her and caresses her hair while murmuring soft words to her….as he holds her hands to comfort her from the front….he then turns towards her facing her…and lifts her up carrying her to the bedroom….for once she doesn't fuss or complain that he has carried her and he is always looking for a chance to romance her… right now this was the need of the hour and she needed to be with him, around him….

He opens the door of the bedroom with his shoulder and takes her in… and gently puts her down so she could change...he turns to leave but then turns back to check on her one last time... the sight which greets him rips his insides...she is laying on the bed and hugging her knees bringing it ever so tightly to her chest, making a ball like shape...her eyes are now drooping with exhaustion...she is trying to be strong but is loosing herself slowly...he cant stop looking at her...he walks up to her bed and tucks the quilt around her securely...he then touches her hair and bends to kiss her on her side temple...)



She now lies on his lap still as though crouching her knees tight holding his hands….Her eyes fall on a shadow like thing behind the certain and she turns her head away from there hiding her face in his lap totally scared.



R: please Armaan…. Kahin mat jaao…. Please mujhe chod ke mat jaao…



He feels so angry and crumbled from within to see Riddhima in this state…. Riddhima would never plead him this way unless she were way too affected by this…. He calms her by caressing her back and her face….



A: main yahin hoon na Riddhima… kuch nahi hoga…. So jaao…main tumhaare paas hi hoon ( he bends down to kiss her forehead comforting her)



A" i promise"... sab theek ho jayega....!( he looks at her one last time and sees that sleep has taken over her completely...she looked peaceful... He slowly brings a pillow and shifts her head resting on his lap onto the pillow….he gets up and turns to leave towards the door when he realizes that Riddhima is clutching on to his hand .." its an agony to witness her like this... he releases his hand from hers, switches off the main light leaving the side table lamp on as he steps out...



Outside Gupta House:



Vickey is furious on seeing Armaan entering Dr. riddhima's house and that to late night...What was he doing up here so late.. He had been in there for almost half the night...Vickey is getting madder by the minute..He is very very upset….this is not part of the plan...he looks at his watch.. its 2.. Dr.armaan was still in there with his Riddhima....he cant stand it anymore....



Vi: "yeh nahi ho sakta.... ( cries out to himself) Riddhima aap kyo nahi samajhti...woh aapke kabil nahi hai...aap kyu yeh dekh nahi pa rahi hai..??.."!!.



The night is turning out to be a huge disappointment...he slams his fist on the bark of the tree injuring himself....he does not feel the pain..he is blinded by rage....breath of vengence rushes out of him...he is breathing heavily with his head down trying to reason out things in his twisted head .. After regaining his some what senses back he looks up at the Riddhima's room one last time....





Vi:" sab kuch karke dekh liya…. Koi fayda nahi hua… lekin ab… ek khatarnaak chaal chalne ka waqt aagaya hai...!!! "(smiles eerily)



He wipes of the mean look off his face and walks off silently....



Back in riddhima's house....



Armaan closes the bedroom door and walks into to the kitchen to make coffee...as it is sleep is the last thing on his mind...while the kettle is on the boil, he calls up Angy from his mobile..he knows its 2 in the night but speaking to Angy is imperative...after 3 rings Angy picks up the phone groggily...





An: hello !! ( sleepily)



A: Angy... hi..! sorry, itni late fone kiya...



An: Armaan ! hey everything all right..( now lilttle alert) do baje hai.., sab theek hai na? dad? he's ok na??



A" .. "woh main lonavla mein nahi hoon.. and Dr. shashank bilkul theek hai... no worries...baat yeh hai ki mein tunhare ghar pe hoon...i mean Dr. shashank ke ghar pe, Riddhima ke saath..."



An:" Dad ke ghar pe.. wats wrong..? ( now worried).Riddhima... " woh theek toh hai na?"



A:: can you do me a favour.. tum yahan aajaogi. ??..riddhima is a bit tense.. main yahan zyaada der nahi ruk sakta..tum samajh rahi ho na".



An: ya.. no problems.. " mujhe laga woh thodi pre occupied lag rahi thi ( and trails off)..." anyways i'l be there in half hour.."





Armaan hangs up... he takes his coffee to the living room..he sips his coffee exhaling heavily...he is so restless and fidgety.. his every move is goverened by hatered for vickey...he looks out of the window deep in thought.. what all had riddhima gone through..the pain , the fear, the uncertainity... he feels like smashing his face ...he cant bear the thought of anyone terrorising riddhima...his mind is going in circles and its not helping him relax ..he at once hears a sound behind him and turns to find Riddhima standing all shaken up and jittery... he rushes up to her,laying his hand on her jaw, while his thumb caresses her ear....



A: hey ! kya hua( saying softly) ..." koi sapna dekha?"





she stares up at him for a second and then weakly rests her forehead on his chest...





R:" jab uthi.. toh akeli thi ".. mujhe laga tum chale gaye hoge" !



Drawing her into his arms ...he held her securily, his expression now pained as he realises she is shivering...he holds her until her trembling stopped...he then takes her face in his hands and gazes down at her..



A:( saying tenderly) "main kahi nahi jaa raha" agar koi aur baat pe nahi toh iss baat pe bharosa rakho ke tumhare saath hamesha rahunga".i'l be here forever' !





he takes her back to her romm and tucks her once more in bed...he just didnt wanna leave her, not now, not ever...he sits on her bed and looks at her so lovingly till she falls asleep ..the frown slowly forming on her forehead shows how much she had endured..he takes her hand brings it to his lips and kisses it deeply...a tear drop falls from his eyes leaving his them moist...he wanted so much more for her..he always wanted to see her happy..seeing her like this only makes him realise that how precious is Riddhima to him...well now he is here and will make sure she never sees a day of un happiness ever...he then hears the horn and gently puts her hand back...he wipes his eyes and makes his way to the living room door to open for Angy... Anjy walks in and first thing that strikes her is armaan's disturbed and tired look...



An: "Armaan ! sab theek hai na?..... Riddhima??"



A: "woh so rahi hai... ab main chalta hoon.. agar koi problem ho toh call me... "( saying all too quickly before he losses it)



He leaves abruptly as he cant say much anymore... Angy sees him go and has a strange look wondering what the hell is going on...she needs to know what is going on... thinking that she shuts the main door .... but a minute later as she turns again to the door and opens it to call after Armaan who is still standing there about to ring the bell himself as though he had to talk something in urgency...

Anjy looks at him worried..... and then they carry out a conversation at the door itself.... both standing on the either side of the door....
Anjy : Kya hua Armaan ... sab theek hai na? mujhe kyun lagta hai tum log mujhse kuch chupa rahe ho....

Armaan is feeling too tense and shaken up himself to say much ... he looks at Anjy wondering how much to say , then decides against telling her too much, as it might worry her. As it is, he is feeling shattered himself ... how could he not have known what was happening?! Thank god he had found out now, and now he would make sure that Riddhima was never alone till the time they managed to trace the crazy stalker and put him away behind bars.

Ar: Abhi to theek hai ... lekin bahut hi ghabrayi hui hai, issliye main usse akela nahin chhodna chahta …
Anjy : Haan, voh ek do din se kuch pareshan lag rahi thi ... baat kya hai?

Armaan: Anjy, main tumhe kal bataunga ... bas, tum abhi uske saath raho.

He turns to go. A thought strikes him – as though he might just ask her – so in that state he remembers Anjy had mentioned – some problem with Vicky …

Armaan: Anjy ... tumse kuch check karna tha … yaad hai tumne bola tha ki Vicky ke saath kuch problem hua tha … what was that exactly?

Anj (puzzled at the sudden change in topic) : Vicky??? uska khayal kahan se aa gaya! That guy is bad news, Armaan … pata hai, usne leave maangi thi shaadi ke liye … aur pata nahin kahan gaya .. uski koi shaadi vaadi nahin hui …


Ar: To tumne use kya bola? How did you find out?

Anj: yaad nahin kaise pata chala - I think uske assistant ne mention kiya, to maine usse poocha – koi seedha jawab nahin diya. Mujhe to kuch gadbad lag rahi thi - but he was entitled to leave, to main kuch kar nahin sakti thi. Lekin I've given him a warning … aise dhokhe se chhutti lena ...

Armaan looks at Anjy and a cold feeling grows in him - this guy had obviously been stalking Riddhima for a long time. He will have to do something ... and soon ... he stares at Anjy in frustration – if only he had known this before – but even then, there was no way he could have ever imagined … the extent to which this guy was ready to go ...

Anjy looks at him puzzled, seing the anger in his face.
Anjy: Armaan? What's wrong?

He can't trust himself to speak ... fear and anger battle inside him ... they hear a sound from Riddhima's room and both turn to look there.
Armaan: Anjy, tum jao uske pass, hum kal baat karenge. Aur agar koi bhi problem ho ... call me ... immediately. Ok?

She nods and runs to Riddhima's room. He grits his teeth and leaves abruptly, locking the door securely behind him.



Scene 2:



Back in the old dilapidated room Vicky walks angrily to the statue of Riddhima that is adorning the exact same suit that she actually wore that evening….. Standing about a few inches away from the statue he starts to look at it questioningly….



Vicky: Kya kami reh gayi thi mere pyar main Riddhima? Ke aapne mujhe nahi use chuna….



Hamesha se maine aapko itna chaha hai….



Yaad hai aapko hospital main wo pehle hafta …. Jab wo la parvaah battammeez Dr. Armaan aapko itna tang karta tha? Mujhe sab yaad hai…. Apne uss din pink suit pehne hua tha… maine aapko fire escape pain baithke padh te hue dekha….. haawa se udti hue aapki zulfe… aapke maasoom chehre pe wo pareshaani…. Ek nazar main deewana ho gaya tha main aapka…. Fir wo Armaan aaya….



Uss proponal ke case ke din ko main kabhi nahi bhoolunga…. Main jaanta hoon… apne mujhe uss galti ke liye aaj tak maaf nahi kiya hai… agar main aapko uss din wo propnal nahi deta to aap hospital se kabhi suspend hi nahi hoti… chalo chodo… mujhe toh pata bhi nahi tha.. main apni duty kar raha tha…. Lekin wo Armaan…. Baada aashiq banta firta hai na aapka? Ussne kya kiya… seedha jaa kar Dr. Keerthi ko bata diya?…. Ek baar bhi jaanne ki koshish nahi ki ke sacchayi kya hai…. Aur aaya bhi toh tab jab maine poori register ka information badal diya…. Maine aapko bachane ki poori koshish ki thi…. ( here Vicky thinks that he saved Riddhima by fudging the records)



Baar Baar meri aankhon ke saamne aap dono uss fire escape main mitle…. Sochte hue bhi dil main kitna dard hota hai…. Uss Armaan ne aapse zabardasti karne ki koshish ki… aapko kiss karna chaha… jab ke aap mana kar rahi thi……aur uspe rootha aur aapne use manaya bhi… kyun? Kyun? itna bhi nahi samajhta wo bewakoof insaan ke aapke oopar haq to sirf mera hai…. Haina?



Aur jaanti ho maine Muskaan ki madad kyun nahi ki? Main jaanta tha- ke agar main wahan nahi pahunchoon toh Armaan khud phas sakta hai… aur wahi hua…. Usne galti ki… aur usko uski saza mili…. Warna wo toh kabhi aapke pyar ke kaabil tha hi nahi…..aap kitni naazuk hai….aur wo… kya hai usme.. 4 tatoo aur 6 packs? Bas? Ye toh koi bhi kar sakta hai? ….. usne aapke saath aisa vyavhaar kiya…. Deewar pe apna gussa nikaal diya… agar aap ko lag jaati toh? Toh ? toh?



Kahin din tak jab aap wahan seedhiyo pe baith ke roti….mera dil bhi aapke liye rota… man karta ke main aapke paas aaun…. Aapse kahun… main hoon… fir main ruk jaata…



Aur uss balli ke fight ke waqt…. Usne aapka dil itna dukhaya fir bhi aapne uski taraf daari ki… mana ke usne aapke liye usko maara… lekin jab maine unhe congratulate kiya toh unhone kya kiya…. Aapse kaise baat ki…. Main sab dekh raha tha Riddhima… chup chaap…. Soch ke bhi khoon khaul uthta hai mera…. Aur toh aur aapne toh uski ghulaami bhi ki? Arey jab aapka zindagi bhar ka ghulam aapke kadmon ke paas hai, aapko kisi se saamne haath jodne ki kya zaroorat… yehi baatien mujhe pasand nahi hai…. Uske saamne aap ka gidgidana…. Wo kya koi hero hai? Tv actor kya? Sirf ek maamooli sa doctor hi toh hai!!!!



Main aaj bhi wo pal nahi bhoolunga jab aap rote rote fir se usske baahon main gayi… kya koi bhi shareef insaan aapki bebasi ka aise fayda uthata???? Main to nahi karta…meri chodo main toh accha insaan hoon… lekin wo insaan hai hi ghatiya…. Mauka mila to usne aap ke saath… chee chee…. Usi pal main use maar daalta….



Maine bahut saha hai apne pyaar ke liye… aapk ke liye..…. Kahin baar… maine dekha hai sab kuch… wo saare jhag de… wo saare laadyiyaan… wo saari kadvaahat…. Aur uss din jab aap royi….. jab aapko ehsaas hua ke aap dono ek doosre ke liye bane hi nahi hai…. Fir kya hua… apne khud ki baat se aap aise mukar kyun gayi haan?



Wo aapke liye itna important kyun Hai Riddhima? Aur aaj to had hi ho gayi… wo aapke ghar pe bhi pahunch gaya…raat ke 2 baje???? wo insaan bharose ke laayalk bilkul bhi nahi hai… unse aapke akele hone ka fayda uthaya toh??????



He now shakes up the statue violently… then he puts it back in place….



Vi: Sorry Riddhima… sorry…. Main aapko kabhi dukh nahi pahoonchaunga…. Lekin ab…. Bas….. mujhse aur nahi hoga ye sab…. Bahut waqt dediya maine aap dono ko…. Har baar sochta…. Ke ye bach pana hai… aap sambhal jaaogi… lekin… apne kabhi bhi meri qadr nahi jaani…. Lekin I am sorry Riddhima… main khoob jaanta hoon aapko kaise haasil karna hai…. Ab main aur intezaar nahi kar sakta…. Nahi kar sakta….. kal shaam tak aap meri …..



He goes and opens the closet and pulls out a bag…. Then he places it on the bed next to him… the pulls out the kada on the statue and takes off the payal… he throws it out of the window and breaks open the payals…..he opens the bag and there is a red shaadi ka joda….

Vi: yehi hai aapka sahi gehna….. kal shaam tak aap meri hongi… iss ghar main… meri dulhan ke roop main….. aur iske liye kya karna hai main acchi tarah se jaanta hoon….



Sirf kal shaam tak ka intezaar…. Aur fir….. janmo janmo ka saath…. I love you Riddhima… I love you!

Precap: Armaan kya karega?

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